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(Doujutsu:Takusenme )Eye Technique-Oracle's Eye
Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbbiden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:100
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user's eye transforms into an eye with a black pupil and yellow surrounding it.This Eye technique can see or predict the future to give the user an advantage.This Eye Also has a series of high level genjutsu that can immobilize the opponent, put them to sleep,Etc.This Jutsu puts a strain on the users sight meaning they will not be able to see properly for the Next 2 turns after its activation.Iff the user makes a clone while this jutsu is activated, the clones won't have it only the real can have it.This Jutsu can Also can sense if the opponent is using chakra around them but cannot pinpoint their location.While this jutsu is activated the user cannot you any genjutsu except for genjutsu that is related to this eye technique.
-This Jutsu May only be used 2 Times per battle
-This Eye Technique lasts for two turns.
-This can only be used by ~Minato~.
-No Hand signs needed to do this jutsu
Oracles eye:
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(Raiton:Nyu-Toron/Puroton/Denshi Seichuu)-Lightning Release: Neutron/Proton/Electron Control
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The User can control the Electrons, Protons, And/or Neutrons of an outgoing or an incoming lightning jutsu.
Outgoing: When the user does a Raiton jutsu and it misses the opponent the user can control the Neutrons, Electrons, And/or Protons in the jutsu so i can follow the opponent.
Incoming: When the opponent shoot a lightning jutsu at the user the user can control the Neutrons, Electrons, And/or Protons of the Raiton jutsu to discharge it into the ground or redirect it to the opponent.
Restrictions:
-May only be used 2 times in battle
-Can only be used by ~Minato~


(Raiton:Ion Ryuushi Ruika Yoroi)-Lightning Release- Ion Particle Acceleration Armor
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short
Chakra cost:50
Damage Points:N/A(+90 if the user reaches their limit)
Description: The user takes in a enormous amount of Ions through their skin and their Body Converts it into chakra. This Process give the user a major chakra boost the amount can me so much that the chakra aura around the user can be visible to the naked eye. This Jutsu increases the users speed to the extent that it is to believed to be as fast the Flying Thunder God Technique. This jutsu is also able to increase the strength of the user immensely that one punch to a cliff would leave a huge crater in it(10-20 meters).This Jutsu Puts stress on the user because of the pressure of the Chakra. After this jutsu is deactivated the users chakra points are "busted" or "clogged" leaving the user very weak and sore(only if the user reaches their limit)
Restrictions:
-May be used only Once per battle
-The Armor Lasts for 3 Turns
-The user can deactivate the Armor at anytime
-No Handsigns needed to do this jutsu-
.......Is nothing but a copy of my jutsu U_U

(Raiton: Ion Denka Soujuu) Lighting Release: Ion Charge Manipulation

*Rank: S
*Type: Supplementary
*Range: N/A
*Chakra: 40
*Damage: 10 (damage added to lightning)
*Description: User Manipulates the ionic charge of their body and the area around the opponent. For Three Turns the user’s Lightning techniques have an extra kick and attack much faster. Ranged lightning attacks gain homing properties making them unavoidable. In addition the users speed is increased due to the charge and the user can also channel this charge into weapons like kunai making them seek out the opponent in the air even after being deflected, or repel weapons away from themselves.

*Can only be used 2 times in battle*
*+10 dmg to Lightning attacks*
*While charged, the user is weaker to water attacks (-10 damage)*
 

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For my next jutsu's i got a yes from hells and roku saying that it can be done. please note it is not a custom element.

(Douzen Raikou Gigei)-Natural Lightning Arts
Rank:S
Type:Supplementary(this jutsu is only to start Natural Lightning techs.)
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The User throws his hand toward the sky releasing his normal chakra and Raiton chakra.Then an chakra essence will rise into the clouds creating more Negative and positive charges thus activating the use of Natural Raiton Jutsu/techs for the user to use. Because the Lightning is "Natural" It has the potential to strike at the normal speed of lightning (about 1/2 the speed of light) and also Appears in a Yellow color.

- For every turn Natural Lightning Arts is activated the user loses (-10) chakra points
-Must master normal Raiton techs
- Can only be taught by Sinister and Kirabi (with both of our approval)


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(Douzen Raikou Gigei:Tsuin Dageki)-Natural Lightning Arts: Twin Strikes
Rank:A
Type: Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:With Natural Lightning activated in the clouds, the user controls two Bolts of natural lightning (one for each hand) which he/she then can use to attack 2 different opponents,or to attack one opponent with 2 strikes.

