[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Atrocitus]

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Senpū Gigei : Tenrai Kenshou | Whirlwind Arts : Divine Intervention

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Rank: A/S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long [Spears can only move within Short-Mid, beams can reach Long]
Chakra Cost: 30/40
Damage: 60/80
Description: There are two versions to this technique:

V1 is where the user has three lances/spears in the formation of a pyramid (the spears' points converge on one point creating a pyramid like formation), then the user channels chakra into all three which causes them to all produce a beam of pure chakra which all converge on one point which cause a more powerful single beam that can be used to attack the opponent. [A rank version]

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V2 is basically the same as V1 but V2 uses six spears which form a hexagonal pyramid instead that produce a single beam that is twice the power of V1
[S rank version]

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-Twice per battle [A rank]/Once per battle [S rank]
-Only A rank and under techniques for the turn after [both ranks]

~Approved~

Senpū Gigei : Amatsukanmon | Whirlwind Arts : Heavenly Barrier

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Rank: S
Type: Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user places up to six spears in a shape formation (depends on the number of spears, minimum is 3 max is 6) in the ground around the user and sends chakra to connect the points creating a 360 degree chakra shield which has a dome and floor of chakra to protect against aerial and underground attacks. This technique can defend against techniques of equal or lesser rank.

-Thrice per battle

~Approved~

Senpū Gigei : Shinseina Daichi | Whirlwind Arts : Holy Ground

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user charges an existing spear with chakra (or he can form a spear of pure chakra beforehand with a technique) and stabs it into the ground. Then the user must be holding the spear (or using a technique that allows him to send chakra to it) and channels his chakra through the spear which then extends out of the point in the ground causing the chakra to branch out like dense roots into the ground which cover a large area underground [short-mid]. These "roots" stop attackers from coming from beneath as the "roots" will pierce the opponent. These roots can also be used to come up and strike the opponent within short-mid range.

-Twice per battle
-Lasts for three turns (as long as the spear is in the ground)
-No S rank techniques for the turn after it ends.

~Approved~

Suiton: Nechinechi Senjigusuri | Water Release : Sticky Infusion

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user infuses all his water techniques (up to S rank) with the glue like substance from "(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Syrup Capture Field", this does not increase the damage or rank of the technique but just gives it sticky properties. This only affects water techniques made after this technique is used and not those already made, also because it is the user's chakra it does not effect himself

-Lasts up to four turns (within the four turns the users water techniques are infused)
-Twice per battle

~Approved~

Doton: Iwaengi no Jutsu | Earth Release : Rock Expansion Technique

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Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short [Intially] - Long [Activating]
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user infuses a small or medium sized rock with earth chakra (takes a second), then the user does the snake handseal causing the rock to rapidly expand into a large boulder. The chakra within the rock lasts for three turns.

~Approved~

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Senpū Gigei : Shinseina Daichi | Whirlwind Arts : Holy Ground

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user charges an existing spear with chakra (or he can form a spear of pure chakra beforehand with a technique) and stabs it into the ground. Then the user must be holding the spear (or using a technique that allows him to send chakra to it) and channels his chakra through the spear which then extends out of the point in the ground causing the chakra to branch out like dense roots into the ground which cover a large area underground [short-mid]. These "roots" stop attackers from coming from beneath as the "roots" will pierce the opponent. These roots can also be used to come up and strike the opponent within short-mid range. The users chakra Flows through short to mid range and thus the earth cannot be used for earth techniques.

-Twice per battle
-Lasts for three turns (as long as the spear is in the ground)
-No S rank techniques for the turn after it ends.

-Approved-

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Senpū Gigei : Amatsusaiken | Whirlwind Arts : Heavenly Bond

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Rank: B/A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20/30
Damage: 40/60
Description: This technique has two versions:

V1 is where the user places three spears/lances over each other and channels chakra into them thus keeping the formation and creating a sharp chakra circle around the spears which being of the users chakra will not cut him but will cut others (this creates a sort of chakra disk [look at diagram below] which can be thrown or used for standard combat).
[B rank]

V2 is basically the same as V1 except the user uses six spears in the formation shown in the diagram below. If used after 'Senpū Gigei : Amatsukei | Whirlwind Arts : Heavenly Command" then the user can charge chakra to his feet and "fuse" (using chakra to stick to the spears crisscrossing the center) with the disk thus allowing him to move the disk while he's on it.

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Left is V1, right is V2.

-Lasts up to three turns
-Twice per battle
-Only A rank and under techniques while in use.

-Declined. V1 will require you to be inside this circle and not moving at all (thus would need you to utilize both earth and lighting chakra at the same time, which we know are incompatible and V2 is the same, plus the moving the disc is not realistic-

Ninpō : Gisō Kage Bunshin no Jutsu | Ninja Art : Disguised Shadow Clone Technique

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user does one handseal (as if he were summoning Shadow Clones) but instead of making normal shadow clones, these ones are already henged and can appear anywhere near the user (or even appear on his body). They can appear as anything the user wants or needs (e.g Weapons, Creatures, inanimate objects, etc).

-In this form there can only be up to four clones at any one time.

-Declined. Creating Shadow Clones is a cannon jutsu; you can't just change it to your convenience-

Sūiton: Bakufu | Water Release : Waterfall

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Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: Based on the earth release technique: "Mud Fall" this technique causes the portal to appear in the sky at the desired position (after performing two handseals) but instead of mud falling out of the portal a huge amount (enough to drown a large summon like Gamabunta) of water is released which falls down to the ground and spreads out to cover the area, this gives the user a large water source but this technique can only be used twice per battle.

-Declined. Similar custom jutsu already exists and there's a cannon as well which used in combination with another cannon can cause this effect-

Sūiton: Kami Shinsui | Water Release : God's Flood

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A greater version of "Waterfall" the user does four hand seals causing multiple portals to open across the battlefield which immediately start releasing large amounts of water for the next two turns. Because of this, the user cannot use any other (techniques used before this technique are fine) water techniques during those two turns, and he can only use this technique once per battle.

