[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Lucifer]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Hisan chourui)-Fire Style: Flying Birds
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid Range/Long Range.
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: You, concentrate your chakra into your hands and then release a wave of fire. Once, you're done you make flying birds (10) out of the wave of fire and direct them to at your opponent. When, it hits your opponent they start exploding. And, turning you're opponent to dust.
But, on the other side this jutsu can be canceled by a stronger water jutsu.
.Note: The User Can Only Use This Jutsu Three Times A Battle.
Declined, incorrect chakra points
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(Katon: sune-ku gogyou tatsumaki)-Fire Style: Fire Snake Tornado
Type: Attack/Defense.
Rank:A
Range: Mid Range.
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers fire chakra around him/her and then creates a giant tornado around him/her. And, after that it form it self in the form of a giant snake/hebi and forms a shield around the user it self a shield of fire. And, your oppont can not touch you.
.Note: The User Can Only Use This Jutsu only once a Battle.
Approved
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(Katon: Kasai Gusoku)-Fire Style: Fire Armor
Type: Attack/Defense.
Rank: Forbidden.
Range: Mid Range.
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 100
Description: The user gathers fire chakra around him/her and then creates a fire armor. This, can be used as Attack and Defense. You're opponent can not touch you because your wearing a armor of fire. And, you can attack your opponent and use it as defence to. On, the other side this jutsu is weak against A rank or higher water bassed attacks.
.Note: The User Can Only Use This Jutsu once per Battle.
Declined, similar jutsu exist

 

[Atrocitus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Note: This is not a C.E as nexus declined someone who made Oil into a C.E. as oil is used with toads. Thus because toad users can use oil (shown with Jiraiya) I am submitting oil jutsu.

Seikiyuton : Gaizā | Oil Release : Geyser

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Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user slams his foot on the ground and causes a large geyser of Oil to burst from the ground which can then be used for Oil techniques, or set a light.
-Twice per battle
-Must have signed the Toad contract

Seikiyuton: Jirai | Oil Release : Landmine

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Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user does three handseals causing oil to pack itself into a mine (in the surface of the ground) where the user chooses. The mine reacts to movement and will only explode once something steps off it or steps on it. The user can make four mines per use.
-Twice per battle.
-Must have signed the Toad contract

Both Approved

Seikiyuton : Tsuchidzuki Seikiyukaishin | Oil Release : Earth to Oil Conversion Technique

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user can turn their already made earth techniques into Oil, which does not increase its rank nor strength but just gives it oil properties. This jutsu can also be used to turn the landscape into oil.
-Twice per battle
-Must have signed the Toad contract

Declined, nexus doesnt allow conversion techniques

Seikiyuton: Tenka | Oil Release : Ignition

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user snaps his finger causing any source of oil the user wishes to ignite and explode. The more oil there is, the bigger the explosion.
-Once per battle
-No A rank or above oil techniques for the next turn after.
-Must have signed the Toad contract

Declined, do not resubmit

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

edit where you see fit.

nibai koori touken ( double ice swords)
Type:supplementry
Rank:s
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:n/a
Damage Points:80
Description: this is what the blades look like:

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these blades if infused with water and wind chakra will be covered by a layer of ice this layer of ice will freeze what ever it hits. the user can also use the swords to relase blasts of chakra ( only water and wind chakra combined) but counts as a seperate jutsu.
note: can only be used by the 6th hokage
note: can't perform jutsu while holding both blades
note: the swords can be held seperately

Declined, if you want this approved you need to sort it out

koori nami ( ice wave)
Type:attack
Rank:s
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: the user swings his sword(s) ( the double ice swords) releaseing one or two power blasts of water and wind chakra ( ice) what ever is hit with these waves freezes for one turn.
note: no more ice jutsu for the next 3 turns ( this can be used though)
note: target only stays frozen for one turn
note: one of the double ice swords must be out
note: only the 6th hokage can use.

Hyouton: Koori Kyanon) Ice Release: Ice Cannon
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user forms a connon made of ice that can draw in ice and shoot a blast of super compressed ice that will level even a earth wall and cause frost bite slowing the opponents movement.
Notes:
-Only usable in Icy terrain
-Usable 3 times
Declined, do not resubmit

 

[-Kenshin-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Coy Fish
Scroll Owner:Itachi Uchiha1992
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

Approved

 

[Demosthenes]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

This technique is based on Neji's use of a chakra-sphere-aura against Kidomaru. The sphere provided no protection, but once Kidomaru's arrow was inside of the field he could use condensed sections of chakra to push it. This technique is expanding on that ability.

(Hakke Heika no Teisoku) Eight Trigrams Blades of Law
Type:Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage: 100 (60 to self at the end of the technique because of the stress on the body that controlling a large mass of chakra coming from all of your tenketsu causes.)
Description: The user will begin by taking a basic stance with one foot leading the other, while both hands are in a similar positon, with the non-dominant hand and foot leading. Following this, the user will pull their non-dominant leg back while curling it, simultaneiously bringing their arms up as well, ending with their dominant arm in a curve that leaves the hand elevated and next to the users head, while the non-dominant hand is at the level of the thigh, upside down. The user envisions the Eight Trigrams on the ground beneath them as the stance is made.The user then quickly focuses chakra out of all of their tenketsu, quickly forming a half-sphere aura/mass of chakra, the radius of which extends to the middle of mid-range, using the Eight Trigrams symbol as a basis of where to form the half-sphere on. The user proceeds to manipulate sections of the interior of sphere into condensed blades of chakra which are invisible to the normal eye and can be manipulated to slash at the opponent with arm and hand movements.
Note: The aura/mass half-sphere offers no protection from any form of attack. Anything can pass in and out of the half-sphere with ease.
Note: The half-sphere can not move from the spot where it is first created.
Note: May only be used once per battle.
Note: It is necessary for the user to make hand and arm movements when manipulating the blades, as it is the only way the user can direct them.
Note: This technique lasts as long as two moves and therefore counts as two of the user's three moves per turn.
Note: The user can only perform two techniques on their next turn.
Declined, do not resubmit

 

[-Kenshin-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Uchikina sakana no ō,-nushi:-Jutsu o shōkan)Summoning Jutsu: King, Lord Of The Coy Fish

