[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[System001]

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Doton:Botoukai Kujo(Earth Style: Sphere demolition)
Rank:A
Type:Offense
Damage: 60
Chakra Cost:30
Description: The user preforms two handseals, causing several dense spiked sphere like rocks to violently erupt from the ground, each rock having a diameter of at least a foot. The Spiked balls orbit around the enemy at mutiple angles and directions essentially surronding the enemy in a "greater orb" through their orbiting keeping roughly 3feet away from the enemy at all times, and upon forming a second handseal, all of the rocks converge in on the enemy, crushing him inbetween he massess of spikes.
~No S Rank or above earth jutsu for the rest of the turn.
~Declined~ It's more or less alright save for the fact that 3 feet is incredible close, and please define how many rocks come out of the ground.

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Boukyaku (The Oblivion)
Rank:S
Type:weapon
Chakra cost:0/40
Damage:40
Description:It is a sword said to be forged long ago by the student of the very man who made the seven swordsman of the mist's swords, on the day that his teacher died he forged this sword in blinded rage and sorrow.It is said that this sword has many dormant abilities.The swords blade is about 4 and a half feet long and its hilt is roughly a foot long(including the guard and the pommel) the width of the blade is roughly 10 inches and a shallow groove runs along the middle of the flat of the blade on both sides.The sword was forged from a special alloy mined in the depths of a dormant volcano this alloy allows the user's fire chakra to be poured into the sword.The sword can also be repaired by pouring normal chakra into the sword which counts as a move,the sword also has

~All nature chakra's can be used with the sword however the sword prefers fire chakra
~The sword can only be infused with one nature chakra at a time
~The sword is not indestructible but is slightly stronger than your average sword due to its size and denseity
~It takes one turn for the sword to finish repairing
~While fire chakra is channeled into the sword the sword gains extra abilities giving the user:
~+5 to all kenjustu and fire justu
~Sword can only be infused with a nature chakra for five turns afterwards the sword requires a two turn cooldown before it can be infused again
~No water justu above B rank can be used while holding this sword.
~Can only be wielded by white flash and people he deems worthy

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(Akenomyōsei)The Morning Star
Rank:S
Damage:N/A
Type:Weapon
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40 for abilities
Description: The Morning Star is a legendary silvery snow white Fuuma Shuriken made of a lightweight yet immensly strong metal. It can be thrown with immense dexterity and accuracy and due to its light-weight build and heightened equilibrium the Fuuma Shuriken rotates at high speeds when thrown, easily reaching 400 rotations per minute and traveling at extreme speeds. Its blades are tapered to extremely sharp edges being able to slice through rocks with a level of grace beauty and strength unmatched by any sword. When traveling, because of its pure colour, it often reflects the suns rays making the blade dazzle with the colours of the rainbow, however because of its high rotation levels and speed of travel, it is often seen as a bright whitish light that can blind the enemy if they were to look directly at the blade, earning it the name of The Monring Star.The Morning Stars four blades are easily detachable and can be wielded like daggers if neccesary for close combat. Legend has it that upon creation, while being forged each each of the four blades were pre-infused with one of four elements, wind fire water and lightning.
The Morning Star comes with a silver chain that can easily be wrapped around and unwrapped from the inner rings of the blades for dislodging and retrieval of the Fuma Shuriken, or use the chain in conjunction with a single one of its blades creating a sword-chain effect.

-Abilities.
-Since the Morning Star's blades were preinfused with a element, the user can add basic chakra to the shuriken that will activate the element(s) producing the same effects as elemental chakra that manifests with a white or silverish tint that coats the Shuriken as it spins. This however can only be done with Two elements at a time and the elements cannot be at the opposite spectrum to eachother (Eg.Fire&Water)
-Fire coating causes the shuriken to burn and scald
-Wind coating heightens its cutting abilities rotation and speed
-Lightning coating causes it to vibrate making it sharper and cause slight paraylsis
-Water coating heightens cutting and causes target to become wet upon contact area.
-Coatings also allows the Morning Star to cut through B Rank(+Elemental dis-/advantages) Jutsu
-The chain was forged with its own abilities, the user through the use of basic chakra can make the chain extend and shorten or stiffen and harden to the extent that it resembles a rigid iron bar.

The abilities of The Morning Star makes it a very versatile weapon, that can be used for both close and long range fighting.Such as by detaching two of the blades and attaching them to either end of the chain which is then hardened the user can create a Naginta like weapon.

-Restrictions.
-For the Fuuma Shurken to be thrown, all Four blades must be attached and intact.
-Once thrown, the Shuriken has to be retrivied by physical means such as throwing it so that it loops around much like a boomerang, or via the use of the chain.
-Making the Chain rigid counts as a move. Chain can only be destroyed by S rank piercing and cutting techniques. Blades are indestructible (Doesn't mean it can cut through anything).

±± Declined ±± On resubmissions you are required to bold the changes you made. Even if this is a resubmit from the other thread, you still need to do so.



Kenjutsu: Tenrai Hishoue Arashi Ken (Sword Arts: Divine Soaring Storm Blade)
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Type:Offense
Description: The user crouches low while twisting their body slightly, bunching up their muscles and building up potential energy, with a blade held in hand, prefrably a sword. The user then springs upwards while untwisting their body causing them to rotate rapidly as they ascend via their chakra enhanced jump, knocking the enemy into the air next to them with their blade as they ascend, while spinning the user pumps out a large amount of chakra/elemental chakra from their blade the chakra creating a vortex like tornado that encircles the user mimicking the blades sharpness and damaging the enmy in the process as they are caught in the vortex. Depending on the type of chakra used the vortex can have serveral different effects such as heightened cutting for wind ability of parylsis for lightning ability to drench for water and the ability to burn for fire.
-Must state what chakra type is used, otherwise it is Normal Chakra
-Can only be used 3x
-After the technique ends the user is left vunerable in the air.
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Doton:Botoukai Kujo(Earth Style: Sphere demolition)
Rank:A
Type:Offense
Damage: 60
Chakra Cost:30
Description: The user preforms two handseals, causing one and a half dozen dense spiked sphere like rocks to violently erupt from the ground, each rock having a diameter of at least a foot. The Spiked balls orbit around the enemy at mutiple angles and directions essentially surronding the enemy in a "greater orb" through their orbiting keeping roughly 10 feet away from the enemy at all times, and upon forming a second handseal, all of the rocks converge in on the enemy, crushing him inbetween he massess of spikes.
~No S Rank or above earth jutsu for the rest of the turn.
~Approved~ So long as you understand that you must allow the rocks to form in orbit for a short time around the opponent before crushing them.

