[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

[Lord of Kaos.]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Elemental Shuriken(soshi shuriken)
Rank:S
Type:attack
Range:short-long
Chakra Cost:40(-7 per switch)
Damage:80
Description: the user creates 7 shuriken out of chakra and depending on the element of the chakra the shuriken gain differant abilitys:
Fire: explodes upon impact(like paper bombs)
Water:can increase/decrease its size or change shape
Earth: is super hard and heavy
Wind:are piercing(ilke chakra blades) and fast
Lightning: shocks upon impact and numbs the part of body it hits
also the shurikens element of chakra can be change 1 times per turn.
*the shuriken lasts 4 turns
*2 times per battle

DeclinedRemove the highlighted.

Water Extra Hands(Suiton:extra hakku)
Rank:S
Range:short
Type:supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-5 per hand per turn Ex:3hands 3x5= -15 chakra per turn)
Damage:0
Description: The user creates 1 to 4 hands out of water that attach to the users body. The water hand(s) can move as the user wants.The hands can be used to attack for Taijutsu or to make handsigness.
*can last a max of 7 turns
*cant use any water jutsu the next 2 turns
*2 times per battle
DeclinedOped

also hells can u look at this

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12 Dances: Ox (12 dansuushi)
Type:attack
Range:short
Rank:S
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:80
Description:The user focuses his chakra in both of his hands then the user punches the opponant 3 times.The bone this attack hits will almost certanly be broken.
*Can only be used 1 times per battle
*If the user hits the same place 2 times the bone there will be shattered
*The user has to state where he hits with each punch(ex:1st at the center of the stomach 2nd at the left wrist and 3rd at the right shoulder)
~poor description~

12 Dances: Ox (12 dansuushi)
Type:attack
Range:short
Rank:S
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:80
Description:The user focuses his chakra in both of his hands then the user punches the opponant 3 times and releses great amounts of chakra each time the attack dealts so piercing damage but it has very high destruction power.This attack is so strong that the bone this attack hits will be shattered.
*Can only be used 1 times per battle
*The user cant use any taijutsu the next turn.

Elemental Shuriken(soshi shuriken)
Rank:S
Type:attack
Range:short-long
Chakra Cost:40(-7 per switch)
Damage:80
Description: the user creates 7 shuriken out of chakra and depending on the element of the chakra the shuriken gain differant abilitys:
Fire: explodes upon impact(like paper bombs)
Water:can increase/decrease its size or change shape
Earth: is super hard and heavy
Wind:are piercing(ilke chakra blades) and fast
Lightning: shocks upon impact and numbs the part of body it hits
*2 times per battle

Water Extra Hands(Suiton:extra hakku)
Rank:S
Range:short
Type:supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-5 per hand per turn Ex:2 hands 3x5= -10 chakra per turn)
Damage:0
Description: The user creates 1 to 2 hands out of water that attach to the users body. The water hand(s) can move as the user wants.The hands can be used to attack for Taijutsu or to make handsigness.
*can last a max of 5 turns
*cant use any water jutsu the next 3 turns
*1 times per battle

~All declined: poor descriptions, unrealistic, wrong chakra info~

 

[anbu kakashi]

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Raiton: Meimei Raikou Oonami (Lightning Release: Divine Lightning Surge

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Close-Short
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user would gather lightning particles into the air creating a lightning storm. The lightning particles which was being gather making the storm contains both positive and negative charges. As more particles are being charged, the negative and positive charge separate themselves within the storm. The positive charge gets light and rise to the top while the negative charge gets heavy and gathers at the bottom of the cloud. Seeking out more positive charges, the negative charges begin to seek out more positive charge (which in this case is any Lightning) from below. When the negative charge seeks out a positive charge it immediately discharges and in a blink of an eye lets out a tremendous amount of bright lightning that strikes where the positive charge was located. The force of the bright lightning will tend to temporarily blind the user and opponent for a while and will be strong enough to create a crater on the earth. The effect of this jutsu will also be apply to the user meaning if the user or the opponent is caught gathering or using lightning, he/she will be struck instantly with the bright lightning.
Note: Can only be used once
Note: Last three turns
Note: Will only strike if any form of lightning is located and can strike multiple times if seek out multiple times
Note: Can only be used by anbu kakashi

~Declined: scientifically it doesn't make sense, the opposite happens~

 

[Smoker]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

katon:Kasai tamo (Fire style:Fire bullet)

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range: short-mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40 (half if dodge)
Description: he/she shoots a big bullet of fire from mouth its very hard to dodge because its so big after it hits it can burn enemy if it hits good.
Note:Burn hits a 1 per turn and lasts 3 turns
Note:Suffering pain is only person to teach this jutsu.
Note:Can be used 2 times.

katon: Kasai kangoku (Fire style: fire prison)

Rank: B
Type:Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description:When this technigue is used it traps enemy to square of fire that collapses after turn after doing it.
Note: only suffering pain is avaible to teach this jutsu.
Note:usable 1 time on battle.

