[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

Darijan · Apr 25, 2011

(Katon: Kaen Panchi) Fire: Blaze Punch
Type:Ofence/defence
Range:Short
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage:60(direct hit with the jutsu)(+10 if combined with another fuuton or katon jutsu)(+10 on taijutsu)
Description:the user fastly preforms the tiger hand seal and then he starts collecting katon chakra in his fists, after he collects enough of it he can release it to create mid sized flames coming and collecting around his fists. He can use the flames to stronger his taijutsu, or too shoot it at a katon or fuuton jutsu the user used to increase its power. It can also be used to punch back the opponents Katon and Fuuton moves up to A rank.
Notes:
~Can only be tought by me
~The flames dissapear after 2 moves of usage.
~can be used 3 times per battle

Declined, similar jutsu exists

(Raiton: Raikou X)Lightning: Lightning X
Type: Offence
Range:Mid
Rank: A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description:The user 1. makes 2 hand seals and then he starts gathering up a huge amount of raiton chakra in his palms and as he collects enought of the raiton chakra he releases it creating a quite big amount of electricity come out of his palms, and then he uses the electricity to create a big X shaped lightning which he will push forwards at high speed, if it clashes against any other electricity this jutsu will explode destroying ewerything what is close to it.
Notes:
~Can only be tought by me.
~Usable 4 times a battle.
~No other lightning jutsus the same move as this jutsu was used.

Approved

Gobi Gobletsson · Apr 25, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Gobi Gobletsson said:
Resubmitting;

(Mokuton : Kousaeda ude ) Wood Release: Crossbow arm
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user makes his dominant arm shape into a medium big Crossbow, with a mini bolt ready to shoot. When the user shoots the drawback in the crossbow is so wild hes getting stunned and the mini bolt flies at enourmous high speed and is barely able to see.
-Note: Can only be used 2 per match.
-Note: By using this Jutsu does that he can only perform two Jutsus that turn he uses it.
-Note: The stun wears off after 1-5 seconds.
-Note: Can only be taught by Gobi Gobletsson.
-Note: Dojutsu users may be able to react to the bolt.

Approved

(Doton - Koroseumu) Earth Release: Colosseum.
Type: Supplementary.
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user performs 4 Handseals then he slams his dominant hand onto the ground and, sends enourmous amounts of Chakra through the Earth and creates a Giant Colosseum rises up through the Ground, covering the whole battlefield.
-Note: Can only be used once per match.
-Note: The Colosseum is infused with the users Chakra untill it gets destroyed.
-Note: Can only be taught by Gobi Gobletsson.
-Note: Due the high amounts of Chakra the user is so exhausted that he is only able to perform B-Ranked or lower Jutsus for the next 3 turns.

Approved

( Baikingusutairu - Dageki sono Gjallarhorn )- Viking Style - Blow the Gjallarhorn
Type: Attack/Supplmentary/Defensive.
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid.
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: The user draws out his horn, putting it infront mouth and blows the horn, as the user blows the horn he tranfers enormous amounts of Chakra into his horn making the sound louder and harder, the sound is so high it's capable of blowing nearly any projectile away. If the enemy is standing in mid-range the sound is loud enough to disturb his balance, making him do handseals slower and unfocused. If in short-range the opponent would begin to bleed out of his ears since the horn is so loud.
-Note: This Jutsu also works on summons, though only in short-range were they stun the summon.
-Note: This sound does not affect the user.
-Note: Can only be used 2 times.
-Note: The sound is a 360 degree around the user, it also works below the ground.
-Note: The Horn can be any invidual horn, that can be infused with Chakra.

Declined, this carries sound element properties so would be classed as a sound technique

(Doton:Yuka ofu Ishi) Earth Release: Floor of Stone.
Type:Supplementary.
Rank:B
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user of this jutsu performs one handseal, doing so he sends amounts of Doton Chakra throughout his feets making the ground underneath him hard as stone.
-Note: This also works on mud.
-Note: Can only be taught by Gobi.
-Note: This takes 1-2 seconds to make the ground hard as stone.
-Note: Can only be used 2 times per battle.

declined, explain more the limitation of only working on mud

New CJ Ready to get checked;

(Suiton: Tobikomigouben Gufuu) Water Release: Plungepool Tornado.
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defence/attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 100
Description: The user will create a votex of water either around themselves or there opponent combining there water chakra and earth chakra. This would would look like a tornado shape of water with rocks and boulders in due to the earth chakra, though due to the high speed rotation of the tornado, it would look like a giant mud vortex.
Note: Can only be used once.
Note: No S-Ranked or above the next turn.
Note: 20 Damage to the user itself.

And about the 'Blow the Gjallarhorn; The horn is added to my Genma bio:
You must be registered for see links
so that I'm able to use the Jutsu.

Restrict abit more

Gobi Gobletsson said:
Name: Wood release: Viking Style – Rise of Asgaard = Mokuton: Baikingusutairu - Asgaard no taitō
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: N/A (20 damage to the user)
Description: The user performs 8 handseals and slams his hands against the ground, releasing extreme amounts of chakra as he makes contact, doing so, the user makes the entire city of Asgaard rise up from the ground in wooden form, the city is complete, with walls watchtowers and a great hall. The whole city is made of heartwood, (the hardest type of tree) and is infused with the users chakra, the city is about 3x3 kilometers big. The user is able to make the whole city sink down into the ground again, by performing 6 handseals and using 40 chakra, this counts as a seperated S-ranked Mokuton jutsu.
Notes:
• Because of the energy cost, the user cannot use A-ranked and above techniques for two turns, after this turn.
• It takes about 15 seconds for the city to fully appear.
• it's not required for the user to have his hands on the ground, after slamming his hands against the ground.
• Can only be used once.
• The user receives 20 damage because of the strain this jutsu puts on the body.

Declined, edit the the wood element retriction, the scale of this technique can clearly prevent the user from using high level wood techniques for more than two turns, that scale would almost deplete your chakra

Name: Fire release: Viking Style – Burning Midgaard = Katon: Baikingusutairu - bāningu Midgaard
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120 (20 damage to the user)
Description: The user forms 6 handseals and releases an extreme amount of fire affinity chakra into the ground, doing so, the user can make the whole area in front of him burst into a sea of flames in a second, the sea is about 3x3 kilometers big. These flames aren't very dangerous, hot, but not lethal unless you spend a longer amount of time in contact with them. The real offensive part of this jutsu, is that the user focuses great amounts of chakra into the flame sea and stomps the ground, doing so, the user creates a gigantic wave of extremely hot fire in front of him, that will race towards the target with high speed.
Notes:
• Can only be used once
• Because of the energy cost, the user cannot use A-ranked and above techniques for two turns, after this turn.
• The user receives 20 damage because of the strain this jutsu puts on the body.

Declined, do not resubmit

Name: Wood release: Viking Style – Yggdrasil = Mokuton: Baikingusutairu – yugudorashiru
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user focuses extreme amounts of chakra and forms 7 handseals, then he releases all the chakra into the ground, doing so the user makes the gigantic life-tree Yggdrasil grow up from any position he wishes. Yggdrasil grows extremely fast, and is about 300 meters wide and 600 meters tall, the tree itself is infused with the users chakra and almost indestructible, but not dangerous. As soon as it begins to appear, Yggdrasil begins to drain the whole field of water, Yggdrasil can drain a whole ocean of water in a matter of seconds, and store the water inside it, this will make all techniques using watter, close to useless, and transform the whole area into a barren wasteland. If Yggdrasil is not fed with water for a turn, it will rot and disappear extremely fast, if Yggdrasil disappears, it will release all the water stored inside it, transforming the whole area into a great ocean.
Notes:
• Can only be used once
• Because of the energy this jutsu takes, the user can't use S-ranked and above jutsus the turn after this jutsu is used.

Declined OP, do not resubmit

Name: Viking Style – Berserker Rage = Baikingusutairu – bāsākāreiji
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique requires for the user to eat a special mix of mushrooms, which will enable him to enter a state of mind called the berserker rage, the effect of the mushrooms takes a turn to kick in, but when they do, they completely remove all sense of pain from the user, and allows him to ignore any strain on the body, the effect lasts for a while, but when they wear off, the side effects will be a hard headache, that will make all Genjutsu techniques harder to perform.
Notes:
• The effect lasts for three turns after the effect kicks in.
• The headache lasts for the rest of the battle.

Declined, to vague on its ability give more information on how it effects the user

Name: Viking Style – Endless Rage = Baikingusutairu - mugen no ikari
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique gives the user a great boost of power, with the cost of death. The user focuses a great amount of chakra, and eats a special mix of mushrooms, then the user uses chakra to transport the mushrooms through the body way faster than usual, thereby making the effect of the mushrooms kick in almost instantly. While doing this, the user focuses chakra into their brain, and uses chakra manipulation to force the brain into releasing great amounts of adrenaline, way higher amounts than a regular adrenaline rush. The adrenaline will combine with the mushrooms, and force the user into entering a state of mind called Endless Rage. While under influence of the mix, the user is completely immune to any form of pain and strains on the body, the user will increase his physical strength a great deal, and he will release extreme amounts of energy, that will allow him to move with 3 gate speed. The user will almost be impossible to kill, and will only stop when his body is completely destroyed this comes at a price though. While in this state, the user is unable to use Genjutsu and elemental Ninjutsu, since his chakra flow is way to irregular, and he will die when the effect of the mushroom wears off.
Notes:
• The effect of the adrenaline/mushrooms lasts for 3 turns.
• The user dies on the fourth turn after this is used.
• Gives a +20 damage to all Taijutsu and regular Ninjutsu attacks.
• Cannot be used by any kind of clones.
• Can only be used once.

Declined, do not resubmit

Resubmitting;

(Suiton: Tobikomigouben Gufuu) Water Release: Plungepool Tornado.
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defence/attack
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: 100
Description: The user will create a votex of water either around themselves or there opponent combining there water chakra and earth chakra. This would would look like a tornado shape of water with rocks and boulders in due to the earth chakra, though due to the high speed rotation of the tornado, it would look like a giant mud vortex.
Note: Can only be used once.
Note: No A-Ranked or above in this turn or next turn.
Note: 20 Damage to the user itself.

Approved

Name: Wood release: Viking Style – Rise of Asgaard = Mokuton: Baikingusutairu - Asgaard no taitō
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: N/A (35 damage to the user)
Description: The user performs 8 handseals and slams his hands against the ground, releasing extreme amounts of chakra as he makes contact, doing so, the user makes the entire city of Asgaard rise up from the ground in wooden form, the city is complete, with walls watchtowers and a great hall. The whole city is made of heartwood, (the hardest type of tree) and is infused with the users chakra, the city is about 3x3 kilometers big. The user is able to make the whole city sink down into the ground again, by performing 6 handseals and using 40 chakra, this counts as a seperated S-ranked Mokuton jutsu.
Notes:
• Because of the giant strain on the body, the user cannot use B-ranked and above techniques for three turns, after this turn.
• It takes about 15 seconds for the city to fully appear.
• it's not required for the user to have his hands on the ground, after slamming his hands against the ground.
• Can only be used once.
• The user receives 35 damage because of the strain this jutsu puts on the body.