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Boukyaku (The Oblivion)
Rank:S
Type:weapon
Chakra cost:0/40
Damage:40
Description:It is a sword said to be forged long ago by the student of the very man who made the seven swordsman of the mist's swords, on the day that his teacher died he forged this sword in blinded rage and sorrow.It is said that this sword has many dormant abilities.The swords blade is about 4 and a half feet long and its hilt is roughly a foot long(including the guard and the pommel) the width of the blade is roughly 10 inches and a shallow groove runs along the middle of the flat of the blade on both sides.The sword was forged from a special alloy mined in the depths of a dormant volcano this alloy allows the user's fire chakra to be poured into the sword.The sword can also be repaired by pouring normal chakra into the sword which counts as a move,the sword also has

~All nature chakra's can be used with the sword however the sword prefers fire chakra
~The sword can only be infused with one nature chakra at a time
~The sword is not indestructible but is slightly stronger than your average sword due to its size and denseity
~It takes one turn for the sword to finish repairing
~While fire chakra is channeled into the sword the sword gains extra abilities giving the user:
~+5 to all kenjustu and fire justu
~Sword can only be infused with a nature chakra for five turns afterwards the sword requires a two turn cooldown before it can be infused again
~No water justu above B rank can be used while holding this sword.
~Can only be wielded by white flash and people he deems worthy

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(Akenomyōsei)The Morning Star
Rank:S
Damage:N/A
Type:Weapon
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40 for abilities
Description: The Morning Star is a legendary silvery snow white Fuuma Shuriken made of a lightweight yet immensly strong metal. It can be thrown with immense dexterity and accuracy and due to its light-weight build and heightened equilibrium the Fuuma Shuriken rotates at high speeds when thrown, easily reaching 400 rotations per minute and traveling at extreme speeds. Its blades are tapered to extremely sharp edges being able to slice through rocks with a level of grace beauty and strength unmatched by any sword. When traveling, because of its pure colour, it often reflects the suns rays making the blade dazzle with the colours of the rainbow, however because of its high rotation levels and speed of travel, it is often seen as a bright whitish light that can blind the enemy if they were to look directly at the blade, earning it the name of The Monring Star.The Morning Stars four blades are easily detachable and can be wielded like daggers if neccesary for close combat. Legend has it that upon creation, while being forged each each of the four blades were pre-infused with one of four elements, wind fire water and lightning.
The Morning Star comes with a silver chain that can easily be wrapped around and unwrapped from the inner rings of the blades for dislodging and retrieval of the Fuma Shuriken, or use the chain in conjunction with a single one of its blades creating a sword-chain effect.

-Abilities.
-Since the Morning Star's blades were preinfused with a element, the user can add basic chakra to the shuriken that will activate the element(s) producing the same effects as elemental chakra that manifests with a white or silverish tint that coats the Shuriken as it spins. This however can only be done with Two elements at a time and the elements cannot be at the opposite spectrum to eachother (Eg.Fire&Water)
-Fire coating causes the shuriken to burn and scald
-Wind coating heightens its cutting abilities rotation and speed
-Lightning coating causes it to vibrate making it sharper and cause slight paraylsis
-Water coating heightens cutting and causes target to become wet upon contact area.
-Coatings also allows the Morning Star to cut through B Rank(+Elemental dis-/advantages) Jutsu
-The chain was forged with its own abilities, the user through the use of basic chakra can make the chain extend and shorten or stiffen and harden to the extent that it resembles a rigid iron bar.

The abilities of The Morning Star makes it a very versatile weapon, that can be used for both close and long range fighting.Such as by detaching two of the blades and attaching them to either end of the chain which is then hardened the user can create a Naginta like weapon.

-Restrictions.
-For the Fuuma Shurken to be thrown, all Four blades must be attached and intact.
-Once thrown, the Shuriken has to be retrivied by physical means such as throwing it so that it loops around much like a boomerang, or via the use of the chain.
-Making the Chain rigid counts as a move. Chain can only be destroyed by S rank piercing and cutting techniques. Blades are indestructible (Doesn't mean it can cut through anything).
-Infusions count as moves.
-Can only cut through B-Rank techniques within reason and only up to 4 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Scaze.


~Leaving for Scorps~

±± Approved ±±


(Fuuton:Fuzei Tsuukikou) Wind Stle:Air Vent
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Type:Offensive/Supplementry
Description: The user causes several crisscrossed elongated slits to be created in the ground. These slits are forced open by wind that rises up from the earth beneath the opponent, the wind rises up in a strong gust, however due to the fact that the oppenings is rather slim yet long most of the wind is focused into several blades, the bladed gust of wind carries the opponent upwards into the air as it begins to slice them open. This technique can also be variated so that the wind rises from the ground from a signle square opening, causing the opponent, to be forced into the air with no damage recieved.
~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists. Do not Resubmit

 

[-Tauburn-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Kuchiyose: Batto: Zubat) Summoning: Bat: Zubat
Type: Summon
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 25
Damage: n/a
Description: Zubat is from a tiny race of bats that only stands 5 inches tall, with a wingspan of a foot, in length. Zubat has nothing special about it, besides the small tattoo on his forehead 心 (Mind), and large ears, which allow the bat to release a low pitch scream/ping, that acts as sonar location and to hear many other things. Once summoned the small bat will hide in the summoners cloths, and will stay their until the summoner calls the small bat out to return to where it was summoned from. Zubat's mainly a sensor/defensive summoning, his sensor ability comes from its large ears, while the summoning is in physical contact with the summoner, Zubat is able to notice if the summoner has been put under a genjutsu, once Zubat notices this his will bite the summoner and releases its own chakra into the summoner, canceling out the genjutsu. Zubat will also use its sensor ability to let the summoner know if their is something else to worry about on the field
- Zubat's sensor works as echo location. (Zubat sends out a low pitched screech/ping that bounces off everything up to long range.)
- Can only be summoned if user has signed the bat contract.
- Zubat has no set time for being on the field.
- Once summoned Zubat will crawl into the summoners cloths.

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~Declined~ I don't buy the genjutsu bit. How does Zubat know you're in a genjutsu through its sense of hearing alone?

Verification of ice bio...

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(Hyouton: Douwana) Ice Release: Body Catch
Type: Attack/Deff
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40 (If hit with the spikes at the end of the wings.)
Description: The user will focus water and wind chakra into their back, unseen to the opponent. The water a wind chakra will create a large amount of ice that will release once the user makes a single handseal. Once the ice is released it will form two "wings" (im calling them wings cause im not sure what else u could call them.) from the users back. The wings are a mass of ice that connects to the users back with sharp edges, from the users back the wings are small untill released whch they will grow (only grows in size not length) and surround the opponent, and spike like shapes at the opponents end that will prevent the opponent from escaping between the wings. The wings will then close down on the opponent trapping them in short range with the user.
- Can only be used 5 times per battle.
- Cannot be used twice in the same move.
- Can only be used in short range.
- Must have ermission from -Tauburn- to use.

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~Declined~ Define how long/large the "wings" are, how the opponent is caught, and how the opponent cannot see giant wings forming on your back...

(Hyouton: Onifea) Ice Release: Demon of Fear
Type: Deff
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40 (only if hit by explosion)
Description: The user will release water and wind chakra infront of themselves then make two handseals, and create a wall of Ice in the shape of a demons face. The wall will be created in short range of the user, and will beformed by pushing the water towards the opponent while at the same time freezing it, as it flys at the opponent. Once the wall/face is fully created it will drop and hit the ground, Then the user has only to hit the wall to smash through it but if the wall is hit it will explode in a mass of needles which fly at the opponent from the face and stab through the opponent.
- Can only be used 3 times per battle.
- Must be of the Yuki clan.
- No Ice the next turn.

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~Declined~ Poor description. I'm not entirely sure how this ends up being defensive as you only describe it's offensive abilities.

