[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - I

Gatsndshanks · Mar 7, 2011

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I can't remember the last time I submitted a custom >_> but i got inspired by Elfman and well...

Bubun Henge no Jutsu - Partial Transformation Technique

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique relies on the same principles of the Henge no Jutsu but instead of transforming the users whole body, it transforms a specific part. This technique is regarded as a more advanced version of its variation due to it requiring better charka control and concentration that is needed to fully utilise it; however, it still retains the traits of the original transformation technique as it is still dispelled if the user takes physical damage. Once this technique is in use, the transformed part of the users body gains the characteristics of what it has formed into, like a claw of an animal or tail of a snake for example. As touched on earlier, this technique requires more concentration of chakra and because of this, the partial transformation can only be active for three turns and cannot be used more than twice per period of a fight.

So this basically has no effect other than giving the appearance of extra limb or whatever ya wish to partial transform ?

(Doton: Domayuhōden) - Earth Release: Earth Cocoon Discharge

Rank: B
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to release earth-based chakra much like Tsuchikage's 'Aggravated Rock Technique' but on a smaller scale. Instead of releasing rock or stone from the whole body, this technique releases it from a particular point and aid the user in a range of varieties.

^ Co-created by The Dark King -_- and when i say co-created, i mean he asked me to submit and i completely corrected the mistakes in the description

needs more elaboration on the technique

ZK · Mar 7, 2011

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Fuuinjutsu: Gisei no heirōringu (Sealing Technique: Halo the Ring of Sacrifice)

Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 100
Description: This seal is a usually a tattoo on the users chest, it acts as a conductor for chakra but can only be activated with immense amounts of energy. To activate the ring, the user has to sacrifice a limb, (only a big limb such as an arm or a leg can be used) the limb is sacrificed by focusing all life chakra and energy from the limb into the seal, by doing this the ring will begin to glow, and fire a gigantic forbidden ranked ray of pure chakra towards the target.
Note: Requires no handseals.
Note: Can only be used twice per match, if used a third time the user will die.
Note: Using the seals effect counts as one of the three techniques allowed per move.
Note: Can only be used by ZeroG.

Fuuinjutsu: Hosuto no noroi (Sealing Technique: Curse of the Host)

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: This seal is a tattoo on the users body, it acts as a gathering point and converter for chakra, the seal has the ability to create an extra personality within the user. By feeding on the users chakra and sub consciousness, this seal can create a primitive consciousness within the user, this extra personality, is able to use the five senses, although it cannot control them, meaning that the user still controls his/her body, but the extra personality sees hears and feels what the user does. The seal has the ability to convert chakra, so the extra personality has its own chakra signature. If the user is under extreme pressure, the extra personality will take control over the user and deal with the situation. The extra personality pretty much works like a bijuu, but without the extreme amounts of chakra.
Note: Cannot be used in battle, must be pre-made.
Note: Can only be used by ZeroG.

Fuuinjutsu: Tenki shīru (Sealing Technique: Weather Seal)

Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30 (If not pre-prepared)
Damage points: N/A
Description: This seal allows the user to change the weather. The user focuses elemental chakra into the seal to activate it, the seal will then convert the raw elemental chakra into small molecules which will then be released into the sky, and this will cause an almost instant weather change. Depending on the amount of chakra used the weather will be more extreme.
Fire = Sunny
Water = Rainy
Wind = Windy
Lightning = Stormy
Note: Each element can only be used once.
Note: The elements can be mixed if the user is able to utilize that element.
Note: Can only be used by ZeroG.

All declined, do not resubmit

Jokey · Mar 7, 2011

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Name: Nintaijutsu 忍体術: Ninja Body Techniques
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30 Per Turn
Damage points: N/A
Description: Ninja Body Technique's is a term used to describe the fighting style used by the Fourth Raikage. A combination of ninjutsu and taijutsu, the Raikage uses nintaijutsu by first surrounding himself with his Lightning Release Armour. This augments the strength of his physical attacks, making them more deadly. His speed and reflexes are also increased. It is unknown if there are other examples of nintaijutsu.
Note: Can only be used by -Fakeness
Note: If the user finishes the Technique the user won't be able to use Taijutsu and Ninjutsu for 3 Turns.

