Archived [ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[karagekazuno]

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note:can only be used once per battle
note:can also be an offensive attk increase to weapons against enimies in battle

-check your previous post-

note: wait until you are in the middle of the battle to use it

 

[Kiwii]

Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Puppet: Unabara (The Deep)

Rank: C
Chakra: N/A
Damage Points: 30
Description: Has the primitive shape of a submarine. Is 1 meter wide and half a meter high. It can be commanded using 3 fingers minimum, wich means the user can weild 3 in a row.
Basicly, it shell as a similair effect of the jutsu "Earth Release: Underground Fish Projection", allowin it to go underground or underwater without disturbing the surface. 2 fingers control the movement and the middle controls the traps. Unabara has 3 traps:
1. Opens a trapdoor on the top, reveiling 3 big saw wheels, spinning at great speed.
2. Opens a trapdoor on the front, shooting multiple needles made of metal.
3. Opems a trapdoor bellow the puppet, wich shoot multiple wires that tie the opponent. the wires have several tags, wich explode when the user feels necessary. Destroys the puppet.
*Made by Tukki Aburame*
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~Approved~

 

[Toku]

Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

These custom jutsus were given to me by Uchiha Kaito plase change the name to mine

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(Ninpo: Shinku Kiji Ryuu)- Ninja art: Scarlet cloth dragon

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 25
Damage cost: N/A (+10 for explosive tags)
Description: the user opens a scroll and performs the following seals: tiger dog horse. This then releases multiple cloths with spiked tastles on the ends that is infused with chakra and allowing the user to control its path of direction. The scarlet cloth dragons are then able to trap the enemy by wrapping round the legs shoulders and arms and restrains their movements. The spiked tastles are then thrust into the ground to act as ankers to hold the enemy down. This can also be used by applying explosive tags to the cloth to use as extra damage after holding the enemy still.

Note: This jutsu can be used in conjunction with explosive tags to cause damage.
Note: can only be taught by Tokugawa Yohimune.

(Katana Jutsu: Shinkirou Dageki) - Sword art - mirage strike

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user uses the light reflected off the blade and moulds it with chakra sent into the blade. This then intensifies the light reflected towards the enemy and then gives the illusion of multiple blades in which the enemy sees multiple blades coming towards them and find it hard to predict the actual blade.

Note: This jutsu must be performed with a drawn sword.
Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Tokugawa Yoshimune.
Note: This jutsu can only be performed 3 times.

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~Approved~

 

[Black Reaper]

Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

I am posting this on the behalf of UzumakiJake, who can't right now.

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Rat Style: Rat prison
Rank: S
Chakra: 50
DAmage: NA
Discription: Both users are surrounded by walls from the land of the rat. encaged even the floor becomes a wall. Totally surrounded this wall is industructable and neither player canescape even with a teleoprtation jutsu because any jutsu either player uses, stays w/ in the walls of their prison due to the special chakra surrounding the prison. This prison is formed where ever each player is.It starts out huge, due to most rats being gama's size or bigger and instantly apears after jutsu is complete. The hand sighns are boar, bird, dog, and rat.

Note: Lasts 2 turns
Note: if used cannot use rat jutsu (restrictions do not effect summons)
Note: Effects both players user and target
Note: nust have a contract with the rats

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~poor description~

 

[Akiza]

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Introducing Ame Hijutsu!

(Ame hijutsu: Hari Ame hitoame) - Rain secret Technique: Needle Rain Shower

Rank: A
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Whilst the field is being rained upon, the user releases chakra and molds with the droplets and they then take on a sharp characteristic and transform into a pin-like form.
Note: Can only be used by members of Rain Village
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~Approved~
(Ame Hijutsu: Senkou Shinsui) - Rain Secret Technique: Flash Flood

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user releases their chakra into the sky to create an immense downpour of Rain, the rainfall causes a catastrophic flash flood that washes mud and debris towards the opponent and sweeping them away.
Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Can only be used by members of Rain Village
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~Approved~

