[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

Daemon · Dec 30, 2009

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Seishou Nenshou Baria)-Energy Combustion Barrier
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:User creates a barrier of immense chakra energy. The barrier com-busts to send out a strong wave of energy around the surrounding Short-Mid range area that can level out anything in its path.This Jutsu Isn't controllable meaning if the user gets caught in this jutsu they can harm themselves also.
Restrictions:
-Can only Be used once per battle
-May only be used by ~Minato~

-Declined: what kind of barrier is this? Bleach type?-

(Raiton:Zeus' Gekido)-Lightning Release: Zeus' Rage
Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:User creates a barrier of immense lightning chakra around the opponent. The barrier generates a large amount of electrical energy that severely shocks the opponent.The Barrier Of Lightning Chakra closes under the opponents feet meaning that if the user tries to use underground fish projection they will get severely shocked.Te Barrier also sends great electrical charges through the ground.Since there is an electrical shock going through the ground it intensifies the shock to the opponent in the barrier.
Restrictions:
-Can only Be used twice per battle
-May only be used by ~Minato~

-Declined: what kind of barrier is this? Bleach type?-

Deidara... · Dec 30, 2009

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katon genjutsu oni yakedo shinkirou: fire style illusion demonic mirage incenerations

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra: 40
Damge Points: 80
Description: the user manipulates fire chakra causing the immediate area around the opponent to intensly heat up, as they feel the increase in heat they are entranced into an illusion where they see nothing in the environment change only the user making seals in a fast manner. they then see he ground below them erupt into flames. the flames then take the form of a demon which blasts them with blue fire.

Note: if this attack is used from long range the user can only use two moves this turn
Note: can only be taught by Iseris...
Note: this jutsu can only be used twice per battle
Note: can only be used while in demonic mirage state is active.

-Declined: cause of heating they see illusions?-

suiton genjutsu oni shinkirou se hakyoku) water illusion demonic mirage torrential cataclysm

type: Attack
rank: S
range: Short
chakra: 40
damage points: 80
description: after making the required seals the user sprays the opponent with a torrent of water from their mouth. the torrent is not powerful and will only wet the opponent, upon feeling the water the opponent is ensnared in an illusion. in the illusion they are blastd backwards by the torrent of water.the water then gathers together above them and takes the form of a moon, which then crushes them.

Note: can only be taught by Iseris...
Note: this jutsu can only be used three times per battle
Note: can only be used while in demonic mirage state is active.

-Declined: the whole idea is wrong again, cause they are wet they get illusions?-

(oni shinkirou sute-to) demonic mirage state

type: supplementary
rank: S
range: N/A
chakra: 40 +10(every turn it remains active)
damage points: + 20 to genjutsu, excludes demonic illusions
description: the user completes a series of seals and then they cast an illusion where they turn into a demon.
while in this state all illusions they cast gain additional damage and require intense amounts of pain to cancel. this illusion does not affect the opponent in any way.

Note: lasts 5 turns
Note: can only be used Twice per battle
Note: can only be taught by Iseris...

-Declined: no angels and demons allowed, and similar jutsu already exists-

Artimis · Dec 30, 2009

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Name: (Katon :kasai uindo metsubou)-Fiery wind of destruction
Rank: S
Damage:80
Chakra Cost: 40
Range: Long
Type: Attack
Discription: In this attack Kakuzu makes Fire elemental combines with his Wind elemental to form an even more devastating attack. The two elementals will combine their bodies and each will emit their own jutsu blast from their mouth. The two attacks then combine in the air to form an even more powerful jutsu. Because the attack also includes Wind, a mere Water or earth attack will not be able to stop the whole blast.
*This can only be used by Kakuzu*
*This attack can be used two times in a battle*
*The turn after this is used the elements wind and fire can only use B-Rank jutsus*

-I have no clue what this jutsu does, please xplain better and re submit. I hope you don't mean you are spitting fire and wind from your mouth at the same time-

I was given permission by Wrath to resubmit these custom
(Satetsu soushi)- Iron Sand Creation
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Charka Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: the user pulls iron from the ground to make a large volume of iron sand which my be used in battle

(Satetsu doragon) - Iron Sand Dragon
Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Charka Cost: 30 (+10 for each turn this is active)
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user forms the iron sand into a large dragon which crashes down on the opponent or can shoot 100's of iron needles from its mouth.

(Satetsu Soujuu)- Iron Sand Manipulation
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: the user controlls the iron to into any form which may be needed.

