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A note to you for future submittions try and keep everything neat instead of half a template left hand sided its annoying


(Raiton:Aratana hikari )
Lightning Release:New light
Rank: forbidden
Type: offense
Range: long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/A(10 to user)
Description: The user claps both hands together While doing so, chakra is continually recomposed into lightning essence and expelled into the sky,then with the help of solar based light reflecting on it,thus it instantly produces a blinding flash of light that douses the entire area and temproraly blinds unshielded eyes.
-ones per battle and lasts for 3 turns
-At the same time, the light is being withnessed by any eye,it instantly goes blind for one turn(this includes the user)
-No A-rank raiton and above next turn.
-however because of the huge amount of raiton the user is pumping into the sky,he or she recieves little shocks.
Lightning Release:New light
Rank: forbidden
Type: offense
Range: long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/A(10 to user)
Description: The user claps both hands together While doing so, chakra is continually recomposed into lightning essence and expelled into the sky,then with the help of solar based light reflecting on it,thus it instantly produces a blinding flash of light that douses the entire area and temproraly blinds unshielded eyes.
-ones per battle and lasts for 3 turns
-At the same time, the light is being withnessed by any eye,it instantly goes blind for one turn(this includes the user)
-No A-rank raiton and above next turn.
-however because of the huge amount of raiton the user is pumping into the sky,he or she recieves little shocks.
(Fūton: Toke Dipuri-shō) Wind Release: Endless Air Depletion
Rank: forbidden
Type: offense
Range: long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: 90
Description:The user makes a snake handseals then By drawing the air out of the immediate area with great concentration, the user effectively mimics the effects of a much higher altitude, making it difficult for everyone (including the user) to breathe. Less oxygen means the muscles become strained faster, headaches set in, and in time, even speaking and remaining standing becomes a frustrating labor. in due time both the user and the foe is forced to pass out.
-Useable ones and lasts for 3 turns
-both the user and the target passes out in 3 turns
-whilst this is activate the user can't use S-rank and above wind.
Rank: forbidden
Type: offense
Range: long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: 90
Description:The user makes a snake handseals then By drawing the air out of the immediate area with great concentration, the user effectively mimics the effects of a much higher altitude, making it difficult for everyone (including the user) to breathe. Less oxygen means the muscles become strained faster, headaches set in, and in time, even speaking and remaining standing becomes a frustrating labor. in due time both the user and the foe is forced to pass out.
-Useable ones and lasts for 3 turns
-both the user and the target passes out in 3 turns
-whilst this is activate the user can't use S-rank and above wind.
(fuuinjutsu:Chakurakyūbu) sealing technique- chakra cube
Rank: forbbiden
Type: Defence
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: N/A(
10 to user)
Description:This technique,requires the user to lay 4 scrolls differently but they will be on the same line,thus forming a square pattern and leaving the user in the middle of them.After the scrolls have been successfully layed,the user focus an insane amount of chakra then he or she slams his/her hands on the ground,creating a 360 degrees wave of chakra which synchronises with the the scroll then due to intense amount of chakra,it momentarily causes the scrolls creates a chakra force-field from each angle,thus it becomes/acts as a barrier but the user is still open for attacks from skywards.
-because of the large amount of chakra needed for this jutsu,the user won't be able to perform any other sealing technique for the next two turns
-Useable once per battle.
Rank: forbbiden
Type: Defence
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: N/A(
10 to user)
Description:This technique,requires the user to lay 4 scrolls differently but they will be on the same line,thus forming a square pattern and leaving the user in the middle of them.After the scrolls have been successfully layed,the user focus an insane amount of chakra then he or she slams his/her hands on the ground,creating a 360 degrees wave of chakra which synchronises with the the scroll then due to intense amount of chakra,it momentarily causes the scrolls creates a chakra force-field from each angle,thus it becomes/acts as a barrier but the user is still open for attacks from skywards.
-because of the large amount of chakra needed for this jutsu,the user won't be able to perform any other sealing technique for the next two turns
-Useable once per battle.
