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Rank:A
Type:Offense
Damage: 60
Chakra Cost:30
Description: The user preforms two handseals, causing one and a half dozen dense spiked sphere like rocks to violently erupt from the ground, each rock having a diameter of at least a foot. The Spiked balls orbit around the enemy at mutiple angles and directions essentially surronding the enemy in a "greater orb" through their orbiting keeping roughly 10 feet away from the enemy at all times, and upon forming a second handseal, all of the rocks converge in on the enemy, crushing him inbetween he massess of spikes.
~No S Rank or above earth jutsu for the rest of the turn.
~Approved~ So long as you understand that you must allow the rocks to form in orbit for a short time around the opponent before crushing them.
Dropping
Boukyaku (The Oblivion)
Rank:S
Type:weapon
Chakra cost:0/40
Damage:40
Description:It is a sword said to be forged long ago by the student of the very man who made the seven swordsman of the mist's swords, on the day that his teacher died he forged this sword in blinded rage and sorrow.It is said that this sword has many dormant abilities.The swords blade is about 4 and a half feet long and its hilt is roughly a foot long(including the guard and the pommel) the width of the blade is roughly 10 inches and a shallow groove runs along the middle of the flat of the blade on both sides.The sword was forged from a special alloy mined in the depths of a dormant volcano this alloy allows the user's fire chakra to be poured into the sword.The sword can also be repaired by pouring normal chakra into the sword which counts as a move,the sword also has
~All nature chakra's can be used with the sword however the sword prefers fire chakra
~The sword can only be infused with one nature chakra at a time
~The sword is not indestructible but is slightly stronger than your average sword due to its size and denseity
~It takes one turn for the sword to finish repairing
~While fire chakra is channeled into the sword the sword gains extra abilities giving the user:
~+5 to all kenjustu and fire justu
~Sword can only be infused with a nature chakra for five turns afterwards the sword requires a two turn cooldown before it can be infused again
~No water justu above B rank can be used while holding this sword.
~Can only be wielded by white flash and people he deems worthy
(Akenomyōsei)The Morning Star
Rank:S
Damage:N/A
Type:Weapon
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40 for abilities
Description: The Morning Star is a legendary silvery snow white Fuuma Shuriken made of a lightweight yet immensly strong metal. It can be thrown with immense dexterity and accuracy and due to its light-weight build and heightened equilibrium the Fuuma Shuriken rotates at high speeds when thrown, easily reaching 400 rotations per minute and traveling at extreme speeds. Its blades are tapered to extremely sharp edges being able to slice through rocks with a level of grace beauty and strength unmatched by any sword. When traveling, because of its pure colour, it often reflects the suns rays making the blade dazzle with the colours of the rainbow, however because of its high rotation levels and speed of travel, it is often seen as a bright whitish light that can blind the enemy if they were to look directly at the blade, earning it the name of The Monring Star.The Morning Stars four blades are easily detachable and can be wielded like daggers if neccesary for close combat. Legend has it that upon creation, while being forged each each of the four blades were pre-infused with one of four elements, wind fire water and lightning.
The Morning Star comes with a silver chain that can easily be wrapped around and unwrapped from the inner rings of the blades for dislodging and retrieval of the Fuma Shuriken, or use the chain in conjunction with a single one of its blades creating a sword-chain effect.
-Abilities.
-Since the Morning Star's blades were preinfused with a element, the user can add basic chakra to the shuriken that will activate the element(s) producing the same effects as elemental chakra that manifests with a white or silverish tint that coats the Shuriken as it spins. This however can only be done with Two elements at a time and the elements cannot be at the opposite spectrum to eachother (Eg.Fire&Water)
-Fire coating causes the shuriken to burn and scald
-Wind coating heightens its cutting abilities rotation and speed
-Lightning coating causes it to vibrate making it sharper and cause slight paraylsis
-Water coating heightens cutting and causes target to become wet upon contact area.
-Coatings also allows the Morning Star to cut through B Rank(+Elemental dis-/advantages) Jutsu
-The chain was forged with its own abilities, the user through the use of basic chakra can make the chain extend and shorten or stiffen and harden to the extent that it resembles a rigid iron bar.
The abilities of The Morning Star makes it a very versatile weapon, that can be used for both close and long range fighting.Such as by detaching two of the blades and attaching them to either end of the chain which is then hardened the user can create a Naginta like weapon.
