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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Permission from Pervy Sage to re-submit Cyanide release

-Pretty much changed everything from when it was first submitted


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Custom element Japanese name:Shian bakemono
Custom element English name:Cyanide Release
The element is based on:Earth + Wind +Advanced Chakra Control
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Cyanide is a naturally occurring chemical, found in many plants, that has been used in conventional warfare and poisoning for 2 millennia. It is highly lethal, whether inhaled as a gas, ingested in solid form, or absorbed through topical exposure.In Naruto,the Earth’s structure is somewhat the same as in Real life.It contains various minerals,and carbon can be found in the earth itself. Steel contains carbon particles,showing that Earth’s crust in Naruto has Carbon in it.The same goes for the air,as the people in Naruto breathe and live,the air composition is the same as in real life,thus Nitrogen can be manipulated from the air as the air contains 79% Nitrogen. Nitrogen is an essential building block of amino and nucleic acids, essential to life on Earth,that’s why it is possible,using chakra to get Nitrogen from the air and manipulate it.Then by manipulating these two,and combining them with great chakra control,one can create a gas based Cyanide.These two naturally occurring elements are combined,and Guren uses a similar method to create Crystal release by simultaneously manipulating earth and air molecules.Cyanide is formed through the combination of Carbon and Nitrogen atoms carbon can be manipulated to get from the Earth while Nitrogen can be manipulated from the air itself,and then using extreme chakra control to create a Cyanide gas. The Cyanide gas will be manipulated using Wind release,and coated in the user's chakra so it does not form in an uncontrolled manner,and harm the user.

How it works:
The user would make a gas based Cyanide.The Cyanide gas gives off an Almond smell.After creating the Cyanide gas using the aforementioned method,it can be manipulated as a gas using Wind release and coating it in chakra.This means it can be created in front of the user,and then manipulated.This allows the Cyanide gas to be manipulated,and used in battle.Not only this,but also allows the user of Cyanide release to not be harmed by it as it will be coated by the users chakra and by manipulating it,then releasing it at will as it reaches the opponent.The Cyanide gas,when inhaled,will cause various effects to the opponent:

• Weakness and confusion
• Headache
• Nausea/feeling "sick to your stomach"
• Gasping for air and difficulty breathing
• Loss of consciousness/"passing out"

The Cyanide gas is soluble in water,though it gives the water a stronger blue colour and makes it toxic when swallowed. Cyanide gas is highly flammable and reacts violently in some situations (e.g., a large amount of cyanide gas mixed with air may suddenly explode). There is an extremely high risk of explosion if cyanides are exposed to heat or flames.This is why the Cyanide is coated in the user’s chakra, to avert any reactions and can be used against the enemy for that very purpose.This makes the Cyanide gas a very explosive gas.

The Cyanide gas would be created from the air,and be manipulated to move towards the opponent.By inhaling the Cyanide gas, Cyanide prevents the cells of the body from using oxygen.This would cause great breathing problems and being exposed to the Cyanide gas for a long while would cause the opponent to suffocate or pass out due to the lack of oxygen to the brain.

Usage Examples:
Shian bakemono -Sōsa|Cyanide Release -Manipulation
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (+5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will from two handseals using the manipulation of wind chakra and earth particles usher earth chakra into the air. The earth particles will rise into the air creating a small dusty haze until it completely reaches at least five meters above the users head. The user will then use chakra manipulation converting it into a dense layer of overhanging cyanide.This Cyanide gas can then be used for various techniques.

Shian bakemono - Orion no kyohi | Cyanide Release - Orion's Rejection
Type: Offensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will slam both hands together creating a gust of cyanide.This gust is aimed to cause Cyanide effects on the opponent,which lasts up to two turns.The effects range from confusion,difficulty breathing and nausea.These effects hinder the opponent,making them a bit slower in their actions.

Shian bakemono - Hageshī kōgi | Cyanide Release - Outcry
Type: Offensive
Rank: S rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will form two hand seals inhale then rotate while exhaling releasing a short ranged dense sphere of cyanide around himself which is coated in their chakra (Strong enough to deflect basic ninja tools),then with an additional handseal,the user will make the sphere rapidly expand with force reaching mid range and allowing it to explode as their chakra is released from the Cyanide gas.

-No Cyanide release techniques for two turns
-Can only be used two times per fight

Conditions to be able to use it:Mastery of Earth and Wind + Advanced chakra control
Is weak to:Wind,which will blow it away as it is a gas.
Earth,it's dense and will act as a "wall" against the gas,in some cases.
Fire,as it can easily react with fire,but this allows it to be both a strength and a weakness of the Cyanide gas.

Is strong against:Fire,when combines with Cyanide gas,it can be used to create controlled explosions.
Water,as it makes the water toxic,thus harming the opponent if the water is touched or swallowed.
Earth,when it reacts with fire,causing strong explosions able to break it's structure.
Lightning,denser than regular air, cyanide particles/chakra also disrupt the static and vibratitive nature of lightning neutralising it.

Co-creator:
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


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✗ Declined: It was originally declined because it's a poison and you need to be a med nin to use poisons. All that stuff about using it with wind chakra and that way it protects you shouldn't even be there, unless you are going to use every single time an additional wind jutsu just so that you can use a Cyanide jutsu. You can't say in the cyanide jutsu that you use a wind jutsu to manipulate it. Also if it protects you by covering it with chakra, it's also going to protect the opponent.

 
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Custom element Japanese name:
AnchiJikou
Custom element English name: AntiMatter release
The element is based on: Fire+Lightning+extreme chakra control
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Matter makes up everything, humans, trees, animals everything. In the narutoverse matter exists because there are physical substances and things. Now barygon asymmetry tells us that for every matter particle, there is an antiparticle. Matter cannot exist without Antimatter, therefor antimatter has to exist within the narutoverse.

How it works: Little is known about Antimatter other than the fact antimatter is material composed of antiparticles, which have the same mass as particles of ordinary matter but have opposite charge. Of course antimatter is unseen by the naked eye, but through the use of chakra we can "pull" the antimatter out of the air and make it large enough to see and manipulate through the use of chakra. Antimatter has an ink black color to it and just like matter comes in 2 different forms(excluding liquid & gas) the forms have been broken up into classes.

Class X: is the solid form of antimatter, it's use is the most basic and least powerful form. Mostly used to create various items and tools. Although it is extremely dense and strong and cannot be pick up unless you have incredible strength which is why this form is mostly manipulated by chakra.

Class Y: Is the plasma form of antimatter, almost like a semi-solid goo of sorts. It can take on a structural form such as that of a human but when attacked with say a sword the sort would go right through and the antimater can almost instantly reform.

Antimatter has another special ability, when coming into contact with regular matter a process known as annihilation happens which is when violent explosion occurs. Not every class of Antimatter has this ability, in fact it is through the use of chakra that the explosion actually happens. Which is where another class comes into play -

Exploding Class: Through the use of chakra when going through the creation process the user will activate the antimatters passive ability to explode when coming into contact with regular matter. Antimatter that is already on the battlefield can also be converted into the exploding class but through the use of another jutsu, not passively.


Usage Examples:

Class X example:
AnchiJikou | Tools Of The Antismith
Type: Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary
Rank: D-S
Range: Short-long
Chakra: Depends on rank used
Damage: Depends on rank used
Description: The most basic use of Antimatter, The user utilizes his antimatter chakra and releases it into the air..while using the shape manipulation to form the antimatter into different shapes , protective walls of antimatter and pillars of antimatter basically to any form the user wants.

Class Y examples:
AnchiJikou | Doppelganger
Type: Offensive
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After performing a single handseal the user will focus his antimatter chakra, giving it the characteristics of Y class antimatter. Thus forming a clone made of Y class antimatter to come into existence, this clone has the exact abilities of the user but with the traits of Y class antimatter.



Conditions to be able to use it: Extreme chakra control, mastery of Katon and Raiton.
Is weak to: Wind Release(Blow the plasma form and slice it away) High ranking Fire Release( Can't withstand concentrated forms of heat)
Is strong against: Water Release, earth release, and lightning.
Co-creator: N/A
Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A & N/A

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✗ Declined: Do not resubmit, it's wrong on so many levels. For starters the logic is that because there is matter, there should also be antimatter, still where is it then? Everything around us is matter, so it's not so straightforward as it seems. Secondly antimatter and matter can't work together and everything around us is matter, including you and your chakra, from the instant it would be created, it's game over. Thirdly you didn't even explain how you are able to create antimatter. Even assuming it exists, how the hell are you able to create it? Lastly and most importantly, even putting all that aside, every element in existence is 'matter' and then you make its equivalent 'antimatter' in one element? This is the same principle as why a metal CE will never be approved as it's a name the refers to a series of substances. Antimatter is the same only 10 000 times more universal.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name:Tōton
Custom element English name:Scald Release
The element is based on:Water + Fire + Advanced Chakra Control
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the Narutoverse , we've seen many times of shinobis , going to the spa sitting & bathing in warm water , Scald is the samething just on a higher scale of the temperature.
How it works:By utilizing there fire chakra the user mixes there fire chakra with there water chakra resulting in a high pressured, high temperatured steam. But here is where the advanced chakra control comes in the user uses advance chakra control to control the temperature of there fire chakra ,resulting in lowering the temperature of the hot chakra to a point in which the water doesn't immediately turn to steam but boils. Resulting in super heated water that can burn almost any substance it comes in contact with, The super heated water can cause burns of 1st or 2nd degree. Most people would just see as adding fire to water , which will not work and result into instant steam,But controlling fire at a certain temperature or degree should i say will alter the instant steam process.The users scald release temperatures are usual from 150-300 Degrees. The user also utilizes there water chakra making it have a higher boiling temperature then normal water found anywhere else.
Usage Examples:
Tōton:Hisokahana no jutsu| Scald Release : Furtive Flower Technique
Type:Offensive
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra: 30 chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
DescriptionThe user releases a large amount of fervent water from their mouth , which spreads into a broad,thin sheet as it travels through the air. Due to the high temperature of the water,any substance that comes in contact with the super heated water will burn.If the water touches someones skin it will leave 1st or 2nd degree burns. Since water temperature and the ambient temperature are quiet different. The water released is aimed towards the air the opponent nor the user can see for a few seconds.
Tōton:Mizu no saishu shotto|Scald Release:Water Final shot
Type:Offensive
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: 30 chakra
Damage: 60 Damage
DescriptionThe user gathers a large amount of scald water in there stomach as they send it up with tremendous force , Then the user then shapes the upcoming stream of water into a thick precise high pressured stream of water, That able to push trees , & cut through rocks . While all having the ability to still burn almost anything in its way.
Conditions to be able to use it:Mastery Over Water & Fire with also having Advance Chakra Control enough to perform the combination to use Scald
Is weak to:Due to Scald still being water it is weak to Earth & Lightning & Ce that have them
Is strong against:Scald is strong against Fire, & Wind due to using a wind attack will simply spread the Hot water around. & Also Ice Variations.
Co-creator:N/a
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


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✗ Declined: This is just the boil element again, submitted before and declined.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Aseton

Custom element English name: Acetone

The element is based on: Water + Fire

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Human beings produce small amounts of acetone in the body by the decarboxylation of ketone bodies (Ketone bodies are three different water-soluble, biochemicals that are produced by the liver from fatty acids during periods of low food intake (fasting) and starvation for cells of the body to use as energy instead of glucose.). Certain dietary patterns, including prolonged fasting and high-fat low-carbohydrate dieting, can produce ketosis, in which acetone is formed in body tissue. Since most shinobis in the manga are human beings, it is logical that their bodies should be able to produce acetone aswell. Acetone is miscible with water and serves as an important solvent in its own right, typically for cleaning purposes in the laboratory we all know that this would be used by kabuto and orochimaru being that they are very scientific and use labs.

How it works:
Acetone is a colorless, mobile, flammable liquid, and is the simplest ketone (ketone is an organic compound containing a carbonyl group =C=O bonded to two hydrocarbon groups).
Acetone is miscible with water and serves as an important solvent. Produced and disposed of in the human body through normal metabolic processes, it is normally present in blood and urine. So by utilizing katon and suiton chakra in their bloodstream the user is able to enhance and create an abundance of acetone buildup to exert. The process has to be 60% suiton and 40% katon to fully achieve the acetone properties and mixture necessary for creating this solvent. The process is very precise to achieve and can only be used in a liquid form. It requires the user to have good chakra reserves as to be adequate for using such a precise element. The user can also form acetone chakra outside of their body by using the same ratio of suiton and katon chakra to form the acetone.

Usage Examples:
Aseton Hari Yobouchuusha (Acetone Needle Shots)
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:* first for this juts the user performs a single hand sign and forms in there chest streams of acetone which upon being exerted out of the mouth the streams will come out as needles of acetone. these needles are liquid based shots of acetone, very fine looking just like regular needles. these needles are a maximum of 10 needle shots either in conjunction or spread out in shots at the user's will. the range of these small condense sharp acetone needles is only shot range due to evaporation past short range, as they are fine little needles no longer then 3 inches long. upon contact with the enemy these needles will easily cut there way into the enemy poisoning the enemy and damaging the enemy internally shutting down organs

restrictions:
can only be used three times during battle.
limit of ten needle shots per juts usage.
organs damage occurs after two turns.


Aseton Kangoku (Acetone Prison)
Type: offensive
Rank: S rank
Range: short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:* the user begins by forming two hand signs and holding either of his or her's hands out in front of them they are able to exert from there hand a larger portion of acetone which can surround and trap and enemy that is close range from the user. this prison is similar to kisame's water prison jutsu the main differences being that if you swallow the acetone while imprisoned it will do damage to your organ system. the other attribute is that you cannot use fire or lightning to escape as acetone is very combustible and will ignite and or explode. should the enemy have any damage too there body prior to the prison such as cuts or burns this prison will intensify the already existing damage causing even greater pain to the enemy.

Restrictions:
Can only be used twice during battle.
Can be used as a source of acetone
Swallowing effects are after two turns the enemy's organs shut down.
Cuts and burns adds double the pain making it hard to think.
Conditions to be able to use it: Having completed training in the 2 elements water and fire (doesn't need to know the fire rasengans).

Is weak to:
- Suiton: it will dilute the properties and make the element sufficiently weaker in high quantities of water.
- Katon: using fire will mainly just burn off the acetone and ignite it making the fire grow similar to how wind does. The only difference is that it burns off fast.

Is strong against:
- Ice: solvents can be used to melt ice especially this solvent.
- Futon: using wind against such a solvent will break this down to a mist like form and cause respiratory problems.
- Raiton: this element when used against acetone will cause a combustible explosion sequence instead of just like on fire and burning away.
- Non-polar substances (such as oil)
- ice: using acetone against ice is a valuable asset it is similar to using lock deicer during the winter a known metler of ice.
Co-creator: -

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

not sure if this is too similar to diethyl ether.
replacing this submission
Custom element Japanese name:Arctic Fuuton
Custom element English name:arctic Winds
The element is based on:Wind/Fire
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): there are plenty of snow based islands and land regions which the temperautre and cold winds swarm. ie places such as land of snow [yukigakure] and or the land of iron [tetsu no kuni] where cold winds can be present. to fully utilize this method of wind one must know the extremes of the cold winds to really have any idea to the effects they can cause. its also not uncommon to have cold freezing winds up high in the atmosphere, with that said they could also be apparent in climates such as kumogakure during winter season's. hypothermia is very real in any and all aspects of real life and should be considred a rule of thumb in manga usage as well. there has also been shown numerous times of mountain ranges so high that squalls and arctic winds could be produced and flow down from the mountain tops in the manga's
How it works: by forming some wind be it in the chest, mouth, or hands the user can simultaneously mould there fire chakra into the wind and extract the heat from the wind making extreme cold winds. the moulding process is very precise that you need full mastery of cold regions known to man. by removing all the heat from the wind you can enhance the wind to become stronger and also have some nice effects such as being able to supress fire and cold slice lightning. The user requires full mastery of your fire chakra to extract heat from the wind with it drawing out the heat from the wind. the user also requires full mastery of the wind nature to maintain and control the intense winds known to the arctic and other cold climate gusts. many of the winds displayed by arctic wind have been known to cause some kind of skin damage and even forms of hypothermia in cases of water being apparent or moisture of any kind. one should be very careful not to form arctic wind outside the body during rainy and or wet conditions as you will drawback effects onto yourself instead of sending the effects to the enemy.

Note's from wiki
Wind-chill or windchill, (popularly wind chill factor) is the perceived decrease in air temperature felt by the body on exposed skin due to the flow of air.