 

[Vayne]

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Ninja arts: Toxic transformation (Mizu rirīsu: Sekai saidai-kyū no mizu gijutsu)
Type:All
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: *The user creates a shadow clone (kage bunshin) that will have poison inside it's system the clone can then attack the opponent as the clone hits the opponent the clone puffs and poison covers the opponent.

Restrictions.
-Can only be used three times per battle.
-can not be used twice at the same turn.
-needs to be separated by a turn (the user).
-The poison only affects the opponents speed making it slower( makes handseals slower and a hand seal that can be done by one hand will become two hands to perform)
~Declined~ Alright concept, but you need to define how many clones can be made and show proof of a Medical Bio. If you do not have one, you cannot create such a jutsu.

Gentle fist style: 32 leg combo (Jentoru ken no sutairu: 32 Ashi no konbo)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: *The user after activating his Byakugan attacks the opponent with his gentle fist style but attacking the opponents leg stoping the chakra flow to the legs making the opponent unable to move. This move is better used when an opponent is wearing an armor for his chest.

Restrictions.
-Can only be used three times per battle
-lasts for 1 opponent turn.
-No gentle fist style techniques can be used at that turn or the following.
~Declined~ How is the more effective if the opponent is wearing chest armor, anyway?

Dimai sword (Dimai Ken)
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: non when not fusing 30 when fusing*
Damage: when not fusing 40 and when fusing 60(+5 if used in conjunction with water)
Description:* The Dimai sword is a sword made up of rare metals found near the earns core those metals make the blade of the sword and it is made up of a wood of the first hokage (holding area) this sword allows the user to fuse lightning element to the sword making the sword more sharper and deadly the sword can release bolts of lightning (D rank) if the user wishes.
If the user uses the bolt of lightning the bolts of lightning can cause water to be electrically charged, this sword can cut through stones with ease like a hit knife through butter.

Restrictions.
-Only lightning element can be fused to the sword.
-Lightning bolts count to the three jutsu limit.
-Can only be used by mangekyo byakugan.
-No lightning techniques of B rank and higher can be used in the same turn or the next.

Sword looks like this

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~Declined~ Do not Resubmit

First and third I won't resubmit.

For the second one I mean that it would be better when an opponent is wearing an armor since we can't use gentle fist style on his upper body so is it Better now

Gentle fist style: 32 leg combo (Jentoru ken no sutairu: 32 Ashi no konbo)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: *The user after activating his Byakugan attacks the opponent with his gentle fist style but attacking the opponents leg stoping the chakra flow to the legs making the opponent unable to move. This move is better used when an opponent is wearing an armor for his chest ,since f the opponent is wearing a upper body armor normal gentle fist can't be used on his upper body (chest area)

Restrictions.
-Can only be used three times per battle
-lasts for 1 opponent turn.
-No gentle fist style techniques can be used at that turn or the following.
Restrictions.
-Can only be used three times per battle
-lasts for 1 opponent turn.
-No gentle fist style techniques can be used at that turn or the following.
~Declined~ You didn't change anything, and the added explanation makes no sense.

New jutsu.

Kaze rirīsu: Imobalization no ken (Wind release: Fist of imobalization)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra:20
Damage: +15 to taijutsu related to hands and 5 damage to user
Description: *The user focuses his wind chakra to his fists and concentrates the wind around it in a sphere shape that surrounds his hand making a armor around his hand.


-Can nay be used two times per battle
-Lasts for three turns after being used*
-Five damage to user making cuts appear on the user's fists.
-This technique is capable of breaking through B rank fire shields and A rank and lower.
~Declined~ Incorrect chakra cost and poor description.

Maboroshi no geijutsu: Akaru-sa o motarasu mono (Illusionary arts: Bringer of lightness)
Type: Supplementery
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This is the opposite of bringer of darkness technique it brings a bright blinding light that makes the opponent unable to see the user the surrounding of the opponent will disappear and appear as a bright white light.

-Can only be used by a sharingan user.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-Lasts until opponent breaks out of tech.
-The opponent can still move freely but can't see.
~Declined~ Yeah, no.

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[Toshiro]

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(Raiton:Hiryū Gekizoku Shinten Raihō)-Flying Dragon Striking Heaven Shaking Thunder Cannon
Type:Attack
Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short-Long Range
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user raises their arm forward and outstretched, occasionally using their free hand to grip the firing arm for extra support, with the palm facing flat toward the target. They then fire a gigantic beam of electricity and chakra powerful enough to destroy anything that it comes into contact with. When the jutsu gets within short range from the target, it breaks into thousands of small senbons, which goes through the users body cutting off their chakra network due to the senbons being so tiny. This effect is a lot similar to Rasenshuriken, but the Senbons aren't fatal.

-Can only be taught|used by Toshiro
-Only usable 2 times per battle
-Three turn for cooling down
-No B-rank Lightning and above during the cooldown period

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~Declined~ Anything that it comes into contact with? Also, how would the senbon not be fatal if they cut the chakra network at a microscopic level?

(Raiton:Hiryū Gekizoku Shinten Raihō)-Flying Dragon Striking Heaven Shaking Thunder Cannon
Type:Attack
Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short-Long Range
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user raises their arm forward and outstretched, occasionally using their free hand to grip the firing arm for extra support, with the palm facing flat toward the target. They then fire a gigantic beam of electricity and chakra powerful enough to destroy most things that it comes into contact with. The user at any given time, can break the beam of electricity up into thousands of small senbons at will. If the senbons make contact with a opponents body it can cause eternal damage due to the senbon cutting off the opponent's chakra network, and causing internal bleeding. This effect is a lot similar to Rasenshuriken.

-Can only be taught|used by Toshiro
-Only usable 2 times per battle
-Three turn for cooling down
-No B-rank Lightning and above during the cooldown period

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~Declined~ Sorry, I gave this leeway before, but it's practically a giant Rasenshuriken beam, which I cannot allow.

 

[Sterling Malory Archer]

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Weapon: Ryūkyū Kotōmaru (竜糾虎淘丸, Dragon-Seeking Tiger Culler)
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short-Mid
Damage: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Description:
The sword is normal at first. But when fed chakra, Kotōmaru becomes a deadly weapon of destruction. When the user feeds the sword chakra, a mass of dense energy erupts around the user obscuring the vision of others. When the energy clears the weilder is found with a new attire.

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A dragon head's head envelops the user's shoulder and grey strips of cloth cover the forearm. Kotōmaru's blade is now entirely composed of blue energy, and a cape of the same color as the cloth drapes the user's back. Two slivers of blue energy float next to the user's right shoulder, and a disc next to the user's right. The user also has a cape on their waist to foot.

A charged Kotōmaru immensly increases the user's strength and also speed and defense increase. This is achieved through the chakra enhanced attire and the actual weapon. The chakra condenses (Not sure if that's the right word) the user's weight so that in short, they are extremely lightweight during movement, but certain aspect (Such as strength) are unaffected. The blade of energy, is the main source of strength. The energy is absolute raw power. The energy works similar to a high powered water machine used to cut steel. The strength has less to do with the user, and more to do with the actual weapon. The chakra infused with the attire is hardened and molded by an ancient technique that creates the kind of feel of a lightweight steel. The user will still feel the impact of an attack, but physical injury will be much lessened.