-Ibid.-

 

[Bruce Banner]

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Custom Weapon

Chains of Destiny ‎(Unmei no kusari)
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Med-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 + 30 (when adding lightning chakra into)
Damage points: N/A
Description :
The user no need to summon this chain because this Chain is an ordinary chain when the user not activated it’s ability and the user just carried the chain within his right arms (dominant arms) and attached to his both shoulder right and left and the middle of his stomach positition like an accessories in his shinobi uniform. This chain have a great ability to use when it’s activated, to active it’s ability the user must bite his finger and perform 25 serial hand seal then shed his blood into the chain itself. When the chain ability activated, it can be magically extended in long range away (depends on the user chakra), this chain can only be added with lightning chakra only because the wielder of this chain was a great shinobi from Hidden Rain village who also known as a Thunder Rider which have the ability to control the thunder storm with his great lightning chakra control, then he retired from the ninja world and become a wielder and created this Chain of Destiny one of his last legacy and he hide his great lightning power within the chain before he died and pass down to his successor, the chain can be active with approvable from the previous user by shed and combine the two blood in the chain and pass down after the previous user retired from the shinobi world or died.
Note:
-This weapon can only be play in 4 turn
-This Weapon can be added by the user of lightning chakra
-This weapon is weak and/or can be destroyed by powerful Wind jutsu S-Rank
-This Weapon can only use by Oasis and can be passed down if Oasis feel no need to use it again.
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Storm of destiny (Unmei no arashi)
Rank: S
Range: Medium-Long
Type : offensive
Chakra cost: 40
Damage : 80
Description : By the time the user has chosen to execute it, he must release his massive chakra (only an S-Class Ninja or above can perform this to allow him full access to his Chain Ability. The attack is dispelled as a single burst from the summit of the user chakra and the lightning storm projects violently the opponent away because of its extreme destructive nature.
Note : Can only be perform with Chains of Destiny
Note : Only S-Class Ninja or above can use this jutsu
Note : can only use 2 turns per battle because using his half power and chakra
Note : Weak againts wind Jutsu With similar rank

Rolling Barrier (Rōringubaria):
Rank: A
Range : Short-medium
Type: Deffensive
Chakra cost:30
Damage: n/a
Descrition : A simple defensive technique that utilizes the chains in one of two ways: the user will either twirl the chains around himself to create a barrier, or set them on the ground to mimic a circular web, In circular web mode, the chains construct a distance between himself and the opponent, and will discharge energy volts if adding lightning chakra or simply slash the enemy if they attempt to enter the field.
Note : Can only be perform with Chains of Destiny
Note : Can only be use 3 turns per battle
Note : Weak againts wind Jutsu With similar rank or above

Thunder wave (Kaminari-ha)
Rank: A
Range: Medium-Long
Type : offensive
Chakra cost: 30
Damage : 60
Description: Powerful form of the basic chain of Destiny attack, the user adding his lightning chakra into the chain and then where it searches the opponent wherever he might be and finds its way in a succession of rapid triangle movements to strike the target.
Note : Can only be perform with Chains of Destiny
Note : Can only be use 3 times per battle
Note : Weak againts Earth and wind Jutsu With similar rank

Circular Fierce (Enkei geki)
Rank: B
Range: Medium
Type : offensive
Chakra cost: 30
Damage : 60
Description : This technique allows the user to manipulate the chains he pleases. At the most basic, the "circular fierce" is a straight-forward attack where the chains rapidly slice and wrap themselves around the enemy, and squeeze them until the target died and when its added with lightning chakra can be struck the target with electricity while the chain squeeze the target
Note : Can only be perform Chains of Destiny
Note : Can only be use 3 times per battle
Note : Weak againts wind Jutsu With similar rank

-Declined. Chain charged with lighting is another's custom weapon. Mine-

 

[Sindy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Kikaichu himatsu no Jutsu) Destruction Beetle Spray Technique
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: the user shoots out a large amount of destruction beetles from there mouth the speed of which the beetles come out is much faster then normal but because of that they cant make it very far. the beetles use the chakra that the take from there host to increase there speed.
-can only be used by bug users
-can only be taught be Sinderella23

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(doton: ishi hirate) Earth Style: Stone Palm
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user builds up doton chakra into there hands then then strikes the enemy pushing the doton chakra into them (similar to the way hyuuga send there chakra into there opponent but dont need to hit vitals). as the doton chakra circulates in the enemy it begins to petrifying them from the inside out.
-this takes three turns to completly petrify person if you hit them in the body or head 4 if you hit them in limb
-lightning can turn stop the petrifying
-can only be taught by Sinderella23

-Both declined. You need to state how you do things and also doton chakra released into someone else doesn't petrify them :S -

 

[McKnockout]

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(Katon: Kasai Soujou) – Fire Manipulation

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra throughout the air causing any already created fire to fall under the user’s manipulation. Once this jutsu is in affect, the user can control the fire in any way he chooses.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: Fire must already be created.
*Note: Last for 2 turns.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

Declined, give a rank limit it can control up 2

(Katon: Kasai Soujou) – Fire Manipulation

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Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra throughout the air causing any already created fire to fall under the user’s manipulation. Once this jutsu is in affect, the user can control the fire in any way he chooses.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: Fire must already be created.
*Note: Only up to S-rank fire
*Note: Last for 2 turns.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

-Declined. Do what the other mod said. -

(Kyuukyoku Doton No Jutsu) –Ultimate Earth Style Technique

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Creates very strong pillars, tools and shields made out of earth.
*Note: Can only be used 5 times per battle.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout
*Co-created by Gobi Gobletsson

-Declined. Both cannon and custom similar jutsus already exist-

(Raiton: Tenrai Ikazuchi) - Lightning Release: Divine Thunder

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Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After a quick succession of 3 handseals, the user sends a large amount of electrical essence into the clouds, allowing them to send a devastatingly powerful lightning strike in the desired location. This jutsu is essentially a stronger version of (Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Lightning Fang and is capable of killing large enemy summons.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: Only one lightning strike can be created.
*Note: No S rank Raiton techniques the following turn.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

-Declined. Similar jutsu already exists.-

 

[Zenryoku]

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(Sainan Ken) - Calamity Sword
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will concentrate chakra into their sword and jump above the target slashing downwards and expelling the concentrated chakra in the form of a large square sword that strikes the target through the chest and stomach and pinning them into the ground. This technique does not cause physical damage like cutting but rather internal damage to the tenketsu within the struck area also targeting the gates and destroying them.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle and must have a samurai biography to use.