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Declined, this already practically exists as a form of combat anyways dont resubmit

Name: Lariat Mode: ラリアット
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user charges at his opponent, striking them with a Lariat move, coated in chakra. A successful strike can blow away a target's entire chest with a direct hit. The attack is rather straightforward, but very quick and powerful. A lariat is when an attacking Shinobi runs towards an opponent, wraps his arm around their upper chest and neck and then forces them to the ground. This move is similar to a clothesline, the difference being that in a clothesline the users arm is kept straight to the side of the user during the move, while in the lariat the user strikes their opponent with his arm while coated in chakra the whole time. The user can Give Leg Lariat's, Arm Lariat's which are all Coated in chakra which give's a huge fatal damage. The eyes of the user become's Black and the User gain's 50% Chakra. The Muscle's get Larger and bigger and give's the user a huge Speed amount.
Note: Only usable for 5 turns.
Note: No Taijutsu for the next 3 turns.

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Crooked arm lariat

The crooked arm lariat is performed when an attacking user runs towards an opponent with the arm bent upward at the elbow 60–90 degrees and wraps his arm around their head forcing them to the ground Coated with chakra causing a Blow into the ground making the opponent unconscious.

Flying lariat

The attacking user first uses the ropes to build up speed. When speed is built the attacking wrestler uses the speed to leap forward and wrap his/or her arm around the opponent's neck, causing the power of the force to knock down the opponent Coated with Chakra which make's the opponent hard to breath.

Lariat takedown

The User runs towards his opponent, wraps his arm around their upper chest and neck of the opponent, and swings his legs forward, using his momentum to pull the opponent down with him to the mat, on to their upper back. This move is also called a running neckbreaker or bulldog lariat all coated in Chakra if the technique is successful the opponent could break his neck.

Leg lariat

Also referred to as a jumping leg lariat or a running calf kick this attack is seen when an attacking user runs towards an opponent, jumps and wraps his leg around the opponent's head/neck knocking the opponent to the ground while the user is Coated in Chakra.

Declined, do not resubmit and absolutely no lariat variations

Alternative · Mar 8, 2011

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This custom Jutsu stuff seemed interesting, so I thought I'd give it a shot.

Ninpou: Yuketsu no Jutsu (Ninja Art: Blood Transfusion Technique)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-range
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: -
Description: This is a more offensive style medical ninjutsu. The user of this jutsu transfers the blood from him/herself and implants it to an ally to give them strength for battle. This jutsu can also be used in an opposite form, by using it on an enemy to transfer their blood to yourself and weakening the opposing person. The opponents' strength is then drained for 2-3 turns.
Note: Requires an open wound (biting thumb, similar to kuchiyose is an example).
Note: Medical ninjutsu cannot be used to heal any loss of one's own from this jutsu.

Declined, read rules and you would know ya need be over 50 posts then get to Special jonin level before your allowed B rank but not only that no medical jutsu

JTjutsumaster · Mar 8, 2011

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(Fuuton: Kaze Shouheki) Wind Release: Wind Barrier
Type: Offence/Defence
Rank: D
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: (if hit) 20
Description: A sphere-like barrier of powerful, strong winds appears around the user. The sheild protects the user from weapons (kunai's etc.) and reflect the weapons, causing a chance of them hitting the oponent.
*Note* Can only be used 3 times during a battle

Declined, similar justu exists

Caliburn · Mar 9, 2011

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(Tenrai Kiritentou) - Divine Slash of the Heavens -

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user focuses a massive amount of chakra into their sword and makes a vertical slashing movement. Instantly a vertical slash is released from the sword that travels at the opponent with incredible speed. This slash is strong enough to cut through jutsu's of the same rank, but it can only go in one straight line. The slash doesn't only appear above ground, but also underground with the same length as above. The slash is so powerful that it creates slicing shockwaves on the left and right of the slash.
The user can send it also when he's in the air/shoots at the air. By focusing the chakra into the sword whil its still in the scabbard, the user can catch the opponent off guard.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used three times per battle*

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I want to update this jutsu, though I mainly want to change the name of it, but I revised the description a bit, nothing special.