Genjutsu: hyoumenka hada (Genjutsu: Breaking body)

Rank: B
Type:Supplementary
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: When this genjutsu is used the enemy hears breaking voices and if he looks any part of hes/her body it looks like the body parts move and she/he feels the breaking of the bones.
Note:Can be used 2 times per battle
Note:Can only be teached/learned by suffering pain.

katon:Nenshou harou (Fire Style:Burning waves )

Rank: B
Type:Attack
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 20
Description: Shoots a wave of hot flame to enemy that can make skin and other burnings from the body of enemy causes burning if used 3 times at rapid.
Note:Can only be used by Suffering Pain.
Note: burn lasts 2 turns and hits 3 per turn.

Doton:Tsuchi Tate (Earth Style:earth shield )

Rank: B
Type: Defence.
Range: short
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: after doing this jutsu high walls of earth rise around me and block some attacks of the enemy.
Note:Can only be teached my Suffering Pain.
Note: Shield blocks 50 damage.

|| Declined ||

 

[Shig]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Genjutsu: hyoumenka hada (Genjutsu: Breaking body)

Rank: B
Type:Supplementary
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 20 (if it wont miss)
Description: When this genjutsu is used the enemy hears breaking voices and if he looks any part of hes/her body it looks like the body parts move and she/he feels the breaking of the bones.
Note:Can be used 2 times per battle
Note:Can only be teached/learned by suffering pain.

Just as a question, how is this jutsu causing any damage?
Nothing happens to the opponent, he simply feels his bones breaking, but after the jutsu wears off, nothing happens to the opponent.

 

[Smoker]

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ill edit that

 

[Lord of Kaos]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Doton: Ro-ma Koroshiamu (Earth Style: Rome’s Coliseum)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes a large dome surrounding him and the opponent, creating a coliseum of sorts. The only way out of the dome is to use certain S-rank and above water jutsu (one’s that can pierce). The dome cancels out all light, leaving it completely dark inside it.
*the dome last for the whole battle until destroyed with S-rank water and higher*
*can only be used once*
-Declined-
Make it S-rank (wrong rank)...and not sure about the only weak to water thing. Shouldn't it be weak to lightning then?

Doton: Furo-tingu Kougen (Earth Style: Levitating Plateau)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user creates a large chunk of the earth beneath him to rise into the air quickly, letting him manipulate the control of the piece of earth, causing it to be able to avoid and dodge B-rank and below jutsu. The user applies chakra to his feet to stay on the earth upside-down and, if he chooses to do so, can jump off and cause the earth to float towards what he wants it too.
*only stays in effect for four turns at the most*
*usable only three times a battle*
-Declined- Limit it to once per battle

(Fuuton: Ouranos’s Kuracchi) Wind Style: Ouranos’s Clutch
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Close - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user channels the air found around the enemy’s neck and forces it inward by closing his fist, crushing the enemy’s neck.
-Declined- a bit OP for that rank O_O Work on the description more and add restrictions.

Doton: Korandamu Panteon no Kamigami (Earth Style: Corundum Pantheon of the Gods)
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user uses his Earth Chakra to extract Aluminum and create a dome around me as one of his clones uses his wind as the shield is forming to make Aluminum Oxide in a solid state known as Corundum. It is impenetrable except for A-Forbidden rank Lightning Jutsu's because of elemental combination.
Note: Can only be used 2 times in a battle
-Goro or Grimm please check this one

(Suiton: atomikku shin'en) Water Style: Atomic Abyss
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Close –Mid (most effective up close)
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user creates 5 quickly condensed orbs of water from a nearby source of water. The orbs then begin to quickly orbit the user like an atomic nucleus, carving the earth as it touches the ground. The water orbs are then shot at the enemy in rapid succession with speeds like bullets.
*entitled to any elemental variations of this jutsu*
-Approved- I guess...

Doton: Ro-ma Koroshiamu (Earth Style: Rome’s Coliseum)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short/Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user makes a large dome surrounding him and the opponent, creating a coliseum of sorts. The only way out of the dome is to use certain S-rank and above water or lightning jutsu (one’s that can pierce). The dome cancels out all light, leaving it completely dark inside it.
*the dome last for the whole battle until destroyed with S-rank water or lightning*
*can only be used once*

~Declined: water piercing Earth? ~

Doton: Furo-tingu Kougen (Earth Style: Levitating Plateau)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user creates a large chunk of the earth beneath him to rise into the air quickly, letting him manipulate the control of the piece of earth, causing it to be able to avoid and dodge B-rank and below jutsu. The user applies chakra to his feet to stay on the earth upside-down and, if he chooses to do so, can jump off and cause the earth to float towards what he wants it too.
*only stays in effect for four turns at the most*
*usable only one time a battle*