Type: Summon
Rank: S
Range: short - long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The User bites his thumb and rubs blood on his palm then after doing 8 handsigns the user will slam their hand on the ground and summon King Lord of the coy fish From where ever he may be... King Is a Large Coy Fish Said to be 10 feet long and 4feet tall.. kings skin like most fish is scales but very strong scales king is know for his abilities to cast weak to medium strength genjutsu up to b ranked... King can also use Suiton (water Jutsus) without handsigns is known to have very fast movements to where is hard for a normal oppent to see him.. King can also use any elemental jutsu that the user pocesses as long as it doesnt require handsigns

note:Summoning can only be used by Itachi Uchiha1992 unless the contract is taught to the user
note:King can only be summoned once per battle and can stay on the field for up to 4 turns
note:After using b ranked Genjutsu King will Disappear
Declined, this requires a body of water to use as its a fish summoning, and also remove the ability to use all elemental natures max of two

(FUU,-hi no sakana:-Jutsu o shōkan)Summoning Jutsu: Fuu, The Fire Fish
Type:Summon
Rank: S
Range: short - long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Fuu is Kings brother althoe kings is black and white and uses mostly water and genjutsu Fuu uses mostly fire justu hence the nickname the fire fish.. Fuu skin is Black in Red in color and Fuu also stands at (3 feet long and 3 feet tall) Fuu can use a few genjutsu but only going up too mid C ranked Genjutsus Fuu's speed is about Mid Fast but Fuu isnt slow in any means Fuu's main jutsu is one he created himself he makes a black pool of water appear underneath him at it moves him to which ever spot he wants but Fuu can only use this when he's in extreme danger

*Note:Fuu Can only be used by Itachi Uchiha unless tought to the other user
*Note:Can be summoned once and lasts for 4 turns
Declined, limit the elemental abilities it can use and this would require a water source to be able to use, if not like the filler episode where the pirahna and shark require a moving body of water

 

[McKnockout]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting..
(Buki: Iya Kumori Katana) - Weapon: The Shadowless Sword

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A (+15 damage to every wind based jutsu)
Description: This chokutō was made by a blacksmith who had a secret method of sword making who only crafted for people he believed to be worthy of his works. It is made out of special hardened chakra infused metals which he named “The Shadowless Sword” in reference to its special abilities. It has a movable handle allowing it to switch from a traditional sword to a double-headed sword; the handle was designed to fit on either side of the blade. This sword can be infused with three different elements of fire, lightning or wind. By using chakra flow, the user can extend the reach and cutting ability of the sword. However, the greatest advantage of this sword is allowing its user to perform wind techniques with the use of only a single handseal.
*Note: This sword can not be destroyed.
*Can only be used by McKnockout

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(Iya Kumori Shinkirou Dageki) - Shadowless Mirage Strike

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user concentrates either fire, lightning or wind chakra into The Shadowless Sword and performs a slash with the sword which releases a crescent shaped energy blast of raw chakra that is infused with the elemental chakra that was absorbed by the sword at the desired location. These crescents of raw chakra have different affects depending on the elemental chakra used. Lightning will severely shock the opponent, fire will induce 3rd degree burns and wind will pierce and shred the opponent’s skin.
*Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle (regardless of elemental chakra used).
*Can only be used by McKnockout

(Genjutsu: Mugen Senkou) – Illusion Technique: Continuous Flashbang

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: An illusion where the opponent is suddenly blinded by a flash (there is a bright burst of blinding light much like a flash bomb) that continues to detonate/flash over and over again. This causes the opponent to immediately stop what they were doing and futilely attempt to shield their eyes. But most importantly, this technique blinds the opponent making them unable to rely on their vision.
*Note: Blinding effects last for 1 turn.
*Note: Can only use 4 times per battle.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

(Genjutsu: Kage Mane?) – Illusion Technique: Shadow Imitation?

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: An illusion where the opponent finds themselves trapped and paralysed as he sees his shadow combine with the user’s shadow (or the user’s ally e.g. a clone) exactly like Shadow Imitation. In reality, the opponent is paralysed and unable to move. This jutsu requires a single handseal to perform.
*Note: Paralysing effects last for 1 turn.
*Note: Can only use 3 times per battle.
*Note: Must wait at least 1 turn to be used again.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

I changed the wording of them and also restricted them more.
All declined, i have previously stated any resubmittions without quotes will not be checked and i have recently added that you will also need to highlight the changes clearly by bolding them

New..
(Suiton: Shiroppu Numa) – Water Style: Syrup Swamp

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Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user summons a swamp of highly sticky, syrupy liquid beneath the target. The size of the swamp depends on how much chakra the user puts into the jutsu. This also acts as a source of this substance.
*Note: Only the user can make use of the syrup.
*Note: Can only use 4 times per battle.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

Declined, do not resubmit

 

[Pervyy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Balrog) - Earth style: Balrog
Rank: S rank
Type: attack/defence
Range: short - mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will perform 3 handseals placing his hand on the ground, quickly releasing his chakra into the ground. Out of this, a giant black beast made of earth shall arise(see image below). This earth demon is known as a Balrog, its body is made of earth and down his back are spikes of fire. He can also weild a flaming sword or a fire whip. For these 2 fire weapons to be created the user needs to perform one handseal. This earth deamon has 3 abilities.
1. The Balrog can use up A rank fire (not including A ranks)
2. The Balrog can control a fire whip or a flaming sword.
3. The Balrogs body is as hard as A rank earth
These beast is able to walk and move, but not able to fly even though it has wings. Once the body of the Balrog is destoryed the fire will extinguish shortly after.

Note: Useable 3 times per battle
Note: Can't use genjutsu in the same turn as this jutsu
Note: Can only be used by the pervy sage or sauron

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~Declined~ S Rank? really?