~Declined~ how can it not do physical damage? You just said he was pinned down, which makes it just another shoot-sword-projectile jutsu

(Ki Seishou no Nami ) - Ki Energy Wave
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user focuses their chakra and uses Ki which is basically a shout performed by a samurai when using an attack as a way of releasing the energy in a 360 degree energy wave that can repel incoming attacks. This can be used to repel a enemy even if they arent performing a technique and are within close vicinity. The surge of chakra is also a way of releasing or breaking the bonds of genjutsu over the user.
Note: Can only be used 3 times and must have a samurai biography

~Declined~ that part of 360° seems like the Hyuuga tech that creates a 360° dome around the user that deflects everything

(Ken Ki Oshi Bentsu) - Sword Ki Pressure vent
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate their chakra into their sword and by using their Ki which is basically to shout when performing an attack they release the energy from the sword creating a pressurized vent that can aide in changing ones course or moving out the way of incoming attacks. It can also be used to either shoot at the opponent to unbalance them or even used to counter projectile based weapon techniques.
Note: must have a samurai biography to use.

~Approved~

(Sempai Oshi: Zenryoku no Zen) - Elder Teachings: Meditative state of all ones power
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 per turn)
Damage points: N/A (+20 to all physical techniques)
Description: This technique is the final form of Elder Teachings: Sixth Sense in which the user permanently reaches a state of Zen, proving of their mastery of the Martial way. It enhances all the users senses so they are capable of fighting to the best of their ability being in tune with their surroundings and their body in a matter of seconds as its merely a state of mind greater than that of the average person. The users speed and power is also increased to that which is said to equal the lightning release used by the raikage. This technique doesnt come without its drawbacks, the user loses the ability to use ninjutsu and genjutsu techniques for the entire battle and thus limiting their ability to fight in those area's. The user within this state is also still able to use the techniques required by Elder Teachings: Sixth Sense.
Note: Can only be used once and lasts the entire battle
Note: The user cannot perform any genjutsu or ninjutsu for the rest the match
Note: Can only be used after entering Elder Teachings: Sixth Sense.
Note: Can only be trained by Zenryoku


~Approved~ though you need to clarify something: do you mean ninjutsu as in everything that requires handseals, but you can still use the things without handseals or as in no chakra usage at all? And in case it's the first does it count for both elemental and normal chakra?

PS: naming jutsu's after ourself are we -_O

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(Sainan Ken) - Calamity Sword
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will concentrate chakra into their sword and jump above the target slashing downwards and expelling the concentrated chakra in the form of a large square sword that strikes the target through the chest and stomach. This technique does not cause physical damage like cutting but rather internal damage to the tenketsu within the struck area also targeting the gates and destroying them.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle and must have a samurai biography to use.

(note: its like medical and byakugan chakra where it can be entered into a targets body and not cause physical damage to the actual skin so dunnah if this is explanatory enough)

(Ki Seishou no Nami ) - Ki Energy Wave
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary, Defense
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user focuses their chakra and uses Ki which is basically a shout performed by a samurai when using an attack as a way of releasing the energy in a energy wave that can repel incoming attacks. This can be used to repel a enemy even if they arent performing a technique and are within close vicinity. The surge of chakra is also a way of releasing or breaking the bonds of genjutsu over the user.
Note: Can only be used 3 times and must have a samurai biography

(removed the 360 degree example)

P.S on the Zenryoku no Zen that stops all ninjutsu normal and elemental it to aide taijutsu. and nope im merely using the correct translation of the name xD

-Both approved-

 

[Goddess]

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(Shuryou Gigei|Torakkingu)-Hunting Technique|Tracking
Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: the user sends a burst of chakra throughout the ground.The user has to stay completely still o they can focus it through the ground. This creates 360 degree radius around the user till long range. As long as the opponent is or in the ground and moving the vibrations on the ground caused by the opponents movement the user will know where the opponent is.
(Can only be taught be Karin)
(The move lasts only 15 seconds)
(Can be used 2 times per battle)
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(Shuryou Gigei|Genjutsu|Esa)- Hunting Technique|Illusion Technique|Baiting
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:The user casts a genjutsu on the opponent. The opponent sees what he or she desires which baits them into a spiked snare set up by the user that tears the flesh of the opponents skin if they struggle to much.
(can only be taught by Karin)
(can only be used twice per battle)
Approved

| (Ninpou|Haizen Shuriken)- Ninja Art|Torrential Shuriken |
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user focuses chakra into their hands then slam them together. This releases a strong breeze towards the opponent. the user then uses chakra shape manipulation to manipulate the chakra in the breeze. the chakra then shapes into mini chakra shurikens that are very hard to see unless you have sharingan or byakugan. The breeze makes contact with the opponent slicing them up. Once the wind passes by the chakra shuriken disperse.
(Can only be taught by Karin)

Declined, being that only doujutsu may see it , the technique would require some form of restriction

| (Ninpou|Haizen Shuriken)- Ninja Art|Torrential Shuriken |
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user focuses chakra into their hands then slam them together. This releases a strong breeze towards the opponent. the user then uses chakra shape manipulation to manipulate the chakra in the breeze. the chakra then shapes into mini chakra shurikens that are very hard to see unless you have sharingan or byakugan. The breeze makes contact with the opponent slicing them up. Once the wind passes by the chakra shuriken disperse.
(Can only be taught by Karin)
(Can only be used twice per battle)
(no regular ninjutsu next turn)

-Approved-

 

[Howard]

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Lightning Release: Internal Lightning Shock (Naibuteki raikou dageki)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descriptions: The user charges a large amount of raiton chakra into their fingers they then stab their fingers into an opponent at close range releasing the raiton chakra violently shocking the opponent's internal organs causing organ failure
~Can only be used once per battle~
~Can only be used by me and who I teach~

-Approved-

Lightning Release: Blinding Light (Genwaku ranpu)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Descriptions: The user charges raiton chakra into his palm and releases it all at once blinding anyone who sees the light from the frontal view if a clone sees the jutsu he is blinded as well blinding effect lasts for the rest of the turn
~Can only be used my me and who I teach~

-Declined. Well, if I allow this then every one's raiton chakra would have the blinding ability-

Ninja art: Chakra Cannon (Seishou kyanon)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descriptions: The user charges a massive amount of chakra into their index finger and aims at the opponent he then release the blast sending a blast of pure chakra at the opponent
~Can not use Ninjutsu techniques the next turn~
~Can only be used by me and who I teach~


-Approved-

 

[-Tauburn-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

This first spoilor is a quote of the jutsu needed to preform the second jutsu 8 Trigrams chakra spikes

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(Mittsu Semento)- 8 Trigrams Chakra Cement

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Rank: S
Type: defence
Range: long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user concentrates a huge amount of chakra, then channels it into the earth and with great concentration he/she cements the entire area with chakra, preventing earth(ground) based jutsu .
-This technique becomes a success in one turn meaning it takes one turn after the jutsu has been used cement the whole area.
-useable only by a hyuuga member
-the chakra cement lasts for 5 turns and once per battle.