The human body loses heat through convection, evaporation, conduction, and radiation. The rate of heat loss by a surface through convection depends on the wind speed above that surface. As a surface heats the air around it, an insulating boundary layer of warm air forms against the surface. Moving air disrupts the boundary layer, allowing for new, cooler air to replace the warm air against the surface. The faster the wind speed, the more readily the surface cools.
The speed of cooling has different effects on inanimate objects and biological organisms. For inanimate objects, the effect of wind chill is to reduce any warmer objects to the ambient temperature more quickly. It cannot, however, reduce the temperature of these objects below the ambient temperature, no matter how great the wind velocity. For most biological organisms, the physiological response is to maintain surface temperature in an acceptable range so as to avoid adverse effects. Thus, the attempt to maintain a given surface temperature in an environment of faster heat loss results in both the perception of lower temperatures and an actual greater heat loss increasing the risk of adverse effects.
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A surface that is wet, such as a person wearing wet clothes, will lose heat quickly because the wet cloth will conduct heat away from the body more rapidly, and because the evaporating moisture carries away heat. Conversely, humid air slows evaporation and makes a surface feel warmer, and this is incorporated into longer wind chill formulas. During warm months, this effect can be described in the heat index or humidex

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Hypothermia is a condition in which the body's core temperature drops below that required for normal metabolism and body functions. This is generally considered to be 35.0 °C (95.0 °F). Body temperature is usually maintained near a constant level of 36.5–37.5 °C (97.7–99.5 °F) through biologic homeostasis or thermoregulation. If a person is exposed to cold, and their internal mechanisms cannot replenish the heat that is being lost, the body's core temperature falls, and characteristic symptoms occur such as shivering and mental confusion.

stages of hypothermia.
Mild
Symptoms of mild hypothermia may be vague, with sympathetic nervous system excitation (shivering, hypertension, tachycardia, tachypnea, and vasoconstriction). These are all physiological responses to preserve heat. Cold diuresis, mental confusion, and hepatic dysfunction may also be present. Hyperglycemia may be present, as glucose consumption by cells and insulin secretion both decrease, and tissue sensitivity to insulin may be blunted. Sympathetic activation also releases glucose from the liver. In many cases, however, especially in alcoholic patients, hypoglycemia appears to be a more common presentation. Hypoglycemia is also found in many hypothermic patients, because hypothermia may be a result of hypoglycemia.
Moderate
Low body temperature results in shivering becoming more violent. Muscle mis-coordination becomes apparent. Movements are slow and labored, accompanied by a stumbling pace and mild confusion, although the person may appear alert. Surface blood vessels contract further as the body focuses its remaining resources on keeping the vital organs warm. The subject becomes pale. Lips, ears, fingers and toes may become blue.
Severe
As the temperature decreases, further physiological systems falter and heart rate, respiratory rate, and blood pressure all decrease. This results in an expected heart rate in the 30s at a temperature of 28 °C (82 °F).
Difficulty in speaking, sluggish thinking, and amnesia start to appear; inability to use hands and stumbling is also usually present. Cellular metabolic processes shut down. Below 30 °C (86 °F), the exposed skin becomes blue and puffy, muscle coordination becomes very poor, walking becomes almost impossible, and the person exhibits incoherent/irrational behavior including terminal burrowing (see below) or even a stupor. Pulse and respiration rates decrease significantly, but fast heart rates (ventricular tachycardia, atrial fibrillation) can occur. Major organs fail. Clinical death occurs. Because of decreased cellular activity in stage 3 hypothermia, the body will actually take longer to undergo brain death.



Usage Examples:
[Arctic Fuuton Kangoku] arctic wind prison
Type: offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: short range
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: while in close range to the enemy the user can form one handsign forming a sphere of arctic wind around the enemy similar to how kisame and zabuzza use water prison jutsu. however the only difference being that this wind does not have to be kept in contact with the user, the user can send the sphere of wind out within close range trapping the enemy into the cold wind prison. the enemy if trapped for a full turn will experience hypothermia type symptoms, but will not actually freeze even skin damage from the cold wind inside the sphere.

Restrictions
- can only be used twice during battle.
- stays on the field for one full turn.
-can only be taught by rojuro

[Arctic Fuuton Nagare] arctic wind stream
Type: offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: this jutsu requires the user too form two handsigns and the user compresses there arctic wind chakra into the chest and proceeds to release it in a very precise stream of wind. the stream is not very thick in nature but finely tuned and very fast, it can reach a enemy a mid range as fast as sound. the stream can be paired with a kunai to add extra speeds to the weapons being thrown, also the user can cut off the stream whenever they like or keep the flow steady for a full on push.

Restrictions
- can only be used three times per battle.
- cannot be used with water jutsu's in the same turn
- can only be taught by rojuro.


Hypothermic slash
Type: offensive
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: the user having drawn there blade proceeds to focus there Arctic wind into the blade in a compressed form. the user then slashes at the enemy, the blade upon contact with the enemies skin the wind is transferred from the blade into the enemy releasing extreme hypothermic conditions which drop the enemies core temperature down too deathly cold temperatures. should the enemy be wearing armour of sorts it will become cold and weakened. this jutsu cannot be stopped by using kunai or another sword as the arctic wind will just transfer to the item being used to block and transfer too the enemy afterwards.

restrictions
- this jutsu can only be used with a sword.
- the temperature of the core body hypothermia will be on the severe aspect.
-cannot be defended against by swords or kunai close combat.
-usable twice per battle.
-cannot be used twice in te same turn.
can only be taught by rojuro.
Conditions to be able to use it:
mastery of katon
mastery of wind
Is weak to:
-arctic winds are weak to earth as it can be used to protect or shield yourself from the cold of the winds, to an extent of sheltering as we all know wind chills can be very damaging to the skin. not too mention that cold winds tend to change the temperature of the earth making it slightly harder like in cold climate area's.

-arctic winds although being able to cause hypothermia through wet objects and skin it can also do the same too the user if not careful. should the user become wet they would be the one to suffer the effects of hypothermia, however should the user stay dry the effects of a enemy using suiton can limit themselves to being effected by core temperature dropping and hypothermia.

Is strong against:

- arctic winds are very strong against lightning as it works on completely redirect and slice through lightning even easier then regular wind. because of the fact that cold makes things more brittle and crisp it will more easily break through lightning.

-arctic winds are suprisingly strong against water sucking the warmth from the water being used and if it is timed properly you can give the water user extreme hypothermia while he is exerting his water jutsu .

-arctic winds have the ability to supress fire and to some extent extinguish altogether being that it lacks proper flowing amounts of oxygen, moving the much needed warm air away. fire is extremely hard to maintain and start in frigid cold winds.

Co-creator:Shady
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: We already have Ice release, Frost Release, Temperature Release and some other stuff. On top of that this just seems half and half a copy of the Harmattan Release (dry wind). You see someone submitting a dry wind, so you submit a cold wind. But above all I find the overall explanation bad. You are the one who added fire, but then extract the heat? Cold slice lightning? It puts out fire? Who says the fire doesn't heat the wind and just becomes stronger? The higher you go, the less oxygen there will be, however as far as I know the oxygen supply on North or South pole is on the main ground is not particularly different. Also don't just copy paste Wikipedia, leave all the scientific stuff behind and explain it in your own words.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Magneton
Custom element English name:Magnetite Release
The element is based on:
The element is heavily rooted in lightning and magnetism, using one's own lightning release to generate the proper magnetism to bring the naturally occurring Magnetite, which is already naturally magnetized. Further using chakra manipulation to stimulate these naturally occurring magnetic fields, creating much heavier magnetic fields near the magnetite. Because it is naturally occurring and can be found almost anywhere, the user may also use manipulation to erect structures of the magnetite, as if they were normal earthen jutsu, as magnetite is a mineral
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
In the manga there are users of magnetism, such as Gold release where in the users manipulate a metal that can conduct a magnetic charge. There are also earth users that can manipulate the earth as well as easily as such. There are also magnetism users that generate their own magnetic pulses through presumably lightning release, so naturally occurring magnetite should be usable.
How it works:
The user manipulates his/her own lightning chakra to send a pulse through the ground, supercharging the magnetite minerals and causing them to pull themselves together to form usable structures or just to generate a stronger magnetic field. As the element is a mineral, it wouldnt be as viable without the magnetic charge and is prone to being broken as if it were a normal earthen jutsu. It's strength comes from it's ability to hold and naturally produce a magnetic charge, and reform even though it is fractured. Through magnetic maniuplation of the element, it is grinded down to fine particles, each carrying a charge, and connecting with another through magnetism, creating milions of reinforced bonds with said magnetism inside of a structure much like sand release, creating much more durable structures due to the many particles absorbing impact as opposed to one rigid structure, allowing flexibility and easier manipulation. It's strong magnetic properties allow it to attract other metals and disrupt control over them by means of magnetism, causing metals and magnetic elements to be pulled into and trapped with the the element. The magnetic fields generated are controlled by the user's chakra, and once structures are formed using the element, they may retain the original structure as long as they hold a magnetic charge
Usage Examples:

Magneton: Teiku (Magnetite Release: Disarm)
Rank:A
Range:Short/Long
Type:Defensive/Supplementary
Chakra:30
Damage:None
Description:
The user sends a pulse throughout the ground, causing the magnetite beneath the desired area to generate a heavy magnetic field, pulling all metal objects or objects with a magnetic charge to the ground. The area of affect is relatively short ranged, however the jutsu can target areas long ranged from the user.

Magneton: tojikomeru (Magnetite Release: Imprison)
Rank:A
Range:Short/Mid
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:
The user manipulates the magnetite beneath an opponent to erupt into an earthen prison. Due to it's magnetic properties, blunt force used on the prison will allow it to bend, but the magnetic charge of the prison will cause the structure to reform back into its original shape. THe user may also use this to protect himself from blunt force attacks.

Magneton: Kujiku (Magnetite Relase: Crush)
Rank:S
Range:Short/Mid
Type:Offensive/Defensive
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
The user manipulates the magnetite closest to him, creating two hands roughly 5 feet tall, that either close in on himself, or the opponent. As they close in on the target, any metal or magnetically charged objects in the area are drawn into them, and the hands converge back into the ground, taking anything caught with the,. At the user's will, the hands while still above ground can grab the opponent and drag that person into the ground with them, crushing them. Due to the properties of the magnetite, the hands of magnetite are very resistant to blunt force, reforming if struck with sufficient force to disfigure them.

Magneton: Takai( Magnetite Release: Death)
Rank:S
Range:Short/Mid
Type:Offensive
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:
The user creates two flat, structures on sides of the intended target, and increases the magnetic pull of the structures, drastically until they become so powerful that they pull into one another, crushing whatever is in between them with 300 kgs of force. It takes about three seconds for them to obtain the force needed, however metals caught between them will be pulled towards them before they actually collide. Upon impact they shatter one another, reducing themselves to fine, magnetic dust.


Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery of earth and Lightning Release, as well as advanced chakra control
Is weak to:
Fire-Heat causes the atoms of the element to lose magnetism, reducing the effectiveness of the element.
Earth- Magnetite is not stronger than earth
Is strong against:
Metal based elements-Can attract and pull the metal away from it's intended target
Lightning-Can be used to increase the magnetic properties of Magnetite.
Blunt force- The magnetism of the element can cause itself to reform.
Co-creator: None
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?
Na

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✗ Declined: First problem is that you say you use lightning release through the ground, with other words you do not create any kind of new chakra nor are you able to create magnetite from yourself. Earth/water users can use their element if it's present, however they are still able to create it even if it isn't present. Currently this is a pseudo-element. However more importantly I really don't see a difference with Iron Sand, you are planning to use it nearly the same. Magnetite is even an ironoxide, so as it stands now I pretty much see IS already as being 'magnetite'.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Hekirekiton.
Custom element English name: Thunder Release.
The element is based on: The element is based on Lightning and wind styles, it also requires chakra controlling.
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
According to Wikipedia, Thunder is the sound caused by lightning, now in the manga lightning is one of the five canon elements, and thunder is simply the sound caused by the explosion of lightning.
Now we get to the point where i should explain how can mere sound be used in Ninja combat, and i think that the existence of the Sound element and how it's used in the manga shall be enough to prove that thunder; the sound of lightning, can be used in official Shinobi battles, since it can be used as a hot shock-wave.
How it works:
Naturally,in order to attack an enemy with a lightning attack, the user normally waves the required hand-seals, execute the jutsu, and release a lightning bolt or a lightning current (it actually depends on the technique), and the sound caused by the release of the lightning chakra in it's natural form is normal, and can be heard by anyone, but the shinobi cannot use it to harm the enemy, they can only use it in certain situations to block the foe's hearing for a second or two.
However, when the Shinobi tries to use the thunder element, they don't use the lightning bolt or the lightning attack itself to harm their targets. They shall focus a lot of lightning energy in a certain part of their body (the part that is going to be used in their technique; hand, lungs etc...) and they shall keep focusing the lightning heavily to create pressure, pressure shall make the lightning energy explode, the explosion shall cause thunder to be heard, and that's where the usage of the wind chakra and the normal chakra controlling is needed ; the user shall use the wind chakra to prevent the lightning from exploding since wind is the natural element that can block lightning, and right there the user shall use their chakra controlling to manipulate the heavily concentrated lightning energy and split it to different parts which can be considered the properties of the lightning chakra, waving some hand-seals shall make the operation easier for the Shinobi, as they'll be forced to gather more chakra to take one of the properties of the focused lightning chakra which is the sound, and gather up more chakra to increase the amount of that property in the gathered chakra, they shall get rid of the other properties of lightning except for some small amounts of lightning charges that can be used to release the thunder power smoothly.
Now after acquiring the sound power, the user shall mix it with more wind chakra to add more pressure to it and then use it in jutsu's as a pressured power that blows the targets away each time they come in contact with it, the power can be released in the form of a pressured, blue, hot shock-wave that blows away everything that comes in contact with it.

Differences between Sound Release:
While Sound Release is a Special Ability that can be used to launch Destructive Sound Waves, Hindering Sound Waves, and Genjutsu Inducing Sound Waves, Thunder is simply the pressured raucous, hot power that can be extracted from lightning and strengthened by the Shinobi's chakra in order to create a powerful shock-wave that can be used to nlow away the enemies and block their hearing for some time if used in short range and damage their bodies.

Usage Examples:

(Hekirekiton: Koukuu Shingai shuuha) - Thunder Release: Flying Shock-wave
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user gathers up a fair amount of their thunder chakra and focuses it in their fist, then, the can release it in the form of a flying shock-wave that heads for it's target and blows them away.
The shack-wave makes a sound of thunder while flying toward it's target or destination.

(Hekirekiton: Brow Punchu) - Thunder Release: Blow Punch.
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user gathers a large amount of their Thunder chakra and focuses it in their dominant hand, after forming a fist they can punch their target and release the loud thunder power at once and send their enemy flying. A blue circle of chakra appears around their fist upon impacting their target and disappears, the circle proves that a huge amount of chakra has been released in the attack that sends the enemy flying.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery over lightning and wind styles + Advanced chakra controlling.
Is weak to:
Thunder is weak against matters suck as: Earth, Water, Wood...
Is strong against:
Thunder is strong against Fire, Wind, Dark, Raw Chakra, and Lightning since it can be used to pass throw them.

Thunder is neutral to Quacks, Sound Release...
Co-creator:
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ? N/A

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✗ Declined: This has already been submitted by Ryujin and declined and it will never be approved. Thunder is nothing more than the sound caused by lightning. What you just described is the sound element. The only thing that is different, is that you are taking a very roundabout way to get there, but that's about it and even if you don't accept that, we already have enough shockwave-based elements, so that's not going to approved like that either.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Ten Kyohaku.
Custom element English name: Celestial Release.
The element is based on: The element is based on various astronomical objects and elements which the user gathers energy from. Composes all the main elements.
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Most notable case that this element is possible and can exist is the "Eye of the Moon Plan", which consist of using Mangekyō Sharingan to reflect on the moon to cast a far more powerful variation; Infinite Tsukuyomi. Also worth noting that Madara has a jutsu Tengai Shinsei, that he used to summon meteorites. Similarly, Sage mode users take "natural" energy from their external surroundings, I feel it wouldn't be so far-fetched to claim that ninjas can also grasp other types of external energies.

Which brings us to our next case, (based on filler episodes), which involves meteorite crash landed in village, the ninjas there were not only able to harness supernatural chakra levels by gathering energy from it, but also create new jutsu with it as well; with precise chakra control to the point where one can solidity chakra to attack, defence or even buff himself/herself, giving the user drastic versatility.

This proves the theory(if not fact) that ninjas can manipulate/use energies and elements alike from astronomical objects/elements such as, stars, constellations, comets/meteors, cosmic energy, however does NOT involve the sun.