-Must Know and have Natural lightning activated
-Can only be taught by Sinister and Kirabi (with both of our approval)

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(Douzen Raikou Gigei:Ame of Raikou)-Natural Lightning Arts: Rain of Lightning
Rank:B
Type: Attack
Range:Short- Mid
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40(+5 if used with actual rain)
Description: With Natural Lightning Arts activated the user makes a separate cloud (that hovers over the opponent) rain multiple sparks/bolts of lightning rain from the sky. When the lightning touches the opponent they feel as though they are being shocked endlessly in different places each time. The rain lasts for three turns but the user cannot perform any other lightning jutsu until it is deactivated(can be deactivated at will).

-Must know and have Natural lightning activated
-The lightning can be fused with actual rain for +5 Damage
-Can only Be taught by Sinister and Kirabi (with both of our approval)

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(Douzen Raikou Gigei:Harou Te)-Natural Lightning Arts: Surging hands
Rank:S
Type: Attack/Defense
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:With Natural Lightning Arts activated the user creates 2 Large hands of Natural lightning descend from the skies.They can wrap around the user as defense from incoming attacks. These hands can fend off attacks from any element up to A rank with the exceptiong of wind, in which it can only fend off attacks up to B-Rank.These hands can be used to bind the opponet making him unable to move, since the hands are made of lightning they shock the opponent

-Must know and have Natural lightning activated
-Can only be used 3 times in battle
-Can only Be taught by Sinister and Kirabi (with both of our approval)

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(Douzen Raikou Gigei:Kieuseru)-Natural Lightning Arts: Disappearance
Rank:C
Type: Supplementary
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Much like undergroundfish projection,With Natural Lightning Arts activated the user makes a lightning bolt strike himself at the normal speed of lightning. The user inserts himself with the lightning bolt so when the bolt is gone so is he. This gives the user the ability to travel freely through the clouds and avoid the opponent's attacks. The User can reappear by having a lightning bolt strike wherever the user pleases Usually behind his opponent surprising him with the rapid speed of the jutsu.

-Must know and have Natural lightning activated
-Because of the rapid speed of this jutsu it can only be performed 3 times in battle
-Can only Be taught by Sinister and Kirabi (with both of our approval)





~Declined: I disagree with Grim and Roku. It doesn't make sense and it is seriously and extremely OP~
 
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(Raiton: Ikazuchi Kireme) – Lightning Style: Thunder Break

Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will concentrate negative charge of lightning energy and then releasing the energy in a shock wave and is shot at the enemy. (This can also be shot into the enemies body if direct contact with their body made) when connecting with the enemies positively charged lightning in their body it will then disrupt the flow of lightning chakra and then cancelling out the chakra by discharging from the enemy’s body. He also has the ability to draw in lightning chakra and bend to his own will and use to strike back at his foes.

Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama

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Declined : OP~


(Fuuinjutsu: Sankaku Gokusha) - Sealing Technique: Triangular Prison

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user performs a few hand seals and then they will release chakra and surround the enemy creating a Triangular Golden Prison that traps the opponent and their arms and legs are bound to the sides preventing the enemy from moving around.

Note: Binding Lasts 1 turn
Note: Can only be used 3 Times
Note: Co-Produced by HellsBadass

~Declined: OP~

(Amatsuyakunan) - Heaven's Calamity

Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A powerful broadsword that carries the name Calamity. It's an overwelming sword that strikes fear in the hearts of men just be looking at it, however the aura it releases is nothing compared to what it really can do...they say it drives man mad by making their worst nightmares come true.
Gives +10 damage for every taijutsu technique (due to its size)
E-D rank genjutsu doesn't work on the user
The users genjutsu becomes a lot stronger. As a result the rank of the jutsu he casts raises one rank (can only be used twice per battle)
The user can cast a genjutsu on itself by looking to his blade when he casts it, as a result it is reflected on him. This way the user can get himself out of a genjutsu, depending on the rank of the genjutsu he casted and in wich he is in (example to free yourself from an A-rank he needs to cast an A-rank on the sword). If the user isn't under a genjutsu and he casts it, he is immune for genjutsu for one turn, depending on the rank of jutsu he casted on himself (can only be used once per battle)

*The sword is indestructible (this doesn't mean it can destroy everything)*
*The effects don't have effect on Tsukuyomi*
*Can only be wielded by Kaito-sama*
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~Declined: doesn't make sense, genjutsu over genjutsu~

(Shiro Kiba Kaimoui) White Fang Slash Fury

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Activating the Sixth sense to increase the users focus and reflexes the user will concentrate their chakra into their sword and then the user will release a burst of chakra out their feet to send them at a fast speed towards the enemy target and the sword will reflect natural light from the chakra concentration in the sword and then strike the enemy 15 times in all directions leaving a trail of white light from the speed of the attacks. The reflected light makes it hard for the enemy to accurately defend against these strikes.

Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Must Know Sixth Sense
Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama

~Pending: define the speed plz~

(Quezacotl Takaoushou Za Kihou Sora) - Quezacotl Hawk King of the high skies

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Quezacotl is the King of The Hawks and Ancient ruler of old times. He has the power to bend lightning element to his will making him able to use lightning element up to the users rank. He flies around with swift speeds and at high altitudes making him a hard target and as he flies around he leaves behind a trail of golden light made from the release of natural lightning energy built up in his body which then causes a thunderstorm to decend onto the battlefield.

Note: Can only be summoned 2 times and lasts 4 turns
Note: Must sign the Giant Hawk contract from Kaito-sama.
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~Pending: More details are needed~
 
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Raigen Raikouchuu - Lightning Illusion Lightning Flash Pillar

Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
RangeShort-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:
Description: The user generates a large flash of light which blinds the enemy. The user only have to do one hand seals, then he generates a large pillar of lightning which hinders the eyesight of his target. Like many Genjutsu, the Sharingan can pierce the illusion and defeat it.
Note: The opponent is blind for one whole turn

~Pre-approved~
 
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(Raiton/Doton: Joushou Dagekinami Shippu Denkou) Lightning/Earth Release: Rising Shockwaves of Imploding Lightning
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user will gather a big deal of lightning chakra around him and an orb of lightning will surround him, suddently the orb will expand and concentrate underground, imploding on itself. This will cause the lightning to explode underground, causing shockwaves of energy and lightning, mixed with dust to appear from the ground (so anyone who is underground will be damaged too) around ther user in a ring form. After this an enourmous quantity of dust will be released on the air for 2 turns. Can only be used once per battle, requires mastery of both lightning and earth elements, does 10 damage to user
Jutsu looks like this:
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~Declined: it takes a year for all these effects to happen and if they do it's too OP~

and i would like to update the last jutsu i posted here xD, it doesnt have nothing to classifie as forbidden

(Raiton: Assai Kinjitou) - Lightning Release: Crushing Pyramid
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user will release his raiton chakra through the air, he will open his hand and a super dense lightning pyramid will form very close to the opponent's body, shocking him, then, when the user closes his hand, the pyramid will crush whoever is inside. If a wall of the pyramid is destroyed, the others continue the process and will just shock and cut through whatever is inside. This can only be used once per battle and does 10 damage to user.

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(Raiton: Assai Kinjitou) - Lightning Release: Crushing Pyramid
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will release his raiton chakra through the air, he will open his hand and a super dense lightning pyramid will form very close to the opponent's body, shocking him, then, when the user closes his hand, the pyramid will crush whoever is inside. If a wall of the pyramid is destroyed, the others continue the process and will just shock and cut through whatever is inside. This can only be used once per battle.

~Approved~

(Doton: Chiri Kiri) - Earth Release: Dust Mist
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will do the handseals and will make the dust on the ground to rise. This dust cannot be blowed away since every grain of sand is filled with the user's chakra. Lasts as the user releases the jutsu but he needs to use +3 chakra per turn to mantain. Can only be used twice

~Declined: User's chakra doesn't make things heavier O_O~

(Doton: Chiri Kiri Kasui) - Earth Release: Slicing Dust Mist
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will use the dust on the air to make cut and slice the opponent from every direction possible.

~Declined: Hm, you dont need a special c.j. to make dust rise and cut. ~
 
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(Raiton/Doton: Joushou Dagekinami Shippu Denkou) Lightning/Earth Release: Rising Shockwaves of Imploding Lightning
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user will gather a big deal of lightning chakra around him and an orb of lightning will surround him, suddently the orb will expand and concentrate underground, imploding on itself. This will cause the lightning to explode underground, causing shockwaves of energy and lightning, mixed with dust to appear from the ground (so anyone who is underground will be damaged too) around ther user in a ring form. After this an enourmous quantity of dust will be released on the air for 2 turns. Can only be used once per battle, requires mastery of both lightning and earth elements, does 10 damage to user
Jutsu looks like this:
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and i would like to update the last jutsu i posted here xD, it doesnt have nothing to classifie as forbidden

(Raiton: Assai Kinjitou) - Lightning Release: Crushing Pyramid
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user will release his raiton chakra through the air, he will open his hand and a super dense lightning pyramid will form very close to the opponent's body, shocking him, then, when the user closes his hand, the pyramid will crush whoever is inside. If a wall of the pyramid is destroyed, the others continue the process and will just shock and cut through whatever is inside. This can only be used once per battle and does 10 damage to user.

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(Raiton: Assai Kinjitou) - Lightning Release: Crushing Pyramid
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will release his raiton chakra through the air, he will open his hand and a super dense lightning pyramid will form very close to the opponent's body, shocking him, then, when the user closes his hand, the pyramid will crush whoever is inside. If a wall of the pyramid is destroyed, the others continue the process and will just shock and cut through whatever is inside. This can only be used once per battle.


