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(Hokuto Shin Ken) - Big Dipper God Fist
Type:TaiGenNinjutsu
Background:During Ancient times there was a secret art passed down by an clan unknown to most of the Ninja world. That clan was the Hokuto clan. The way the story is told, In the Village Hidden under the Moon, The Hokuto clan practiced an art once so forbidden, it was allowed only 1 successor per generation. The original forms of Hokuto Shin Ken were lost, but they are said to contain techniques where which by channeling one's energy into a single blow and striking one of the 708 Keiraku Hikō Hidden Meridian Points in the human body, they could cause victim's to explode, be controlled involuntarily or otherwise incapacitated. It could also be used to heal certain physical and psychological wounds, such as restoring a person's voice, eyesight or memories, though the main purpose of Hokuto Shin Ken was/is assassination. For 1800 years, 1 successor per generation would chose the most worthy of his students to receive the title of "Fist of the Northstar". Due to the deadliness of it's original form, Hokuto Shin Ken could only have one successor per generation according to the art's law. Students who were not chosen to inherit the succession were to renounce the style voluntarily or risk having their memories erased or their fists crushed rendering their jutsu useless. This is due to the extreme consequences of the style being held by one who is evil at heart. This rule would lead to the demise of all the Hokuto clan except one...the one who would be chosen by Ryuken, the previous successor and his adoptive father, as the true Fist of the Northstar! His name was Kenshiro, the youngest of the four fated Hokuto brothers. The 4 brother consisted of Raoh, Toki, Jagi, and Kenshiro. The eldest of the four Hokuto brothers was Raoh. Raoh was known as "Roah the conqueror" and takes the mantle of Ken-oh, or 'Fist King', after being rejected as the successor to Hokuto Shin Ken. Toki was the second of the four Hokuto brothers. He was a pacifist who seeked to use Hokuto Shinken as a healing art, and forfeited his bid for Fist due to illness. Toki's self-made technique, Hokuto Ujoken Jutsu (North Star Humane Fist Technique), was said to be a jutsu that was capable of healing or destroying that which it is used on. Jagi was the third of the four Hokuto brothers. Deceptive and evil, Jagi would stop at nothing to win and frequently cheated during battle. He never really mastered Hokuto Shin Ken, relying on his sly tricks to finish off most of his opponents. And finally there was Kenshiro. Kenshiro was the youngest of the four Hokuto brothers and the chosen successor of Hokuto Shin Ken. They were raised by the previous Fist, Ryuken. The previous successor to the Hokuto Shin Ken style, Ryuken was the sifu who adopted and trained Raoh, Toki, Jagi, and Kenshiro in the Hokuto Shin Ken style. After he chose Kenshiro as his successor, he was slain by Raoh in a fit of jealous rage, a feat made possible by chance; he suffered a stroke at the moment he was about to seal Raoh's fist. Roah left bent on taking the title from Kenshiro by force.
As Kenshiro traveled the Hidden Moon Village unaware of Ryuken, he was ambushed by his other brother Jagi. Jagi had taken to calling himself The Fist and was causing trouble in different villages and in Kenshiro's name. During their brief scuffle, Kenshiro was said to have hit a meridian point that made the hair on Jagi's head burst off as his head began to swell, and the veins on his head began to budge until a few of the veins burst thru the skin, shooting blood like a out of control fire hose. Though limited in his knowledge of Hokuto Shin Ken, Jagi is able to hit counter meridian points, stopping the attack before his head were to explode. As Kenshiro goes to leave his brother alive, he is stopped in his tracks by the news that Roah has killed their Sensai and was coming for him, while also taking credit for egging on Roah's jealousy of Kenshiro position. Unfortunately for Jagi, this news turns Kenshiro's warm heart cold and merciless, and after unleashing one of Hokuto Shin Ken's most forbidden taijutsu's, Jagi's head begins to swell, and as his head explodes he was still cursing Ken's name.