~Approved~

(Hakkeshou kuuhaku Kaiten) - 8 Trigrams chakra spikes

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage points:80
Description:
After using the user must have used (8 trigrams chakra cement) to cement the entire battle field. Then he puts his hands unto the ground ,whilst manipulting the chakra cement to gain a spike shape,making it to instantly erupt all over the battlefield.The chakra spikes are 5 ft and are extremely sharp.
-must be from the hyuuga clan
-only once per battle and lasts as long the chakra cement is available
-must have used chakra cement.

-Approved-

(chou Hakke Hazangeki) - Giant mountain crusher

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Rank: forbbiden
Type: Attack
Range: long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: This technique,is a larger variation of "8 trigrams air palm".This jutsu allows the user to gather a very large amount of chakra into his dominant hand,then thrusting his palm forward, he is able to release an air palm but on a far more larger scale.Although this chakra burst travells with an insane speed,its strength is equal to the ones of "8 trigram mountain crusher".
-must be a hyuuga clan member
-Twice per battle
-due to the strain caused by the air-palm to the user,he is unable to use hand based taijutsu next turn.

-Approved-

(Konki Hitonomi) - Chakra Bite

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Rank: S
Type: defense
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user focuses and compresses chakra into their teeths,then gently bits theirselves with it,thus sending in a wave of chakra into their body to correct their chakra flow, if previously disturbed by genjutsu and such.
-Must be a hyuuga clan member
-3 times per battle


-Declined. If you are in genjutsu you can't find yourself able to do this. If you were before as you state, and now you are out of it you don't need it. In any case, you would need medi training -

Dropping my (Kaze Sai Katana)- Wind Cutting Blade for this Weapon

(Itami Kasai Yari Zetsumei)- Pained Fire Spear of Death

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Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Spear was forged long ago, unknown by whom it was made or even where, the only thing know is that it was found in the Land of Water. It is made of chakra absorbing metals. Its has a heat proof cloth that protects the users hands from the large amount of heat it gives off, but even with the cloth if the user isnt used to it, it will give the user saver burns on his palms. No one knows who made the Spear but it had to have been a master blacksmith or someone who got lucky, because the spears edge is so sharp that the user can barely feels it cut the enemy. If the user channels their fire chakra into the Spear it begins to burn with a almost blood red color. Neither melting, chipping, or any other kind off damage can be done to it. The User must train with the Spear daily to keep themselves at one with it because without that the user will never be able to hold it, givin the amount of heat it gives off when absorbing Fire chakra. Three times per battle the spear will absorb an enemy's Fire chakra weather from a jutsu or from the enemy themselves through contact or cut. Once per battle the Spear must be in contact with the ground, its believed that its to the Spear can "recharge", but not known for sure.
Note: The absorbing tech meantioned above absorbs will absorb a hole Fire jutsu up to A-Rank and down. But the absorbing counts as a turn for the user.
Note: The "recharging" is so that the Spear will not harm the user. (from its Heat)
Note: When "recharging" the Spear must be in direct contact with the ground for one round.
Note: For the user to be at one with the Spear he must also have mastered Fire through S-Rank, along with daily training.
Note:Only -Tauburn- can handle this Spear.

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-Declined. Similar custom weapon already exists-

(Fuuton: Bushōgoma)- Lazy Spinning Top

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Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Mid-Large
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user rotates in a 360 degree circle, with two blades facing in opposite directions creating large wind blades that fire toward an opponent. The wind blades join together forming a spinning circle of wind that upon contact with a target envelops the target with tornado-like intensity. Cutting and slashing them from all sides.
Note: This jutsu must be done with 2 blades.
Note: If the Blades are not Swords then the wind is weaker, at the power of a C-Rank for a dagger and a D-Rank for a smaller blade.
Note: Can only be Taught by -Tauburn-
Note: Can be used 4 times per battle.

-On hold. That's not a B rank-

 

[BluePhenix]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

First time I'm posting customs, hope I did it right

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(Suiton: Mizu Kyojin) – Water Style: Water Golem
Type: Defense / Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User creates a water golem that enrobes him similarly to Susano’o. The water is dense enough to speed down any object (punches, kicks, kunais, etc…) that pierces through it, up to the point of halting their course before they can reach the user within the golem. The water golem is also an excellent defense to fire and prevents most fire jutsus from damaging the user. Similarly to Stone Golem, the water golem is capable of attacking an opponent, i.e. its arms can extend up to mid range to crush the opponent in the form of a rushing flow of water. The user can keep this jutsu active for as long as he wishes, since he can breathe through an air tunnel that he leaves out when he creates the water golem. The air tunnel links the user’s face to the outside of the golem through its back, and also represent its weak spot.
Note: Can only be taught by BluePhenix.

-Oh hold. Needs restrictions. -

(Suiton: Mizu Handou) – Water Style: Hydro Kick
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user gathers a large amount of water chakra under any of his feet and release it as a geyser of water to launch himself in any direction, depending on the angle that his feet maintain with the ground. This is basically used to shift in an incredibly fast way from short to mid range and vice versa, or from mid to long range and vice versa. When using Hydro Kick, the user’s feet must be in contact with the ground/earth to give appropriate power to the geyser.
Note: Can only be taught by BluePhenix.

