[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Yüme1]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Raition: Senkou Hira (Lightning style: Flash Palm)

Type: Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage points:80
Description: The user concentrates his chakra from his hand to the sky. When it reaches the sky in under a second, dark clouds start to form above. A lightning bolt hit's the users hand and works throughout the user's body. White lightning forms in the users hand. 1/4 goes throughout the body to gain tramendous speed. If hit with this move it will be fatal.

~Only Jin Enshirou can teach or use this Jutsu.
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[Emperor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Vi-nasuwanahara Hijutsu : Oodama Kagero) Venus Flytrap Secret Technique : Great Mayfly
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
An advanced version of the normal Mayfly technique used by Zetsu, this allows the user to merge their body with any solid ( whose size is at least equal to theirs, the user can't merge into a kunai or a small object ) and travel in between solids ( again, must be atleast as large as the user ) at high speeds, and without detection.
~Costs 10 damage per turn
~Costs 15 chakra to stay merged for a long time


Emperor's notes to whoever checks this : This is merely a stronger mayfly. mayfly already has high speed and stealthily. this is just add on to any large solid, and not just the ground. and i cant really give more restrictions since zetsu has no other jutsu - plus theres frequently no other solid except the ground anyways.

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Their are a mulitude of other objects, with various densities used here, some of which sole purpose is to prevent permeation.

 

[-Ventus-]

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Weapon Name:Kumori
Rank; S-class
Chakra cost;
Description:Taken from the chamber of the murdered demon lord,this katana can be used as an extension of the ability of the user.This katana can also gather chakra and transfers it to the user.It can also be used for lightning jutsu's because the element lightning is strong in this katana.It can also use fire element jutsu for attacks and others use.Its blade is made from a special alloy that can't be broken down by a-class down jutsu's and has a safeguard ability that activates when the owner is not holding it.
*only hinaru can holds this katana*
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Remove the highlighted text. Resubmit.
question:how many weopons or swords i can have???
Specialty Swords...One

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[Amaya Sayuri]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Raiton: dendou ya) Electric arrow
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: User creates electric arrows that travel at high speed, wherein he/she can shot continuously at the target. When these arrows hit a part of the opponent, that part (example arm) would then be numb, slowing it down by 15% of its original speed. making it harder for the opponent to move or make hand seals.

*bow and arrows are both made with chakra converted to electricity*
*maximum of 10 arrows per use* (this increases by 5 as the rank increases)
*can only be used twice per battle*
*weak with wind barriers of enemy, making the damage point cut by half* (15)
*this can only be used by Amaya*

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(Raiton: doragon tate) Dragon Shield
Type: Defense/Attack/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 10-20
Description: User creates a dragon made by pure chakra converted into electricity, this dragon then surrounds the user making itself into a shield. anyone who tries to break this shield will be damaged by 10-20 points for it will breath out electric kind of flame. the user inside will then have a chance to regenerate his/her chakra if possible.

*this dragon's strength depends on the chakra the user gives out*
*the electric flame increases power as the rank increases*
*this only last up to 2 turns of the enemy*
*this can only be done once in a battle*
*can only be used by Amaya*

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(Raiton: dendou gekihatsu) electric outburst
Type: Defense/Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 15-30
Description: the user creates this electric armor around his/her body, making him/her move 20% faster to avoid attacks from the enemy. the user can also strike out electric bolts from this armor using his/her hands.

*should not be used in water, or else the user will get shocked as a backfire*
*only by A-rank will this jutsu be able to get contact with water and not get the user shock*
*can use up to 5 electric bolts per turn* (increases by 3 as the rank increases)
*this only last up to 2 turns of the enemy*
*this can only be done once in a battle*
*this can only be used by Amaya*

|Declined|

chunin - amaya - elements: water, lightning

 

[Zenryoku]

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(Tora Tsume Hiza Sumasshu) - Tiger Claw Knee Smash

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: the user jumps towards the enemy and makes tiger claws and claps onto the enemies head behind the ears and at the same time charges his right knee with chakra to increase damage caused and pulls the enemies head down and smashes it into the users knee.

Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito.
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(Kamakiri Kaedama Dageki) - Mantis Double Strike

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 30
Description: The user jumps towards the enemy and makes their arms into sword shapes whilst charging chakra into their forearms and they then chop at the enemies neck from both sides which causes the enemy to breathe heavily and become double visioned from the sheer shock. Only the highly skilled can reduce the damage to minor breathing difficulties.

Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
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(Testsu Sen Genkotsu) - Iron Wire fist

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 30
Description: The user wraps wire wool round their hands and then begins to control their breathing which will enhance their power in their strikes and then attacks the enemy hitting them four times in the face with extreme power due to controlled breathing in every punch and they also charge their fist with chakra and the enemy then gets knocked back several meters.

Note: Can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito.
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(Chouyaku Kage Dageki)- Jumping Shadow Strike

Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 30
Description: The user appears below the enemy at a low stance towards the ground and then they charge there hands with chakra and the user strikes upward beginning with the inner thighs at the pressure points above the knee caps which makes the enemy lower their upper body and then the user strikes multiple times on the body upwards until they finally make a stabbing motion towards the enemies neck winding them and making them become out of breathe.

Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
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(Ikazuchi Hirate Dageki) – Thunder palm strike

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: the user charges their hand with an electrical current and then strikes at the enemy’s right shoulder. The electrical current discharges on contact and can numb the right arm for a short period of time preventing the enemy from making any seals.

Note: numbing affect lasts for 1 turn
Note: can only be taught by Uchiha Kaito
Note: can only be used 3 times

|All Approved|

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Weapon Name:Kumori
Rank; S-class
Chakra cost;
Description:Taken from the chamber of the murdered demon lord,this katana can be used as an extension of the ability of the user.This katana can also gather chakra and transfers it to the user.It can also be used for lightning jutsu's because the element lightning is strong in this katana.It can also use fire element jutsu for attacks and others use.Its blade is made from a special alloy that can't be broken down by a-class down jutsu's and has a safeguard ability that activates when the owner is not holding it.
*only hinaru can holds this katana*

question:how many weopons or swords i can have???

total of 2 summoning scrolls, and 1 weapon scroll(puppet users can have more), Projectiles don't count, i guess u can have a single weapon as handed 1, cause more inventory will cause more problem, and i guess dual blades act as single.

 

[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Kinjutsu: Soshi Toubou (Forbidden Technique: Elemental Escape)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 100 (+15 to the user)
Description: The user will charge a large amount of fire chakra or lightning chakra all throughout their body, they will then release it all at once creating a large explosion of either fire or lightning. This jutsu is mostly used in situations where the user is trapped and can’t use handseals, but this jutsu can also be used for offensive play.

Note: Useable once per battle.
Note: Can’t use either fire or lightning jutsu next turn.

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~Declined
abit overpowered =/ this jutsu will blow the user up xd

 

[Crutch Kaguya]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

1st submission this week

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Gorillas
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will summon an ape into the battle field by first biting their thumb and doing the required hand selas and place their hand on the ground and call forth the ape of their choice. The size of the apes will be even to that of Gamabunta, unless stated otherwise. All apes are capable of speech, are highly intellectual, and can use all jutsu that is in their capability.
~Scroll owner is Nine Tailed Naruto~

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(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: King Kong
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth King Kong. King Kong is a huge sliver back gorilla roughly the size of Gamubunta a little bigger, with the ability to use fire and wind techniques. He also has the ability to breath fire that is equal to A-Rank. He is also able to use taijutsu. He has an huge chakara source which the user can draw from which if done will give the user increased speed and strength and also is very muscular in both his arms and his legs allowing him to use both in a fight. Even with his size he has speed equal and greater than the other summoning his size.
~Once per battle~
~Lasts for 3 turns~
~Can't summon Apes for the remainder of the battle~

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Tiki
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth Tiki. Tiki is a gorilla a little bigger than Gamubunta, he also has a large chakara source though not as large as King Kong and he is also very muscular and can use all taijutsu and has a average amount speed equal and greater than the other summoning his size. Tiki has the power to use both lightning and water jutsus.