Approved

Name: Viking Style – Berserker Rage = Baikingusutairu – bāsākāreiji
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique requires for the user to eat a special mix of mushrooms which act like a drug and, paralyze his Nerves/senses and will enable him to enter a state of mind called the berserker rage. The effect of the mushrooms takes a turn to kick in, but when they do, they completely remove all sense of pain from the user, and allows him to ignore any strain on the body, the effect lasts for a while, but when they wear off, the side effects will be a hard headache, that will make all Genjutsu techniques harder to perform.
Notes:
• The effect lasts for three turns after the effect kicks in.
• The headache lasts for the rest of the battle.

Approved

New:

Raiton: Wairudo Ikazuchi - Lightning Release: Wild Thunder.
Type: Offensive, Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user quickly release a Great Amount of Rai Chakra throughout his whole body, sending out a lethal Shockwave of Lightning around the user so intense that everything above, underground and around the user in for Short Range get's destroyed by the Intense Thunder which Rushes outwards from the Users body.
~Notes: Can only be used twice.
It takes under a mere second to release it, and the burst is over when the Second is gone, which means this happens extremely fast.
Can only be taught by Gobi Gobletsson.

Declined, needs better restrictions

Mokuton: Bakuhatsuteki - Wood Release: Explosive
Rank: E-Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 05-50
Damage Points: 10-90
Description: After the user have used a Mokuton Jutsus he may use this Jutsu. The user slams his palms together with great force releasing a Great amount of Chakra (Depends on the Rank of the Mokuton Jutsu he used earlier.) into the Mokuton Jutsu, causing the Wood to Explode damaging everything nearby.
The Rank on this jutsu depends on the Rank of the used Mokuton Jutsu, for an example: I use a D-Ranked Mokuton Jutsu this also counts as a D-Ranked Jutsu.
-Notes:
-Can only be used thrice per battle.
-Can only be taught by Gobi Gobletsson.

Declined, needs sorting out how can you have a technique that goes up to Forbidden ranked and have two time usage and explain it more on the applying the explosive chakra into the wood does it require close range contact first ?

McAfeezy · Apr 25, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton Houmen: Moyoushi Kumo)-Lightning Release: Gathering Clouds

Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will gather a tremendous amount of raiton and regular chakra, then release them into the atmosphere. The user will then manipulate the chakra,s causing clouds to form. These clouds are made purely out of the users chakra. These clouds are filled with lightning, ready to strike down. These clouds are also used for a basis jutsu, to set up for other jutsu.
Note:Takes 1 turn for clouds to form
Note:Can be blown away by a powerful enough wind jutsu
Note:Clouds will stay for 5 turns
Note:Usable 3 times a battle
Note:Must be taught by McAfeezy or Darui101

(Suiton Houmen: Toku "Of" No Japanese Meaning Mizu)-Water Release: Shield of Water

Type: Defensive
Rank:S
Range:Close
Chakra Cost:55
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user makes one handseal while raining or by a water source, the user will then manipulate the rain or water, causing a giant, concentrated shield of water that protects them. The user can move the shield from left, right, up, and down.
Note:Must be raining or a large water source nearby in order to perform, because of the size
Note: Usable 1 time per battle
Note: Can only be moved while handseal is still in place
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy or Darui101

(Doton Houmen: Kyuusha Hanka)-Earth Release: Stable Shoes

Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:15 (-15 for every turn active)
Damage Points:30 (+10 for every turn active)
Description:The user will make a row of 4 handseals, then place their hand onto the ground releasing their doton chakra into the ground under the opponent. The user will then manipulate the earth under the opponent, making the earth creep up to their ankles, encasing them in earth, hindering them from moving. Every turn the Earth will continue up on the opponent at a rate of 1 foot per turn, until it encases them fully.
Note: The opponent can wet the earth, allowing them to crumble the earth.
Note: Takes 6 turns to become fully encased in earth
Note: Can only be used 3 times a battle
Note: Must be touching floor with hand
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy or Darui101

(Doton Houmen: Maruishi Rakka)-Earth Release: Boulder Drop

Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Like Earth Release: Mud Fall, the user gathers their doton chakra into the air above the opponent. Then the user creates an opening in the sky, and creates a large boulder, which they drop onto the opponent.
Note: Usable 2 times a battle
Note: Boulder is 20 meters across
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy or Darui101

(Raiton Houmen: Raikou Yubi)- Lightning Release: Lightning Finger

Type:Offensive/Defensive
Rank:B
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description:The user will gather raiton chakra into one of their fingers. Then the user will lift their finger up and point it, releasing the pure lightning from their hand. If hit by this, the opponent will become paralyzed for 1 turn.
Note: Have to be holding arm out, in oder to let lightning flow
Note: Paralyzes on contact
Note: Usable 3 times per battle
Note: Must be taught by McAfeezy or Darui101

I do understand that I can't use these until I reach the proper rank, that's why McAfeezy will be teaching these, because we are the co-makers. He will be teaching them until I reach the proper rank, and he will be using them also, along with me, when I reach the proper rank.

All declined, whether co-producer or not your only allowed to submit to your current rank for these to be submitted now you would need McAfeezy as he is of rank to submit

Ryuji · Apr 25, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Ryuji said:
(Kuzuri Bijutsu:Kuzuri No Houkou)-Wolverine Arts:Wolverine's Roar

Type: Offensive/Deffensive
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (10 to the user)
Description: While in Wolverine Mode the user will focus the chakra given to him by Kyo or Kuro, inside his vocal cords and with it increase the vibration created by them, this will cause the flow of air to be more modulated so by trying to imitate a roar the user will actually do one, but of course the roar being used with chakra it's not a simple roar anymore, it has enough power and pressure to cancel out an attack directed to the user but this only works with any jutsu with an intagible for or a semi-intagible form (lightning, fire, water wind) and of the B-rank or below. This jutsu has also a secondary effect, the roar can protect the user of an attack in short range, but the sound the roar creates can reach the opponent even in long range and hurt his/her ears.
Note: This technique cuts the lenght of Wolverine Mode by one.
Note: No techniques that use the mouth can be used in the same turn this technique is used and after it as well.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.

||Approved||

(Guren:Hōō Ken)-Flame Lotus: Phoenix Sword

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Natsu will channel fire chakra to Sacrifar to coat it's blade in flames then he can launch them at the opponent. However Natsu has 3 ways of launching the flames.
1) By doing a horizontal swing the flames will take the form a a huge arc of flames.
2) By doing a vertical swing the flames will take the form of a huge fireball.
3) By doing a 360° spin Natsu will create a circle of fire around himself that grows bigger while it travels.
Note: No other fire technique in the same turn this technique was used and the next turn aswell.
Note: No S or A-rank technques in the next turn excpet for water techniques.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.

||Approved||

(Ryu no Heki Oujou)-Dragon's False Death

Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbbiden
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: All chakra left.
Damage Points: 100
Description: When being about to loose consciousness from an attack of the opponent the user will use the remaing amount of chakra to stay conscious for a short period of time. While still having his sword in one of his hands with the hilt pointing at the opponent, the user will fake a faint in front of the opponent making him think he already won, but while falling down the user will use the the tip of the sword to propel himself forward to break the mind of the opponent and inmediatly strike the opponent in his/her stomach or back (depending to his/her location) with the hilt, then spin around and attack with a vertical or horizontal strike with the sword or other kenjutsu attack.
Note: After this technique is used the user looses consciousness and looses the battle.
Note: This technique can only be used as a last resort.

||Pending|| Seems unnecessary to use all of one's chakra over a basic kenjutsu feint

(Ryu no Heki Oujou)-Dragon's False Death

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: While still having his sword in one of his hands with the hilt pointing at the opponent, the user will fake a faint in front of the opponent making him think he already won, but while falling down the user will use the the tip of the sword to propel himself forward to break the mind of the opponent and inmediatly strike the opponent in his/her stomach or back (depending to his/her location) with the hilt, then spin around and attack with a vertical or horizontal strike with the sword or other kenjutsu attack. This technqiue is best used after defending against an attack in wich the opponent has lost sight of the user making the faint more realistic after ''taking the hit''.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: No Taijutsu or Kenjutsu in the next turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji.

~Declined~ I don't really understand what you're saying here. If you're pointing the hilt towards the opponent it means or you're holding your sword with a reversed handgrip or your holding the sword high in the air so that it's pointing backwards or you're standing with your back towards the opponent. Whatever case it is I don't understand how you're sword is going to propel yourself forward as in either of this cases it would probably make you go slower than normal.

Resubmiting this:

Ryuji said:
(Katon:Hi Nettto)-Fire Net
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: By chanelling fire chakra into their dominant hand the user shoots a fire net at the opponent attached to the finger tips by little streams of fire to trap the opponent and causing 1st degree burns.
Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji

~ Approved ~

Into this:

(Katon:Hi Nettto)-Fire Net

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will chanell fire chakra in his dominant hand or both hands, and then release it in the form of a net of chakra that bursts into flames as soon it comes out; the net is attached to the users finger tips by little streams of normal chakra. The net if used with one hand has the appropriate size to trap and burn a few opponents (2-4) but if this jutsu is used with both hand the net can trap a giant summoning, however the chakra cost will be doubled.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: No other fire or any other technique that needs hand seals can be used in the same turn this technique was used.
Note: If used with both hands the user can't use S-rank techniques for the following 2 turns.
Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji.

Approved

Droping this:

Ryuji said:
(Katon:Kakuhan)-Fire Style:Whip

Type: Ofensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user will create a stream that takes to form of a whip of chakra in the dominant hand, then the user will spit fire to the whip engulfing it in flames. This whip can be used in a normal fashion way but of course causing burns to the opponent.

Approved

For this:

(Katon:Urufu Pakku)-Fire Style:Wolf Pack

Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing six hand seals the user will spit out a large flame in front of him, then by doing the Dog seal the flame will divide itself into several much smaller flames (8) that take the form of a wolf. The wolves can then rush at the opponent and spread around the area to attack the opponent from different directions.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: No fire techniques for the next 2 turns and no S-ranks techniques for 1 turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Ryuji.

