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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Note to all who submit customs from now on please remember the following,
-Do not include to many spoilers
-Do not use to much coding and NO glow effects
-Please remember if resubmitting a declined technique or merely updating old ones provide a quote of the old version and highlight the added changes so we can understand where you have edited.

Keep them clean and remember to check grammer and please try and minimize the walls, try and explain the techniques in a clear and understandable manner without having to go into such detail creating huge walls.

Much appreciated if you remember this for future
 

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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Summoning Animal: Beaver
Scroll Owner: Dr. House
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: Afcanc
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
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Approved

(Kchuysei: Afcanc) Summoning: Afcanc
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Afcanc is one of the most wisest elder among the other beavers around the world. He is a small creature and it feel most confortable on it's users shoulder, sitting, about as it's body as big as a normal human head. Because of his age, it can't walk. Mr. Beaver can cast both A-ranked Fire blasts up to 5 times, and S-ranked Wind blasts up to 3 times, as its capable of infusing its blasts with his owner's justu, as in a short range. Mr. Beaver had also teached many types of animals around the world, but along his way, many other animals like Mr. Bear wanted to eat him, as he acquired the most devastating offensive attack, as he preforms it with screaming in a very high pitch, Mr. Dear became paralized for 1 turn, giving him a chance to escape.

Note:
-The genjutsu attack can also work on humans in short range, and animals in short-mid range and it lasts for 1 turn.
-Can only be summoned once per battle.
-It's stays as long as I want him in the battle.
-It's stays on the user's shoulder ti'll he decides it to leave.
-(-10 damage to user)Due to it's foot claws, the user will experience pain in on his shoulders.
-If the user won't release him back before 5 turns, the user will be unable to sign handsigns ti'll the end of the battle, due to the great pain in his shoulder, which had caused by the claws of the beaver.
Declined, limit it i will not allow a forbidden ranked summoning to remain on the field for aslong as you wish

(Raiton: Maiseremonī no shūryō) Lightning Release: The End of My Ceremony
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 90
Damage Points: 130 [-40 user]
Description: The user first has to channel Raiton into the ground, meaning he has to be on the ground, without moving to any place, then the user has to stomp the ground, making a tunnel into the ground, sending an S-ranked Lightning underground, and with one handsign I activate the jutsu, making an explosion of lighting under the opponent, killing him instantly.
Note:
-Only space-time jutsu can escape this.
-the user won't be able to do any Lightning justus in the next 2 turns.
-user feels much weakened as having sent Raiton chakra into the ground in enormous amounts, taking -40 damage.
-It can be only used if you have Mastered Lightning.
-doujutsu's can see through ground and can respond to it.
Declined, do not resubmit

(Suiton&Raiton: Kaminari Doro Furo) - Water&Lighting Release: Thunder Mud Bath
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making multiple underground tunnels form between themselves and the opponent. Then they channel Sution chakra into the tunnel, and in the same time, I breathe out water into the tunnel, causing the water to enchant with the lighting as it travels in multiple tunnels. With a single hand seal, the mud, enchanted with lightning will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in mud enchanted lightning.
Note:
-With the multiple tunnels in the ground, underneath the enemy, the mud will covers a much wider area.
-It can be used up to 2 times.
Declined, do not resubmit[/I

(Fuuton:Bōseki ringo) Wind release: Spinning Apple.
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: I Blow out Fuuton chakra arounding me, surrounding me with a really thick layer of Fuuton chakra, protecting me from any Elemental attacks, except S-ranked fire.
Note:
-Can be used 1 time.
-only S-ranked fire or higher could cover the sphere up, leaving me boiled inside, dying.
-If I don't cancel it within 2 turns, I choke to death.
-The user is able to release only wind attacks from the sphere.
-Wind sphere that is surrouding me is sharp as blade and if anyone comes in contact, it'll slice him up
Declined, do not resubmit[/I
Note: Edit as much as needed to be approved.
 
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(Kikan no Mizu) Water Mirror
Rank: S
Type: Attack| Defence| Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: **
Description: This technique can only be used by those with great knowledge about martial arts, speed, precision, reflexes and concentration. The user will stay calm and extremely concentrated while countering or avoiding one of the opponent's taijutsu or kenjutsu techniques. Then, the user will copy the exact same move the opponent did when he wants to, by mimicking the exact same movements.
*Usable twice per battle
*Can only be used to copy taijutu or kenjutsu techniques
*Must be kage rank and at least taijutsu/kenjutsu specialist
*Can't be used to copy any kind of mode, such as Gates. It only copies movements.
** It deals damage equal to the opponent's technique -5 damage points, since this is just a copy and the user didn't master the technique.
Approved

(Shusseki) Presence
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: -
Description: This technique was developed under the idea that a kenjutsu or taijutsu match is determined by how well you can read attacks. This can be done via sensing one's ''presence''. In this case, this ''presence'' refers to the preparatory movements, shifts in the centre of gravity, glances and sounds that go into making an attack. These factors are what cause one's ''presence'' to be given off. By using this technique, once can sense the opponent's ''presence'' in order to read the opponent's attacks, avoid and block them. On the contrary, if you know how erase traces of your own ''presence'', it will be much harder for someone to read your movements and so, your attacks will be much more unpredictable.
With the usage of this technique, the user greatly increases his offence and defence as he can react to even the fastest attacks, such as Iaido(though for iaido up to the users rank) and can make his own attacks much harder to read.
*Usable two times per battle and lasts four turns
*It doesn't make user's attacks stronger. It only makes them faster and unpredictable.
Approved
 
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(Fuuton No Jutsu) - Wind Style Technique
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: The user is able to make clearly visible objects by using their chakra to dense and move the air at great speed. Jutsu can be used to create shapes like small sized pillars of wind, tools, and shields of wind (Just like earth style technique).
Approved
(Taibu Fuuton no Jutsu ) Greater Wind Style Technique
Rank: A
Type: attack/defence
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user is able to make clearly visible objects by using their chakra to dense and move the air at great speed. Jutsu can be used to create shapes like medium sized pillars of wind, tools, and shields of wind (Just like earth style technique with more chakra used in order to make objects bigger and stronger).
Approved

(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water Style Technique
Rank: C
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: The user is able to create objects by using their chakra to control water. Jutsu can be used to create shapes like small sized pillars of water, tools, and shields of water (Just like earth style technique).
Declined, already exists
(Taibu Suiton no Jutsu ) Greater Water Style Technique
Rank: A
Type: attack/defence
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user is able to create objects by using their chakra to control water. Jutsu can be used to create shapes like medium sized pillars of water, tools, and shields of water (Just like earth style technique with more chakra used in order to make objects bigger and stronger).
Approved