-On hold. Why water chakra? You just need to concentrate a larger amount of your own chakra and you're good to go-

(Suiton: Tsuki Hanone) – Water Style: Moon Fang
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This is a very advanced form of Sword of Draining, where the sword is larger, longer, and more refined/appealing. The blade is even harder than Hard Water Spike and, if the user adds extra chakra to it, each swing can shoot out an arc of water able to slice through most objects within the environment (trees, ground, rocks, etc…) as well as through the opponent’s jutsus.
Note: Can only be taught by BluePhenix

-On hold. Change the water affinity with wind since you want sharpness and cutting-

(Suiton: Poseidon Toraidento) – Water Style: Poseidon’s Trident
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user gathers a large amount of water chakra to create a finely crafted trident capable of stabbing large summonings like Gamabunta. The trident is a bit larger than Gamaken’s weapon, much harder than Hard Water Spike, and is thrown with extreme speed similar to high water pressure used to cut through hard materials like diamonds.
Note: Can only be taught by BluePhenix.

-Declined. Similar jutsu already exists. With the same name. -

(Suiton: Shazou Kussetsu) – Water Style: Image Refraction
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user gathers his chakra and release it as transparent water particles all around him, which refracts light to show an inaccurate location of the user’s position. The refraction operates at any angle around the user, such that anyone who attacks him will be aiming at an empty spot, except for large scale jutsus. It is best used when the opponent’s attention is caught elsewhere, like when they are already handling another jutsu.
Note: Can only be taught by BluePhenix.

Not much restrictions, I know, but the moves seems pretty basic to me

-Declined. This is not possible and also reflection is a CE-

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

taka of isei ( hawk of power)
type:Supplementary
rank: s
range: short-long
chakra cost:40
damage: n/a
Description: hawk of power is a very large bird. he has very dark brown feathers and a scar over his right eye he can use any body part as a weapon. he can use any elemental jutsu that the summoner knows except for earth jutsu that reqiures contact with the ground. he has very great speed almost untoughable in the sky he has sharpe claws and a very hard beak.
(note: can only be summoned by the 6th hokage and anyone who has signed the hawk contract and has my permission.
note: can only be summoned twice per battle.
note: must have signed the hawk contract.
note: lasts for 5 turns.)






taka of kaze ( hawk of wind)
Type:supplementary
Rank:a
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:n/a
Description: this hawk is fairly large has light brown feathers and can use any wind jutsu that the summoner knows this hawk can fly very fast making him a hard target to hit.
note: lasts for 4 turns
note: must have sighned the hawk contract
note: must have permission from the 6th hokage to use this summon




ninjutsu chakra kabe ( ninja art chakra wall )
Type:defensive
Rank:s
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:n/a
Description: the user channels his chakra in front of him the user then focases on molding his chakra into a wall of visable chakra that can block any ninjutsu.
note: cant use any jutsu while behind the wall unless its a jutsu that can be used by hitting the ground ( an example world shakeing )
note: only the 6th hokage may teach


ninjutsu chakra kikou ( ninja art chakra armor )
Type: defensive
Rank: s
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:n/a
Description: the user channels his chakra threw out his body then infuses it into his skin makeing a layer of visable chakra surrond him protecting him from any taijutsu attack the users taijutsu attacks are powered up while this layer is around him.
Note: only lasts for 5 turns
Note: can only defend against taijutsu no matter what rank the taijutsu move is.
Note: cant use any ninjutsu above a rank after use for 2 turns
Note: can onlybe used 3 times per battle
Note: cant defend against the eight gates taijutsu
Note: only the 6th hokage may teach
Note: can use ninjutsu while in this state


(raiton tenka niwa) lighting style lighting garden
Type:Attack
Rank:s
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description: the user focuses raiton chakra to their arms and places them on the ground and release their raiton chakra into the ground they can then bring up a lighting bolt where ever they please from the ground up.
note: can only be used twice per battle
note: after use the user may not use any raiton above a rank for two turns

-All declined. Please read some approved jutsus, copy the format and fix your descriptions-

 

[Jokey]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suna Houmen - Suna Shitai) Sand Release - Sand Body

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the 10 Needed Handseals; Snake, Boar, Tiger, Ox, Snake, Dragon, Monkey Ox, Tiger, Horse Gaara then become's completley out of Sand after performing the handseals. Gaara then is Compeletly Immune for Taijutsu Technique's and because of the Sand it'll give gaara a boost and give's him the Opportuinity to have the Speed Gaara during the Kage Summit (Sasuke Vs. Gaara) If a Opponent attack's Gaara with Weapon's the Weapons then unfortianatly go straight trough gaara's body. Gaara is now able to perform Silent Kill's like Zabuza does with Hidden mist jutsu if Gaara Activate's Hidden Sand mist Jutsu. Gaara i also able while traveling trough the Desert Ground to feel where his opponent is by sensing the vibration around the whole Battle field and is unable to see if going trough the Sand Desert. Gaara can also Wrap the opponent like a snake being able to wrap the user so hard that it'll be impossible to breath after a while. There is Proof of this Jutsu if you look at my Signature

Restrictions:

Note: Gaara is Unable to Perform any kind of Element but only Sand
Note: Gaara is Immune for Taijutsu Technique's until the Opponent has the speed of the First Gate.
Note: Gaara Loses every Turn -10 Chakra and -10 Damage during the Sand Body Activated
Note: The Gourd of Gaara will automaticly get dropped if Gaara turn's into Sand
Note: Turning into the Sand cost's 1-3 Second's
Note: Gaara has the Shape of a Fat Snake
Note: Only Sharingan and Byakugan can See the Sand body while traveling trough the Desert Ground
Note: The body will get the exactly same damage by getting hit with a Wind Technique unless protecting against with a Sand Technique.

(Suna Houmen - Ko Suna Hando) Sand Release - Large Sand Hand

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Gaara Begin's to Concentrate Sand Chakra around the Opponent performing a Large Sand hand which is able to grab the user and making the user unable to move the sand will cover the whole Human Body and is unable to breath during in the hand Sand and Slowly giving the Opponent a Slow death because the user will breath very hardly and with pain then when Gaara then Perform's the Boar and Snake Handseal The sand hand then crushes the target completly After performing the Boar handseal the Sand will turn into hard sand very Fast and when the user then Finishe's the snake handseal the Opponent then will be Crushed Completly.

Restrictions:

Note: The Hand sand will cover the Opponent after 5 Second's
Note: Can only Be thought by Joker.