Declined, technique already exists

Updating/Re-submiting this two:
-Summoning boss change-
-New Wolverine-

Ryuji said:
(Kuzuri Kuchyose no Jutsu:Kuro)-Wolverine Summoning Jutsu:Kuro

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Kuro is a very good friend of Kyo the boss of the Wolverine contract however they constantly figth with each other to test their strength but most of the time they end up arguing or just making up silly excuses to cover their mistakes, Kuro is a very big Wolverine his the same size as Kyo and wears a black vest with the fire kanji in white on it's back just like Kyo's vest he also has a very thick redish fur that keeps him very warm in cold climates and lets him withstand being hit by only 1 Ice jutsu wich is special feature is to freez a target but Ice Jutsus that pierces will hurt him. He also posesses very sharp fangs and claws with the size of an average tree. Kuro has incredible strength a very well signature of Wolverines since they can take down enemies with twice their size but since he is really big it's strength is just os normal as other summonings. Kuro has a Fire affinity just like Kyo's wich lets him use fire jutsu from B-rank and below however he can only used 3 jutsu withing the time he's summoned. He also has a very powerfull roar that can blow away the opponent or stop a C-rank (except any lightning or fire jutsu) jutsu from the targeting him or his master.If by any chance Kuro is summoned while Kyo is already summoned they can spit from their mouth a barrage of big fireballs at the opponent with the strength of a S-rank jutsu, however once this skill it's used Kuro and Kyo will be dispersed and the user can't summoned more wolverines for the rest of the battle and no S-rank jutsus for 4 turns.
Note: Kuro will disappear after 3 turns.
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Must posses the Wolverine contract taugth by Ryuji.

~ Approved ~

(Kuzuri Kuchyose no Jutsu:Kyo)-Wolverine Summoning Jutsu:Kyo

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Kyo is the Boss of the Wolverine Contract, he is very wise and strong wolverine however he lacks manners when talking to someone who isn't his master or while fighting/talking to Kuro. Kyo wears a black vest with the fire kanji in white on it's back, he posses very sharp fangs and hidden claws with the size of an average tree and his the same size as Katsuyu. He has a black-redish thick fur wich protects him from very cold climates and lets him withstand being hit by only 1 Ice jutsu wich is special feature is to freez a target but Ice Jutsus that pierces will hurt him. Kyo has a fire affinity that lets him used fire jutsus from B-ranks ad below however he can only used 4 jutsu withing the time his summoned. He also has a very sharp sense of smell that lets him locate his target or recognize his summoner but he can only use this skill once withing the time his summoned. If by any chance Kyo is summoned while Kuro is already summoned they can spit from their mouth a barrage of big fireballs at the opponent with the strength of a S-rank jutsu, however once this skill it's used Kyo and Kuro will be dispersed and the user can't summoned more wolverines for the rest of the battle and no S-rank jutsus for 4 turns.
Note: Kyo will disappear after 3 turns.
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Must posses the Wolverine contract taugth by Ryuji.

~ Approved ~

(Kuzuri Kuchyose no Jutsu:Kyo)-Wolverine Summoning Technique:Natsu

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Natsu is the Boss of the Wolverine Contract, he is very carefree and reckless much like his owner. Natsu wears a black vest with the fire kanji in white on it's back, he posses very sharp fangs and hidden claws with the size of an average tree and his the same size as Katsuyu. He has thick red fur wich protects him from very cold climates and lets him withstand being trapped by only 1 Ice jutsu wich is special feature is to freeze a target but Ice Jutsus that pierces will hurt him. Natsu has a fire affinity that lets him use fire jutsus from A-rank and below but insted of using hand seals he has to shout the name of the jutsu before using it. He also has a very sharp sense of smell that lets him locate his target or recognize his summoner. He also has a very powerfull roar that can blow away the opponent or stop a C-rank (except any lightning or fire jutsu) jutsu from the targeting him or his master but this ability can only be used once per battle.
Note: Natsu can stay in the field for 4 turns.
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Must have signed the Wolverine Contract held by Ryuji.

Declined, shouting rather than hand seals no the user generally calls out the name after the hand seals -_- so sort that out

(Kuzuri Kuchyose no Jutsu:Kuro)-Wolverine Summoning Technique:Aki

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Aki is a female wolverine the size of Katsuyu, she is very kind-hearted and very eager to help those close to her whenever possible. She has thick scarlet fur, sharp fangs and very powerfull claws. Aki has a wind affinity wich lets her use wind techniques up to A-rank and for techniques that need hand seal she ''charges'' up the techniques in her mouth the same amount of time it will take to perform the hand seals. Aki has a very sharp sense of hearing, being able to hear the sligtest sound and as a special ability when her master has been injured, she can make a gentle purr and instantly place her master in a genjutsu that places him to sleep for I turn, while in this sleep Aki transfer her chakra to him and with is she can halved the damage done to him, but this will cost her to dissapear in cloud of smoke from the battle field.
Note: Aki can stay in the field for 4 turns.
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Must have signed the Wolverine Contract held by Ryuji.

Declined, elaborate on the ability placing him under genjutsu

Migualon J.J. · Apr 25, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Kabe No Ishi) Earth Release: Wall Of Stones

Type: Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Describtion: The user makes 3 hand signs, during this time he sends his chakra into the place where he wants the wall to rise. The wall of stones rises up in instant on place where he send his chakra. The wall is masive and is wider than Intense Pain and can resist to Wind-Fire technique of Kakuzu´s level.
Note: Can only be used 3 times in battle
Note: User can´t use any Water Techniques in next 2 turns
Note: Can only be taught by Migualon J.J.

sorry dont get how your comparing it to techniques of kakuzu's level O_O

(Doton: Koumaru No Ishi) Earth Release: Balls Of Stones

Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra Cost: 40 (+20 more for each 2 additional balls)
Damage: 80
Describtion: The user makes 4 hand signs and than he focuses his chakra into his hands and he launches 1 ball of stones from each hand at his opponent whose speed can be increased by Wind Techniques of B-rank and lower. This technique can be used with Hurricane Fist which destroys balls and makes small stones which will fly at high speed at opponent with same strength.
Note: Can only be used 3 times in battle.
Note: User can´t use any Water Technique in next 4 turns.
Note: Can only be taught by Migualon J.J.

Approved

McKnockout · Apr 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kyousei Doton No Jutsu) – Greater Earth Style Technique

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Descripton: Creates strong pillars, tools and shields made out of earth.

Approved

(Doton: Kongouseki Fuusa) – Earth Diamond Blockade

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing a single handseal, the user summons a massive amount of earth and forms it into a defensive barrier (wall or dome) of interlacing columns of earth/rock either around, in front, above their head, etc (in any form as the user wishes). Using mastery of charka control, the user adds chakra compression upon the sediments and minerals of the summoned earth and turns the defensive barrier i.e. the interlacing columns, into substances akin to diamonds.
*Note: Only useable 4 times per battle and must wait for 1 turn to use again.
*Note: This defensive barrier is NOT composed of true diamonds but rather dense substances of earth similar to diamond, thus an attack that is denser/harder than the barrier can penetrate it.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

Declined, do not resubmit

(Doton: Kyokan Tsunami) – Giant Earth Tsunami

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40 (+10 for additional wave)
Damage Points: 80 (+10 for additional wave)
Description: The user concentrates a large amount of chakra, which he releases into the ground (stomping of foot or slamming of hands) after performing a series of handseals, which creates a wave of earth that travels directly towards the target (linear motion) from where the user is standing. The wave of earth is quite high, towering up above the ground several metres (about 6-8 metres) and has all kinds of earth minerals within it. The user can choose to stomp/slam the ground one more time (without handseals), to create an additional wave of earth. This technique creates a path of destruction in its motion; if the opponent is underground, the wave(s) of earth will fatally crush him, whereas, if he is above ground, the wave(s) will brutally smash into him causing severe internal injuries.
*Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
*Note: Only B rank earth jutsu can be used next turn
*Note: The user takes 10 damage because of the physical strain on his body
*Note: A smaller version of this jutsu, equivalent to B rank (25CC/40(+5)DP), can be used 2 times per battle.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

Declined, do not resubmit

(Katon: Kasai Soujou) – Fire Manipulation

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user concentrates his Katon chakra throughout the air causing any already created fire to fall under the user’s manipulation. Once this jutsu is in affect, the user can control the fire in any way he chooses.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.
*Note: Fire must already be created.
*Note: Last for 2 turns.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

Declined, give a rank limit it can control up 2

(Fuuton: Fuzei Seppaku) – Air Pressurisation

Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A or 60 (Only if Katon jutsus are prematurely exploded)
Description: The user concentrates his Fuuton chakra throughout the air and using mastery of charka control, the user manipulates the air pressure (number of air molecules) of a chosen area. This technique can be used to either decrease or increase air pressure. Decreasing the air pressure of a certain area e.g. in the location of flames, essentially robs the fire of oxygen thereby completely diminishing the jutsu (only up to A-rank Fire jutsus). Furthermore, by decreasing the air pressure of a certain area also decreases the degree of air resistance of that area which can benefit the user when using projectiles i.e. increased speed. Whereas, increasing the air pressure at the location of fire jutsus rapidly increases the availability of oxygen which can cause it to violently and prematurely explode while it is being initiated (only up to A-rank Fire jutsus).
*Note: Increasing air pressure can only be used once per battle.
*Note: Decreasing air pressure can only be used once per battle.
*Can only be taught by McKnockout

Declined, do not resubmit

The Seven-Scaled boy · Apr 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Kyojin betabeta arikui ) Water style: Great sticky Anteater
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long (short-mid if sent crashing)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 0 (40 if it stabs you with it's tounge/80 if it crashes on you)
Describtion: The user will concentrate his suiton chakra into his mouth and mold it in a quick row of handseals. Upon doing the row of handseals, the user will spit great quantities of sticky liquid (much like the syrup capturing technique, only that in a much larger volume) and apply shape manipulation in order for it to take the shape of an anteater. By manipulating his own suiton chakra, the user will be able to freely manipulate the animal, extending it's long and sticky toung in seemingly any angle and direction (being it a manifestation of the user's chakra not an actual animal/monster it does not need to follow any rules related to anatomy). In a single, extra handseal, the user may send this huge anteater crashing onto the oppoenent(s).
Note: May only be used twice per battle.
Notes: Any bugs, including kikkiachu will that are caught in it's tounge are unable to escape.
Note: No suiton techs the same turn.

~Approved~

(Futon/Katon: Makuro Downbursto) - Wind/Fire style: Macro Downburst
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 90 (-10 to user)
Damage: 120
Description: Basing upon the real life phenomenon, the user will release enorumous quantities of futon chakra ,mixed with a appropiate proportion of katon chakra in order to generate heated air, into the clouds on top of the battlefield while making a row of 5 handseals. After waiting a single turn, the user may send down an enormous, bursting column of his own futon chakra in either a Dry Macro Downburst (thunder clouds) or a Wet Macro Downburst (rain clouds) depending on the clouds that are above the field, slicing and shredering everything on it's path while at the very same time generating a sheer drop of temperature (almost -50°C during the downburst). The user will take damage for conjuring this technique, but he will be unaffected by it, since it is his own chakra.
Notes: Only once per battle.
Notes: No more futon jutsus for the next 5 turns.
Notes: Cannot be controlled not put-off by the effects of wind sword of NBs seven swordsmen of the mist due to intense power.
Notes: For yielding a wet downburst, there should be clouds of the likes of chakra sensing rain. While for the dry variant, there should be thunder clouds like the ones setting kirin up.
Notes: If the wet variant is present, the jutsu will gain quite some resitance to fire jutsus of its same rank.