Resubmitting

(Doton: Balrog) - Earth style: Balrog
Rank: Forbidden
Type: attack/defence
Range: short - mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will perform 3 handseals placing his hand on the ground, quickly releasing his chakra into the ground. Out of this, a giant black beast made of earth shall arise(see image below). This earth demon is known as a Balrog, its body is made of earth and down his back are spikes of fire. He can also weild a flaming sword or a fire whip. For these 2 fire weapons to be created the user needs to perform one handseal. This earth deamon has 3 abilities.
1. The Balrog can use up S rank fire (not including S ranks)
2. The Balrog can control a fire whip or a flaming sword.
3. The Balrogs body is as hard as S rank earth
These beast is able to walk and move, but not able to fly even though it has wings. Once the body of the Balrog is destoryed the fire will extinguish shortly after.

Note: Useable 1 times per battle
Note: Can't use genjutsu in the same turn as this jutsu
Note: Must be taught by the pervy sage
Note: Stays on the feild for 4 turns, or until destroyed
Note: The user takes 30 damage from the amount of chakra they have to use for this jutsu

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(Sennin hando) - Sage hand
Rank: S rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will gather their sage chakra into their hand and then, go to slap their opponent. This is no ordinary slap, as it is used when you expect the opponent to block. As you slap them, you release the sage chakra out of your palm sending a narutal energy wave blast out of you hand, traveling infront of you at high speeds. If the opponent doesn't dodge this, the energy is released onto the targets face hitting them harder than tsunade hits. This blast can blast back anything of A rank or below.

Note: Useable twice
Note: Must be in sage/hawk mode
Note: Reduces sage/hawk mode by 2 turns
Both Approved

 

[Damon Salvatore]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Summoning Boss: Anubis
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid Range
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:60 (depends on the jutsu)
Description:Anubis is a large Steller's sea eagle.His size is the same as Gamabunta.When flaping wings he creates B rank wind vortex.His most impresive ability is that he is able to use his chakra to create also B rank and below Genjutsus.Due to his eagle vision he is able to see up to 1-3 kilometer in distance.
Note:The B ranks count as a move

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Declined, elaborate more on the effects of the genjutsu and also state that they count towards one of your 3 moves per turn

Summoning Boss: Anubis
Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid Range
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:60 (depends on the jutsu)
Description:Anubis is a large Steller's sea eagle.His size is the same as Gamabunta.When flaping wings he creates A rank wind vortex.His most impresive ability is that he is able to use his chakra to create also B rank and below Genjutsus.Due to his eagle vision he is able to see up to 1-3 kilometer in distance.The Genjutsu may be used only when Anubis is on the ground.
Note:The A rank wind vortex count as a move.
Note:The Genjutsu counts as a move.
Note:They Cannot be used in the same turn.
Note:Only Taught by Damon Salvatore

Declined, you still didnt elaborate on the genjutsu ability, what sort of genjutsu are cast extra

 

[~Hasashi~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Resubmitting..
(Katon: Kasai Soujou) – Fire Manipulation

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra throughout the air causing any already created fire to fall under the user’s manipulation. Once this jutsu is in affect, the user can control the fire in any way he chooses.
*Note: Only up to A-rank fire
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: Fire must already be created.
*Note: Last for 2 turns.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

Changed it to "only up to A-rank fire". Please just edit where you see fit.

What the ****? Am I the only one who notices the similarities?

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lightning style: lightning manipulation: (raiton: denkou soujou)
rank: S
type: attack/supplementary
range: short-long
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description: the user focuses his lightning chakra throughout the air causing any already created lightning to fall under the users manipulation once the jutsu is in affect the user can control the lightning anyway way he pleases
~the lightning must be already created
~once per battle
~lasts 2 turns

U basically copy/pasted my jutsu and changed it to fire, besides your jutsu being banned you should be banned from this thread or something -_-

 

[Taiketsu Yagami]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Buzzard´s Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Buzzard: Blaziken) Buzzard´s Summoning Technique: Blaziken "The Combat Buzzard"
Rank:S
Type:Summoning
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:50
Damage Points: Depends on the user
Description: Blaziken is a guardian of the Queen Storm Skyress. Blaziken Is so far the only Buzzard with a different and smaller mass. It would seem that he is similar to a humanoid type animal and is much smaller than the other buzzards. Its wings aren't fully developed so it cant fly but by pushing against the wind, his speed increases to that of Skyry. Blaziken is a combat specialst and a great user of fire so she can use all fire based attacks and Taijutsu besides forbidden .
Notes:
*Can only be summoned twice*
*Can only stay on the field for 3 turns*
*Can be forced back if hit by 80 points of damage and in this case cant be summoned again*
*can only be taught by Taiketsu Namikaze to those with Buzzard contract*
*All her techniques are considered one of the three jutsu*

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~Declined~ Are you apart of the Buzzard contract?


Creating a stronger and useful version:

(Katon: Kasai Hitoya Shoufuku) Fire Release: Fire Prison Submission
Rank:S
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage Points:N/A (+40 if they touch or are hit by the fire)
Description: The user will gather his fire chakra and infuse his own chakra, spewing a stream of intense fire. Due to the fire being infused with chakra, the user can control it and cause it to wrap around the opponent incasing them in a sphere of fire. If wraping them in fire fails, the user can simply attack them with that stream as the intense flame will still burn. Like its mother jutsu, if the opponent doesn't escape in two turns, the oxygen will burn up and he/she will die.
Note:
-Jutsu can only twice
-Jutsu can only be maintained for 2 turns
-Can only be taught by Taiketsu Namikaze
-Can be escaped or blocked by powerful water jutsu
~Declined~
(Katon: Kaen Mo-Do) Fire Release: Blaze Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Self
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A(+5 to taijutsu and +15 to Fire based jutsu)
Description: The user will make a sequence of 5 handseals and release fire chakra around his body, causing the air around him to become heated. This will cause all fire based jutsu of A-Rank and below to become more powerful when released from one's body and make taijutsu more powerful as it also burns. The only back fire is the opponent can use a method of simply blowing the wind around him away or drenching the area around the user with water.
Note:
-Can only be used once
-If not interfered with, it will last only 3 turns due to being able to dehydrate the user
~Declined~ too similar to existing jutsu's

Yes I have signed the contract with the buzzards and this is allowed by Migualon J.J. Im resubmitting:

(Buzzard´s Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Buzzard: Blaziken) Buzzard´s Summoning Technique: Blaziken "The Combat Buzzard"
Rank:S
Type:Summoning
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:50
Damage Points: Depends on the user
Description: Blaziken is a guardian of the Queen Storm Skyress. Blaziken Is so far the only Buzzard with a different and smaller mass. It would seem that he is similar to a humanoid type animal and is much smaller than the other buzzards. Its wings aren't fully developed so it cant fly but by pushing against the wind, his speed increases to that of Skyry. Blaziken is a combat specialist aswell as profficient Fire user and can use all fire based attacks and Taijutsu besides forbidden .
Notes:
*Can only be summoned twice*
*Can only stay on the field for 3 turns*
*Can be forced back if hit by 80 points of damage and in this case cant be summoned again*
*can only be taught by Taiketsu Namikaze to those with Buzzard contract*
*All her techniques are considered one of the three jutsu*

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Approved

(Raiton: Yoroi of Narukami) Lightning Release: Armor of Narukami
Type:Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40(-10 each turn its maintained)
Damage Points:N/A (+5 to taijutsu and +10 to lightning based jutsu)
Description: The user will cover himself in a shroud of lightning that takes the shape of a Yami (demon). Its more like a cloak similar to a Bijuu in incomplete form. With this armor on, the user builds a sturdy defence to that of being able to withstand B-rank attacks(C-rank if a wind technique and A-rank if Earth technique) and all lightning released from one's body become more powerful as well as only needing one hand seal to perform them.
Notes:
-Can only be used once
-Last two turns
-Can only use lightning in this armor
-Unable to use lightning based attacks after deactivation

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Declined, do not resubmit

(Katon: Kouen Heki) Fire Release: Flame Burst
Type:Attack/Defend
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage Points:80 (-15 from heat exhaustion)
Description: The user will chanel fire chakra into his/her sword, causing fire to surround it. After the first step is done, the user will thrust the sword into the ground causing a fire burst to rise up and around the user and comrades, protecting the people from incoming attacks from any direction except above. The fire is hot enough to burn a person who touches it alive.
Notes:
-Technique is active as long as the sword is in the ground. Once pulled out the technique cancels in seconds
-Usable twice
Approved

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(Hayatōn: Mueishō Mahha 2) – Swift Release: Shadowless Flight Mach 2
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After making 5 hand seals the user can move at fast speeds through the release of the swift release to the point that there body becomes so distorted that it looks like there are distorted after images of the user when traveling over long distances but in short burst he or she disappears(Simmilar to when Raikage dodged amaterasu but not as fast since the images are distorted) and then strike their opponent at multiple angles. However Dojutsu and sharingan of tomoe 3 is capable of reading the movements and can react to the opponents attacks
Note: Can only be used by a swift user bio.
Note: Can only be used twice due to the strain on the user legs
Note: No more swift techs for 3 turns after usage
Declined do not resubmit

(Hakke: Myaku) 8 Trigrams: Pulse
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30(+10 for A-rank genjutsu)
Damage Points:30 (if in close-range)
Description: When the user relizes he is under a genjutsu due to being able to see chakra. He will release a burst of chakra through every tenketsu in his body to snap him out of the genjutsu. The burst is strong enough to bounce back incoming things besides justu.
Notes:
-Can snap out of genjutsu A-rank and below
-Must be a Hyuuga Clan member
-useable 3 times per match
Approved
For the 8 trigrams pulse. I wanted a technique that allowed me to get out of genjutsu that doesn't allow me to move. I would also like to ask if it counts as a kai?

 

[Mathias]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton Bu-meran Ashinami) Boomerang Lightning Step
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: By doing a simple kick the user shoots out two powerful beams of lightning at great speeds being able to slice through solid objects or cut down attacks. As soon as the beam is launched and makes contact with anything it will come back towards the user like a boomerang and disperse.

Can only be used 5 times per battle.
Must have mastered lightning.
Can only be taught by Mathias
Declined, limit use more its S rank

This is what it kind of looks like

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Dark Threads | Sphere of Linen
(Kuro Itto: Amatama)
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 45
Damage: N/A
Description: Kakuzu releases the dark threads from his body and creates a dense sphere of interlaced threads around his body. The weaving of the threads is done in a way for them to withstand the most impact possible increasing their defensive capabilities to the fullest. This sphere can withstand attacks of the same rank or below.

• Can only be used twice per battle.
• Cannot defend against forbidden ranked attacks.

Declined, restrict the defence more and considering this is actually based upon earth element it would be weaker to lightning based elements

Resubmitting:

(Raiton Bu-meran Ashinami) Boomerang Lightning Step
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: By doing a simple kick the user shoots out two powerful beams of lightning at great speeds being able to slice through solid objects or cut down attacks. As soon as the beam is launched and makes contact with anything it will come back towards the user like a boomerang and disperse.

Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Must have mastered lightning.
No lightning techniques of S-Rank or above for one turn after the use of this technique.
Can only be taught by Mathias
Approved
I have permission from Lord Danzo to resubmit this technique.

(Kuro Ito: Amatama) - Dark Threads: Sphere of Linen
Type: Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Kakuzu releases the dark threads from his body and creates a dense sphere of interlaced threads around his body. The weaving of the threads is done in a way for them to withstand the most impact possible increasing their defensive capabilities to the fullest. This sphere can withstand attacks of the same rank or below, except it is only to withstand A ranked and below lightning techniques.

Can be used twice per battle.
After being used it cannot be used the following turn.
Only Kakuzu can use this technique.
Must be taught by Mathias.
Approved

New submission's

Custom Weapon:

(Bunten Dyuaru) - Dual Equinox
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Two highly uniquely-designed knuckles created by Mathias a very long time ago. They are worn like a glove, these two unique knuckles have three very sharp blades coming out of them which are barely spaced together creating a very dangerous close range weapon. The knuckles are made from a special metal that can be infused through chakra flow with elemental chakra to produce added effects. When infused with wind or lightning natured chakra, they can easily pierce through stone. The knuckles damage and effect can also be maximized if the person has a better control of their chakra. If used for taijutsu related techniques these knuckles can be very deadly. Since these knuckles are worn like a glove the user has no problem performing hand signs. Because of the metal they are made from, the knuckles can be used to deflect incoming kunais or shurikens with ease.

Only Mathias way wield these knuckles.