(Ame Hijutsu:Hanzou no Iji ) Rain Secret Technique : Memories of Hanzou
Rank: S
Chakra:40 ( +25 per turn )
Damage: 80
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Attack/Defence
The user uses water to make a replication of the famous Hanzou on his giant salamander. The salamander is made of a very large amount of water, and is highly dense, giving it enormous weight, enough to cause shockwaves and a crater if it jumps. The salamander can also use its tongue as a smashing club, that can shatter rock, or use its tail for the same purpose. It can also fire very large balls of water that explode on impact to create pools of water.
The replication of Hanzou can create waves/beams/prisons/spikes/walls of water by waving its staff. Each costs 30 chakra.
Note: Rain Village ninjas only can use this jutsu
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: No Doujutsus, Wood/Ice/Lava, Shikotsumayaku, Taijutsu or Fuuinjutsu as long as this tech. is active
Note: Lasts 5 turns
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~how long will these jutsus last?~
*time added* -KT

 

[Mugen Ryukyu]

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(Katon: Kaen Panchi ) Fire Style: Flame Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: user gathers up fire chakra into both hand until there is a great amount of chakra stored then he'she releases it at once causing a deadly inferno to engulf the enemy.
(Notenly members of shariganmasters hideout can use this jutsu)
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~declined~
overpowed to be a B rank jutsu



(Katon: Kaen Panchi ) Fire Style: rapid Flame Punch
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: user gathers up fire chakra into both hand until there is a great amount of chakra stored then he/she releases it punching towards the enemy yo create multiple fireballs to come out causing a deadly inferno to engulf the enemy.
note: only members of the shariganmasters hideout can use this jutsu)
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~pending~
needs some side effects and limits

 

[Toku]

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(Akuma Fuukaku: Chakra jiraigen) - Demon Style: Chakra Minefield

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: while in bijuu mode the user releases lots of condenced bijuu chakra balls which are shot around the opponent and then they are made to expand and then explode causing a large chain reaction of explosions that explode around the opponent which is hard to escape from.

Note: Can only be used in bijuu mode
Note: Can only be used once
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~Approved~

(Akuma Fuukaku: Bijuu hando kaisho) - Demon style: tailed beast hand Club

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage cost: 80(-10 to user)
Description: The user while out of bijuu mode summons up bijuu chakra to cover their hand with chakra that takes on the characteristics of their bijuu and they then can send the hand to strike the opponent which causes burning on contact or the user can use it to defend against a incoming attack such as taijutsu or earth style of A rank and down.

Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Can only be used by jichuriki

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~Approved~

(Shukaku suna nagereboshi)-Shukaku's sand meteor

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: while in bijuu mode shukaku collects a large amount of sand and malicious chakra in the sky which he shapes into a huge meteor before bringing it crashing down on his opponent. The area is left a desecrated desert wasteland after the attack.
*note: only usable 3 times
*note: takes 1 turn to collect sand in the sky.
*note: must be in bijuu mode.
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~Approved~

 

[-Andy-]

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Suiton Bakudan no jutsu:Water Bomb Jutsu

Rank: B
Chakra:25
Damae:50
Range: Short-Long
attack
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
chakra 30
damage 60
Description: Using a small amount of water like a puddle Andy can create an orb of water that causes an explosion to miner damage the opponent and if hit in the right spot maybe even brake bones.The orb of water maybe kicked or thrown at the enemy.
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~Approved~

Water Style:Water Cloud-水スタイル：水雲
Type:supplementary
Chakra:15
Damage:N/A
Rank:C
Description:The user makes 200 L of water Turn into a cloud form thing and raise into the air after that it starts to rain in a spot with heavy water
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~Approved~
Water Style:Water Sewing-水スタイル：水縫製
Type:Attack
Chakra:25
Damae:50
Rank:B
Description:giant water needles come rushing out of a lake or some other water source if its something like a puddle then the needles will have around 2 m of radius but since lakes have so much water the water needles can go up to speeds of 20 km/h and around 100 m
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~pending~
poor description

Name:water style:thousand of drop bullets-弾丸のドロップスタイルの何千もの水
Rank:S
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Type:Attack
Range:Long
Description:The user splashes the water with a big object and controls the water that is falling down since the falling down water is in the form of drops he can control them and turn them into bullets and speed them up so there are thousands of bullets rushing towards the opponent
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~Approved~

Water style:Water Particle Armor-水スタイル：水粒子アーマー
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Range:short
Type: Defencive
Description:lastas for 3 turns and can be used only 3 times per battle this jutsu makes a layer of water particles in the surfess of the body that is able to deflect any Water,Fire,Wind elemental attacks up to C rank the chakra will be taken fron that jutsu and be added to andys next jutsu with any of his jutsus that he uses goes up by 1 rank the armor lasts for 3 turns
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~Approved~


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dont edit your post

Andy if you edit your post again after being edited by a mod, the rules say you'll get banned from this thread for a week.