~Approved~

Sakasa Ro-Tasu (Inverted Lotus)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Close
Chakra Cost:
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user opens the fourth gate and uppercuts the enemy in the chin, rising the a few ft from the ground. He then uppercuts the enemy with a few more powerful blows, raising him several feet into the air. The user then flips back onto his hands and jumps into the air upside down. He appears behind the enemy and wraps his legs around the enemy’s neck and smashes his head into the ground head-first in a spiraling smash.
Requirements: 4 gate open

~Approved~
Dainou Shinkyuu (Brain Buster)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 60
Description: After using Leaf Dancing Shadow, the user grabs the enemy’s arms and flips over, smashing the enemy’s head into the ground with his feet.

~Approved~
Impaling Roze no Mai (Dance of the Impaling Rose)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After using Leaf Dancing Shadow, the user forces his ribcage bones outwards and wraps around the enemy, trapping him close to the user. The user then puts his hands on both sides of the enemy’s head and shoots 1 large spikes from both of his hands into the enemy’s head.
*useable only twice*

||Declined||

Aibori-Arashi (Dance of the Ivory Tempest)
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a long but diseased brittle bone-sword from his forearm and rushes the opponent with it. As he gets close to the enemy, he crushes the bone releasing a dense cloud of dust. When the opponent breathes in the air, he contracts osteoporosis, causing his bones to become weak and very fragile. It only last 4 turns or 2 turns if the enemy has a healing ability. If the enemy tries to move quickly or makes sudden movement, he is at risk of breaking their bones.
*can only be used twice a battle*
*doesn’t affect Kaguya members*
*after using, the user can’t use any Kaguya jutsu for two turns*

||Declined||

 

[-Nero-]

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(Herushikon)- Hell fang

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Type:Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank:S
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost:40 (-10 for each turn vibrating, 30 for the sheild and waves)
Damage Points:-10 to the user each turn it is on his arm and extra 5 for a elemental wave.
Description:A longblade attached to a miniature forearm shield,The sword can be vertically folded along the forearm.Then flips out extending from to form a long, wide indestructible blade, the blade has a long, thin hollow straw inits centre. The blade Vibrates extremely fast from the users chakra which produces extreme heat burning the users arm it is attached to and allowing to cut through almost everything including kaguya bones, even if the blade misses the vibrating and heated air still burns the oppenet if there still a foot in range.
By focusing chakra into the sheild it forms a shield a chakra shild like chiyo arm to protect them from projectiles n B rank jutsu's
By focusing Chakra and elemental into the hollow part of the blade and slashing releasing a wave of the used element in a form of a B ranked cresent shaped wave.
Note:
Whilst the blade is equiped n in use the use cant use ANY genjutsu or summoning jutsu's.
Can only be weilded by Natsu

Looks similar when its folded n the sheild

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~ Declined: OP~


(Resansupea)-Spiral spear

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Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:90 (-10 to the user and another 10 if used with a elemental varitaions)
Description: The user first makes a resangan in there hand then changes it shape into a large spear 6ft long, the spear is made of high condensed chakra. The use then thorws this at the oppenent with great force the spiral rotate it causing it to spin and propel it self through the air. When it strikes it explode causing massive damage to the area, the user hand gains friction burns to the hand which the user gets from the spear spinning in there hand.
Diferent elemental varitions can be made by adding elemental chakra exceot earth.
Water:Explodes causing massive pressure damage to the area and the oppenents body shaatering there bones
Wind: explodes causing slicing damage to the oppenent n area
Fire:Explodes causing a gaint explosion incenrating the oppent and a large area.
Lighting: Explodes shocking the oppenent And electric burns to the oppenents body and destorying the surrounding area and leaving a crater.
Note:
Can only be used 3 time, if used anymore the user cant mold there chakra
As it spins in the users hand whilst molding it burns n damages the user hand, through friction burn.

~Ask Grim pr Roku to also check plz~
~Declined~ A Jutsu just like this already exists.

 

[Yagura]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ikazuchi Uesama Gigei: Raikou Shinzo) - Thunder Emperor Arts: Divine Lightning Spear
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user releases Raiton chakra and slams his palms on the ground and spears of Lightning appear on the ground impaling the opponent. This jutsu can only be used 3 times.

(Ikazuchi Uesama Gigei: Tenrai Toraidento)- Thunder Emperor Arts: Divine Trident
Type:Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage:90
Descripton: After chakra sensing rain is made, the user concentrates Raiton chakra on the rain and makes tridents out of it. Like the frozen rain tridents, the umbrella jutsu cannot counter it but you must go underground to counter it. This can only be used 3 times.