(Satetsu Bun'ya) - Iron Sand Field
Rank: S
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will use his iron sand to break minerals into the ground turning them into sand, he then will add his magnetic powers to transform that sand into iron sand. The user will make this in a great schale turning the field into iron sand.
Note: 1 per battle

__________________________
-Above 3 jutsus Approved-

Custom Weapon: (waga sukai ringu) Mare sky ring
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Mare Sky ring is one of the six strongest rings in the world. After the user has equipped himself with the X-Glovers he can then active the Mare sky ring .When the user infuses the rings with chakra the ring will then fusion with the gloves doubling the gloves power. So now if the user was to do battle with a fire jutsu of the same rank the X-gloves would easily overpower the other fire jutus. The ring has lots of other powers but this is the only one known at the moment .
notes:
The rings can only stay fusion with the X-gloves for 3 turns
Only can be used with X-gloves
Once the three turns are up the X-gloves will be unable to use any fire jutsu for 2 turns
Only can but used by Mato~kun

|| Declined || Keep it to Naruto RP plz

Axle · Dec 30, 2009

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Custom Weapon: ( Waga sukai ringu kujo) Vangola Sky Ring Blasters

Type: Supplementary
Rank:Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes a controllable non-heatable fire appear from his ring on his finger, then the user puts the flame of his ring in a miniature box with a small oppening just fit for the ring, after doing this, two blasters (guns) appear in the users hands, these guns can fire S-rank fire blasts at the users will, or the guns can be aimed toward the ground gaining the user the ability of flight
Note: Rules of Firing
(D-rank Fire blasts 6 second releases)
(C-rank Fire blasts 10 second releases)
(B-rank Fire blasts 16 second releases)
(A-rank Fire blasts 20 second releases)
(S-rank Fire blasts 30 second releases)
(Forbidden Fire blasts 1 minute releases)
Note: when blasters appear, the user can only use fire element attacks
Note: can only be used by Axle
Note: only lasts 3 turns

||Declined|| Keep it to Naruto RP plz

(kasai auto heki) Fire Out Burst

Rank: S-rank
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points : 80
Description: the user builds up fire chakra in their body then exhales in through any opening in their body
Note: can only be taught by Axle

Tell me this is not what I think it is U_U

(heishi mune houmen) - Dying Will Release

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: after saying "I activate the Vangola Sky Ring" The user releases 90% of their remaining chakra into a force known as the user's "Dying Will", the user's 5 senses are pushed to the Max, also it greatly increases the users reaction time and their speed and strength are dramatically improved ten fold, but this jutsu takes alot of pressure on the user's body
Note: can only be used once per battle
Note: can only be taught by Axle
Note: only lasts 3 turns
Note: after using this jutsu is cancelled, the user can only used C and below ranked jutsu

|| Declined ||

Deidara... · Dec 30, 2009

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Summoning Animal: Wyverns
Contract (Scroll Owner): Iseris...
Users who have signed contract: n/A
Summoning Boss:

Amphisbaena (amphisbyna): Queen of the wyverns

(Kuchiyose: hachuu kouhi Amphisbaena)- Summoning: wyvern queen Amphisbaena
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:All
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: the user makes the required seals for summoning and then presses a palm to the ground summoning the queen of wyverns. amphisbaena considerably smaller than katsuyu. Amphisbaena like typical wyverns has one set of wings and one set of legs, and is incapable of elemental releases. her strength lies in her ability to cast illusions, through sigt and through the sense of touch. her blinding speed and immense physical power make up for her slightly smaller size. and her name means two headed, as she has a head at both ends of her body

Note: can only be summoned once per battle

Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

cloud of darkness

(Kuchiyose: hachuu cloud of darkness) summoning: Wyvern cloud of darkness
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range:All
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage: N/A
Description: the user makes the required seals for summoning and then presses a palm to the ground summoning cloud of darkness.n he stands about 8 feet tall and his body length is about 12 feet in total. he has an aditional set of wings for increased agility. he is not built for endurance but is a speed demon. his areo dynamic shape allows him to cut through most wind attacks
(up to B rank, unless they are cutting)

-Declined: No mythical creatures are allowed not to mention that Grim holds the dragon contract-

Geezus · Dec 30, 2009

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Raiton: Raikage Yougeki Gusoku (Lightning Style: Thunder Shadow's Assault Armor)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+10 every turn active)
Damage: +60 to taijutsu and +40 to Raiton (-5 To User Per Turn)
Description:
By instantly releasing and wrapping his body in a layer of Lightning chakra, the User can electrically stimulate his nervous system and speed up his neural synapses to react faster to danger and push his physical prowess to the absolute limit, allowing him to gain tremendous raw speed and power comparable to Maito Gai in EG Mode. making it difficult, if not impossible, even for the Sharingan to keep up with him. The armor also increases his defense against Raiton and Doton Techniques. Drastically Reducing a Attack Even as Direct As Chidori. Due To The Constant Strain Of This Jutsu on The Nervous System the User Takes Damage Each Turn It Is Activate. He is Also able to sharpen the focus of this jutsu to aid in its piercing effects. Direct Taijutsu Would Be Foolish.
(Allows Use Of Raikage Armor Techniques)
(Last 3 Turns)
(Usable 2 Times )
After use no movement a turn afterwards.