How it works:

Learners of this element will require to have perfect harmony with all 5 elements, in doing so gives the user the ability to extend their sense of external energy that is required to mold Celestial chakra. This is learnt by reaching to a high mountain and continuously mediate under the star filled night(best during twilight), feeling the night sky as an extension of themselves and the brightest that the stars give. Once they feel the energy and get the understanding of it, practitioners are able to start molding Celestial chakra.

For those who master perfect harmony, at the center lies a star.
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Stars

The main offensive form of this element consists gathering and manipulating star/cosmic energy from one's body to fire a form of light beams, they can also be solidified into shapes to give versatility. The color of these lights differ from user to user because everyone's chakra aura is different, however its pure a cosmetic effect. The user can also summon meteorites, comets and cosmic dust clouds.

Constellation Forms

A very unique form of jutsu that takes the natures of the constellation/zodiac entities and gives the user a boost of strength for a short period of time. The main constellations consist of the 12: Aries, Taurus, Gemini, Cancer, Leo, Virgo, Libra, Scorpio, Sagittarius, Capicorn, Aquarius, Pisces.*

How it works is the user quickly draws the constellation in the air(or ground doesn't matter) with swipes of his/her finger(somewhat faster than doing a regular handseal) and grants him/her a unique boost of strength.

**Example such as;
Taurus; Enchanced strength
Aquarius; Adaptability to water to resist A rank Water based jutsus
Leo; Strengthening Fire jutsus to one rank higher
Sagittarius; Heightened eye sight for reflex and accuracy
Gemini; Creates one copy of the user, the copy is linked physically and mentally

Restrictions:
-One form per battle
-Cannot use other Celestial Techniques while active
-Last a number of turns

*Because theres a limit to 12 techniques, I will only have 3 constellation forms

**These are only examples for give you an idea of what they do. They are all still in evaluation process and will be changed and adjusted when submitted as customs


Usage Examples:

(Ten Kyohaku: Shinsei) - Celestial Release: Supernova
Type: Attack/Defence
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user starts with yielding stance with his/her arms in an "X" position while quickly gathering a large amount of chakra. As he does, the user starts glowing a bright intense light and then immediately releasing the energy he has that causes an immense burst of energy that blasts away attacks or opponents. It leaves a sizeable crater after use.
-Require a 3 turn cooldown when used.


(Ten Kyohaku: Kozumikku no Kurasuta) - Celestial Release: Cosmic Cluster
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user begins by charging his palm with bright light energy and shoots dozens of beams all converging towards the target. These beams move in a quick rapid zig-zag pattern and can its directory can be manipulate by the user.
-Useable 2 times per battle.

(Ten Kyohaku: Ten no Soushi) - Celestial Release: Heavenly Creation
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:
The user concentrates his energy in his hand and casts a solidified light, shaping it to the form he desires from shurikens to strings to shields. These lights are purely physical and can be broken with enough force(B rank+higher) and are limited to human-sized shapes.
-Performing other jutsus will deactivate this technique.
-Can only make object at a time.

(Ten Kyohaku: Nagareboshi Shigure) - Celestial Release: Meteor Shower
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user does a series of handseals to summon flaming meteorites down from the sky towards his opponent, destructive enough to flatten forests and destroy cities. The meteors themselves are house-sized, harder than regular rocks and is very hot, even the user should be careful using it. The user can summon 1-3 meteors.
-Only useable outdoors.
-Useable 1 time per battle.


(Ten Kyohaku: To-rasu) - Celestial Release: Taurus Form
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user quickly draws the taurus constellation in the air and gets engulf by a light that strengthen his muscles to superhuman levels. This gives the user strength to punch through solid rock(B rank level strength) and lift objects 5x times his weight. The user can deactivate this form when he wants however exhausts the user after its inactive.
-Last 4 turns
-Unable to use Celestial technique while active
-Useable 1 time per battle and unable to use other Celestial forms.

(Ten Kyohaku: Futagoza) - Celestial Release: Gemini Form
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user quickly draws the gemini constellation in the air and creates a identical copy of the user. While it looks like a normal clone, it actually links physically and mentally with the user, being able to share vision and senses with each other, as well as chakra flow and distribution to execute handseals for one another. This is a double edge sword however, as pain and damage is also linked. The user can disperse his copy at will.
-Last 5 turns
-Unable to use Celestial technique while active
-Useable 1 time per battle and unable to use other Celestial forms.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery over 5 main elements.

Is weak to:
Fire & Lightning and their advance forms- both destructive natures enough to overpower it
Is strong against:
Earth, Wind, Gravity
Co-creator: N/A
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ? N/A

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✗ Declined: You provided no proof nor any kind of argumentation, you really just posted something which seemed convenient and cool for you to have, but without any kind of logic behind it. Did some characters use celestial objects? Yes, but what did you do? You just made something randomly up that has no direct relation to what you explained there. What kind of connection is there between dropping a comet, firing a light beam, increasing your physical strength or creating a copy of the user? There is none. Your element lacks everything that is required to get something like this approved and then I'm not even mentioning you are copying existing techs (Storm, shadow clones, 8IG etc.).

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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Custom element Japanese name: Oten

Custom element English name: Taint Release

The element is based on: Lightning, wind, Water.

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Taint is a combination of elements and concepts already clearly present in the Narutoverse. Disruption of chakra is the basis of all genjutsu. Many chakra sapping techniques are in existence and commonly used in the Narutoverse already and it's association with water is clear to all, Water Release: Grudge Rain Technique and Water Release Secret Technique: Mist Rain being two perfect examples of this feat. The ability to survive without a true physical substance, as a spirit entity of sorts is shown on numerous occasions through the use of chakra, such as the manifestation of Tayuya's demon worms and the formation of lightning release as a whole. It is these clearly existing properties that have been combined and expanded upon in the creation of Taint.

How it works: Taint Release is an intangible energy-type element. It is created by fusing together Lightning and Water chakra, bridged by wind. Lightning is an element of characteristic instability and an energy-type of element, unlike Fire, it does not consume, but rather spreads and envelops the element, piercing it an corrupting it. Water is an element of fluidity and flow, the perfect vehicle for chakra. In some instances, it has even been used to sap the chakra out of other substances, as referenced above. When the both are combined to create Taint, the water gives the core of the element, with it's flexibility and chakra properties, while the lightning ruptures and unbalances the water. Wind then comes in to bridge between the energy (Lightning) and the matter (Water), as an element that walks the line between both, turning it into an physical energy-type of substance, similar to Dust Release, but flexible instead of rigid (Water instead of Earth), piercing and corrupting instead of consuming (Lightning instead of Fire), and affecting the spirit instead of the body.

This etherial substance takes the form of a translucent wave in the air, more of a blur that anything truly exists. While similar to flowing water, it has more of an appearance of a faint floating cloth, intangible and light. Due to it's nature, it is able to pass through physical objects, to reach for the chakra inside them, where it will disturb and rip the chakra out of the objects, essentially sucking and purging, or cleansing, the substance off it, similar to Tayuya's ghosts, as referenced above. This eventually leaves the object devoid of chakra, and, depending on it's characteristics, it will make it lose it's structure and stability, crumbling it or merely ending it.

Because of these properties, Taint Release deals no physical damage, and is thus considered a pure Defense/Supplementary element. Every effect that Taint has comes from the disturbance and depletion of chakra, rather than maiming or hurting the target.

On physical objects, the cleanse from the Taint is stronger. Phasing through the object in question, it will remove the "strings" of chakra that holds the element in question together and sets it in motion. If something is unnaturally held together by chakra, say, a water construct or a wind weapon, when transversed by Taint, they lose form and disperse harmlessly. It will not eradicate the object, and if the object possesses a tight structure, it will not destroy or crumble ( Advanced Earth, Crystals, Metals, etc ), but they will lose the chakra-powered motion and creation, and revert to the laws of gravity. Which is to say, if something is propelled by chakra continuously, it will fall, but any momentum the object has will carry on until it naturally comes to an halt. This is extraordinarily effecting against Wind and Wind based elements, as they will simply lose structure and sharpness, and become no better than soft breezes, completely disrupted by the Taint.

On energy elements, the cleanse is weaker. Being an energy itself, Taint will battle evenly against Fire and Lightning, and other Energy-type of elements, preventing Taint from easily reaching the chakra inside it and disturb it. Heat, Radiation, etc, are all energy properties that can't be disrupted by Taint, just like the momentum couldn't. This does not make Taint weak against all energy, just elemental energies. Chakra-stealing is an obvious strength of the element, any variation of it, like Bijuu Chakra ( Jinchuuriki, Nekura, etc ) or Natural Energy ( Sage Mode, Curse Mark, Juugo, Kiyoshi, etc ).

On sentient beings or living elements, the cleanse behaves similarly to physical objects, with the addition that the depletion of chakra will cause the progressive weakness of the target, culminating with it's death, once completely devoid of chakra. This makes Taint an excellent element to use against summons and people, as the first get immediately reverted back upon being transversed by Taint, while the second have their access to their chakra pool increasingly restricted. The disturbance of the organism's chakra pathway, as the taint cleanses it and steals chakra from it, are also utilized to provoke illusions, the disruption of the target's chakra pathway being much more violent than the normal one with common Genjutsu. To be noted, this is the consequence of the clash with the element, and are considered Elemental Genjutsu, affecting immunities like that of the Nekura, which normally wouldn't allow the infusion of raw chakra into their organism. It is comparable with fire burning on contact, or lightning numbing.

The absorption of chakra is done by having Taint phase through the chakra containing object or being, and essentially biting it off of the physical "container". The depletion is complete and instantaneous against elements/techniques weaker than the Taint technique used. Techniques equal to the Taint technique are depleted instantly as well, but the Taint consumes itself. Against techniques stronger than the Taint technique, the efficiency of the absorption is cut back by 50% for every rank difference, the Taint technique is consumed and the opposite technique continues on, even if weaker, by 50% or less (Which is translated in proportional damage output reduction, if applicable). Against the opponent him/herself, the chakra stolen is proportionate to the chakra spent on the technique, generically 50% from what it cost, per turn of contact. Because of this, all Taint techniques will be turn-restricted, to be specified in each technique.

The chakra absorbed is used in two manners. First, it can be used to fuel the technique itself, prolonging it's duration on the field. Once the Taint absorbs the same amount of chakra it was used in its creation, it can be converted into an additional turn the technique can stay on the field, if unblocked. For example, if a Taint technique that lasts 3 turns is absorbing the chakra from the opponent, it will have the potential of prolonging it's duration by 2 turns, for a total of 5 turns. This typically plays no effect in the "damage" taken by the Taint when clashing with other techniques, it can be weakened and blocked as any other element, with the appropriate counter. The second usage of the chakra is by fueling one self, replenishing the user's chakra pool. The two are mutually exclusive. If used to fuel the technique, it can't be used to replenish the user's chakra pool, and vice versa. Non-elemental Energies are directly converted to chakra if made to clash with Taint. This doesn't mean that Taint can pick up unfocused Natural Energy from the air, but it can be used to shield from and disrupt Sage techniques. In this case, though, due to the petrification after-effects, the energy can only be used on the technique, otherwise the petrification will ensue on the user.

Finally, Taint is selective. The user is able to phase Taint through one's body in order to cleanse him/herself out of any foreign chakra, getting rid of Genjutsu, Yamanaka Techniques, etc, and can phase through the user's other techniques without weakening them. The same can be applied with allies, allowing the user to purge them off said techniques without risking depleting their reservations or weakening their attacks/defenses. But to do so, the user is required some sort of Chakra Sensing/Doujutsu abilities, in order to be able to differentiate chakra, as Taint is only inherently selective with the user's own chakra.

Usage Examples:

The Tomb's Howl | Pharaoh's Slumber

Taint Release:
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will create an inconsistently shaped blob of Taint in the air anywhere within range, this taint can be sent in any direction upon creation, but this direction cannot be changed once it is moving.
-Lasts for 2 turns-

Taint Release: Dreams of a Young Girl | Annaliese's Nightmare
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user manifests a large amount of Taint in the area around them, forming what looks like a cloud. This Taint is rigged with the ability to inflict a genjutsu on any whom it comes into contact with. The genjutsu once in place will cause the opponent to feel the taint sticking to their skin. They will then slowly begin to feel there very life force and chakra being sucked from their bodies, their skin will begin to wrinkle and dry and they will grow weak. There muscles will lose effectiveness and by the end of the turn they will be completely paralysed. This effect will begin in any areas of exposed skin, leaving those areas more or less unusable upon initiation of the genjutsu, heavily clothed areas will be the last to paralyse. Although the draining of the life force is an illusionary effect, the draining of chakra is not.
-Taint will remain on the battlefield for two turns without a host to feed from.-
-Once an opponent is trapped in the genjutsu, the Taint will continue to feed on there chakra, meaning it will not disperse until the opponent escapes it.-

Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of the Water, Wind and Lightning elements, as well as evident ability with both chakra control and Genjutsu.

Is weak to: Energy Elements - Fire, Lightning and variants ( Radiation, Decay Light, Dark, Scorch, etc )

Is strong to: Physical Elements - Earth, Water, Wind and variants. ( "Metals", "Crystals", Wood, Mushroom, Lava, Ice, etc)
Non-Elemental Energies - Normal Chakra, Bijuu Chakra ( Jinchuuriki, Nekura, etc ), Natural Energy ( Sage Mode, Curse Mark, Juugo, Kiyoshi, etc ), etc.

Is neutral to: The element has no physical damage, and thus it cannot affect physical properties such as Momentum, Weight, Heat, Toxicity, Acidity, Sturdiness ( Except in weaker elements like basic Earth, Water and liquid variations, Wind and gaseous variations, or living/biological elements, which crumble, disperse or wither without chakra, but noticeable in Crystals, Metals, etc, which remain sturdy, even after being neutralized), etc. Elements associated with those properties can still be weak or strong to Taint, but the properties remain.

It is also the opposite of Dust, does being Neutral to it, both simply nullifying the other when techniques of the same rank oppose each-other.

Co-creator: Lili-Chwan

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Do not resubmit. All of this is completely made up, every characteristic it has was added simply because you wanted it and all of this without any kind of proof. Also things like Tayuya's worms are Yin/Yang manipulation, not something elemental, you would need to know Y/Y to submit a CE based on it.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Pemission from Rozzy to re-submit salt release once again: . Thus giving me full authority over this element once again, though he has now become the co-creator.

Resubmitting: I've removed everything related to the crystalic form (and useless stuff), and since that was the only issue, hopefully it's good to go now.


Custom element Japanese name: 塩, Shiōton

Custom element English name: Salt Release

The element is based on: Earth + Water + Chakra control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Scientific Proof, Salt, also known as or rock salt, is a crystalline mineral that is composed primarily of sodium chloride, a chemical compound belonging to the larger class of ionic salts. It is essential for animal life in small quantities, but is harmful to animals and plants in excess. Salt it is a crystalline solid, white, pale pink or light gray in color, normally obtained from sea water or rock deposits. Edible rock salts may be slightly grayish in color because of mineral content. Chloride and sodium ions, the two major components of salt, are needed by all known living creatures in small quantities. Salt is involved in regulating the water content, the fluid balance of the body. The sodium ion itself is used for electrical signaling in the nervous system. Because of its importance to survival, salt has often been considered a valuable commodity during human history.

Manga context, In Narutoverse, living things seem to be composed of more or less the same things as in our own reality, which means that we cans safely deduce that Halite exists. Because salt is actually a very comon mineral-element in the manga, mostly known as the edible salt in the manga, which can be used as a spice to flavor foods, hence edible. Such as ramen, rice balls, fish etc. So that actually proves that salt exist in the narutoverse. Slat exists almost everywhere like; Ground, Mountains, Seas etc. Almost everywhere. So salt can be extracted using the same methods as the Yondaime Kazegake used during his life time, Sakin - Gold Dust. The Kazekage manipulated the small gold particles in a similar manner that gaara manipulates his sand, I am mentioning this because; The kazekage extracted the gold from deep within the ground, And gaara softens the earth. So actually having proven that salt can be found different and most common places, almost everywhere. So that actually proves that Salt can also be manipulated if one can extracts the needed mirals from the soil, to bring forth The Salt releases, composed of the following elements; Earth + Water. (see how it works below)

Salt, There is enough salt in the oceans of the naruto world. In addition, evaporation of ancient oceans has left vast deposits of solid rock salt over huge areas of the world (also the RW). These deposits can be in the form of bedded sedimentary layers or deep salt domes. Salt is all around us, including in the soil/earth, mountains, in the seas, and in the nearby sea airs, due to evaporation. If it's strong dense odor inhaled in a short range inside your lungs, your alveoliers will be blocked temporarily, making it more difficult to fuse chakra & elements like wind, and fire jutsus (techniques which require you to exhale/inhale). Slat is very much like earth though much denser and more powerful, which can absorb water, and mud based earth attacks, and Salt walls could defend against fire jutsus. Salt is the most common and readily available nonmetallic mineral in the world.