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~Declined, do not resubmit~

(Futon: Ou-Kama way) - Wind style: Great sickle way
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: Varying (max 60)
Description: The user will, in a single handseal, release amounts of molded futon chakra into the sourroudings of it's opponent. Applying shape manipulation, he'll create numerours blades/sickles/slashing weapons, all with the sheer sharpness of the wind style, poiting towards the opponent. Unfortunately for him, the blades are constantly rotating around him, invisble to the naked eye or unexpirienced sensing, until they are released at great speeds towards them.
Notes: No other wind jutsus for the same turn.
Notes: May only be used thrice per battle.
Notes: The opponent, when the blades are created, feels a slight wind current.
Note: Doujutsu users can clearly see the technique

~Approved~

(Fuuinjutsu: Chi no gisei) - Sealing tehcnique: Blood sacrifice
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage: 90
Description: The user will slightly slash the surface of his hands. As blood gushes outside of the slight wounds, the user will make a full 10 handseal row. As hitting the last handseal, he slams his hands on the ground releasing a complex sealing formula in a circle with mid-range radius from the user. The user must stay completely concentrated on the jutsu to keep the seal stable. The seal will select, a different a chakra different than the user and will "select" that chakra and make anything infused with it turn blood red. Then, in 5 complete seconds, the selected chakra will all be drained from its location and into the user; thus leaving it exhausted will revitalizing the user.
Notes: once per battle.
Notes: The jutsu will break if the user ever loses concentration in it (hit by a jutsu, a punch, genjutsu, tools) .
Notes: The "revitalizing part" has no real effect, perhaps, only, replenish the chakra used in the seal.

(Hachimon waza: Kugi Panchi) - Eight Inner gates art: Nail punch
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-Forbidden (depending on the number of strikes and gates opened)
Range: Short-Long (The punch must connect of course, but due to the user's speed it can seemingly be used at any range)
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: at the least 20 , increases with number of punches.
Description: The user will strike multiple, almost simultaneous, times an area of the opponents body. The damage will spread inwards the opponent. The punches are delivered so fast, that the opponent's body will react after the punching action ends accordingly to the strength, area and the strikes the user connected. The numbers of strikes vary but putting it bluntly:

1-5 hit can be used under the effects of first 3 gates or above (Opening, Healing, Life).
6-10 Hit can be used under the effects of the 3 next Gates or above (Pain, Limit, View).
11-14 hit can only be used under the effects of the Gate of Wonder or above.
15 hit can only be used under the effects of the final gate, the Gate of Death.

Notes: Any use of 11 and above hits will leave the arm the user connected the punches with unable to deliver strikes for the rest of the battle.
Notes: It can be used once per turn, for 3 turns only under the effects of the Eight Inner Gates.

~Both Declined, do not resubmit~

Tvqxeqlapcfr · Apr 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Custom Weapon:

Jigoku Kami (God of Hell)

~Leaving for caliburn~
~Declined~ you are making things way to difficult and vague. Apparantly your weapon can produce any kind of attack you make up on the spot, saying that it has to be practical is futile as what is practical is very subjective. On top of that you can mix all the charka natures between each other creating combo's. You're missing the point of a CW, this is just a vague mess

Custom Jutsu:

(Raiton: Jigoku no Tenshi)Lighting Release: Angels of Hell

~Declined, a lightning technique of same rank or above can also affect the bonding of this technique by overpowering it ~

Wind Release: Typhoon Tyrant (Futon: Taifū Tairanto)

~Approved~

Illusion Technique: Frenemies(Genjutsu: Tomoteki)

~Approved~

Illusion Technique: Painting Drip (Genjutsu: Kaiga Dorippu)

~Declined, how are you even administrating the damage ?~

Ushiro · Apr 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Honoo no Akuma)- Demon of Flames

Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80 (+5 to user each turn active) (+10 all to fire techniques below S-rank)
Description: The user covers his body with armor made of incredibly hot flame with a whitish color. There is a chakra membrane around the user, protecting him from most of the heat. The fire also heats and speeds up the user's blood which greatly increases his reaction speed, physical speed, and strength making his movements traceable only by a 3 tomoe sharingan. The armor can be manipulated through the air which allows the user to fly. While the armor is active, the user's skin is continually burnt by it. A normal ninja can only maintain this for 3 turns without taking serious damage.
-Usable once per battle
-Lasts up to 5 turns
-No A-rank or higher fire jutsu next turn
-No wind or water jutsu while this is active
-Can only be taught by Shin-Akira

~Declined, to many similar jutsu exists already~

(Kentō: Tetsu no Ishi)- Pugilism: Iron Will

Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user channels earth chakra through his arms to increase their durability, strength, and weight before striking the side of the opponent's head with a left hook followed by another hook to the body, breaking bones and damaging organs. Then the user moves past the opponent while uppercutting his body, lifting him before a downward punch to the back of his head drives him into the ground with enough force to create a fissure extending in a line which the opponent falls into.
-Usable 3 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Shin-Akira

~Declined, similar jutsu exists~

(Kentō: Seiteki Rasshu)- Pugilism: Static Rush

Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user channels lightning chakra into his limbs to increase his hand speed and foot speed by releasing energy with each step. When in range the opponent is attacked from every side with a barrage of punches that paralyze the muscles on contact. The user's speed creates afterimages that make it look like the opponent is fighting multiple people.
-Usable 3 times per battle
-Paralysis lasts for one turn
-Can only be taught by Shin-Akira

~Declined, no after images~

(Kentō: Dai Rei)- Pugilism: Over-Soul

Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 to restore the over-soul)
Damage: N/A (+20 to taijutsu and pugilism techniques)
Description: The user cloaks his body in chakra that resembles the user in a ghostly form. Similar to a shadow clone, the over-soul is a clone that is fused with the user to augment the user's speed, strength, and mental ability to that of two people. The over-soul can protect the user from attacks B-rank or lower and can be quickly regenerated with the user's chakra but it will count as a move.
-Usable twice per battle
-Lasts up to 4 turns
-Only Taijutsu and Pugilism techniques can be used
-Can only be taught by Shin-Akira

~Declined, do not resubmit~

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Sabinago)- Locust Summoning: Sabinago

Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: C-S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15 (+10 for every rank above C)
Damage: 30 (+20 for every rank above C)
Description: The user bites his thumb and wipes the blood on a special tattoo located on his neck before holding out his hands to summon the Sabinago, plague of the desert. (# summoned: C=50 B=100 A=150 S=200) They are a swarm of durable, yellow locusts each 1 ft in length that have an affinity for the fire element and, like all locusts, swiftly eat almost anything when they are hungry. They can produce flame from their bodies that can cause devestating damage if they are in a large swarm. Doing so does not harm them and they take damage from fire jutsu as though it was one rank less powerful. As they fly, their speed is the same as Lee without his weights on. They can be summoned a distance from the user up to mid-range.
-Can be summoned twice per battle
-Lasts up to 4 turns
-No locust summonings next turn
-Must have signed the locust contract

~Declined, remove the speed of rock lee without gates, they cant move that fast and also give a rank to thier fire ability and limit it as well as having i count towards one your 3 moves ~

Anduril · Apr 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

SUMMONING CONTRACT

Summoning Animal:RINGTAILS

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Scroll Owner: BANSHO TENIN
Other Users who have signed contract:
Summoning Boss if existing:MASTER SHIFU
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: SETO & GETO

CUSTOM JUTSU

(Kuchiyose no jutsu:Saiko no ringutēru-{Master Shifu})-Summoning jutsu:Oldest Ringtail-{Master Shifu}

Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After biting the thumb user slams his fist on the ground or anywhere as such and summons the oldest and the leader of the ringtails master shifu. Master shifu is a ringtail of the size of Gamabunta as all ringtails are Master shifu is not as strong physically but he overcomes this disadvantage by wielding a strong and indestructible staff over which he has untold control.Also Master Shifu is extremely quick making it harder for taijutsu user to land a punch on him. Master shifu knows 3 elements though he is proficient in the use of wind and fire he uses the third element lightning only to channel it through his staff.He is also good at using his ringed tail in order to protect him against taijutsu attacks. He always has a long cord of grass in his mouth and wears long black robes he acts old and tired beforehand only to enter the battle and show an unparalleled vigour.

-can be summoned twice in the battle
-remains on the field for 6 turns
-uses fire and wind element upto S rank.
-knows the lightening element only enough to channel Raiton chakra through his staff.
-no other ringtail summon can remain on the battle field with shifu.

(Kuchiyose no jutsu:Chimei-tekina futago-{Seto & Geto})-Summoning jutsu: Deadly twins-{Seto & Geto}

Type:Roman"]Summoning
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: These two seto and geto are the two of the youngest twins in the ringtails village of sonaya known to be extremely gifted at working in pairs they have been know to be extremely good thieves while hardly being noticed as they nick weapons from the opponent. Also they attach to my body while Seto attaches to my hand turning into three 8 inch long talons Geto attaches to my chest forming a vest around my chest. These 2 when joined with my body prevent me from falling under any genjutsu since they release there chakra into my body as soon as they feel me falling under a genjutsu. These two are similar in size to normal ringtails.

-These two stay on the field untill the user needs them
-There moves to steal from an enemy and to form the talon and vest will be counted as a jutsu which i will post here as well

(Ninjutsu:Buki konbo-{Seto & Geto})-Ninjutsu:Weapon combo-{Seto & Geto}

Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: They attach to my body while Seto attaches to my hand turning into 8 inch long talons Geto attaches to my chest forming a vest around my chest. These 2 when joined with my body prevent me from falling under any genjutsu since they release there chakra into my body as soon as they feel me falling under a genjutsu.

-Seto is a wind user thus in the talon form he allows me to use wind jutsu upto A rank without handseals
-Geto is a earth style user he forms a steel cover to my body that protects me from jutsus upto B rank and prevents sharp weapons from affecting me.
-Steel cover is not affected by lightening like normal earth jutsus
-kept in the activated state until the two seto and geto are on the field.
-cannot be used in the same turn as robinhood style summoning
-can only be used after the two twins seto and geto have been summoned.

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This is what seto forms into but just one not a pair (just like monkey king enma turns into a giant staff for hiruzen)

(Kuchiyose no jutsu:Robinhood style-{Seto & Geto})-Summoning jutsu: Robinhood style-{Seto & Geto}

Type: Summoning
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This type of summoning summons the two twins Seto and Geto in such a way that while seto is summoned around the opponents body he moves with unreal speed around the enemy's body and then bites the opponents hand that is holding a weapon releasing venom and causing the opponent to drop the weapon also he takes away any weapon the opponent might possess as the opponent drops his weapon or Seto removes them from his body then he quickly tags the weapon and then Geto summons the tagged weapons to there Ringtails village of Sonaya thus depriving the opponent of weapons and then Geto reappears on the battlefield

-Can be used only once in a battle
-cannot use any other summon in that turn
-cannot use the weapon combo in the same turn
-once they return to the village the weapon reappears on the battle field.