(Suiton: Kurokabuto) - Water Style: Black Samurai
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: By using massive amount of suiton based chakra user is able to create a samurai made of water so big that he is even capable (capable as in "if there is enough water" of dwarfing rock formations of Earth Release: Mountain Smash. His name is derived from color of his watery armor which is extremely dense thus gaining black color in turn along with ability to stop A-ranked jutsu before getting destoryed. Samurai is able to create various shields and weapons of water of all sizes as long as he has nearby water source to create them from. His shield is capable of stopping one A-ranked jutsu before getting destroyed. He is also able to make a bow of water which fires arrows at great speed which equals S-ranked water technique or a sword (of any type - be it katana or broadsword) that too equals to S-ranked water technique. If necessary, samurai can be created around the user (like Susanoo). Samurai can regenerate himself for as long as there is water around.
*After jutsu is used user can only use water style
*Due to amount of chakra needed to sustain the samurai it can stay active for maximum of 3 turns after the turn it got activated
*Turn after it got activated user can use three jutsus since he still has enough chakra, two turns after activation user already starts feeling tired and due to lack of chakra he is able to use two jutsus. On the third turn after activation due to near-depletion of chakra he is able to use only one jutsu
*Can be only used once and, if the technique is sustained full-time, user falls into one-day-coma
*Creation of shield, bow, sword or regeneration count as one of the jutsus
*Once the item is created it can be manipulated into another shape if user wishes it (e.g. you first make a shield, but then you want to attack and shape it into a sword)
*Since he is made of water he can't be damaged by it, but rather embraces it and grows bigger
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Optional restrictions (these are made if current ones aren't enough to get jutsu approved. just highlight those that are to be included in current description)
*No clones can be maintained at the same time as this jutsu
*Although samurai is quite durable he has shown significant weakness against even basic offensive (it's not like swamp of the underworld would do the trick since it isn't offensive enough, but C ranked spike would do the trick) doton techniques (C rank and above). Due to enemy's doton chakra interrupting the flow of user's suiton chakra inside samurai whole samurai collapses crushing the user with the very water he brought up to protect him.
Declined, do not resubmit
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Summoning Animal: Lobsters
Scroll Owner: Johninto Takashi
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: None
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: None

Dropping my bull contract since someone had it already and I didn't know
Feel free to edit if there is any problems.

Approved, corrected the spelling, make sure you remember to have it properly next time i dont accept sloppyness
 
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( kaze tsubasa ) - wind wings
rank: c
type: supplementary
range: user
chakra cost: 25
damage points:n/a
description: much like the raikage puts on lightning armor, the user of this jutsu will simply create wings of wind chakra on their back that can allow them to dodge most attacks
Note: only two wing flaps
Note: allows you to move in any direction during a flap ( flap lasts 7 seconds)
Note: cant fly more than 5 feet
Note: only xtsukune uchiha can teach this

( kosui of shainingu awai ) lake of shining light
Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Chakra Cost: 80
Damage: n/a
Range: depends upon lake size
Description: The user will cast an illumonous light into the lake with their chakra, this glow unbeknown to the enemy is a genjutsu that affects multiple opponents senses blurring the vision and reducing their reaction time by the amount of chakra they have left, for every ten percent of their chakra gone reaction time is delayed by one second in five turns if nothing is done to stop the jutsu the hypnotic suggestion will paralyze them nearl completely.
Note: opponents can only break with 3 or above tomoe sharingan
Note: lasts 5 turns
Note: can only be used twice per battle
Note: can only be taught by xtsukune uchiha

( kosui souken ) lake creation
Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Chakra Cost: 60-70-80
Damage: n/a
Range: short-mid-long
Description: the user draws in water from the environment into their mouth and spews it onto the ground creating a small, medium, large lake

( youso gigei ) Element Arts
Rank: A
Type: Attack/supplementary
Range: self
Chakra cost: 60(+10 each turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: the user can seemlessly copy an opponents elemental jutsu. and use it in their next turn.
Notes:
-activation counts as a turn
-can't use upon activation
-lasts four turns
- can only copy A-rank and below
-can only be taught by xtsukune uchiha

Edit as you see fit
All declined, do not resubmit
 
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(Doton: Meiun Hishou) – Earth Style: Doom Flight
Type: Supplementary /Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (Opponent may be knocked out)
Description: User stomps the ground and two S-rank pillars of earth immediately sprout from the ground around the opponent, separating from the ground to further launch towards the sky. As they do so, they intertwine around the opponent to bind him and forcibly carry him away with them, possibly knocking him out as they do so. This leaves the opponent exposed in the air and if he doesn’t escape the bind, he is assured a freefall crash to the ground where he will be knocked out if he already isn’t. The pillars also have the ability of draining the opponent’s chakra, which makes it impossible for the opponent to use any jutsu above A-rank while he is binded or during the same turn where he escapes the bind.
Note: Can only be used/taught by BluePhenix.
Note: Can only be used five times per battle.

Declined, do not resubmit and a note for future S rank limitation does not carry 5 times usage
 
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Please edit where its needed...

(Arashi no kabu) Tempest strains
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: short-long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: This technique takes basic puppet strings and basic element infusion and puts them together. The user uses three times the amount of chakra need to make normal chakra strings and infuse them with elemental chakra to make them stronger. Each element gives the strings different abilities. They can be manipulated however the user sees fit, and can also transfer abilities into weapons. Also if the strings are whipped at the weaker element, it can cut through the technique.

Wind: gives them more cutting power, and the elemental advantage over lightning.

Lightning: gives them a paralyzing affect, and the elemental advantage over earth.

Earth: gives them more durability and strength, and the elemental advantage over water.

Water: gives them more of an elastic property, and the elemental advantage over fire.

Fire: gives them a burning property, and the elemental advantage over wind.

- Can only be used 4 times per battle
- Stays in effect for two turns.
- Can only use 1 element at a time.
- Can only be used every other turn (after the two turn limit)
- Lighting paralyzing last two turns.
- Can only control one puppet while in effect (with the hand that's not in use)
- Can only be taught be Black Uchiha.
Declined, do not resubmit

(Mizu no Sutairu: Pirania no Mure) Water style: Piranha Swarm
Type: Attack
Rank: A (S)
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (40)
Damage Points: 60 (80)
Description: The user materilzies a swarm (15-20) of piranha to attack the opponent. These piranha follows the opponent if dodged. Larger (S-rank) piranha are produced if made in a water source, and last longer but are fewer in number (5-10).
- Can only be used 4 times per battle
- Lasts 2 turns (3 turns for S-rank)
- Can only be taught by Black Uchiha
Declined, do not resubmit

(Sateusu: Kyokusei Suitchi) Iron Sand: Polarity Switch
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After spreading out positive charged iron sand throughout the air and negative charge iron sand along the ground, that area becomes ionicly charged and anything with a charge in that area is controlled by the user. (i.e lighting, water, metal, ......etc.)
- Stays in effect for 3 turns.
- Can only be used 3 times per battle.
- No iron sand techniques while in effect
- Can't control people but can sense them when they enter the ionic field
- Can only be taught by Black Uchiha
Declined, do not resubmit