-Restrictions.
-For the Fuuma Shurken to be thrown, all Four blades must be attached and intact.
-Once thrown, the Shuriken has to be retrivied by physical means such as throwing it so that it loops around much like a boomerang, or via the use of the chain.
-Making the Chain rigid counts as a move. Chain can only be destroyed by S rank piercing and cutting techniques. Blades are indestructible (Doesn't mean it can cut through anything).
-Infusions count as moves.
-Can only cut through B-Rank techniques within reason and only up to 4 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Scaze.
~Leaving for Scorps~
±± Approved ±±
(Fuuton:Fuzei Tsuukikou) Wind Stle:Air Vent
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Type:Offensive/Supplementry
Description: The user causes several crisscrossed elongated slits to be created in the ground. These slits are forced open by wind that rises up from the earth beneath the opponent, the wind rises up in a strong gust, however due to the fact that the oppenings is rather slim yet long most of the wind is focused into several blades, the bladed gust of wind carries the opponent upwards into the air as it begins to slice them open. This technique can also be variated so that the wind rises from the ground from a signle square opening, causing the opponent, to be forced into the air with no damage recieved.
~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists. Do not Resubmit
Doton:Botoukai Kujo(Earth Style: Sphere demolition)Doton:Botoukai Kujo(Earth Style: Sphere demolition)
Rank:A
Type:Offense
Damage: 60
Chakra Cost:30
Description: The user preforms two handseals, causing several dense spiked sphere like rocks to violently erupt from the ground, each rock having a diameter of at least a foot. The Spiked balls orbit around the enemy at mutiple angles and directions essentially surronding the enemy in a "greater orb" through their orbiting keeping roughly 3feet away from the enemy at all times, and upon forming a second handseal, all of the rocks converge in on the enemy, crushing him inbetween he massess of spikes.
~No S Rank or above earth jutsu for the rest of the turn.
~Declined~ It's more or less alright save for the fact that 3 feet is incredible close, and please define how many rocks come out of the ground.
Dropping
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Boukyaku (The Oblivion)
Rank:S
Type:weapon
Chakra cost:0/40
Damage:40
Description:It is a sword said to be forged long ago by the student of the very man who made the seven swordsman of the mist's swords, on the day that his teacher died he forged this sword in blinded rage and sorrow.It is said that this sword has many dormant abilities.The swords blade is about 4 and a half feet long and its hilt is roughly a foot long(including the guard and the pommel) the width of the blade is roughly 10 inches and a shallow groove runs along the middle of the flat of the blade on both sides.The sword was forged from a special alloy mined in the depths of a dormant volcano this alloy allows the user's fire chakra to be poured into the sword.The sword can also be repaired by pouring normal chakra into the sword which counts as a move,the sword also has
~All nature chakra's can be used with the sword however the sword prefers fire chakra
~The sword can only be infused with one nature chakra at a time
~The sword is not indestructible but is slightly stronger than your average sword due to its size and denseity
~It takes one turn for the sword to finish repairing
~While fire chakra is channeled into the sword the sword gains extra abilities giving the user:
~+5 to all kenjustu and fire justu
~Sword can only be infused with a nature chakra for five turns afterwards the sword requires a two turn cooldown before it can be infused again
~No water justu above B rank can be used while holding this sword.
~Can only be wielded by white flash and people he deems worthyYou must be registered for see links
(Akenomyōsei)The Morning Star
Rank:S
Damage:N/A
Type:Weapon
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40 for abilities
Description: The Morning Star is a legendary silvery snow white Fuuma Shuriken made of a lightweight yet immensly strong metal. It can be thrown with immense dexterity and accuracy and due to its light-weight build and heightened equilibrium the Fuuma Shuriken rotates at high speeds when thrown, easily reaching 400 rotations per minute and traveling at extreme speeds. Its blades are tapered to extremely sharp edges being able to slice through rocks with a level of grace beauty and strength unmatched by any sword. When traveling, because of its pure colour, it often reflects the suns rays making the blade dazzle with the colours of the rainbow, however because of its high rotation levels and speed of travel, it is often seen as a bright whitish light that can blind the enemy if they were to look directly at the blade, earning it the name of The Monring Star.The Morning Stars four blades are easily detachable and can be wielded like daggers if neccesary for close combat. Legend has it that upon creation, while being forged each each of the four blades were pre-infused with one of four elements, wind fire water and lightning.