(Suna Houmen - Hitoshirezu Sando Kasumi) Sand Release - Hidden Sand Mist

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Gaara begin's to release Sand out his gourd filled with chakra and cover the Completly arena with Millions of pieces of sand just like Hidden mist Jutsu. Gaara then is able to Sense where the user is and can Sense the Chakra of the Opponent. Because of the Millions of Piece's the User will be almost unable to see something since the Sand pieces could come in his eye's.

Restrictions:

Note: Only Last's for 4 Turn's
Note: Only Joker can teach this
Note: Gaara will cover the whole Long range arena which is also the Sky


(Suna Youshiki: Suna Bakufu o Sono Yoridokoro) Sand Style: Sand Waterfall on the
Ground

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu summons Large Sand covering the whole Ground beneath the Opponent and User From Short to Long range. Gaara Perform's the Snake handseal and then he Summon's the large Sand within 5 Second's on the ground

-Resubmit when unbanned-

 

[Darijan]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Politoad hiki)Summoning technique: Politoad toad
Type: Attack/defence/supplementary
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user chanells a huge amount of chakra in his palm, he preforms the summoning hand seals and then he bites his finger to make some blood and to slam his palm onto the ground. As he slams his palm onto the ground some smoke appears and a green toad gamakichis size appears. This toad is called Politoad and has special affinity to water chakra and jutsus which gives him the ability to preform suiton jutsus up to A rank. Politoad is a kindish toad and he loves to play.
Notes:
~You must have signed the toad contract
~can only be taought by me
~lasts 3 turns
~no other summons 3 turns after politoad dissapears
~He can use Only up to A rank suiton

-Approved-

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Guujinwaza|Odori no Hisaki)- Puppet Art|Dance of Flames
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: the user opens a compartment in their mouth with a seal on it and when chakra is a applied to the seal a large fire blasts erupts from the users mouth incinerating everything in its path.
(Can only be used twice per battle)
(Can only be taught by Daemon)

(Guujinwaza|Kyouaku Tegiwa)- Puppet Art|Fiendish Performance
Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:100
Damage Points:90
Description: the puppet opens to compartments on its back(usually located in the shoulder blade area and the hip area) which reveals a seal on it. when the seal is released, 4 large puppet arms come out of the users back and prop the user up like its on all fours. A seal on the users forehead and revealed. the user concentrates pure chakra into the seals creating an orb of chakra in front of the user. then a high compressed blast is released from the user's orb destroying everything in its path followed by a big explosion and crater.
(Can only be used once per battle)
(No puppet jutsu for the rest of the battle)
(Can only be taught by Daemon)

-Both declined. Similar jutsus already exist-

 

[Bhil]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu Kyojin Taka: Adeodatus no Burakku Arashi)
Giant Hawk Summoning Technique: Adeodatus of the Black Storms
Rank:S
Type:Summoning
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Adeodatus of the Black Storms is the banished hawk of the old times. He is a full black colored hawk with stripes of yellow on his wings and back with little poke-dots of blue on his chest. He has the power to bend Water and Lighting to his will enabling him to use both elements up to the users rank. Due to capability of using water&lighting Adeodatus can fly through thunder-storms like a normal hawk flies through a clear sky. In stormy weather Adeodatus can fly faster than the Pergine Falcon which flies at 106 MPH, in normal weather his speed is reduced to 80 MPH. When flying in clouds Adeodatus can camouflage to an extend that only a chameleon can.
Note: Can only be summoned 2 times and lasts 4 turns
Note: Must sign the Giant Hawk contract from Zenryoku
Note: This hawk may only be used by myself & Zenryoku


(C-2 Kibaku Nendo Fenikkusu ) – C-2 Exploding Clay – Phoenix
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Akatsuki member Deidara is an artist at heart, and he uses his modeling clay to fashion animals which help him in combat. After withdrawing a bit of clay from his pouch, Deidara will use his palm mouths to consume the clay and add some Katon chakra to fashion it into a small five foot long Phoenix,after using his handseal it will enlarge to size of twenty-seven foot long Phoenix. It looks like a large peacock and eagle fused with a tail of absolute whiteness. Eternal-lid Flames surround the Phoenix slightly, making it very hot to touch but Deidara by taming the “alive” creation will allow the flames around to simply not hurt him by decreasing their temperature.(Kinda like Ash from Pokemon when he was riding a Ponyta) . It flies at very fast speeds, but it cannot explode, however it does have the ability to shoot out several three foot around clay fireballs. The fireballs explode like regular C-2 clay would but with much more force and explosiveness allowing the range of the blast to increase and to have a much fiery blast such as a Katon jutsu like (Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball. If somehow the Phoenix is destroyed by an Fire or Lighting Ninjutsu it will reincarnate out of it's own ashes by having Deidara preform one handseal but the ashes can be destroy by an A-Rank Suiton ninjutsu.

Note- Can be only used ONCE in a battle.
Note- Reincarnation ability can be only used ONCE.
Note-Can be only used by ME, ~Sanji~.


Calling Upon the Kraken (Tenshoku Sono Kraken)
Type:Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:This technique if the target is standing on a large body of water.An extremely powerful technique that requires a strong bond to the water element as well as a lot of chakra.In addition the jutsu requires a small blood sacrifice to be dropped into the body of water where the jutsu will be used. After the handseals and sacrifice is made, the user will place his hands down on the water and channel their chakra throughout the water. After while, eight large water tentacles, that resemble octopus tentacles, will emerge from the depths and attempt to trap the target by wrapping around it. If and when ensnared, the tentacles will drag the victim into the water and then retreat back from whence it came.

