[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Musashibo]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Please don't forget about the quote'd jutsus I submitted last week. The ones below this sentence is new jutsus for this week.​

(Taijutsu: Kaku Dansu) - Body Art: Dancing Stroke
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: N/a
Damage: 80
Description: User must be in the 5 gate or higher to use this technique. This can be set up with Leaf Dancing Shadow. The user will perform a jump kick to the opponent with the speed gained by the gates. This is a 12 kick combo that only uses the right or left leg depending on which side it is started. This technique will cause strain to the user by making him unable to use his legs for physical attacks and only for movement for 2 turns. His movement will also be slowed for 1 turn. This targets the opponents chest multiple times and after the technique is done, the target's ribs will be fractured or broken.
Note: Only Musa can teach.
Note: Will gain 10 damage if Devil's Wind Leg is active.
Note: Must be in the 5th or higher gate.
Note: User will feel exhausted and be unable to run quickly for 1 turn.
Note: User will be unable to perform taijutsu that requires the legs for 2 turns.

~ This doesn't deserve to be a Gates technique ~

VVVVVV How it looks VVVVVV

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(Taijutsu:Gufuu Appa-katto) - Body Art: Tornado Uppercut
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After developing a way to use Wind Style: Hurricane Fist in physical combat, this new technique was born. Tornado uppercut is a Taijutsu technique that allows the user that can mold wind chakra into a strong uppercut with a miniature tornado finish that cuts the opponent with fine slashes. The opponent will be physically struck with a powerful uppercut and then blown away by a small tornado. This tornado is made by whipping the wind chakra around the fist when being performed and after it connects the force and the wind is quickly formed into a tornado that quickly blows the opponent away.
Note: Only Musa can teach this.
Note: This can't be combined with fire in any way.
Note: Cuts aren't super deep, just scratches.
Note: User will bleed from his fist, reducing flexibility and punching power
Note: No Genjutsu for two turns after

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

(Genjutsu: Zanzou) - Illusionary Technique: Afterimage
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/a
Description: The user casts this illusion by slowly, but constantly moving and when seen by the opponent the illusion is then shown. This technique is to confuse the opponent while fighting in close range. When the user moves it is as if there is a trail behind him or her of an afterimage. This is very effective since the user can make the afterimage before or after the current location of the user's body. This is for defensive purposes to avoid physical contact with a opponent's attacks, and when a opening is spotted the user can then attack back with his own Taijutsu technique(s).
Note: Only Musa can teach this.
Note: Can be used twice, lasts 2 turns, and must wait 2 turns to use again.
Note: Only Genjutsu and Taijutsu for this and next turn.
Note: No Genjutsu after the technique is done.

~ Similar technique exists ~

(Taijutsu: Iiya Fi-to Kigen Hashira) - Body Art: No Foot Rise Pillar
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/a
Damage: 60
Description: This attack requires the 3rd gate, but after the technique is used the user will remain in the EIG state. The user will strike the opponent with his fist into the gut. After bent over the user will grab and knee the opponents head and throw him upwards. The user will then jump almost instantly and do a upwards kick thrust sending the target higher. Finally the user will then appear above the opponent and slam him into the ground with a hammer type hit with his arms. This technique is possible with the gates' speed and the No Foot rise technique that dancers use to save time while jumping.
Note: Only Musa can teach this.
Note: Must be in 2nd gate or higher. Gate 3 or lower and the user will stay in the EIG state.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.

~ No way ~

Resubmitting this one. This is my 5th submitted jutsu this week.

(Taijutsu: Dempsey ro-ru) - Body Art: Dempsey Roll
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 80
Description: The user can only perform this technique when in the 6th gate. The user will rush towards the opponent making a quick feint to make the opponent block with his or her hands. After the feint the user will use his strength and speed to break the opponent guard by attacking below it. This will open up the opponent and the technique will begin to flourish. The user will begin to weave in a rolling fashion left to right and vice versa in a infinity symbol. This will provide the cycle of punches about to come. Due to the speed this takes no time and the user will unleash massive blows to the opponents head over and over again. After 9 blows the user will then connect one last blow and slam the opponent down with a punch that catches on fire from the speed and friction caused by the rolling cycle of fists. This punch will slam the opponent into the ground that will create a small creator similar to the opponent's body shape. The user's hands will then be numb for one turn.
Note: Only Musa can teach this.
Note: Must be in the 6th Gate. 6th Gate ends after using this technique.
Note: User's hands will be numb for one turn lowering punching power for taijutsu and not allowing the user to form hand seals quickly.
Note: User will be unable to use taijutsu for 1 turn.
Note: User will be extremely exhuasted and will be only be able to perform 2 moves next turn.