Now aware of Roah's true intention's and with a blood lust for vengeance, Ken seeks out Raoh who was amassing an army of ninja in an attempt to overthrow the Village heads and start his quest for world domination. Fighting his way thru hundreds of ninja's, Kenshiro reached Roah. Roah, mounted on a steed and clad in armor fit for a King, tells Kenshiro how he believed he should have been chosen as successor, and laughed while he said that he killed their "old man" for being so foolish as to choose a weakling like Ken as the Fist as the Northstar. Kenshiro couldn't take no more, and his anger exploded into a violent rage, his chakra could be seen glowing in his eyes. Raoh, being arrogant, begins the fight still sitting on his horse, who soon becomes a victim of Ken's new merciless nature. After an hour of fighting hand to hand, mostly chakra enhanced taijutsu, Raoh had fallen.
Kenshiro, now battered and bloody, drops to one knee next to Roah, who smiles at Kenshiro and expresses his regret for killing their father, and that he knew Kenshiro was truly worthy now. As Roah died, so did a lot of Kenshiro's rage, and at Ryuken's grave, he decided that the bloody cycle created by Hokuto Shin Ken's "1 successor per generation" rule must be changed.
He then decided that the forbidden techniques would remain limited to who they were taught, if he ever decided to even do teach them. He took his teachings and created a new form of the Big Dipper God Fist. Using his knowledge of Genjutsu as well as Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, he was able to replace attacks that would have made an enemies explode from within, with a less lethal taijutsu attack that induces a minute genjutsu that shows them the image of themselves exploding while he quickly went for a strike. Instances of this went across all his techniques, and he spent many years refining it before even beginning to teach it himself. He destroyed the Hidden Scrolls so that no one could ever learn the true form of Hokuto Shin Ken, thus saving future generations from the fate of he and his brothers.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:As with many Chinese Martial Arts, there is a soft style, which depends on accuracy and agility, and a hard style, which relies on brute power to annihilate targets. The inner workings of Hokuto Shin Ken's true nature is something akin to the Hiyuga clan, in that chakra is channeled from one person to another along meridian points that control chakra flow to other area's of the body. For example, striking a meridian point on the arm may be connected to brain functionality, and so on. Striking different parts of the body, and infusing ones own chakra into the body was capable of controlling ones actions, and internal workings. The hard style was too brutal for anyone to wield, using Hokuto Shin Ken to tap into the body's dormant 70% of untapped strength, allowing for mind bending feats of strength and conditioning. Using the hard style, Kenshiro was shown Splitting a skyscraper in 2 simply by punching it, and hardening his skin to the point of taking no harm as said building collapsed on him. Knowing that his style would be what the outsiders called "DNR'd" if he continued the style in it's original forms, Kenshiro spent years developing a new Hard and Soft style of Hokuto Shin Ken. The Hard style called for attacking straight thru others' attacks, taking collateral damage in order to successfully land a blow. By hardening ones mind and spirit, he is able to take attacks that would have stopped his attacks from landing in stride, continuing his attack like nothing had happened, though, when the battle was over and the adrenaline rush stops, the user would feel every attack that landed on them. Kenshiro changed the hard style from being almost invulnerable to attacks, to simply being mentally tough enough to fight thru attacks despite being attacked simultaneously. Thru this, he was able to fight thru D rank Elemental defenses and withstand C rank Taijutsu, still following thru with his attacks despite being defended, though he would still take damage from said attack which could also include death if the defense were to hit a vital organ. His new version of The Soft style consisted of attacks and defenses that that initiate minute genjutsu illusions during attacking/defending, momentary fluctuations of the enemies chakra network making them see what he wanted them to see. When he would go to kick or punch someone high, he could make the enemy see his body moving in a motion of a low attack, making the enemy defend the wrong area of their body. When throwing a fury of punches, he could make the enemy see 100 fist raging at them when in reality, it was only a hand full of blows that were delivered. He could also, in some instances, make the enemy see him dodge differently than he did, making them believe for a second that their attack had landed as he counter attacks from a different location. All the illusions created from his style were momentary, none were long lasting genjutsu's, and most wore off as soon as his attacks ended without the enemy needing to deduce they were in a genjutsu.