-All declined. OP. You haver to edit the red parts and also forget about Phoenix-

 

[Lesserbeast]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Tearing Tide Katana (Baribari Ushio Katana)
Type: Weapon
Rank: B
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 + 10 per wave
Damage points:+10 per wave released
Description: Summoned from a small scroll kept, usually kept in pocket of vest. Tearing Tide katana is the weapon of Aisho Narekame, given to him by his grandmother at a young age to be used only when he was ready. When wielded, all Suiton techniques are -5 chakra, and the sword itself can release jets of water which deal 10 damage apiece. The blade is blue, with a darker blue hand guard and a blocky red handle.
Note:
-Can only be used for 5 turns
-Lightning techs above C rank can disable it's water using abilities
-Can only be used by Lesserbeast or people with Lesserbeast's consent

-Approved.-

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Taijutsu Ougi: Sōkotsu ) - Taijutsu Ultimate Technique: Double Bone

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Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Close
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 ( - 30+ to user )
Description: Double Bone is ultimate taijutsu technique that can only be used by those who have mastered regular taijutsu training and the user must have chakra controlling skills of high ranked ninja's. It is used to attack hardened or petrified opponents. To use it, user needs to stay still for a moment and concentrate chakra into his/her hands. Then, user follows up with a dual handed punch that on opponent's ribcage, once hits, releases the chakra and it will cause quakes on the petrified/hardened opponent, damaging them. The punch can only be used on petrified opponents and it cannot be used on any substance harder than steel, as the strength of the punch would be reversed and user's bones would be broken ( in hands ). The Punch causes at least 30 damage to user varying on the strength of the substance the user's punching on.
Note:
- Can be used only once
- Causes user at least - 30 damage.
- No hand taijutsu attacks for three next turns.

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~Declined~ this has been posted and declined before. In the end this is just a two handed chakra fist, which is the same as Tsunade's or Sakura's fists'

Custom Weapon: ( Ringo to Washi ) - Apple and the Eagle

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Type: Offensive - Supplementary - Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Self
Chakra Cost: N/A ( - 10 per turn when Apple's used )
Damage points: N/A ( - 10 per turn when Apple's used )
Description: Apple and the Eagle's a set of weapon which contains two parts. The first part of the set consists Apple, which is an ancient relic in ninja world. It disappeared during the Third Ninja War and has been passed along ever since. The second part includes two hidden blades that were developed for the assassination squad of Kirigakure. The Hidden blades look like common handguards, but once user wishes, one blade can pop out of each handguard.

Apple:
The Apple's special ability is to confuse opponents/targets as if they were in genjutsu, once they see the apple. The apple also works as a map of the ninja world and it can track someone's chakra for small distances. The main ability of apple is that it can project nine copies of it's user. The copies cannot be removed and they aren't solid, so they cannot be attacked nor can they attack. Activating the apple, makes user get his/her vitality and chakra constantly drained and it makes him/her also unable of using handsealed jutsus.

Eagle:
The Eagle's silent weapon made for assassination. The blades are indestructible and they can be infused with chakra for other techniques. The blades are strong enough to allow you fight against enemies with other weapons and you can use Kenjutsu with them.
Note:
- These cannot be stolen, only passed on
- Both parts are indestructible
- The 2nd part includes two hidden blades for both hands.

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~Declined, do not resubmit~ the AC hidden blades are already taken and how can that apple confuse people?

( Katon: Irai kumo ) - Fire release: Sunset cloud

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Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Close - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: User inhales and concentrates fire chakra in to his/her lungs. Then he/she proceeds by breathing out a stream of fire that grows into a huge cloud by burning oxygen around it. The cloud isn't controllable, meaning that it cannot be shaped into a fireball due the oxygen amount of the oxygen it uses to grow cannot be controlled. The jutsu is named sunset cloud after the color of fire that resembles a sunset.
Note:
- Can be used twice per battle
- Cannot be controlled
- Requires at least three turns of cool down between each use

-Declined. You need some sort of another addition fuel and not just oxygen to do this-

( Kenjutsu: Cuharurie Sheenu Sukiru ) - Sword techniques: Charlie Sheen Skills

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30 ( - 5 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 10 when deactivated )
Description: This technique is variation of drunken fist taijutsu style using it with swords. User will drink a vial full of alcohol called ''Tiger Blood'' and use chakra to get drunk fast, making any sword attacks unpredictable as long as this mode is allowed. Overusing this jutsu causes hangover and headache.
Note:
- Can be used twice per battle
- Causes hangover and headache.

-Declined. Makes no sense and it's not even funny. -

Summoning Animal: Platypus
Scroll Owner: Perry
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Perry

( Kuchiyose: Perry ) - Summoning technique: Perry

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 5 when summoned )
Description: User makes the basic summoning handseals ( unless user is above kage rank ) and offers blood sacrifice to summon Perry. Perry is a mammal that is restricted to any platypus contract even though he is very humanlike. Perry looks like a Platypus walking with two legs and wearing a hat. Perry is unable of talking but is able of understanding talking. Perry is skilled taijutsu user and is able of using A - ranked water jutsus.
Note:
- Can be summoned only once
- Lasts six turns on field.

-Approved-

 

[Rokusho..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Fuuton: Tenrai Boushi) - Wind style: Divine hat
Rank: S
Type: defense
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user focuses and channels a certain amount of wind chakra into his head,then creates a large hat made out of wind, that is able to shade the user's whole body.
-useable twice
-lasts for 3 turns

-Declined. I am way too busy to satisfy your need for fun. I hope you don't expect me to state the reason why I am declining this thing-

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(Fuuton: Tenrai Sekisho) - Wind style: Divine Barrier
Rank: S
Type: Attack/defence
Range: close
Chakra Cost:40
Damage points:N/A
Description: This jutsu,allows the use to create an invisible 5ft wall of wind,infront of the user,which acts as a barrier.This wall is instantly created,when the user makes a snake handseal whilst sending forth his wind chakra.
-twice per battle
-the wall can only be seen with doujutsu.

-Declined. Wind is not solid. Since the dawn of time-

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(Chakra Yari) - Chakra Spear
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user focuses a large amount of chakra into one of his hands,then pushes it out but manipulating it, to extend in a spear like shape and lengthens in a rapid rate to impale the target.
-Must be a hyuuga clan member.
-3 times per battle.

-Declined. Poor description. You are manipulating which element exactly? I mean what is the spear made of? Also the impaling part is macabre and not plausible for anatomical reasons during a fight-

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(Katon: Himatsu Houka ) - Fire style: Spraying Fire
Rank: A
Type: Attack/defense
Range: long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage points:60
Description: The user makes a tiger handseal,sprays a large amount of fire widly on the ground.The fire is fairly hot and its able to harden mudy or swampy surfaces but at the same time incinerates the targets legs.
-useable twice per battle

-Declined. You are attempting to resemble fire clay but it won't work-

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(Doton: Toraberingu Doro ) - Earth style: Travelling Mud
Rank: A
Type: Attack/defence
Range: long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage points:N/A
Description: The user focuses his earth chakra through out his whole body,then he melts into a mud(liquid mud state).which gives him ability to travel as a mere mud through deep mud and swamp and is still updated with everything happening on surface.
-Mud state lasts for 2 turns ,unless the user reforms.
-twice per battle.