How it works: Salt release is an advanced chakra nature. It's a Kekkei Genkai created by shinobi born with two chakra natures, water and earth which he could combine to create Salt release. It involves the use of salt and other sodium compounds to sting and irritate the opponent this would be the posibility if it wasn't in its halite state, or to Blind the opponent in vast quanities of salt, this can be done by breaking the salt crystals into a minuscule structure. Through this nature release, one can also extract pure sodium and chlorine from things such as seawater and the human body. This element works by combining the earth natured and water natured chakra together, though that isn't the only thing needed to create this element. It also needs the precise minerals that can be found in salt, chloride and sodium ions, the two major components of salt (which can be found almost everywhere). The Salt release isn't hard to understand as it's smilit to its mother element, which is earth, thus it possess many similarities to the earth release.

Usage Examples:

(Shiōton: Shiō no Soushi) - Salt Release: Salt Creation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user utilizes his salt chakra and releases it into the soil, and extracts all the necessary minerals needed it to create salt, which is green-bluish in its appearance while using the shape manipulation to form the salt into different shapes, protective walls, pillars of salt basically to any form the user wants just as versatile as the wood element, this is like the earth release technique but on a larger scale.
(Shiōton: Sasu Yōna Gōmon) - Salt Release: Stinging Torture
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user takes in a deep breath and converts his salt chakra into halite while also breaking it down to it nano-structure. Afterwards the user exhales creating a cloud of salt that seeps directly into the opponents eyes causing a painful, stinging sensation. Not only does this technique cause immense pain, it can also temporarly blind the opponent. This can easily give the user the advantage in a battle and handicap the opponent. This makes the technique good for interrogation and information gathering. The technique can be rather easily dodged if one has a dojutsu as the cloud of salt travels on the wind and can easily be swayed in the other direction, but the cloud travels rather fast. Though, it is very hard to see because it's in its miniscule structure, though Dojutsu users can track it easly.

♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
♦ Note: The user cannot perform any salt technique the following turn.
(Shiōton: Sairei no Hebi) - Salt Release: The Snake of Festival
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus his salt chakra through the ground and form a range of three handseals. So causing an gigantic rainbow colored snake to rise up created from the soil, by using the salt release. This gigantic snake is created around the user, the user can use it to defend himself from regular weapons or send it at the target. It annihilates whatever it comes into contact with, due to the salt spikes covering its body not to mention its deadly fangs. The snake is able to release small salt needles torwards the target, from its tail. Once the needles make impact it will iriitate the target and cause enormous pain. It has overwelming capabilities, it's similar to the earth dragon technique. The snake is equal in size to Manda, not the upgraded one. This technique remains active until the snake is destroyed, or released by the user.

♦ Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Lucifer.
♦ Note: This jutsu can only be used twice per battle.
♦ Note: The user cannot perform any salt jutsu, for the following 2 turns.
Conditions to be able to use it:

-Mastery over Earth and the Water element
-Great Chakra control

Is weak to:

-Water, It dissipates the salt when they come in contact with each other. (though this is a very slow process,s it has to be a powerful water technique)
-Lightning, The lightning can shatter salt due to its piercing ability, combined with the vibrations. (as seen in the anime)
-Storm, is a combination between the two elemental weaknesses, Thus it can turn the Salt crystals to dust.
-Lava, is to much to handle for salt release, because of the shear hot temprature, which doesn't leave a trace of salt crystals behind, when used against it. (regular fire is not)

Is strong against:

-Earth, is overpowered by salt release because, The salt release is much compact and dense so it's easily able to overpower the eartle release. (thus making it more powerful)
-Fire, is very weak against the salt release, because it isn't just enough to melt salt as salt is capable of absorbing heat. (they have quite a cool temperature)
-Wind, It cannot cut through the compact and dense crystals, It disperses most of the incoming wind attacks. (such as wind net attack)
-Ice, is very weak against salt because of the sodium chloride, thus it melts through Ice with ease, So Ice isn't effective at all against salt release. (It doesn't even weaken salt due to the huge advantage)
-Wood, it is also capable of overpowering the wood release, as salt is more compact, thus being able to pierce through wood.
-Ice based ce's

Co-creator: Rozzy

Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A & N/A

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✗ Declined: You said you removed all the useless parts, still the bolded is left while I clearly mentioned it. Remove that If I forced earth, fire or any other kind of element down your throat, you are going to have some serious issues, something like that does not belong in the description of a CE. Water is a weakness, still you say at some point it absorbs mud and water, which neither makes sense, so remove that. Also don't try to weasel benefits in your STR & WEA, when water comes into contact with salt it will not happen slowly and it will not require a powerful water tech, but a normal one and no ice will have an effect on salt and it definitely will weaken. There is absolutely no reason why your CE would be so special that the fundamental rules that apply to all jutsus and elements are thrown overboard. Remove both. Finally you say you will use the salt like wood, ok fine and that you can extract salt of the ground and such ok that's fine too as the ground is also used for earth jutsus, however that's still something different than how Gaara and the 3rd kazekage use sand and gold as Gaara can't create sand as far as is known, he always needs a supply of it, and the 3rd kazekage uses magentism release. You said you will use it as wood, not in the way Gaara and his dad use their skills.


Custom element Japanese name: 塩, Shiōton

Custom element English name: Salt Release

The element is based on:

Earth+Water+Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Scientific Proof, Salt, also known as or rock salt, is a crystalline mineral that is composed primarily of sodium chloride, a chemical compound belonging to the larger class of ionic salts. It is essential for animal life in small quantities, but is harmful to animals and plants in excess. Salt it is a crystalline solid, white, pale pink or light gray in color, normally obtained from sea water or rock deposits. Edible rock salts may be slightly grayish in color because of mineral content. Chloride and sodium ions, the two major components of salt, are needed by all known living creatures in small quantities. Salt is involved in regulating the water content, the fluid balance of the body. The sodium ion itself is used for electrical signaling in the nervous system. Because of its importance to survival, salt has often been considered a valuable commodity during human history.

Manga context, In Narutoverse, living things seem to be composed of more or less the same things as in our own reality, which means that we cans safely deduce that Halite exists. Because salt is actually a very common mineral-element in the manga, mostly known as the edible salt in the manga, which can be used as a spice to flavor foods, hence edible. Such as ramen, rice balls, fish etc. So that actually proves that salt exist in the narutoverse. Slat exists almost everywhere like; Ground, Mountains, Seas etc. Almost everywhere. So salt can be extracted using the same methods as the Yondaime Kazegake used during his life time, Sakin - Gold Dust. The Kazekage manipulated the small gold particles in a similar manner that gaara manipulates his sand, I am mentioning this because; The kazekage extracted the gold from deep within the ground, And gaara softens the earth. So actually having proven that salt can be found different and most common places, almost everywhere. So that actually proves that Salt can also be manipulated if one can extracts the needed minerals from the soil, to bring forth The Salt releases, composed of the following elements; Earth + Water. (see how it works below)

Salt, There is enough salt in the oceans of the naruto world. In addition, evaporation of ancient oceans has left vast deposits of solid rock salt over huge areas of the world (also the RW). These deposits can be in the form of bedded sedimentary layers or deep salt domes. Salt is all around us, including in the soil/earth, mountains, in the seas, and in the nearby sea airs, due to evaporation.

How it works:

This element works by combining the earth natured and water natured chakra together, and moulding them together into salt release. Salt release is an advanced chakra nature. It's an advanced element created by shinobi born with two chakra natures, water and earth which he could combine to create Salt release. It involves the use of salt in the form of a crystalline structure, which can be created from the user's body, water, or used from the ground, similar to wood release, and earth release. It can be formed into several useful constructs in order to aid the user in battle, such as pillars, granulated salt, and tools. These constructs can be used by the user in battle The Salt release isn't hard to understand as it's similar to its mother element, which is earth, thus it possess many similarities to the earth release. Salt is very much like earth though much denser and more powerful, which can absorb water, and mud based earth attacks, which are saturated with water. When near coastal or sea-side battlefields, users of salt release will even be capable of utilizing the salt carried upwards from the sea so as to produce salt structures directly from the air.

Salt is hygroscopic - which means that it absorbs moisture from its surroundings. Salt Release would personify this, being highly hygroscopic and therefore being perfect for combating floral elements, as well as water based elements; e.g Wood Release. Simply put, water is drawn out from substances via osmosis, along the concentration gradient into the salt - thus leading to cells having too little water to function and so on - it is this property that makes salt a perfect preservative.

Usage Examples:

(Shiōton: Shiō no Soushi) - Salt Release: Salt Creation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user utilizes his salt chakra and releases it into the soil, and extracts all the necessary minerals needed it to create salt, which is green-bluish in its appearance while using the shape manipulation to form the salt into different shapes, protective walls, pillars of salt basically to any form the user wants just as versatile as the wood element, this is like the earth release technique but on a larger scale.

(Shiōton: Sairei no Hebi) - Salt Release: The Snake of Festival
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus his salt chakra through the ground and form a range of three handseals. So causing an gigantic light blue colored snake to rise up created from the soil, by using the salt release. This gigantic snake is created around the user, the user can use it to defend himself from regular weapons or send it at the target. It annihilates whatever it comes into contact with, due to the salt spikes covering its body not to mention its deadly fangs. The snake is able to release small salt needles torwards the target, from its tail. Once the needles make impact it will iriitate the target and cause enormous pain. It has overwelming capabilities, it's similar to the earth dragon technique. The snake is equal in size to Manda, not the upgraded one. This technique remains active until the snake is destroyed, or released by the user.


Conditions to be able to use it:

-Mastery over Earth and Water
-Great chakra control

Is weak to:

Fire, It dissipates the salt and easily burns it when they come in contact with each other.
-Lightning, The lightning can shatter salt due to its piercing ability, combined with the vibrations. (as seen in the anime)
-Storm, is a combination between the two elemental weaknesses, Thus it can turn the Salt crystals to dust.
-Lava, is to much to handle for salt release, because of the shear hot temprature, which doesn't leave a trace of salt crystals behind, when used against it.
-Crystal, this is an advanced element, which is much denser and harder than salt. It is easily able to break salt.
-Sound, Due to its structure, sound is easily able to shatter through salt because of its vibratory nature.

Is strong against:

-Earth, is overpowered by salt release because, The salt release is much compact and dense so it's easily able to overpower the eartle release.
Water, is very weak against the salt release, because it isn't just enough to melt salt as salt is capable of absorbing heat.
-Wind, It cannot cut through the compact and dense salt, It disperses most of the incoming wind attacks.
-Ice, is very weak against salt because of the sodium chloride, thus it melts through Ice with ease, So Ice isn't effective at all against salt release.
-Wood, it is also capable of overpowering the wood release, as salt is more compact, thus being able to pierce through wood.

Co-creator: Lucifer

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?



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✗ Declined: This is getting annoying as half of my comments seem to have been disregarded or misinterpreted. Water was last time a weakness formulated in such a way it's not really a weakness and now it's a strength even though salt is very soluble in water? Realistically having 2 of the five basic elements as strengths seems sufficient for this CE, but you're trying to get it to three. And yes you can use already existing salts, but that's something different than transforming water, air or earth into salt for the record.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom Element Japanese Name: Kokushoku kayaku

Custom Element English Name: Black Powder

The Element is based on: Earth, Fire & Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Black Powder is not a naturally occurring element; it is a chemical process that needs to be done to create the Black Powder. But to create the Black Powder you need specific minerals and molecules that exist inside the earth. Several of these minerals and molecules needed to produce the Black Powder is actually essential components for life and it is found near hot springs and the minerals are also natural products of volcanic eruptions. Furthermore you will find the minerals inside mountains and deep within the ground.

It has been shown in Naruto that hot springs exist, not only in Konohagakure but all around the ninja world. Furthermore the existence of Lava Release, which has been displayed by Son Goku and Mei Terumi, and the massive mountains that exist around the ninja world are also strong factors that may prove the minerals exist to create this Black Powder. These two factors also prove that volcanoes may exist in the ninja world. Furthermore there exists another vital component for the creation of Black Powder and that is wood. Now this is a natural product, that you will see all over the ninja world in the form of large forests and even the First Hokage whom displayed the ability to use Wood Release.

How it works: The element itself is in truth, Black sand or powder like state material. Black Powder is created through simultaneously fusing earth and fire chakra, and is released from the user’s body. The Black Powder may also be created from the ground surrounding the user. When created it is in a fine state between sand and powder, and is completely black. It is rather heavy in large amounts and it is highly explosive and ignitable. The ability that this black powder holds, the explosive and ignitable feature combined with the smoke and gaseous state that it will create when ignited, it is created through the simultaneous usage of both Fire and Earth element. The black powder when ignited will reach a scorching heat of between 300 to 350 degrees. It needs an equal amount of heat to even be ignited, yet that is of course what the user is doing when he fuses the fire and earth element together creating the element. This immense heat that is created when the black powder is ignited by a fire or the users fire chakra gives the black powder its scorching red color just before it “explodes” creating a powerful blast and a small shockwave that is created around it, dependent on the size of the explosion. The smoke and gas created from the explosion that happens to the black powder is toxic to a certain degree. The smoke and gas will make a person’s eyes drowsy while the lunges, throat and mouth will feel soar, dry and it will irritate a person severely. Furthermore that gas if inhaled for an extended time will give one a heavy headache and may make one faint. The black powder is coated in a unique mineral which gives the black powder a reduced ability to build-up electrostatic charge which makes it less possible to ignite the black powder through electrical means. The black powder can be used in many different situations, creating shields, weapons, coat parts of objects, make underground blasts, create flares in the sky, can create burst charges of any kind and make fast moving projectile like explosions similar to that of something like rockets, arrows, kunai and shuriken, dependent on the explosive force, it may reach extreme speeds. Another and final property of Black Powder, is that it is made out of three different kinds of mineral and particles, while also being made of a unique process. As such in reality, Black Powder is incapable of decaying.

Usage Examples:

Kokushoku kayaku: Dangan Parusu | Black Powder: Bullet Pulse
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique allows the practitioner of this element to, when raising his hand and pointing his index finger at his opponent, to gather both fire and earth element to this finger. This will essentially create a mixture that results in the creation of a small nail sized amount of black powder to be created on the edge of his finger. At this point, the user will with this tiny nail sized black powder; compress it into a dense state, whereas he will shoot it towards the opponent with the pulsing force of explosive black powder that is constantly created behind the dense nail sized bullet of black powder. The black powder created behind it immediately “explodes” creating the forward push to the very technique, causing the “bullet” to move at very high speeds towards the opponent, and on impact it will explode with enough force to tear off an arm or leg, or rip through skin, flesh and even bones.

Kokushoku kayaku: Jirai Hara | Black Powder: Mine Field
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This is a very simple technique, where the user will plant his palm upon the ground releasing a mixture of both fire and earth chakra into the ground, resulting in the creation of black powder, while simultaneously manipulating the ground to the point where it will also create black powder beneath the ground. This black powder will be gathered in 5 different spots on the field, which have a very high density and it is very close to the surface. These spots on the ground could be called mines, as whenever a person may step upon one of these spots, the black powder will go into a state of ignition, causing an explosion to be created. This explosion is an upwards explosion that happens at high speed and with great force, rupturing the ground and exploding with great force onto the target above.

Kokushoku kayaku: Bakuhatsu Burakku Funmatsu Kabe | Black Powder: Wall of Explosive Black Powder
Type: Offensive - Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This is one of the more advanced techniques that one may perform. The user will exhale a vast amount of black powder from his mouth. This large amount of black powder is spewed out at high speed creating a large wall of “darkness” which forms a sort of wall in front of the user. This wall is only temporary, yet if anything touches it, it will with its high density and weight stop incoming projectiles like kunai, shuriken etc. Yet the true ability behind this wall is that just when created, if it is in contact with fire or any heat type of element, or if the user performs the tiger hand seal, it will cause this enormous wall of black powder to explode or ignite. This creates a large explosion of force that may rupture the ground or anything near it. After the explosion a cloud of gas and smoke will flood the entire field around it, meaning that a high level of danger to be exposed to the gas and smoke is present.

Kokushoku kayaku: Kuro Kunai | Black Powder: Black Kunai
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will pull out one or up to five kunai, these kunai will then be coated in black powder created by the user and then coated onto the kunai through the usage of his chakra. This will cause the kunai(s) to gain a completely black blade. These kunai have now gained an explosive power. These kunai may be thrown, causing them to explode on impact, or the user may use one kunai in close combat by when thrust into the chest of a person as an example, it will explode causing the chest of the opponent to explode.