Example Techniques:
(Hokuto Shin Ken - Hokuto Hyakuretsu Ken) Big Dipper God Fist - Hundred Crack Fist
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:The user will channel his chakra into the enemy creating a brief illusion where they see 100 fists coming at them in their entire field of view. In reality, the user attacks the enemy with a dozen blows that are hard to see due to the brief illusion of a flurry of fists coming at them. The effects of the genjutsu are temporary, lasting no more than a couple seconds
(Hokuto Shin Ken - Musō Tensei) Big Dipper God Fist - Nil-Thought Rebirth
Type:Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (15 per turn to maintain)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user begins by performing the Heaven's breaking stance form, the user is able to enter Muso Tensai. Once considered the ultimate form of Hokuto Shin Ken, the Nil-Thought Rebirth is learn-able only by one who has know infinite sadness, and allows the user to achieve a conscious state of "nothingness" and to connect with the souls of fallen rivals and comrades, making them appear impervious to physical attacks (C rank and below with-in reason), though the damage will still be taken, the user can battle thru the pain as if they were never attacked (Though attacks to vital points would still kill). In addition, one gains heightened reflexes for a short period, and can on instinct alone, feign out of the way or parry an incoming attack
~Notes~
-Can only be used once per battle
-dodging follows substitution rules, and will end the jutsu if used
-effects last 3 turns, 4 for one who has mastered Hokuto Shin Ken
-After effects wear off, the user will feel the pain from whatever attacks occurred to them while in the state of Musō Tensei
-Must be trained in Hokuto Shin Ken
Tenma No Kamae: Heaven's breaking stance form
(Hokuto Shin Ken - Himitsu no tekunikku: Tenha Kassatsu) Big Dipper God Fist - Secret Technique: Heaven's Impalement
Type:Defensive/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Considered one of the Ultimate moves of Hokuto, Tenha Kassatsu rescues the user from peril without having to touch the opponent. By focusing raw chakra to the users fists, they are able to thrust forwards with both hands quickly, four fingers pointed outwards in a square on one hand and 3 fingers at an angle on the other, forming the shape of the Big Dipper constellation. Upon thrusting the hands forwards, seven bullets shaped bursts of raw chakra will shoot outwards in a tight grouping towards the enemy, capable of piercing straight thru the enemy and damaging whatever is behind them.
~Notes~
-Must have mastered Hokuto Shin Ken
-Can only be used twice per battle, with a 1 turn cool down
-No Hokuto Shin Ken techniques for 1 turn after used
-reference- 3:40 seconds
Additional effects and Restrictions:
-User gains increased durability and reaction time, gaining 1 Ninja rank
-User gains +10 to all Taijutsu, and Genjutsu of D-B rank gain 1 rank increase in strength
-Must have Mastery over Genjutsu, at least B rank Taijutsu, and C rank Ninjutsu to train in Hokuto Shin Ken
EDITS: That's all I have so far, I'm up for any suggestions, wanted to post here so I can work on it somewhere other than in my notes
Type:TaiGenNinjutsu
Background:During Ancient times there was a secret art passed down by an clan unknown to most of the Ninja world. That clan was the Hokuto clan. The way the story is told, In the Village Hidden under the Moon, The Hokuto clan practiced an art once so forbidden, it was allowed only 1 successor per generation. The original forms of Hokuto Shin Ken were lost, but they are said to contain techniques where which by channeling one's energy into a single blow and striking one of the 708 Keiraku Hikō Hidden Meridian Points in the human body, they could cause victim's to explode, be controlled involuntarily or otherwise incapacitated. It could also be used to heal certain physical and psychological wounds, such as restoring a person's voice, eyesight or memories, though the main purpose of Hokuto Shin Ken was/is assassination. For 1800 years, 1 successor per generation would chose the most worthy of his students to receive the title of "Fist of the Northstar". Due to the deadliness of it's original form, Hokuto Shin Ken could only have one successor per generation according to the art's law. Students who were not chosen to inherit the succession were to renounce the style voluntarily or risk having their memories erased or their fists crushed rendering their jutsu useless. This is due to the extreme consequences of the style being held by one who is evil at heart. This rule would lead to the demise of all the Hokuto clan except one...the one who would be chosen by Ryuken, the previous successor and his adoptive father, as the true Fist of the Northstar! His name was Kenshiro, the youngest of the four fated Hokuto brothers. The 4 brother consisted of Raoh, Toki, Jagi, and Kenshiro. The eldest of the four Hokuto brothers was Raoh. Raoh was known as "Roah the conqueror" and takes the mantle of Ken-oh, or 'Fist King', after being rejected as the successor to Hokuto Shin Ken. Toki was the second of the four Hokuto brothers. He was a pacifist who seeked to use Hokuto Shinken as a healing art, and forfeited his bid for Fist due to illness. Toki's self-made technique, Hokuto Ujoken Jutsu (North Star Humane Fist Technique), was said to be a jutsu that was capable of healing or destroying that which it is used on. Jagi was the third of the four Hokuto brothers. Deceptive and evil, Jagi would stop at nothing to win and frequently cheated during battle. He never really mastered Hokuto Shin Ken, relying on his sly tricks to finish off most of his opponents. And finally there was Kenshiro. Kenshiro was the youngest of the four Hokuto brothers and the chosen successor of Hokuto Shin Ken. They were raised by the previous Fist, Ryuken. The previous successor to the Hokuto Shin Ken style, Ryuken was the sifu who adopted and trained Raoh, Toki, Jagi, and Kenshiro in the Hokuto Shin Ken style. After he chose Kenshiro as his successor, he was slain by Raoh in a fit of jealous rage, a feat made possible by chance; he suffered a stroke at the moment he was about to seal Raoh's fist. Roah left bent on taking the title from Kenshiro by force.
