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i thought you didnt have any real students but it seems you do O_O so you?
-has my lightning chakra focus on one spot in my palm but letting it build up wildly- O_O that good xD
Are you blind? O_O
Its obvious who my real student is lol
*Nothing happens*
You need to compress the chakra so much that it makes the lightning want escape from the condensed area.
ok...so... if i understand the concept... i create a vortex with me at the center and it is both offensive and defensive... after i defend i split it off into sythes that attack. ok...

So...
Molds Mass of Chakra
forms about 100 sythes of wind... and makes them start spinning around me
*creates the vortex... Hmm its getting pretty easy to create a standard vortex...*

infuses my own chakra into the vortex to make it a defensive wall...

*Breaks the vortex but only about 5 sythes fly foreward...*
How do i control it so that all the sythes dont get dispersed like that?
Basically yes.

How do I explain this...well, this is like the shuriken technique where you need to keep a constant connection with the chakra surrounding the shuriken. You need to have total control over it just like you have to have control over thes cythes once they seperate. Itll be harder since there are more than one though.
 

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Are you blind? O_O
Its obvious who my real student is lol
*Nothing happens*
You need to compress the chakra so much that it makes the lightning want escape from the condensed area.


Basically yes.

How do I explain this...well, this is like the shuriken technique where you need to keep a constant connection with the chakra surrounding the shuriken. You need to have total control over it just like you have to have control over thes cythes once they seperate. Itll be harder since there are more than one though.
O_O if it doesnt involve me in any kinda way then i never really dont know nor pay attention to anything on this site
 

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Are you blind? O_O
Its obvious who my real student is lol
*Nothing happens*
You need to compress the chakra so much that it makes the lightning want escape from the condensed area.


Basically yes.

How do I explain this...well, this is like the shuriken technique where you need to keep a constant connection with the chakra surrounding the shuriken. You need to have total control over it just like you have to have control over thes cythes once they seperate. Itll be harder since there are more than one though.
Ok...
(sorry about that... went to eat)

Ok... so constant connection with the sythes...

wow its really like becoming one with the wind i have to stay connected to so many wind sythes at once... i may as well be PART of the Whirlwind...

ok...
so..

I think i have the sythe vortex down...
*Creates*
But controlling all of them is crazy.... theyre spinning so fast....

*Breaks the Vortex and sends forth many more sythes*

What rank would you say this jutsu is?
 

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Ok...
(sorry about that... went to eat)

Ok... so constant connection with the sythes...

wow its really like becoming one with the wind i have to stay connected to so many wind sythes at once... i may as well be PART of the Whirlwind...

ok...
so..

I think i have the sythe vortex down...
*Creates*
But controlling all of them is crazy.... theyre spinning so fast....

*Breaks the Vortex and sends forth many more sythes*

What rank would you say this jutsu is?
part of the wind..itll help if you think of yourself as that way. When shinobi uses an element effectively they use it like another body part, not a tool. If you learn how to become PART of the wind you will be able to master it.

If you think this is hard wait till i teach you one of my S Rank jutsus. :p

And id say this is an a rank.
Wow! im flattered... so they are my senpai?!
in a sense. :p
I prefer to think of my students as equal but you could always go to them for adivice if theyre willing.
 

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part of the wind..itll help if you think of yourself as that way. When shinobi uses an element effectively they use it like another body part, not a tool. If you learn how to become PART of the wind you will be able to master it.

If you think this is hard wait till i teach you one of my S Rank jutsus. :p

And id say this is an a rank.


in a sense. :p
I prefer to think of my students as equal but you could always go to them for adivice if theyre willing.
Ok I think ive got the hang of it...

Alright
*Creates Sythe Vortex*
*Concentrates, Feels the wind*
*Breaks it off*
*sends a mass of sythes forward*

"I think this is ready for battle..."

Ive always felt a strong connection to wind... ever since i was a child...


Yea... maybe theyll acknowledge me now... lol they both rejected me in the past...
 

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Ok I think ive got the hang of it...

Alright
*Creates Sythe Vortex*
*Concentrates, Feels the wind*
*Breaks it off*
*sends a mass of sythes forward*

"I think this is ready for battle..."

Ive always felt a strong connection to wind... ever since i was a child...