-Declined: OP-

Rariatto (Lightning Plough Hot Sword)
Rank: S / Forbidden
Type:Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 / 60
Damage: 80 / 120
Description: The user charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move. This strike is powerful enough to blow away the target's entire chest. The attack is straightforward, though, and can be easily seen through with the Sharingan. Kirabi and The Raikage Can Combine Their Efforts Both Using This Technique at the Same Time to Create a Force Powerful Enough To Decapitate On Contact.

-Approved: but this jutsu is not to be taught to anyone else-

Raigyaku Suihei (Lightning Oppression Horizontal)
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After Covering Themselves With The Raikage Assault Armor, The User Preforms a Backhand Chop. Stunning The Opponent. And Greatly Damaging Their Neck.
(Effects Last 1 Turn)

-Declined: Poor description-

Girochin Doroppu ( Righteous Lightning Sinking Anger Lightning Axe )
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (-5 to user)
Description: After Covering Themselves With Raikage Assault Armor the User, jumps into the air and preforms a downward kick on his opponent. The Power Of This attack is Strong Enough To Break Multiple Bones.
(Usable 4 times)

-Approved-

NEMEXIS · Dec 31, 2009

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(Fuuton:Hisan Hitonomi)-Wind Element:Flying Swallow
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:40
Description:Asuma's trademark move. Flying swallow requires great chakra channeling, for Asuma infuses his chakra into the blades of his tench knives. While doing this, Asuma charges towards his opponent at immense speeds. When the two shinobi meet, Asuma seemingly misses his opponent, but the chakra extending his blades slice through the opponent's chest, a very fatal wound. Asuma uses this technique a lot, leaving most of his opponents fatal wounds to cope with.
*Note Can Only Be Used 5 Times*
*Only Nemexis Can Use/Teach*

-You don't need to submit jutsus shown to be used by cannon characters of the manga-

(Katon:Kaijin Sanbutsu Nenshou)-Fire Element:Ash Product Burning
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:Short-Medium
Chakara Cost:25
Damage Points:40
Description:This is another formidable attack in Asuma's arsenal. Asuma can create cloud of lingering, super heated ash that covers the surrounding area. To do this, Asuma gathers chakra into his mouth. He then infuses fire based chakra within the chakra already in his mouth. To make a sort of ash type mist, he finally infuses wind based chakra to make it airborne. Finally, he shoots it out of his mouth, spewing it, and covering the entire area. This attack is very helpful, because once you are caught inside, you are immediately burned by the ash. Also, if the opponent is caught inside and takes a breath, his lungs are filled with the burning ash, causing them to choke. Only if they are immediately taken out of the cloud will they survive. Asuma can also click his teeth once the cloud engulfs his enemy, and the entire cloud ignites in an explosion.
*Note Can Only Be Used 2 Times*
*Only Members Of The Sarutobi Clan Can Use/Teach*

-You don't need to submit jutsus shown to be used by cannon characters of the manga-

Fūton: Ryū Kiba (Wind Style: Dragon Fangs)
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:C
Range:Short-Long
Chakara:20
Damage Points:30
Description:This is an extension of (Earth Style: Earth Dragon Bomb), by accelerating the masses of mud to subsonic speed to the point they harden and become shaped like fangs. This jutsu is devastating since it can break some lightning based jutsu without problems.
*Can Only Be Used 3 Times*

-Declined: how on earth are you able to accelerate the masses of mud to subsonic speed?-

Toku · Dec 31, 2009

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(Kūsa Bōheki) Sky Sand Protective Wall
Rank: S-rank
Type: Attack-Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: 80
Description: the user summons a large amount of sand that takes the form of a shield in order to protect the area from an incoming aerial attack. The sand can then be used to attack by just releasing it and letting it fall down upon the area.
*Note: can only be used by a sand user.
*Note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*Note: can only be taught by Toku.

-Declined: similar jutsu already exists-

(Kyousei suna mori)Great sand lances
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Attack points: 90
Description: the user summons several lances made out of sand that are hardened at extreme pressure out of the strongest minerals in the earth, just like shukaku’s shield, and uses them to impale the opponent. The lances come out of wherever the sand is whether it be the earth or the sky, but they are not launched from the sand unless one is picked up by the user. This jutsu puts a great strain on the user from the amount of chakra needed to manipulate each individual lance.
*Note: can only be used by a sand user.
*Note: can only be used 1x per battle.
*Note: can only be used by Toku.