(Kuchiyose: Enjin)- Summoning: Loki
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first bite their thumb and do the required hand selas and place place their hand on the ground and call forth Loki. He is a great sized gorilla the same size as Tiki, he has spent ages in the practicing the art of earth jutsus and has gained the ability to use earth based jutsus. Very muscular and has a huge chakara source. He is also a skilled taijutsu user and has an average amount of speed equal and greater than the other summoning his size.
~Lasts 3 turns~

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Only one element per summon


(Raiton: Dendou Suru) Lightning: Electrical Hypnosis
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakara cost: 60
Damagae: N/A
Description: The use will send out pulses of electricity that will make contact with the opponent and will go into their brain through the nerves allowing the user full control of their opponent. After the electricity hits the opponent they will be under contol and whatever happens to the opponent will count as real damage.
~Once per battle~
~Lasts one turn~
~User can not use lightning jutsus for 2 turns~
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~Declined
sounds like a medical jutsu

 

[HiddenShadowNinja]

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Touch of the Black Plague
Type-Supplementary
Rank-S
Range-Short
Chakra cost-40
Damage-N/A
Description- The user places a special tag on the opponent. Once placed this tag instantly releases, causing a slow-paced disease to effect the opponent. What this does is cancel all modes/power-ups the opponent might be using (Sage mode, Eight gates, Curse Mark,etc) by attacking their chakra systems.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use this jutsu
*This jutsu can only be used once per battle, however the opponents mode/power up cannot be used again this battle.
*This jutsu is ineffective on medical ninja

|Pending Who taught you Fuuinjutsu?|

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(Amakakeru Ryu no Hirameki)- Heavens Gliding Dragon Flash
Type- Attack/Defense
Rank- S
Range- Short-Mid
Chakra cost- 40
Damage- 80 (90 if first attack is avoided and second hits) (-30 to user)
Description- The user uses his chakra to incredibly boost his speed, adding instantaneous acceleration and weight to the sword. If the initial strike is avoided or blocked the force of the unusually fast slashing motion displaces the air around it, generating a vacuum in its wake and sucking the oppenent in; as this happens, the user spins around for a second strike adding force and momentum to the swing due to the vacuum effect of the first swing for an even stronger strike. Because of the extreme speed needed to preform this jutsu, it eventually wears down the users body and is dangerous to overuse.
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
*Second Strike Unavoidable unless with use of a space/time ninjutsu
*Cannot use any Taijutsu for 3 turns after using this due to the strain it puts on the body.
*Can only be used twice per battle

|Approved|
No mimicking the gates.

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(Ku Zu Ryu Sen)- Nine-headed Dragon Strike
Type- Attack
Rank- A
Range- Short-Mid
Chakra cost- 30 (because of booting the users speed)
Damage- 60
Description- The user uses his extreme speed to rush towards the opponent and simultaneously deals nine strkes to the fundamental targets of swordsmanship, making guarding and dodging virtually impossible. (Meaning it cannot be blocked by taijutsu)
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
*Must have a Katana to use this jutsu
*No B-rank or higher taijutsu next turn
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*The speed of this attack is equivalent to that of a Hidden Lotus.

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No mimicking the gates. Sounds a bit like Gentle Fist.

As for the first one, ok, yea, your right on that. I should learn Fuuinjutsu first. I'll resubmit that one after I do.

For the second and third, They aren't mimicking the gates really. Just adding speed, not giving any power boosts. I only put the things like "speed equal to hidden lotus" or w/e to give an example of how fast it would be.

And I forgot to say that the 2nd and 3rd ones are sword-specific moves. So the last one isn't like gentle fist. It's just simultaneously attacking 9 targets (the head, both shoulders, both sides, both legs, the groin, and a stab).
So I'll resubmit the last one.

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(Ku Zu Ryu Sen)- Nine-headed Dragon Strike
Type- Attack
Rank- A
Range- Short-Mid
Chakra cost- 30 (because of booting the users speed)
Damage- 60
Description- This is a sword attack in which the user uses his extreme speed to rush towards the opponent and simultaneously deals nine strkes to the fundamental targets of swordsmanship, making guarding and dodging virtually impossible. (Meaning it cannot be blocked by taijutsu)
*Only HiddenShadowNinja’s bios can use/teach this jutsu
*Must have a Katana to use this jutsu
*No B-rank or higher taijutsu next turn
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
*The speed of this attack is equivalent to that of a Hidden Lotus.

If you still don't like the comparison to speed, I'll just leave it as "extreme speed"
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~pending
awesome jutsu dude but to have extreme speed like the hidden lotus, u need to do weight training like lee =/

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Raiton: dendou ya) Electric arrow
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: User creates electric arrows that travel at high speed, wherein he/she can shot continuously at the target. When these arrows hit a part of the opponent, that part (example arm) would then be numb, slowing it down by 15% of its original speed. making it harder for the opponent to move or make hand seals.