(Itto-Ryu: Yakkoudori) - One Sword Style: Disaster Harborbird -

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user focuses a massive amount of chakra into their sword and makes a vertical (or horizontal/diagonal) slashing movement. Instantly a vertical slash (or horizontal/diagonal) is released from the sword that travels at the opponent with incredible speed. This slash is strong enough to cut through jutsu's of the same rank, but it can only go in one straight line. The slash doesn't only appear above ground, but also underground with the same length as above. The slash is so powerful that it creates slicing shockwaves on the left and right of the slash.
The user can send it also when he's in the air/shoots at the air. By focusing the chakra into the sword while its still in the scabbard, the user can catch the opponent off guard (unless the opponent has a Byakugan or is a sensor).

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used three times per battle*

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Approved

Pineapple · Mar 10, 2011

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Papaya said:
Name: (Osutoricchi Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Daynam) Ostrich Summoning : Daynam Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range: Mid-Lond
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Daynam is a young kid ostrich. He is a nice and kind ostrich, but extremly arrogent. He can also use Taijutsu up to B-rank. He is quite fast, even for his ostrich race. He is the size a normal human boy (around 11 years old) and is able to talk. He is also able to peck people in close range with his beak
note: must have Ostrich summoning Contract
note: when he pecks, he is unable to use Taijutsu

~Have you signed the contract? ~

yes i have signed the contract, it is between SexyTendo and I

Name: (Osutoricchi Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Daynam) Ostrich Summoning : Daynam
Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range: Mid-Lond
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Daynam is a young kid ostrich. He is a nice and kind ostrich, but extremly arrogent. He can also use Taijutsu up to B-rank. He is quite fast, even for his ostrich race. He is the size a normal human boy (around 11 years old) and is able to talk. He is also able to peck people in close range with his beak
note: must have Ostrich summoning Contract
note: when he pecks, he is unable to use Taijutsu
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(Men Hirate) Face Palm
Type: Offence
Rank: C
Range: short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: (if hit) 20
Description:a basic taijutsu attack where you reach out with 1 hand and grab your opponents face, making it harder for them to move. This can also be used to set up many taijutsu combos

Both approved

croispain · Mar 10, 2011

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Sution: Mizu Ganbutsu no Jutsu: water imitation technique
Rank: D
Type: paralaysis
Range: short-long
Chakra:10
Damage: 20
Description: like that of the shadow imitation technique... this jutsu allows for the paralysis of ones opponent rendering him unable to defend or attack. the user uses his knowledge of water techniques to flow his chakara through water in order to hit the technique. most effective when fighting on water terrain.

Sution: mizu koutetsu no jutsu : water aromor technique
Rank: D
Type: defence
Range: personal
Chakra: 10
Damage:20, also prevents 20 on self
Cost: -5 for each full block
Description:this technique allows the user to use his knowledge of chakara and water style techniques to wrap a layer of water armor over his skin so that a low amount of damage may be abosrbed..when hit whilst using this technique, the opponents attack is blocked..upto 20 points then counters with his own attack for 20

Both declined

Zenryoku · Apr 1, 2011

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Open for business remeber to check spelling and restrictions accordingly to their ranks and so forth and make sure to remember quoting the technqiues otherwise i will not waste my time

Atrocitus · Apr 1, 2011

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Ten'nō no Zen-ken | Zen Fists of the Emperor

Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (+5 for each leash)
Damage points: 80 (+20 to Taijutsu and Kenjutsu)
Description: These Gauntlets were given to the strongest samurai in the Emperors army. They were forged from mithril (They cover from the users hand up to their elbows) and were said to have been tempered by the blood of the Emperor himself. Being forged from this substance and tempered with the blood of "God" incarnate (Emperors were considered Gods) they are virtually indestructible and increased the physical strength of the user.