-Declined: similar jutsu already exists-

MadaraUprisingUchiha · Dec 31, 2009

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(za genzou hyaku kobushi)- The Vision of a hundred Fists
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points: n/a
Description: The user will perform the needed handseals. They will then attempt to grab or punch the enemy with their bare hands; which will activate the Genjutsu. The victim will have blurred vision for about 5 seconds, and then everything will seem normal to them. Once in play if the user uses any ninjutsu or taijutsu, the victim will think that the technique was sent in their direction 100 times at once, making it hard for them to react due to shock, and difficult to avoid.
Note: Effects last for 2 turns.

-Declined: wrong chakra info-

(Doton:Tsume satsugai ishi)- Earth style:Claw of killing stone.
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid(Short-Long if infused with a wind jutsu like Fuuton:Juuha Reppou Shou)
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:40(+10 if infused with a jutsu such as Fuuton: Juuha Reppou Shou)
Description: The user will perform the needed handseals and will smash their hands into the ground, creating cracks that carve out 5 claws made of earth. They will then use their chakra to hurl these claws towards their opponent, but because of the weight and density of these stone claws and wind jutsu must be used to make it go farther distances, and to have more velocity.

-Approved-

(Doton:Mashin jiraigen)- Earth style

evil’s Minefeild
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25(explosion uses 5 chakra)
Damage Points:40
Description: The user will perform the needed handseals and push their hands into the ground below them. They will then send their chakra through the ground in a medium sized circular web. The user may overload a section of the web with chakra to cause an explosion to happen. Releasing an explosion of violent chakra and shrapnel from debris within the earth, that happens directly under the opponent to cause maximum damage. The explosion is the size equal to that of a hand grenade allowing it to remove limbs and the shrapnel to still cause damage to an enemy escaping from the explosion.
Note: The user must keep their hands planted under the ground to use this technique. Amount of chakra put into the blast can be manipulated so that the user can attack targets close to them.

-Declined: similar jutsu already exists/OP/ wrong chakra info-

(Katon:Kabe enkou)-Fire style:Wall of Flame
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40(+10 each turn if oil is spat on opponent)
Description: The user will spit out a thick liquid that was used once by the ancient Romans, that can burn on water. They will hold out a match in front of them as they do this process to create a type of flamethrower. They may spit this oil on the ground, on water, or on a person for it burn it's entire life. The fire burns so hot it can cancel out water jutsu of the rank of C and below. It cannot cancel those of B+ but neither can it be put out by them, but only spread around, pushing the oil.
Note:Fire may only be put out by being smothered.
Note:Fire burns for 6 turns.

-Declined: I am missing the connection between Romans and Masashi Kishimoto. And btw this liquid was used by Byzantines and is called "liquid/Greek fire" -

~Hasashi~ · Dec 31, 2009

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lightning style: devils mask (raiton: mashin fukumen)
rank: forbidden
type: supplementary
range: short
chakra: 50
damage: n/a (50 to the user)
description: the user will put his hand over his head and focus his chakra and bring the lightning particles around the air into one forming a mask which the user then pulls over his head (causes a lot of damage to the users face) once the mask is on the user gains an insane amount of speed equivalent to the 6th gate and all the users lightning jutsu +40 furthermore the user gains the ability to create lightning out of nothing but takes 10+ damage each time he does this
NOTES
once per battle
lasts for 4 turns after that each time the user keeps it on it is +25 damage per turn maximum of 6 turns
wind jutsu go down in power -20 and it takes more chakra
lightning jutsu take less chakra
the user cant use lightning 4 turns after this is used and S rank lightning for the rest of the battle
the user cant use S rank elemental jutsu the next turn

-Declined: OP-

lightning/water style: destructive vortex (raiton/suiton: gekiha kachuu)
rank: S
type: attack
range: short-long
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description: the user will put both his hands out in one hand he will focus raiton chakra and gather the lightning particles around the air to form a small orb (about the size of a rasengan) in his hand while in the other hand the user will focus water chakra and gather the water particles around the air into a small orb (same size) once done (process is very fast) the user will let his chakra go causing the raiton orb and the suiton orb to shoot forward and form into a vortex of water/lightning that is extremely powerful and can rip holes through things the size of the great pyramids and still continue
NOTES
three times per battle
no S ranks the next turn