~ Approved ~

 

[Nadare]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user makes 24 handseals, takes a deep breath, and then blows a strong current of wind to his front out of his mouth. The wind coming out of the mouth, soon starts to resemble an image of an wolf, and soon a big winged wind wolf stands in front of the user. It can move around, to Mid-Range from the user. He does not go further, because he would disappear, if he would do so.
The wolf acts as a normal animal, and can be ridden by the user. It's attacks are strong and fast, and he can blast small, C-Rank wind blast out of his mouth.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.*
*Note: The wolf disappears after 3 turns.
*Note: No more wind for until wolf is released.
*Note: The wolf ignites if he is attacked by a fire techniques, but we must take in count, that as normals animals, he can evade and react very fast to several attacks though not to speedy attacks.

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: As the mist is made from the users chakra, he manipulates the chakra in the mist, to form a kind of chakra body; The mist remains the same, it's just that when somebody activates Byakugan, he sees a thousand chakra points, and chakra veins. This way, the real chakra points of the user remain hidden in the thousand of the false ones. Because of this jutsu, the opponent with the Byakugan cannot see the user, neither use the Gentle Fist.
*Note:*Only shinobis from the Hidden Mist can use this jutsu and once a member leaves the group/kicked out, he or she will not be able to use this jutsu.*

Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After mist is created, the user must make one handseal, and make the mist denser. Then, for two turns, while the mist is denser, the user can use this jutsu: Just like Mizu Kawarimi, this jutsu works as a kind of substitution. Just like with Mizu Kawarimi, the user turns his body into water, but into mist cells, therefore, after this jutsu is made, the user disappears into mist, and then appears again in a desired place, and reforms. This is possible, because it works on the same basis as Water replacement. To disappear, the user needs only one handseal.
*Note: Can only be used once, and while the mist is denser, the user can "Substitute" only two times.*
*Note: For two turns, the user isn't able to use techniques of the Hidden Mist Village Group.*
*Note:Once used, no mist jutsus can be used next 2 turns.*

~ Both Declined. No, they are not possible nor realistic. No resubmit. ~

This jutsu are all possible in the Narutoverse, and are similar to some other already existing jutsu and approved customs, so they should be approved. Also, I'm resubmitting this one, as you didn't tell why was it declined:

Rank:S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user does a complicated handseal, and holds it. After 5 seconds, he releases it, and makes another handseal, that triggers the jutsu. The user starts creating strong wind around the whole area with the first handseal. With the second, everything is blown to the center of the battlefield. Wind with enormous force thing compresses everything to the center of the area, destroying it. The force of wind squeezes everything in the center to dust. With a third handseal, the wind suddenly blows the remainings away in all directions, except towards the user.
*Note: Can only be used once per battle.*
*Note: No more wind for two (2) turns.*
*Note: Leaves the user 50% drained of chakra.*
*Note: Can only be used by people who have wind as their element of preference and specialization.*

~ So you're saying if I decline something without explanation you will keep resubmitting it ? Didn't you read the first post of the CJ thread ? O_O "Mods have power to decline without giving out the reason". If its declined, without me asking you to change anything, just give it up. ~

 

[Gatsndshanks]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Sumogguwakafuchi no Jutsu) Smog from the Depths Technique

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique uses in conjunction with a cigarette. The user inhales deeply and release a huge torrent of smoke from their nose that covers mid range around initial release point in a dense, pitch-dark smog that causes the opponent to cough and irritate. This technique also has the users chakra embedded in its smog, much like chakra sensing rain, this jutsu can also detect the foe(s) whereabouts whilst in the area of the smog.
* Usebale twice per match.
* Sight and smell cut off for user and opponent
* No wind jutsus for one turn after

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

 

[Kaziname]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Mizu rirīsu: Suchīmu fushoku)-Water Release: Steam Corrosion
Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 30 [+10 for Mid range (+20 for Long range)]
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User does the correct handseals and then puts his palms on his lungs. After that user opens his mouth and blows out a stream of fine mist. The mist is extremely salty. Metal objects hit by the vapor will corrode and become enveloped by a thick coating of rust. Most metal weapons will get pits in their cutting edge and will cut poorly until resharpened. Thin items, such as senbon or ninja wire will disintegrate completely. Due to the extreme saltiness of the mist anyone blasted directly in the face will have a stinging sensation in their eyes, but no permanent damage. The mist is translucent and obscures vision slightly.