(Doton: Chiri Kiri) - Earth Release: Dust Mist
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will do the handseals and will make the dust on the ground to rise. This dust cannot be blowed away since every grain of sand is filled with the user's chakra. Lasts as the user releases the jutsu but he needs to use +3 chakra per turn to mantain. Can only be used twice

(Doton: Chiri Kiri Kasui) - Earth Release: Dust Mist Spikes
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will use the dust on the air to make spikes around the opponent and stab him from every direction.
The first move is just like limelight but like and updated version
 

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(Shin no Ippō: Isukumi) - One Side of the Soul: Paralyzing Terror

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The swordsman that uses this technique uses his/her eyes to cast this genjutsu. The eye of the beholder gazes upon the victims eyes and then strikes fear within the targets body. This fear is so strong it makes the victim unable to talk, let alone move. This technique almost feels instant because the victim doesn't know if he is being caught in a genjutsu effect until it is too late. With this technique the user is now able to slowly kill his/her victim in any way he/she wishes. This attack is based on the swordsman spirit. Though it is strong it can be broken by a strong enough spirit.

Note: Must be able to see the targets eyes.
Note: Can only be used twice during a battle.
Note: This genjutsu cannot be used as a clone.
Note: This genjutsu lasts 1 turn and the user must wait 2 turns before using it again.
Note: Only outside assistance and overpowering chakra can disrupt this genjutsu. (Must be the same rank of the user or higher to escape.)
Note: Can only be used and taught by Musasibou.

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~Declined: someone else has already used fear as genjutsu~

(Danshingu Kiwa Kara-Kuruma) - Dancing Edge Color Wheel

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40 (+ 10 for every wheel.)
Damage: 80
Description: The swordsman connects a strong ninja wire to the sword, or can have a chain that is already connected to the hilt, and begins to swing it around like a chain and scythe. The user then swings it at high speed and by using his/her chakra he or she can add elemental properties to send devestating wheels of focused chakra towards the victim. The use can add the five basic elements: Fire, Wind, Lightning, Earth, and Water. Fire will cause burns, wind will cause slicing and cuts, lightning will numb the target, earth will hit the opponent with great blunt force for max knockback, and water will allow the opponent to be marked for 2 turns allowing the user of this technique to know the opponent's location. This is a technique derived from the techniques named (San Butai Katana Danmaku) - Three Element Sword Barrage and (Go Animaru Go Soshi Genkotsu) – 5 Animal 5 Element fist, but taken to the next level with distance availablity and with high chakra consumption.

Note: Can only be used and taught by Musasibou.
Note: Must have a tether connected to sword.
Note: Can only be used 3 times during battle.
Note: User can only shoot up to 3 wheels.
Note: User cannot use any jutsu during this move.
Note: All wheels have the same elemental weaknesses and strengths as though they are normal elemental jutsus.
Note: User must wait 1 turn to use this again.

~Pending: fix the pink parts~
 
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The first move is just like limelight but like and updated version
no it's not -.- dont talk if you dont know things for sure. You spam and made me spam here because of your ignorance.


in that jutsu 4 ppl are needed and they form like a circle of lightning around the target and everything inside of it is incinerated, on my jutsu i cause an explosion of lightning around me and then it causes shockwaves around me, it has nothing to do with limelight.
 

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(Doton: Koudo Shinka-)-Earth Sinker
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:A
Range:Long
Chakara Cost:30
Damage Points:35
Description:After performing the required hand seals the target begins to rapidly sink into the ground below them, after they have sunk the required amount then the ground immediately hardens to incredible strength, making it difficult to escape from. However the user should only sink the target to their knees as anything past this and the target will have plenty of time to react and move out of the area. This Jutsu can also be used as a defense move to stop your opponent from running towards you this is the other version of Earth Swamp.
*Only Orochimaru Can Use*
*Can Only Be Used Two Times A Battle*

~Declined: Too similar to other jutsu~


(Baku Suikugi no Jutsu )-Exploding Water Nails Technique
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:A
Range:Long
Chakara Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:After performing the needed hand seals, the user can make nails explode from any body of water such as a stream, river, lake or Mizu Bunshin. The size and strength of the nails depends on the size of the water source and strength of the user.This Move Can Also Hold Down An Opponent To Stop Moving.
*Only Orochimaru Teach*

~Needs restrictions~


(Hibiki kizuato gikou)-Sound Slash Technique
Type:Attack/Defense
Rank:C
Range:Long
Chakara Cost:20
Damage Points:30
Description:The user can use their chakra to transfer the swing of his/her sword through the air as an air wave. Depending on how hard the user swings his/her sword and how large the sword is, the two factors will result in how powerful and far the air wave will go. However, the maximum distance is 20 feet. The wave can slash through things just as if it was hit with the sword itself, not including chakra effects.
*Must Use With Weapon*

~Declined: Already made by someone else~
 
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(Fuuton: Kire Gokusha) Wind: Slicing Prison
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A large amount of wind will begin to spin around their target then will quickly form around the opponent in the shape of a 360 degree dome. This dome consists of high pressure cutting winds that rotate at high speeds and cut anything it comes in contact with, the dome of wind can then be decreased in size, but it becomes more condensed with wind, and crushes and rips the opponent to shreads inside it.
~Can only be used 3 times per battle.
I think a similar jutsu exists. Have Grimm check it
~Declined: Similar jutsu exists~

Can someone check the one above.