As Kenshiro traveled the Hidden Moon Village unaware of Ryuken, he was ambushed by his other brother Jagi. Jagi had taken to calling himself The Fist and was causing trouble in different villages and in Kenshiro's name. During their brief scuffle, Kenshiro was said to have hit a meridian point that made the hair on Jagi's head burst off as his head began to swell, and the veins on his head began to budge until a few of the veins burst thru the skin, shooting blood like a out of control fire hose. Though limited in his knowledge of Hokuto Shin Ken, Jagi is able to hit counter meridian points, stopping the attack before his head were to explode. As Kenshiro goes to leave his brother alive, he is stopped in his tracks by the news that Roah has killed their Sensai and was coming for him, while also taking credit for egging on Roah's jealousy of Kenshiro position. Unfortunately for Jagi, this news turns Kenshiro's warm heart cold and merciless, and after unleashing one of Hokuto Shin Ken's most forbidden taijutsu's, Jagi's head begins to swell, and as his head explodes he was still cursing Ken's name.
Now aware of Roah's true intention's and with a blood lust for vengeance, Ken seeks out Raoh who was amassing an army of ninja in an attempt to overthrow the Village heads and start his quest for world domination. Fighting his way thru hundreds of ninja's, Kenshiro reached Roah. Roah, mounted on a steed and clad in armor fit for a King, tells Kenshiro how he believed he should have been chosen as successor, and laughed while he said that he killed their "old man" for being so foolish as to choose a weakling like Ken as the Fist as the Northstar. Kenshiro couldn't take no more, and his anger exploded into a violent rage, his chakra could be seen glowing in his eyes. Raoh, being arrogant, begins the fight still sitting on his horse, who soon becomes a victim of Ken's new merciless nature. After an hour of fighting hand to hand, mostly chakra enhanced taijutsu, Raoh had fallen.
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He then decided that the forbidden techniques would remain limited to who they were taught, if he ever decided to even do teach them. He took his teachings and created a new form of the Big Dipper God Fist. Using his knowledge of Genjutsu as well as Ninjutsu and Taijutsu, he was able to replace attacks that would have made an enemies explode from within, with a less lethal taijutsu attack that induces a minute genjutsu that shows them the image of themselves exploding while he quickly went for a strike. Instances of this went across all his techniques, and he spent many years refining it before even beginning to teach it himself. He destroyed the Hidden Scrolls so that no one could ever learn the true form of Hokuto Shin Ken, thus saving future generations from the fate of he and his brothers.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style:As with many Chinese Martial Arts, there is a soft style, which depends on accuracy and agility, and a hard style, which relies on brute power to annihilate targets. The inner workings of Hokuto Shin Ken's true nature is something akin to the Hiyuga clan, in that chakra is channeled from one person to another along meridian points that control chakra flow to other area's of the body. For example, striking a meridian point on the arm may be connected to brain functionality, and so on. Striking different parts of the body, and infusing ones own chakra into the body was capable of controlling ones actions, and internal workings. The hard style was too brutal for anyone to wield, using Hokuto Shin Ken to tap into the body's dormant 70% of untapped strength, allowing for mind bending feats of strength and conditioning. Using the hard style, Kenshiro was shown Splitting a skyscraper in 2 simply by punching it, and hardening his skin to the point of taking no harm as said building collapsed on him. Knowing that his style would be what the outsiders called "DNR'd" if he continued the style in it's original forms, Kenshiro spent years developing a new Hard and Soft style of Hokuto Shin Ken. The Hard style called for attacking straight thru others' attacks, taking collateral damage in order to successfully land a blow. By hardening ones mind and spirit, he is able to take attacks that would have stopped his attacks from landing in stride, continuing his attack like nothing had happened, though, when the battle was over and the adrenaline rush stops, the user would feel every attack that landed on them. Kenshiro changed the hard style from being almost invulnerable to attacks, to simply being