~ Um. WTF. Steam is a CE ~

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Taijutsu: Nekku tacchi ) - Taijutsu: Neck touch

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Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Close ( must touch opponent's neck )
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: User must get close to opponent and touch one nerve on opponent's neck to make opponent faint. The fainting lasts for one jutsu usage time ( About 5 seconds ) and during that time user cannot attack opponent with anything else but taijutsu.
Note:
- Can be used once
- Fainting lasts 5 seconds
- User can attack against opponent only using taijutsu while opponent has fainted

~ Declined ~

( Raiton: Yubi Shuriken ) - Lightning release: Finger darts

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid ( 5 - 15 meters without dojutsu )
Chakra cost: 5 per dart
Damage points: 10 per dart ( - 3 to user per dart )
Description: User will focuse lightning chakra on index and middle finger. When the chakra is gathered user will shape electric dart out of the chakra and point the target of the dart, launching electric dart from the two fingers. This can be done in rapid session allowing user to shoot out multiple darts with 3 seconds interwal between every dart.
Note:
- No other Raiton for two turns this is in effect
- Only once per battle
- Lasts two turns
- No handsealed jutsus can be used at the turns this is in effect due the fact that user's fingers are numbed and shaking from the electrical charge
- Ninja without dojutsu can accurately aim these darts max 5 - 20 meters.

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

( Mokuton: Chiisai nekkon ) - Wood release: Tiny Roots

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A ( At explosion it's same damage like explosive tag )
Description: After user has done Snake → Dog → Tiger handseals small roots will appear on all wood that is in this area, causing them to be able of draining any water jutsu dry they come contact with. When the water jutsu is absorbed the Wood will be enforced with Water and is weaker to fire jutsus also the wood that have water in can be exploded by user focusing chakra into them, pressuring the wood causing the wood to explode and sending water explosion with wooden spikes all around.
Note:
- No wood for one turn after usage
- Can only be used twice per battle
- Causes - 10 damage to user

~ Declined ~

( Fuuinjutsu: Oku Buki Gokuin ) - Sealing method: Inside weapon seal/unseal

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Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will make Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rooster handseals, bite their thumb and wipe blood on own sword while saying ''Kieru'', thus causing any projectile or tool that touches user's blade to be sealed into user's sword ( from other Swords to kunais, shurikens and chains ). This jutsu can also be done backwards unsealing any object from the sword by making Rat handseal and saying ''Deru''. The seal can only be broken by user. If user gets killed while the weapon is sealed inside of the sword it cannot be recovered.
Note:
- Requires excellent chakra control
- Can be used only once
- No Genjutsu or Taijutsu can be used for one turn after
- Only Kage ranked ninja or up can use this jutsu without handseals.
- Every sword is affected to this ( Expect pure chakra weapons )

~ You can't seal stuff inside weapons O_O ~

If there's anything wrong please edit these and not immediately decline
- Teh-tobz
If the whole thing is wrong and completely unrealistic and ill conceived, I will immediately decline without editing. Editing the custom is YOUR job, not mine.
- Emperor

 

[-Mugen-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: Takamura) – Summoning: Takamura

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Takamura is a medium sized hawk compared to the giant hawks having a wingspan of 3 meters. He is also a very young hawk and hasn’t reached his full size that are like his older brethren counter parts. He is big enough that the user may ride the hawk. Takamura has red and brown markings with feathers protruding from his head. He is capable of moving at fast speeds due to his smaller size and is able to attack the opponents with medium sized fireballs, which are equivalent to B rank. It can also attack using its features such as the wings, beaks and talons.
Note: Must know Hawk summoning contract wielded by Kaito-sama
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

(Kuchiyose: Raikan) – Summoning: Raikan

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Raikan is a medium sized hawk with a wingspan of 3 meters. He is also a very young hawk and hasn’t reached his full size that are like his older brethren counter parts. He has a black body with yellow stripes running down the side of his body from his eyes to the tips of his feathers which some say are the exact representation of his elemental affinity. He is capable of flying at very fast speeds Raikan is capable of flapping his wings and creating lightning blasts equivalent of a B rank level attack. And he also has the ability to use his beak, wings and talons as extra means of attacking opponents.
Note: Must know Hawk Summoning contract wielded by Kaito-sama
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