~Declined: unrealistic both, lighting from raindrops?~

 

[Nexus]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Closed untill further notice

 

[Rei]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~Done~

 

[Ben-sama]

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(Katon: sanshouuo rasen) Fire Style: Salamander Spiral
Type:Attack
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:By Focusing Fire Chakra In The User's Gullet The User Spits Out A Powerfull Spiraling Flame With A Salamander's Head On The Front Of It. The Blast Can Thrust The Enemy Back Due To The Power Of It. It Can Also Leave Medium Burns....
Note : Only Benazz Can Teach This Jutsu

-Approved-

(Kenjutsu:keigoku) Sword Art: Punishment
Rank : B
Type : Attack/Defence
Range : Short
Chakra Cost : 25
Damage Points : 40
Description : The User Jumps Into The Air And Spins His Dual Blades While Spinning Himself In The Air, Thus Slashing Everything Around Him In A 1-2 (short) Metre Range.
Note : Only Benazz Can Teach This Jutsu
Note : User Must Have Two Blades To Use This Jutsu

-Wrong info-

(Kuchiyose: Ikazuchi Katana) Summoning Jutsu: Thunder Blade
Rank : B
Type : Supplementary
Chakra Cost : 25
Damage Points : 40
Description : A Katana Made Of Steel With A Black Handle, This Katana's Origins Are The Village Hidden In The Clouds, This Katana Can Be Used With Lightning Jutsu And Is Of Unique Steel Itself.It Is Almost Unbreakable.
Effects : +10 Damage When Using A Raiton Jutsu
Effects : Can Absorb Any C rank Or Lower Lightning Attack
Note : Only Benazz Has This Blade

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-Declined: similar jutsu already exists-

(Kuchyose: Mizu Katana) Summoning Jutsu : Water Blade
Rank : C
Type : Supplementary
Chakra Cost : 20
Damage Points : 30
Description : A Katana Made Of Steel With A Blue Handle, The Katana's Origins Are The Hidden Mist Village.This Katana Has The Attribute Of Water Within It.
Effects : +5 To Water Jutsu
Note : Only Benazz Has This

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-Declined: similar jutsu already exists-


Summoning Animal:Ravens
Contract (Scroll Owner):Benazz
Users who have signed contract:None
Summoning Boss:

(Kuchyose:Karasu:shunshuu) Summoning Jutsu : Raven : Prodigy

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Type:Supplementary
Rank:A
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:30 (+5 Each Turn Summoned) (+10 Each Turn If The User Is In Direct Contact With Prodigy)
Damage Points:N/A (unless uses jutsu)
Description:By Putting On Some Of The Users Blood On His Tattoo Or Scroll The User Summons A Giant Raven Named Prodigy.Prodigy Can Talk And Can Use Jutsu Up To B Rank, He Can Only Use The Jutsu That The User Has Learned. Prodigy's Personality Is Calm, Intelligent, Fast Thinking. The Longer Prodigy Remains Summoned The More Chakra He Absorbs Due To His Own Chakra Abilities, If Raven Has Contact With Anything That Has Chakra, He Starts Absorbing That Chakra.

Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

(Kuchyose : Karasu : Chi Karasus) Summoning Jutsu : Raven : One Thousand Ravens

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Type : Supplementary
Rank : B
Chakra Cost : 25
Damage Points : N/A (If attacks +20)
Description : By Using His Blood On A Scroll Or His Summoning Tatoo, The User Can Summon One Thousand Ravens That Can Attack, Surround Or Block Opponents Attacks (ravens can block D Rank Element Jutsus, Block D Rank Tai Jutsus

(Kuchyose : Karasu : Kuroi Manako) Summoning Jutsu : Raven : Black Eye

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Type : Supplementary
Rank : A
Chakra Cost : 30
Damage Points : N/A
Description : By Using The User's Blood The User Can Summon A Regular Adult Crow - Black Eye, Who Can Notice Any Genjutsu And Release It With It's Scream, The Scream Can Release Any Level Genjutsu Except For Doujutsu Techniques. The Raven Cannot Be Affected By Genjutsu And Can Use Any A Level Genjutsu

-Declined: From what we have seen in the manga Ravens/Crows are Itachi's summons-

 

[Passion]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Te-no Hira no go jitsuryokus ) Palms of Five forces
Type: Attack / Supplementary
Rank: B/A/S
Range: Short - Long ( Depends on rank that's used )
Chakra Cost: 25/30/40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User focuses one of five basic element chakras on their hands. After it he claps his hands together creating sound wave that's going in every direction and is infused with elemental chakra. The wave that's launched can trigger various effects that are:
- Water causes small amount of water appear with wave
- Fire causes aura of warmth appear ( Melting ice attacks )
- Lightning causes paralyzing and Numbing appear to opponents body
- Wind causes Lightning attacks and tools repel
- Earth causes Avalanche ( Size depends on rank of the move )

-Declined: there is already a CE submitted for this ability-

( Suiton: Kugi No Ekitai ) Water release: Nails of Liquid
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User infuses Chakra on battle field and manipulates the water sources turning surface of them into needles that are able of piercing Hard objects. The size of Nail is up to user. Requires only water source no handseals.