mentally tough enough to fight thru attacks despite being attacked simultaneously. Thru this, he was able to fight thru D rank Elemental defenses and withstand C rank Taijutsu, still following thru with his attacks despite being defended, though he would still take damage from said attack which could also include death if the defense were to hit a vital organ. His new version of The Soft style consisted of attacks and defenses that that initiate minute genjutsu illusions during attacking/defending, momentary fluctuations of the enemies chakra network making them see what he wanted them to see. When he would go to kick or punch someone high, he could make the enemy see his body moving in a motion of a low attack, making the enemy defend the wrong area of their body. When throwing a fury of punches, he could make the enemy see 100 fist raging at them when in reality, it was only a hand full of blows that were delivered. He could also, in some instances, make the enemy see him dodge differently than he did, making them believe for a second that their attack had landed as he counter attacks from a different location. All the illusions created from his style were momentary, none were long lasting genjutsu's, and most wore off as soon as his attacks ended without the enemy needing to deduce they were in a genjutsu.
Example Techniques:
(Hokuto Shin Ken - Hokuto Hyakuretsu Ken) Big Dipper God Fist - Hundred Crack Fist
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description:The user will channel his chakra into the enemy creating a brief illusion where they see 100 fists coming at them in their entire field of view. In reality, the user attacks the enemy with a dozen blows that are hard to see due to the brief illusion of a flurry of fists coming at them. The effects of the genjutsu are temporary, lasting no more than a couple seconds
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Type:Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (15 per turn to maintain)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user begins by performing the Heaven's breaking stance form, the user is able to enter Muso Tensai. Once considered the ultimate form of Hokuto Shin Ken, the Nil-Thought Rebirth is learn-able only by one who has know infinite sadness, and allows the user to achieve a conscious state of "nothingness" and to connect with the souls of fallen rivals and comrades, making them appear impervious to physical attacks (C rank and below with-in reason), though the damage will still be taken, the user can battle thru the pain as if they were never attacked (Though attacks to vital points would still kill). In addition, one gains heightened reflexes for a short period, and can on instinct alone, feign out of the way or parry an incoming attack
~Notes~
-Can only be used once per battle
-dodging follows substitution rules, and will end the jutsu if used
-effects last 3 turns, 4 for one who has mastered Hokuto Shin Ken
-After effects wear off, the user will feel the pain from whatever attacks occurred to them while in the state of Musō Tensei
-Must be trained in Hokuto Shin Ken
Tenma No Kamae: Heaven's breaking stance form
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Type:Defensive/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Considered one of the Ultimate moves of Hokuto, Tenha Kassatsu rescues the user from peril without having to touch the opponent. By focusing raw chakra to the users fists, they are able to thrust forwards with both hands quickly, four fingers pointed outwards in a square on one hand and 3 fingers at an angle on the other, forming the shape of the Big Dipper constellation. Upon thrusting the hands forwards, seven bullets shaped bursts of raw chakra will shoot outwards in a tight grouping towards the enemy, capable of piercing straight thru the enemy and damaging whatever is behind them.
~Notes~
-Must have mastered Hokuto Shin Ken
-Can only be used twice per battle, with a 1 turn cool down
-No Hokuto Shin Ken techniques for 1 turn after used
-reference- 3:40 seconds
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Additional effects and Restrictions:
-User gains increased durability and reaction time, gaining 1 Ninja rank
-User gains +10 to all Taijutsu, and Genjutsu of D-B rank gain 1 rank increase in strength
-Must have Mastery over Genjutsu, at least B rank Taijutsu, and C rank Ninjutsu to train in Hokuto Shin Ken
EDITS: That's all I have so far, I'm up for any suggestions, wanted to post here so I can work on it somewhere other than in my notes
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