The gauntlets were said to have been able to extend the will of the Emperor to all things allowing the user to manipulate things out of their reach (as the will of the Emperor has no bounds). This in reality was that the gauntlets could channel the users chakra and convert them into "leashes" (hands of chakra which could extend great distances), this allows the user to grab things out of reach (Weapons). Unfortunately these leashes could not latch onto living things as the chakra of that organism would reject the users chakra and thus the leashes would have no effect on them.

-Leashes can only grab onto inanimate objects (not ones that are personal objects to someone as they are tainted by the chakra of that person and thus will not latch on) and only one leash from each hand.
-Indestructible, but cannot destroy everything
Note: This is the same concept as samurai sabre's chakra manipulation.

First Gauntlet = Left Gauntlet / Second Gauntlet = Right Gauntlet :

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Approved

Yontoryu Modo | Four Swords Style Mode

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: This mode is where the user wields four blades and uses them to perform attacks and techniques. Normally this mode would be impossible for a normal human to use. Miyamoto and Hattori created this mode as they were able to inhabit each others body and move freely, because of their special KG [Souma No Kou]. This allowed them to wield four blades at once (each one holds a blade in each hand and the inside body's arms can come out anywhere on the dominant body, thus adding versatility and surprise), and create a new style.

Once activated the users will draw their respective swords (thus wielding four in total), and sync their body and mind together thus allowing them to fight efficiently and would stop them from getting in the way of each other and working in harmony. The downside to this is that both bodies must stay synced in order to use the style.

-Must be a Samurai and a Souma No Kou user.
-Proficient users can sync in a second.
-Allows the user to use the "Yontoryu" techniques.

Approved

Ryūkurosusurasshu | Dragon Cross Slash

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: (20 for each sword)
Damage: 80
Description: This Technique can be performed with two or four swords depending on the capabilities of the user. The user charges his swords with chakra and holds them in an 'X' formation in front of him. The user can hold the blades in different ways for different effects:

-Holding the blades with the sharp side towards the opponent will allow the user to send a devastating crescent of chakra at ones foes (by swinging the blades outwards while charged with chakra, which can easily cut through rock and to an extent normal steel (up to B rank with two blades, A rank with four blades).

-Holding the blades with the blunt side towards the opponent allows the user to "rip apart"/deflect ninjutsu (by swinging the blades outwards at the point of impact), the chakra will be blunt (so it won't just cut through the technique but it will pull the technique outwards with the swords and chakra) and will pull the ninjutsu apart with the swords thus deflecting the technique to around them, but won't harm the opponent (up to A rank with two blades, S rank for four blades).

-Must be a Samurai to use.
-Twice per battle.
-Must wait two turns before using this technique again.
-To use four blades one must have learned the "Yontoryu Mode".

~Declined, do not resubmit~ similar techniques exist including a technique made by Zen and checked by me for the samurai

Kōtei no Inperiarushīrudo | Imperial Shield of the Emperor

Rank: S
Type: Defense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user places his swords in an 'x' formation and charges chakra to them, while he does this he spins the swords and the chakra radiates outwards providing a chakra shield in front of the user. Because of the rotation projectiles and even close combat weaponry will be deflected to the side, while the chakra shield will protect from all ninjutsu (A rank and under with two blades/S rank and under for four blades) that attack from the front.

