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  1. Chakra Wizard

    Mob Child III

    Alright, onto part three*_* This one’s a bit shorter, for those concerned about that - and less "swear-happy", for those concerned about that (Germanicus xd) - and it should give a bit of insight into Aito and Mao’s characters and their relationship, as well as some possible foreshadowing into...
  2. Chakra Wizard

    Mob Child II

    This chapter and those following it are basically a long flashback, just to avoid confusion. Also, I decided that I would frequently alternate between third-person and Aito’s perspective, just to expand my creative options. Thought it’d be a more effective way to tell the story*_* lol...
  3. Chakra Wizard

    Mob Child I

    This is a plot I developed rather recently that I’ve been experimenting with. Kind of trashy in nature, perhaps, but I just loved the premise, so I had to keep it. Like with the rest of my original ideas, I’m not putting the whole thing up, but just enough to get you guys kind enough to read...
  4. Chakra Wizard

    Naruto: Tetsuden - 024

    Alright, I’ll just tell ya right now that I did not enjoy writing this chapter, but given what went on in the canon exams, it was essential, so what can you do? So, if it ends up feeling a bit below par compared to past chapters, that’s the reason, cause I didn’t enjoy writing it as muchxd...
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    Naruto: Tetsuden - 023

    And so, the second phase finally comes to an end:yay: I can’t wait to get started on the one-on-one matches. A lot of good stuff is gonna be revealed there*_* Oh, and for those interested, I finally went ahead and made a group for this FF, if you wanna join and check that out. If you...
  6. Chakra Wizard

    Altopolis II (2)

    Sorry this one took so long. Had a lot of college stuff going on lately. Hopefully, the insight and everything else in this chapter makes up for it, though=D Also, thanks to everyone who voted for the first Altopolis in this month’s fanfiction contest. Your votes really meant a lot*_*...
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    Naruto: Tetsuden - 022

    Yeah, this should go without saying once you read the chapter’s title, but presume nothing upon reading this, cause this is just a FRACTION of how much I trolled these two characters. XD Anyways, please enjoy:) Here’s my previous chapters, for those who missed any: Chapter 022: A Taste of...
  8. Chakra Wizard

    Naruto: Tetsuden - 021

    And so, we’re back to the main characters, after three or four chapters of absencexd This may end up just being filler material, but I think this chapter should also give a bit of insight into just what kind of rivalry Naruto and Sasuke’s grandchildren have. Quite different from their canon...
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    Altopolis II (1)

    Yeah, I know. I was planning to stop after the first three chapters, but then I conjured up this other story recently and I just had to share this one, tooxd It’s set in the same universe as the first story, but the altopolis is completely different, as are the events that take place in it and...
  10. Chakra Wizard

    Naruto: Tetsuden - 020

    Alright, now onto Gaara’s grandchildren…and Kankuro’sxd Sabure’s probably my favorite female OC, aside from Nakama and Inase, so I hope you like what I did with her*_* Please enjoy:) Here’s my previous chapters, for those who missed any: Chapter 020: Gaara’s Bloodline Holds Strong Deep...
  11. Chakra Wizard

    Some Suggestions?

    I posted another thread a ways back asking for help developing a love interest for a story I've got going. I managed to sort that problem out on my own, thankfully, but I'm really gonna need your help this time, cause I'm clueless. The first thing is that, while developing the other...
  12. Chakra Wizard

    Death Note: Reclamation (Chapter 21)

    As the title implies, Uric is basically mirroring L’s actions when he first became involved in the Kira case, letting his stand-in know that he made a crucial mistake early on. As a whole, the chapter is probably rather sloppy, but I’ve been focusing more on my other works recently, so I’m...
  13. Chakra Wizard

    Naruto: Tetsuden - 019

    Alright, I was rather excited about getting to this chapter, just because I’m introducing two new genin teams to the mix-up, one from the Cloud and one from the Mist (hence the chapter’s titlexd). In terms of things to notice, the one thing I’m really proud of in this chapter is the...
  14. Chakra Wizard

    Favorite Timespan?

    Yeah, basically, I'm asking what stories you guys prefer reading in regards to their timeline, whether they're an original work or a fanfiction. Would you prefer something: - Historically-based (your own ideas or perhaps a retelling of real events) - Present-day - Near future (only a few years...
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    What's most important?

    Just kinda curious, but of all the things critics would usually praise a story for having (which is actually quite a lot, now that I think about itxd), what would you say the best stories simply have to have, whether they're on paper, film, animated, whatever? - Plot complexity (you want your...
  16. Chakra Wizard

    Altopolis (3)

    Alright, as I mentioned in the first chapter, I am not finishing this entire story. Thankfully, though, everything else I have planned takes place on different altopolises, each part containing pretty much a completely different series of event, so as far as this particular one goes, you’re not...
  17. Chakra Wizard

    Altopolis (2)

    This one was a little tough to write, just to make everything flow in a semi-decent way, but I think I pulled it off nicely=D Hope you guys enjoy:) And special thanks to ThatOneChick for her insistence that I change my writing mannerisms. XD - Manhunt - Less than two hours after...
  18. Chakra Wizard

    Film or Anime?

    My main career goal right now is to write scripts for films, but there are a ton of ideas I have that, if I can somehow get into the anime industry, I would like to see made one day. Right now, though, I'm kinda conflicted in regards to what would be the proper medium for some of my ideas. If...
  19. Chakra Wizard

    Naruto: Tetsuden - 018

    This one focuses on the current generation of Ino-Shika-Chō, for those of you who love Shikamaru and Chōji (who among us loves Ino, let’s be honest. XD I kid.) The big concern for this chapter was trying to differ their personalities from those of the original team, so please, all of you who...
  20. Chakra Wizard

    Themes/Morals - Importance?

    Yeah, basically, I'm asking how much significance a story's message has when you write it (this is directed to OF writers and aspiring authors, obviouslyxd). Like, everyone hears about how critics praise the themes of a book or a film or how they might call it "mindless" if its theme isn't very...
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