(Satetsu: Rōringu iwa) Iron sand: Rolling boulders
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user condenses iron sand into up to three boulders (the size of the boulder on Indiana Jones). These boulders are controlled, and can be made with spikes and other various forms. The user can also.use them as a shield.
- Can only be used 3 times
- No S rank or above Iron Sand Techniques the following turn.
- Stays on the field for 3 turns
- If used by 3rd kazekage puppet/Sasori the sand is poisonous.
- Can only be taught by Black Uchiha
Approved

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(Enjin Waruyoi Ryodan) Gorilla Drunken Brigade

Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Drunken Brigade is a squad of 4 humanoid puppets (Drunkies), each with different abilities and hidden weapons. They're perfectly capable of being used simultaneously, but the user can choose to bring less into battle, with the option of summoning the remainning ones with a single scroll.
- can only be taught by black uchiha​

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Murdok Niccals (Kengou)

Murdok, or the Master Fencer, is the main puppet, and it serves as a second body for the puppeteer, from where she can manipulate all the other Drunkies. While inside this puppet, the user is able to preform handseals and jutsus. Murdok is a fairly agile puppet, and weilds a cane, hidding a thin katana, but since it bears the user, it's movements are somewhat slowed down to those of a normal ninja. The user is able to remove her arm from the puppet's arm, increasing their movement greatly, making it seem as if the puppet has 4 arms. If needed, the user can escape the puppet extremely fast.
  • Guards the User
  • One Katana/Cane
  • Use Jutsus
  • Seems to have 4 Swords, due to Arm Speed
Russel Hobbs (Yokodzuna)
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Russel, or Sumo Champion, is the largest and strongest Drunkie (2,5 meters tall). His fists are made of steel, and can grow spikes to increase it's offencive abilities. It's also the toughest puppet to destroy, not because of it's structure, but because of the Chakra Shields he can summon. He has one on each arm(which open from his forearms), one on each leg, two big ones (appear from his diafragm and from his back) and a spherical one that appear around his head. All of them can deflect up to large and heavy weapons, and up to B rank jutsus. (An A rank destroys the shield, and the correspondent Leg/Arm/Head(Not Torso)). Each shield can only be used 2 times max.
Despite being a large puppet, it is surprizingly fast (though the slowest of all the Drunkies). He can shoot out each fist once per battle, at great speeds. Either to punch a target or grab it (Simply for Constriction, it isn't retractable)

Steel Fists, which Grow Spikes
7 Chakra Shields (Up to B Rank)
Shoot Fists

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Stuart "2D" Pot (Kikeijin)


Stuart, or the Trickster, is a poison puppet. His arms have 2 small compartiments with a seal inside, which summons small winged balls, like big flies. They're twice has fast as normal flies, and when thrown at an opponent, they fly aimlessly in zigzag until they reach their targets. Upon contact, they inject a deaddly poison (There are multiple injection points, so it doesn't matter the side that touches the target). These flies are very fragile, and at the smalles touch they simply disperse, injecting their poison.
It can shoot out a shower of needles from his mouth, that poison at the smallest cut. His Legs (Up to the knee) and Arms (Up to the elbow) are filled with near invisible stings, which inject poison at the minimum contact. Once per battle, the puppet can spit a cloud of poison. He is the second fastest puppet, though it's still alot slower than the fastest puppet. His poison has powerfull paralizing abilities. The targetted person can't stand after 3 seconds, and will gradually loose motion. In about 3 days, the person stops breathing and it's heart stops beating.

  • Cloud of Poison
  • Poisonous Flies (20)
  • Poisonous Needle Shooter (Mouth)
  • Poisonous Arms and Legs
Noodles (Sokutama)
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Noodles, or the Speed Ball, is the fastest puppet, due to it's short size. His speed almost touch the 2nd Gate, though to reach it's top speed, no other puppet can move, including the user itself when inside the main puppet. He can bring forth an extendable blade from it's palms and feet, which can be as short has a dagger or as long as a katana, aswell as multiple ones from his back. The fists and anckles can rotate, giving him great sword agility. He has 2 seals on each shoulder, which allows him to summon 4 additional arms, with the same characteristics as the original ones.

Top Speed, 2nd Gate Equivalent
Extendable Blades (4) and Flexible Wrists/Ankles
Multiple Blades Pop from the Back
4 Additional Arms and Blades (Seal)

Please edit where its needed...
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wind release: gale pike (Geirupaiku)
rank: D
type:attack
range:short-long
chakra cost:10
damage points:20
description:the user focuses their chakra in to a kunai making a sharp wind dagger letting it easily cut through weapon attacks,and can be thrown a distance as a fast projectile,but it
can only keep its form for 10 seconds.

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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Kaze Hyoumei) - Wind Manifestation
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kazehyoumei is a shortsword but is moderately long compared to a regular shortsword. It has an elemental affinity of wind but it that doesn't discourage kazehyoumei to use other elements. For now, kazehyoumei can only manipulate other elemental chakra other than wind but cannot do any skills with it. Something like coating a kunai with lightning chakra so that it's penetration power is increased, thats what i meant for Kazehyoumei. Activating Kazehyoumei causes wind to shoot out of the tip of the sword, making it look like a regular long-sword. The wind shooting out of it is piercing sharp and creates a very small creaking sound which cannot be heard with the slightest sound interuption. When activated, it also feeds on the surrounding wind for more power and can completely absorb up to B-rank wind jutsus. Feeding on the surrounding wind is naturally a part of the sword's very own chakra supply, other than obtaining the chakra from the user. Kazehyoumei increases the speed of thrown projectiles and can manipulate the direction of the thrown projectiles by manipulating it's wind chakra around. (Not the thrown projectile's wind chakra, Kazehyoumei's wind chakra). When Kazehyoumei is activated, the user can release a dangerously sharp wind blast equalling the power of an A-rank wind jutsu just by swinging it at the targeted direction. Also when activated, the user can use wind jutsus with the handseal 'Ram' with the sword being in between the user's hand as he does the handseal.
  • Can only activate four times per battle
  • Burns 10 chakra per turn activated
  • Can only be wielded by -Yusuke-
  • When Kazehyoumei is activated, it's increased length is hard to notice without a dojutsu
Declined remove the bold section, and make your wind swords ability count towards one your 3 a turn moves
Resubmitting (removed spoilers, I have read what you posted up there, the changes are in bold) :

(Kaze Hyoumei) - Wind Manifestation
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kazehyoumei is a shortsword but is moderately long compared to a regular shortsword with wind being its elemental affinity. Activating Kazehyoumei causes wind to shoot out of the tip of the sword, making it look like a regular long-sword. The wind shooting out of it is piercing sharp and creates a very small creaking sound which cannot be heard with the slightest sound interruption. When activated, it also feeds on the surrounding wind for more power and can completely absorb up to A-rank wind jutsus. Feeding on the surrounding wind is naturally a part of the sword's very own chakra supply, other than obtaining the chakra from the user. Kazehyoumei increases the speed of thrown projectiles and can manipulate the direction of the thrown projectiles by manipulating it's wind chakra around. (Not the thrown projectile's wind chakra, Kazehyoumei's wind chakra). When Kazehyoumei is activated, the user can release a dangerously sharp wind blast equaling the power of an A-rank wind jutsu just by swinging it at the targeted direction. Also when activated, the user can use wind jutsus with the handseal 'Ram' with the sword being in between the user's hand as he does the handseal.