Strengths:
-Blade is indestructible (It is just pure energy)
-Blade can be extended till mid range in a swing (Max)
-The user's speed is boosted a lot. Through the attire which is chakra infused causing the user to be able to move swiftly through the battle field without resistance and yet full control. (-1 To Kotōmaru Complete for a Speed Boost)
-User has absolute defense against D-rank techniques
-Strength was removed.
-The time of Kotōmaru Complete (5-turns) begins in the next turn

Elemental Strengths:
Suiton (Defense): Can vapourize water technique with a slash of the sword (Up to C-rank)
Fuuton (Defense): Weakens all Wind techniques (2-ranks) {Through massive energy of the sword and the attire causing Pressure changes around the user weakening Wind Techniques}

Weaknesses:
-Blade can only extend twice
-User can only use the Speed Boost twice
-Absolute Defense can only be used twice.
-Kotōmaru Complete only lasts 4 turns MAX (Some techniques reduce length of Kotōmaru Complete)
-Kotōmaru disintergrates to the Shrine it is from to recharge it's energy (Will be gone for the rest of the battle)
-The user's right arm will be damaged from the use of Kotōmaru Complete
-Activation of Kotōmaru Complete takes up 2 moves instead of 1

Note: Can only be weilded By ~CoOkie Monster~

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Note to Scorps: The last Weakness "-Activation of Kotōmaru Complete takes up 2 moves instead of 1" if it's possible, could it be scratched out. If it balances the weapons abilities then it can stay

Oh and I couldn't exactly quote from the last declined one cause it's closed. But I looked at your comment and I bolded what I think should correct the criteria.

Removed Strength: -During Speed boosting, the user can move straight in to certain techniques without recoil or damage. (C-Rank and below)

±±Declined±± Ok the weapon is a mess. The description is too messy. Do it like this: clear the description and start new. Keep it simple and go for the bonus you really want. Don't keep adding things. ok?
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Name:Ryūkyū Zesshō Kentai (竜糾虎淘丸, Dragon-Seeking Finishing Thrust Combination)
Rank: S
Type: Attack (Combo)
Range: Short-Mid
Damage: 80
Chakra: 40
Description: During Kotōmaru Complete state the user charges chakra and Koto's energy. The user the uses an extreme speed boost to dive past the opponent slashing him. The user then straight after comes back and slashes the target through the back and stops in front of the user. The user then manipulate Kotōmaru's energy as the user swipes in an Uppercut motion stunning the target as the sword engulfs the user in a form a Energy Dragon. The user then comes down hard on the Opponent extending the sword to mid-range.
-Can only be used once
-Kotōmaru Complete ends immediatly
-Counts as 2 moves instead of one
`Can Only be used by Kotōmaru wielders

±±Declined±± Weapon wasn't approved.

 

[Kato.]

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(Suiton: Mouko) Water Style: Fierce Tiger Jutsu
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Type: Offence
Damage: 60
Chakra: 30
Description: The user performs the Tiger --> Snake handseals and creates a tiger from a water source, the tiger is the size of an average male tiger and has the same colours as the two tails (black and blue stripes)
The tiger can be controled by the users thoughts. The user can create up to three tigers at one time.


-Needs a water source
-Can only use twice in a battle
-Can only be used by Kato Rokuemon
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~Declined~ Similar technique already exists.
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(Suiton: Mouko Kyojin) Water Style: Giant Fierce Tiger Jutsu
Rank: S
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage: 80
Chakra: 40
Description: The user performs the Tiger --> Snake handseals and creates a giant tiger from a water source, the tiger is the around the size of gamakichi and has the same colours as the two tails (black and blue stripes)
The tiger can be controled by the users thoughts.

-Needs a water source
-Can only use once in a battle
-Can only be used by Kato Rokuemon
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(Fuuton: ) Wind Style: Divine Vortex
Rank: B
Type: Offence/Supplimentary
Range: Short-Mid
Damage: 40
Chakra: 30
Description: The user performs the rat handseal and creates a fierce vortex of wind around the opponent, trapping them.

-Can only be used by Kato Rokuemon
~Declined~ Similar technique already exists.

 

[Typhon]

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(Ninjutsu: Kemuritadai no Jutsu) | Ninja Arts: Heavy Smoke Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+10 to Smoke Techniques)
Description: When using a smoke technique the user forms two extra hand seals and focuses on creating more particulate matter for their smoke. The increased particulate matter causes the smoke to become thicker and heavier giving it a darker gray tone. Because of the increased weight it hits with more force and makes it even more difficult to breathe. It also gives the smoke resistance to being blown away giving the technique used resistance to A-rank and below wind techniques.
-Requires wrist launcher(s) for use.
-Cannot be used in conjunction with a technique that uses smoke bombs.
-Can be used four times per battle.

±± Declined ±± The resistance against A-Rank and below wind isn't possible. If you use this in a B-Rank Smoke jutsu, it will be a Strong B-Rank but a B-Rank smoke non the less which would make it weak against B-Rank and above wind. Be it a normal B-Rank Smoke and it would be weak against C-Rank wind and above.

(Ninjutsu: Kemuritadai no Jutsu) | Ninja Arts: Heavy Smoke Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+10 to Smoke Techniques)
Description: When using a smoke technique the user forms two extra hand seals and focuses on creating more particulate matter for their smoke. The increased particulate matter causes the smoke to become thicker and heavier giving it a darker gray tone. Because of the increased weight it hits with more force and makes it even more difficult to breathe. It also gives the smoke resistance to being blown away giving the technique used resistance to wind techniques equal to its rank and below. However stagnant smoke techniques would only be resistant to techniques one rank below them.
-Requires wrist launcher(s) for use.
-Cannot be used in conjunction with a technique that uses smoke bombs.
-Can be used four times per battle.

I changed it to A-rank and below to equal to the technique's rank and below for moving smoke techniques, but one rank below the technique used for stationary smoke (i.e. a smoke screen or something like that). My thinking is that a blast of smoke would be about equal to a blast of wind since they're similar, but if the weight of the smoke is increased it should be able to break through the wind with the added force. I don't think smoke has a natural weakness to wind as in the anime they said the smoke was weak to water.

~Declined~ Please follow proper template for the given rank using correct chakra points.

(Ninjutsu: Yomi Haiki) | Ninja Arts: Underworld Exhaust
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 30
Description: The user forms two hand seals and slams their palms on the ground. This motion can easily be misconstrued as the initiation of an earth technique, however what the user is doing is inserting the nozzle of their wrist launcher into the earth. They then release that smoke into the earth and have it burst out of the ground underneath the target, damaging their legs and launching them into the air.
-Can be used four times per battle.
-Requires wrist launchers.
~Declined~ Please follow proper template for the given rank using correct chakra and damage points.

(Ninjutsu: Kemuri Hokousha) | Ninja Arts: Smoke Walkers
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user or a clone to merge with a source of smoke and move through it. This allows them to mask their presence and move in complete silence. They can't attack while in merged with the smoke and must reform before their turn ends. The speed they can move while in the smoke is slightly faster than a running ninja.
-Can only be used by the user or smoke clones.
-Can be used three times per battle.
~Declined~ Please follow proper template for the given rank using correct chakra points.