All the above jutsus can only be learned from Bansho tenin.

~Sorry not even gonna bother checking with all that coding clean it up please so it more easier to view as your making my job now very complicated ~

Atrocitus · Apr 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Senpū Gigei : Amatsukei | Whirlwind Arts : Heavenly Command

Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: By using ones chakra, the user can fully control their lances/spears which hover around the user and are connected to the users thoughts. This technique is similar to "(Soushuuha) - Manipulate Advancing Blades" in that the user can control all the lances and they hover around the user. As long as the lances/spears are within short - mid range the user can manipulate them, but they can still be thrown to long range. These spears are tied to the users chakra network and thus as long as they are within short - Mid range they can move and have chakra sent to them for techniques.

-Can control only up to Six Lances/Spears at one time.
-Lasts for the rest of the match

~Approved~

Senpū Gigei : Amatsuhou | Whirlwind Arts : Heavenly Retribution

Rank: B-S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20-40
Damage: 40-80
Description: By condensing ones chakra into a lance or spear (this can mean condensing the chakra into a already existing spear or by making a spear of pure chakra) one can use it as a powerful projectile that can pierce through other techniques depending on the amount of chakra condensed. To make a pure chakra spear the user moulds the weapon in one hand which when mastered can take two seconds to form, to charge an existing spear with chakra the spear only needs to be in short range.

-Only up to two spears can be charged at one time.
-The spear won't stop a another technique when they clash it will go right through it (dependent on rank).
-The chakra lasts for three turns.
-Thrice per battle (for A rank), Twice for (S rank).

~Approved~

Senpū Gigei : Amatsuengo | Whirlwind Arts : Heavenly Protection

Rank: A/S
Type: Defence
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 30/40
Damage: 60/80
Description: The user charges his spear with chakra and thrusts with the spear. On the users command he can activate the chakra to produce a strong chakra shield around the point of the spear which can block ninjutsu up to it's rank. This protects from frontal attacks.
-Only twice per battle for A rank (Once for S rank)

~Approved~

Fuuinjutsu: Tengoku no Kaidan | Sealing Technique : Stairway to Heaven

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30 (+5 per platform)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user writes on two tags the kanji for "Platform" and places them on the bottom of his shoes. These tags stay on the user and are activated at the users will (only need to be posted on the users bio). The user activates the tags (by doing the tiger hanseal and channeling chakra to the tags) And when he wants he can make a small chakra platform under each foot which gives the user a base to stand on thus allowing the user to stand in midair or use it to run like they're on steps to dodge a jutsu. If the user wants to end the mode early he just needs to do the tiger seal again.

-No Fuuinjutsu for the duration of the mode.
-Twice per battle
-Lasts up to three turns (basically it's a mode, so within the three turns the user can make platforms)

~Declined, do not resubmit~

Hattori Hanzo said:
Raiton : Kami no Sabaki | Lightning Release : Judgement of God
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Mostly used to destroy long range targets, the user focuses a large cluster of electricity into the sky, which travels to above his target, then he uses it to send a huge and powerful lightning bolt crashing down from the sky, deep frying said unlucky target.
This can also be fired from the hand but requires 8 handseals when fired by that method, and can be fired from two hands but requires 16 handseals and count as two moves.

- Thrice per battle
-No raiton just over A rank on the next turn (for two turns if fired from both hands)

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Declined, do not resubmit

Raiton : Raijin | Lightning Release : Thunder God
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A (+10 to Raiton jutsu)(+10 to Taijutsu)
Description: This form is a sign of one who has complete mastery over lightning and allows them to ascend to a true thunder god. The user will do a set of 20 handseals during which a lightning storm will form above the user, then he will clap his hands together creating a loud thunder-like boom and causing the lightning storm to strike the user with a giant bolt of lightning causing a bright flash blinding all who perceive the transformation. After the flash the user will be revealed in his new form, a large Raijin looking sumo wrestler pulsating with electrical energy and power. In this form the user is restricted to only using raiton based jutsu but is able to use them without handseals and with extra power. The user is completely immune to any sort of lightning and earth, but of course has a substantial weakness to wind. Being made of lightning increases his strength/endurance so that he can crush large boulders with his hands and will shock anybody who touches him. While in this mode certain jutsu open up to the user. He increases to the size that he can fit a normal human in his hand.

-Lasts for four turns
-Once per battle
-Once the mode ends the user will be unable to use any raiton based jutsu and will be restricted to A rank and under jutsu for the rest of the match.

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Declined, do not resubmit, to many lightning forms already made

Naruyari-ryu : Rasutosutando | Thundering Spear Style : Last Stand
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will do five handseals and send his doton chakra into ground and create a dome around himself that is created from the hardest minerals in the ground creating a near impenetrable 360 shield laced with his chakra (which prevents the opponent from using the earth of the dome or the earth beneath it). Once the dome has formed the user will wipe blood on his hand and place his hands on a side of the dome to summon an near unlimited amount of spears that form in the walls of the dome with the points pointing outwards (it looks like Gaara's sand dome but instead of spikes there are spears pointing outwards). Twice per battle the user can propel the spears outwards in all directions which have enough force to travel to long range (once fired more spears replace the fired ones). The user cannot not see out of the dome unless they have a dojutsu or ability that allows them to sense chakra or see through solid objects. The user can also fire kunais and/or other weapons instead of spears.

-Once per battle
-Dome lasts for up to two turns.
-Can fire the spears outwards two times per battle (doesn't count as a move)

Declined, give more restrictions and the earth dome wouldnt be near impenetrable as wind s rank could break it and lightning and wood so remove that section.

Naruyari-ryu : Arutemisu no basutabu | Thundering Spear Style : Artemis's Bath
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user charges his spear with water chakra and throws it within short to mid range of himself. Once planted in the ground the spear will use that chakra to draw in all available moisture in the ground and will create a large water supply which will be readily available to the user.

-Takes two turns to create a large water supply.
-Three times per battle.

Approved

Bashirisuku Āto : Bashirisuku Modo | Basilisk Arts : Basilisk Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80 (+15 to Taijutsu)
Description: After the user summons the Basilisk Elders, the left elder bites the user with a special toxin and sends their chakra into him this rapidly alters the users DNA and causes the user to go through a metamorphosis.

The users skin changes into Basilisk scales which makes the user impervious to Physical and Fire attacks up to A rank. The toxin greatly increases the users adrenaline production and distribution throughout the body and increases the blood flow and oxygen consumption, causing the user to gain enormous endurance and strength. The users muscles grow bigger giving massive strength (able to crush boulders) and gain speed that only 3rd tomoe can track (as his leg strength will greatly increase). Also the user gains unique senses, he can use his forked tongue to smell chakra (like how a snake can smell if prey/predators are nearby) and has heat sensors when it's dark.

After four turns the right elder bites the user giving them a antidote and will remove the chakra given which reverses the changes and returns the user to his original form, but will be left extremely tired and unable to continue. This mode causes the elders to stay on the field until this mode finishes, then they will disappear.

-Must have signed the Basilisk Contract
-Once per battle
-Lasts four turns
-Afterwards the user collapses from physical exhaustion and is unable to continue.
-Takes 20 seconds for the transformation to complete and during this 20 seconds, the user s body will be unable to move by himself, as he won't be able to control his body.

Declined, modes always take atleast minimum of 1 turn, and all other modes require that the user remains perfectly still, so edit this in a way that goes along with that restriction.

I added in the parts you wanted me to put in the quote and the stuff from our talk on msn.

Bashirisuku Modo | Basilisk Mode

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: 80 (+15 to Taijutsu)
Description: After the user summons the Basilisk Elders, the left elder bites the user with a special toxin which rapidly alters the users DNA and causes the user to go through a metamorphosis. This toxin in potent amounts would overwork the prey's body and cause them to die, but in a very small and dilute dose it can be used to enhance an organism's body but would still ultimately harm the organism. The users skin changes into Basilisk scales which makes the user impervious to Physical and Fire attacks up to A rank. The toxin greatly increases the users adrenaline production and distribution throughout the body and increases the blood flow and oxygen consumption, causing the user to gain enormous endurance and strength. The users muscles grow bigger giving massive strength (able to crush boulders) and gain speed that only MS can track (as his leg strength will greatly increase). Also the user gains unique senses, he can use his forked tongue to smell chakra [only up to mid range](like how a snake can smell if prey/predators are nearby). After four turns the right elder bites the user giving him the antidote which will reverse the changes and returns the user to his original form, but will be left extremely tired (the shifting and toxin causes bodily damage and causes the user to be unable to continue). This mode causes the elders to stay on the field until this mode finishes, then they will disappear.

-Must have signed the Basilisk Contract
-Once per battle
-Lasts four turns
-Afterwards the user collapses from physical exhaustion and is unable to continue.
-Takes 1 turn for the transformation to complete and during this turn, the user will be unable to move by himself, as he won't be able to control his body.
-This mode causes the elders to stay on the battlefield until the mode ends and during this time the user cannot summon or have any other summons on the field.

~Approved~

Magic.. · Apr 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Seto Kaiba said:
(Summoning Technique|cracker) (Kuchiyose no Jutsu|cracker)
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: N/A
Chakra cost:80
Damage points :40
Description: cracker is an octopus,at the same size with gamabumta.his whole body including his eight hands are covered with spikes making taijutsu and other sharp object useless, all eight hands are able to level any wall,also could be used to immobilize a summon of the same size and his able to shot off the spikes on his body,his also able to spray ink that can blind a target at mid-range from his mouth .he has an affinity for 2 element which is water and earth because He has always been around them ,He can use both up to S rank.He has an incredible defense and can easily defend against high leveled jutsu(A-Rank) but can stop only 3 S-ranked jutsu before poofed away .like every other octopus he is slow but his hands are not.
Note:
-Can be summoned once per battle and stays for 4 turns
-Must be the only summon the user has on the field
-Must have signed the octopus contract.
-Since he has an Earth affinity he is weak to lightning based attacks
-Target stays blind for one turn when hit with the ink spray
-The ink counts as 1 out of 3 move used.