Yea... maybe theyll acknowledge me now... lol they both rejected me in the past...
Now try controlling them in the air.
 

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Now try controlling them in the air.
oh Jeez OK....
(this is gonna be a badass jutsu)

*Forms the Sythes with Condensed Spinning chakra so they hold their shape and my chakra even as they fly*
*Makes the vortex*

ok...
*Breaks the vortex*

20 sythes fly out...

motioning with my hands, i begin to move them left and right...
then motioning with both hands split them in half sending 10 left and 10 right looping them around a tree and making them collide into each other on the other side.

*Panting*
"How was that?"
 

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oh Jeez OK....
(this is gonna be a badass jutsu)

*Forms the Sythes with Condensed Spinning chakra so they hold their shape and my chakra even as they fly*
*Makes the vortex*

ok...
*Breaks the vortex*

20 sythes fly out...

motioning with my hands, i begin to move them left and right...
then motioning with both hands split them in half sending 10 left and 10 right looping them around a tree and making them collide into each other on the other side.

*Panting*
"How was that?"
O_O Better than expected. Nice job.
Btw, tell me the jutsus that ive taught you so far.
K, well im gonig to submit the jutsu now so whens its approved we can useit. ^^
ok so what else will you teach me besides chidori :rolleyes:
You didnt learn chidori yet, you never replied. :/
 

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D Rank

(Fuuton: Sensougouheki)-Wind Style Rumbling wind wall
• Type: Attack/Defense
• Range: Short
• Chakra Cost: 10
• Damage Points: 20
• Description: A wall of spinning wind that can push back weapon attacks and enemies using taijutsu.


C Rank

(Fuuton: Kami Kaze)-Wind Style Divine Wind
• Type: Attack/Supplementary
• Range: Short
• Chakra Cost: 15
• Damage Points: 30 (+10 if used with a fire type)
• Description: Creates for pillars of rotating wind that can be use with a fire to make fire tornadoes.

(Fuuton:Daitoppa)-Great Break Through
• Type:Attack
• Range:Short-Long
• Chakra Cost:15
• Damage Points:30
• Description:A gust of wind that is huge in diameter and can level a tree or to.

(Fuuton:Goukuuhou)-Wind Style:Great Air Cannon
• Type:Attack
• Range:Short-Mid
• Chakra Cost:15
• Damge Points:30
• Description:The users shoots a shpere of air at there target that can blow them backwards aswell as blow small objects along with the target.


(Fuuton:Kami Oroshi)-Wind Style Divine Wind From The Moutain
• Type:Attack
• Range:Short-Mid
• Chakra Cost:15
• Damage Points:30
• Description:A small medium strenght vortex of wind.

(Fuuton: Juuha Shou)-Wind Style Beast Wave Strike
• Type: Attack
• Range: Short
• Chakra Cost: 15
• Damage Points: 30
• Description: Slicing crescent shaped wind.

Fuuton:Surian Reppu)-Verdant Moutain Violent Wind
• Type: Supplementary/Attack
• Range: Short
• Chakra Cost: 15
• Damage Points: N/A(10 per turn if the attack hits)
• Description: The user can add wind chakra to a single kunai or shruiken and control its movement in the air. This jutsu lasts a max of three turns with the user paying – 2 chakra per turn to keep it active.

(Fuuton:Kaze Kiri) - Wind Style Wind Cutter
• Type: Supplementary
• Range: Short
• Chakra Cost: 15
• Damage Points: N/A
• Description: Divides an incoming wind attack making it harmless.



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B-Rank
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(Fuuton: Senpuuken)-Wind Style Hurricane Fist
• Type: Attack
• Range: Short-Mid
• Chakra Cost: 20
• Damage Points: 40
• Description: A vortex of wind shot out of the user’s fist wind he /she punches.

(Fuuton:Dai Kamaitachi)-Wind Style Great Cutting Whirlwind
• Type:Attack
• Range:Short-Mid
• Chakra Cost:20
• Damage Points:40
• Description:A bigger version of the cutting whirlwind.


Hey while youre in the custom thread could you check out the stuff i submitted and tell me if any are good? if you think some are overpowered let me know what i should change... i think theyre all good though...
 
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