(Fuuton: Kaze Tekidan) Wind Release: Wind Grenades
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will rapidly shoot multiple blasts of wind from their index finger they will then scatter randomly around the opponent surrounding them, the user may direct the wind orbs where ever he wishes not just at the opponent, then all the wind orbs(numbers can range from 1-20) will seek out the target and proceed to explode when they get in close range(can be exploded whenever the user wishes) releasing a large amount of compressed wind energy which will rip anything close to shreads. The explosions will each have a 2 meter radius.
~Can only be used 3 times per battle.

~Declined: OP~

(Kaeru: Kaeru Shou Ganbutsu) Frog Arts: Frog Call Imitation
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80(-10 to the user)
Description: During times when Shima and Fukasaku are not present, the user will imitate Shima and Fukasaku by collecting chakra into their voice and then the user will let out a loud screech from their mouth. The opponent will be paralyzed, confused, and distracted, leaving them unable to move as soon as it is heard, but this jutsu will give out the users position immediately. To use this jutsu you must know how to summon toads, entering Sage Mode is not required.
~Once per battle.

~Needs something to boost you up like Sage Mode~


(Senpo: Sono Shimekiri) Sage Arts: The End
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: All
Chakra cost: All Sage Mode chakra
Damage: 90(+20 for each successful hit)(-30 to the user)
Description: This jutsu consists of 5 consecutive parts in which all 5 elements(each part contains th usage of one element) are combined to create one large combination attack. Since the user is one with nature while Sage Mode is active, no handselas will be needed for anything that occurs during the course of this jutsu. The element will be used in this order Fire, Earth, Water, Lightning, and Wind:
1. The user will first send a massive amount of fire chakra into the ground beneath the opponent the ground will be heated to a immense temperature.
2. The fire will mix in with the earth and will erupt around the opponent with a 15 feet radius and will crash down onto the opponent from all directions covering them in a thick coat of flaming hot earth.
3. As the flaming earth is burning the opponent alive the user will stomp the ground and water will erupt and cool the flaming earth making it harden into solid rock.
4. Followed by user shooting a lightning bolt into the sky that comes down as a large lightning beam blast that hits the opponent from the above causing the rock to shatter into dust and fry the opponent.
5. Finally a blast of wind is spit out by the user which heads towards the opponent with great force, it tears the remains to shreads and blows the dust away with the breeze.
~Though the individual parts can be blocked, the sequence cannot be stopped and will continue. The entire sequence is done very quickly, each part will start as soon as the one above ends.
~Once per battle and only one other jutsu can be used on the same turn as this one.
~At the end of the turn that this jutsu is used in, Sage Mode will immediately wear off no matter how many turns that are left, the user will also be left unable to move for the rest of the turn and 2 following turns, and no S-Rank or higher jutsu can be used by the user for 5 turns.

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(Senpo: Etai Houtei) Sage Arts: Nature's Gift
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: None(-30 to the user)
Description: The user will draw in a large amounts of nature chakra into their body while in Sage Mode and will balance it out with their own chakra, the large extreme amount of chakra then flows throughout the body with immense pressure causes the chakra system to overload and spreads more chakra to muscles and nerves and gives the user strength, stamina, reflexes, and speed comparable to the 5th gate.
~Once per battle, after Sage Mode ends the user will be left extremely exhausted and cannot move for the rest of that turn, and S-Rank jutsu cant be used for 2 turns.

(Fuuton: Soutei Chein) Wind Release: Binding Chains
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The winds around the opponent arms, legs, and body will take the shape of chains and the chains will tightly grasp around both their arms and legs and around their body in a spiral pattern binding them, the chain will cut into the opponent flesh and will leave the area cut numb because of the intense wind pressure, then the chains on the opponents body will get much tighter and rip their body to ribbons.
~Can be used 3 times per battle.