~Approved~

(Summoning Technique|Demon) (Kuchiyose no Jutsu|Demon)
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: close-mid
Chakra cost:80
Damage points :40
Description: Demon is an octopus,also at the same size with gamabumta.All eight hands are able to level any wall,also could be used to immobilize a summon of the same size ,his extremly strechy and can dig into the ground to grab a target in long- range with one of his hands.
can also spray ink from his mouth.
He also has an affinity for 2 element which is lightining and wind ,He can use both up to S rank(ones without handseals).He has an incredible defense and can easily defend against high leveled jutsu(A-Rank) but can stop only 3 S-ranked jutsu before poofed away .like every other octopus he is slow but his hands are not.
Note:
-Can be summoned once per battle and stays for 4 turns
-Must be the only summon the user has on the field
-Must have signed the octopus contract.
-Target stays blind for one turn when hit with the ink spray.
-The ink counts as 1 out of 3 move used.
~Approved~

(Summoning Technique|Dino) (Kuchiyose no Jutsu|Dino)
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: close -mid
Chakra cost:80
Damage points :40
Description: Dino is an octopus,far larger than gamabumta bcos he is the fatest Octupus that ever existed.His whole body including his eight hands are also covered with spikes making taijutsu and other sharp object useless, his whole body is always burning.cause he has an affinity for Fire and wind also ,which He can use up to S rank and he also able to spray ink from his mouth.
He is used mainly for defense and can easily defend against high leveled jutsu(A-Rank) but can stop only 4 S-ranked jutsu before poofed away .
He can't barely move because of his size unless in a large body of water.
Note:
-Can be summoned once per battle and stays for 4 turns
-Must be the only summon the user has on the field
-Must have signed the octopus contract.
-The ink counts as 1 out of 3 move used.
~Approved~

(suiton:suiton modo ) - water
Style: water mode
Rank: S
Type: Offense/deffence
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: after making some handseals and must have stood still for some time to gather natural water chakra,then the user is able to enter a mode that brings water jutsus to a whole new level, increasing both in speed and power.
Whilst this mode is active the user body would seem to be blowing out bubbles,the user speeds increases(more like lee with no weights) both ön land and underwater.This mode also grants the user ability to manipulate anything in liquid form and the user can also summon a watersource by just stumping on the ground.
-ones per battle and lasts for 5 turn
-B-ranked fire and water jutsu are useless against the user.
-must have a bio that has water as a speciality to use this jutsu.
-whilst in this mode any water jutsu damage points increases by 10 and The user needs only a handseal to execute any water jutsu.
-The user must stand still for one turn to gather nutural water chakra.
-No water jutsu next turn when the jutsu ends.

~Declined, do not resubmit~

(Doton:shinkuro) earth style: synchronize
Rank: A
Type: Defence
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/P
Description: The user sends his/her doton chakra into the ground thus through out the battle field and synchronises with earth.when this jutsu is active the user can sense anything either standing on earth or underground.
-Twice per battle
-lasts for 3 turns.

~Approved~

(Katon: baundo Gokakyu no Jutsu) - Fire
Style: bouncing Fireball Jutsu
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: mid-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user aims at the ground and exhales a very hot giant size fire ball (the same size with blaze ball) that burns into the earth but still in a complete ball shape then rolls towards the target and urupts beneath the target as a lava ball because of the contact with earth,then carries the target skywards while incinerating them and the target won't have much option because of the size.
-cant be used ön a rocky terrain
-can only be used 3 time per battle
-No A-ranked fire jutsu next turn
-The jutsu is best in mid-Air

~Declined, do not resubmit~

Mockingbird · Apr 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Samurai Gijutsu: Tenrai Buranko) Samurai Art: Heavenly Swing

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Cost: 80
Description: By infusing their sword with chakra, the user can swing it releasing the chakra built up inside in the form of a crescent shaped projectile attack.

~Must have a sword
~Can only be used 5 times per battle
~Can only be taught by Ruiz..

(Samurai Gijutsu: Toripuru Tenrai Buranko)Samurai Art: Triple Heavenly Swing

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (+10 if infused with an element)
Damage Cost: 80 (+20 if infused with an element)
Description: Basically a stronger version version of the...where the user will release 3 attacks (swinging their sword back and forth 3 times) that fly towards the user at high speeds. this jutsu can also be enhanced by infusing elemental chakra into the blade, giving it an extra kick (Wind or Fire Style affinity).

~Must have a sword
~Can only be used 3 times per battle.
~the next turn, the user can only perform B rank or lower of the element that was infused into the attack (if no element, this isnt in effect)
~Must be taught by Ruiz..

~Both declined, do not resubmit~ for God's sake you must be the 10th person by now who submits that. Outside the fact that there have been similar jutsu's for a very long time, there are canon samurai moves that can do exactly the same.

-Mugen- · Apr 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Fuuinjutsu: issai zengo fuuin ( sealing technique: all around seal )

Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: 90 (death)
Description: The user on the first turn will use his blood to write the kanji for "ultimate seal" on the torso.Then the user will focus chakra into the kanji and wait for 2 full turns to pass.On the third turn however the kanji will sort of give a purple glow and the user will slam the ground below him,a purple sphere will surround the user and expand at extremely fast pace.And anything that comes in contact with the sphere shall be sealed into the earth for eternity.
*Must be on the ground on the third turn to preform
*Must only use 2 jutsus per turn every of the the 2 full turns in order for the kanji to have enough chakra by the third turn
* after the jutsu is executed the user may only preform 1 jutsu after the next turn
*The user will move slowly due to the strain for 1 turn and will lose 50 health for the jutsu.
* can only be preformed once

~Declined, do not resubmit~

Tsuchi-Fuuinjutsu: roku-hashira trappu ( Earth style-sealing technique: 6 pillar trap )

Type: Offense/defense
Rank: A
Range: Mid-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This sealing method/barrior is preformed with a bit of earth style to it.The user forms the tiger seal and make 6 pillars rise at all angles around the opponent.Then at a fast pace a barrier restricting any chakra to get out of it appears.
*the opponent can not escape unless he uses a time-space technique or escapes by other transport means before the jutsu completes
*lasts for 2 turns
*can only be used twice per battle

~Declined, do not resubmit~

Fuuinjutsu: magnettu hashira ( Earth style-sealing technique: magnet pillar )

Type: supplementary
Rank: S
Range: long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user forms 3 handseals and a pillar appears behind the opponent.The pillar then appears to magnet any technique in range and change its direction towards it(regardless to what happens later to the pillar,the direction of the jutsu will be changed regardless). When a jutsu hits the piller it will absorb it into a seal on the pillar and when any 2 techniques are absorbed,the pillar will explode causing a huge blast like shinra tensei,but weaker.(that is why the technique may only be preformed at long range)
*can not change the direction of forbidden jutsus.
*lasts for 2 turns
*can only be used twice per battle

~Declined, do not resubmit~

JTjutsumaster · Apr 26, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Contract:

Polar Bears

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Jutsu Submission:

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kyokusen Kuma Bosu: Tiberius) Summoning Technique: Polar Bear Boss: Tiberius

Type: Summoning
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (Depends on the jutsu he performs)
Description: Tiberius, is the king of the Polar Bears. He is, like most polar bears, white with fur like clouds, very soft and smooth. Known from his strength, some animals fear him. He is just smaller than Gamabunta on all four, but standing up on two, he is far more taller. He can run really fast, and because of his size and speed, he can travel very far at a short rate of time. Tiberius, like all Polar Bears, can use a lot of chakra, but he has learnt the ways of Element chakra usage.
Tiberius can use:
~Is - Up to S Rank (Ice Release)
~Suiton - Up to S Rank (Water Release)

Tiberius's personality is a caring father and if anyone ever hurts his summoner or his family, he goes all out on the person responsible. He is very touchy when it comes to a summoner, he will only let a summoner stand on her forehead when they have done something to prove themselves to him. In order for a summoner stand on his head, the summoner must try to gain his trust, and do tasks depending on his mood. The only exception is JTjutsumaster, who holds the Contract of the Kuma Family.
Tiberius and all of his race, The Kuma's, can speak perfect English.
*Can only be used/taught by JTjutsumaster
*Stays in battle for 3 turns.
*Can only be used once per battle.
*Must have signed the Contract of the Polar Bears (held by JTjutsumaster)

(Ninja Kuma Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Lorel) Ninja Bear Summoning Technique: Lorel

Type: Summoning
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage Points: N/A (Depending on jutsu's used)
Description: Lorel is a fierce male. He is the second oldest in the Kuma family and is one of the tallest. He is a dozen meters smaller than his father, Tiberius. He isn't fussy on who summons him, but he does get a little picky. He has a scar slash next to his eye through many fights. Making him seem like a scary type, but he is really quite nice. After he gets use to his new summoner, and after the summoner get Lorels trust, he allows people to ride on his forehead. He has brown fur like silk and is really protective when it comes to his summoner and family. He has good chakra control and knows elemental chakra usage.
~Is - Up to B Rank (Ice Release)
~Suiton - Up to A Rank (Water Release)

Although likes to sleep a lot, but when he is awake, he usually runs around and practice his jutsu's. In battle, he works well with his summoners, and his allies. But Lorel can get frustrated when things go wrong.

*Can only be used/taught by JTjutsumaster
*Stays in battle for 3 turns.
*Can only be used once per battle.
*Must have signed the Contract of the Polar Bears (held by JTjutsumaster)

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ninja Kuma Souseiji: Claw Ken Scratch) Summoning Technique: Ninja Bear Twins: Scratch and Claw

Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A (Depending on Jutsu's Used)
Description: Claw and Scratch are the oldest of the 5 children in the Kuma Family. They are both opposites in likes and dislikes, strength and Strategy etc. Although their personalities are different they work together very well. Both are the size of Akamaru in Shippuden Series.

Scratch is Female, she has soft, white fur and is very kind. She enjoys new summoners as she thinks of them as a new "Play-mate". Scratch doesn't usually like fighting, but she is good with strategies. She uses her strategies and uses her twin brother, Claw, and her summoner to use them. She is good at annilising her enemies, but isn't very good at offence, or defence. However, Scratch isn't good at chakra usage, and does not know any elemental Chakra jutsus.

Claw is Male, he has rough, brown fur. He is quite rude sometime, but when he is in a good mood, he is usually happy and a little kind. He likes people who summon him, but doesn't like new summoners as he thinks them of "A Waste of Time" Claw isn't very smart in strategies and Idea's, but he is very good at strength and Attack. He isn't good at defending and is sometimes a show-off. He relies on his Twin Sister, Scratch, and is summoner to come up with the plans. Claw is good at chakra usage and knows elements:
~Is - Up to B Rank (Ice Release)
~-Suiton - Up to C Rank (Water Release)
Both can speak perfect English.

*Can only be used/taught by JTjutsumaster
*Stays in battle for 4 turns.
*Can only be used once per battle.
*Must have signed the Contract of the Polar Bears (held by JTjutsumaster)

(Ninja Kuma Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ava) Ninja Bear Summoning Technique: Ava

Type: Summoning
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Ava is the 2nd youngest of the Kuma Family. He is small, young, kind and caring. Ava is super-fast, and shy as well when it comes to new summoners, but the young bear can get attached very quickly. Although he is young, Ava is the size of Tiger and has light brown fur. Although he is nice, he has a bad temper when people hurt his summoner or family. Ava doesn't have any chakra in her body, but he always carriers a pouch that is full of weapons such as Kunai's, scrolls, Smoke-Bombs, Wires, Shruikens etc. Ava also has the ability to lengthen his claws and his teeth. His tail becomes hard as steel, which is good for defence, while with his teeth growing, his teeth is good for offence.
Ava can be very cheeky to newcomers, as he likes to play jokes on them. He likes to runs around a lot, and most of the time, he runs around their summoner and make them dizzy until they fall on the ground. Although he is the kind, cheeky, fast and shy one, he is also very smart. Ava tends to like sleeping a lot and cuddle up next to his summoners.