The Morning Star comes with a silver chain that can easily be wrapped around and unwrapped from the inner rings of the blades for dislodging and retrieval of the Fuma Shuriken, or use the chain in conjunction with a single one of its blades creating a sword-chain effect.
-Abilities.
-Since the Morning Star's blades were preinfused with a element, the user can add basic chakra to the shuriken that will activate the element(s) producing the same effects as elemental chakra that manifests with a white or silverish tint that coats the Shuriken as it spins. This however can only be done with Two elements at a time and the elements cannot be at the opposite spectrum to eachother (Eg.Fire&Water)
-Fire coating causes the shuriken to burn and scald
-Wind coating heightens its cutting abilities rotation and speed
-Lightning coating causes it to vibrate making it sharper and cause slight paraylsis
-Water coating heightens cutting and causes target to become wet upon contact area.
-Coatings also allows the Morning Star to cut through B Rank(+Elemental dis-/advantages) Jutsu
-The chain was forged with its own abilities, the user through the use of basic chakra can make the chain extend and shorten or stiffen and harden to the extent that it resembles a rigid iron bar.
The abilities of The Morning Star makes it a very versatile weapon, that can be used for both close and long range fighting.Such as by detaching two of the blades and attaching them to either end of the chain which is then hardened the user can create a Naginta like weapon.
-Restrictions.
-For the Fuuma Shurken to be thrown, all Four blades must be attached and intact.
-Once thrown, the Shuriken has to be retrivied by physical means such as throwing it so that it loops around much like a boomerang, or via the use of the chain.
-Making the Chain rigid counts as a move. Chain can only be destroyed by S rank piercing and cutting techniques. Blades are indestructible (Doesn't mean it can cut through anything).
±± Declined ±± On resubmissions you are required to bold the changes you made. Even if this is a resubmit from the other thread, you still need to do so.
Kenjutsu: Tenrai Hishoue Arashi Ken (Sword Arts: Divine Soaring Storm Blade)
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Type:Offense
Description: The user crouches low while twisting their body slightly, bunching up their muscles and building up potential energy, with a blade held in hand, prefrably a sword. The user then springs upwards while untwisting their body causing them to rotate rapidly as they ascend via their chakra enhanced jump, knocking the enemy into the air next to them with their blade as they ascend, while spinning the user pumps out a large amount of chakra/elemental chakra from their blade the chakra creating a vortex like tornado that encircles the user mimicking the blades sharpness and damaging the enmy in the process as they are caught in the vortex. Depending on the type of chakra used the vortex can have serveral different effects such as heightened cutting for wind ability of parylsis for lightning ability to drench for water and the ability to burn for fire.
-Must state what chakra type is used, otherwise it is Normal Chakra
-Can only be used 3x
-After the technique ends the user is left vunerable in the air.
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±± Declined ±± Do not resubmit.
Rank:A
Type:Offense
Damage: 60
Chakra Cost:30
Description: The user preforms two handseals, causing one and a half dozen dense spiked sphere like rocks to violently erupt from the ground, each rock having a diameter of at least a foot. The Spiked balls orbit around the enemy at mutiple angles and directions essentially surronding the enemy in a "greater orb" through their orbiting keeping roughly 10 feet away from the enemy at all times, and upon forming a second handseal, all of the rocks converge in on the enemy, crushing him inbetween he massess of spikes.
~No S Rank or above earth jutsu for the rest of the turn.
~Approved~ So long as you understand that you must allow the rocks to form in orbit for a short time around the opponent before crushing them.
Dropping
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Boukyaku (The Oblivion)
Rank:S
Type:weapon
Chakra cost:0/40
Damage:40
Description:It is a sword said to be forged long ago by the student of the very man who made the seven swordsman of the mist's swords, on the day that his teacher died he forged this sword in blinded rage and sorrow.It is said that this sword has many dormant abilities.The swords blade is about 4 and a half feet long and its hilt is roughly a foot long(including the guard and the pommel) the width of the blade is roughly 10 inches and a shallow groove runs along the middle of the flat of the blade on both sides.The sword was forged from a special alloy mined in the depths of a dormant volcano this alloy allows the user's fire chakra to be poured into the sword.The sword can also be repaired by pouring normal chakra into the sword which counts as a move,the sword also has
~All nature chakra's can be used with the sword however the sword prefers fire chakra
~The sword can only be infused with one nature chakra at a time
~The sword is not indestructible but is slightly stronger than your average sword due to its size and denseity
~It takes one turn for the sword to finish repairing
~While fire chakra is channeled into the sword the sword gains extra abilities giving the user:
~+5 to all kenjustu and fire justu
~Sword can only be infused with a nature chakra for five turns afterwards the sword requires a two turn cooldown before it can be infused again
~No water justu above B rank can be used while holding this sword.