 

[Alucard]

Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Suiton: Mizu no Oujo Souho) - Water Release: Water's Death Touch

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will infuse the surrounding chakra with water. Once done the user will make any water touching the opponent to be absorbed by him. Fusing both water with opponent's body, the user can turn the opponent in water. This jutsu only works if the opponent is completly wet. This jutsu can only be used 2 per battle.

-declined OP-

(Suiton: Mizu no Oujo Souho) - Water Release: Water's Death Touch

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will infuse the surrounding chakra with water. Once done the user will make any water touching the opponent to be absorbed by him. Fusing both water with opponent's body, the user can turn the opponent in water. This jutsu only works if the opponent was in contact with water for 3 consecutive turns. This jutsu can only be used 2 per battle.

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~i'll let rei handle this O_O

-Declined: I don't see how you can make someone absorb water, how do you make the "fusing"?"

 

[-Ventus-]

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( Awaton: Doragon Bomu no jutsu.) "Bubble Style: Dragon Bomb jutsu"
Type:Attack
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:the use emits bubbles from his mouth and these bubbles then take form of a large dragon that is resistant to water and wind ninjutsu but weak against lightning ninjutsu. When the jutsu is about to collapse it erupts into hundreds of tiny, dragon-shaped bubbles that can harm,wound,blind the opponent.And the user can cntrol these bubbles to his will and these bubbles will explode on contact with the enemy.
*Can only be used by utakata*
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~Approved~

Bubble Release: Raging Eels technique (Awaton: Yonfun Unagi no jutsu)
Type:Attack
Rank:a
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:This techique alows the user to create eel-like bubbles that he can control. When near their target these 'eels' explode.These bubbles are sturdy and can go under earth and not easily pop
*Can only be used by utakata*
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~water bombs is my jutsu and i gave premission to andy to create a water orb bomb

Bubble release:Osprey
Type:Supplement
Rank:S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Description:s a powerful ninjutsu created by Utakata. Using his bubble-pipe, he creates a small vortex of bubbles. then, he merges them and molds them like a bird, creating a large sea-bird bubble. Utakata then merges w/ it making him inside so that he can utilize jutsu's w/o being hit by the opponent.
this bird bubble is very sturdy and not easy to pop it can only be destroyed by lightning element s-rank below as bubble element is weak to it.Utakata can also cntrol this bird on his will.
*Can only be used by utakata*
*Stays in battle for 3 turns*
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~Declined~

Bubble Release: Bubble Containment Sphere
Type:Attack
Rank:S
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:The user uses the water around the opponent(it can be in the ground or air)then by controling and forming it to a large bubble absorbing the opponent (because the water used is around him) and restricting and paralyzzing the opponent for 2 turns.
*can only be used by Utakata*
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~Already exist~

Bubble Release:Shock Burst
Type:Attack
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:is one of Utakata's bubble jutsu. He blowws several waves of bubbles, which gathers and follows the opponent and explode making the opponent paralyzed
*can only be used by utakata*
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~based on my water bomb jutsu~

 

[Hellsbadass]

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~Please check if i missed any jutsus

 

[Lord of Kaos.]

Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Water: Giant Hand (suiton:kyojin hando)
Type:Attack/Supplemantry
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60(+5 with lightning)
Description:The user creates a giant hand out of water that can be hard for a punch or sharp to act as a claw it can also be used to grab the enemy. Can be mixed with lightning tecniuqes to make it stronger.
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan

-approved-

Multi-Advanced Puppet Control ( taju koudo Kugutsu)
Rank:A
Type: Supplemantry
Range:short-mid
Chakra Cost:30 (-10 per turn that its active)
Damage: 0
Description: The user makes many threads out of chakra and attaches them to puppets to control more puppets and control each with better ability making the puppets faster and more flexible. The amount of puppets controled depends on rank
Jonin: 3 with great ability 4 with average abilty
S-rank:4with great ability 5 with average abilty
Sanin: 5 with great ability 7 with average abilty
Kage and higher:7 with great ability 8 with average abilty
*Can only be used by puppet users
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan

-declined: too many puppets and you are not Sasori, not your chakra supply is sufficient enough to keep these many puppets in the battlefield.-

Rising Needle Strike (joushou hari atakku)
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Long-Mid- Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The users puppet implants hundred needles into the ground and a they instantly come out of the ground going everywhere except where the user stands. The needles are wrapped around paper bombs.
*The user needs to be a puppet user
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
*Can only be used 1 time per puppet and max of 3 times.