-Declined: water piercing hard objects?-

( Genjutsu: Shitsunen no aoi Hinote ) Illusion technique: Blue flames of Oblivion
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: User can trigger this genjutsu from every part in his body. As the genjutsu is cast on opponent the world will start to slow down and Opponent will be set a blaze with Blue flames of Oblivion.

-Declined: poor description and needs great genjutsu abilities to perform this one-

( Katon: Mokushi ) Fire release: Apocalypse
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90
Description: User releases Huge amount of chakra on skies and makes series of handseals. After it The sky turns into Red and it starts to Rain massive fireballs and Ash around the Battlefield. Can be used once in battle.

-Declined: similar jutsu already exists; mine O_O-

( Raiton: Kobushi no Zetsumetsu ) Lightning release: Fist of Extinction
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80 ( + 10 to user )
Description: User focuses huge amount of lightning chakra on his fist making it Glow. After it user can hit it to earth or opponent that's nearby. If the opponent takes direct hit of this move the match will be over. If user misses opponent and the fist will hit something else it will release aura of lightning chakra that paralyzes anything it hits for one turn. Can be used once in battle.

-Declined: OP and doesn't make sense, paralyzing aura?-

 

[Nadare]

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(Suiton: Dan'atsu Geyser) - Water Style: Pressure Geyser

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Type:Attack
Rank:S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage:80
Description: This jutsu requires a sword, and great water and chakra control. The user must stab the sword in to the ground (it can be any material). Then he flows his water chakra through it, into the ground. He causes a great volumn of hot water under pressure errupt from below the enemy. The enemy is blown in the air, he gets burned severely cuz the water is hot, and he is then left in a cloud of steam the geyser left there after it errupted.
The user can be just leaning on the sword while he is channelling chakra into it, and it needs no seals.
This is based on real facts:

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*Note:Can only be used by Nadare.*
*Note: can only be used twice per battle.*
*Note:Based on real facts.*

-Declined:you need sth to heat the water first, must be a 2 attacks combo-

(Suiton:Mizu Dangan) - Water Style: Water Bullet

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Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The user shoots a water bullet from his mouth. It is a so called "fast" jutsu - the user needs no hanseals, he just focuses his water chakra in his gullet, and then shoots it out from his mouth with high pressure and speed. The bullet is a small projectile but with cannon like power. The jutsu is done quicker than a trigger is pressed.
*Note: Can only be used by Nadare.*
*Note: Doesn't need a water source.*

-Declined: it takes time to actually focus all water chakra in the gullet and then shoot it out. If you edit the pink part, the jutsu is okay-


(Fuuton:Kuuki Kouka) - Wind Style: Atmosphere Hardening

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Type:Supplementary
Rank:Forbbidden
Range:Long
Chakra Cost:50
Description:The user concentrates, and focuses his chakra in the atmosphere around him. The user uses air participles, to gather. The air becomes harder to breath, and gains on weight, and looses on volum. This means, that more air is gathered on a smaller place. The participles are so much focused on one area, that it's impossible for anybody in the area, to use any wind, storm or lightning attacks.
*Note: Can only be teached/used by Nadare.*
*Note: Leaves the user almost completely drained of chakra.*
*Note: Can only be used once.*
*Note: Lasts 4 turns.*

-Declined: similar jutsu already exists-

 

[-Naruto Uzumaki-]

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I am updating the following custom:

Mud Release: Mud Hardening
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: All
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will form a single hand sign and any mud jutsu or source will immediately harden. If the opponent has mud on them, it will harden as well. The opponent won't be able to move the part of their body that is covered in the hardened mud.
Note: The user does not need to have physical contact with the mud he/she wishes to harden.

Into this:

Earth Release: Mud Hardening (Doton: Doro Katame)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user hardens any existing mud into dense earth. This jutsu can be used on jutsus that involve mud, such as Earth Release: Great Mud River. It can also be used on mud that is on the opponent.
Note: Contact with the mud is not necessary to use this jutsu.
Note: Can only be used three times per battle.