-Must be a Samurai to use.
-Twice per battle
-Must wait three turns before using again.
-To use four swords one must have learned the "Yontoryu Mode"

~Declined, do not resubmit~ similar techniques exist

Hanauta Sanchō, Yahazu Giri | Three-Verse Humming, Arrow-Notch Slash

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: A technique in which the user slashes an opponent at such a fast pace that it appears that they didn't attack at all (in fact, to the casual observer it would look like the user simply walked past the victim). Only when a certain amount of time has passed, which is approximate to the time the user walks ten feet away, or three steps ('''verses''', as the name suggests), does their opponent only realize the attack. It seems to employ elements of ''iai'' (instant sword-draw-and-resheath) since it is generally initiated (though not always) with the user moving towards the intended target(s) with a naked blade and walks past them before sheathing it back. It is usually at this point that the victims start manifesting and feeling the effects of this high-speed attack. The actual attack itself however, is never seen clearly due to the speed implemented. The technique is highly versatile, since with it, the user can slash multiple targets at once and if they so wish, the damage they inflict can be as fatal or as incapacitating as they like

-Must be a Samurai to use.
-Only twice per battle.
-The user can use this attack while running past or walking past the opponent.
-Restricted to three targets at one time.

~Declined, do not resubmit~ as I said before this has already been submitted once and it was declined back then too

Last three for caliburn as he wishes to check theses himself

Pervyy · Apr 1, 2011

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The Dark king said:
(Suraisu Kaze) - Slicing wind
Type: Attack/supplentry
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 45
Description: The user will stand like the picture shown below. Then the user will be begin to swing his front arm around in a slicing motion, but as they do, the users body will change to a blast of wind (in the same way suigetsu can replace his body with water) sending them selves at great speed as a slicing wind at the opponent. Though this leaves the user vulnerable to fire attacks if the opponent can see the user. This can also be used in avoiding attacks. The user can reform at any point. But if they dont, they become a slicing blade of wind and reform to their normal selves with their hand up in the air like they just slice the opponent across the chest, which they will have done in there wind form.

Note: Only doujutsu can see the wind
Note: The user takes double damage in wind state from fire attacks

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Requires more restrictions and increase ranke because of its invisible nature

(Suraisu Kaze) - Slicing wind
Type: Attack/supplentry
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 45
Description: The user will stand like the picture shown below. Then the user will be begin to swing his front arm around in a slicing motion, but as they do, the users body will change to a blast of wind (in the same way suigetsu can replace his body with water) sending them selves at great speed as a slicing wind at the opponent. Though this leaves the user vulnerable to fire attacks if the opponent can see the user. This can also be used in avoiding attacks. The user can reform at any point. But if they dont, they become a slicing blade of wind and reform to their normal selves with their hand up in the air like they just slice the opponent across the chest, which they will have done in there wind form.

Note: Only doujutsu can see the wind.
Note: The user takes double damage in wind state from fire attacks
Note: Can he heard by sound users, can only be heard by non sound ninja when the battle field is near silent
Note: Only be used twice
Note: Cant use fire jutsu in same turn due to the concentration of wind chakra.

~Approved

(Suiton: Kiri Kawarimi) - Mist replacement
Rank: S rank
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into mist like that of the hidden mist jutsu. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form. The user can reform into there normal body at any time, but in this form the are vulnerable to lightning and fire attacks.

Note: Lasts for up to 2 turns
Note: Must know hidden mist jutsu
Note: Cant attack in the form
Note: useable Once.