(Summoning Technique|fu|wu)
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu|fu|wu)
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Mid
Chakra cost:80
Damage points :40
Description: fu and wu are the two elder octopuses ,they are both classified under blue-ringed octopus,known for being deadly to human being and other living things.by combining their ink and venom,they are able to produce a unique type of ink,although the ink is not poisonious but it paralyzes incontact(mid-range).fu is male and has affinity for 2
elements which is wind and water,which he can use up to S-rank,while wu is female and has affanity for fire and earth,which she can use up to S-ranks.Both are the same size with ton-ton,making them able to fuse to they user shoulders with their tantacles whilst in battles.
Note:
-Can be summoned once per battle
and stays for 4 turns
-Must be the only summon the user
has on the field
-Must have signed the octopus
contract.
-Target stays paralyzed for one turn when
hit with the ink spray
-The ink counts as 1 out of 3 move
used.
-both are able to use octopus arts.
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu|fu|wu)
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Mid
Chakra cost:80
Damage points :40
Description: fu and wu are the two elder octopuses ,they are both classified under blue-ringed octopus,known for being deadly to human being and other living things.by combining their ink and venom,they are able to produce a unique type of ink,although the ink is not poisonious but it paralyzes incontact(mid-range).fu is male and has affinity for 2
elements which is wind and water,which he can use up to S-rank,while wu is female and has affanity for fire and earth,which she can use up to S-ranks.Both are the same size with ton-ton,making them able to fuse to they user shoulders with their tantacles whilst in battles.
Note:
-Can be summoned once per battle
and stays for 4 turns
-Must be the only summon the user
has on the field
-Must have signed the octopus
contract.
-Target stays paralyzed for one turn when
hit with the ink spray
-The ink counts as 1 out of 3 move
used.
-both are able to use octopus arts.
(Summoning Technique|Core)
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu|Core)
Rank: forbidden
Type: Summoning
Range: N/A
Chakra cost:90
Damage points :50
(10 to user,if standing on him)
Description: core is a gigantic octopus,at
twice
The size of gamabumta.His
whole body including his eight hands
are covered with spikes making
taijutsu and other sharp object
useless, all eight hands are able to
level any wall,also could be used to
immobilize a summon of the same size
,his also able to spray ink that
can blind a target at mid-range from
his mouth .he has an affinity for only 1 element which is fire And can use it up to S rank,which explains why his whole body is always red hot and by volunterely making his fire chakra unstable,thus him losing the compactability to hold his fire affanity,he instantly detonate taking almost the scale of a few miles.He also has an incredible defense and can
easily defend against high leveled
jutsu(A-Rank) but can stop only 4 S-
ranked jutsu before poofed away .unlike
every other octopus he can't move because of his size but his hands i there to aid him in battle.
Note:
-Can be summoned once per battle
and stays for 4 turns
-Must be the only summon the user
has on the field
-Must have signed the octopus
contract.
-Since he has fire for an affinity he is
weak to water based attacks
-Target stays blind for one turn when
hit with the ink spray
-The ink counts as 1 out of 3 move
used.
-The user recieves brutal burns if he or she would stand on him.
-The explosion counts as 1 out of 3 move.
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu|Core)
Rank: forbidden
Type: Summoning
Range: N/A
Chakra cost:90
Damage points :50
(10 to user,if standing on him)
Description: core is a gigantic octopus,at
twice
The size of gamabumta.His
whole body including his eight hands
are covered with spikes making
taijutsu and other sharp object
useless, all eight hands are able to
level any wall,also could be used to
immobilize a summon of the same size
,his also able to spray ink that
can blind a target at mid-range from
his mouth .he has an affinity for only 1 element which is fire And can use it up to S rank,which explains why his whole body is always red hot and by volunterely making his fire chakra unstable,thus him losing the compactability to hold his fire affanity,he instantly detonate taking almost the scale of a few miles.He also has an incredible defense and can
easily defend against high leveled
jutsu(A-Rank) but can stop only 4 S-
ranked jutsu before poofed away .unlike
every other octopus he can't move because of his size but his hands i there to aid him in battle.
Note:
-Can be summoned once per battle
and stays for 4 turns
-Must be the only summon the user
has on the field
-Must have signed the octopus
contract.
-Since he has fire for an affinity he is
weak to water based attacks
-Target stays blind for one turn when
hit with the ink spray
-The ink counts as 1 out of 3 move
used.
-The user recieves brutal burns if he or she would stand on him.
-The explosion counts as 1 out of 3 move.
Declined, do not resubmit
A note to you for future submittions try and keep everything neat instead of half a template left hand sided its annoying
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