-Update approved-

 

[Anbu578]

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Katon:kujo nami(Fire style:destuction wave)

Type: Attack
Rank:A
Range: Mid-Long-range
Chakra:30
Damage points: 55
Description: The user must concertrate thieir chakra through two parts of the body(both hands and mouth)then the is to spit out a blob of stange lava-like substance.Now the user must wait for a few minutes for the substance to start seeping in the ground then the user will let out a outburst of chakra at the substance threrfore giving it more strenght.Then finally the user takes out a double-weielded blade and slashes it into the ground threrfore shooting the incereased strenght substance at the advesary.The opponent will be severly burned by the substance
Requirements*A double-weielded blade
Note*Anbu578 can only train this jutsu


|| Declined: you don't have lava||

 

[Smoker]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Genjutsu:Ken no Makai ) - Illusion Technigue:Blade of hell

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Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short - Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60 (None if triggered by Sharingan)
Description:When the Genjutsu is casted user looks to enemys eyes and enemy is surrounded by place that looks like fightning arena after enemy looks to the user.Users hand makes a white glow and the blade appears to users hand.Then user runs to the opponent.First cutting opponents other hand off then user sweeps the opponent.when opponent is slipping user makes strong kick to head.
*NOTE:Can Be triggered by Sharingan And kai*
*NOTE:Usable 2 times per battle*
*NOTE:Only Suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach This jutsu*

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-Approved-

( Raiton: Denkou Kumo ) - Lightning Style: Lightning clouds

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Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short - Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description:After making the handseals user raises his/her palms and makes lightning bolt to sky.Bolt activates 2 clouds that touches each other and make then to one big.After that they make the big one to much small ones that shoot lightning bolts to the opponent and shock him/her.
*NOTE:Usable For 2 Times Per Battle*
*NOTE:Suffering pain is able to use/Teach this jutsu*

-Declined: similar jutsu already exists both in manga and as a custom-

( Fuuton: Nobiru no katana ) - Wind release: Extending katana

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Chakra cost: 25
Range: Short
Damage points: N/A
Description: User focuses wind chakra on sword to extend the length of blade and make it sharper.
* Only suffering pain is able is able to use/Teach this jutsu *

||Declined: is your chakra base metal? ||

( Doton:Funkakou no yusarus ) - Earth Style:Crater of Rocks

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Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short - Long
Chakra cost:30
Damage points:60
Description:user focuses earth chakra to his/her hands and touches earth with his/her hands and makes crater under the enemy.Crater sucks the enemy into crater and the rocks start to move while opponent is stuck at the sucking point and the rocks crush the opponent under them.
*NOTE:Usable 3 times per battle*
*NOTE:Suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach this jutsu*

-Approved-

( Katon:Kyojin Kaen Butoukai ) - Fire Style: Giant Blaze Ball

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Rank:A
Range:Short - Long
Chakra cost:30
Damage points:35 - 25 for explode
Description:User Concetrates Fire Chakra in Their Stomach And When they are Ready user puts their hands together and Spitting out large Blaze ball that Can burn forest and cause burn wounds to enemy to enemy who gets hit of the large fireball.When the fireball hits something it explodes causing big Explode sound to air.
*NOTE:Only Suffering Pain is able to Use/Teach this jutsu*
*NOTE:This can be used 3 Times Per Battle*

-Declined: similar jutsu already exists-

 

[Zenryoku]

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(Amatsuyakunan) - Heaven's Calamity

Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A powerful broadsword that carries the name Calamity. It's an overwelming sword that strikes fear in the hearts of men just be looking at it, however the aura it releases is nothing compared to what it really can do...they say it drives man mad by making their worst nightmares come true.
Gives +10 damage for every taijutsu technique (due to its size)
E-D rank genjutsu doesn't work on the user
The users genjutsu becomes a lot stronger. As a result the rank of the jutsu he casts raises one rank (can only be used twice per battle)
The user can cast a genjutsu on itself by looking to his blade when he casts it, as a result it is reflected on him. This way the user can get himself out of a genjutsu, depending on the rank of the genjutsu he casted and in wich he is in (example to free yourself from an A-rank he needs to cast an A-rank on the sword). If the user isn't under a genjutsu and he casts it, he is immune for genjutsu for one turn, depending on the rank of jutsu he casted on himself (can only be used once per battle)

*The sword is indestructible (this doesn't mean it can destroy everything)*
*The effects don't have effect on Tsukuyomi*
*Can only be wielded by Kaito-sama*

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~Declined: doesn't make sense, genjutsu over genjutsu~

(Shiro Kiba Kaimoui) White Fang Slash Fury

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After Activating the Sixth sense to increase the users focus and reflexes the user will concentrate their chakra into their sword and then the user will release a burst of chakra out their feet to send them at a fast speed towards the enemy target and the sword will reflect natural light from the chakra concentration in the sword and then strike the enemy 15 times in all directions leaving a trail of white light from the speed of the attacks. The reflected light makes it hard for the enemy to accurately defend against these strikes.

Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Must Know Sixth Sense
Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama

~Pending: define the speed plz~

(Quezacotl Takaoushou Za Kihou Sora) - Quezacotl Hawk King of the high skies

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Quezacotl is the King of The Hawks and Ancient ruler of old times. He has the power to bend lightning element to his will making him able to use lightning element up to the users rank. He flies around with swift speeds and at high altitudes making him a hard target and as he flies around he leaves behind a trail of golden light made from the release of natural lightning energy built up in his body which then causes a thunderstorm to decend onto the battlefield.

Note: Can only be summoned 2 times and lasts 4 turns
Note: Must sign the Giant Hawk contract from Kaito-sama.

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~Pending: More details are needed~

(Amatsuyakunan) - Heaven's Calamity

Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A powerful broadsword that carries the name Heavens Calamity. It's an overwelming sword that strikes fear in the hearts of men just be looking at it, however the aura it releases is nothing compared to what it really can do...they say it drives man mad by making their worst nightmares come true.
Gives +10 damage for every taijutsu technique (due to its size)
E-D rank genjutsu doesn't work on the user
The users genjutsu becomes a lot stronger. As a result the rank of the jutsu he casts raises one rank (can only be used twice per battle)
The user can make his sword absorb the chakra of the enemy that has been implanted into the users body from a genjutsu cast upon them.The same cost applies for the level of genjutsu cast upon him for exmple an A rank genjutsu would cost 30 chakra points to escape the genjutsu(can only be used once per battle)

*The sword is indestructible (this doesn't mean it can destroy everything)*
*The effects don't have effect on Tsukuyomi*
*Can only be wielded by Kaito-sama*

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-Declined: OP-

(Quezacotl Takaoushou Za Kihou Sora) - Quezacotl Hawk King of the high skies

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: Quezacotl is the King of The Hawks and Ancient ruler of old times. He has the power to bend lightning element to his will making him able to use lightning element up to the users rank. He flies around with swift speeds and at high altitudes making him a hard target and as he flies around he leaves behind a trail of golden light made from the release of natural lightning energy built up in his body. He is capable of using his talons and wings as weapons making him a deadly force.

Note: Can only be summoned 2 times and lasts 4 turns
Note: Must sign the Giant Hawk contract from Kaito-sama.

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(removed the thunderstorm ability)

-Approved-

(Raiton: Raikou Kahen Arashi) – Lightning Style: Lightning Petal Storm

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-30 damage to user)
Description: The user after making a few hand seals will create a storm of petals made of lightning chakra which razor sharp edges decend down around the enemy target covering them in all direction and then the user makes them spin around them in a cutting storm and then compress the storm of lightning petals before scattering them to the winds.

Note: Can only be used once
Note: Does –30 damage to user from chakra strain
Note: Cannot use lightning style techniques the following turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Kaito-sama and Anbu Kakashi

-Approved-

(Dōjutsu: Adachigahara Nikuyakon) – Eye Technique: Demoness the butcher of souls

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
Description: The user traps the enemy in a illusion where they then find themselves inside a temple of the underworld and standing in front of them is Adachigahara the Demoness wielding a sword of black flames that is then swung down in a stabbing motion through the enemies stomach and causes the enemy target to bleed from their nose and ears from the severe torture of their mind.
(The user receives –30 damage from the stress from chakra control)

Note: Can only be used once.
Note: Can only be used with Mangekyo Sharingan and Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan.

-Approved-

(Dōjutsu: Fudo Nenshou Gekido) – Eye Technique: Fire Gods burning Rage

Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offence
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 90 (-30 to user)
Description: The user will cast an illusion over the enemy trapping them in a realm where they see a torrent of red-hot flames burn and surround them and covering them in fire. The fire then feels like the victims souls is being punished by the fire god himself thus causing severe mental scaring and leaving the victims in a wrecked state with their body engulfed in sweat from the intensity of the illusion.
(The user receives –30 damage to themselves from the strain of using the technique and causes their eyes to bleed)

Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Can only be used with Mangekyo Sharingan or Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan


-Declined: OP and the whole soul thing better be removed completely-

 

[Kawagiri]

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ice release: floating island (Hyouton: fuwatto Shima)

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ice release: floating island (Hyouton: fuwatto Shima)
Rank:A
Type: Supplementary/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage: N/A
Description: The User creates an icy platform in the air which floats, this can be stood on and is about 10 metres in diameter.

*resists physical eart attacks from below up to A rank and any ground based jutsus as i am floating*
*can be melted with S rank fire*
*can be used and taught by Kawagiri and any Hyouton user he or they teach it to*

-Approved-

ice release: Hall of The Ice King (Hyouton: Ho-ru no koori kokushu)

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ice release: Hall of The Ice King (Hyouton: Ho-ru no koori kokushu)
Rank:Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:50
Damage: N/A (40 to user)
Description: A huge throne room is formed around everyone with thick walls ceiling and floor all made of ice. The ice king sits at one side of the room on his throne to watch the fight. the throne room is an indestructable jutsu which vanishes after there is only one left alive inside. The ice king is also indestructable.