Note : Can only activate four times per battle
Note : Burns 10 chakra per turn activated
Note : Can only be wielded by -Yusuke-
Note : Wind sword's abilities count as a turn to the three move rule
Note : When Kazehyoumei is activated, it's increased length is hard to notice without a dojutsu
Approved
Edited, Bolded part removed along with the new restriction added
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New submission :

(Kenjutsu Kata : Hebereke Ken ) - Sword Style: Drunken Sword Style
Rank: N/A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: The user chugs a bottle of sake, by doing so they become immediately intoxicated. Making the user's movements wild. Sharingan of 2 tomoe and lower cannot predict the movements because the movements are made up off of instinct and will thus totally off of rhythm. Also because of the drunken style, the user is unable to mold chakra making it impossible to cast genjutsus or ninjutsu. The user also stumbles from time to time, making them evade attacks faster than they normally would.

Note: lasts for 3 turns
Note: can only be used/taught by -Yusuke- and Axle
Declined, give it a rank

(Katon : Nenshou souhou) - Fire Release : Burning touch
Rank : A
Type : Offensive
Range : Short
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points : 60
Description : This jutsu allows the user to channel a great amount of fire chakra into the palm of either hands. The user's hand will start heating up and glow red but once glowing, this means the burning process has already started. If the user manages to make contact with the enemy while this jutsu is active, the enemy will get severely burned. This jutsu goes great in taijutsu as he would most of the time be near the enemy.

Note : User cannot do handseals while this is active due to avoid burning his other hand
Note : No other fire jutsus while this is active
Note : Usable four times per battle
Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Requires physical contact on the enemy to damage him
Approved

RESUBMITTING :

(Fuuton : Kyousei kazedagekiyoroi) - Wind Release : Greater Wind Strike Armour
Type : Offensive/Defensive
Rank : S
Range : Short
Chakra cost : 40
Damage points : 80
Description : The user surrounds themselves with wind which will be able to lift the user a few inches of the ground but this does not allow the user to fly. The cutting wind field protects them by piercing anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack and deactivates after usage. If not deactivated turn after activated, user will get violently slashed all over his/her body.
  • Lasts one turn
  • Usable twice per battle
  • Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
  • No wind jutsus can be used while this is active
  • If not deactivated turn after activated, user will get violently slashed all over his/her body
  • When activated, the user can't even move due to being inside the cutting wind field.
~Declined~
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(Katon : Kama) - Fire Release : Furnace
Rank : S - Forbidden
Type : Offense/Defense/Supplementary
Range : Short-Long
Chakra cost : 40 / 50
Damage points : 80 / 90 (-10 to self)
Description : After performing a row of 5 handseals, the user slams both his hands onto the ground causing a flame to erupt in front of him. Quickly as it erupts, it takes on the shape of a furnace and is able to release a powerful fire beam. It can also be used to defend the user against incoming wind jutsus. Another trick to this is that if any earth or wood subtances makes contact with the furnace, it acts somewhat like a fuel to it and the furnace is able to increase the destructive power of its fire beam to that of a forbidden rank.

Note : User takes -10 damage if technique is used at forbidden rank from the heat radiating from the furnace
Note : Only two times per battle
Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
Note : No other fire or wind jutsu can be used while this is active
Note : Works for only one attack

~Declined~ OP
RESUBMITTING, previous were checked by Ragnaroc btw Zen. The changes made are bolded
Flame furnace was tweaked with because it was rather short and not descriptive
Greater Wind Strike armour has been restricted even more

(Katon : Kama) - Fire Release : Earthen Flame Furnace
Rank : S
Type : Offense/Defense/Supplementary
Range : Short-Long
Chakra cost : 40
Damage points : 80 (-10 to self)
Description : After performing a row of three handseals while concentrating earth chakra into both the user's hands, the user then slams both his hands onto the ground causing an earthen pillar to erupt from the ground. As it erupts, it is noticed that it takes on the shape of a furnace. The user puts his hand onto any part of that pillar and pumps fire chakra into it, causing the inside to get totally burned up. Just like a furnace, it has a hole in the front and with this technique, the user is able to release a burning fire beam that is able to burn the enemy to the user's likings. Once per battle, if the furnace is neared and threatened by the likes of a wind jutsu, it is able to suck it in. Despite this, it doesn't get any boosted strength whatsoever

Note : Can only absorb A-rank and below wind jutsus (Once)
Note : No boosted strength from absorbing the wind.
Note : Usable only three times per battle
Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Technique is automatically stopped if the earthen furnace is destroyed.
Note : Not capable of being moved since its attached to the ground
Note : No other fire techniques can be used until the next turn
Note : Works for only one attack, two if it has absorbed a wind jutsu
Note : User takes -10 damage due to the heat in which radiates near him but only to the exend of a minor burn thanks to the earthen shell that holds the fire.
Declined, do not resubmit

(Fuuton : Kyousei kazedagekiyoroi) - Wind Release : Greater Wind Strike Armour
Type : Offensive/Defensive
Rank : S
Range : Short
Chakra cost : 40
Damage points : 80
Description : The user surrounds themselves with wind which will be able to lift the user a few inches of the ground but this does not allow the user to fly. The cutting wind field protects them by piercing anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack and deactivates after usage. If not deactivated turn after activated, user will get violently slashed all over his/her body.

Note : Lasts one turn
Note : Only works for one attack
Note : Usable thrice per battle
Note : Can only be used/taught by -Yusuke-
Note : Can only be used again two turns after used the first time
Note : No wind jutsus can be used while this is active, including the next turn
Note : The user is vulnerable to fire techniques of equal or higher rank
Note : If not deactivated turn after activated, user will get violently slashed all over his/her body
Note : When activated, the user can't even move due to being inside the cutting wind field.
Declined, do not resubmit
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(Chou Hakkeshou Kuuten) - Eight Trigrams Giant Heavenly Sky
Rank: S
Type:Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:The user molds his chakra into razor sharp lines and releases it out of all their tenketsus and spins to form a razor sharp dome shield to attack and defend all in one move

-Usable only 3 times per battle
-Can only be used by Hyuuga clan members
-Can only be taught by CrossArc

~Declined~ Restrictions?