~Rest all declined: OPed~
 
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Illusion Technique: Distorted Reality (Genjutsu: Ibitsu Riariti)

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user would cast an illusion immediately and unknowingly when the opponent have suffer any kind of pain, cut, wound etc. (it can be minor or life threatening). The illusion causes the opponent's pain, wound, cut etc. to becoming extremely painful and have the opponenet severly afraid of their wounds which causes them into a state of complete horror-struck

~Needs restrictions~
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Katon: Nenshou Hitan (Katon: Burning Sorrow)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 60
Damage:120 (-30 to User)
Description:The User Concentrates all of Thier Fire Chakra into the Sky. Causing the Sky to Heat Up and Create Clouds. The Sheer amount causes any water jutsu to evaporate immedieatly and fall as Hot Boling Rain Searing The Opponent Flesh On Contact. The Fire Chakra then Collects Into One Huge Tear Shaped Meteor above the clouds and then falls onto the enemy. Upon landing, a humongous fiery cyclone envelops the target.
(User Is Burned From The Heat Of the Attack)
(No Fire Rest of The Battle)
(Usable Once)

~Declined: OP~
 
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(Ame/Fuuton:Ame Tentei Doragon no Za Kaze) Rain Release/Wind Release: Rain God Dragons Of The Wind
Rank: Forbidden
type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: A Storm starts forming.The user concentrates and distributes into Rain drops falling from the sky. The Rain Drops start to gather and form Multiple Large dragons that come crashing down on the opponent with great velocity.If the dragons are attacked or ripped apart as long as its raining the dragons can reform and become even stronger. Some of the rain drops will hit the ground and when it does rain dragons shoot out from the ground to attack and rip apart the user limb from limb.
-May Only be used once per battle
- The Storm lasts for two turns

rain dragon jutsu exists
 
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Sen no Bou ( Staff of the Ascetic )
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank:S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A ( attacks with the staff 25 damage )
The user summons a long, six foot metal staff, with a large ring at one end. The staff, which is inscribed with three figures - one holding a discus, one holding a lotus, and one holding a trident - possesses certain powers. It serves as a conduit for the user's chakra, and increases its strength as it passes through before returning to the user thus granting a +10 damage for any elemental jutsus the user channels with it. It further serves as a very well-balanced weapon in a hand to hand fight, being nearly unbreakable by hard or sharp impacts, and increases the user's speed and strength by a small, though visible amount.
It has two abilities in of itself too. By focusing, the user can create a 360 degree field of chakra around himself to defend most wide area attacks, though it will fall to a focused, precision strike such as Chidori. Further, the user can create a small shockwave in short range to blow an opponent back a few feet, though it will not harm them.
Note: User cannot use Genjutsu or any Bloodline Limit, or any Summoning while holding this staff. User also takes 10 damage per turn and pays 15 chakra.


Akuneyasutura ( Evil Note, Valley of Arrows )
Type: Offensive
Rank:S
Range: Medium-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
The user creates an "arrow" of fire that is then shot by the user. The arrow, if it does hit the enemy will cause severe third degree burns - on the other hand, if it misses, all the fire will collapse into a small, superheated flame, while the user utilises their wind chakra to draw more air into the surface of the flame, exponentially increasing its heat and causing an intensely hot area around the fame for a metre or so. The flame continues to burn, sucking in more and more air, also increasing the area covered by the superheated zone.
If water is thrown at the flame before it starts sucking in air, then it will be extinguished. However, if it starts sucking in air and creates the heated zone, then water will evaporate before it reaches the flame.
~ Can only be used once per battle
~ Does 20 damage to the user
~ No other fire jutsus for the turn this is used
~ No summonings for the next two turns.

~Both need to be limited~
 
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Nero is back with custom making and when nero comes back he comes back with a bang >=)

(Mokuton: Kudzu)Wood Release: Kudzu (Names already in japanese)
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplimentary
Rank: Forbidden
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 70
Damage: 90 (10 to user)
Description: Kudzu-Rapid growth vine. Vines that can constanly grow without stopping. The user uses mokuton release to create an ancient tree this tree not only produces leaves but multiple vines by being a mokuton user the user manipulates the inside of the tree to control the vines instead of controling the vines themselfs. Manipulting how, where, and how fast they grow making the vines for defense and offense these vines are special vines that can grow constantly without dying.
Only can be used once.
The tree cant be manipulated after this turn.

Who ever checks this and wants to know how to stop this jutsu(Mods) PM me i'll be happy to tell you its very simple

The rest: Had nothing better to do and these r probably created but wat the hay O_O

(Katon: Katon Hari) Fire Release: Fire Post
Type: Attack/Supplimentary
Rank: A/S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30/40
Damage: 60/80
Description: The user puts out either one or both palms of there hands and focuses an extreme amount of fire chakra into it, if touched servere damage can be dealt, the palms start glowing a bright hot red color and small smoke lines come out of the palms the user releases the chakra releasing multiple small rasengan sized bullets bullets that get shot at a fast rate.
Note: This jutsu becomes Srank when 2 hands are used

(Dojutsu:Dei shuuryou) Eye technique: Days End
Type: Supplimentary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user uses the sharingan to manipulate a illusion that lets the user see a manafest of large snakes that terrorize his town and everybody he loves while using this jutsu the user then concentrates to release a kyodaija that then wraps around the opponent while hes in the illusion. After the opponent is in the illusion he is parazlyed in fear cause of the real snake around him.
Can only be used once.