-declined: OP for A rank-

Water:Fish Defence ( Suiton: ika benso)
Rank: C
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30 (-7 per turn that its active )
Damage:0
Description:The user creates 10 fishs around him the fishs jump around the user with great speed blocking attacks mostly taijutsu and weapon attacks. The fish move by themselfs and they can be destroyed with attacks too powerfull.
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan

-Hm, well...declined for too many reasons. To use animals, you need a contact of them. The description is awfully poor cause you dont even state that you have to be in water to use them. Next, what kind of fish can actually block a punch? and lastly, the idea of a ninja with fish flying all around him is...not so ninja like-


Lightning style: Blinnding Flash (Raiton:buraindo senkou)
Type:Supplemantary
Rank: A
Range: Mid 10-12
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage:0
Description: The user creates a series of sudden bright flashes that makes the opponant blind for 2 or 3 turns depending on opponants rank. Jonin or higher 2. Special jonin or lower 3 turns.
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan

-Declined: wrong rank info, you can't blind someone that easily, lighting blasts already exist as jutsus-

 

[Daemon]

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(Kuchiyose : Kikio no Shuiro Komadori)- Kikio the Scarlet Robin
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Kikio the Scarlet Robin.Her Natural Affinity is Fire and can do from C-A Rank Fire Justu. She could Fly in the Air about 90 Mph.She is about the Size Of Gamakichi
*this Justu can Only Be Used by Minato1*
Note: this justu Can only be used once per Battle
Picture:

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-approved-

(Kuchiyose: Komadori)- Summoning: Robin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will summon a Robin into the battle field by first biting their thumb and doing the required hand selas and place their hand on the ground and call forth the Robin of their choice. The size of the Robin will be even to that of Gamakichi, unless stated otherwise. All robins are capable of speech, are highly intellectual, and can use all jutsu that is in their capability.
~Scroll owner is Minato1~

-approved-

 

[UzumakiJake]

Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Need Grim or Goro to grade

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Sage Art: Seal Disruption
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: NA
Discription: By focusing your chakra into an enemy hand sighn you can disrupt their chakra and cancel their jutsu. Much like the anti summoning but with hand sighns. Like in ninja school they said if you dont get the chakra just right it will not work and may even hurt you by doing this your chakra strings become more active for a turn making you a little faster and stronger for just one turn.

NOTE: only usable 2 times a fight.
NOTE: must know sage mode
NOTE: dont need to be in sage mode
NOTE: After use cant use again for a nother 2 turns.
NOTE: cant be used till at least turn 2

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Nezumi: Rat Hair
Rank: A
Chakra: 35
Damage:60
Discription: Your summons hair/fur by encasing it with chakra your summon can sharpen then extend its hair/fur and can even pierce through the ground to hold incase tehre is a threat of being washed or pushed away, aslo in defence and attack.

NOTE: Only Summoned beast can preform
Note: Only UzumakiJakes Summons can use

Missed 2

 

[UzumakiJake]

Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

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Summoning Jutsu: Rat's Ruler
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: NA
Discription: If you have a conract with the rats you can summon this great beast. This rat is a little bigger gamma bunta and has the abillity to summon his Kin. Equiped with 2 claymores (Swords) it can use any jutsu that the Giant ninja rat can use.

Note: Must Have contract
Note: Must Have Giant Ninja Rat.

-poor description: be more specific about the jutsus and elements it can use.-

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Nezumi: Rat elemental
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 50
Discription: Your summon takes his swords and just like rat slash he puts an element into each sword. rock, fire, lightning, water or wind. The summon then stabs the swords into the ground making a wave outward of an elemental explosion. Sort of like gambits staff but in the ground as well.

Note:Must have contract
Note: Must know the elemnts you use up to A-rank
Note: must only be used by rats

-make it usable only up to 3 times per battle-

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Earth Style: Nezumi Ritual
Rank: B
Chakra: 20
Damge: 45
Discrtiption: Huge statues made rock, emerge from the ground in the shape of rats. Hundreds of them pop up all the size of the Giant ninja rat to attack or defend.