I have sighned the hawk contract.For proof her is the link

You must be registered for see links

~I'll confer with Kaito~

(Kuchiyose: Takamura) – Summoning: Takamura
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Takamura is a medium sized hawk compared to the giant hawks having a wingspan of 3 meters. He is also a very young hawk and hasn’t reached his full size that are like his older brethren counter parts. He is big enough that the user may ride the hawk. Takamura has red and brown markings with feathers protruding from his head. He is capable of moving at fast speeds due to his smaller size and is able to attack the opponents with medium sized fireballs, which are equivalent to B rank. It can also attack using its features such as the wings, beaks and talons.
Note: Must know Hawk summoning contract wielded by Kaito-sama
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

(Kuchiyose: Raikan) – Summoning: Raikan

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: Raikan is a medium sized hawk with a wingspan of 3 meters. He is also a very young hawk and hasn’t reached his full size that are like his older brethren counter parts. He has a black body with yellow stripes running down the side of his body from his eyes to the tips of his feathers which some say are the exact representation of his elemental affinity. He is capable of flying at very fast speeds Raikan is capable of flapping his wings and creating lightning blasts equivalent of a B rank level attack. And he also has the ability to use his beak, wings and talons as extra means of attacking opponents.
Note: Must know Hawk Summoning contract wielded by Kaito-sama
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

I am resubmitting these jutsus because it said that he would confer with Kaito.But Kaito told me no one contacted him.(Actually it was kaito who suggested me to make these hawks.He already checked them and approved)

 

[Nero]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton Release: Doton Dageki) Earth Release: Earth Strike
Type: Attack/Supplimentary
Range: Short-Long
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user makes hard and sharp earth tips on the fingers in a matter of a second they form because of the user being Sage rank the user then releases the earth spikes with wind chakra shooting them at the opponent at a high speed. Because of the added wind the tips are extremely fast and reach mid range in a blink of an eye. The tips are as long as the fingers. Only five tips may be made.
Can only be used 3 times in battle.

~ OPed ~

(Suiton: Pinku Asuparagasu no shi no sutoraiki) Water Release: Pink Asparagus Death Strike
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user does five handsigns the handsigns make water spikes erupt from the ground below the opponent. When they erupt they come up at a fast rate in a solid form of water that can pierce rock half way if its the same rank. These spikes can come up in any angle but only ten spikes may be created in the making of the jutsu. They all come up within inches of each other- i.e. one spike cannot be created in one corner of the arena, and another in another corner. It takes about three seconds for the spikes to erupt. The spikes are ten feet tall and extremely sharp.
Can only be used three times.
No water source required.

~ Approved ~

(Ranpu Tanken) Light Daggers
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplimentary
Range: Short-Mid
Rank: S
Chakra: 40 (20 in each dagger)
Damage: 80
Description: The user pulls out two special made daggers from his side. These daggers are no ordinary daggers their built out of the speed of wind and lightning. These are chakra weapons that can be used for anything. Ability one: Focusing chakra into the daggers: Left Dagger-Wind, Right Dagger- Lightning has the ability to cut deep for the wind and to parazles for the lightning. Ability two: Defense for the wind dagger: Can force objects back and send a large gust out. Last Ability: The user focuses chakra into the lightning dagger because of the lightness in the dagger the dagger has the ability to move swiftly the user throws the dagger with lightning chakra focused into it because of the amount of lightning chakra into it the dagger is going at an intense speed the dagger reaches mid range in a blink of an eye.
Each ability can only be used once in the whole battle. (ability one last for a whole turn)
After using each ability the user takes 15 damage.

~ Declined, no resubmit ~

As the One move pwn sage I gotta have more customs

 

[HiddenShadowNinja]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

*Submitting Bats to be my 2nd Summoning*

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(Kuchiyose: Kyuuketsuki Batto, Dracula)Summoning: Vampire Bat, Dracula
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40 (60 if it’s daytime)
Damage: N/A
Description: Dracula is the king of bat summons. His body is about the size of Gamabunta’s hand, but his wingspan is as long as Gamabunta’s, hand to hand. He can use all sound jutsu (that don’t need special requirements) up to A rank, and has heat sensors on his nose to better find targets. While he can use sound jutsu, his main goal is to feed on the opponents chakra using the Chakra Absorbtion technique. However, when Dracula uses the Chakra Absorbtion technique he is able to suck out 30 chakra per turn instead of the normal 10 (because of his size). As bats are generally nocturnal creatures, Dracula and other bat summons will not be thrilled if you call upon them during the day. If this happens, they will require extra chakra from you as soon as you summon them.
*Must hold the contract to summon bats*
*Lasts 4 turns*