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Approved

(Jiton: Jishaku Bun'ya) - Magnetisim Release: Magnetic Field
Rank: A
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will focus his magnetic energy and release it in a 360 degree wave spreading through the air and ground creating a magnetic field, magnetizing anything that it comes in contact with. This technique does not harm the opponent.

The field stays active for two turns and must wait one turn before reactivating.
Can only be used three times per battle.
Can only be used by Magnetisim Release bios.
Must be taught by Mathias.
Approved

(Jiton: Raikou Atorakushon) - Magnetisim Release: Lightning Attraction
Rank: S
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will focus his magnetic energy and release it into the ground bringing forth gold dust particles. The user will then turn the gold dust particles into a long pole-like object. The pole will act as a conductor which can attract A ranked lightning techniques and below. Any lightning absorbed will be conducted down towards the earth causing the user no harm from lightning attacks for two turns.

Can only be used once per battle.
The user can't use lightning attacks while this technique is active.
Can only be used by Fourth Kazekage.
Must be taught by Mathias.
Approved

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninjutsu: Dorobō Neko) Ninja Arts: Burgler Cat

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Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: With one handseal, the user is able to create a small chakra burst on the palms of the opponent, when he/she's holding something (such as a sword, or a kunai, etc). The burst will invariably make the hand open, and shoot the object outwards. If in short-range, the user can choose to make the object fall on her hand.
Mainly this is a distraction jutsu, as most opponents, Sannin and above, will have the necessary reflexes to re-catch the weapon again after it is shot a small distance (arm's range or elbow's range).
The user can shout: "Expelliarmus", if the user is a geek.

Approved

(Katon/Raiton: Mure Sai no Shuuren) Fire/Lightning Style: The Drill of the Rhinoceros Crash

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Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Point: 80
Description: The user will preform 3 handseals, and quickly spit a continuous stream of fire, which will start to spin with a great speed forming a huge drill. This rotation can be either around the user or near the user, the tip of the drill being pointed towards anywhere the user wishes it to point. As the user starts spitting the fire, the user will preform a different handseal, which will then start enveloping the fire drill with lightning chakra. As both elements start to friction on each other, the drill starts spinning substantially faster and will increase the temperature largely, all adding to the piercing power of the technique. At the user's wish, the bright drill can be shot at great speed towards the desired location, going on a straight line until the user decides to make it explode, blasting outwards multiple similar drills, significantly smaller in side.
*The large drill can shoot to Long Range, the small drills will be shot in a short range radius*
*Both phases can be done at the same time by two shinobis*
*Can only be used once every 4 turns, for a maximum of 2 times, given the chakra strain*
*Can't use Lightning or Fire Techniques above S rank in the next 2 turns*

Approved

Resubmitting:

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(Katon: Kitsune no Uen ) Fire Release: Devious Fox

Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user preforms a row of 5 handseals, and places her hand on the ground. From each finger, an extremely fast string runs along the floor, against the opponent, that then multiplies into a series of wires that engolf the opponent, locking his movements and burning him severely.
*Can only be used twice per match*
*No handseal using techniques same turn*

(Katon: Kitsune no Uen ) Fire Release: Devious Fox

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Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user preforms a row of 5 handseals, and places her hand on the ground. From each finger, an extremely fast string runs along the floor, against the opponent, that then multiplies into a series of wires that engolf the opponent, locking his movements and burning him severely.
*Can only be used twice per match*

Approved
I think it was too restricted for the rank and what it does.

 

[Professor Sarutobi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Chou no Ryoku) Lightning Release: The Psycho Threads
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user holds their hands out in front of them and sends out strings of their lightning chakra that wrap around the opponent, trapping them and causing a paralyzing effect while the threads touch them, due to the constant shocks to their nervous system the victim feels extremely drained after the technique ends and physical struggling increases the drained feeling. Along with either a partner, multiple partners who has been allowed to use this jutsu or shadow clones this technique can be used together on the same enemy to increase its holding power.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi.
-User must remain still while using technique.
-Can be used by multiple people at once to increase its power, 2 people make it S rank, 3 or more make it forbidden.
-3 times per battle.
Declined, do not resubmit

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hone Assaiki) Summoning Technique: Bone Crusher
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: After doing the necessary hand seals and wiping blood across their hand, the user summons a huge hyena the size of gamahiro who is said to have the strongest jaws of any living hyena in the world. Like most other hyenas Bone Crusher is able to use genjutsu and his laugh places all opponents on the field in a movement restricting illusion as long as they hear it.
-Bone Crusher can bite through anything up to S rank but can't use any elemental jutsu.
-Due to the hyena's thick hides it takes S rank lightning to harm him
-Must have signed the Hyena contract to use
-Lasts for a maximum of 4 turns.
Declined, rank the genjutsu ability and limit its usage aswell as stating it to be one of the three moves per turn usage.

(Raiton: Taiyou furea) 
Lightning Release: solar flare

Rank: S

Type: offense/defense

Range: long

Chakra Cost:40

Damage Points:N/A

Description: The user does the required set of hand seals,then raises his or her both hands skyward While doing so,he or she continually expels lightning essence into the sky ,then with the help of solar based light,it produces a flash of light that douses the entire area and temporarily blinds unshielded eyes.This jutsu is mainly used for escapes or retreats. 

-twice per battle and lasts for 1 turn

-No A-rank raiton and above next turn.