*bow and arrows are both made with chakra converted to electricity*
*maximum of 10 arrows per use* (this increases by 5 as the rank increases)
*can only be used twice per battle*
*weak with wind barriers of enemy, making the damage point cut by half* (15)
*this can only be used by Amaya*

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(Raiton: doragon tate) Dragon Shield
Type: Defense/Attack/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 10-20
Description: User creates a dragon made by pure chakra converted into electricity, this dragon then surrounds the user making itself into a shield. anyone who tries to break this shield will be damaged by 10-20 points for it will breath out electric kind of flame. the user inside will then have a chance to regenerate his/her chakra if possible.

*this dragon's strength depends on the chakra the user gives out*
*the electric flame increases power as the rank increases*
*this only last up to 2 turns of the enemy*
*this can only be done once in a battle*
*can only be used by Amaya*

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(Raiton: dendou gekihatsu) electric outburst
Type: Defense/Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 15-30
Description: the user creates this electric armor around his/her body, making him/her move 20% faster to avoid attacks from the enemy. the user can also strike out electric bolts from this armor using his/her hands.

*should not be used in water, or else the user will get shocked as a backfire*
*only by A-rank will this jutsu be able to get contact with water and not get the user shock*
*can use up to 5 electric bolts per turn* (increases by 3 as the rank increases)
*this only last up to 2 turns of the enemy*
*this can only be done once in a battle*
*this can only be used by Amaya*

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chunin - amaya - elements: water, lightning

aw electric arrow was already created?
oh well... ok then i will delete the highlighted part.
do i need to update my bio immediately or can i do that next time?
here's another set, hope their ok this time

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(Suiton: myou mizu) dark water
Type: Attack/Supplementary
P.S. *when S rank type will be: Defense/Attack/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 15-30
Description: the user creates dark water by spreading water orbs around the enemy, and when that enemy touches these orbs they would be damaged from 15-30 points also taking that damaged point as the user's own life force.

P.S *this can only be used when dark water is at S rank: it can also be used for defense when the enemy is about to attack, dark water would then form as an orb barrier around the user, but still having the same effect when used as an attack taking the damaged point as life force.*

*dark water can be used as an attack or as a defense*
*it can also be both, such as:
after using it as an attack the dark water orb barrier will then appear around the user*
*the barrier will last up to 2 turns of the enemy*
*this can only be done once in a battle*
*this can only be used by Amaya*

P.S. the user would need to specifically define how he/she used dark water for everyone to know it if was used as an attack, a defense or both

this is a theory of dark water

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it doesn't mean that its dark or black when i said its called dark water...

when u look at it, it would appear like any other water,
but in truth its not just any pure water;
that reason is because this water was gathered
from the depths of the lake at night
where the moon illuminated above...
also it is a mixture of the user's own life force and chakra
giving it that dark eerie feeling of
lucubration that which is composed by night,
doing so, when the enemy gets hit,
the damaged will be absorb by dark water
converting it just like the user's own life force
and taking it back to the user
through evaporation of course thus,
the user will then gain the damaged points of the enemy as life force

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~Declined
explain how these orbs can damage the opponent? bcz i dont get it O_O do they explode or something? if they do explode, it wont be approved bcz i created the exploding water jutsu
and this jutsu it to overpowered to be a C rank

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(Raiton: doragon ryoukin) dragon charge
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points:15
Description: User creates 3 small version of the original dragon (from dragon shield) they are also made by pure chakra converted into electricity. These dragons then attack the enemy with electric flames that damages them by 15 points. though they are smaller and weaker than the original dragon, they are very useful for long range attacks unlike dragon shield.

*dragons last up to end of the battle unless killed*
*this can be done 3 times in a battle*
*this can only be used by Amaya*

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~Approved

 

[Xylon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

aw electric arrow was already created?
oh well... ok then i will delete the highlighted part.
do i need to update my bio immediately or can i do that next time?
here's another set, hope their ok this time

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(Suiton: myou mizu) dark water
Type: Defense/Attack/Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 15-30
Description: the user creates dark water by spreading water orbs around the enemy, and when that enemy touches these orbs they would be damaged from 15-30 points also taking that damaged point as the user's own life force.

it can also be used for defense when the enemy is about to attack, dark water would then form as an orb barrier around the user, but still having the same effect when used as an attack taking the damaged point as life force.