~ Do you have a Sound Bio ? If not, Declined and do not resubmit. If so, then remove the Chakra Absorption or the Sound and restrict it a bit more ~

 

[Sin]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Sono Kyousei Manipyure-Shon Of Chakura) - The Great Manipulation Of Chakra
Type: Defence/Supplementery
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Releasing chakra from the body, The User will create a shield of chakra which changes the forming of jutsus so any jutsus in contact with this shield of chakra will change in depending on what the user wants. Manipulating attacks to change elements so that they'd actually be able to stop attacks by using chakra to control the change of element. Also able to change the shape of an attack.
So when an attack like Swamp Of The Underworld happens, The User can change this attack maybe into wood (if they had this element) and it would be a platform safe. Or if the opponent throws a rasen-shurikan, they could change it into a heavy sort of cube which would make it drop and do nothing to the user but just destroy the ground around it.

-While using this manipulation move, they cannot use any other move (except if they had another body or clones-
-Ends after 5 turns of use-
-Can only be used once per battle-
-Can Only Be taught by -Sin--

(Ps: Sorry If you can't understand what I'm meaning, I don't really get to explain stuff)

~ Declined. WTF, Sin, this is absolutely unrealistic, throughly Overpowered, and illogically conceived. No resubmit. ~

 

[Smoker]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Replacing gloves of lightning

Custom weapon: ( ランサ・デル・レランパーゴ ) - Lance of Thunder and Lightning

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 20 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 20 to user after activating )
Description: User will start gathering and focus own chakra into hands, creating Lance of Thunder and Lightning which has unbelievable powers and the ability to cause numbing and paralyzing into the places it hits. The user can also throw this lance creating shockwave that covers three meter radius and paralyzes anything inside that area. The Lance will stay with the user until user's killed or has run out of chakra.
Note:
- Can only be created once per battle
- It causes - 20 damage to user when activated
- Lasts until user is killed or user has ran out of chakra
- It costs - 20 chakra per turn

~ Declined, I need lots more restrictions ~

Please edit if anything is wrong and not decline
- Tsuke - Kun\
As I said to Tobz, editing it is YOUR job, not mine. Understand ?
- Emperor

 

[~Nemesis~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton: Kyojin Fūma Shuriken) – Lightning Release: Giant Demon Windmill Shuriken

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will take out two-demon windmill shuriken and concentrate and manipulate their lightning chakra into them and increase their speed, and penetrative power dealing more damage and also can cause numbing on contact.
Note: Numbing affect lasts 1 turn.

(Doton: Haikou Enchuu) – Earth Style: Mine Shaft
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing Horse- Tiger – Dragon – Dog the user stomps on the ground releasing their earth chakra to create a hollow like chamber of 3 meters deep underneath the opponent and then from the opponents weight they will cause the earth to give way
underneath them and trap them in the shaft.

~ Both Declined, can be replicated with existing jutsu ~

(Doton: Irigomi) – Earth Style: Coming in together
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user performs Ram – Horse – Rat and then stomping their foot on the ground can cause an open piece of earth like a hole or fissure to close shut trapping anyone inbetween.

~ Approved ~

(Futon: Shinkuu Kadou) – Wind Release: Vacuum Vortex
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing Dog – Dragon – Horse the user releases their wind chakra to begins surrounding the opponent and then it starts to form a vacuum that begins sucking in the wind and can draw in nearby debree and even projectiles to cause extra damage.
then i got 2 wind techs

~ Need restrictions ~

Futon: Teikiatsu Fūma Shuriken) – Wind Release: Cyclone Windmill Shuriken
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will launch two Demon windmill shurikens that then by pass the opponent and then by performing a set of hand seals Horse – Rat – Dog and then creating a wind current infront of the opponent that then sucks
the opponent towards it aswell as the wind mill shuriken which then strike the opponent as they are being sucked in by the wind.