-both the user and target gets blurred vision as long this it active

Declined, similar jutsu exists

(Genjutsu: okashi sen) Illusionary Technique: Candy Beam
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User points at the opponent which places a genjutsu on them which makes it seem as if a pink beam of energy is fired from the user's finger at lightning fast speed which transforms the opponent into a candy version of themselves, paralyzing them since food can't move.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi
-3 times per battle.
Approved

(Raiton: Seishou Ringu) Lightning Release: Energy Rings
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user extends his right arm and points his middle and index fingers at the opponent Then, he fires powerful rings made out of condensed, solid lightning chakra at his enemy, trapping them by their arms, legs, and neck so that the user can attack them while the opponent is incapable of fighting back.
-Only taught by Professor Sarutobi
-twice per fight
-rings last for 2 turns.
Declined, do not resubmit

 

[Dean Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton Ninpõ: Kuresentomūn-ha)Lightning Ninja Arts: Crescent Moon Wave
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Using the sword of the thunder god, the user releases a wave of electrical energy in the form of a crescent moon by streaming his chakra through it to form and release the wave. This wave can deflect kunais and also makes deep cuts in the skin of the opponent.
-Can only be used 3 times per battle.
-Must have the sword of the thunder god.
-Can only be used by Aoi Rokusho and Tobirama bios.
-Can only be taught by DeanMinatoNamikaze.
(Raiton Ninpõ: Toripurukuresentomūn-ha)Lightning Ninja Arts: Triple Crescent Moon Wave
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 to user)
Description: This is the more advanced and stronger form of "Lightning Ninja Arts: Crescent Moon Wave". In this technique, the user releases three stronger waves of electrical energy from the sword of the thunder god by streaming his chakra through it to release the waves. Because these waves are more in number and far stronger than its A-rank version, it takes a toll on the user and makes him tired and causes damage to the user as well.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Must have sword of the thunder god.
-Can only be used by Aoi Rokusho and Tobirama bios.
-Can only be taught by DeanMinatoNamikaze.
Both Approved

(Genjutsu: Nezãrumu)Illusion Technique: Nether Realm
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: In this illusion, the opponent sees himself hunging upside down entangled by a snake with poison running on its fangs. The sheer horror makes the opponent frightened and tries to look away or close his eyes to avoid seeing the frightful sight but, the snake holds him in place and keeps his eyes open. The snake entagles him and paralyzes him in reality but in the illusion, the opponents bones are crushed. If the opponent is bitten by the snake with the poison, he is in reality stabbed by a kunai or shuriken laced in poison.
-Opponent remains paralyzed for 2 turns if stabbed with the poison laced kunai or bitten by the snake(in the illusion).
-Opponent remains paralyzed for 1 turn if he's not bitten by the snake.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Can only be taught by DeanMinatoNamikaze.

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P. S i used google translate and feel free to edit anything if needed

Declined do not resubmit

 

[Kamishiro]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon : bakuhatsuteki shitai )fire style: explosive body
Type: Attack-Defense
Rank: s
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 70
Description: the user gather all his katon chakra and then he put it around his body and then as he is ready and the target is next to him he release all the chakra making a huge explosion that will kill any one at mid or short range
-can only use twice per turn
-can't use any fire jutsu at the same time
-don't need any handseals

(Katon : noudouteki funkazan )fire style: active volcano
Type: Attack
Rank: s
Range: mid long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 70
Description: the user put his doton chakra into the ground and then he shape the ground into a huge volcano and then he put a huge amount of his katon chakra into the volcano and by that he will throw a huge amount of lava into his opposite nad to protect him he make a wall from ground so the lava won't reach him
-can only use twice per turn
-can't use and katon jutsu at the same turn
- the user must make the dragon +dog and the rat handseals

(Raiton :shokkingu tsunami )lightning style: shocking tsunami
Type: Attack
Rank: s
Range: mid- long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 70
Description: the user release a huge amount of his suiton chakra creating a huge wave that like the tsunami that destroyed japan couple of times and then as he make the wave he put all his raiton chakra into the wave making it shocking wave that will kill the opposite if it touched him , also this wave can reach to the middle of the sky
can only use twice per turn
can't use any suiton jutsu at the same turn
can't use any raiton jutsu at the same time

~All declined~ OP

 

[House]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kchuysei: Afcanc) Summoning: Afcanc
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Afcanc is one of the most wisest elder among the other beavers around the world. He is a small creature and it feel most confortable on it's users shoulder, sitting, about as it's body as big as a normal human head. Because of his age, it can't walk. Mr. Beaver can cast both A-ranked Fire blasts up to 5 times, and S-ranked Wind blasts up to 3 times, as its capable of infusing its blasts with his owner's justu, as in a short range. Mr. Beaver had also teached many types of animals around the world, but along his way, many other animals like Mr. Bear wanted to eat him, as he acquired the most devastating offensive attack, as he preforms it with screaming in a very high pitch, Mr. Dear became paralized for 1 turn, giving him a chance to escape.

Note:
-The genjutsu attack can also work on humans in short range, and animals in short-mid range and it lasts for 1 turn.
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-It's stays as long as I want him in the battle.
-It's stays on the user's shoulder ti'll he decides it to leave.
-(-10 damage to user)Due to it's foot claws, the user will experience pain in on his shoulders.
-If the user won't release him back before 5 turns, the user will be unable to sign handsigns ti'll the end of the battle, due to the great pain in his shoulder, which had caused by the claws of the beaver.
Declined, limit it i will not allow a forbidden ranked summoning to remain on the field for aslong as you wish

Resubmitting:
(Kchuysei: Afcanc) Summoning: Afcanc
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Afcanc is one of the most wisest elder among the other beavers around the world. He is a small creature and it feel most confortable on it's users shoulder, sitting, about as it's body as big as a normal human head. Because of his age, it can't walk. Mr. Beaver can cast both A-ranked Fire blasts up to 5 times, and S-ranked Wind blasts up to 3 times, as its capable of infusing its blasts with his owner's jutsu. Mr. Beaver had also teached many types of animals around the world, but along his way, many other animals like Mr. Bear wanted to eat him, as he acquired the most devastating offensive attack, as he preforms it with screaming in a very high pitch, Mr. Bear became paralized for 1 turn, giving him a chance to escape.

Note:
-The genjutsu attack can also work on humans in short range, and animals in short-mid range and it lasts for 1 turn.
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-Due to his age, he can only stay on the battlefield as long as 5 turns.
-Due to the claws he has on his feet, stabbing the users shoulder, the user will take -10 damage every turn.
-Because of his rather wide/thick/flat tail, he can defend with his tail against any lightning and water jutsu up to S-rank as in 1 times (-15 damage to the user), as in A-rank, 2 times (-10 damage).

~Approved~ But those fire blasts and wind blasts and the paralyzing scream counts as one out of 3 techniques per round.

(Suiton:Muzai o īwatasu) Suiton:Absolve
Type: Suplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Once a water jutsu is used against the user, he does 3 handseals and lifts his hands towards the coming water.Then he absorbs the Suiton chakra from the justu.
Note:Can be used 2 times per battle.
Note:After used, the user must use water jutsu in the same turn to free the stored water chakra.
Note:Can absorb only till A rank justus.