(Kyoukudai Cannon) - Maximum Cannon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user gathers chakra into his fist and compresses the chakra , the user will then throw a punch in the direction of the opponent and fires the compressed chakra out of the user's fist in a blast

-Usable only 3 times
-No ninjutsu the turn after this is used
-Can only be taught by CrossArc

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(Mokuton: Chika Soshi) Wood Style: Underground Prevention
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Can be created in Mid-Long, but the initial size of it is short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user creates a bowl of wood that forms underground and under the opponent. The size of the bowl is determined by the user, but can reach anywhere between 5 meters deep and 10 meters wide to 30 meters deep and 40 meters wide. The rim of the bowl is right under the surface of the earth. Once the bowl is created it quickly shoots out wooden spikes in all directions that are long enough to reach right below the surface of the earth, but cannot rise above ground.
Declined, do not resubmit

(Mokuton Nokogiri) Wood Saw
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user creates multiple circles of wood with sharp serrated edges, like a saw blade, in the ground and sends it towards the enemy. Each blade has a circumference of 1 meter. The user makes the wood rotate extremely rapidly, so that it could easily dig or break through earth and cause serious damage. About 1/3 of the blade is sticking out of the ground as it is sent towards the enemy.
Approved

(Mokuton Kozan) Mokuton Mines
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user creates multiple mines of wood that form near the surface of the ground. The wood is so compressed, that id someone were to step on it, it would explode, causing great damge. The explosion is similar to 3 paper bombs going off at once. The user must continuously hold a single handseal with one of their hands or else the wood would not explode.
Declined, do not resubmit
(Doton: Kishou Tsuchi Enchou) Earth Style: Rising Earth Dome
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a large dome of earth and then the earth breaks off of the ground and the user holds the large sphere of earth in mid-air. The user must keep their hands in the air, pointed at the dome to continuously concentrate chakra to keep it levitated.
Declined, do not resubmit
 
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(Suiton: Hakai no bagu no tsunami) Water Style: Destruction Bug Tsunami

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user releases a large wave of his destruction bugs into the air then releases out a great volume of water from his mouth, the destruction bugs then mix with the water on the users command as the water surges towards the enemy. The enemy is swallowed up in the wave as the bugs suck away their chakra.

~ Can only be taught by Coyote Starrk
~ Must be a member of the Aburame clan
Declined, do not resubmit note: this cannot work

(Kiseichū kansen-shō-hō) Parasitic Infection technique

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Self
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 60
Damage Points: 130(-80 to user)
Description: Upon the death of the bug's host the destruction bugs leave the host's body in search of another host, being which ever is the closest living organism. In which they begin to break down and feed upon the host.

~ Can only be used Coyote Starrk
~ Can only be performed once
Declined, do not resubmit

(Fuuton: Bagu no rasenshuriken) Wind Style: Bug Rasenshuriken

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The bug user releases his bugs into the air then using wind style forms a rasenshuriken and commands the bugs to mix in with the wind. Encasing the opponent in a huge violent orb of slicing wind while the bugs devour his chakra. The jutsu can be thrown or used point blank.

~ Can only be taught by Coyote Starrk
~ Can only be performed twice
~ Must be a member of the Aburame clan
Declined, do not resubmit NO rasengan variations are allowed

(Doton: Bagu no keimusho) Earth Style: Bug prison

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Med
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a wall of mud encasing the opponent inside, while sending their destruction bugs within the mud to appear later burrowing through to feed on the opponent.

~ Can only be taught by Coyote Starrk
~ Can only be performed twice
~ Must be a member of Aburame clan
~ No mud related doton can be used next turn
Declined, do not resubmit

(Hosokubigomimushi san no rirīsutekunikku)Bombardier Beetle Acid release technique

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user of this technique release Bombardier beetles, who can spit caustic and boiling hot liquid at 212 degrees fahrenheit. Burning the opponent that it comes into contact with.

~ Can only be taught by Coyote Starrk
~ Can only be performed twice.
~ Must be a member of the Aburame clan
Declined, do not resubmit

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(famirishasai) family bonds
Type: Supplementry
Rank: S
Range:Self
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:+10 tai/nin +15 speed
Description: being raised by the hummingbirds Link feels a very strong bond with all of them so when one of them gets hurt Link flies into a rage and goes on a rampage increaseing his strength speed and tai however due to his lack of control he cannot preform genjutsu or steel release in this state
-Link would be exhausted after this wears off
-Lose ability to use genjutsu and steel jutsu while in this state
-All jutsu require 10 additional charkra to preform
-Can only be used once per fight
-The summoned humming bird has to be hit strong enough to make him disappear
-This is auto (meaning it doesnt count as one of my three jutsu)
-Last 4 turns
-Can only be used by Link
Declined, do not resubmit

(suiton: koi tama) water release: dense ball
Type: Attack/Supplementry
Rank: A
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user spits out several balls of water (there about the size of a small watermelon) that absorbs or incircles anything it comes in contact with the balls of water are extremly heavy and will slow down the person there connected to severly the once the ball(s) have made contact with something the user can then preform a single handseal and the water will implode destroying whatever is inside from bones to stones
-can only be taught by foamy
Declined, do not resubmit

(Kōton: raikou roddo) steel release: lightning rod
Type: Attack/Supplementry/Defence
Rank: A
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user preforms three handseals then four steel rods come out of the ground around either them or there opponent these rods attract any lightning based attack and absorb the lightning once the rods have absorbed lightning the user can then preform the dragon,dog handseals and make lightning incircle the person inside protecting them from B ranked attacks or lower (C for fuuton) or he can preform the boar,dog handseals and the lightning will electicute anything in the center of the rods
-Can only absorb up to A ranked lightning attacks
-Can only be used by steel bios
-Can only be taught by foamy
Declined, have you learnt steel release yet?

(Kōton: bia kansei) steel release: bear trap
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: the user stomps there foot on the ground then creates several bear traps that are just under the surface the traps are stronger then normal and if triggered they can cut your leg clean off
-Can only be used by steel bios
-Can only be taught by foamy
Declined, same as above


(kuchibashi Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Beak summoning
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user does a couple of handseals and a gaint beak comes out of the ground the beak is extremly strong and can withstand most attacks if used agaist a opponent the birds tongue will wrap around the person then the bird will regurgitate its stomache acid into the beak the acid is very strong and can easily melt steel as for who this humming bird is only the boss of the humming birds knows for sure and when asked all he would say was he is a ancient bird who long ago lost the ability to fly and now lives underground
-must have signed humming bird contract
-stays on the field one turn
here is a link to my bio he is my steel user and the one mentioned in my first CJ

Declined, bears already exist as Goro kaguya's summoning
(kuchibashi Kuchiyose no Jutsu) Beak summoning
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: S
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: the user does a couple of handseals and a gaint beak comes out of the ground underneath you or your opponent closing around whichever the beak is extremly strong and can withstand most attacks if used agaist a opponent the birds tongue will wrap around the person then the bird will regurgitate its stomache acid into the beak the acid is very strong and can easily melt steel as for who this humming bird is only the boss of the humming birds knows for sure and when asked all he would say was he is a ancient bird who long ago lost the ability to fly and now lives underground
-can only be used by foamy and those givin permission
-must have signed humming bird contract
-stays on the field one turn

NOTE: this has nothing to do with bears i never mention bears so i have no idea why it was declined
dunnah why i put it but either way Declined, do not resubmit