-declined: That is at least an A rank-


Changed descriptions and made summon smaller

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Ninja Art: Suicide Jutsu
Rank: S
Chakra: 40
Damage: 60
Discription: By concentrating all your chakra intop your body you can overwhelm your body and die just like openeing the 6 gates w/o the powerboost. This jutsu is unable to treat because by time its used your hands become to numb to create handsighns unless treated by an outside force.

Note: only usable once due to it being a suicide jutsu

im not kidding about this jutsu its a serious one

-have you been taught the 8 gates release?-

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Rat Style: Rat prison
Rank: S
Chakra: 50
DAmage: NA
Discription: Both users are encaged by walls from nezumi, (Where rats are summoned from) and when formed are as big as Giant ninja rat (main rat summon as big as gamma). this prison is unbreakable and un able to escape, this is to ensure the prisoners dont escape, in nezumi the rats are ninja as well making it so both the user and opponent are trapped for 2 turns inside this prison. Any jutsu used stays in the cell you are in. Say if i use 1000 fevers the only person it effects is me. The hand sighns are boar, bird, dog, and rat.

Note: Lasts 2 turns
Note: if used cannot use rat jutsu (restrictions do not effect summons)
Note: Effects both players user and target
Note: nust have a contract with the rats

Its hard for me to explain this jutsu its just a prison for both players basically no significant use just incase i need some extra time one day in a battle

-approved-

 

[squiremarcus]

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(Fuuton:Kaze Koudou)-Wind Tunnel
Type: Defence/Counter
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: (damage of fire used +10)
Description:User creates a tunnel of wind chakra to surround a fire attack and redirects the fire where he wants to while making it a double element attack (fire+wind) and thus stronger. Only works on fire jutsu rank A or lower (works kid of like water entering a straw if you can't picture it) .

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~pendin~
add limits

(Fuuton:Kaze Koudou)-Wind Tunnel
Type: Defence/Counter
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points: (damage of fire used +10)
Description:User creates a tunnel of wind chakra to surround a fire attack and redirects the fire where he wants to while making it a double element attack (fire+wind) and thus stronger.(works kid of like water entering a straw if you can't picture it) .
Only Works on Fire Element attacks ranks A and lower
Can only be used twice a battle

(suggest limits if that isn't enough)

-approved-

 

[Shig]

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(Suiton:Mizu Hashira)-Water Style:Water Pillar
*Rank: C
*Type:Supplementary
*Range:Short-Mid
*Chakra Cost: 15 (-5 chakra points every turn it stays active)
*Damage Points: N/A
*Description:The user creates a four meter tall water pillar, imperiously necessary for (Suiton:Shi Hashira Rippou). [Water source needed]
Note:May be teached only by Reido Kira(Suigetsu Biography)

(Raiton: Denkou Hashira)-Lightning Style:Lightning Pillar
*Rank: B
*Type:Supplementary.
*Range:Short-Mid.
*Chakra Cost:20
*Damage Points: N/A (40 if the user or opponent gets touched by it)
*Description:The user creates a four meter tall lightning pillar, imperiously necessary for (Suiton:Shi Hashira Rippou).
Note: May be only teached by Reido Kira(Suigetsu Biography)

(Suiton:Shi Hashira Rippou)-Water Style:Four Pillar Cubes
*Rank:Forbidden
*Range:Short-Mid
*Chakra Cost:50
*Damage Points: N/A (Permanent Enemy Paralysis)
*Description: After four pillars are formed, the user is able to create 2 concentric water cubes fused with photons gathered from the sun rays, that blind the opponent trapped in the cube, then one of the lightning pillars charges a relatively high amount of lightning on the opponent's spinal cord, breaking it, paralyzing the enemy, as the user concentrates high amounts of chakra into the pillars for them to react, his chakra runs out quickly.
Note: Two Lightning Pillars and Two Water Pillars must be built before using this jutsu, also after this jutsu is over the user is drained of chakra.
Note 2: May only be teached by Reido Kira (Suigetsu Biography).

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You need to add restrictions to the last jutsu. Also you need to back it up better for this part: "photons gathered from the sun rays".