~Approved, though made once as its a high level substitution technique~

(Senjin: Gokuin ) - Sage Art Seal
Rank: A
Type: Seal
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will have a special tattoo seal on their chest that is shown in the image below. This is a special seal similar to that of tsunades seal on her forehead. Before battle the user will sit and meditate gathering natural energy which will then be concentrated into the seal on the users chest. This seal can store enough natural energy to enter sage mode for 3 turns after it is activated, but due to the complexity of the seal, once the seal is released, it takes 1 turn before the user can effectively enter sage mode. This natural energy can also be used for other special modes, but then it takes 2 turns to manipulate the chakra before entering the mode.
Note: Useable once
Note: Takes one full turn after useage before you can enter sage mode
Note: Takes 2 full turns after useage before you can enter any other mode that requires natrual energy.
Note: Must know fuuin

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~Declined, do not resubmit~

(Senpo Kuchiose: kibou and iyoku ) - Sage art summoning: Hope and Will
Rank: A
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will perform a series of hand seals and slam their hands to the ground to summon hope and will, if they have the special sage tatoos they can summon them this way too. These two are also known as uncle and aunt as will is Pa's brother. These two are also masters of the sage arts, though not as great as ma and pa. These 2 also have the special unique power to fuse with a master of sage mode, to help them keep the flow of natural energy. Though they arent as skilled or to ma and pa's level. When they fuse with the sage master, one must focus on gathering sage chakra at all time, or the balance of energy will cause the sage to turn to stone. Though the other is free to attack.
Note: Can only be summoned once
Note: Can only fuse once with a sage
Note: No other toad summonings on the field at the same time

~Approved, though made it that no other toad summonings can be on the field at the same time. ~

(Seijin Hira no jutsu) - Buddhist palm technique
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: All
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is based on the use of frog katanas and requires the mastery of sage mode and the ability to gather natural energy. After performing 2 hand seals the user will gather a small amount of natural energy and there wind chakra together. They will then focus there chakra in to their hand and thrust there palm forward is a swift, fast motion. This releases a huge wave of slicing wind with the great force of natural energy, sent at the opponent at immense speeds in the shape of a man sized hand. This intense force has the power to blast the target back while slicing them, but is very hard to control.
Note: Can be used by all masters of natural energy
Note: Must be able to control natural energy
Note: Usable twice
Note: No A rank or above Wind techniques the following turn.

~Approved though added no A rank or above wind following turn~

Hazure · Apr 1, 2011

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Ola Azul | Blue Wave Gun

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long (Wave is Short - Mid)
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 for each projectile)
Damage: 60
Description: A technique in which the user pulls their sword back as they channel chakra into it and launches it towards their opponent, in the form of an energy blade projectile. The chakra can also be held within the blade and when swung can be released as a wave of chakra that travels fast at the opponent. This technique is meant for speed and sacrifices power for that speed (2 Tomoe needed to track). Multiple projectiles can be fired at the opponent.

-Must be a Samurai to use.
-Twice per battle
-Up to three projectiles per use.
-Co Creators: Hattori Hanzo and Zenryoku

As a projectile:

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As a wave:

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~Declined~ similar technique exist

Pureryūdo Ofueru | Prelude, After

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: A technique in which the user slashes an opponent's weapon almost instantaneously. It's intended to disarm the opponent by destroying whatever weapon they might be wielding at close range. This attack is based on the art of Iai (instant sword-draw-and-resheath), as the user can just draw and stop the opponent from drawing or using the weapon.

-Must be a Samurai to use.
-Twice per battle
-Can only be used to disarm a weapon.
-Indestructible weapons can resist this strike as long as he has the sufficient strength
-Co Creators: Hattori Hanzo and Zenryoku

~Declined~ similar technique exist.

Seriously people at least wait till the canon techniques are officially released. 70% of all those samurai techniques people post are perfectly doable one way or another with those techniques shown in the manga and still people insist on just making custom copies of them.