 

[TheGreyFox]

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Shadow claw jutsu(kage tsume jutsu)
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:N/A
Description the user shadow wraps around the users arm to the hand and makes a claw then the user dashes twords the target plunging the shadow claw into the targets chest
~Declined~ How long are the blades of the claw? Also considering this is an attack it should include damage points, and the range should be short.

Shadow lance(kage mori jutsu)
Type:Attack
Rank:B
Range:N/A
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:40
Description:the user shadow wraps around and makes a lance to use in the fight when the user lets go of the lance the shadow turns back to a shadow
~Declined~ How long is the lance? How long does the lance last? You would need to be constantly manipulating your shadow to keep its shape and thus you would be restricted to using shadow related techniques or things that don't require chakra. Unless of course if you've aquired Yin/Yang training.

shadow boxing(kage bokushingu)
Type:Attack/Defence
Rank:C
Range:short/long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:30
Description:the users shadow wraps around the arms and makes a big fist and when the user punches the target the shadow steraches hiting the target giving the user some space from the target
~Declined~ Make it up to mid range.

 

[BlacKing]

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Hyouga: Tsukishiro (Glacier Style: White Moon)
Type: Attack
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
Description: the user, while holding their blade upside down and charges Hyouton chakra into the blade so that it is covered with ice and into the ground as well, and then the user will make a slashing motion when the target is in position. When doing this, a large ice circle forms under the target via the hyouton chakra that was sent into the ground, which freezes everything that touches it. The circle not only freezes the ground, (preventing the target from using the earth below them to escape) but everything within the circle's influence including anything above it up in the air, creating an extending pillar of light that then freezes all within in the circle. Shortly after being frozen, the victim then shatters along with the ice. If the user is inside of the circle with the target having been in extremely close range of each other, a small ice pillar immediately rise from the ice circle and push the user out of range. This technique happens extremely quickly, making it very hard to avoid.
Note: Can only be done 1x per battle
Note: The blade will break in half after using this technique.
Note: No Hyouga techs above B Rank for two turns.
Note: No Ice Techs above A Rank in same turn.
Note: User takes 40 pain from slight frost bite.
Note: Must be of the Yuki Clan.

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~Declined~ How big is this circle? Also, I will not allow the pillar being made unless it counts as one of the moves per turn. I'd also like you to change the damage from frost bite to regular damage, as I'm sure your biography must be immune to cold. Lastly, where are the rest of the physical drawbacks? You and I both know that the damage won't really affect you in any way. And neither will restricting your use of Hyouga, and Ice.

Hyouga: Hakuren (Glacier Style: White Ripple)
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: the user charges his blade with hyouton chakra and punctures the ground 4 times in rapid succession in front of them in a semi circle. The user then takes a battle stance as the ice particles begin to flow up from the punctures made in the ground. They build up and then fire toward the target in a massive, powerful pure-white wave of ice coming out of the blade. If hit, this will encase the target in a block of ice.
Note: Must be of the Yuki Clan.
Note: Can only be done 3x per battle
Note: User must wait 4 turns between each use.
Note: No Hyouga techniques can be performed in the same turn.
Note: No Hyouga Technique above A Rank next turn or the turn before.

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~Declined~ The gif looks nice and all but, you're telling me a solid wave of ice can travel? I could understand it if it was snow but not solid ice.

Hyouga: Shirafune (Glacier Style: White Sword)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 25
Damage: 40
Description: charging Hyouton chakra into a broken sword, the user will stab in the direction of the opponent with the broken sword, stopping just out of reach of their opponents arm and sword reach. This allows the user to reform their blade with ice particles, piercing through objects in its path. The ice blade extends 5 feet into the opponent. After piercing its target, it turns their insides to ice. This technique can also be done by the user purposely breaking their sword against the blade of the opponent with an extremely hard swing and then proceeding with the technique.
Note: Must be of the Yuki Clan.

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~Declined~ Remove the effect of turning the insides to ice.

 

[Klaus]

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Katon: Yomi's Hougyo: Fire style (Hade's Demise)
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will make the necesary hand signs and charge katon chakra in there lungs after doing so the user will spew out a large fire blast that will take the form of a hand that will surround the enemy in a circular form and burn him in betwenn the flames.

-Note-
Can only be used/taught by Sage of Darkness
User must wait 3 turns before using this jutsu again
The user can't use any B rank or above fire jutsu's that turn
The user will remain breathless for a moment
~Declined~ Similar technique already exists.________________________________________________________________

Katon: Yomi's Shintan: Fire style: (Hade's Judgement)
Type: Supplemantry/ Defence
Range: Short
Rank: B
Chakra: 25
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will make the Tiger, then Ox, Then Rooster, Then Boar, Then Horse and Tiger again. After that the user will spew out a large flame that will surrond the enemy and take the form of a fire prison that will leave the user unable to move for 2 turns.

-Note-
This Jutsu can only be used/taught by S.O.D
Can only use this jutsu twice in battle
~Declined~ Similar technique already exists.
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Katon: Yomi's Hinote: Fire style: (Hade's Flames)
Type: Offense
Rank:B
Range: Mid
Chakra: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: This jutsu can only be used in conjuction with Hade's Jugdement. The user will make the Tiger, Boar, Horse, Rooster, Ox and Snake hand signs and raise his hands. After doing so fire will rise from the fire prison and burn the enemy alive.

-Note-
Can Only be used/taught by Sage of Darkness
After performing this jutsu the user will remain unmoble for a turn
Can't use this jutsu more than 2 times.

~Declined~ Above technique was not approved.




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[Reborn]

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(Genjutsu: Okure Manako) Illusionary Technique: Lagging Eye
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The caster of this genjutsu will first activate the jutsu by preforming two seals (Ox → Snake), upon being making those two seals, the victim will fall under the caster's illusion. The caster causes a disruption in their opponent's chakra which affects the area of the brain that controls sight perception and mental processing. The caster makes it so that their victim's sight and mental processing of events around them are is lagging behind by a few seconds, allowing the caster to move freely without their opponent properly being able to see and understand their movements immediently. This is useful in that, it allows the user to take advantage of the opening left behind and attack before their opponent can properly comprehend what's going on.
~This jutsu changes no surroundings nor creates any abnormalities meaning it's hard to detect/
~Jutsu's affects last for a few (between 3-5seconds) if unnoticed
~Can be used 3 times per match
~Can only be taught by Reborn

(Genjutsu: Fusenmei no Ken) Illusionary Technique: Blur of the Blade
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The caster will lock onto the shinobi's chakra signature by looking at them and sending their chakra to cause a disruption in their opponent's own. The caster will cause a chakra disruption in their opponent's chakra, which affects the area of the brain that affects sight perception and reflex. The caster will cause the illusion as if he is moving insanely fast. The caster is affecting their opponent's sight and reflex, causing them believe they're moving as fast as a blur and they can't keep up. What this does is make it makes the victim feel as if the caster is too fast for them because of the speed (their reflex) and the victim will only see blurring movements (sight perception).
~This jutsu requires the caster to have a direct line of sight to their opponent
~This technique hiders a shinobi's natural reflex by a few seconds
~Can be used three times per match
~Can only be taught by Reborn
~Both Declined~ A Similar Technique already exists. Sorry.