Conditions to be able to use it:
- Mastery over Earth
- Mastery over Fire
- Excellent Chakra Control

Is weak to:

Water & Rain Release – Water will neutralize the explosive fire nature of the element

All Metal – Metal is strong enough to withstand the blunt and explosive force

All Crystals – Crystals are capable of withstanding massive amount of heat and force

Ice, Snow & Frost Release – These elements may withstand the heat yet explosive force can push through

Lava & Scorch (Other extreme heat elements) – These elements overcome the heat and force of the Black Powder

Lightning & Variations – Lightning with enough force will literally obliterate the Black Powder

Is strong against:

Wind Release – The Black Powder is heavy and dense enough to overpower the wind

Fire Release - Black Powder is a component used together with fire to create powerful explosions

Earth – The Black Powder is heavier than earth and with explosive force it will smash through the earth

Magnetism Release – The magnetic force would only gather the Black Powder making it denser and giving it blunter and explosive force, furthermore the amount would end up being massive weight

Wood & Organic elements – Black Powder will with its explosive and burning force destroy the organic material

Decay – It is said everything decays, yet in truth Black Powder does not decay

Co-creator: N/A

Students I passed this custom element on to: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Because you seem to want to avoid at all costs explicitly telling what this now exactly is. Black powder is just a name, but you never mention what that powder now is. To me it reminds me of gunpowder, which on its turn is nothing but a name for a specific combination of elements, including sulphur, which is an already existing CE. You talk about you need to find minerals there and how it has a special mineral that allows that. You're beating around the bush. Unless you clearly explain what this now is, I can't verify it. Also if something is ignitable, there will not be much of a 'flame' state, it will almost instantly explode and as a result there will not be much of a gas as that's mainly the result when something gets consumed by fire, which is not the same as exploding. Finally fire can never be a strength of something that's ignitable as it means it will be completely destroyed when touched by it.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Kisenonton

Custom element English name: Xenon Release

The element is based on: Wind | Lightning

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Xenon is an actual element, it is colorless, heavy, odorless, and is a noble gas. Xenon has been used for many things, from being used for flash lamps to being used for anesthesia. It exists naturally within the earth's atmosphere in moderate amounts. Xenon can be gathered from the surrounding area within the air or be sent from the body with the use of lightning and wind chakra, creating it in all it's likeness. This element Xenon is using Xenon gas manipulated with chakra. Xenon’s main use is to be used to emit blinding flashes. To let off bright flashes of light it must be among other gases and receive a small charge. The other naturally occurring abundant gases in the air, oxygen, nitrogen, etc can all be used to set off a high energy Xenon flash of blinding light

How it works: As said, Xenon gas is manipulated by being drawn in from the atmosphere or created from the body. The wind manipulating xenon gas is heavier and denser than normal air, meant to be dense and pressurized so that it will set off the Xenon gas in bright flashes with the help of a simple charge from the user, allowing him to time xenon flashes. A is incredibly bright, Xenon being used to illuminate fields and even space shuttles. It is very dangerous to ones eyes and can cause permanent damage, especially since a xenon flash can last for 10 seconds or more. Being as it is it is normally used in the form of targeted blasts near the opponents to simultaneously blind and attack, cause distractions, and supplement.

Usage Examples:
Kisenonton: Gurandochariotto No Idaina Furasshu | Xenon Release: Great Flash of the Grand Chariot
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will gather Xenon gas from the air and focus it around the opponent. The user will channel channel chakra into it and form the xenon gas into an abundance of pockets of Xenon gas, and then give them a charge. The charge triggers xenon flashes, causing violent bursts that deal damage to an opponent while also blinding them. The Xenon flash is strong enough to deal aggressive damage to an opponent's eyes, blinding them even after the flashes are over.

Conditions to be able to use it: Wind | Lightning

Is weak to: Fire/Lava/Scorch/Heat Based Elements: Because Xenon is a gas, fire can burn through it
Earth/Steel: Earth is a strong defense and can protect one from Xenon. Also hiding behind a complete earthen defense can stop the flash from affecting them

Is strong against: Lightning/Storm: Xenon is much like wind in certain aspects, and it can neutralize lightning
Water: Xenon is strong against water as it is more powerful and water cannot block out the light.

Co-creator: LonelyAssassin

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


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✗ Declined: There isn't much of an explanation for pretty much everything. Xenon is only sporadically present in the atmosphere and doesn't seem that important. So your proof is already very shallow. As it's only sporadically present, saying you start searching for it is redundant. Elements like earth/water are pretty much anywhere, so they can easily be used, but xenon isn't. So saying you start searching for it can take hell of a long time till you have found even a moderate amount for a jutsu. On top of that it invalidates this as a CE as a CE shouldn't be something like where you use wind and lightning to find something. You should be able to create based on its own elemental chakra. Lastly the only thing you are going on about is flashes. Something that can already be done with lightning, light and some other elements. On top of that you can't just say it starts flashing, oil is very flammable, but it's not going to set itself aflame. You would need a secondary source for that, thus counting as a combo. In the end you have nothing.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Glycols Furon/Futoueki (no japanese name sorry)

Custom element English name: Glycols Freon/Antifreeze
The element is based on:


Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
many times refrigerators and or cooler's have been shown in naruto to store food and or beverages it can be easily said that coolants are definetly shown in naruto by this aspect alone. but i will go one step further stating that many oils have been shown as well meaning that coolant is a sure bet too be seen as an element. although i am not going into the oil aspect it is well known that oil is a coolant of sorts because of its chemical compounds and viscosity. One can also see that the proper organic matter required is shown in narutoverse to exist and so are the sugars and other necessary glycol compounds needed.

How it works:
the user concentrates his or her's chakra and utilizing the organic components throughout the body the user can also utilize the sugars and other naturally produced chemicals by utilizing the raiton and suiton based chakra ton amplify and mould the proper selection of glycols moulding them to the desired effect. once moulded the user can use handsigns to acieve the desired effect the user chooses such as freon based chemical sucking the heat out of the atomosphere and or antifreeze which has high boiling points, low freezing points and won't break down. the user can also use handsigns and the chakra's needed to naturally form coolants from the earth using most organic compounds wich can be found throughout the narutoverse lands. these coolants can only be used in liquid forms by a user and the user cannot in any way manipulate gaseous forms upon heated contact of the elements. the liquids can be made in any desired colors with the proper tintings and pigments used.
Usage Examples:
(glycol furon gouben ) glycol freon pool.
Rank: C
Type: supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user forms two handsigns and utilizing his or her's chakra's they are able to farm from the ground a pool of boiling freon which sucks the warmth out of the surrounding area attracting all of the heat in the atomosphere too above the pool of freon.

Conditions to be able to use it:
mastery of Suiton
mastery of Raiton
Kage rank or higher to achieve proper control of such a high viscosity element.
Is weak to:
Suiton: this natural element will highly dilute the coolant compounds making them less effective in all area's.
Raiton: this natural element of lightning will have close to the same effects as it does against most water based products a very conductive reaction.
Is strong against:
Katon: this natural element will have little to no effect on coolants as there boiling points are so high the only longstanding flame which could dimish the coolants and evaporate them would be that of amaterasu. but during thus would cause a vapour that would be deadly to both the user and the enemy.
Futon: this natural element will have only one effect on coolants and that is to move them around making them spread to other area's. a shot of coolant can easily penetrate through a wall of wind being that it is high viscosity.
Ice: due too the low freezing point's of coolants they will have the upper hand to combat against ice being that it transfers heat extremely. the coolant to combat the ice it has properties against freezing all together.
Co-creator: Nathan

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: I don't see an element here. You should only give a few words, at best a few sentences when you explain on what it's based and you give an entire scientifical background which I don't need. Then you are supposed to prove your CE exists, but you only restrict yourself to pointing out that coolants might exact, however you never specified which coolant as coolant on itself is just a term. And then you give again a scientifical explanation about controlling sugars and chemicals in your body, however for that you need to be a med nin. I don't see any element here, I don't see anything concrete.

Custom element Japanese name: Futoueki

Custom element English name: Antifreeze
The element is based on:Suiton/ Raiton


Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
many times refrigerators and or cooler's and even back up generators have been shown or talked about in naruto to store food and or beverages and or backup power. it can be easily said that antifreeze and freon are definetly shown in naruto by this aspect alone because you cannot have a fridge or generator that does not use antifreeze. but i will go one step further stating that many oils have been shown as well meaning that anitfreeze is a sure bet too be seen as an element. although i am not going into the oil aspect it is well known that oil is a coolant of sorts because of its chemical compounds and viscosity.

How it works:
the user begins by using his Suiton and Raiton to charge the liquid and change the properties of the liquid while inside the users body into antifreeze. the suiton gives the extra liquid needed to use this element in a liquid form while the lightning is used to change the ph and add viscosity and corrosiveness qualities to the element . once moulded the user can use handsigns to acieve the desired effect the user chooses such as freon based chemical sucking the heat out of the atomosphere and or antifreeze which has high boiling points, low freezing points and won't break down. the user can also use handsigns and the chakra's needed to naturally form coolants from the earth using most organic compounds wich can be found throughout the narutoverse lands. these coolants can only be used in liquid forms by a user and the user cannot in any way manipulate gaseous forms upon heated contact of the elements. the liquids can be made in any desired colors with the proper tintings and pigments used. both forms of these coolants will be in a super heated form but not boiling due to using lightning in the process of making the element it also works to heat the liquid.
Usage Examples:
(Futoueki gouben ) antifreeze pool.
Rank: A
Type: supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user forms two handsigns and utilizing his or her's chakra's they are able to form anywhere on the ground a pool of antifreeze which is in boiling state. this pool acts as a source of antifreeze for other jutsu's to be used it is no bigger then a small pond. being in boiling state this pool cannot be evaporated as it has a higher boiling point then most liquids.

Conditions to be able to use it:
mastery of Suiton
mastery of Raiton
Kage rank or higher to achieve proper control of such a high viscosity element.
Is weak to:
Suiton: this natural element will highly dilute the coolant compounds making them less effective in all area's.
Raiton: this natural element of lightning will have close to the same effects as it does against most water based products a very conductive reaction.
Is strong against:
Katon: this natural element will have little to no effect on coolants as there boiling points are so high the only longstanding flame which could dimish the coolants and evaporate them would be that of amaterasu. but during thus would cause a vapour that would be deadly to both the user and the enemy.
Futon: this natural element will have only one effect on coolants and that is to move them around making them spread to other area's. a shot of coolant can easily penetrate through a wall of wind being that it is high viscosity.
Ice: due too the low freezing point's of coolants they will have the upper hand to combat against ice being that it transfers heat extremely. the coolant to combat the ice it has properties against freezing all together.
Co-creator:

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

edits include rewriting how its made and what its based on along with shown in the manga.

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✗ Declined: Same comment as last time, you have nothing concrete and as a result this is simply messy. To explain an element you need to know exactly what it is, if you don't know what it is, the explanation of it will not make much sense. You are talkinga bout antifreeze, freon, coolants... but you have many types of antifreeze and coolants. You say you use lightning on water to make it corrosive and viscous, that explanation alone I'm not really getting, but what is now exactly corrosive and viscous? Then you start talking about waving handseals, which is something for jutsu, not the explanation of the element itself. Handseals are for shape manipulation, but the characteristics should be inherently to the element. Finally I don't get the impression you understand exactly what this all is as antifreeze does not control the temperature of things, it makes it so that certain substances, mainly liquids, don't freeze/boil/evaporate when in conditions they normally would.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Vibraniumton
Custom element English name: Vibranium Release
The element is based on: Earth + Fire
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

In the Narutoverse there is always something new coming to the light. For an example Admantine being a ficitional metal that isn't a real element. If we didn't see Adamantine in the first series of Naruto we probably wouldn't believe it would be in the manga at all because of where it started out at.

Vibranium is another fictional metal that isn't a real element. I wanted to make an metal that was unique to its self and a defense element also. With Adamantine being the counter part basically of Vibraninum I went with it(this is kind of the truth in other mangaa/comics). Adamantine is the offensive version but Vibranium can still be used as an offense just like Adamantinu can be used as a defense.

Vibranium is a metal that can't be made from the ground but only from the user. The user can only make techniques from his body and only his body. This is similar to that of the Mangekyo Sharingan technique, Amaterasu. The Mangekyo Sharingan basically uses their fire nature and makes an advance version of fire on an object they look at and it forms on that object. Now Vibranium is the opposite though. It doesn't need looking or anything just the user chakra and the user body. The user forms a weapon or a defensen from their body like a shield from their hand or body dense.

Vibranium is also another variation of Earth Style just like other metals, Lava(variations included), Mud, Crystal, etc.

Vibranium has its owe unique charactstic but the color of it is just silver. Vibranium makes its self unique besides how dense it is to other metals is its body type to absorb impact of objects hitting it, absorb vibration and force from explosions.

How it works:

The user basically use their earth and fire chakra to create a new chakra which is Vibranium chakra. The user can create from just a weapon from their body by having it extend from their body. The user can make a layer form onlong their skin. The user can make an object like a pair of wings form from their body and be used like normal wings.

Usage Examples:

Vibranium Release: Shield of America
Rank: B
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points:
Description: The user holds his hand out which ever one and focus his vibranium chakra to it. He releases it out forming into a circular silver shield with a carve of a five point star on it.

Vibranium Release: Layer of Scales
Rank: B
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description : The user releases out on a layer of skin or the whole body vibranium chakra forming it into a silver layer of Scales in the shape of snake scales or any kind of animal scales. The scales absorbs the impact of an explosion or even if a explosive tag is on the user the tag is on top of the vibranium scales.

Conditions to be able to use it:
-Completed Earth and Fire chakra
-Chakra Control
-Large Chakra Reserves
Is weak to:
-Lightning(CE variations of Lightning included)
-Wind(CE Variations of Wind included)
-CE Fire variations
-Scorch
-Storm
-Adamantine
-Diamonds
-Explosive Release
Is strong against:
-Water(CE variations of Water included)
-Fire
-Earth(CE variations of Earth included)
-Sound
-Dust Release
-Wood(variations: Roots, Plants, Mushrooms included)
-Decay
-Steel(any CE with lower density)
-Kaguya
Co-creator:
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Do not resubmit this. This was also submitted during the last cycle, so I really don't get why this got submitted instantly by someone else. You have zero proof this CE exists and that adamantine and vibranium have such a relationship would even be in its own series very controversial, let alone in another verse that has absolutely no relation whatsoever with the one you are thinking of. Unlike vibranium adamantine actually has mentioned since the Ancient Greeks.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Numaton
Custom element English name: Swamp Release
The element is based on: Water + Earth
Rather than being based on literal "swamps", Numaton is instead based on the liquefaction of solid elements and structures.
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the manga, there are two major instances where liquefaction occurs. The first is in the usage of Earth Style by both Hiruzen Sarutobi and Jiraiya. Hiruzen used his Earth Style to create mud, a liquid form of earth, which he then manipulated at will, controlling it almost as one would control Water Style. Jiraiya's usage of Earth Style to cause liquefaction is in his usage of Swamp of the Underworld, forming a literal swamp by liquifying the ground beneath a giant snake, creating a quicksand-like trap to restrict the summon. In both of these instances, earth was liquified into a mud-like substance. The second instance where liquefaction occurs in the manga is in Kabuto's fight with Sasuke and Itachi. By copying the Hozuki clan's Liquification, or Hydrification Technique (I suppose the fact that there is a clan which turns their bodies into water is also a fair example), and presumably by utilizing some medical knowledge as well, Kabuto can force liquefactive necrosis in a technique he calls "Body Fluid Shedding". Kabuto uses this technique to liquify his body, but to a lesser extent than the Hozuki clan as he uses his body fluids to create a "chakra-infused liquid" which he can leave behind like a snake shedding its skin. In liquefactive necrosis, cells become dehydrated by hydrolytic enzymes, which reduces them to pus and the fluid remains of necrotic tissue; this is the liquefaction of the cells of the human body. Kabuto's case not only displays that chakra can be used to force the liquefaction of solid, organic matter, but it also displays that chakra can force objects which don't normally liquify, as liquefactive necrosis generally only occurs in the brain and lungs, to enter a liquid state.
In short, the usage of mud and Swamp of the Underworld by Hiruzen and Jiraiya proves that inorganic matter can be liquified with chakra, and Kabuto's usage of the Body Fluid Shedding Technique proves that organic matter can be liquified - which is normally called fermentation (while on the topic, while a weak example, as alcohol exists in the Naruto World, and alcohol is created via fermentation, it further proves the existence of the concept of this element: liquefaction) - even if it would not, under normal circumstances, be able to be reduced to a liquid state, via fermentation, liquefactive necrosis, or otherwise (ie. forced liquefaction via chakra).
How it works: Numaton is a rather simple element, comparable to Ranton in creation and usage. The user simply combines their Earth and Water chakras, which creates the Numaton chakra. Unlike Ranton, Numaton cannot be created from seemingly nowhere, and all techniques either require the user to spit out a brown liquid, or to have contact with the ground to transform the earth, or whatever the user is in contact with, into this brown swamp-like fluid (referred to in techniques as "swamp fluid"), which is the physical form of Numaton. In the same way that Ranton has been described as "lightning which flows like water", Numaton is, in essence, Doton's ability to create and control mud from earth - it's liquefaction ability - given a fluid and physical form in the Suiton side of the element. When the swamp fluid of Numaton comes into contact with a solid element or structure, it causes said element to reduce down to a liquified version of itself (this is not melting as melting implies an increase in heat; this is the forced liquefaction of elements via chakra without temperature change), losing the ability to be controlled by the original user (this is, of course, if the Numaton technique is of a rank where it overpowers the technique it comes in contact with, much like how Suiton extinguishes Katon unless there is a large enough rank difference for the fire to overpower the water). When Numaton reacts with other elements that are not solid, it simply acts as a normal liquid element, much like water.
Usage Examples:

Rank: A
Type: Defense | Supplementary | Attack
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user weaves three handseals and spits out twenty small spheres, about the same size as one's big toe, of swamp fluid which then begin to circle him at different angles at high speeds. The spheres created a spherical net of moving swamp fluid which can intercept nearly any incoming attack and liquify it, reducing the damage done to the user to be negligible. Even if the attack isn't of a solid element, but is of a rank which could be overpowered or negated by this technique, it acts as a basic defense. The user may choose to create openings or other areas the spheres do not go within the seemingly-random orbit in order to allow an ally to enter the defense or to not liquify the ground they stand on. If the user comes within close-range of his opponent, the ever-spinning sphere of swamp fluid will harm and liquify them.
Note: ~Can only be used twice per battle



Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user begins by holding a weapon of their choice. They will then channel their Numaton chakra through the weapon, liquifying it and turning it into a special version of the brown swamp fluid. The user can then manipulate the swamp fluid with their chakra, causing it to move around, seemingly on its own, without the need of hand gestures or other movement. Like the stretching of Nara shadows, the further the swamp fluid travels, the thinner it becomes. While this swamp fluid created by liquifying a weapon doesn't liquify other objects it comes into contact with, the user can return the weapon back to its original state, albeit smaller and longer, either as a whole, or in part to create a sharp tip on the end of a malleable, whip-like fluid rope, for example.
Note: ~Short weapons such as kunai, tonto, nunchaku, daggers, etc. can all reach up to mid-range. Longer weapons such as full-length katanas, staffs, nagiantas, etc. can all reach into long-range.


Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery over the Water and Earth elements
Is weak to: Water (not only can a liquid not be liquified, but the water also dilutes the liquifying properties of Numaton, making it a natural weakness) and Lightning (not only does Swamp Fluid conduct Raiton, but the properties of lightning diffuse the liquifying element of the Doton component of Numaton, rendering the element useless)
Is strong against: Earth and other Solid Elements, whether organic or inorganic (including solid structures which may not be an element, such as weapons)
Co-creator: N/A
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: This is just mud where you added the ability that it somehow liquifies solids it touches which, despite that entire explanation, was not proven.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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Custom element Japanese name: Mueton

Custom element English name: Coal Release

The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Advanced Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
The user is capable of either forming coal by pulling it out of the surrounding earth or from their body. Earth, already a significant element in the Narutoverse, coal is simply a highly combustible piece of earth. On missions, if there were no Fire element user, the usage of small lumps of coal as long as you have at least a pair, would enable the personnel to create a source of fire. A downfall to the usage of coal itself is that if another person were to get a hold of it before it was ignited, they could use it just as effectively as the user. Not able to manipulate/create it the way the original user could, but if they are able to successfully block the technique before it is ignited, pick it up as it were but a rock. Since coal is a fossil fuel the villages used it as a way to fuel fires for cook like when Asuma took his team to the BBQ there was coal use to cook the food.

How it works:
Coal is an ignitable/combustible substance formed from metamorphic rock (rock subjected to extreme pressure and heat that changes its form and properties) of the earth and dead plant matter inside of it. Focused lightning simply cuts and travels too fast through the coal to ignite it as fire would. The coal when created or pulled from the ground, shakes loose large amounts of Coal dust can be ignited by friction, static discharges, hot surfaces, and fire. Coal dust unlike normal coal is highly explosive rather than flammable. Lingering deposits of coal dust can lead to explosions. Dust explosions are caused by the rapid combustion of flammable debris residing on the floor or suspended in the air.

Coal can be ignited through various means, however it is not as readily ignited as oil or other volatile substances. Furthermore, once ignited it is also easily extinguished. By rubbing two pieces of coal together, the user can utilize this friction to generate a spark. Static discharges (unfocused lightning) and Fire can also be used ignite the coal. Coal itself is a flammable not a explosive material. When ignited, the coal will be slow burning, smouldering hot and coated in a layer of blazing blue fire.

Usage Examples:
(Mueton: Kasuibakuha)- Coal Release: Spike Explosion
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will pull coal from the ground, creating two spikes of coal which stab into the opponent then cross/connect and cause a spark between them, which then ignites the two coal spikes. The aflame coal spikes burn with a bright blue flame.

(Mueton: Kasuibakuha)- Coal Release: Dark Armed Dragon
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+20 to Taijutsu)
Description: The user will create an armour of coal in a the shape of a humanoid dragon. While this armour is active, the only elements the user can use are Coal, Fire and Earth.
Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Earth | Mastery of Fire | Great Chakra Control

Is weak to:
Fire and Lava Release (and all variants) - Coal only serves to augment the flames of these elements.

Lightning Release (and all variants) - The sheer penetrative capabilities are capable of cutting through coal.

All Metal Elements - Much harder than coal. Capable of breaking through and shattering it

Is strong against:
Earth Release - Coal is much harder than normal rock.

Water Release (and certain liquid-based elements) - Coal's earth-like properties allow it to overpower and dissipate the force of both of these elements. This elemental strength also includes Rain, Foam, Amber and Oil.

Co-creator: Korra

Students I passed this custom element on too: -Tauburn- and LonelyAssassin

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✗ Declined: See, this why you need to explain everything in your words. Dust explosions occur in small, closed spaces which are often also dry. The bit of coal dust that comes of when you create your jutsu, which will not be much unlike what you claim, will be dispersed into the open air. So what you say is not true. I can still go for the comparison with the mist jutsu of suiton, however that's one specific jutsu. You will not be able to create a dust explosion just from your regular jutsu. Secondly anthracite coal burns blue and it's only a very short flame and it's very difficult to ignite it, which is contradictory to what is written here. So all that blue doesn't belong here as regular coal burns red. For the record you don't have any control over those flames and it consumes your element, if you are making jutsu that automatically set it on fire, your own jutsu is consuming itself from the start.

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Custom element Japanese name: Mueton

Custom element English name: Coal Release

The element is based on: Earth + Fire + Advanced Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
The user is capable of either forming coal by pulling it out of the surrounding earth or from their body. Earth, already a significant element in the Narutoverse, coal is simply a highly combustible piece of earth. On missions, if there were no Fire element user, the usage of small lumps of coal as long as you have at least a pair, would enable the personnel to create a source of fire. A downfall to the usage of coal itself is that if another person were to get a hold of it before it was ignited, they could use it just as effectively as the user. Not able to manipulate/create it the way the original user could, but if they are able to successfully block the technique before it is ignited, pick it up as it were but a rock. Since coal is a fossil fuel the villages used it as a way to fuel fires for cook like when Asuma took his team to the BBQ there was coal use to cook the food.

How it works:
Coal is an ignitable/combustible substance formed from metamorphic rock (rock subjected to extreme pressure and heat that changes its form and properties) of the earth and dead plant matter inside of it. Focused lightning simply cuts and travels too fast through the coal to ignite it as fire would. The coal when created or pulled from the ground, shakes loose large amounts of Coal dust can be ignited by friction, static discharges, hot surfaces, and fire. Coal dust unlike normal coal is highly explosive rather than flammable. Lingering deposits of coal dust can lead to explosions. Dust explosions are caused by the rapid combustion of flammable debris residing on the floor or suspended in the air. However, unless the surrounding environment is a relatively small enclosed space, the resultant deposits will simply be dispersed into the open air and rendered harmless.

Coal can be ignited through various means, however it is not as readily ignited as oil or other volatile substances. Furthermore, once ignited it is also easily extinguished. By rubbing two pieces of coal together, the user can utilize this friction to generate a spark. Static discharges (unfocused lightning) and Fire can also be used ignite the coal. Coal itself is a flammable not a explosive material. When ignited, the coal will be smouldering hot and coated in a layer of blazing red fire.

Usage Examples:
(Mueton: Kasuibakuha)- Coal Release: Spike Explosion
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will pull coal from the ground, creating two spikes of coal which stab into the opponent then cross/connect and cause a spark between them, which then ignites the two coal spikes. The aflame coal spikes burn with a bright red flame.

(Mueton: Kasuibakuha)- Coal Release: Dark Armed Dragon
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (+20 to Taijutsu)
Description: The user will create an armour of coal in a the shape of a humanoid dragon. While this armour is active, the only elements the user can use are Coal, Fire and Earth.
Conditions to be able to use it: Mastery of Earth | Mastery of Fire | Great Chakra Control

Is weak to:
Fire and Lava Release (and all variants) - Coal only serves to augment the flames of these elements.

Lightning Release (and all variants) - The sheer penetrative capabilities are capable of cutting through coal.

All Metal Elements - Much harder than coal. Capable of breaking through and shattering it

Is strong against:
Earth Release - Coal is much harder than normal rock.

Water Release (and certain liquid-based elements) - Coal's earth-like properties allow it to overpower and dissipate the force of both of these elements. This elemental strength also includes Rain, Foam, Amber and Oil.

Co-creator: Blake Belladona

Students I passed this custom element on too: Noni and LonelyAssassin

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I, Caliburn of the Custom Elements Bureau, by the power invested in me by Versuvio, Rei, Nexus and Zise, give you the following:

Negative Knight, our loyal member, gave on the date May 30th 2014 a request for a Patent on his custom element (Coal); after reading the submission, I decided that the submitted element satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him his rightfully earned patent on this element by the following;​

Mueton
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

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Custom element Japanese name:
Shūsoton

Custom element English name:
Bromine Release

The element is based on:
Earth/Fire/Water/High Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):
Bromine exist in the real world in the earths crust, It also exist in the depth of the sea and even in some swimming pools (For health reasons), In narutoverse we have seen more then enough earth jutsus used and huge scaled jutsus on top of that, letting us know that earth does exist in narutoverse, we have seen cases where they have been pools in naruto that can only allow us to assume, and we have seen PLENTY bodys of water, lakes, ponds, rivers, oceans. Though we have not seen specifly a sea water or fresh water type we have seen the 3 tail jin, Yagura use coral attacks, and coral is only grown in the sea, so the basis of that attack has to be used from sea water attacks. Letting us come to the conclusion that bromine indeed does exist in Narutoverse

How it works:
Bromine works in several ways, to start off the affects of bromine varries, It is a thick brownish-red color and it smells like heavy bleach. If it comes in contact with the human skin it causes irritiation, which leads to burning, which ultimatley turn into the peeling of the skin. It causes Dizzyness, Irritation to the eyes, restricts normal breathing making it harder to breath, tissue damage, vomiting, and internal damage if inhaled,Kidney failure, and severe brain damage. It corrodes organic materials such as plants, flowers, fungi, wood, etc and it corrodes metals. Bromine is also used to put out fires due to the chemicals reacting with the fire. The user will utilize their chakra and send it through the ground and mix up their chakra their to tap into the bromine in the earth crus to utilize it allowing it to be a source of bromine. Or the user will simply mix up their fire, water, and earth chakra and exhale it, or release it through the body. Using it as a medium for bromine release as well.

Usage Examples:

Bromine Release: Erupting Geyser
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user does 3 handseals and channel their bromine chakra into the ground causing the bromine to violently erupt from the ground into a 10meter pillar geyser. if the bromine pillar comes in contact with the user it will seap into the opponents skin cause real bad irritation, leaving them with severe burns on that body part it came in contact with, leaving that body part useless for 1 whole turn

Bromine Release: Bromine Vapor
Type:Attack/Sup
Rank:S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user will do 3 handseals and mix up their bromine chakra in their body and exhale it towards the enemy. The bromine vapor is very dangerous, If the opponent comes within the vapor their skin will start to burn and peel off, If the opponent is inside the vapor they can not open their eyes due to the irritation from the vapor, If inhaled through the nose our mouth the opponent will start coughing, gain a massive headache, cause dizzyness, and if nothing is done about the bromine vapor in 5 turns, the user will suffer severe brain damage, and kidney failure
:Note: This jutsu will be broken down into jutsus, just wanted to put all the affects of bromine into one jutsu for the example

Conditions to be able to use it:

-Mastery of Fire
-Mastery of Water
-Mastery of Earth

Is weak to:
Water(CE Included)- Bromine dissolves in water
Earth- Bromine cant get pass earth since it cant be corroded
Ice(CE Included)- Ice would travel through brominem not being affected
Lightning- Lightning travels through bromine,

Is strong against:
Fire(CE included)- Bromine puts out fire
Wind(CE Included)- Bromine is heavier than wind
Metals-(Bromine Corrodes Metals, leaving them useless)
Organic elements (Wood, Root, Mushroom, Plant Ets)- It corrodes organic materials as well leaving them uesless

Co-creator: Teño

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: This is is why I personally don't consider such individual chemicals as real elements. Bromine isn't that common so just searching for it in the earth is already quite a stretch when there is barely or maybe even none in proximity and I find the explanation that you just mix three chakra natures and have very shallow when it comes down to something so specific.

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Custom element Japanese name: Shusoton

Custom element English name: Bromine Release

The element is based on: Water + Fire + Earth + Advanced Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): In the real world, Bromine exists both in the Earth's Crust and in large bodies of water. Its most commonly found along with Iodine in algae and seaweeds. These subterranean plant-like structures must exist since Yagura (Jinchuuriki of the Three Tails) has displayed the ability to utilize Coral, something found solely in the deepest regions of seas and oceans. In reality, Coral and seaweeds co-exist in the same regions, so the existence of one highly suggests the occurrence of the other. Additionally, because one of Itachi's favorite foods is onigiri with seaweed, this proves that seaweed, which commonly contains Bromine, exists in the Naruto world, further implying the existence of bromine.

To add further veracity to this claim, the ash of seaweed was once a popular source of obtaining bromine.

How it works: Bromine is created through the simultaneous usage of the Fire, Water and Earth natures and can only be created from the user's body. The water acts as its base and gives it its liquid state, the Fire grants it its corrosive quality (in a similar manner to how it acts in Boil Release) while the earth makes it a dense, heavy and dark coloured mixture. It is a thick, fuming, red-brown coloured liquid which smells like bleach since it belongs to the Halogen group. It is also slightly soluble in water but not enough so to be weak to Water Release.

Its highly effective at corroding organic materials such as skin, plants and fungi as well as certain metallic elements. Against living beings, this corrosive quality usually materializes itself in the form of caustic wounds (chemical burns). Bromine (in relatively small quantities) reacts violently with the alkali metals (Sodium, Potassium, Francium), earth metals (Magnesium, Calcium, etc) and other certain metals (Aluminum, Iron, Boron, Steel and etc). This reactivity isn't restricted to metallic elements as Bromine has been seen to interact quite violently with non metals such as Phosphorous and Sulphur. When Bromine is evaporated into its gaseous state, inhalation of the produced vapour will cause dizziness, irritation to the eyes and restrict normal breathing (wheezing). Naturally, the user has no control of Bromine in its gaseous state.

Video Example of Bromine's Reactivity (Check 0:57 onwards)
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Usage Examples:
(Shusoton: ) – Bromine Release: Corrosive Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews a wave of bromine at the opponent. If it comes into contact with them, it will begin corroding their clothes, skin and subsequently flesh.

(Shusoton: ) – Bromine Release: Sizzling Monster
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user spews a mass of bromine which swiftly forms into a large golem-like creature which is corrosive to touch.
Is weak to:
Lightning Release (and all other CE variants) - Lightning is capable of ionizing Bromine, meaning the user can no longer manipulate it.

Fire Release (and all other CE Variants) - Bromine has a very low boiling point, so heat-based elements can easily vaporize it into its gaseous state. Essentially, any element that's hotter than 58 degrees Celsius will be strong to bromine. This includes: Steam, Sun Fire, Hell Fire, Scorch, White Fire, Violet Flame, Arid, Sulphur, Lava, Blazing Earth, Solar Wind, Tar, Wax, Temperature, Volcanic Water and Volcanic Ash.