(Doton: Shinkō supaiku ) -Emerging Spikes
Type: Attack/Defensive
Rank: A-S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user dashes against the opponent, and while running the user stomps in the ground, making rather large diagonal/vertical spikes to errupt.
Note:
-If the user is running and then stomps, the jutsu will be stronger hence the collision what's his feet making with the ground.
-If the user stomps while not running, the jutsu will be A-ranked.

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~Both Declined~ Similar techniques exist.

 

[Ryuji]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuzuri Modo)-Wolverine Mode

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A (+ 10 to Taijutsu)
Description: To enter Wolverine Mode the user must stand on top of the head of any wolverine and enter in a meditating state. The wolverine will then start transfering his chakra to the user, while he gathers the chakra and slowly attains characteristic and special ablities that Wolverines have.
The user's sense of smell and hearing are enhenced, so now he can track the opponent and can hear the slightest sounds made by him.
The strenght of the user also is increase to a level that can be compared to A's and so does his speed increase (1lvl). The user's canine teeth grow, the nails take a claw-like appareance and the body can fight freely in cold weather. Also, since every Wolverine has an elemental affinity the user can perform jutsus with at least 3 hand seals for the respective affinity of the Wolverine use to enter Wolverine Mode. But of course all this ''boosts'' have a drawback, the user's eye sight is completely useless if fighting at night and Lightning jutsus that emit light apply 10, default Damage Points, no matter if they make contact with the user. After Wolverine Mode is worn of, the user will be completely exhausted because of the drastic changes in his body had to bared.
Note: A turn has to pass before completely enter Wolverine Mode.
Note: The user can't perform any jutsus while trying to abtain Wolverine Mode, only clones.
Note. Clones can't use Wolverine Mode, but they wil appear in Wolverine Mode if used while the user is in it.
Note: The Wolverine used to attain Wolverine Mode will automaticly dissapear.
Note: Wolverine Mode lasts for 4 turns.
Note: After Wolverine Mode has worn of, the user can't perform A and S-rank jutsus of any kind and can't perform Taijutsu moves for 4 turns.

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(Kuzuri Modo)-Wolverine Mode

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A (+ 10 to Taijutsu)
Description: To enter Wolverine Mode the user must stand on top of the head of any wolverine and enter in a meditating state. The wolverine will then start transfering his chakra to the user, while he gathers the chakra and slowly attains characteristic and special ablities that Wolverines have.
The user's sense of smell and hearing are enhenced, so now he can track the opponent and can hear the slightest sounds made by him.
The strenght of the user also is increase to a level that can be compared to A's and so does his speed increase (1lvl). The user's canine teeth grow, the nails take a claw-like appareance and the body can fight freely in cold weather. Also, since every Wolverine has an elemental affinity the user can perform jutsus with at least 3 hand seals for the respective affinity of the Wolverine use to enter Wolverine Mode. But of course all this ''boosts'' have a drawback, the user's eye sight is completely useless if fighting at night and Lightning jutsus that emit light apply 10, default Damage Points, no matter if they make contact with the user. After Wolverine Mode is worn of, the user will be completely exhausted because of the drastic changes in his body had to bared.
Note: A turn has to pass before completely enter Wolverine Mode.
Note: The user can't perform any jutsus while trying to abtain Wolverine Mode, only clones.
Note. Clones can't use Wolverine Mode, but they wil appear in Wolverine Mode if used while the user is in it.
Note: The Wolverine used to attain Wolverine Mode will automaticly dissapear.
Note: Wolverine Mode lasts for 4 turns.
Note: After Wolverine Mode has worn of, the user can't perform A and S-rank jutsus of any kind and can't perform Taijutsu moves for 4 turns.

~Approved~

(Fuuton:Shakkuri)-Wind Style:Hiccup

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing a single handseal the user will blow from his mouth a very small wind gust at the opponent. The wind will enter through the opponent mouth and nose and it flows through the pharynx, past the glottis and into the larynx and trachea, ending in the lungs. However since is very rare that an opponent opens his/her mouth the user must ''open'' the opponent's mouth by other neccesary means. After 1 opponents turns passes the opponent's muscles of the chest and abdomen aids the airflow to move down when the opponent inhales, and then up when exhales, causing the opponent to have hiccups and limits the user to use jutsus that are blown directly from the opponent's gut or mouth since the opponents haves hiccups the jutsus will get stuck in the mouth or trachea and damage them greatly, but jutsus like the Fireball Jutsu who only need a little blow and the fire doesn't contact mouth or gut so the opponent is safe but the jutsu will loose 05 Damage points since the hiccups will interrupt is performance.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: This jutsu's effect last for 3 turns.
Note: No fuuton jutsus for the next 3 turns
Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji.

~Approved~

Updating it (changing method)

(Fuuton:Shakkuri)-Wind Style:Hiccup

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Type: Suplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (10 every turn, the wind is in use)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing a single hand seal the user will create a medium size wind, the wind's purpose is to enter the opponent's mouth the second he/she opens his/her mouth. Once in, the wind will enter through the opponent mouth and nose and it flows through the pharynx, past the glottis and into the larynx and trachea, ending in the lungs. After 1 of the opponents turns passes the opponent's muscles of the chest and abdomen aids the airflow to move down when the opponent inhales, and then up when exhales, causing the opponent to have hiccups and limits the user to use jutsus that are blown directly from the opponent's gut or mouth since the opponent has hiccups, the jutsus will get stuck in the mouth or trachea and damage them greatly, but jutsus like the Fireball Jutsu who only need a little blow of air and don't make contact with the mouth or gut so the opponent is safe but the jutsu will loose 10 Damage points since the hiccups will interrupt it's performance.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: No wind jutsus while the wind is still in use and can only stay for 2 turns.
Note: This jutsu's effect last for 3 turns of the target.
Note: No wind jutsus while the opponent is under the effect of this technique.
Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji.