~ Can be replicated by existing jutsu. Declined. ~

 

[Geezus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Jishaku Raiton Ninpou: Jibamyaku ( Magnetic Lightning Ninja Art : Electro-Magnetic Pulse)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/ Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 150 (-50 to user)
Desription: The user utilizes lightning chakra to manipulate the elecrtical particles generated within a magnetic field, then by manipulating the magnetic field the user releases a burst of electro-magnetic radiation caused by the suddenly fluctuating magnetic field. The resulting electric and magnetic fields may couple with electrical/electronic systems to produce damaging current and voltage surges that can repel both matter and energy, but not sound and light.
(User Cant Use Lightning or Magnetic Arts for 2 turns)
(Usable 2 times)
(Only Usable by Sandaime Kazekage)

Jishaku Raiton Ninpou: Jibabenso (Magnetic Lightning Ninja Art: Electro-Magnetic Defense)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defense
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100 if Touched (-30 to user from strain)
Description: By utilizing the force exerted on object by a electromagnetic field, the user can cause that force to make up such effects that include the creation of force-fields which can selectively block out and/or keep in matter and energy 360degrees around them. (while they usually allow sound and visible light to pass).
(Only Usable by Sandaime Kazekage)
(Usable 1 Times)
(Last 3 turns)
(User can't release any attacks unless magnetic based.)

~ Both Declined. No electromagnetic things that do not allow matter and energy to pass will be approved. Do not submit again regarding that. ~

 

[Vergil..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Futton: Fūjin's koutetsu(Wind Style:Fujin's Armor)
Rank:S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+5 every turn active)
Damage: +30 to taijutsu and +20 to Wind
Description: The user focuses wind chakra around his feet and hands gaining wind gloves and boots. The wind boots give the user the ability to slide over the ground at Lee's speed (withouth the weights and the first gate part I), also the armor gives the user's taijutsu greater power making the user able to attack his foes without touching them(still short range) by giving wind shockwaves.
(Last 3 Turns)
(Usable 2 times; 1 turn Recharge)
(Only Vergil.. can teach it)

~ Declined ~

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Raiton: Yubi Shuriken ) - Lightning release: Finger darts

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid ( 5 - 15 meters without dojutsu )
Chakra cost: 5 per dart
Damage points: 10 per dart ( - 3 to user per dart )
Description: User will focuse lightning chakra on index and middle finger. When the chakra is gathered user will shape electric dart out of the chakra and point the target of the dart, launching electric dart from the two fingers. This can be done in rapid session allowing user to shoot out multiple darts with 3 seconds interwal between every dart.
Note:
- No other Raiton for two turns this is in effect
- Only once per battle
- Lasts two turns
- No handsealed jutsus can be used at the turns this is in effect due the fact that user's fingers are numbed and shaking from the electrical charge
- Ninja without dojutsu can accurately aim these darts max 5 - 20 meters.

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

( Mokuton: Chiisai nekkon ) - Wood release: Tiny Roots

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A ( At explosion it's same damage like explosive tag )
Description: After user has done Snake → Dog → Tiger handseals small roots will appear on all wood that is in this area, causing them to be able of draining any water jutsu dry they come contact with. When the water jutsu is absorbed the Wood will be enforced with Water and is weaker to fire jutsus also the wood that have water in can be exploded by user focusing chakra into them, pressuring the wood causing the wood to explode and sending water explosion with wooden spikes all around.
Note:
- No wood for one turn after usage
- Can only be used twice per battle
- Causes - 10 damage to user

~ Declined ~

( Fuuinjutsu: Oku Buki Gokuin ) - Sealing method: Inside weapon seal/unseal

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will make Rat → Ox → Monkey → Rooster handseals, bite their thumb and wipe blood on own sword while saying ''Kieru'', thus causing any projectile or tool that touches user's blade to be sealed into user's sword ( from other Swords to kunais, shurikens and chains ). This jutsu can also be done backwards unsealing any object from the sword by making Rat handseal and saying ''Deru''. The seal can only be broken by user. If user gets killed while the weapon is sealed inside of the sword it cannot be recovered.
Note:
- Requires excellent chakra control
- Can be used only once
- No Genjutsu or Taijutsu can be used for one turn after
- Only Kage ranked ninja or up can use this jutsu without handseals.
- Every sword is affected to this ( Expect pure chakra weapons )

~ You can't seal stuff inside weapons O_O ~

If there's anything wrong please edit these and not immediately decline
- Teh-tobz
If the whole thing is wrong and completely unrealistic and ill conceived, I will immediately decline without editing. Editing the custom is YOUR job, not mine.
- Emperor

Editing following custom

Custom weapon: ( kūsō hane ) - Daydream weapons

Spoiler

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 50 ( - 10 per turn )
Damage points: N/A
Description: User will draw out the daydream triple swords and use them in fight. The swords are called Masamune, Fatherhood and Caladbolg. The origins of these swords are unknown but it is known that they've been forged from chakra infused metal that isn't shown on earth.

