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Shirou Emiya
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I need lots of help as you can see I only have the basics hoping you guys can help with it.
Raidens kaminari beruto- raiden's thunderbelt
Type: ???
Rank: S-ranked
Range: short-mid
Chakra: ??
Damage: ??
Description: raiden's thunderbelt is a chain made of an unknown black metal. It has a fancy gold trim on each link that resembles a dragon. The chain is worn wrapped around the users right or left arm so that it looks like an arm band. This chain was said to have fallen from a thunderbolt when raiden was angry. The chain has the ability to have one end extend to long distances(mid range) at an enemy while the other end stays on the users hand. The user can then channel his lightning chakra into the chain electricuting the enemy. When lightning chakra is channeled into it the black on the chain glows a bright blue.
Raidens kaminari beruto- raiden's thunderbelt
Type: ???
Rank: S-ranked
Range: short-mid
Chakra: ??
Damage: ??
Description: raiden's thunderbelt is a chain made of an unknown black metal. It has a fancy gold trim on each link that resembles a dragon. The chain is worn wrapped around the users right or left arm so that it looks like an arm band. This chain was said to have fallen from a thunderbolt when raiden was angry. The chain has the ability to have one end extend to long distances(mid range) at an enemy while the other end stays on the users hand. The user can then channel his lightning chakra into the chain electricuting the enemy. When lightning chakra is channeled into it the black on the chain glows a bright blue.
Shirou Emiya
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Raidens kaminari beruto- raiden's thunderbelt
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-ranked
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 40 or N/A - Normally weapons don't require the use of chakra but since you said you channel chakra into the sword, I added the chakra cost.
Damage: 80 or N/A
Description: raiden's thunderbelt is a chain made of an unknown black metal. It has a fancy gold trim on each link that resembles a dragon. The chain is worn wrapped around the users right or left arm so that it looks like an arm band. This chain was said to have fallen from a thunderbolt when raiden was angry. The chain has the ability to have one end extend to long distances(mid range) at an enemy while the other end stays on the users hand. The user can then channel his lightning chakra into the chain electricuting the enemy. When lightning chakra is channeled into it the black on the chain glows a bright blue.
You also need to add some restrictions.
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-ranked
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 40 or N/A - Normally weapons don't require the use of chakra but since you said you channel chakra into the sword, I added the chakra cost.
Damage: 80 or N/A
Description: raiden's thunderbelt is a chain made of an unknown black metal. It has a fancy gold trim on each link that resembles a dragon. The chain is worn wrapped around the users right or left arm so that it looks like an arm band. This chain was said to have fallen from a thunderbolt when raiden was angry. The chain has the ability to have one end extend to long distances(mid range) at an enemy while the other end stays on the users hand. The user can then channel his lightning chakra into the chain electricuting the enemy. When lightning chakra is channeled into it the black on the chain glows a bright blue.
You also need to add some restrictions.
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Shirou Emiya
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Raidens kaminari beruto- raiden's thunderbelt
Type: weapon
Rank: S-ranked
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: raiden's thunderbelt is a chain made of an unknown black metal. It has a fancy gold trim on each link that resembles a dragon. This chain was said to have fallen from a thunderbolt when raiden was angry.The chain is worn wrapped around the users right or left arm so that it looks like an arm band. The chain has the ability to have one end launched to long distances(mid range) at an enemy and wrap around them while the other end stays on the users hand it can also retract back to the users hand. The user can then channel his lightning chakra into the chain electricuting the enemy. When lightning chakra is channeled into it the black on the chain glows a bright blue. The chain can also be used to grab hold of objects. This ability varies depending on the objects grabbed some objects get pulled to the user while others the user pulls himself to the object. The chain also has the ability to become stiff or flexible allowing the user to whip his enemies or apply blunt force.
notes
-after grabbing and pulling an object that ability can not be used for two rounds
-the chain has the ability to grab and pull the object up to the size of a car. Anything above that approximate size/wieght the user is pulled to the object grappled.
-can only be used by my cole bio
Type: weapon
Rank: S-ranked
Range: short-mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: raiden's thunderbelt is a chain made of an unknown black metal. It has a fancy gold trim on each link that resembles a dragon. This chain was said to have fallen from a thunderbolt when raiden was angry.The chain is worn wrapped around the users right or left arm so that it looks like an arm band. The chain has the ability to have one end launched to long distances(mid range) at an enemy and wrap around them while the other end stays on the users hand it can also retract back to the users hand. The user can then channel his lightning chakra into the chain electricuting the enemy. When lightning chakra is channeled into it the black on the chain glows a bright blue. The chain can also be used to grab hold of objects. This ability varies depending on the objects grabbed some objects get pulled to the user while others the user pulls himself to the object. The chain also has the ability to become stiff or flexible allowing the user to whip his enemies or apply blunt force.
notes
-after grabbing and pulling an object that ability can not be used for two rounds
-the chain has the ability to grab and pull the object up to the size of a car. Anything above that approximate size/wieght the user is pulled to the object grappled.