(Doton: Heki Ta-ru Kabe) Earth Style: Warped Tar Wall

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A (+50 to fire techniques)
Description: After forming three handseals, the user placed his palm on the ground while sending chakra through the ground and use it to manipulate the ground from under the enemy to turn into sticky tar, raising up in a twister motion and imprison the enemy within it, this tar is very sticky that its really hard to break through, however lightening techniques such as Chidori Nagashi can easily break through it. This technique doesn't damage the enemy however it can make fire techniques very offensive.
~Can only be used twice per battle.
~No A rank or above earth techniques the following turn
~Co-Creator: Asskickulator

~Approved, added extra restriction~

(Katon: Shainingu Hoshi) Fire Style: Shining Star

Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Mid to Long
Chakra cost: 30(+15 chakra points for each turn)
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user channels his chakra through his palm as he creating a strong friction with his fingers, by that, the user molds his chakra manipulating it creating a fireball, its similar to Fire style: Fireball technique, however, this fireball is not offensive at all. Using his chakra, the user keeps this fireball around himself. It can only be used as a heat or light source alone, however, it can be partly combined with other techniques, such as wind element techniques, turning them to Fire/Wind combination techniques.
~Can only be used twice per battle.
~Can stay for up to three turns per use.
~Co-Creator: Asskickulator

~Approved, i edited some spelling mistakes which Asskickulator needs to work on and removed the extra damage cost to combination attacks, doesnt need it when they take on the rank above them if combined with another of the same rank~

(Suiton: Gurande Mizu Setsudanki) Water Style: Grand Water Slicer

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra: 30
Damage points: N/A
Description: After using underground river technique, the user forms three handseals, then menpulate the water made beneath and maximize its size, forming an incredably strong strong water slicer, smiliar to Water style: Water slicer technique. Its size keep maximizing until it become similar to a strong wave coming out of the ground at high speed making it very hard to dodge, the user can form it from beneath their feet, so that it would send the user forward at great speed which come useful in surprise attacks. Like the jutsu that it is based on, this jutsu does not require handseals.

~Can only be used twice per battle
~Requires using the underground river technique, or having water underground or even by standing on a water source near the land.
~Co-Creator: Asskickulator

~Declined, do not resubmit~

Anduril · Apr 1, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Futon:Akuma no yōnakaze)-Demonic winds

(Futon:Kaze no ha o utsu)-Striking wind blades

(Futon:Rōtasu aki)-Lotus Fall

-All the above jutsus can only be learnt from Bansho and cannot be copied or made into higher rank jutsus without the permission of Bansho

~All Declined, do not resubmit~

Migualon J.J. · Apr 1, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Kusabana Hebun, Toppyoushimonai Hone) - Flower Heaven, Crazy Bone
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 40( additional 20 chakra more if charged by chakra/elements chakra)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: They are a pair of huge, heavily-curved, black Chinese scimitars with silver edges. They both have the same size. The hilt of each sword is in dark blue color and at the end there are long red tassels. Their cross guards are rectangles, with the corners cut off, decorated by a pattern of cherry petals and lines. The wielder (me) himself sais that he is using one for fast speed attacks and another one for strength based attacks. Despite their appearance, they are not heavier than the usual katanas.

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Can be only used by Migualon J.J.
These swords are indestructible (doesn´t mean it can cut everything)
These swords can be charged by chakra/element chakra(only fuuton and raiton) to increase the power
These weapons stays on the user's belt all the time
The sword can cut through B-rank and below Fuuton Techniques if it´s infused with chakra (depending on the opponent's jutsu)
If other person touches the weapon, it will instantly paralyze them for 1 turn
Each sword can be charged with different chakra (one with fuuton and the other one with raiton)

~Approved~ made some changes though, I removed the damage as this is not a move so how is it going to do damage? I also gave a bit more explanation with the B-rank thing...also it's fun to see that my sentence of "it's indestructible, but this doesn't..." has started a life of its own xd

Yūsuke1 · Apr 1, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~Yondaime~ said:
(Futon: Taisan) Wind Style : Disperse

Type : Defense/Supplementary
Rank : A
Range : N/A
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points N/A
Description : The user is able to disperse his body into the wind, making the user one with the wind. The user can decide where he wants to reform back to his original state. Can be used to avoid incoming attacks.