*the User must win the fight within 4 of his turns after using or the ice king takes his life force (kills him)*
*stops jutsus which use the earth or other non ice-based ground attacks (e.g. wood shooting from the ground) or rain as you are shielded from the outside (jutsus that require ice bases and normal jutus can be used as normal)*
*can be taught by kawagiri only to Hyouton users, they may not teach or swap to anyone else.*

-Approved-

Ice Release: Tendril bind (Hyouton: makihige shibaru)

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Ice Release: Tendril bind (Hyouton: makihige shibaru)
Rank:A
Type: Supplementary
Range: short-long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage: N/A
Description: Tendrils shoot out from an existing frozen object or mass of ice to bind the opponents whole body (including hands seperate from one another so they can't use handseals).

*binds until after my attacks hit or are defended against*
*if done from a frozen floor the opponent is standing on they can't react quick enough to stop it (anywhere else they can defend from it)*
*if successfully bound the opponent may perform jutsus as soon as my attack has finished hitting them (so they dont miss a turn because of it binding)*
*usable 3 times in battle*
*can only be taught by kawagiri to hyouton users*

-Declined: wrong chakra info, this is a S rank-


Ice Release: Deep Sleep Hibernation (Hyouton: shunmin chippuku)

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Ice Release: Deep Sleep Hibernation (Hyouton: shunmin chippuku)
Rank:S
Type: Defence
Range: short
Chakra Cost:40
Damage: N/A
Description: The ultimate defence for ice users. the user freezes his entire body and isn't affected by any attack. even amaterasu can't stay on the slippery surface and simply slides off.

*the user is frozen and cannot attack this turn*
*no jutsu can harm the user this turn (excl. hall of ice king effect)*
*can be used twice but not 2 turns in a row*
*can only be taught by kawagiri*

|| Declined ||

 

[Nero]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Doton: Metsubou Za Tsuchi Tenshu) – Earth Release: Alters of the Earth Gods

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user creates 6 pillars of earth rise around the opponent and then after making a few hand seals the user makes the earth below the enemy target collapses and sending them into a pit where then the earth will be made to explode and crush the enemy in a exploding fury of bombarding earth.

Note: Can only be used 3 times

-Declined: you need sth to make the earth explode-



(Doton: Shouwakusei Arashi) – Earth Release: Asteroid Storm

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user manipulates their chakra causing rocks and pieces of earth to rise into the air and with manipulation of wind chakra to increase the rocks velocity when they are sent at the enemy in a storm as them bombard the enemy and converging on a large area. (This can be used in collaboration with Nova Flame Bullets)

Note: Can only be used 3 times

-Declined: Manipulating your chakra won't make rocks move-

(Katon: Shinsei Kaen Dangan) – Fire Style: Nova Flame Bullets

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user shoots out large molten nova bullets of fire from their mouth that then are shot at the enemy covering a large area and bombarding them in a fury of fire bullets. (This jutsu can be used in collaboration with Asteroid Storm)

Note: Can only be used 3 times

-Declined: poor description; what is the speed of the nova bullets? how many of them can you shoot out?-

(Dōjutsu: Akuma Kuroi Heika) – Eye Technique: Demon Black Swords

Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will create and manipulate the Black flames into swords of black fire that spiral around the wielder who acts as an axis and then the swords would be controlled by the Mangekyo Sharingan Left eye and shot at the enemy hitting them in several places piercing their legs arms and shoulders and then burns them.

Note: Can only be used 3 times

-Declined: MS and EMS are OP enough, they don't need customs to become even more OP-

 

[Chiryoku]

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Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A broad and strong sword made out entirely of Black Stone and beautifully decorated with gold. Though it's looks like a heavy sword, it's as light as a feather. As a result its speed is immense and can easily counter incoming attacks.
It has a number of effects:

• Gives +20 damage to each wind jutsu of the user
• The opponents wind jutsu's loose -10 damage
• The sword can be infused with wind-chakra. As a result it becomes sharper, but it can also double the length of the sword, making its reach greater.
• By swinging the sword the user can send multiple shuriken at the opponent made out of slicing winds. These shuriken can easily be stopped by jutsu's, however they are a lot stronger than normal shuriken. In contact with normal ones, they just slice them apart without slowing down. Also their speed is a lot faster than that of normal ones.
• The sword can also release wind currents that rapidly circle around the blade. These currents are strong enough to slice swords.These currents increase the damage drastically when the opponent is cut. A small cut in the arm can be enough to actually sever it to the bone.
  
  *Can only be wielded by Ingwer Hatake*
  *The sword is indestructible, though this doesn't mean it can destroy everything*

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-Pending: remove or edit the pink parts and re submit-