~Can only be wielded by white flash and people he deems worthy
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(Akenomyōsei)The Morning Star
Rank:S
Damage:N/A
Type:Weapon
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:40 for abilities
Description: The Morning Star is a legendary silvery snow white Fuuma Shuriken made of a lightweight yet immensly strong metal. It can be thrown with immense dexterity and accuracy and due to its light-weight build and heightened equilibrium the Fuuma Shuriken rotates at high speeds when thrown, easily reaching 400 rotations per minute and traveling at extreme speeds. Its blades are tapered to extremely sharp edges being able to slice through rocks with a level of grace beauty and strength unmatched by any sword. When traveling, because of its pure colour, it often reflects the suns rays making the blade dazzle with the colours of the rainbow, however because of its high rotation levels and speed of travel, it is often seen as a bright whitish light that can blind the enemy if they were to look directly at the blade, earning it the name of The Monring Star.The Morning Stars four blades are easily detachable and can be wielded like daggers if neccesary for close combat. Legend has it that upon creation, while being forged each each of the four blades were pre-infused with one of four elements, wind fire water and lightning.
The Morning Star comes with a silver chain that can easily be wrapped around and unwrapped from the inner rings of the blades for dislodging and retrieval of the Fuma Shuriken, or use the chain in conjunction with a single one of its blades creating a sword-chain effect.
-Abilities.
-Since the Morning Star's blades were preinfused with a element, the user can add basic chakra to the shuriken that will activate the element(s) producing the same effects as elemental chakra that manifests with a white or silverish tint that coats the Shuriken as it spins. This however can only be done with Two elements at a time and the elements cannot be at the opposite spectrum to eachother (Eg.Fire&Water)
-Fire coating causes the shuriken to burn and scald
-Wind coating heightens its cutting abilities rotation and speed
-Lightning coating causes it to vibrate making it sharper and cause slight paraylsis
-Water coating heightens cutting and causes target to become wet upon contact area.
-Coatings also allows the Morning Star to cut through B Rank(+Elemental dis-/advantages) Jutsu
-The chain was forged with its own abilities, the user through the use of basic chakra can make the chain extend and shorten or stiffen and harden to the extent that it resembles a rigid iron bar.
The abilities of The Morning Star makes it a very versatile weapon, that can be used for both close and long range fighting.Such as by detaching two of the blades and attaching them to either end of the chain which is then hardened the user can create a Naginta like weapon.
-Restrictions.
-For the Fuuma Shurken to be thrown, all Four blades must be attached and intact.
-Once thrown, the Shuriken has to be retrivied by physical means such as throwing it so that it loops around much like a boomerang, or via the use of the chain.
-Making the Chain rigid counts as a move. Chain can only be destroyed by S rank piercing and cutting techniques. Blades are indestructible (Doesn't mean it can cut through anything).
-Infusions count as moves.
-Can only cut through B-Rank techniques within reason and only up to 4 times per battle.
-Can only be taught by Scaze.
~Leaving for Scorps~
±± Approved ±±
(Fuuton:Fuzei Tsuukikou) Wind Stle:Air Vent
Rank:A
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Type:Offensive/Supplementry
Description: The user causes several crisscrossed elongated slits to be created in the ground. These slits are forced open by wind that rises up from the earth beneath the opponent, the wind rises up in a strong gust, however due to the fact that the oppenings is rather slim yet long most of the wind is focused into several blades, the bladed gust of wind carries the opponent upwards into the air as it begins to slice them open. This technique can also be variated so that the wind rises from the ground from a signle square opening, causing the opponent, to be forced into the air with no damage recieved.
~Declined~ Similar Jutsu Exists. Do not Resubmit
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