Re:
Custom Jutsu Submission
Water: Giant Hand (suiton:kyojin hando)
Type:Attack/Supplemantry
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60(+5 with lightning)
Description:The user creates a giant hand out of water that can be hard for a punch or sharp to act as a claw it can also be used to grab the enemy. Can be mixed with lightning tecniuqes to make it stronger.
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
-approved-
Multi-Advanced Puppet Control ( taju koudo Kugutsu)
Rank:A
Type: Supplemantry
Range:short-mid
Chakra Cost:30 (-10 per turn that its active)
Damage: 0
Description: The user makes many threads out of chakra and attaches them to puppets to control more puppets and control each with better ability making the puppets faster and more flexible. The amount of puppets controled depends on rank
Jonin: 3 with great ability 4 with average abilty
S-rank:4with great ability 5 with average abilty
Sanin: 5 with great ability 7 with average abilty
Kage and higher:7 with great ability 8 with average abilty
*Can only be used by puppet users
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
-declined: too many puppets and you are not Sasori, not your chakra supply is sufficient enough to keep these many puppets in the battlefield.-
Rising Needle Strike (joushou hari atakku)
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Long-Mid- Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The users puppet implants hundred needles into the ground and a they instantly come out of the ground going everywhere except where the user stands. The needles are wrapped around paper bombs.
*The user needs to be a puppet user
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
*Can only be used 1 time per puppet and max of 3 times.
-declined: OP for A rank-
Water:Fish Defence ( Suiton: ika benso)
Rank: C
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30 (-7 per turn that its active )
Damage:0
Description:The user creates 10 fishs around him the fishs jump around the user with great speed blocking attacks mostly taijutsu and weapon attacks. The fish move by themselfs and they can be destroyed with attacks too powerfull.
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
-Hm, well...declined for too many reasons. To use animals, you need a contact of them. The description is awfully poor cause you dont even state that you have to be in water to use them. Next, what kind of fish can actually block a punch? and lastly, the idea of a ninja with fish flying all around him is...not so ninja like-
Lightning style: Blinnding Flash (Raiton:buraindo senkou)
Type:Supplemantary
Rank: A
Range: Mid 10-12
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage:0
Description: The user creates a series of sudden bright flashes that makes the opponant blind for 2 or 3 turns depending on opponants rank. Jonin or higher 2. Special jonin or lower 3 turns.
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*Can only be used by burakyilan or if thought by burakyilan
-Declined: wrong rank info, you can't blind someone that easily, lighting blasts already exist as jutsus-