 

[Alucard]

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(Ametom: Ame no Kujikuten) – Rain Release: Rain’s Crushing Point

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Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: Hanzou will infuse its chakra in the rain. Then he will keep it on sky while still raining. He will use his chakra to stabilize and gain perfect control of rain so other jutsus can’t make this water go away and he will wait 2 turns while collecting more and more rain. Then, with a single hand sign, the user will make converge all in one point with tremendous force that crushes anything inside of it.

-limitations? it's forbidden rank. And i think you need to say you connect it with the clouds not the water droplets -

(Kousei Sanshouuo) - Regeneration of the Salamander

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Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Hanzou will use the regeneration caracteristics of it's Salamander summon to regenerate any part of his body. Hanzou's salamander can also use this jutsu. Only twice per battle.

-declined: Only members of the Kaguya clan and med nins can re-generate parts. If you want your Salamander to be have this ability it's okay, but not for yourself-

(Ametom: Amegakure no Kyuusho Guntain) - Rain Release: Secret Army of Amegakure

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Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Hanzou will use rain to make an huge army of rain soldiers. They will attack the opponent but they can defend the user also. Aslong as its rainning if they're destroyed, they will regenerate themselves automatically. Only twice per battle.

-declined: OP for a S rank-

 

[UzumakiJake]

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(Oshie Ikusen tatsujin Ikazuchi Dageki gyakujou)- teachings of Thousand Masters: Thunder Strike frenzy

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-20 to user)
Description: The user charges their bodies with a lot of lightning chakra and then they release chakra from their feet to boost their speed in the attack and they then send the lightning chakra into the arms and strike the opponents upper body dealing 18 fast strikes and discharging the built up lightning chakra through their fist into the opponents nerves which will cause the opponent to become paralysed from the electric currents and the final strike is a fist punched into the chest and pushes in and the user twists their wrist and then releases the lightning chakra into the heart which then seizes the circulating chakra for a moment making the opponent unable to perform hand seals or concentrate their chakra for one turn. (When contact occurs this causes damage to the user by burning their lower arms from the electricity and the user cant perform any elemental attacks or taijutsu requiring the use of their arms for one turn).

Note: Can only be used once
Note: target can't perform lightning jutsu or hand seals for one turn
Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito andUzumakiJake
Note: -15 damage
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~add side effect for the user, since its a forbidden jutsu~

added side effect

-leaving this for Grimm-
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~Approved~

 

[Eddy-kun..]

Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Katon • Ho Heki No Jutsu [Fire Release • Fire Burst]

Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A skill in which the user generally charges their fire chakra into the ground. Waiting for the opportune moment, to activate the jutsu when the opponent is either near the designated spot, or on the designated spot. The chakra within the ground activates, as it releases a powerful burst of flame from the ground which causes damage along with some terrible burns.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle

-declined: You can't "activate" it just like that. The ground needs to be heated or you need to throw another fire jutsu before this one explodes also. Else it is just a hidden bomb-

Katon • Nenshou Hai Machi no Jutsu [Fire Release • Burning Ash Road

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A skill in which is used as a feint to trap the opponent. First performing the handseals and running away from the opponent. Prompting them to rush and catch you as you are running. During that time, as the user runs the chakra from their feet transforms into an ashy and very flammable substance that also stick to the opponent once steps onto the trail. When the opponent steps onto the trail the user can then ignite the Ash with a blink of the eye for a powerful explosion. The jutsu can also be used to create ash that can be blown at the opponent.

-declined: the only thing not OP about this jutsu is this part: The jutsu can also be used to create ash that can be blown at the opponent."


Katon • Horou no Jutsu [Fire Release • Fire Prison]

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:30
Description:A skill in which generates a circular flame upon the ground, raising up bars of flame and a covering over top. This intense flame heats all within it, preventing water from being created from the inside with the dryness of the air. Touching the sides results in various burns, and while this jutsu is used it can be linked to any other fire jutsu and the jutsu will be fired at the person inside the prison.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle”
Note: Prison only last 3 turn”

-approved-

Katon • Kouen Dakou Kahan [Fire Release • Flaming Crawling Seal]

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:20
Description: A skill in which some have almost considered a fuuinjutsu due to its nature. Gathering chakra within their hands, the user imbues it with the fire element and rush towards the opponent. Upon touching the bare skin of the opponent, the chakra slowly flows over into their skin diffusing outwards leaving a series of burn marks. These burn marks utilize the limb or body part(s)

-Hm, since you say it is not a fuuinjutsu then why does it affect body parts other than those you burnt-?