-Declined: You need to know Yin and Yang for this-

fire style: lava mine (katon: kazangan bakudan)
rank: S
type: attack
range: short-long
chakra: 40
damage: 80
description: the user will stomp his foot creating an underground tunnel which goes right under the opponent then he will focus his fire chakra and send it through the tunnel heating the ground under the opponent to lava the lava works very much like a land mine if the opponent moves at all the lava will erupt burning him to death however if he chooses to stay he will be burned alive by the lava
NOTE
once per battle

-Declined: similar jutsu already exists and OP-

Yagura · Dec 31, 2009

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(Vesuvius no Chuushin) - Vesuvius' Heart
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Close-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: The user after activating fully the sharingan, closes his right eye and the left eye spins clockwise. Then scorching flames from the depths of the earth rise and surrounds the user and also forms expandable wings to be used as an offensive force. The user is immune to fire jutsus in this state and he can use the wings of fire to flap it and send fireballs to the opponent. After 5 turns the user dies even if he deactivates the heart because of the extreme heat.
Note: Must have 3 tomoe Sharingan and Yagura must teach him/her and must be given permission.

-Declined: unrealistic and OP-

Yagura · Dec 31, 2009

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Yagura said:
(Kuchiyose: Curtana ) - Summoning: Sword Of Mercy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user summons his sword, Curtana. After 6 turns, Curtana will disappear automatically.

~Declined: It's a sword that does nothing so far. Please mention all the abilities it has to have this approved~

(Kuchiyose: Curtana ) - Summoning: Sword Of Mercy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user summons his sword, Curtana. Curtana can infused with elemental chakra to be used for offensive and defensive forms. Curtana can also transform into a shield of titanium to block incoming weapon attacks.

-Declined: poor description and the pink parts needs changing-

Yagura · Dec 31, 2009

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Curtana - Shinzo) - Sword Of Mercy: Divine Spear
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user releases Raiton chakra and slams his palms on the ground and spears of Lightning appear on the ground surrounding the user and impaling the opponent. This jutsu can only be used 3 times. The user can't use Curtana's power for the next 2 turns.

(Curtana - Zangetsu) - Sword Of Mercy - Cutting Moon
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user infuses Katon chakra on Curtana and the user makes a slashing attack on the opponent and the Katon chakra releases fire like a moon and ranges up to mid range and can burn the opponent severely. This jutsu can only be used twice and cannot be used again.

-First get Curtana approved and then re submit those-

Yagura · Dec 31, 2009

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(Satetsu no Gosunkugi Tama) - Iron Sand Spike Shell
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Defensive
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: The user, after summoning the 3rd Kazekage puppet, release huge amounts of Iron Sand around him and forms an encampment wall with spikes around him. The spikes can destroy/block/neglect any Earth jutsu but the user can't use any jutsu until he releases the shell. Then after releasing the shell, the user can't use Iron Sand jutsus for 3 turns.
Note: Only Yagura can use/teach this jutsu

-Declined: Forbidden jutsus need to have side effects to the user-

Musashibo · Dec 31, 2009

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Musasibou said:
(Danshingu Kiwa Kara-Kuruma) - Dancing Edge Color Wheel

(Danshingu Kiwa Kara-Kuruma) - Dancing Edge Color Wheel
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (+ 10 for every wheel.)
Damage: 80
Description: The swordsman connects a strong ninja wire to the sword, or can have a chain that is already connected to the hilt, and begins to swing it around like a chain and scythe. The user then swings it at high speed and by using his/her chakra he or she can add elemental properties to send devestating wheels of focused chakra towards the victim. The use can add the five basic elements: Fire, Wind, Lightning, Earth, and Water. Fire will cause burns, wind will cause slicing and cuts, lightning will numb the target, earth will hit the opponent with great blunt force for max knockback, and water will allow the opponent to be marked for 2 turns allowing the user of this technique to know the opponent's location. This is a technique derived from the techniques named (San Butai Katana Danmaku) - Three Element Sword Barrage and (Go Animaru Go Soshi Genkotsu) – 5 Animal 5 Element fist, but taken to the next level with distance availablity and with high chakra consumption.

Note: Can only be used and taught by Musasibou.
Note: Must have a tether connected to sword.
Note: Can only be used 3 times during battle.
Note: User can only shoot up to 3 wheels.
Note: User cannot use any jutsu during this move.
Note: All wheels have the same elemental weaknesses and strengths as though they are normal elemental jutsus.
Note: User must wait 1 turn to use this again.