 

[Alyx]

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Summoning Animal:White Tailed Eagles*
Scroll Owner:XxFallenUchihaxX
Other Users who have signed contract: None
Summoning Boss if existing:Snow Ball
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:Kenro,Davio
Description and Background:*The White-tailed Eagle is a very large bird. It measures 69–95 cm (27–37 in) in length with a 1.82–2.44 m (6.0–8.0 ft) wingspan. Females, typically weighing 4–6.9 kg (8.8–15 lb), are slightly larger than males, which weigh 3.1–5.4 kg (6.8–12 lb).The record weight was 7.5 kg (17 lb) for a specimen from Scotland, while a more recent huge female from Greenland reportedly spanned 2.53 m (8.3 ft) across the wings. The White-tailed Eagle is sometimes considered the fourth largest eagle in the world.It has broad "barn door" wings, a large head and a thick "meat-cleaver" beak. The adult is mainly brown except for the paler head and neck, blackish flight feathers, distinctive white tail, and yellow bill and legs. In juvenile birds the tail and bill are darker, with the tail becoming white with a dark terminal band in sub-adults.
~Leaving for Scorps~

±±Declined±±Eagles contract already exists. Search the archived custom jutsu thread to see the owner and ask him if you have his permission to make a branch family of eagles.

 

[Gary777]

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Summoning Animal:Albatross (arubatorosu)
Scroll Owner:Gary777
Other Users who have signed contract:: Gary777 ,
Summoning Boss if existing: Merlin

(Kchuysei:Merlin) Summoning: Merlin
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:Merlin is the king of albatross. He is as big as Gamabunta but his talons are black n grey and his body is white with black markings. Merlin can use up to A rank wind release and and if it requires hands signs the summoner can do the hand signs for him. He will allow the summoner to ride in his head. He flies at great speeds and use his claws and beak to attack at enemies. Merlin being a sea bird can also go under water The summoner can go in his feathers if he goes under water but this will count as a turn.
Note:
-This Summoning can only be in play for 5-turns.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Albatross Contract.
-This Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.


Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: Ruff and knot .

(Kchuysei: Ruff) Summoning: Ruff
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: mid - long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After the user does the hands signs they can summon Ruff. Ruff is the bother of Merlin and is water user. He is the same size of Merlin but he uses up to A water release with his mouth . He has also allows people to ride him and go inside his feather to go underwater.Ruff travels very fast under the water with the help of his wing span .
Note-this Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns.
-this Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Albatross Contract.
-this Summoning can only be Summoned 3x per battle.

(Kchuysei: knot) Summoning: knot
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After the user does the hands signs they can summon Knot. knot is the sister of Merlin . She is the smaller size than Merlin she uses up to B rank fire release . She has anger problems but will take on any enemy.She can use her talons and beak to attack the enemy and his summons she can also be used for aerial attacks during battle .
Note
-this Summoning can only be in play for 3-turns.
-this Summoning can only be Summoned by someone with the Albatross Contract.
-this Summoning can only be Summoned once per battle.
~Leaving for Scorps~
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[Yagura]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Ikazuchi Uesama Seiteki Tsukainotori) - Thunder Emperor Static Remnant
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Close-Short (self)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:The Thunder Emperor while retreating or moving to another location leaves a lightning clone that can electrocute the opponent when he/she touches it. The lightning clone cannot move and can be noticed by any ninja above Jounin rank through its bright light of lightning glowing inside it.
Note: Must use Thunder Emperor Mode
~Declined~ No restrictions and generic. Also, why would only Jounin-level opponents and higher be able to see it? You didn't note any special properties about it. Gennin and Chunin aren't blind.

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(Ikazuchi Uesama Saishuu Goku) - Thunder Emperor Last Words
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Close-Short (self)
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
Description: The Thunder Emperor releases points his left index finger to the sky while his right hand is pointed to the opponent. While in that state a large lightning bolt will hit the enemy and after that thunderclaps can be heard. The thunder brings a loud noise to the enemy and makes the opponent's ears bleed. The opponent will be fallen into a genjutsu seeing himself being electrocuted by his loved ones. The user must stay in his position in order to continue the jutsu. He can be stopped if he is disturbed. The jutsu, if perfectly executed with no disturbances, will last for 2 turns. If he is disturbed, the thunder emperor mode deactivates and cannot be used again.
~Declined~ Overpowered, no restrictions, and a genjutsu after hitting the opponent with lightning and having the opponent's ears bleed? I don't think so.

(Ikazuchi Uesama Seiteki Tsukainotori) - Thunder Emperor Static Remnant
Type: Supplementary/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Close-Short (self)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:The Thunder Emperor while retreating or moving to another location leaves a lightning clone in his current location that can electrocute the opponent when he/she touches it.
Note:
-Must use Thunder Emperor Mode
-Can only leave 2 clones in the area and can only be used 6 times.
-Each clone counts as 1 turn.
~Declined~ I should've told you before, but explain how severe the electrocution is, and reduce it's usage. 6 is too much

(Ikazuchi Uesama Saishuu Goku) - Thunder Emperor Last Words
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
Description: The Thunder Emperor releases points his left index finger to the sky while his right hand is pointed to the opponent. While in that state a large lightning bolt will hit the enemy and after that thunderclaps can be heard. The lightning consumes a large scale of area in a particular range. Lightning if hit against the opponent will electrocute him/her and causing to death. If the enemy evades it he/she can be blinded if he sees the lightning. The thunderclaps release a violent noise that can disrupt the hearing senses of the opponent making him unable to sense the enemy using sound.
Note:
-Must use Thunder Emperor Mode
-The stance must not be disturbed in order for the jutsu to activate.
-The jutsu lasts for 2 turns
-Can only be used once per battle
~Declined~ I don't think so. Instant Death or Blindness with added deafening? Also, you didn't explain why this takes 2 turns. Exactly what happens on the first turn and what happens on the second turn. Distribute the effects.

(Raiton-Fuuton Sukuro-ru no Jutsu) - Lightning-Wind Scroll Technique
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user throws out a big scroll that has a seal inside of supressed Raiton (from Chidori) and Fuuton (from Rasengan). When thrown the scroll flips out and releases the two supressed chakras resulting in a electric discharge that causes an explosion in the range the scroll was thrown. This cannot be evaded by hiding underground because of the strong explosion. If the scroll is destroyed before it opens, it explodes immediately earlier than the needed time for it to activate.
Note:
-Must have used Chidori and Rasengan before using. Must not use the two jutsus against the opponent. The jutsus must be suppressed inside a scroll.
-Needs 1 turn for the scroll to open.
-The user only has two RF scrolls.
-The two scrolls cannot be used at the same time.
-Can only be used by Yagura
~Declined~ Simply explain how the scroll can be destroyed.