(Kōton: Raikou Roddo) Steel Release: Lightning Rod
Type: Attack/Supplementry/Defence
Rank: A
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user preforms three handseals then four steel rods come out of the ground around either them or there opponent these rods attract any lightning based attack and absorb the lightning once the rods have absorbed lightning the user can then preform the dragon,dog handseals and make lightning incircle the person inside protecting them from B ranked attacks or lower (C for fuuton) or he can preform the boar,dog handseals and the lightning will electicute anything in the center of the rods
-Can only absorb up to A ranked lightning attacks
-Can only be used by steel bios
-Can only be used 3 times per match
-Can only be taught by foamy
Approved

(Kōton: Bia Kansei) Steel Release: Bear Trap
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range:Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: the user stomps there foot on the ground then creates several bear traps that are just under the surface the traps are stronger then normal and if triggered they can cut your leg clean off
-Can only be used by steel bios
-Can only be taught by foamy
Declined, resubmit without the cutting leg clean off they have not got that capability

(Kōton: Kōhana) steel release: steel flower
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range: mid-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user does 2 handseals then steel blade instantly come out of the ground and surround the opponent (looks kinda like a open flower when i come out of the ground) the blades then cut the opponent to shreds by closing (happens very quickly) the reason this cannot be used short range is because the blade are very long and if done is short range the user would be caught in it as well
-can only be taught by foamy
-can only be used by steel user bios
Declined, do not resubmit
looks kinda like this
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(Kōton: Kōkuro-n) steel release: steel clone
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: +10 taijutsu
Description: the user creates a clone of themselves made out of steel the clone can only use steel release, taijutsu and kenjutsu since the clone is made out of steel is immune to wind and earth techs and can block water up to A rank (clone rusts if hit with S rank) steel clone is weak against fire and lightning (destroyed by B ranks for both)
-must be a steel user
-can only be used three times per battle
-can only be taught by foamy
Approved
Note: i have learned the cannon tech from Thor

 
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(Mokuton: Kyousei Moku Shichuurou) Wood Release: Great Four Pillars Prison
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Yamato performs an advnaced version of - Four Pillars Prison, where the opponent is completely blocked in by multiple walls of interlocking wooden pillars. The prison having no holes, cracks, or openings. The prison will then begin to absorb the opponents chakra, sucking him dry unless he is able to escape. The pillars that create the prison being greatly compacted and extremely dense, making it difficult for the opponent to escape.
Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle
-No S rank Wood techniques or above the following turn
-If the opponent doesn't get out within two turns they will be drained of all their chakra.
-This is NOT a way to replenish chakra and the user will not receive any of the drained chakra.
Approved

(Mokuton: MOKUZAI!) Wood Release: TIMBER!
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will quickly make three handsigns causing dozens of large trees to rise from the ground in front of the target. With the simple use of the "Dragon" handsign, the user will cause all of the trees to fall down onto the target, crushing them beneath them.
Approved

(Suiton/Doton: Dyuaru Doragon Higyou) Water/Earth Release: Dual Dragon Strike
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Mokuton user will, by taking advantage of their ability to simultaneously build up Water and Earth chakra, build up a large amount of Doton Chakra and Suiton Chakta into each arm respectively. Then after making three handsigns, the user will release a giant Earth Serpent from their left fist and a equally giant water dragon from their right fist. The two dragons will head towards the opponent at a great pace and will cause a large amount of damage to anything that the dragons collide with.
Note:
-Can only be used by biographys that can simultaneously build up Suiton and Doton chakra(Mokuton Users)
-Can only be used twice per battle
Declined, do not resubmit

(Fuuton: Kaze Kei Kadou) Wind Release: Wind Whip Vortex
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will begin to compress a large amount of chakra into their hand, forming it into a whip made out of the wind. The user will then swing the whip towards the opponent, releasing multiple vortexes of wind towards him.
Note:
-After the vortexes are released the whip will dissipate
-can only be used 3 times per match
Approved

(Bureijingu Tsuchi)Blazing Earth
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90(-15 to user)
Description: The user will first begin by stomping their foot to the ground, making a giant wave of earth rise up from the ground and head towards the opponent. Then just as quickly the user will quickly release a very intense and concentrated wave of fire in behind the wave of earth, turning the earth wave into molten hot rock. The giant wave of earth crashing down onto the opponent. Making escape from the sky impossible. As the Wave reaches the opponent, it turns the earth beneath the opponent burning hot, burning their feet.
Note:
-Can only be used once.
-Due to the intense concentration of fire the jutsu releases, the user recieves 30 damage due to the strain of chakra
-The user cannot use S-Rank or above for the rest of this turn or the next turn.
Declined, do not resubmit
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Greed
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Greed is a turtle that can never be full. He's as big as a trailblazer, he can eat any kind of attack. He can only be pierced by S-rank and above attacks
Note: can only eat 3 jutsus per battle
Note: Must have signed the turtle contract
Note: Must be taught by Axle
Add japanese name, and restrict his eating ability and make it count as one your 3 per turn ability

(Raiton: Junsei Erekiteru) - Pure Electricity
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage: N/A
Description: The user focuses pure raiton chakra into his hands with electrical properties. By touching another object (except the ground) the user has the ability of giving it an electrical charge by releasing the raiton chakra into the object. When the user touches the object, he's simply either adding one proton or taking away an electron. Since every substance that has doesn't have an electrical charge (such as a tree) has an equal balance of electrons and protons, but if that balance was disrupted, then that object would have an electrical charge. And if the user adds a proton then the object would have a positive charge, if the user added an electron then the object would have a negative charge. Objects with a positive charge are attracted or drawn to objects with a negative charge. Also the charged object with the lower mass is drawn by an electrical bond to an object with the opposite charge and higher mass (so a human being with a positive charge is drawn to a tree with a negative charge. And a kunai with a negative charge is drawn to a human being with a positive charge). The force that attracts these objects is near impossible to escape, because no human can defy gravity. If the user has touched the objects once, he can do it again to restore the balance, and only he can do so.
Note: Can only be used/taught by Axle