~Pending: fix the pink parts~

-Declined: you made it OP now xD-
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-Approved-
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-Declined: way too OP, unrealistic, would cause you to die not to mention that you need a special water mode or Yin and Yang mastery to be able to do this-
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-Declined: this is one hell of a bow. All moves are OP-

Emperor · Dec 31, 2009

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(Bachiatari no Za-men : Nenshogurou Takai) Seeds of the Damned : Burning Black Death

Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Any range
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Zetsu uses his unique abilities to make a group of vines burst out of the ground under the opponent and coil around them. However, the specialty of these vines is that the natural oil content of any plant is multiplied a hundredfold in them, making huge amounts of highly flammable oil rest inside them. The vines are also extremely weak and thin-skinned, and will burst into hot flames on contact with the slightest heat, even if there is strong sunlight. On the slightest touch, they will break spewing oil in their vicinity. Any fires caused by these are oil fires and cannot be put out by water.
~ Only Zetsu can use this jutsu
~ Can only be used twice per battle

-Declined: OP-

For the record, Nexus has allowed me to use poisons in my plant techniques.

( Bachiatari no Za-men: Ikusenbara no Sho-ru ) Seeds of the Damned : Shawl of a Thousand Thorns

Rank: A
Range: Short
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Chakra Cost: 35
Damage: 20 if stabbed ; 20 per turn from poison
Zetsu focuses his chakra, and, without handseals, grows three inch long thorns all over his body. The thorns are all extremely sharp - and, are poisoned with a potent neurotoxin/hallucinogen that causes blurred vision and mirages as well as slowly paralysing the bloodstream. The thorns can also be shot out at will at high speeds, though they reach only up to three metres.
~ User takes 15 damage
~ Can only be used by Zetsu
~ Thorns can only be shot out twice per battle

- I am not allowing poison to an already deadly character who can manipulate the whole nature. -

The next one is basically nothing, I'm just changing the name of an already-approved custom, so it should be approved.

(Vi-nasuwanahara Hijutsu Genjutsu : Ranbousosshaku) - Venus Flytrap Secret Illusion Technique : Violent Bite
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
An extremely complex jutsu, this technique casts a genjutsu that first makes the target think they are going to be eaten by a giant Venus Flytrap. Though this is sufficient to immobilise lower level targets, the real purpose of this technique is casting a genjutsu that plays with the target's mind by implanting a false memory of the target undergoing a violent attack by a man with split personalities in their childhood, and fools the brain into "remembering" this memory occur. This implants a deep phobia of people with split personalities into the target, making them freeze in place when they see a person with split personalities. The target, if they are a competent ninja, will release the first Venus Flytrap part of the Genjutsu, and will find that that is all ( an idea furthered by the technique's name of Violent Bite that the user will state ) and will not notice the more subtle part of this technique.
~ Can only be used once per battle
~ Lasts for 3 turns

TO

(Bachiatari no Za-men : Fukyuue) Seeds of the Damned : Eternal Hunger
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
An extremely complex jutsu, this technique casts a genjutsu that first makes the target think they are going to be eaten by a giant Venus Flytrap. Though this is sufficient to immobilise lower level targets, the real purpose of this technique is casting a genjutsu that plays with the target's mind by implanting a false memory of the target undergoing a violent attack by a man with split personalities in their childhood, and fools the brain into "remembering" this memory occur. This implants a deep phobia of people with split personalities into the target, making them freeze in place when they see a person with split personalities. The target, if they are a competent ninja, will release the first Venus Flytrap part of the Genjutsu, and will find that that is all ( an idea furthered by the technique's name of Eternal Hunger that the user will state ) and will not notice the more subtle part of this technique.
~ Can only be used once per battle
~ Lasts for 3 turns

-Approved again since it was approved before-

For the next one, I'm removing the restrictions on turns for the next one - for, let's face it, if something as devastating as the chakra armour the Raikage uses can be used for four turns - then this, an easily destroyed custom should not be restricted to two turns. [ Easily destroyed as in any B/A rank fire jutsu will slice through all this in one go ]The bold parts are the ones I've changed in the new one.
To compensate, I'm cutting the damage down from 80 to 20. I'm also changing the name.

(Vi-nasuharawanpou: Toko no Vi-nasuharawana ) Venus Flytrap Arts: Bed of Venus Flytraps
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
The user, a member of Zetsu's clan, forces their unique clan chakra into the ground to make Venus Flytraps come out from the ground on the whole arena. These Venus Flytraps can bite the opponent and tear out parts of flesh. Also, while this jutsu is in effect, neither the user nor the opponent can use Earth Release (Doton) moves since the roots of the venus flytraps bind the soil tightly, preventing it from being manipulated.
Note: Can only be used by members of Zetsu's clan
Can only be used once per battle
Lasts only for two turns
User cannot use Earth Release moves either.