*dark water can be used as an attack or as a defense*
*it can also be both, such as after using it as an attack the dark water orb barrier will then appear around the user*
*this can only be done once in a battle*
*this can only be used by Amaya*

P.S. the user would need to specifically define how he/she used dark water for everyone to know it if was used as an attack, a defense or both

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(Raiton: doragon ryoukin) dragon charge
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points:15
Description: User creates 3 small version of the original dragon (from dragon shield) they are also made by pure chakra converted into electricity. These dragons then attack the enemy with electric flames that damages them by 15 points. though they are smaller and weaker than the original dragon, they are very useful for long range attacks unlike dragon shield.

*after the attack, the dragons will be converted back to chakra*
*this can be done 3 times in a battle*
*this can only be used by Amaya*

dark water is more of an S rank, also try to make a theory of how the dark water does all that

 

[Amaya Sayuri]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

dark water is more of an S rank, also try to make a theory of how the dark water does all that

EH?!!! does it really seem like an S rank??? thanks though i'm still chunin...
NO ONE should copy it! i'm gonna train hard so i can be worthy for it! please

 

[Nero]

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(manipyureito shiro bo-ru)Manipulated white ball
Type: Supplimentary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 0 (30 if the needle goes through the ball)
Description: The user first throws one of shikamaru's white blinding balls at the opponent then focuses chakra into a metal shiny needle the user throws the needle at the ball this needle will reflect the light directly into the opponents eyes blinding them for two turns
Note: This jutsu can only be used once.
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isn't it the same if u throw the flash bomb? oO y do u want to make a jutsu?

(oroton:dyuaru oroton ofu) Sound style: Dual Sound off
Type: Attack
Rank: A-S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 30-40
Damage: 60-80
Description: The user pulls off dual swords

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off of the users back that was handed down to him from generations of sound ninja after taking off these swords he focuses chakra into them and strikes one into the ground if one is striked in the ground it sends a medium sized tendril towards the opponent from the ground and comes out underneath the opponent hitting the opponent for 60 damage if both swords r put into the ground two tendrils are sent but the second tendril is decreased in power so it deals 80 damage.
Note: This jutsu can only be used three times.
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poor description, explain how a sound wave can make a tendril?

(Kuchiose:Genka hiki) Summoning style: Singing toad
Type: Supplimentary/Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (If in sage mode these attacks do 20 more damage)
Description: The user focuses his chakra to summon a special toad that was made to use his voice the toad was taught to use nothing but his horns and sounds. This toad can do three things called "acts" The acts are:
First act: The toad uses his fast legs and horns to tackle the opponent head on.
Second act: Sending off a loud croak pulsing into the opponent and making a ringing sound into the opponents ears
Third act: Sending loud vibrations through the whole terrian sending ringing into everybodies ears except the user and himself.
Note:The toad is the size of the user
Note: Must master the sound style before using this summoning and must have toad summonings.

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~Approved

 

[Emperor]

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(Tenrai Ranpu , Mikomi no Enka) Divine Light, Beacon of Hope
Type- Attack
Rank- Forbidden
Range- Short-Long
Chakra cost- 50
Damage- 90
A truly devastating move, there are four stages to it.
As a one second chant is said two vises of chakra form around the opponent's wrists and hold the hands out in a crucifix position
Next, as the second chant is said, a chakra vise grabs the opponent's neck and head and tilts it upward so the opponent is facing the sky.
As the third chant is said, two chakra vises grab the opponent's legs. preventing them from moving.
As the final chant is said, all the vises project chakra spikes, and then constrict with devastating force.
The vises cannot be broken out easily, though a sufficiently focused beam of a high rank ( and not a wide area explosion ) will be able to break them.
* Can only be used once per battle.
* Does 35 damage to the user
* No Wood/Ice Release , Doujutsus or Strong Fist Taijutsu till the end of the match.
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~Declined