 

[-Cobalt-]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Name: (Ninpou:Naiteki Chakra Keiteki) Inner Chakra Alarm
Rank:C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Description:Inner Chakra Alarm is a specially designed technique which requires advanced chakra control.This can only be attained under rigorous training and discipline.When this technique is activated the user's own chakra becomes more sensitive to any kind of foreign chakra.The sole purpose of this technique is to alarm the user when he is under the influence of a Genjutsu technique.If foreign chakra disrupts the user's chakra flow,the user's chakra will react by giving the user an itching sensation in the nape of their neck.The user will then react accordingly to break out of the illusion.
Note:Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
Note:This can be used twice per battle and once activated it lasts for 4 turns.
~Declined~ *sigh* Done before

Name: (Maruchipuru Sochi Ryou) Multiple Step Skill
Rank:C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:20
Damage:N/A
Description:The Multiple Step Skill is a nintajiutsu skill that requires a small portion of the user's chakra to be used.The multiple step skill is performed in a way that when the user steps forwards he channels chakra into his feet releasing small portions that raise and lower his foot thus making it look as if he is stepping.This does not in any way increase the users speed,only the number of steps made.However there is a limitation of "chakra steps" the user can make.The maximum number of "chakra steps" the user can perform is 6.So if the user does 2 steps these 2 steps are multiplied by 6 so giving a total 12 steps.This allows the user to move quickly from location to location.
Note:Can only be taught by -Cobalt-.
Note:The user can make 1 to 6 chakra steps.Any actual step that he makes is multiplied with a number from 1 to 6.
Note:5-6 chakra steps can only be done twice per battle,the rest can be done as much as the user wants to.
~Declined~ I'm not really sure what the goal of this technique is. Also, the bolded pretty much contradict one another.

Name: (Mokuton:Mokuzai Kaibutsu)Wood Release:Wooden Monster
Rank:S
Type:Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description:The user performs the Snake hand seal and channels chakra in front of him.Wood begins to sprout our of the ground fusing together into a large clump of wood.As the wood raises out of the ground it starts taking form thus creating a large humanoid behemoth of Wood.The Behemoth is extremely strong being able to rip out trees out of the ground,but his downside is he lacks speed.He is very large being 10m in height and massive in weight.He is very resistant to all kinds of damage so B-rank and below techniques of any element do not inflict him any damage.He carries a large circular shield with him and a bat which he has when he is created.He can be created very fast thus he can use as a quick defense from an incoming technique or attack.
Note:Must be taught by -Cobalt-.
Note:Can only be used once per battle.
Note:He is resistant to B-rank and below techniques.
Note:Once created he stays on the field for 4 turns unless he is destroyed.
Note:Must have a Wood bio.

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~Declined~ Completely impervious to any B-rank and below technique, you say? Does that include a massive B-rank Fireball? 'Cause wood burns well, you know. Otherwise, the technique is fine, but is there anything offensive this beast is capable of that you want to make clear, or is it purely restricted to physical attacks?

 

[tunevstoon]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

No word for oscillating
(Chakra Tsuruoto): Chakra oscillation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: E
Range: Close(self)
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: n/a(+10 to infused weapons)
Description: The user moves their whole chakra back and forth at a maintained speed to the point of oscillating. This jutsu can stop genjutsu before it begins or cancel it, due to the user’s chakra being unstable. You must be still for as long as three hand weaves before moving. At this point whatever chakra the user molds/infuses will be oscillating (oscillating chakra infused weapons can cut through materials like wood when held pressed against it). If the user is hit hard enough this jutsu is canceled. This jutsu is the gateway to wave frequency manipulation justsu’s.
*Can only be taught by Nami Takusan

(Heki-Teikan): False Clear Vision
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D
Range: Close(self)
Chakra Cost: 10 (-2 for every turn this is used)
Damage Points: n/a
Description: after using (Chakra Tsuruoto) the user then molds chakra over their own eye(s), and tunes it to a certain frequency using a wave frequency modifier. This allows the user to see in different light spectrum's.
*user needs to have a wave frequency modifier.
*can only be used by Nami Takusan(for now).

(Koutetsu(exchanging places)): Koutetsu
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: E
Range: n/a
Chakra Cost: 5
Damage Points: n/a
Description: after using (chakra tsuruoto) the user could then tossing preset frequency chakra waves in varies locations in the air without a clue to the enemy(unless the user can see chakra),the enemy also must have the same preset frequency chakra connected to which ever part is being moved for this to work. When the wave is actived the chakras switches places before being used up, causing whatever is attached to it to be relocated to that spot
*user needs to have a wave frequency modifier.
*can only be used by Nami Takusan.
~All Declined~ Interesting concepts, but E-rank and D-rank? Really?

 

[black uchiha]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Kingu Shinobu) King Shinobu
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons the King of Mt. Gen. Lord Shinobu is one of the few beetles of Mt. Gen that stands in a humanoid from. King Shinobu stands 40ft tall, with a horn extending another 10ft from his head. Shinobu hands are tipped with claws, and he has powerful wings extending from his back for flight. He is capable of flying at high speed even while carrying extra weight. Being king, Shinobu is the strongest of all the Mt. Gen beetle. He has the nature affinitie of wind using it up to S-rank, his wings adds +10 damage to the wind. He has a special ability to release a loud hissing sound (

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under description and ecology) in a specific direction, that is deafening and debilitating to anyone/anything in its path (up to mid-range). Upon hearing this, the opponent(s) muscles become weak and fall to the ground unable to move for a short time (1 turn).
- Can only be summoned once per battle
- Only last 4 turns
- Wings add +10 damage to wind techs
- Hissing can only be used 2 times per battle
- Paralysis only last 1 turn
- The user can be caught in the hissing
- Can't summon another summoning for 3 turns after Shinobu is disspelled
- Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract
- Must have signed the Rhinoceros Beetle contract for 3 months
~Declined~ First of all, there are no serious restrictions for this, and the paralysis can easily be abused. Plus, I see no point in the user being affected by the hissing, as the opponent would be practically dead anyway.

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(Kingu Shinobu) King Shinobu
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons the King of Mt. Gen. Lord Shinobu is one of the few beetles of Mt. Gen that stands in a humanoid from. King Shinobu stands 40ft tall, with a horn extending another 10ft from his head. Shinobu hands are tipped with claws, and he has powerful wings extending from his back for flight. He is capable of flying at high speed even while carrying extra weight. Being king, Shinobu is the strongest of all the Mt. Gen beetle. He has the nature affinitie of wind using it up to S-rank, his wings adds +10 damage to the wind. He has a special ability to release a loud hissing sound (

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under description and ecology) in a specific direction, that is deafening and debilitating to anyone/anything in its path (up to mid-range). Upon hearing this, the opponent(s) muscles become weak and fall to the ground unable to move for a short time (1 turn).
- Can only be summoned once per battle
- Only last 5 turns
- Wings add +10 damage to wind techs
- Hissing can only be used 2 times per battle
- Paralysis only last 1 turn
- The user can be caught in the hissing
- Hissing counts as 1 of the users moves
- Can only use 1 other move per turn that hissing is used (2 moves in that turn)
- Each time hissing is used Shinobu's time on the field is shortened by 1 turn
- Can't summon another summoning for 3 turns after Shinobu is disspelled
- Must sign the Rhinoceros Beetle contract
- Must have signed the Rhinoceros Beetle contract for 3 months


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~Leaving for Scorps, as I still don't agree with this~

±± Declined ±± Ok, first there are a huge amount of useless restrictions in this summon just to add up in the hopes that we miss the main point and the main point is that you can paralyze an opponent and kill him pratically without defence. The hizzing effect can be present but as a low rank Genjutsu, not as a non specific ability. Non specific abilities mean non specific possible counters which i won't accept. Also, the +10 to wind...not going to happen so take it out. 5 turns for a boss summon? Nope. Maximum we accept for S-Rank summons is 4 turns unless its a very special submission. This is OP in the sense that it has to many lose ends. One more go at it and then its DNR from my part.