~Declined~ You cannot just increase its effects and decrease it's drawbacks >_>

 

[Mattobi]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: After performing the two necessary handseals, the user will gather his Doton chakra into his palm and slam it on the ground. After he slams the ground a Doton Crocodile will appear. The crocodile will attack the opponents legs. If the opponent destroys the crododile, it can be reformed by sending chakra into it.
Note: Requires two handseals.
Note Can only be teached by MikeyDread.
~Declined~ Autoreform at B rank? change

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(Doton Kurokodairu) -Earth Crocodile
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After performing the two necessary handseals, the user will gather his Doton chakra into his palm and slam it on the ground. After he slams the ground a Doton Crocodile will appear. The crocodile will attack the opponents legs. If the opponent destroys the crododile, it can be reformed by sending chakra into it.
Note: The user can't perform any other Doton jutsus when he reforms the crocodile.
Note: Requires two handseals.
Note Can only be teached by MikeyDread.

~Declined~ Needs restrictions
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(Kage: Tate) -Shadow Shield
Type: Defence
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will gather his chakra into his shadow, making it expand. Then, the user will perform the Rat handseal and manipulate the chakra in the shadow to make the shadow raise and for a shield before the user. The shield is able to stop kunais, shurikens and physical attacks. This jutsu can also be used to hide the user and what he is preparing to do.
Note: One must have finished his shadow training.
Note: One must be member of the Nara Clan (Social group).
Note : Can only be used by Nara's.
Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.

~Declined~ Similar jutsu exists

("Kurayami to Raito" Kage ryoto) "Darkness and Light" Shadow Dual Swords
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short (-Mid for Nara jutsus)
Chakra Points: 40 (for Nara jutsus)
Damage Points: 80
Description: The two Kage ryoto are two swords wich are created for both Kenjutsu and Ninjutsu. The user wears the swords on his back. Both swords are specially treatened and sharpened, thus the swords can cut trough an apple wich falls down from a tree. Also the swords are created by a special Nara smith. Thus they can be infused with the special shadow chakra of the user. This means that the sword can be used to perform Nara jutsus. When a Nara is using the weapons he doesn't need to perform the handseal to use Shadow jutsus, because of the special combination of the swords and the Nara shadow chakra.
Note: While the user is using the swords, he can only perform Nara jutsus
Note: Can only be used by MikeyDread.

Picture of both swords

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~Approved~
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Summoning Animal: Giant Kestrels

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Scroll Owner: MikeyDread
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A

~Contract approved~

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyodaina Chougenboubosu)- Summoning: Kestrel Boss
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: After drawing some blood and performing the seven handseals, the user summons Kyodaina. Kyodaina has brown feathers and is a little smaller than Gamabunta. Kyodaina can use lightning techniques up to A-rank and thanks to his wings he can perform wind techniques upto S-rank. But, the jutsus he can perform are those wich doesn't need handseals. However, when the summoner stands on Kyodaina's back, he can perform the handseals so that Kyodaina can use the jutsus.
Note: Only stays on the field for 5 turns
Note: Kyodaina can't use wind and lightning techniques in the same turn.
Note: Can only be used by someone who has signed the Kerstel contract.
Note: Can only be used with the permission of MikeyDread.
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~Declined~ Way too big to fly, if he is almost as big as gamabunta, his wings would stretch over a couple of kilometers.

 

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Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Seishou Teppou)-Spirit Gun

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Type: Attack
Rank: D-A
Range: Medium-Long
Chakra Cost: 5-25
Damage Points: 10-40
Description: The user creates special spirit chakra to his index finger. User can change the strength of the technique. User can change to stun the enemy or can use the gun to its full potential. Cannot be mixed with another element. It can be used to attack the enemy destroy objects and be launched up to the air.
Note: Can only be used 4 times
Note: Can only be used by Status Quo and people taught by him

(Seishou Teppou Me-ga)- Spirit Gun Mega

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Medium-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: User creates special spirit chakra to his index finger User uses most of his spirit chakra to fire off a gigantic beam. Usually a finisher cannot be mixed with another element. Just like Spirit Gun but bigger and stronger. Can be used to launch in the air.
Note: Can only be used 1 times during a match
Note: Can’t use any more spirit techniques unless in demon form
Note: Can only be used by Status Quo and people taught by him

(Kangaru Kuchiyose no Jutsu)-Kangaroo Summoning

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Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 40
Description: The user preform the usual hand seals and slams his palm to the ground. The kangaroo's each only have a special ability of each element. Once summon the user can't use the element of the kangaroo while its own the field and 2 turns after they are gone. I can summon multiple kangaroos at once up to 3. Kangaroos can jump very high. Same abilities as normal kangaroos except use there element up to A rank. They can kick harder also jump very high.
Note: Only can be used 3 times everytime one kangaroo is summoned it negates the time you can use it that match. (example: if i summon 3 kangaroos at one time i can only summon 1 more kangaroo that match.)
Note: Last for 3 turns
Note: Can only be used by Status Quo and people taught by him

(Akuma Teppou)- Demon Gun

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Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Medium-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: This is the demon energy version of the Spirit Gun. The user gains the ability to fire his demon energy from his index finger. It is a vastly powerful attack. The user fires a concentrated crimson blast of powerful demon energy that inflicts greater damage than a normal Spirit Gun did prior to his transformation
Note: Only during curse mark transformation
Note: Can only be used 2 times
Note: Can only be used by Status Quo and people taught by him

(Akuma Teppou Me-ga)- Demon Gun Mega

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Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Medium-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: An ultimate version of Spirit Gun, where an intense concentration of energy is released to create a devastating energy attack capable of annihilating anything if left wide open. This is the usually the users ultimate attack.
Note: Only during Curse mark level 2
Note: Can only be used once
Note: returns to normal state after use
Note: Can only be used by Status Quo and people taught by him

Please edit if anything. I notice that you guys have a lot to check usually so take your time. Oh yah and if anything is wrong please tell me and tell me how i should change it. Also i dont want to use them yet because i think im to weak maybe when i get to aleast sannin. If none of them get approve or some or something lol. I just want to keep them like reserve because i got a lot of ideas and thats it thank you. Oh and it seems i cant get curse mark but i when the time eventually happens ill use the demon things..

Techniques are similar to my Yin/Yang Chakra Gun if not just a more elaborated version of mine.