Masamune

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• The sword is indestructible but it isn't able of break everything.
• It is light like a feather and it cannot be wielded by anyone else but its owner.
• It boosts the speed of user in handseal forming.
• It is able of breaking through rocks with lightning chakra infused into it.

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Fatherhood

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• It is slower sword but it can deal huge amount of damage in small amount of time.
• Only skilled swordsman can use sword that is this big
• This sword is also indestructible and cannot be wielded by anyone expect it's owner.
• It breaks easily through regular steel/iron swords

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Cadalbolg

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• It is light and slightly blueish sword that can be swung fast, creating furious combos
• It is indestructible and can only be wielded by owner.

Note:
- Only skilled swordsman can use two swords of this set at the same time.
- They cost - 10 chakra per turn when wielded
- User cannot perform genjutsu for whole battle when these swords are in drawn
- No Forbidden ranked taijutsu or S ranked Ninjutsu can be used while these swords are in play
- Summonings can't be used for three turns after user has drawn the swords.

~ Declined ~

 

[Kaziname]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Mizu rirīsu: Suchīmu fushoku)-Water Release: Steam Corrosion
Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 30 [+10 for Mid range (+20 for Long range)]
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User does the correct handseals and then puts his palms on his lungs. After that user opens his mouth and blows out a stream of fine mist. The mist is extremely salty. Metal objects hit by the vapor will corrode and become enveloped by a thick coating of rust. Most metal weapons will get pits in their cutting edge and will cut poorly until resharpened. Thin items, such as senbon or ninja wire will disintegrate completely. Due to the extreme saltiness of the mist anyone blasted directly in the face will have a stinging sensation in their eyes, but no permanent damage. The mist is translucent and obscures vision slightly.

~ Um. WTF. Steam is a CE ~

ok, ok my bad. Only name is CE xD

(Suiton: Misuto Fushoku)-Water Release: Mist Corrosion
Rank: A
Type: Defense
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 30 [+10 for Mid range (+20 for Long range)]
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User does the correct handseals and then puts his palms on his lungs. After that user opens his mouth and blows out a stream of fine mist. The mist is extremely salty. Metal objects hit by the vapor will corrode and become enveloped by a thick coating of rust. Most metal weapons will get pits in their cutting edge and will cut poorly until resharpened. Thin items, such as senbon or ninja wire will disintegrate completely. Due to the extreme saltiness of the mist anyone blasted directly in the face will have a stinging sensation in their eyes, but no permanent damage. The mist is translucent and obscures vision slightly.

~ Needs restrictions ~


ok now?

 

[Smoker]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Added Restrictions , Tell If Need More . Custom weapon: ( ランサ・デル・レランパーゴ ) - Lance of Thunder and Lightning

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 ( - 20 per turn )
Damage points: N/A ( - 30 to user after activating )
Description: User will start gathering and focus own chakra into hands, creating Lance of Thunder and Lightning which has unbelievable powers and the ability to cause numbing and paralyzing into the places it hits. The user can also throw this lance creating shockwave that covers three meter radius and paralyzes anything inside that area. The Lance will stay with the user until 5 Turns Are Over .
Note:
- No Lightning For 6 Turns -
- Once thrown, it reforms in the user's hand next turn
- Stays For 5 Turns -
- Can only be created once per battle
- It numbs the user's fingers, slowing down handseal speed
- It costs - 20 chakra per turn

~ Approved, I edited bits ~

 

[-Mugen-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Shippou taka dageki )- Silver hawk strike
Type:attack
Rank:B
Range:short
Chakra cost:25
Damage points:40
Description:This is a simple but deadly attack with a sword.The user inserts either wind or lightning chakra in there sword and than thrusting towards there opponent with great speed.Than when the user gets close to their opponent the user jumps and once he is decending he strikes his sword down at his opponent.
*must have a chakra sword
*must know atleast D-rank lightning or wind jutsu
please edit if needed

(Fuuton: Onjun no Kaze) – Wind release: Taming of the Wind

Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: By manipulating their wind chakra the user is capable of producing a small-pressured current of wind from their hand that is capable of cutting with sharp accuracy. This technique is ideal even for close quarter combat as it can easily cut