(Raiton: Nyu-toron Soujuu) - Neutron Manipulation
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage: N/A
Description: The user channels pure raiton chakra into his hands, and by touching an object with this raiton chakra, he can add or take away neutrons. By doing adding neutrons, the object gains 10lbs for each second the user touches it. By subtracting the neutrons, the object loses 10lbs for each second the user touches it.
Note: can only be used/taught by Axle
Both declined, do not resubmit
(Genjutsu: Netsu) - Fever
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: (-10 Taijutsu to the opponent each turn)(-60 to the user for exhaustion)
Description: The user casts a genjutsu where the opponent thinks that they are coming down a fever. The opponent's temperature starts rising higher due to psychology which states that if the mind thinks that there is something wrong with the body, then the body will act accordingly to the mind. By staying on the battlefield, the opponent is constantly making his conditions worse by the turns.
(1 turn - reaction speed decreases)
(2 turn - overall speed decreases)
(3 turn - becomes weaker)
(4 turn - unable to maintain balance)
(5 turn - vomiting occurs)
(6 turn - vision becomes blurry)
(7 turn - passes out due to massive exhaustion and dehydration)
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: no genjutsu for the rest of the match
Note: can only be used/taught by Axle
Declined, OP, do not resubmit
Tut
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: Tut is the best deffensive turtle alive, he's as big as a 7 story building, he has spikes on his back that are a story tall each. All lightning attacks used, are directed to his spikes, and are then shot back at the opponent. He can only be pierced by Forbidden rank jutsus
Note: Must have signed the turtle contract
Note: Must be taught by Axle
add japanese name, being forbidden also costs damage and it requires abit more restrictions
(Kuchiyose: Kame) - Greed
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Greed is a turtle that can never be full. He's as big as a trailblazer, he can eat any kind of attack of the elemental or normal chakra based techniques up to A rank but not Genjutsu. He can only be pierced by S-rank and above attacks
Note: can only eat 3 jutsus per battle
Note: Must have signed the turtle contract
Note: Must be taught by Axle
Note: Everytime he eats, it counts as a move
Note: Stays on the field for 4 turns.
Approved

(Kuchiyose: Kame) - Tut
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: Tut is the best deffensive turtle alive, he's as big as a 7 story building, he has spikes on his back that are a story tall each. All lightning attacks used, are directed to his spikes, and are then shot back at the opponent. He can only be pierced by S rank jutsus. He cannot do any offensive jutsus. Yet he can use Earth Supplementary and Defensive jutsus S-rank and lower.
Note: Must have signed the turtle contract
Note: Must be taught by Axle
Approved

(Doton: Tatazumai Shifuto Buin) - Shape Shifting Staff
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user takes their staff off of their back, by slamming the end of the staff on the ground, the user can make it change forms (it's mass, density and size will never change). The rod is approximately 6 feet tall. Also by slamming the end of the staff in the ground the user can perform S-rank and below earth techniques. The user cannot perform handseals while being occupied with the staff, and the staff only reacts to the user's chakra.
Note: It costs 20 chakra for each time the staff changes shape
Note: Can only be taught by Axle
Declined, do not resubmit
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

White lion summoning jutsus:
(Kuchiyose: Howaido Shikon)Summoning: White Fang
Type: Offence/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will bite his finger and put blood over his summoning tatoo or make the needed hand seals and slam his hand to the ground to summon Shikon, the strongest white lion from theyr resedence(Šiškovci). He is a bit smaller than Gamabunta, and he can use fire jutsus up to S rank without making hand seals. He can cary up to 4 people on his back, and he is quite self-confidenced and he is very optimistic, but he is not arrogant or selfish, if the summoner gains his respect he will always be very pleasured to help him. He can walk on 2 legs, those allowing him to use his front legs as hands, but he still cant preform any Handseals. He wears a long white coat(almost every white lion from Šiškovci wears that)whit the white leader kanji written from upwards towards down(in red color): 白いライオンリーダー.
Notes:
  • Can be summoned once per battle
  • He can last up for 8 turns or he can take the damage from 1 S rank and 2 A ranked jutsus
  • In the move the summoner summons Shikon he wont be able to preform any S rank or above jutsu.
  • Every jutsu Shikon preforms counts as a move of the user
Declined, seriously Forbidden ranked techniques require a damage cost to the user, not to mention sort out that turn limit 8 turns for a FORBIDDEN RANKED summoning get real
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(Kuchiyose: Howaido Nami)Summoning White Wave
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will bite his finger and put blood over his summoning tatoo or make the needed hand seals and slam his hand to the ground to summon Nami, a female lion from Šiškovci. She can preform water jutsus up to A rank Without preforming any hand seals, but she also has mastered the art of walking on 2 legs and using her front legs as hands. She is very reliable and sociable and she will like to have a little chat with anyone who summons her. She also wears a long white cloak with the white water wave kanji on it(written in blue): 白い水の波.
Notes:
  • Can be summoned once per battle
  • She can last up for 6 turns or he can take the damage from 2 A ranked jutsus and 1 B ranked
  • In the move the summoner summons Nami he wont be able to preform any water jutsus
  • Every jutsu Nami preforms counts as a move of the user
Declined, same with this techniques limit reduce it
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(Howaido Doton Kuchiyose:Tsuin Raion)White Lion Summoning:Twin Lions
Rank: S
Type: Offense/Defense
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Range: Short
Description: Yurasu and Ishi are the Doton bothers from Šiškovci. They are able to use Doton jutsus up to A rank. They are often arguing about who id older and stronger, but if the summoner says the clearly and seriously to stop they will stop argouing and they will start concentrating more on the fight. Yurasu is kind hearted and calm, but Ishi likes to trick people and to set traps to them They both like to gamble and they would gamble away all they have just for some fun, but when it comes to fights they are living machines. They didnt master the walking on 2 legs, and they are at gamakichis size and they can carry 1 man on theyr back each. They both wear long white coats white brown letters on theyr backs with the kanjis for the White lion rock 白獅子岩 and white lion stone:白いライオン石.
Notes:
  • They can be summoned once per battle
  • They can last up for 5 turns or they can take the damage from 2 A ranked jutsus and 1 B ranked
  • In the move the summoner summons them he wont be able to preform any S or above jutsu
  • Every jutsu they preforms counts as a move of the user
Approved
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Howaido Raion Kata: ketatamashii Metsuki=White Lion Style Piercing Eyes
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Range: Short-Mid
Description: This is one of the basic Howaido Raion katas, a genjutsu usable to all white lions and theyr masters. Its a genjutsu tought to younger lions and theyr masteres in Šiškovci. The Lions eyes will become crimson red and his pupil will narrow to its max, when theese eyes meet anyones others eyes they person will just paralize for one whole turn cause of the fear he felt when seeing those eyes. When a human uses this jutsu they will also make their eyes become crimson red, and they will gain very narrow cat like eyes which will paralize the opponent of fear.
Notes:
  • Usable 2 times per battle
  • If the opponent gets catched in this genjutsu he will be paralized, but they will be able to use B and below ranked jutsus
  • Must sign white lions and be taught by me
Declined, do not resubmit
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Howaido Raion Kata: Howaido Raion's Mikon Unari=White Lion Style White Lions Wild Roar
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defense
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Range: Short-Mid
Description: Anotehr one of the Basic Raion katas, the lion or the user concentrates a huge amount of chakra and starts releasing it while roaring, creating a big confusing shock-wave, the shock wave has enough power to stop opponents katon, suiton and fuuton attacks of B rank and below.
Notes:
  • Usable 2 times per battle
  • If the opponent gets caught by the shock-wave he will be unable to use S rank jutsu for the next 2 turns, and he will be unable to preform forbidden rank jutsu for the next turn
  • Must sign white lions and be taught by me
Declined, do not resubmit

edit anything you want on them cause i dont like resubmiting :/
i edited the restrictions for the jutsus :)