-Declined.-

 

[Thor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Koton: Senbon Shawa) – Steel Release: Needle Shower
Rank: D
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to create steel needles in their hands and will then throw them at the Target
Approved

(Koton: Kotsupaiku no Jutsu ) – Steel Release: Steel Spike Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra to cause a spike made of steel to protrude from the ground in any desired location.
Approved

(Koton: Koutetsu no Heki ) – Steel Release: Steel Wall Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user after making a series of 3 hand seals will then place their hands on the ground to erect a 2 meter high protective steel wall from the ground infront of them.
Approved

(Koton: Koteizou no Jutsu) – Steel Release: Steel Construction Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After making a couple of hand seals the user manipulates their chakra to draw tiny grains of steel metal ores from the ground which then forms in a single point mid air infront the user that then forms into a solid mass of the users
This seems like its incomplete please resubmit with it completed

(Koton: Koutetsu no Toride) – Steel Release: Fortress of Steel
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will create several pillars of steel rise from the ground to surround the enemy enclosing them within the confinements of the walls and then from the top more pillars sprout to create a ceiling locking the target within a steel fortress.
[Approved/COLOR]
-Ibid. your previous post.-

 

[Tvqxeqlapcfr]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Only Summonings this week. No resubmission (even if I am upset that they were declined. , I guess it will have to wait until next week.)

Hummingbird Summons:

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Ho-Oh, The Fire Bird (Ho-Oh, Hi no Tori)

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Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Ho-Oh, the Fire Bird. Ho-Oh is a large humming bird. She is of the ruby-throated variety, and is known for a large scorch mark on her right eye. She can understand and speak the summoner's language. She can use B-Rank Fire Jutsu that do not require hand seals. When he flaps his wings, he creates a torrent of A-Ranked Flames.
~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
~The Fire Torrent counts toward the turn count.
~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

-Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -

Striker, The Lightning Bird (Sutoraikā, Raitoningubādo)

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Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Striker, the Lightning Bird. He is a hummingbird of the blue-throated variety, distinguished by a scar on his right claw. He is able to use up to B-Ranked Lightning Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. His twin brother is Shaker, the Earth Bird. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of Lightning by flapping his wings.
~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
~The Lightning Torrent counts toward the turn count.
~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

-Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -

Shaker, the Earth Bird (Shēkā, Chikyū no Tori)

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Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Shaker, the Earth Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Beryline variety, distinguished by a scar on his left claw. He is able to use up to B-Rank Earth Jutsu that do not require hand seals. Striker, the Lightning Bird is his twin brother. He can create an A-Ranked Earth Torrent by flapping his wings.
~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
~The Earth Torrent counts toward the turn count.
~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

-Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -

Gust, the Wind Bird (Gasuto, uindobādo)

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Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user does the necessary hand seals for the summoning. This summoning calls upon Gust, the Wind Bird. He is a hummingbird of the Black-chinned variety, distinguished by a scar on his left eye. He is able to use up to B-Rank Wind Jutsu that do not require hand seals. He is able to understand and speak the summoner's language. He can create an A-Ranked torrent of wind by flapping his wings.
~This summoning can be called upon thrice per battle.
~Once called upon, this summoning lasts for five turns.
~Jutsu used by his bird count towards the turn count.
~The Wind Torrent counts toward the turn count.
~The user must sign the Hummingbird contract.

-Declined due to the red part. Also decide on the gender please. -

Weapon Summoning:

Pinned (Kotei sa Reta)

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Rank: A
Range: Short- to Mid-Range
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user throws a previously marked in blood scroll into the air. Five large poles connected by chains fall from the sky on top of the opponent. (depicted below) The opponent is pinned to the ground.
~The user must be hit by an A-Rank+ Jutsu first.

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-Declined. You can't just summon weapons-

 

[meimei]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Hello! Thanks for a great thread & I'm sorry if the suggestions I make will sound strange ... I will work hard to make these as appropriate as possible I was also told I could submit my custom weapon here from the custom weapons thread... if I read it wrong... I'm sorry:

Custom weapon: Heart of stone (Ishi no kokoro)
Rank: B
Type: Defense & Attack
Range: Mid-range due to expandable size
Chakra cost: To use its special jitsu - 35
Damage: 40 or for higher Shinobi no damage but jitsu will be affected and made less powerful
Descriptions: A staff with the ability to expand and decrease in size easily, one end having a green jewel on it, allowing chakra to flow through it and focus chakra energy easier. The beam produced can help melt through certain barriers like ice and weaken steel.

The weapon's special ability is that it can be used to create a gas that will put opponents to sleep or for very strong Shinobi, help weaken them in their attacks.

~Declined~ messed up chakra and damage points, state the limits of the staff's expantion + no sleeping gas, that's med stuff and how's a staff going to release a sleeping gas without effecting yourself? Also where does this beam come from, description way too vague?

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The Stone Circle: (Bōeijitsu: Sutōnsākuru)
Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: N/A
Descriptions: For use in times of defense for our village. A strong, circular chakra & stone wall can be made to protect people or even encompass the village itself (but at great cost to the user). As such, for a small area the chakra cost will be 60 but for a larger area... it can only be used once as all chakra will be gone.

-Can only be used twice for a small area and once for a large area-

Thank you.

Meimei, please resubmit. I will give you some clues. First of all, you need to write in first person and explain exactly how you are using your abilities or how you are manipulating the elements in order to make them create something else. For example your second jutsu could be written like this:

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The Stone Circle: (Bōeijitsu: Sutōnsākuru)
Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: N/A
Descriptions: For use in times of defense for our village. Through releasing a considerable amount of earth chakra and by manipulating the natural environment through the use of all cannon - nature - manipulating jutsus a strong, circular chakra & stone wall can be made to protect people or even encompass the village itself (but at great cost to the user). As such, for a small area the chakra cost will be 60 but for a larger area... it can only be used once as all chakra will be gone. The cannon jutsu used counts as a move and needs to be stated along with this one.