-can only be used by my cole bio
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Shirou Emiya
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Type: Weapon
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Dragon's Eskrima is a long black staff. In the very middle of it, it has a line that goes all the way around it. This is the divider for the two tonfas. The divider is transparent and is surging with raiton chakra. This keeps the tonfas together to create the staff. To separate the two tonfas the user must pull them apart with force. Once pulled apart, the tip of the tonfas are transparent with raiton chakra surging through them as well. This is where the electricity will flow out of the tonfas and onto the opponent. This can only be done in short range. The staff and tonfas are great conductors for electricity. The staff acts as a lightning rod that can absorb C rank and below raiton attacks. While the tonfas are used for attacking the opponent with C Rank electricity.
- The user can channel electricity into the tonfas only. The electricity is B Rank.
- Only the staff can absorb raiton attacks. C Rank and below only raiton attacks.
Anything need fixing?
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Shirou Emiya
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In the description explain how the staff absorbs lightning attacks
Also I'd put it only up to mid range
Also I'd put it only up to mid range
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Type: Supplementry / Defensive
Rank: D-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: When an enemy charges at you with a taijutsu attack or a kenjutsu, the user flashes the Tiger handseal very quick and 2 feet infront of the user, a puddle of slippery water forms. Since the opponent is focused on you and is in mid swing or punch, they would slip on the water giving you the upper hand in the fight.
- Can only be used by Amegakure ninja
- Can only be taught by the Penguin Sage himself, Penguin2640
- Can only be used once
Anything need fixing?
Type: Supplementry / Defensive
Rank: D-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: When an enemy charges at you with a taijutsu attack or a kenjutsu, the user flashes the Tiger handseal very quick and 2 feet infront of the user, a puddle of slippery water forms. Since the opponent is focused on you and is in mid swing or punch, they would slip on the water giving you the upper hand in the fight.
- Can only be used by Amegakure ninja
- Can only be taught by the Penguin Sage himself, Penguin2640
- Can only be used once
Anything need fixing?
I'm sorry but if it can be used by an ame ninja then it shouldn't be taught by you, cause 1 its shinta sama the kage that will submit it and 2 u'll need permission not teaching to use it...and 3 no offence but the rank is too low to be of use in the ninja world.
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no your not I meant amekage!genjutsu himitsu Sen hanabira secret illusionary technique a thousand flower petals
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid Range
Chakra 15
Damage 30
Description the user will first form four hand seals boar-rat-dog-sheep and then cast a genjutsu on his opponent, causing the opponent to see red rose flower petals surround the user which are emerging from the. Ground and floating in the air around the user. The user using hand movement will be able to direct the flower petals towards his opponent and when the flower petals hit the opponent it cuts through his skin leaving a deep cut. In reality the user throws a shuriken at the opponent. In other words the shuriken are the flower petals but a lot of petals directed at the opponent will be one shuriken thrown.
NOTES
-can only be used 3times per battle
- can affect more than one opponent
-this genjutu takes over only the opponents sight, allowing the user to be able to perform other techniques of A ranks and below.
-must have training in genjutsu
-lasts for 2 turns if the opponent doesn't break out of it or the user dispels it
-can only be used by an amegakure ninja.
I'm thinking of turning this technique into a sequal.
genjutsu himitsu Sukeruton wa kuru secret illusionary technique skeleton come
Type:offensive/supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra 20
Damage 40
Description the user will form 3 hand seals sheep-boar-dog, then putting a one hand tiger seal infront of his face and his other hand pointed at the opponent in a come manner, the user will cast a genjutsu on the opponent, causing the opponent to feel like his skeleton is growing thus feel pain as he watches his skeletal bones emerge from him, the opponent will first see his skeletal fingers grow longer and tear through his hands skin, next his feet skeletal toe bones come out of him tearing away the skin covering it...finally his rip cage. The opponent takes mental damage from the feeling of his bones coming out of him, when the genjutsu is Over the opponent is left breathing hard and falls to his knees unable to perform high ranked jutsus.
NOTES
-when the genjutsu is over the opponent is unable to perform s rank jutsu for the next turn being unable to mold proper chakra after the feeling of his skeleton bones leaving him.
-can only be used by an amegakure ninja.
-must had training in genjutsu to use.
I have a lot more, i'm thinking of turning the skeletal bones into a rank sequal...so no one else should make any jutsu involving bones...I have a-forbidden rank but first tour thoughts.
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????? - ?????
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will perform two seals, Boar → Snake, and create an illusion by taking their own chakra and injecting it onto their victim. After the users chakra entered the opponent's chakra system, the user will cast an illusion. The illusion will lead the victim to believe that their arms are being twisted, twisted over and over, almost infinitely. This will inflict physical pain, and once the genjutsu is released, their arms will feel sore and stiff due to the mental effects the genjutsu casted.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice per battle
- The victim cannot perform A-rank or above Justus in any element, due to the feeling of their bones and arms ripping out.
- Need to have trained in genjutsu to use
- Cannot use another genjutsu after
- Needs 2 turns before performing it again
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will perform two seals, Boar → Snake, and create an illusion by taking their own chakra and injecting it onto their victim. After the users chakra entered the opponent's chakra system, the user will cast an illusion. The illusion will lead the victim to believe that their arms are being twisted, twisted over and over, almost infinitely. This will inflict physical pain, and once the genjutsu is released, their arms will feel sore and stiff due to the mental effects the genjutsu casted.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice per battle
- The victim cannot perform A-rank or above Justus in any element, due to the feeling of their bones and arms ripping out.
- Need to have trained in genjutsu to use
- Cannot use another genjutsu after
- Needs 2 turns before performing it again