(Kuchiyose: Howaido Shikon)Summoning: White Fang
Type: Offence/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A(15 to the user)
Description: The user will bite his finger and put blood over his summoning tatoo or make the needed hand seals and slam his hand to the ground to summon Shikon, the strongest white lion from theyr resedence(Šiškovci). He is a bit smaller than Gamabunta, and he can use fire jutsus up to S rank without making hand seals. He can cary up to 4 people on his back, and he is quite self-confidenced and he is very optimistic, but he is not arrogant or selfish, if the summoner gains his respect he will always be very pleasured to help him. He can walk on 2 legs, those allowing him to use his front legs as hands, but he still cant preform any Handseals. He wears a long white coat(almost every white lion from Šiškovci wears that)whit the white leader kanji written from upwards towards down(in red color): 白いライオンリーダー.
Notes:
• Can be summoned once per battle
• He can last up for 5 turns, or be taken out by damage of 3 A ranked and one B ranked jutsu
• In the move the summoner summons Shikon he wont be able to preform any S rank or above jutsu, and he wont be able to preform summonings for the next 3 turns after Shikon is gone
• Every jutsu Shikon preforms counts as a move of the user


(Kuchiyose: Howaido Nami)Summoning White Wave
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will bite his finger and put blood over his summoning tatoo or make the needed hand seals and slam his hand to the ground to summon Nami, a female lion from Šiškovci. She can preform water jutsus up to A rank Without preforming any hand seals, but she also has mastered the art of walking on 2 legs and using her front legs as hands. She is very reliable and sociable and she will like to have a little chat with anyone who summons her. She also wears a long white cloak with the white water wave kanji on it(written in blue): 白い水の波.
Notes:
• Can be summoned once per battle
• She can last up for 4 turns or he can take the damage from 2 A ranked jutsus and 1 B ranked
• In the move the summoner summons Nami he wont be able to preform any water jutsus, and after nami is gone he wont be able to preform any summonings for the next 2 turns
• Every jutsu Nami preforms counts as a move of the user

Both Approved
and some new jutsus:

(Howaido Raion Kuchyiose: Natsu)White Lion Summoning: Natsu
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Natsu is a very strong white lion which is able to use Lava jutsus up to S rank. He never tryed to walk on 2 legs, and he says that he doesnt want to learn it cause he sees no use of it. He is quite rude and he only respects the strongests summoners. He sometimes wont even listen to the orders of the summoners. He also has a long white coat on the back whit the kanji for White Lava on it written in Orange.( 白の溶岩)
Note: Can only be summoned once.
Note: Must have signed the White Lion summonig contract.
Note: Can only stay on the field for 4 turns.
Note: No other summonings for 2 turns after Natsu is gone.
Approved

(Howaido Raion Kuchyiose:Fuyu)White Lion Summoning Fuyu
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Fuyu is a Human sized white lion white a coldbloded face expression. He usually never showes his emotions. He can stand on 2 legs and and he can use his front legs as arms, he sometimes even uses the axe on his back to fight. He is known for his ability to use ice jutsus up to S rank. He also wears a long white coat whit the white ice kanji on it written in blue(白のアイス). Over the coat he holds his axe. He is a good lion and he will always listen to the summoners orders
Note: Can only be summoned once.
Note: Must have signed the White Lion summonig contract.
Note: Can only stay on the field for 4 turns.
Note: No other summonings for 2 turns after Fuyu is gone.
Approved

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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Taijutsu (Shun Goku Satsu) Wrath of the raging demon
Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 65
Description:The user vanishes and appears behind the opponent, they instantly form chakra around there fist's and showers down a violent assault of fist's in the blink of an eye.

like this kind of:


-Usable only 3 times per battle
-Cannot use clone's for 2 turns
-Can only be done at close range
-Can only be taught by Tawhirimatea

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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

I have a Kakashi bio with the Nin Dog Contract.... O_O

Summoning: Grand Elder Dog Zexis (Kuchiyose: Yuuen Senpai Inu Zexis)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Zexis is one of the oldest Nin dogs that are not yet past their time he has the ability to use any lightning jutsu that the summoner can use he also has sharp teeth and claws his jaws can break human bones and his claws can tear through human flesh with ease he can move at speeds comparable to Rock Lee without weights. This summon has spent a lot of time with it's master learning each and every lightning jutsu the summoner knows making this summon and the summoner very close they can almost tell what the other will do in a fight. It can also speak the launguage of the summoner. He is the size of full grown Akumaru
*Can only be summoned for 4 turns*
*Can only use lightning S rank and below*
*Can move as fast as Lee without weights*
*Can only be summoned once per battle*

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Summoning: Younger Dog Nestune (Kuchiyose: Wakai Inu Nestune)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Nestune is younger than Zexis but rivals him in size on of the bigger nin dogs, she is the same size but much slimmer and inturn just as fast as him she too can rival Rock Lee in speed without his weights she can use water up to A rank and can use any custom the user knows up to A rankbecause like Zexis she has trained with the summoner to the point of knowing what the user might do in a battle she can easly predict what he may do next and work for it her claws and fangs are sharp but he jaw isn't as strong she can tear human flesh but cannot break bones with her jaws she can speak english as well
*Can be summoned for 4 turns*
*Can only use A rank water and below*
*Can move as fast as Lee without weights*
*Can only be summoned once per battle*
Approved

Ninja Arts: Staying Alive (Ninpo: Taizai Itonami)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A (-40 to the user for pure exhaustion)
Description: The user releases almost every last ounce of chakra they have to make one last Hail Mary to stay alive. After being mortally wounded to the point of near death the user can bring himself back against all odds to fight for 3 more turns before collapsing from the excess strain on his/her body. The user must release almost ever bit of chakra he has left so after this jutsu is deactivated the user collapses unable to use any jutsu what so ever and is restrcted to almost a slow walk. He is in so much pain after this jutsu that he can barely force himself to stand, this leaves him/her wide open for attack if he hasn't finished off his/her opponent by now. The user will most likely die if not brought to the hospital in time.
~Usable for three turns~
~No jutsu at all after deactivation~
~Can not move any faster than a slow walk after deactivated~
~Must be mortally wounded to use~
~Can only be used once per battle~
~Has to be the first move that turn~
~User will most likely die if wounds are too sever~
Declined, do not resubmit

(Futon: Uindo no Mai) Wind Release: Wind Dance
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will use their wind chakra to push their opponent in any direction they choose.
~Can only be used 3X per battle.~
~No other wind jutsu can be used in the same turn.~

~Declined after re-review~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Mokuton Kozan) Mokuton Mines
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user creates multiple mines of wood that form near the surface of the ground. The wood is so compressed, that id someone were to step on it, it would explode, causing great damge. The explosion is similar to 3 paper bombs going off at once. The user must continuously hold a single handseal with one of their hands or else the wood would not explode.
This is just a copy of my earth mine technique.
 
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