~Declined: first one no way and second one needs limiting~
 
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Can someone check the one above.

(Fuuton: Kaze Kori Mukou) Wind: Winds from Beyond
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The wind around the opponent: from above, if possible from below, from behind, from infront, from the right, and from the left will all build tremendous pressure and coverge onto the opponent from all directions at the same time. The winds from each side will impact the opponent at the same time and will crush the opponent's entire body with massive force and squueze them restricting all movement while the winds continue to rip the opponent to shreads.
~Can only be used 3 times per battle.


(Fuuton: Shinpu Kaze Kanon) Wind: Pressurized Wind Canon
Type: Attack/Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: All
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80(+damage of any Wind jutsus absorbed)
Description: The user will hold out their hand and a small ball of chakra will begin to form, the ball of chakra will quickly begin to suck in all the wind in the area and store it within, if there is any opposing wind jutsu coming towards the user or in the area the wind ball will absorb it into it giving it more power, after a while a large amount of wind will be sucked into the wind ball, and compressed into a tiny baseball sized orb, that can be fired towards the target with great speed and can explode with a 5 meter radius if the user wishes.
~Can only be used 2 times per battle.
The bolded jutsu is a copy of my Wind Release: Last Breath.
Please remove it.

(Sorry for posting here, but I want to make sure the mods don't approve this, since it is basically mine.)
 

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(Doujutsu:Takusenme )Eye Technique-Oracle's Eye
Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbbiden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:100
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user's eye transforms into an eye with a black pupil and yellow surrounding it.This Eye technique can see or predict the future to give the user an advantage.This Eye Also has a series of high level genjutsu that can immobilize the opponent, put them to sleep,Etc.This Jutsu puts a strain on the users sight meaning they will not be able to see properly for the Next 2 turns after its activation.Iff the user makes a clone while this jutsu is activated, the clones won't have it only the real can have it.This Jutsu can Also can sense if the opponent is using chakra around them but cannot pinpoint their location.While this jutsu is activated the user cannot you any genjutsu except for genjutsu that is related to this eye technique.
-This Jutsu May only be used 2 Times per battle
-This Eye Technique lasts for two turns.
-This can only be used by ~Minato~.
-No Hand signs needed to do this jutsu
Oracles eye:
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-Declined- No Custom Kekei Genkais

(Raiton:Ion Ryuushi Ruika Yoroi)-Lightning Release- Ion Particle Acceleration Armor
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short
Chakra cost:50
Damage Points:N/A(+90 if the user reaches their limit)
Description: The user takes in a enormous amount of Ions through their skin and their Body Converts it into chakra. This Process give the user a major chakra boost the amount can me so much that the chakra aura around the user can be visible to the naked eye. This Jutsu increases the users speed to the extent that it is to believed to be as fast the Flying Thunder God Technique. This jutsu is also able to increase the strength of the user immensely that one punch to a cliff would leave a huge crater in it(10-20 meters).This Jutsu Puts stress on the user because of the pressure of the Chakra. After this jutsu is deactivated the users chakra points are "busted" or "clogged" leaving the user very weak and sore(only if the user reaches their limit)
Restrictions:
-May be used only Once per battle
-The Armor Lasts for 3 Turns
-The user can deactivate the Armor at anytime
-No Handsigns needed to do this jutsu-
1. It's a ripp off of my Ion Particle Armor.
2. No one can reach the speed of Hirashin.
 

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Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user grabs his dual swords and places them in an X-shape with the points of the swords aimed at the opponent. The purpose is to aim at the throat of the opponent and cut it open with a scisor-like movement. However it can also be used as a counter by blocking the opponents sword in the X-shape and to divert it, so that he can be attacked with a kick or one of the two swords. It can also be used to defend the users flanks while preforming this technique. By twisting the wrist inwards, the blade can protect the side of the user (by twisting the right wrist, the left side will be defended).



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*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used by swords made by Caliburn and Yubashiri*


~Approved~
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short-Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses suiton-based chakra into his sword, as a result water flows out of the blade and forms a long, extremely thin sword made out of quick spinning water. As a result of being so thing it's more like a flat whip and it can bend easily into all directions. The user can accurately control this sword. The purpose of this sword is that it can be used in swordfights while being out of the opponents reach, in this form it can be used for short/medium-range fighting. Though it's made from water, it has the same properties of a normal metal blade.
As the sword is made out of water, it becomes completely invisible in water. Also when it is in water, the sword can grow longer by using the water around it and as a result it can also attack from long-range.
It can also be used as a defence by quickly rotating around his own axis thus making the sword spinning around the user too and making some kind of wall made out of rotating water that can block incoming attacks.
Due to it being a sword, it can't destroy large-scale jutsus, instead it pierces through it, making a hole in just big enough to pass the user through it and/or making the blade go right to the opponent.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can be used with Raikou Hirameki to form a combo*
*Can only be used with swords made by Caliburn and Yubashiri*
*No water sourse is required for this jutsu*
*This is a permanent jutsu and will not hinder the user from preforming other jutsu's, but the user can make the sword go away in an instant*

The principle behing this attack is the same is in this AMV, only here it is made out of water and not metal.