*Can only be used/taught by JTjutsumaster
*Stays in battle for 4 turns.
*Can only be used twice per battle.
*Must have signed the Contract of the Polar Bears (held by JTjutsumaster)
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(Ninja Kuma Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ursula) Ninja Bear Summoning Technique: Ursula

Type: Summoning
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Ursula (Means Little She-bear) is a cute, shy and little cub that likes to sleep a lot. As the youngest of the Polar Bear Family, she isn't used for battle, but for training purposes only, like learning how to summon the Proud and Noble Family of the Kuma's. When she is awake, she likes to walk around and play with her summoner or a friend, but most of the time, she rolls around and lick herself allot, but other than that, she sleeps. Ursula is fragile and will only allow 1 summoner to hold her and that is JTjutsumaster.

*Must have signed the contract of the JTjutsumaster (held by JTjutsumaster)
*Should not be used in battle
*Can only be used/taught by JTjutsumaster
*Can only be handled by JTjutsumaster
*Picture

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Declined, ppolar bears already exist if your making a summon then check the list first

-Yard- · Apr 27, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Summoning Animal: Condors
Scroll Owner: ~Frederick~
Other Users who have signed contract: Yarduat
Summoning Boss if existing: Joutei Sendo
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Hagetaka Houka, Hagetaka Uindo, Joutei Sendo, Kaen Katana.

(Kchuysei: Senpai Kashou) Summoning: Elder Kashou:
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user claps his hands together. This summoning calls upon Kashou, he is one of the Condor Elders. Kashou is able to shoot A-Rank fire from his mouth up to Mid range. He is also big enough to hold someone on his back.
Note:
-This Summoning can only be in play for 4-turns.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.

~Approved~

(Kchuysei: Hagetaka Hanma-Ishi) Summoning: Hagetaka War-Hammer:
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 every turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user pulls out a small scroll places his hand on it. This Summons Hanma-Ishi, a large hammer capable of smashing through Earth with ease. Hanma-Ishi is really heavy and is able to create small earthquakes that can throw the opponent of balance due to this weight, The user will need to focus Doton Chakra in his hand to wield it. This makes it impossible to use Raiton Jutsu. It's natural doton nature makes Doton Jutsu's stronger then normal and easier to use.
Note:
-Can only be used by someone with the Condor Contract.
-Doton Jutsu only need one Handseal when holding the Hammer
-Can crush through B-rank Earth tech, though it also depends on the size of the jutsu.
-The user can't use Raiton Jutsu while welding this hammer

~Approved~ next time you copy Frederick's jutsu, be sure you actually completely edit it so that it makes sense and not that there are some obvious traces like "it's natural katon nature makes doton jutsu's stronger" ~_~

KeotsuEclipse · Apr 27, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

KeotsuEclipse said:
Summoning Animal:Columbidae
Scroll Owner:KeotsuEclipse
Other Users who have signed contract: TBA
Summoning Boss if existing: TBA
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: TBA
General Description: Columbidae (Pigeons and Doves [biologically, pigeons and doves are the same - "dove" is a term used by humans to - generally - describe the smaller birds in the species) are as diverse in their abilities as humans are - some Columbidae specialize in technique and element usage while others are simply speed oriented; as each Columbidae is different, each's individual niche will be described when submitted - however, each Columbidae has the ability to transform into a human form, symbolizing Columbidae's concentration around humans.

About the human form: Most Summons have a ton of special powers and such, but instead, these will have few abilities, but the power to transform into a human form, where they can still use their abilities. This is because most of them will have special weapons, instead of a lot of abilities. Below is a summon I would submit if the contract was approved, for reference.

(Hato-ka Kuchiyose: Ushiwaka) Columbidae Summon: Ushiwaka
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Type: Summon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 0
Description: Ushiwaka, or Waka for short, is Keotu’s personal summon. An average sized Dove with golden plumage, Waka is a Columbidae that is more oriented towards Kenjutsu, and has a minor wind element, capable of creating powerful gusts of wind to blow away objects or enemies. Waka is summoned with a flute in his talons, which is actually the mystical sword Pillowtalk. Pillowtalk sprouts a green blade of chakra from one end of the flute once chakra is directed through it. Pillowtalk has the standard slicing capability of a regular Katana, but when someone is hit by the blade of Pillowtalk, in addition to causing a wound, it also makes the opponent sleepy, an effect that gets worse with each consecutive hit – no person has every stayed awake through more than three hits by Pillowtalk, regardless of what they’re doing. When Waka transforms into a human, he is shown with long golden hair, and in a pink kimono along with a purple Sashinuki-hakama, along with a hat that has the motif of a hawk with a long cloak that hides his hair, and tends to pepper his speech with French phrases. He is extremely talented in Kenjutsu, able to use any of Keotsu’s Kenjutsu moves at an equal cost, and has the ability to use his wind powers to allow himself to stay in the air, giving him the ability to “fly” (in actuality, he creates an updraft that allows him to hover, and can change the angle of the wind to glide around). While in his dove form, he is extremely quick and agile, making him a difficult target.

*Waka has a strong bond with Keotsu (meaning Keotsu and Mifune bios), and thus he stays on the field indefinitely when they summon him. When anyone else summons him, he remains on the field for 4 turns, though he can leave Pillowtalk behind for the user to use, until they dismiss the blade.
*Waka’s Wind Gust in Dove form is equivalent to C-Rank, but only require 10 Chakra, due to it’s not damaging nature.
*Pillowtalk can only be wielded by Columbidae contract signers.

Waka in human form

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(Note I'm not submitting Waka this time, it's simply for example)

Need to talk over msn further about this one

Updates below:

Way of the Samurai (Bushidō)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: None
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: Zero
Description: The user gives up the way of the Shinobi, in favor of Samurai skills, transforming himself/herself into a Samurai. As a Samurai, the user cannot use any Ninjutsu or any Genjutsu at all � all non-chakra-based Taijutsu are still available. Also, the user gains access to the Samurai Arts. Samurai have 300 chakra less than what they had before they used this move. All damage taken by Ninjutsu is reduced by 25%, and all Taijutsu damage does 50% normal damage due to the armor. *Custom Weapons are still allowed. Any specific �jutsu� that the Weapon can use are null, though the Weapons properties remain. *Custom Taijutsu that are not Chakra Based are still allowed. *This technique is irreversible during battle, once activated. *KeotsuEclipse and those who know this technique whom he gives permission to are the only ones who can teach this. *Though KG and Custom Element Jutsu cannot be used, the respective chakras (if any) can be channeled through the Samurai�s sword for different effects (though, this is a separate technique in its own accord).

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(Bushidō) Way of the Samurai
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: N/A (See description)
Damage: Zero
Description: A powerful move, this ability is something that Samurai created to better combat the ever growing use of Ninjutsu users, and to make their armor more efficient and less reactive to the enemy’s chakra, lessening the damage of such moves. Losing 300 chakra, the Samurai focus their spirit into their armor, which reduces the damage of all moves they are hit by, by 50%. Should a Shinobi attempt to use this move, the sacrifice of 300 chakra creates an armor of chakra that reduces all damage by 25%, but forbids the use of any Ninjutsu or Genjutsu, leaving only Kenjutsu and Taijutsu available.

*Once activated, this move is irreversible in battle.
*Keotsu and those who know this technique whom he gives permission to are the only ones who can teach this.
*Shinobi lose their KG abilities while using this form.

~Declined~ originally this was a technique to make a shinobi into a samurai. Removing its shinobi skills to get increased samurai skills is acceptable, however now it's mainly a samurai only skill so that doesn't cut it anymore. You're talking about an ability, but where is it? Also 50% is way too high, originally it was 25% so don't make it more

New Submission:

(Kendou: Mugen Ichi-Katana kata - Bekutā)Kendo: Infinite One-Sword Style – Vector
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: One of the largest dangers of using the Infinite One-Sword style is the opening created when the user scatter’s their katana. To keep the enemy from using the katana, there is a special needle mechanism built inside the hilt. Using this knowledge, Mifune applied this logic to the very case that the katana rested in, and installed a powerful mechanism. By focusing their chakra into the case, it triggers a powerful compressed air mechanism that launches the katana out the case at extremely high speeds, allowing the user to use the scattering of the katana itself as an attack. However, it is different from the actual IO set-up in that where as the initial set up scatters katana everywhere, allowing the user a blade no matter where they go, this variant only launches the katana in front of them. Using this move exhausts an entire case of IO katana. The swords are also attached with the same mechanism, allowing them to fire the blade out of the hilt when the user uses a small bit of chakra to activate it.

*Useable no more than twice a battle, and it can only be used twice if the user is carrying two cases of IO katana.
*Vector can be seen from 3:40-3:47 in
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*Only useable by Musa,Akiza, and Keotsu.
*Only teachable by Musa.

~Declined~ first and for all the bolded part has to go as a similar technique exists. Also there is something that doesn't make sense as the swords are shot with the blade in front, but that's impossible as also in the vid they are launched in the normal position, so they just flipped 180° which makes no sense

Still discussing the Columbidae - will resubmit in the future after further meditation.

(Bushidō) Way of the Samurai
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: N/A (See description)
Damage: Zero
Description: Samurai quickly learned that Ninjutsu would be a very dangerous weapon, and an incredibly difficult one to combat. But, they soon developed a countermeasure that helped them combat the ever-growing amount of Ninjutsu users: infusing their armor with their own chakra. By releasing their spirit into their armor (400 chakra), Samurai infuse their armor with special properties, dropping all energy based damage by 25% and all physical damage by 50%. Shinobi also quickly learned the power behind the spiritual armor and stole the technique. However, while it did indeed grant them protection, it was not without its consequences.

*Once used, this technique is irreversible.
*Keotsu and those who know this technique whom he gives permission to are the only ones who can teach this.
*Shinobi who use this technique lose their KG and the ability to use Ninjutsu and Genjutsu, leaving only Taijutus and Kenjutsu.

~Declined~ the shinobi parts are fine, though you need a restriction for when a samurai uses it. I mean now it's like when a samurai uses it the opponents attacks are permanently reduced dramatically without any real drawbacks for the samurai. So for samurai there should be placed a time restriction or something.

I think I fixed what you were talking about. I reworded it some, and I also reduced the 50% total to the amounts in the original Bushido (50 for physical, 25 for energy). I also boosted the chakra cost to 400, which is 1/3 of a Sannin's total chakra. Shinobi are under the same restrictions as they have been.

If I misunderstood, sorry. =/ If you mean that even the 50% for physical in the original technique is to high still, I can reduce it to 25% as well. >.< Sorry.