All Crystal Elements - Crystals are neither reactive with Bromine nor are they susceptible to its corrosiveness.
Is strong against:
Earth Release (and some other variants) – Bromine is highly corrosive, thus allowing it to readily eat through several earthen materials. It will also corrode Kayuga Bones, Phosphorous, Marshmallows, Chocolate, Caramel, Bubblegum and Rubber.

Some Metal Elements – Certain metals are easily corroded, oxidized and/or react vigorously with relatively small amounts of bromine. These metals include: Aluminum, Boron, Iron, Iron Sand, Steel, Magnesium Dust, Calcium, Gallium, and Francium.

Wood Release and Plant-like elements – Bromine’s corrosive qualities means it can easily devour organic matter. This means it's strong to all plant-based CEs, including: Plant Release, Mushroom Release and Root Release.

Conditions to be able to use it
Mastery of Water| Mastery of Earth | Mastery of Fire | Great Chakra Control​

Co-creator: Negative Knight

Students I passed this custom element on too: Venom & Noni

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✗ Declined: Overall it's decent, however the same comment of last time still applies and that is that the explanation you gave of how you make it is not sufficient, it's too simple for something like bromine. Elemental bromine doesn't even exist as an element in nature, it's created in laboratories based on bromide salts or something, which can be found in nature. Your explanation comes down to that earth is a solid, water a liquid and water and fire is corrosive and then you get bromine. That's far to simple, who says that combining those elements like that will give you bromine? Something like that works for very common things like lava, saying earth + fire is enough, but not something that comes out of a lab. There is nothing that ties it to that element, you need to give an explanation as why that would create bromine. You would need to find a reasoning based on how these bromide salts are created in nature and how you can create bromine from that. Using your explanation you could easily have some kind of hot mud.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau



Custom element Japanese name:Shinjiru
Custom element English name:Tin
The element is based on:Earth+Fire+chakra manipulation
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Tin is a chemical element found on planet earth, it is abbreviated by the initials Sn and has a total of 50 atomic numbers. It is one of the most versatile elements in existence and is extremely malleable and is used in things such as making of cans and wielding. Tin is also used as an alloy to prevent corrosions and rusting in metallic objects.

1. Tin unlike many other elements resists corrosion and is used primarily in the coating of metallic objects as mentioned above such metallic objects range from the shirukens,kunais and katanas,plates which have all been shown in naruto.

2. Window glasses which have shown to exist in naruto are made primary with the usage of tin in a process called Pilkington process. This is a process where molten glass is poured into molten tin and allowed to dry, later forming solid glass with flat parallel surfaces.

3. Tin is used as anti-fouling paint for ships,boats and submarines to prevent barnacle which are clinging sea organisms that attach itself to rock and ships to draw food from them, and the existence of boats has been shown

4. Pure tin is used in the creation of perforated lanterns and candle shields which have been shown in naruto, it is also used for fire protections of wooden doors and shutters.

What makes tin so unique and separates it from most metals is its ability to resist corrosion's and rust which surpasses other metallic elements like lead and its unlike other metals which easily begin to decompose and rust under certain atmospheric conditions.

How it works:Tin is gotten and refined from the earth surface. It is done By the utilization of the users earth chakra and fire chakra. By using ones earth chakra one drills deep into the earth crust until traces of tin are located, however the tin is impure and is contaminated with several impurities, so the use of fire is employed ,which acts as a heat source to drive away the impurities allowing for proper cultivation of the metal. It can also be created internally from the body of the user by combining both their earth and fire chakra along with chakra manipulation to create solid tin.

Usage Examples:
(Suzu sutairu: Mondai no sakusei)Tin Style:Creation of matter
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Arank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user utilizes his earth and fire chakra simultaneously to create tools and objects made out of tin to aid him in battle. The said tools can range from staffs and swords, to earth slabs or golems that may pose offensive threats to the user.

(Suzu sutairu: Buruzu no jikkō)Tin Style: Running bulls
Type: Supplementary
Rank: Arank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user focuses on his earth chakra and brings forth tin from the ground surface in the form of racing bulls which run and attack their opponents. The bulls are made of tin and can withstand physical contact/force before being destroyed. They are able to be used according to the users discretion and judgement, but when hit by lightning or any earth will decompose and turn back to tin.

(Suzu sutairu: Buriki otoko)Tin Style:Tin Man
Type: Defense
Rank: S rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description:Similar to gaara ultimate defense technique. The user of this jutsu performs the dog hand seal and channels his tin chakra around his whole body bringing forth an armor made of tin that encases his body from head to toe and is capable of defending him against attacks. The armor follows the guidelines of elemental weaknesses and strengths and thus can only defend against earth and lightning techniques up to a rank. However due to its strengths it can defend against forbidden rank fire and water techniques after which it completely crumbles and breaks down.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery of earth
Mastery of fire
The user must be kage rank

Is weak to:Earth and lightning: Being a very ductile element it is capable of being easily bent or shaped and so can be easily torn to shreds and ripped apart by electric current or by solid hardened matter such as earthen materials.
Is strong against: Fire and water.[It has a very high melting point 231.93 °C and is highly resistant to heat. It also resist corrosion from distilled sea and soft tap water and is insoluble in water.
Co-creator:N/A
Students I passed this custom element on too: N/A


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✗ Declined: Just another metal, the reason you gave that makes it 'uniques' is a very shallow one and seems to be thrown in there for the specific purpose of passing my policy on elements like these.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Teruton
Custom element English name: Stibnite Release
The element is based on: Fire, Earth, and Water
Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Stibnite is a chemical compound of Antimony and Sulfur which results in blade-like metallic crystal, and is the primary ore of Antimony. These crystals are commonly deposited by alkaline waters and occur in association with quartz, a very common crystal which makes up a majority of sand, which is already seen in the manga. Stibnite itself, however, is often formed when water dissolves antimony and sulfur from surrounding rocks, normally near an area with volcanic activity, and then passes through limestone deposits where the dissolved elements condense and fall out of solution to form Stibnite crystals.
With the existence of Lava Release and the Quicklime Technique, we can see that the Narutoverse at least has the same name for substances like these as our world does. From there, Limestone and Lava, a volcano and volcanic activity is not a far jump, as nearly all elements from the Narutoverse are based on natural phenomenon (earth, water, wind, magnetism, wood, etc.), and as such these things should have a tenancy to exist in nature, at least somewhere. And it would be in these volcanic areas that Stibnite would form naturally through the process described above (the Narutoverse and our world are so close to each other in terms of physics and chemicals, they really shouldn't be distinguished from each other this way). It is because of this that the forced creation and manipulation of these metallic crystals, much like how Guren's Crystals are used, is plausible.

How it works: In the Ninja World, one is able to remove the "time" aspect, as well a few other variables, by substituting chakra, as seen a plethora of times throughout the series (most primarily in Mokuton by growing trees rapidly). By doing this, a person is capable of manipulating the minerals in the earth so as to isolate Antimony, as well as moisture and Sulfur within the ground to create an aqueous solution, in tandem, allowing them to combine these two chemicals into the most common ore of Antimony, Stibnite.
Stibnite is a rather toxic mineral, taking the appearance of silver crystals. Because of its misleading appearance, it was once used as silverware, though the terrible food-poisoning the Stibnite utensils caused resulted in death. Because of this, when Stibnite pierces the body and causes a wound, an infection begins to spread through the victim causing severe pain in the infected area, hallucinations, and vomiting.
Stibnite's composition also makes it rather vulnerable to static charges, causing it to explode weakly when exposed to a large enough electrical charge. Stibnite also burns white, which makes it useful in firework displays. Despite this, Stibnite is a poor conductor of both electricity and heat.
Much like many earth techniques can do with rocks, chakra control can be used to grow Stibnite from the skin of the user. Outside of growing Stibnite crystals from the skin, the user is capable of drawing the crystals up from the ground through the method described above.

Usage Examples:
(Teruton: Shi no Ken) Stibnite Release: Death Sword
Type: Offense | Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will release a crystal of Stibnite from their hand, the crystal taking a sharpened version of its natural form, which is often noted to very very much like a sword in appearance. They will then wield the blade of Stibnite like a normal sword. If the sword cuts the enemy, the sword will infect the wound with Stibnite's natural toxicity, slowing their reaction speed with every passing turn as the Stibnite's toxin spreads through the body to the brain, affecting the nervous system.
Note: ~Every two turns after being cut, if the toxin is not removed, the target will have their reaction speed dropped one rank
Conditions to be able to use it: Must have mastery of Fire, Water, and Earth
Is weak to: Earth (harder than Stibnite) and Lightning (causes Stibnite to weakly explode, akin to a firecracker)
Is strong against: Fire (Stibnite is a poor conductor of heat), and Water
Co-creator: noni1997
Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?
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✗ Declined: My current problem is what makes this now so special from other metals/crystals (not sure as which of the two I need to consider Stibnite)? I think you are overreacting with the whole toxic stuff, if people used it as tableware, it can't be that toxic as you make it out to be. I mean even apple seeds are supposed to be toxic and I read on wiki that it's potentially toxic. Also if you stab a person with a regular metal, you by default run the risk of infection and even death if not treated properly. So as I understand it's not something 100% certain and, unless a battle drags out really long, I doubt someone could die of infection. Not to mention normally he should already be dead if you succeed in just stabbing him. So overall what makes it now so special from other existing elements?



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Custom element Japanese name: Teruton

Custom element English name: Stibnite Release

The element is based on: Earth and Fire

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Stibnite is a chemical compound of Antimony and Sulfur, the primary ore of Antimony, which results in blade-like metallic crystal. These crystals are commonly deposited by alkaline waters and occur in association with quartz, a very common crystal which makes up a majority of sand, which is already seen in the manga. Stibnite itself, however, is often formed when water dissolves antimony and sulfur from surrounding rocks, normally near an area with volcanic activity, and then passes through limestone deposits where the dissolved elements condense and fall out of solution to form Stibnite crystals.

With the existence of Lava Release and the Quicklime Technique, we can see that the Narutoverse at least has the same name for substances like these as our world does. From there, Limestone and Lava, a volcano and volcanic activity is not a far jump, as nearly all elements from the Narutoverse are based on natural phenomenon (earth, water, wind, magnetism, wood, etc.), and as such these things should have a tenancy to exist in nature, at least somewhere. And it would be in these volcanic areas that Stibnite (the Narutoverse and our world are so close to each other in terms of physics and chemicals, they really shouldn't be distinguished from each other this way) would form naturally through the process described above. It is because of this that the forced creation and manipulation of these metallic crystals, much like Guren's Crystals, is plausible.

How it works:

In the Ninja World, one is able to remove the "time" aspect, as well a few other variables, by substituting chakra, as seen a plethora of times throughout the series (most primarily in Mokuton by growing trees rapidly). By doing this, a person is capable of manipulating the minerals in the earth so as to isolate Antimony, as well as moisture and Sulfur within the ground to create an aqueous solution, in tandem, allowing them to combine these two chemicals into the most common ore of Antimony, Stibnite.

Stibnite is a rather toxic mineral, taking the appearance of silver crystals. Because of its misleading appearance, it was once used as silverware, though the terrible food-poisoning the Stibnite utensils caused resulted in death. Because of this, when Stibnite pierces the body and causes a wound, an infection begins to spread through the victim causing severe pain in the infected area, hallucinations, and vomiting. The larger the wound, the more impact-ful and dangerous it can be towards the opponent, this is because more toxins entered the body.

The structural being of stibnite is quite unique. It has the basic appearance of a silver crystal. Stibnite is transparent allowing light to go through the structure so the object behind can be seen. In most cases stibnite is quite smooth, however there are sources of stibnite where needle like crystals, jag out of the body, which are extremely sharp and can easily pierce through the body. This can be done through a basic release and shape manipulation. Stibnite is however a weak overall structure, especially against earth like material which would easily shatter the construct. In actual cases, Stibnite is highly flexible, especially for a mineral. Being able to absorb impact and bend in structure, it is not as much so where it is an elastic mineral but is flexible, but usually when flexibility of the mineral is stretched to the max above its restriction, it will shatter/break.

Stibnite's composition also makes it rather vulnerable to static charges, causing it to explode weakly when exposed to a large enough electrical charge, however an explosion can be larger, this depends on the size of the stibnite structure and the rank of the lightning. Stibnite also burns white, which makes it useful in firework displays. The burning effect would also release the sulfide mineral into the air, appearing as white smoke, being quite toxic; breathing it in would cause internal damage as explained above, only difference is the method for the sulfide material to enter the body the effects stay similar. The gas is quite thin (still visible), and lurks in the air for a small duration of time before it is released into the atmosphere and out of harms way. To sum up, Stibnite is a poor conductor of heat (the only way to burn the stibnite material is by higher rank or else it will withstand the heat) but is extremely sensitive to electrical discharges which causes such explosions.

Much like many earth techniques can do with rocks, chakra control can be used to grow Stibnite from the skin of the user. Outside of growing Stibnite crystals from the skin, the user is capable of drawing the crystals up from the ground through the method described above.

Usage Examples:
(Teruton: Shi no Ken) Stibnite Release: Death Sword
Type: Offense | Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will release a crystal of Stibnite from their hand, the crystal taking a sharpened version of its natural form, which is often noted to very very much like a sword in appearance. They will then wield the blade of Stibnite like a normal sword. If the sword cuts the enemy, the sword will infect the wound with Stibnite's natural toxicity, slowing their reaction speed with every passing turn as the Stibnite's toxin spreads through the body to the brain, affecting the nervous system.
Note: ~Every two turns after being cut, if the toxin is not removed, the target will have their reaction speed dropped one rank

Conditions to be able to use it: Must have mastery of Fire and Earth

Is weak to:
Lightning and Earth (And other CE variants)- Wood, Crystal, Storm, Sand, Dust, Steel, Blast.
Is strong against:
Fire and Wind (And other CE Variants)- Dark, Scorch, Boil, Steam, Magnetism, Sound, Lava.

Co-creator: Sharingdork

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: Same comments as last time. My remarks about the toxicity were to point out that in practice it seems nothing special, so adding the comment 'the larger the wound' is rather irrelevant and so is all the stuff about the toxic gas. It's not that common that a fire jutsu is burning another jutsu completely, when it destroys an earth jutsu it's not like that by default there will be lava and such a cloud would be as bad for you as it would be for the opponent. In the end this still doesn't have anything worthwhile of considering this a new CE. The only thing you go on about is the flexibility, however in practice even that didn't make any difference following our own explanation.

 
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Re: Custom Elements Bureau

Custom element Japanese name: Koruton

Custom element English name: Cork Release

The element is based on: Earth + Water + Advance Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Cork is natured in tree's trunks, because of this, it is widely abundant. Need to say, trees and forests are also abundant in the Naturoverse, there existance is obvious as it's been shown more than I can count in the manga. The fact that Hashirama can manipulate wood leads us to believe that not only wood, but the actual properties and materials that comform trees can also be used as an element. Cork production is generally considered sustainable due to the fact that the entire cork tree is not harvested; merely its bark. The tree continues to live and grow. This provides a source for Cork techniques, although they can also be produced from the user's body. This in no way implies that the can manipulate or have any influence over wood, but merely cork, which is found in trees.

How it works: Yellow & Brown in color, and can become as soft and pliable. Cork is an impermeable, buoyant material, a prime-subset of bark tissue. Cork is composed of suberin, a hydrophobic substance, and because of its impermeability, buoyancy, elasticity and fire resistance, it is a rather versatile element. Useable by manipulating the consistancy of the user's water chakra and introduce Earth chakra into it creating the base of the element and adding the elasticity due to the use of sticky liquid (Similiar to Suiton: Syrup Capture Field) mixed with the earth's mud like substance. More earth chakra will then be infused to harden it into the full fleshed Cork material. Cork can otherwise be used directly from nearby matured trees, which will provide a source for Cork techniques. Chakra control is an important key, as it allows the control and amount of elemental chakra being used to form the cork and then to maintain it's shape and properties. In essence, Cork is a solid, hard and elastic material, as formerly said in the way it's created. Cork is by defenition commonly emerged from the body (either by mouth or as an extension of the body) of the user as a mud-like substance (except elastic, denser, and harder than mud) and then almost instantly hardens into it's final form with the focused earth chakra. Cork is used in a fashion where it can range from mere cork bullet-like projectiles, to large walls. Going as far as using it supplementary in one's body to improve physical and close combat attributes. Cork's elasticity combined with its near-impermeability makes it suitable as a material to counter water and fire based techniques. Cork's resilient ability to bounce back from impressions means that most objects will not leave dents in its surface.