~Declined: wrong rank and chakra cost~


Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user focuses raiton-based chakra into Yubashiri and releases it all in an instant. This results into a web of lightning that strikes into all possible directions away from the user in a short-range distance, making even chuncks of the earth rip apart. It can be used as a defence against incoming attacks, but when the opponent is in short range, he gets the full force of the attack and is blown away from the user with heavy damage.
The user doesn't need to hold Yubashiri in his hand, it just have to have some connection with the users body and the attack can go through the scabbard.

*Can only be used twice per battle*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with Yubashiri*
*Can be used with Mizu Ryu Kantsuu to form a combo*



~Approved~

Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage: 90
Description: One of the strongest, deadliest and fastest sword-techniques there exists. This technique can only be preformed when the user has released his Ken Ki, because only then he has enough speed and strenght to do it. The user holds his sword with both hands in front of him and strikes nine different spots of the opponents body (head, shoulders, wrists, both sides of the waist, between the legs, and the chest). But these strikes are so fast, due to the Ken Ki, that they almost simultaneously hit the opponent and making it impossible for the opponent to dodge or block it. If there's a distance between the user and opponent, the user goes straight to him, but this makes it still impossible to dodge as Ken Ki gives speed comparable to the fourth IG. Only people with Sharingan can actually see the subtle difference in the speed of the strikes, still their bodies can't react fast enough to stop all nine attacks. Even someone with Ken Ki will have to use a very strong technique to stop it.

*Can only be taught by Caliburn*
*Can only be used with swords made by Caliburn and Yubashiri*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*Can only be used when the user released his Ken Ki*

The attack:
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(Chaotic Dansu - Greek Kunou) Chaotic Dance - Greek Suffering
Type: Supplementery
Rank: Forbidden
Type:Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 60
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will take out a sword that would be from gods, lords or the underworld. The user will do a greek dance and gather chakra from all gods of mount olympus and gods of the underworld and lords, the user will then be able to do 1 of the attacks of the gods, and be able to increase their speed and seeing abilities and also sensing abilities. The user when wanting to do one of the attacks will be able to after the greek dance, and do it just with this move.

Dances are:
The Cross Of Zeus: The user will gather lightning chakra and send lightning clones at the target, then by running at great speed will attack the target from behind with their sword, only the sharingan at 3 tomoes or a master at byakugan can counter this or unless they have been given intense speed training. This attack deals 50 damage

Apollo's Sacred Sun Stun: The user will focus on the sun's light making it very bright to the target the user will then take their sword and reflect the light of the sun at the target blidning and binding the target. The user then makes the light devour the opponent causing a kind of genjutsu that deals 60 damage.

Poseidon's Wrath Of The Sea: The user will stab their sword into the ground and releasing a ton of water chakra making water break through into a huge sea monster that will crash onto the target and the user will then make a whirlpool that the target thinks is making them sink into the water. This deals 70 damage.

Hades Underworld Hell: The user will stab their sword into the ground and make a fire around the sword where its stabbed, the user then forms the dog seal 3 times and releasing dark energy and fire chakra making a cerberus and hades rise and release darkness upon the target making them unable to look or hear because of the darkness. This deals 80 damage.

-Restrictions-

Note: The user must be taught by -+Izure+- or Hells
Note: The user can only use each attack once
Note: Each attack the user uses in one battle, the user takes 10 damage
Note: One Attack each turn, this is the only attack they can use if they use it

-Hells also helped me with this jutsu.-​



~Declined: OP~
 
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(Fuuton:Kaze taihou no Jutsu)-Wind Style:Wind Cannon Jutsu
Rank:A
Type:Attack
Range:Short-Long
Chakara Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: Wind Cannon Jutsu is a very precise and hard to control. The User Summons a Large Bell that is about 3 feet high and a diameter of 2 feet.The User will then Cut Off The Top Of The Bell to Make It look like a Cannon. The User Will Then Pick Up The Bell And Focus Chakara All Around The Body. The User Will Then Exhale All Of The Chakara Out Making A huge wind Blast Come Out Of The Bell that travels about 30MPH and is Not Easy To Block.

*Only Can Be Used Two Times In Battle*
* Damage Depends On How Much Chakara You Put In*
*The More Chakara The More Damage*
*Takes 2 Turns To Do Again*
*User Cannot Use Wind Style Jutsus After The Last Blast*


~Declined: Unrealistic and hm... a bell?~
 
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