(Kendou: Mugen Ichi-Katana kata - Bekutā)Kendo: Infinite One-Sword Style – Vector
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: One of the largest dangers of using the Infinite One-Sword style is the opening created when the user scatter’s their katana. To keep the enemy from using the katana, there is a special needle mechanism built inside the hilt. Using this knowledge, Mifune applied this logic to the very case that the katana rested in, and installed a powerful mechanism. By focusing their chakra into the case, it triggers a powerful compressed air mechanism that launches the katana out the case at extremely high speeds, allowing the user to use the scattering of the katana itself as an attack. However, it is different from the actual IO set-up in that where as the initial set up scatters katana everywhere, allowing the user a blade no matter where they go, this variant only launches the katana in front of them. This move is possible, due to the fact that while focusing chakra into the casing, a small amount of chakra is focused onto the tip of each blade, so that when they are fired from the casing the chakra forces the blade to flip around, and fire tip first. Using this move exhausts an entire case of IO katana.

*Useable no more than twice a battle, and it can only be used twice if the user is carrying two cases of IO katana.
*Vector can be seen from 3:40-3:47 in

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*Only useable by Musa,Akiza, and Keotsu.
*Only teachable by Musa.

Removed bold-ed, added minor explanation for believability.

~Approved~

New submission:

(Samurai Gijutsu: Shodō) Samurai Art: Calligraphy
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60 (split evenly among the diversion of marked objects)
Description: Samurai were not only known for their mastery over the Art of the Blade, but for their mastery over the Art of the Brush as well. This technique combines both aspects. By focusing chakra into their blade and compressing said chakra, kanji will begin to sprawl across their blade, creating a poem of sorts on the blade, written in black “ink”. When the user makes contact with something with their sword they can choose to leave behind a small amount of this “ink”, which in turn, puts part of the poem on the object touched, equal to the amount of “ink” placed on the object. This “ink”, after a set period of time, quickly dissolves and the area it rests upon feels as if it is being stricken again by the same amount of force that was used to place the “ink” on the object to begin with. While in effect, besides the black kanji sprawling across the blade, a notification that this move is active is the fact that petal-like-shapes made of this chakra flutter from the blade. The activation of the “ink” over the “covered” areas can be done selectively at the user’s whim.

*Only useable three times a battle.
*Only three objects can be “covered” in “ink” at any given time.
*This attack does not cause physical cuts, but simple reapplies force to the “covered” area, making it good for surprise strikes to disarm opponents or create an opening.
*The "ink" must be applied by contact, but can be activated at any range.
*Once the “ink” reapplies its force, it evaporates from the “covered” area.
*This is not an Ink jutsu in the same manner as Sai’s physical creations.

Not quite sure if this actually falls into the same category as Sai's ink jutsu, but since I don't have Ink training, if it does, I'm willing to edit it's working to see if I can make it function another way.

~Declined~ You say it's not like Sai's ink, but if you're using real ink to restrict him then yes it's like Sai. The only other option it could be if it's not real ink, but then it's some kind of a sealing jutsu just like Danzo used on Sasuke during their fight. Also I have difficulty to understand what it exactly does. If it were not for your restrictions I wouldn't have understand what that ink does as it seems a part is just missing from your jutsu. Btw I don't know if this was for a samurai bio, but a samurai wouldn't be able to use it in any case as this would be considered a form of ninjutsu beyond the likes of a samurai.

black uchiha · Apr 27, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

My first hope I got it right.

Summoning Animal: Insects (ranging in sizes)

Scroll Owner: Black Uchiha

Other Users who have signed the contract: none

Summoning Boss if existing: King Shinobu (gigantic white praying mantis)

Other Animals tied to contract: Ryu (rhinoceros beetle dump truck size)
Rie (dragonfly with a 10 ft wing span), Satoru (woodlouse (roly-poly) car size),
Kumiko & kamiko (praying mantis Akamaru (shippuden) size)

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Ryu. Ryu has a nature affinity for water element using water jutsu up to A rank. Known for his strength and his durability do to his exoskeleton

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Rie. The size of a jet ski. The user stands aborad her to achive flight. She has the nature elements of lightining and wind using them up to A rank. Known for her speed.

Rank: A
Type: Defense/Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Satoru. Satoru has the nature elements of earth and fire using them up to A rank, also. Known for his durability do to his exoskeleton, the user mostly uses him for defense.

Rank: B
Type: Defense/Attack
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: User summons the Kum/Kam twins. The twins are the size of Akamaru (Shippuden). Kumiko has a nature affinity for lightining element using it up to B rank and Kamiko has a nature affinity for fire element using it up to B rank. Both are skilled shinobi amongst the shinobi from Mt. Gen. Known for their taijutsu skills, both carry basic ninja tools (makibishi spikes, senbon, kunai…etc)

Declined, read the manga do ya? you would know insects are used by aburame if your wanting a type of insect then fair enough but not the hole catagory

Seblax · Apr 27, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

yarduat said:
Summoning Animal: Condors
Scroll Owner: ~Frederick~
Other Users who have signed contract: Yarduat
Summoning Boss if existing: Joutei Sendo
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Hagetaka Houka, Hagetaka Uindo, Joutei Sendo, Kaen Katana.

(Kchuysei: Senpai Kashou) Summoning: Elder Kashou:
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user claps his hands together. This summoning calls upon Kashou, he is one of the Condor Elders. Kashou is able to shoot A-Rank fire from his mouth up to Mid range. He is also big enough to hold someone on his back.
Note:
-This Summoning can only be in play for 4-turns.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Condor Contract.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.

(Kchuysei: Hagetaka Hanma-Ishi) Summoning: Hagetaka War-Hammer:
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 every turn)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user pulls out a small scroll places his hand on it. This Summons Hanma-Ishi, a large hammer capable of smashing through Earth with ease. Hanma-Ishi is really heavy and is able to create small earthquakes that can throw the opponent of balance due to this weight, The user will need to focus Doton Chakra in his hand to wield it. This makes it impossible to use Raiton Jutsu. It's natural Katon nature makes Doton Jutsu's stronger then normal and easier to use.
Note:
-Can only be used by someone with the Condor Contract.
-Doton Jutsu only need one Handseal when holding the Hammer
-Can crush through B-rank Earth tech.
-The user can't use Raiton Jutsu while welding this hammer

Sorry man, But I already own the vulture kinds contract, you can't have the condors because they are simply mine, and no, I can't teach it to you because I am full.

Now for my submit:

– Lion – Shishi

Rank: S
Type: Defense/Supplementary/Offensive
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Lion is a four-legged puppet whos weapon assortment consists of having a mane that is full of needles and wire strands that can be used for a multitude of tactics. Lion has blades for teeth and claws as well as spines along his back that can be shot like missiles at airborne targets. On the side of his head are to flap compartments that open up to activating the S ranked chakra shield once per battle for defence. From the mouth he can release kunai, explosive kunai, smoke bombs and flash bangs. All segments that make the body have a hidden blade in them so the user can disassemble the puppet to then reveal multiple bladed segments to attack the enemy.

-Can only be used once per battle.
-Owned by -Takai-.

– Worm – Wa – Mu

Rank: S
Type: Defense/Supplementary/Offensive
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Worm is a pretty large puppet with multiple segmented body parts standing at 8ft tall on the top of the head he has a ring of spiked needles that can be shot all around. He is an offensive style offering the user a means of attacking at long distance from release of weapons or defensive tactics. His weapon assortment consists of having blades hidden in each ring segment so he can coil around a target and protrude the blades to stab them. He can release a multitude of weapons kunai, explosive kunai, smoke bombs and flash bangs from his mouth. His tail consists is similar to the style of Hiruku’s tail that can be used to stab or slash targets. He is able to dig underground creating tunnels behind him for various effects by charging it with wind chakra, to act as a strategic deployment for other techniques or movement. All segments that make the body have a hidden blade in them so the user can disassemble the puppet to then reveal multiple bladed segments to attack the enemy.

-Can only be used once per battle.
-Owned by -takai-

– Meerkat – Miakyatto

Rank: B
Type: Defense/Supplementary/Offensive
Range: N/A
Chakra: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: Meerkat is a smallish styled duo puppet that has a small attachment that removes itself on deployment and holds a mechanism that allows the user to see what the Meerkat can as it’s a primary role of recon. It’s small and very fast but holds still some small assortment of weapons being able to release several smoke bombs and flash bangs and makabushi for halting the enemy aswell as being loaded within the inner sections explosive notes that will cause the puppet to become a bomb that can be used to explode releasing several kunai in all directions for added affect.

-Can only be used once per battle.
-Owned by -Takai-.

- Toad - Gama

Rank: A
Type: Defense/Supplementary/Offensive
Range: N/A
Chakra: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: Toad is a Medium Large Toad like puppet who has set of plated armour on the front and back to help with defensive measures. He has a projectile tongue that can be shot with a mace on the end to cause blunt force damage and can then explode shooting several blades in all directions for short distance to harm those in the area. Toad also is capable of opening a compartment on his chest to activate a chakra shield. From his back opens a compartment that allows the user to jump inside but also above is a small compartment that holds missile cartridges that release smoke bombs near impact but the missiles themselves don’t hold any damage as the shell releases leaving smoke bombs. He can release from his mouth kunai, needles, explosive needles, smoke bombs and flash bangs. His last weapon is a water jet equivalent to C rank and maximum of 3 times held in a scroll hidden in his body that is able to send him. All segments that make the body have a hidden blade in them so the user can disassemble the puppet to then reveal multiple bladed segments to attack the enemy.

-Can only be used once per battle.
-Owned by -Takai-

Toad Summoning Technique: Gamatakai - Gama Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Gamatakai -

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: To summon Gamatakai, the ninja will wipe blood on the hand, perform the necessary handseals and then touch their hand to the ground or another object. By that, the user summons Gamasura, the hell bringer* toad. Gamasura is as large as Gamaken, he has a nature affinity for fire element using fire jutsu up to S rank and is a skilled shinobi amongst the shinobi Toad clan. Known for his iron fangs using skills and his ability to use the same techniques Gamakichi.

-Can only be used once per battle.
- no other toads can be summoned at the same time. *even though I think its extremely unfair and wrong, since Pervy had his toads much stronger and without adding a similar rule to any of them*

~Declined, not checking as you got yaself banned

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Gatsndshanks · Apr 27, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Aienka no Mai: Osenryōdo no Ryūki - Dance of the Heavy Smoker: Uplift of Polluted Territory

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short [Initial] - Long [Distanced Traveled]
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
The user releases a plume of smoke once he/she has inhaled from a cigarette. The smoke is primarily targetted beneath the user themselves to gather underfoot and at the command of the boar hand seal, the chakra-embedded smog begins to somewhat harden and become airborne (consequently taking the user with it into mid-air). The cloud-like smoke allows the user to float across the battlefield for tactical or evasive procedures until it is destroyed or the user cancels the technique, causing the smoke to deplete into fleeting smoke.

~Approved~

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