 

[Korra.]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

I have a steel bio

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(Koton: Hagane yari) Steel Release: Steel Spears
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Mid
Chakra:25
Damage:40
Description: The user will gather there Koton chakra and create a 5 steels spears and throw them diretly at the opponent.
Note:Must have Steel Release
Note: Must Be Taught by ~Johninto~
~Approved~

(Koton: Bakkusuchīrufenikkusu) Steel Release: Black Steel Phoenix
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will do 1 hand sign and gather their Koton chakra and create a Phoenix the size of Sasuke's Hawk made out of Black Steel. The user will than send the dragon straight at the opponent. The Phoenix can also block ninja tools.
Note: Must have Steel Release
Note: Has to be taught by ~Johninto~
Note: Usable 4 times a battle
~Declined~ Care to specify the "black steel" scheme?

Resubmitting
(Koton: Bakkusuchīrufenikkusu) Steel Release: Black Steel Phoenix
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will do 1 hand sign and gather their Koton chakra and create a Phoenix the size of Sasuke's Hawk made out of Steel thats in the color of black. The user will than send the dragon straight at the opponent. The Phoenix can also block ninja tools.
Note: Must have Steel Release
Note: Has to be taught by ~Johninto~
Note: Usable 4 times a battle
~Declined~ Seriously? -_- I mean, what is special about the phoenix being made of "Black steel" (I didn't need a elementary-school level description)? Does the black steel have any special properties or is it purely aesthetic?

 

[LolaxXx]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Lightning Release: Almighty Lightning Barrier ( Zennou Raikou Shouheki)
Type: Supplementry/defense
Rank:A
Range:Short-mid
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: Focusing their chakra, the user does a number of handseals and creates a large electric dome around themselves and the opponent, trapping the opponent inside. The dome goes 20 feet in a circle, including underground as well. Inside the barrier is filled with the users lightning chakra, allowing the user to be able to sense what is going on inside the barrier. While inside the user can have their lightning jutsu strike the opponent from any direction they choose. Can use to block outside Lightning attacks A-Rank and below. If the opponent comes into contact with the walls of the barrier, they are immidiately shocked with a small surge of lightning, causing them to jerk back, away from the lightning, an opponent can force there way out but as a result will be temporarily paralyzed. However, by using a powerful wind technique, the opponent can blow a hole, or even destroy the entire barrier.
- Can only be taught by Lola
~Declined~ It's not too bad, but you need to define how long the barrier can be sustained, any restrictions related to this use of this technique, and if the user can strike opponents outside of the barrier with lightning (as in the bolded).

Lightning Release: Almighty Lightning Strikes ( Zennou Raikou Dageki )
Type: Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: By using their lighting chakra in the air. The user moves at a extremely fast speed, surrounding themselves with the lighting chakra, making it seem like they are just a white flash of lightning. Using the chakra, the user assaults the opponent with a barrage of quick lightning infuse punches and kicks coming from all directions due to the user quickly running around the opponent, and ultimately finishing the attack with a crushing headbutt. The speed in which the attacks come makes it difficult for an unsuspecting opponent to successfully react.
- Can only be taught by Lola
- Can only use after successfully creating the Almighty Lightning Barrier
- Sharingan users especially can easily keep up with the speed of the attack, just because of the ability to better predict and precieve movement.
~Declined~ First Technique Wasn't Approved

Lightning Release: Almighty Lightning Step ( Zennou Raikou Sochi )
Type: Supplementry
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: After making the respective handseals, and focusing on their lightning chakra in the air, the user uses the chakra to increase their speed for a brief instant. The user can move at a short distance at incredible speed, allowing them to dodge small/medium scale attacks, or to help get in close to opponents.
- Can Only be used after successfully using Almighty Lightning Barrier

Please edit if needed... Im not familiar with the handseal thing so i hope that dosent matter.
~Declined~ First Technique Wasn't Approved

Lightning Release: Almighty Lightning Barrier ( Zennou Raikou Shouheki)
Type: Supplementry/defense
Rank:A
Range:Short-mid
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: Focusing their chakra, the user does a number of handseals and creates a large electric dome around themselves and the opponent, trapping the opponent inside. The dome goes 45 feet in a circle, including underground as well. Inside the barrier is filled with the users lightning chakra, allowing the user to be able to sense what is going on inside the barrier. While inside the user can have their lightning jutsu strike the opponent from any direction they choose inside the barrier. Since the user is concentrating their chakra inside the barrier, they cannot attack anyone outside the barrier. If the opponent comes into contact with the walls of the barrier, they are immidiately shocked with a small surge of lightning, causing them to jerk back, away from the lightning, an opponent can force there way out but as a result will be temporarily paralyzed. However, by using a powerful wind technique, the opponent can blow a hole, or even destroy the entire barrier.
- Can only be taught by Lola
- lasts for 5 turns
- The Caster an only use Almighty Lightning techniques while sustaining the barrier
~Approved~ I changed it from 20 to 45 feet for good measure.

Lightning Release: Almighty Lightning Strikes ( Zennou Raikou Dageki )
Type: Attack
Rank:A
Range:Short-mid
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: By using their lighting chakra in the air. The user moves at a extremely fast speed, surrounding themselves with the lighting chakra, making it seem like they are just a white flash of lightning. Using the chakra, the user assaults the opponent with a barrage of quick lightning infuse punches and kicks coming from all directions due to the user quickly running around the opponent, and ultimately finishing the attack with a crushing headbutt. The speed in which the attacks come makes it difficult for an unsuspecting opponent to successfully react.
- Can only be taught by Lola
- Can only use after successfully creating the Almighty Lightning Barrier
- Sharingan users especially can easily keep up with the speed of the attack, just because of the ability to better predict and precieve movement.
-Can only be used inside of the barrier
~Approved~ Added a Note

Lightning Release: Almighty Lightning Step ( Zennou Raikou Sochi )
Type: Supplementry
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: After making the respective handseals, and focusing on their lightning chakra in the air, the user uses the chakra to increase their speed for a brief instant. The user can move at a short distance at incredible speed, allowing them to dodge small/medium scale attacks, or to help get in close to opponents. The speed in which the user moves is as fast as it would take to perform handseals.
- Can Only be used after successfully using Almighty Lightning Barrier
- Can Only dodge up to B-rank or below attacks.
- Can only move in a linear direction short distances from close to mid and vice versa
~Approved~

 

[Roger23]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Raiton/Doton: ikazuchi mori, Lightning/Earth Style: Thunder Lance
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user forms a spear in his dominant hand. (made out of solid earth) He then coats the spear with his raiton chakra and throws it at his opponent. The spear will fly faster and hit harder thanks to the raiton coat. The spear will go through an enemy but it wont stop. The spear leaves a sizziling hole in whatever it hits. Even if the spear is hit by a wind jutsu, only the coating will go off and the spear will still fly at their opponent unless it gets buffeted by the wind.

note: the spear will disentegrate if it goes pass mid-range
note: user must know A-rank Earth and A-rank Lightning
note: the spear can be destroyed by an S-rank wind tech
~Declined~ Do not Resubmit