(Raiton:raikou enjin) - lightning element:Lightning ring
Rank:C
Type:Offensive, Supplementary
Range:short
chakra cost:20
Damage points:15 (each turn once the enemy is traped)
Description:The user makes lightning in his hand and than makes it take shape of a circle.The user than can throw it on his enemy to demoblize them.Thus,stunning them.As the enemy is stunned and the circle of lighting is still on them it releases a shock wave that keeps stunning them.
*The enemy can only be stunned for 2 turns
*The user cant move while the jutsu is active
*While the jutsu is active the user can only use a jutsu that needs one arm(like chidori,raikiri)
*Once the enemy is caught he cant free himself.(has to wait 3 turns or the user deactivates the jutsu

(Raiton:raikou kenpa shouheki)-Lightning detecting barrier
Rank:B
Type: Defensive, Supplementary
Range:short-mid
chakra cost:25
Damage points:5
Descreption:The user releases sparks of lightning around himself that stunes a enemy if he comes near and detecs enemys to mid range.The only way to get undetected by this jutsu is if the enemy goes underground where the sparks dont reach.
*Lasts one turn
*The user must be comletly still

~ All Declined. Unrealistic, repeat abilities of existing techniques and lack of differentiation into a new jutsu ~

Please edit if needed.Dont just decline them
Let me repeat: It's YOUR job to edit them, not mine. Got it ? YOURS.

 

[HiddenShadowNinja]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose: Kyuuketsuki Batto, Dracula)Summoning: Vampire Bat, Dracula
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40 (60 if it’s daytime) (-20 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: Dracula is the king of bat summons. His body is about the size of Gamabunta’s hand, but his wingspan is as long as Gamabunta’s, hand to hand. He can use

Spoiler

(Ototon: Naiteki Ne no Jutsu) - Sound Release: Inner Sonar Skill
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user enhancing their hearing by utilizing chakra and enfusing their sound waves from their mouth. With their breathing sound waves emerge and bounce off of objects having them know wherever everything is around them.

and has heat sensors on his nose to better find targets. For attack purposes, he can use wind jutsu up to B rank that fire uncontrolled blasts of wind ( not jutsus like Wind Blade and other controlled techniques ) using his wings. As bats are generally nocturnal creatures, Dracula and other bat summons will not be thrilled if you call upon them during the day. If this happens, they will require extra chakra from you as soon as you summon them.
*Must hold the contract to summon bats*
*Lasts 4 turns*
*Can be summoned only once per battle
*No other bats can be summoned while he is in play
*As Dracula is a vampire bat, he will continually drain the users chakra while he is summoned . At the end of four turns, user loses ability to use Forbidden Rank techniques*

(I took out him having all sound jutsu and just left the inner sonar skill as that is an ability all bats actually have. It is the same concept as the toads using oil. If there is still a problem with that then you can take that out if it'll make it approvable.)

~ Approved, I edited bit ~

 

[Ben-sama]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Raiton : Yari Sensa) Lightning Release : Spear Sensor

Spoiler

Rank : A
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The user will infuse his spear with lightning chakra and then release the chakra throughout the battlefield that then becomes many invisible to the eye sparks that once tangeled with will alert the user of the opponent's location. The sparks cannot be felt or seen to the opponent.
- Sparks last 4 turns.
- Twice per battle.

(Sanso Kuuhaku) Oxygen Vacuum

Spoiler

Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The user will make a set of handseals and infuse his chakra into a regular explosive tag, upon explosion the tag will explode twice the power of a normal tag and will incinerate any oxygen in the vicinity of the explosion.
- Once per battle

(Suiton : Shimeri O-ba-ro-do) Water Release : Humidity Overload

Spoiler

Rank : S
Type : Supplementary
Range : Short/Long
Chakra Cost : 40
Damage Points : N/A
Description : The uses materializes an enormous ammount of water and then spreads it throughout the entire battlefield. Due to the enormous ammount of humidity in the battlefield fire cannot be created, it gets extinguished the same second it is created.
- Twice per battle
- Humidity lasts 3 turns

~ All Declined ~

 

[Pain..]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Torune-do Houmen Oite Makai ) Tornado Release In Hell

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description: The user will combines there fire and water chakra together to create a ultimate tornado attack witch will take less then a minute. When the user is ready the user will build up his water chakra making a tornado then by adding fire chakra on the water tornado will set a ultimate tornado a Fire/Water tornado witch can take a whole place down easily and is really dangerous. The tornado can be created in front of the user that is using the tornado.

NOTE: Can only be teach by Obito-Uchiha.
NOTE: No S-Rank or above the next following turn.

~ Only for Emperor ~

~ Emperor any mistake you could fix it ~

~ Fire + Water = extinguished O_O ~