TO

(Bachiatari no Za-men: Ashigakyuu) Seeds of the Damned : Corrupt Spread
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 20
The user, a member of Zetsu's clan, forces their unique clan chakra into the ground to make Venus Flytraps come out from the ground on the whole arena. These Venus Flytraps can bite the opponent and tear out parts of flesh. Also, while this jutsu is in effect, neither the user nor the opponent can use Earth Release (Doton) moves since the roots of the venus flytraps bind the soil tightly, preventing it from being manipulated.
Note: Can only be used by members of Zetsu's clan
Can only be used once per battle
User cannot use Earth Release moves either.

-Approved-

For the next one, I have signed the wolf contract, and Roku has allowed me to make this summoning. Since Zetsu already has most of these abilities, it isn't too far-fetched.

( Kuchiyose: Kynareth Etai'gouken ) Summoning : Kynareth, Nature Guardian

Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 40 for Kynareth's claws or fangs, and jutsus used as per their details
The user summons Kynareth, a wolf from Mount Fang. Kynareth is about the size of three average humans and has green markings on his body and leaves growing out of his face. Like all the other wolves, Kynareth has extremely sharp claws and teeth. Kynareth's abilities focus around plants - he can use any plant based technique the user knows, or make plants grown suddenly to attack or bind the opponent. His aura is so pure that plants grow wherever he treads. Kynareth, when summoned, can either appear like a normal summoning, or come out of any plant in the arena. Due to his nature abilities, Kynareth will not let just anyone summon him, and will require the person to have signed the wolf contract and have abilities like Zetsu ( i.e. in touch with plants ) to summon him.
~ Can only be summoned once per battle
~ User cannot summon any other creatures, or use Wind Release above B rank whenever Kynareth is on the field.
~ User pays 25 chakra per turn for keeping Kynareth on the field.

-edit the pink part, also, no Mayfly for the same round-

-Ventus- · Dec 31, 2009

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Buki Kuchiyose:uchiwa hebun)Weapon summoning:Fans of Heaven
rank: forbidden
type: supplementary
range: short-long
chakra: 50
damage: n/a
description: The user summons 2 fans that are made from metallic fiber thus they are as strong as swords.These fans with just 1 swing can send out a large gust of wind to wards the opponent.These fans can do all wind attackas and enchance wind jutsu by 40+.The fans helps the user block off lightning attacks but can massively damage the user with fire attacks.
-shinn only holds this fans-
-The fans stays for 4 turns-
-no summons can be used in battle while the fans of heaven are in battle-

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-Declined: similar jutsu already exists, Temari's move-

(Toad Art: Gama Komoriuta) Toad Lullaby

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points:n/a
Description: When the user Summons a toad; The toad sings a lullaby that sounds so beautiful, the opponent who hears it will surely listen for more but midway falls asleep unconciously.

*Can only be used by ~Shinn~*
*Can only be used 4x per battle*
*Must have a toad summoned to perform this jutsu*
*Effects of this jutsu last for one turn*
-Declined: similar jutsu already exists-

(Fuuton:kaze tama)Wind release:wind bullets
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:After performing the necessary hand seals, the user takes a deep breath and exhales several balls of wind. The balls are capable of piercing into an opponent's flesh, similar to bullets.

-Declined: how on earth you exhale balls of wind?-

(Fuuton:kaze bure-do)Wind Release:Wind Blade
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:After performing the necessary hand seals, the user takes a deep breath and spins his body around while exhaling. This releases a wide blade of wind that can slice through multiple targets.

-Declined: same as above-

(Fuuton:kaze slash)Wind Release:Wind Slash
Type: Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:The user will focus his wind chakra into the fans and the user will slash the fans towards the opponent and will create multiple slashing winds that are capable of slicing through anything.
-can be used 3x in battle-
-shinn can teach this jutsu-

-Declined: similar jutsu already exists-

Caliburn · Dec 31, 2009

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Karyuu no Enchu) - Fire Style: Fire Dragon's Flame Elbow -

Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short (can medium/long in combination with another jutsu)
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user focuses katon-based chakra into his elbow(s) and releases it in an instant like a booster jet from his elbow(s). As a result the speed and strength of the users punches are increased dramatically. The booster makes the punch so fast it’s nearly impossible to block/dodge it without having a special technique to do it(IG for example). The result of the speed is that internal damage the punch does is increased (as more speed means more power is released upon contact through the opponents body). The booster can be used for multiple strikes with both arms, though it’s mainly used as a one-hit attack.
This jutsu can also be used in combination with a katon-jutsu that is released from the users hand(s). As this jutsu’s doesn’t require any handseals(it just releases an amount of chakra), it can be used at the exact same time when performing the katon-jutsu, giving it a +20 damage boost (it still counts as one of the three jutsu’s).