(Gansaku Shinfoni , Chikatachi Takai) Unreal Symphony, Death in Many Forms
Type- Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank- S
Range- Short-Long
Chakra cost- 40
Damage- 60 ( less than a normal S rank since it serves as a defense as well )
The user manipulates their chakra into countless ball-bearing sized spheres. These spheres can be controlled by the user by doing hand movements ( much like a conductor in a orchestra ), and when grouped together, form a spinning mass of chakra.
Another way to use this technique, is to allow the spheres to merge with nearby objects, filling them with the user's chakra, allowing the user to manipulate them with the same hand movements. Of course, the user cannot manipulate the opponent / opponent's jutsus.
* User can only use two techniques per turn as long as the user chooses to keep this technique active.
* Costs 25 chakra to the user per turn
* No Wood/Ice Release , Doujutsus or Strong Fist Taijutsu till the end of the match.
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~Declined
its too much like gravity jutsu

 

[Azaghast]

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Taijutsu Kata: Ekitaikai ( Physical Technique Style: Fluid Ocean )
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
This fighting style is characterised by focus on calculating the opponent's strikes, dodging with minimum effort and strikes that do damage to a variety of body parts than just one.
The user shapes their chakra into a circle around them, with a radius of five metres. As the opponent or the opponent's techniques travel over this field, they "ripple" the chakra in a particular way based on their direction and speed, allowing the user to calculate the trajectory of the attacks, and hence dodge ( much like a ripple caused when a stone is thrown into a lake )
This style also focuses on multiple damage causing strikes - for example, a hard palm to the heart will cause pain, coughing, as well as possibly a fractured rib.
This taijutsu kata also has weapon utilisation capabilities. The primary weapon is a set of curved swords, though the user can use any weapon they prefer. The user is able to change the angle of their weapon attack midway through the attack, allowing them to bypass the opponent's defenses.

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The swords look like these:

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~ Does 5 damage to the user per turn
~ Costs 10 chakra per turn to maintain the circle
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no chakra sensei jutsus and its almost as similar to the sharingan =/

 

[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kuchiyose : Kikio no Shuiro Komadori)- Kikio the Scarlet Robin
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short- Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User summons Kikio the Scarlet Robin.Her Natural Affinity is Fire and can do from C-A Rank Fire Justu. She could Fly in the Air about 90 Mph.
*this Justu can Only Be Used by Minato1*
Note: this justu Can only be used once per Battle
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(Kuchiyose: Komadori)- Summoning: Robin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will summon a Robin into the battle field by first biting their thumb and doing the required hand selas and place their hand on the ground and call forth the Robin of their choice. The size of the Robin will be even to that of Gamabunta, unless stated otherwise. All robins are capable of speech, are highly intellectual, and can use all jutsu that is in their capability.
~Scroll owner is Minato1~
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~WTF O_O
thats a big robin

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i am not sure if u can create a big bird sommon like that oO the only person that has a big bird sommon is pein and all his summons are unnatural summon, meanin they are modified

 

[Black Reaper]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Doku Kaihou: Poison Release
Rank: Forbidden
Range: User
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This type of Jutsus major strength is that it grants the user the ability to produce and control various types of poison. The types of poison they can produce can vary in strength and forms, which can be as simple as breathing out minor poison gas, or as complex as being concentrated and corrosive liquid produced directly out of their own body. Having a body that is completely covered in poison at will, any person who touches the user will be poisoned. The power also grants the user immunity from poison as well. If a victim is affected by just one type of poison produced by the user, it can be easily cured, given the right antidote. However, if they suffer an accumulation of different types of poison at the same time, producing an appropriate antidote becomes more difficult, if not impossible.

Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Lasts rest of the match.
Note: When the user enters this mode, they lose the ability to use 2 of their elements.
Note: Must be a Medical shinobi to use this.

Ive had approval from rei for this.

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Doku Kaihou: Doku Ryuu (Poison Release: Poison Dragon)
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 125 (+15 damage to the user)
Description: After producing vast amounts of liquid poison from his/her body, the user is able to manipulate it in the form of a three-headed dragon, that will spit large amount of poison at the opponent, but its main attack his to hit the opponent head with great force and cover them in poison. The dragon can even separate itself from the user to pursue escaping foes. The level of toxicity is so overwhelming that it actually causes the unfortunate victim to dissolve. The poison acts on the nervous system, paralyzing the victim and making them suffer excruciating pain until they die. This jutsu can only be stopped by a fire jutsu of the same power.