Usage Examples:
(Koruton: ?? ) - Cork Release: Blessing of Hua
Type:
Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: Using Cork, the user would give creation to a set of tools with the activation being a handseal (Ram). Be it for defensive, offensive, or supplementary purposes: Such as spewing forward a mass of Cork onto the target's hands, which would then harden into a pair of hand-cuffs made of Cork. The user would also be able to spew and harden a staff for close combat, or a small shield to stop regular weapon based attacks. The options are not restricted to the former examples, but rather to the end of the user's imagination.

(Koruton: ?? ) - Cork Release: Gray Ascension
Type:
Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 40
Description: The user would gather Cork chakra into their mouth where they would then spew out a minimum of 1 or up to 5 fist sized bullets of Cork material, successively one after another. The bullets travel at a fast pace, yet still allowing the naked eye to notice them.
Note: Usable x5 per battle.

(Koruton: ?? ) - Cork Release: Kashmir's Fading Skin
Type:
Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short (self)
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (+15 to Taijutsu)
Description: After performing 1 handseal (Horse). The user would release a burst of Cork from their body. Attaching to their skin, almost like a thin (but dense) second layer of skin. Encasing every last bit of the user's body in a cork 'armor'. While in Kashmir's Skin the user's strong fist techniques are improved +10 damage. Likewise, their physical punches and other free-form meele attacks are backed up with heavy strength. Additionally, the user is protected from blunt impacts and strong fist because of Cork's resilient ability to bounce back from impressions. With Cork's elasticity being calculated in the process of the armor being forged, it's elastic enough so as to not prevent or degrade the user's regular movement. High flexibility movements are not possible though.
Note: The user can only use Cork, Water, and Earth based techniques while active.
Note: Usable x2 per battle (must wait a 3 turn cooldown before using again).
Note: Lasts 4 turns.
Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery over Earth & Water
High level of chakra control (atleast Kage Rank)

Is weak to:
Lightning ( lightning based CE ): Lightning would rip through Cork.
Wind: Sharp wind would slice Cork with ease.
Sharp edged KG's & CE's would easily slice into Cork. (Steel, Ice, etc.)
Storm: While it can overpower water, Cork is weak to Lightning, which would make Storm rip through Cork.

Is strong against:
Water & Rain ( most water based CE/Hozuki Techniques ) - Being impermeable it can restrain water. It can also blow through equal and lower ranked water techniques with it's mass.
Fire (most fire based CE): Cork's bubble-form structure and natural fire resistance make it highly tolerable to flames.
Sound: A defense cork will act as natural insulation for a space, blocking out ambient noise. This is due to the fact that its surface is made up of millions of cells filled with air, acting as tiny sound cushions. Only strong against Sound of equal rank and below.
Dark: Like Earth, Dark cannot absorb the mass of Cork. Equally, Cork has substance and density to defend from raw forms of energy like those produced by dark release.
Scorch: Cork can't be burned or dehydrated away by the high temperatures of Scorch release.

Co-creator:

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?


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✗ Declined: Overall decently explained, however I have doubts about how you are supposed to create it as you talk about a sticky liquid, however that jutsu you are referring to is well a jutsu, meaning it's the result of shape manipulation and handseals. Then you are already passed the moment you could create an element as that should originate from your chakra, not from first using a jutsu which you then add another chakra nature to. Also I have some questions about its qualities. I don't know exactly what you mean 'in one's body to improve physical and close combat', but considering it's so flexible, it isn't really suited for close combat, in fact it's the opposite as I see it it will lower your offensive capabilities as it would diminish your own impact because of its flexibility. If you hit me with a fist covered in cork, it should have far less power than if you wild hit me with a regular fist because your own cork would absorb the impact (which is pretty much the concept of boxing gloves). If you would try to hit me with a cork staff, sorry but than I imagine some kind of comedy slapstick where the staff would just bend when it hits me rather than me taking any damage. Defensively it definitely would be good and frankly everything is dangerous if you shoot it at hundreds KM/hour, then even a toothpick is deadly, so shooting it as bullets has nothing much to do with the element, that's just a jutsu concept. Lastly I never carried a large chunk of cork, but as far as I can imagine it's very light. Yes it wouldn't let water through, but wouldn't it just be blow away by the shear force? I mean most metals don't let water through either, but they would just sink while cork I think floats on water.

Custom element Japanese name: Koruton

Custom element English name: Cork Release

The element is based on: Earth + Water + Advance Chakra Control

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context): Cork is natured in tree's trunks, because of this, it is widely abundant. Need to say, trees and forests are also abundant in the Naturoverse, there existance is obvious as it's been shown more than I can count in the manga. The fact that Hashirama can manipulate wood leads us to believe that not only wood, but the actual properties and materials that comform trees can also be used as an element. Cork production is generally considered sustainable due to the fact that the entire cork tree is not harvested; merely its bark. The tree continues to live and grow. This provides a source for Cork techniques, although they can also be produced from the user's body. This in no way implies that the can manipulate or have any influence over wood, but merely cork, which is found in trees.

How it works: Yellow & Brown in color, and can become as soft and pliable. Cork is an impermeable, buoyant material, a prime-subset of bark tissue. Cork is composed of suberin, a hydrophobic substance, and because of its impermeability, buoyancy, elasticity and fire resistance, it is a rather versatile element. Useable by manipulating the consistancy of the user's water chakra and introduce Earth chakra into it creating the base of the element, which is released in it's complete state as cork material, either expelled via the mouth, through the body, or even by channeling the Cork chakra into the ground. Cork can otherwise be used directly from nearby matured trees, which will provide a source for Cork techniques. Chakra control is an important key, as it allows the control and amount of elemental chakra being used to form the cork and then to maintain it's shape and properties. In essence, Cork is a solid, hard and elastic material, as formerly said in the way it's created. Cork is by defenition commonly emerged from the body (either by mouth or as an extension of the body). Cork is used in a fashion where it serves more supplementary/defensive use than others aspects, but still retains enough power to be used offensively. Going as far as using it supplementary in one's body to provide a defense against CQC assaults, as the blows would simply diminish the impact because of its flexibility, and absorb the force of impact. Cork's elasticity combined with its near-impermeability makes it suitable as a material to counter water and fire based techniques. Cork's resilient ability to bounce back from impressions means that most objects will not leave dents in its surface.

Usage Examples:
(Koruton: ) - Cork Release: The Hand of Castemere
Type:
Supplementary/Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses and molds his chakra, using it to create cork structures, Pillars, branches to wrap around targets, etc to defend, attack or support him. The cork material can be created from the users body or from earth sources. The objects to be created are onyl restricted to the user's imagination, since it can even be used to forge a pair of cork wings from the user's back, because of cork's flexibility and solidity, these would fuction properly, enabling flight for the user. The technique's strength and versatility depend on the amount of chakra channeled.

(Koruton: ) - Cork Release: Kingsroad
Type:
Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (-5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user waves 1 handseal. Expelling cork material from their flesh and attach it with chakra control directly onto their skin. While not visible from a distance, due to it's thin structure, up close the user gives off the appearance of being overed in cork material. This armor, which is so tight it can be considered a double skin layer, is three inches thick and completely surrounds the user's entire body, much like Spiral White Zetsu, with the exception of the mouth (which is open). Unlike most armors that have offensive capabilities, this one has an inclined favor torwards defense. Due to cork's flexibility and properties, close combat assaults which deal shear force of impact, sound wave bursts, blunt damage, and other attacks based on sole impact would not harm the user, while he would be possibly thrown off however, no damage would actually take place. As the impact would simply be absorbed and bounced back. While in this technique however, the user's own physical attributes are also weakened, given their punches and other physical assauts will also be nothing but blunt force which won't cause damage. Because of it's thin structure and flexibility, the armor doesn't hinder the user's body movement/limb movement. WHile active, the user is prompt to take more damage from lightning and wind techniques. With a single thought, the user can instantly make the armor fall off their body if wanted. The armor is otherwise and absolute defense against weapons, either regular or chakra infused (aslong as the chakra carries no rank).
Note(s):
✖ Cannot be used in consecutive turns.
✖ Usable x3 per battle.
✖ Lasts four turns.

(Koruton: ) - Cork Release: The Night Expansion
Type:
Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user gathers Koruton chakra and with a single handseal, causes any cork material on the field to rapidly and suddenly expand into a size many times bigger. This has a wide various of uses, such as expanding a small piece of cork thrown, allowing the now large piece to send a target flying to a distance with impressive force. Or otherwise used to create a large soft cork cushion in which the user can land afte falling from the sky; in order to soften the impact with it's soft and pliable structure. The ways this technique can be used is restricted only to the user's imagination. Cork techniques created by the user can also be effect by this technique.
Note(s):
✖ Usable x4 per battle.

Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery over Earth & Water
High level of chakra control (atleast Kage Rank)

Is weak to:
Lightning ( lightning based CE ): Lightning would rip through Cork.
Wind: Sharp wind would slice Cork with ease.
Sharp edged KG's & CE's would easily slice into Cork. (Steel, Ice, etc.)
Storm: While it can overpower water, Cork is weak to Lightning, which would make Storm rip through Cork.

Is strong against:
Rain - Being impermeable it can restrain water that has less impact force than the regular water element.
Fire (Regular): Cork's bubble-form structure and natural fire resistance make it highly tolerable to flames and regular heat.
Sound: A defense cork will act as natural insulation for a space, blocking out ambient noise. This is due to the fact that its surface is made up of millions of cells filled with air, acting as tiny sound cushions.
Dark: Like Earth, Dark cannot absorb the mass of Cork. Equally, Cork has substance and density to defend from raw forms of energy like those produced by dark release.
Blast (explosive ce's): Blast's explosive abilities would result futile when faced against the natural tolerance torwards heat and blunt impact that cork has.
Scorch: Cork can't be burned or dehydrated away by the high temperatures of Scorch release.

Co-creator: N/A

Students I passed this custom element on too: Anbu Junior & ?


P a t e n t C e r t i f i c a t e

I, Caliburn of the Custom Elements Bureau, by the power invested in me by Versuvio, Rei, Nexus and Zise, give you the following:​
Loki, our loyal member, gave on the date May 31st 2014 a request for a Patent on his custom element (Cork); after reading the submission, I decided that the submitted element satisfies all requirements, and am therefore giving him his rightfully earned patent on this element by the following;​

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Custom element Japanese name: Ekishō

Custom element English name: Liquid Crystal

The element is based on: Earth + Lightning

Facts that prove the element to be possible (in the manga context):

Liquid Crystal can be found in both in the natural world and technological applications. The first example of Liquid Crystals existence within the Narutoverse comes from the fact that Liquid Crystals are present in almost all electronic visual displays such as TV monitors and laptop/computer screens. These were seen to be used within the Narutoverse multiple times, with their first use being shown during the Chunnin exams when Anko used a TV monitor to observe the Suna nins. Moreover, they were also used to host long distance conversations between the 5 Daiymos in a more recent arc. In addition to that, laptops were seen to be used when monitoring CHoji’s vital signs during his operation, after his fight with Jirobo. Adding to that, a desktop computer was also used by the Konoha Cryptanalysis Team when attempting to figure out Jiraiya’s coded message.

Lyotropic liquid-crystalline phases are also found to exist within living systems. For example, many proteins and cell membranes are liquid crystals. Other examples are solutions of Soap, a form of Ninjutsu which is seen to be used by Utakata through his Bijuu. It’s also found within the tobacco mosaic virus, which, as the name states is a virus that affects tobacco. The existence of tobacco has been made clear by characters who smoke, such as Asuma Sarutobi, so it’s not too far to argue that if tobacco plants exist, then so do the viruses which would normally affect them. Lastly, Guren’s Crystal release could be used as evidence for Liquid Crystal, as it’s a crystalline structure in a different phase. However despite being practically crystal in a different phase, it differs greatly, in the same way Ice is simply a different a solid state of water but has it's own specific capabilities.

How it works:

Earth is one of the basis of this element due to the fact that Crystals are naturally occurring minerals within the Earth. With the addition of Lightning chakra, the user is able to alter the specific and rigid structure present and instead make them more loose, allowing the crystalline structures to have properties of both a liquid and a solid in that they flow as Water would be retain their hardness to a degree. The user can use this same method and apply the Lightning after having materialised the crystal by crystallising the moisture in the air. Liquid Crystals have several different phases which allows them to react to opposing elements different, with the strengths and weaknesses remaining unaffected but only changing in the way they overcome the elements which they are strong against, somewhat.
When released in a Smetic phase, the Liquid Crystals tend to be more solid, and thicker in nature whilst becoming more slippery, allowing solid objects to slide off them and struggle to grapple or grab them, when opposed. Moreover, their more solid state packs more of a punch, dealing damage to things as well as retaining their ability to crystallise them. Although weak to Lightning, when an electric current is applied to Liquid Crystal by the user, they align themselves along the direction of the electric field, due to the dipole moment of the Crystals. This allows the user to charge the immediate area either negatively or positively, and the opponent opposite to the area, causing the Liquid Crystals to attack without being directed to due to the change in the flow of electric field. However, jutsus which do this will be mentioned specifically and it's not common among all jutsus.

Main Releases
The main release allows the users of this Element to create and produce Liquid Crystals by focusing chakra into the ground through the use of Earth chakra and continuing with the addition of Lightning chakra to trigger the process required, bringing forth Liquid Crystal in a state which is to be described in each particular jutsu, allowing the user to manipulate it for further uses of his/her choice. As always, despite the different natures, the Liquid Crystals will always flow as thick and viscous water with a sort of translucent/grey colour. In addition, the user can also instead release the Crystalline structures from their bodies as many proteins and cell membranes are Liquid Crystals, and so, through the manipulation of chakra and the Earth and Lightning elements, the user is able to call forth and release Crystal structures from their bodies.

Alternative Releases
The user focus his/her chakra in a previously created source of Liquid Crystal and expands it, using it as a source for another jutsu, controlling/manipulating it how they see fit depending on the situation. The other form of alternative releases focuses on Crystallising the moisture in the air and adding Lightning chakra to it simultaneously, allowing the user to form Liquid Crystal from thin air, making it more convenient to use.

Usage Examples:

(Ekishō: Bāsuto· pūru)- Liquid Crystal Release: Burst Pool
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will release their Liquid Crystal chakra into the ground around the opponent and call forth a thick and viscous pool of LC to burst upwards, falling inwards so that the opponent is struck by the heavy flowing Crystals, the pressure dealing blunt damage whilst drowning the opponent in the thick pool of Crystals.

(Ekishō: Anima no sakusei)- Liquid Crystal Release: Anima Creation
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will release their Liquid Crystal chakra into the surrounding air and Crystallise the moisture present whilst adding their lightning chakra to it, creating floating blobs of Crystal which are shaped to look like Jelly Fish, their tentacles reaching out into mid range and being able to deal blunt damage whilst sticking to the opponent should it manage to collide with him/her.


Conditions to be able to use it:
Mastery of Earth and Lightning

Is weak to:

Lightning - Destructive Lightning jutsus have the capability to destroy the structure of Liquid Crystal

Fire - Extreme heat is able to destroy the delicate order of the Liquid Crystalline structures.

Dust - Able to completely destroy all traces of Liquid Crystal.

Decay - Decays LC into nothingness

Destructive/Hot/Heat Based Elements - Generally, anything as hot or hotter than Fire or as desctructive as the Lightning element is able to destroy the Liquide Crystalline structures, leading to the destruction of the element, allowing such CEs to be strong against Liquid Crystal.


Is strong against:

Earth - The Solid structures of Earth can easily be crystallised as they’re ‘swallowed’ and overcome by the Liquid Crystal

Water - Liquid Crystal is in a state which allows it to flow like a liquid whilst having solid properties which are able to block water just as Earth would.

Wind - Liquid Crystal’s thick consistency prevents it from being pushed away or sliced through easily.

Solids/Liquid types - Any solids such as Earth & Wood or Liquid type of elements are able to become crystallised or overcome by the thick consistency of Liquid Crystal, making them weak against this element.

Wood - Same as Earth

Co-creator: Scaze

Students I passed this custom element on too: ? & ?

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✗ Declined: There are a lot of things of this CE that bother me and honestly I'm not very keen on it. All those phases happen under different circumstances, but you say you pretty much can use them all as you see fit. Each phase has its own characteristics, so in reality all of them should be explained as you pretty much said that will describe what it does in the jutsu description, meaning it was not officially approved. Also all the things you are saying you can do like crystalize the air and use the crystals from your body, is far beyond the scope of a CE. There is a difference in using something like the Crystal element and start saying you now can use all crystalline structures in existence, the latter is extremely vast and this brings me to my most important comment, this all happens on a microscopic level. If you try searching fir images, you only get pictures of molecular structures and the like as it's not something that exists on a larger scale. The entire explanation of it is based on how things like being a liquid and a solid are defined on that scale, while you are seeing everything like it's a real liquid like water, but it doesn't work like that.

 
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