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used in combination with a katon-jutsu released from the hands*

-Pending: how many times you can use this?-

(Katon: Karyuu no Guren Bakuenjin) - Fire style: Fire Dragon's Red Lotus Flame Exploding Blade -

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 60
Damage points: 120
Description: The user collects a huge amount of katon-based chakra in his arms and releases it as a massive, large scale torrent of blade-shaped flames that strike the enemy in a spiral formation. Every time the enemy (or anything else for that matter) is hit with one of the blades it explodes with enormous force. As it are blades they make a slashing motion and blow up on contact, taking parts of the surface of the earth with it.
Because a large amount of blades is released, the entire battlefield is engolved in exploding flames and the make the battlefield full of large craters. It also evaporates watersources.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*-10 damage to the user*

-Pending: needs stronger side effects-

(Shishi Sonson) - Lion's Song -

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user must have unleashed Ken Ki to use it. Placing a sheathed sword upright and listening to the "breath" of his opponent. The user then goes in a straight line to the opponent, using the speed from Ken Ki(=4 IG), making it look like he completely disappears and reappears behind the opponent. The attack rapidly unsheathes, attacks once, and sheaths the sword again when the user is past the opponent. The attack itself consists only from one straight slash that attacks the part between the shoulders and chest, slashing so deep it makes the arm that was hit disfunctional and making the opponent bleed to death. The technique is back-handed as opposed to from the waist with a standard grip on the sword. The slash is not completely full as the tip of the blade leaves the blade when the it slashes and then is put back into the scabbard.
Utilizing the speed of Ken Ki at it max and focusing it all in one slash it makes it impossible to dodge block, unless the opponent itself has Ken Ki activated. Even then it’s almost impossible to block/dodge it. Sharingans can nearly follow the movement, but there bodies can’t react in time.
It's strong enough to cut through steel.

*Can only be used when released Ken Ki*
*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used twice per battle*
A gif of the attack:

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-Declined: OP. Ans sharingan of 3 tomoes can detect the speed of all gates-

~Nemesis~ · Dec 31, 2009

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

-Approved-

-Declined: similar jutsu already exists-
___________

-Approved-

Seblax · Dec 31, 2009

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

summoning white tigers ministers ( Kuchiyose no jutsu : jouin shiro tora )

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: this is a summoning of the three huge tigers that fight with the summoning boss " tiggara " they are as huge as gamaken and wears an light defensive armor that protect them from any attack and there speed is brilliant, they are faster then snakes and there claws and teeth is huge enough to cut throw almost everything

~ i know white tiger summoning
-Declined:edit the pink parts-

raiton : doragon-ken ) lightning style : dragon blade

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( - 15 for each turn its in use )
Damage Points: 80
Description: by charging the user's lightning chakra, he shall focus it in an blade like huge dragon shaped lightning from his hand " like an dragon chidori spear " but it can be moved like waves to so that its flicks able if the user want to, and can make huge damages to the opponent , and can destroy any earth attack from a rank and lower or normal .

~ can only be user 3 times in a battle ..
~ cant stay more then two turns
~ - 10 for each time its in use for the user's health " because it injures his hand

-Declined:edit the pink parts-

( toko fuuin kusari ) endless sealed chains

Rank: a
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30 ( -4 for each chain that has been released over each turn )
Damage Points: 60
Description: this is an seal over the hand of the hand that is sealing seven chains with a kunai end that can be released five for each time and its so long that can never been fully released , ans its controllable by the user's chakra and its faster then any other attack of kunai or shuriken and can be powered with other elemental attacks , and can protect from others attack
- can be used 5 times each battle
- for me its sealed over my hand

-Declined:no sealings-

( rinku shuriken ) linked shurikens and kunais

Rank: a
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost: 30 ( -10 for each turn )
Damage Points: 60
Description: shurikens and kunais that is linked with chakra links and normal links to be perfectly controlled , it spins\stands around the user to be an perfect protection over any thrown shurikens"etc" .. and can be used to attack the opponent .

-Approved-

( Kuchiyose no jutsu karasu : torikota ) summoning : the crows of hell : torikota of hell

rank :A
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: mid-short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: an crow that lives in hell, he is feared by all others animals, but when he fights his huge claws appear and armor , as it is , he has four wings and ride able and his size is an big as gamaken , and it can use fire element power as well up to his A rank

-Declined: Crows belong to Itachi-

note : hope you edit any part that u dont like or vm me before declined it
btw : thanx for returning this thread to word and for ur hard work

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