Note: Victim is paralyzed 1 turn after, and is dissolved 3 turns after the user has been encased in this poison.
Note: Cant use S-rank and up poison jutsu next turn.
Note: Must know poison release.

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~All Approved

 

[UzumakiJake]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Alright 1 more time ive tried to get this jutsu submitted like 20 times but i think i found a format that will work

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Anti-counter
Rank: A
Chakra: 40
Damage: NA
Discription: When an opponent uses an anti summoning to disrupt the flow of your chakra and stop your summoning an outside force can counter act it making the flow of chakra even again or if they use any justu that disrupts the flow of chakra such as jutsu disruption, summoning disruption and so on.

NOTE: If clone uses summoning you or another clone can use the anti-anti
NOTE: If you use the summoning a clone or team member must use the anti-anti
Note: Only Usable 2 times a fight

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well dude i do not know O_O ask rei

-I spend some time to think over this. The only way i find it possible to happen is for you to have already a clone in the battlefield and have him under a special "chakra-restoring mode" which you will create for him/yourself. Else, sorry it isn't realistic.
~Rei

im not sure if ive submitted this 1 its been 4 ever since ive been on

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Sage Art: Clone Control
Rank: A
Chakra: 40
Damage: NA
Discription: By focusing chakra into your enemies clone you can take up to 2 of his clones under your control, while still counting as his clones.

Note: Only usable twice a fight and cannot be used if already in use.
Note: Wait one turn Before using again
Note: Clones you take control over can use jutsu your opponent has used in this fight.
Note: Dont have to be in sage mode to use

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impossible. only pein is able to control ppl bcz of the black chakra rods/blades

 

[~Hasashi~]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

elemental gentle fist (soshi nagoyaka kobushi)
rank: S
type: attack
range: short
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description: the user will focus elemental chakra while using gentle fist so besides having the effects of a normal gentle fist it also has the effects of that givin element

fire=3rd degree burn where ever the user hit
wind=small gashes where ever the user hit (20 damage)
water=all the water where the user hit will gather in one spot and burst out (in the opponents body)(20 damage)
earth=big bruses where ever the user hit (20 damage)
lightning=shocks the opponent so he cant move for 1 turn besides the loss of chakra
NOTE
2 times per battle
the gentle fist used with this closes all 361 tenketsu

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earth sword connection (tsuchi subeta enko)
name: akaishi
rank: forbidden
range:short-long
chakra: 50
damage: n/a
description: the user will summon a sword made of the strongest earth the sword has a special ability the user will draw the opponents blood and will rub it all along one side of the srowd then he will draw some of his blood and rub it on the other side of the sword and the sword will turn red sith a skull on it

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then the user will stab himself in a arm,leg ect... and the eyes of the skull will shine blood red and the opponents arm,leg,ect... will turn to stone
NOTE
lasts 3 turns
every stab must be atleast deep enough to cause 20 damage to the user

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just wtf

 

[Hazure]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninja Neko Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Chisoku) Ninja Cat Summoning Jutsu: Chisoku​

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Type: Summoning
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Chisoku is shy when he meets new people but after he gets to know them he can get quite attached and protective; that is if he likes them. He is fast and can match the speed of Rock Lee when his weights are taken off. His fur has a soft texture. He is roughly the same size as Akamaru when Kiba and Akamaru first meet each other. He can be quite cheeky sometimes, especially to a new summoner, like playing practical jokes with his speed, for example putting a thumbtack on a chair just as the person is about to sit on it or he uses his speed to tie up the new summoners feet and then he headbutts them in the back as so that they trip. He is smart and likes to spend his time with his summoner reading challenging books.
*Must have signed the contract of the Cats (held by Hazure)
*Stays in battle for 5 turns
*Can only be used/taught by Hazure
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(Ninja Neko Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Ritoru Koneko: Awa) Ninja Cat Summoning Jutsu: Little Kitten: Bubble​

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Type: Summoning
Rank: D
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Bubble is shy and cute, she is the basic summon of the Cat family and should only be used for training purposes, like getting the basics for the summoning of this noble family. She is fragile and will only allow 1 summoner to hold her and that is Hazure.
*Must have signed the contract of the Cats (held by Hazure)
*Can only be used/taught by Hazure
*Can only be handled by Hazure
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oO dude... no comment