Note : Only once per battle
Note : Must be taught by ShermanYondaime

Declined, need more restrictions and add that doujutsu can see your chakra flow even dispersed

RESUBMIT :

(Futon: Taisan) Wind Style : Disperse

Type : Defense/Supplementary
Rank : A
Range : N/A
Chakra cost : 30
Damage points N/A
Description : The user is able to disperse his body into the wind, making the user one with the wind. The user can decide where he wants to reform back to his original state. Can be used to avoid incoming attacks.

Note : Takes time to reform back into user's original state.
Note : Dojutsus such as sharingan and byakugan can see the user of this jutsus chakra flow as he disperses into the air.
Note : Can only be used Once per battle
Note : Only used/taught by ~Yondaime~

~Approved~

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(Fuuton: Kiikiikaze )- Wind Style : Creaking wind
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will exhale and shriek an irritating sound, imbued with wind-chakra, making the enemy hear creaking and irritating sounds from the air around his ear which will forcefully make the enemy put his/her hands covering his/her ears as a natural reaction from hearing painful sounds.

Note : The air containing the sound waves can be dissipated if blown away, making it diffuse.
Note : Can only be used twice.
Note : Only used/taught by ~Yondaime~

~Declined, do not resubmit~

(Suna Kenpa ryuushi)- Sand Senseing Particles
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Just like the Chakra senseing rain, this allows a wide-spread of Garaa's special sand imbued chakra particles to spread through the air, allowing the user to sense and know whatever it touches.

Note : Can only be used 2x
Note : Must be a sand user
Note : Unlike the chakra senseing rain, to allow this jutsu to reach long range, it must take some time to diffuse around the area.
Note : Only lasts 3 turns before the sand falls.
Note : Can only be used/taught by ~Yondaime~

~Declined, do not resubmit its the cannon technique no submitting cannon techniques -_- ~

(Hando Suna)- Hand of Sand
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This allows the user to be able to create a hand out of sand which can be used for blocking or attacking the enemy.

Note : Must be a sand user
Note : Can only be used/taught by ~Yondaime~
Note : Can only be used 3x
Note : Last only one turn.

~Approved~

(Sabaku arano)- Desert Wasteland
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 60
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This allows the user to change the terrain into a desert wasteland with collapsed ancient ruins around it and a scorching sun like how any other desert would have. The user must do 4 handseals then slam his/her hand onto the ground hence the jutsu.

Note : Must be a sand user
Note : can only be used once.
Note : Can only be used/taught by ~Yondaime~
Note : Everybody's speed, including the user, here is reduced due to the sand surface.

looks something like this :

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~Declined, do not resubmit~

Wesobi · Apr 1, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

~Declined, Similar jutsu already exists~

~Declined, remove that it can rip the internal organs its a physical technique so it doesnt have that ability ~

Typhon · Apr 1, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Wind Style: Chakra Sensing Breeze
(Fuuton: Chakra Kenpa no Kaze)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A wind technique similar to the chakra sensing rain technique, the user infuses their chakra into the surround air create a light breeze across the battlefield. This breeze is capable of sensing the chakra of people or objects it comes in contact with. The breeze will die out after three turns once activated and can only be used twice per battle.
~Deactivates after three turns.
~Can only be used twice per battle.

~Approved~

Sosenken | Ancestral Blade
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: +15 to Kenjutsu/Samurai Techniques
Description: The Sosenken is a family heirloom that has been passed down through eleven generations of the Oda family. It is given from the family head to his son during a long ceremony which ends with the son using the Sosenken to kill the father. This act, while seemingly brutal, is an act of honor and respect. The sword is said to gain the previous wielder's strength and experience through the ritual, though this isn't what actually happens. Since samurai apply chakra to their weapons, the use of this ability over and over again has slowly imbued the Sosenken with each previous wielder's chakra. Having been infused with large amounts of chakra the blade of the Sosenken has become increasingly stronger over the years and more reactive to chakra than an ordinary blade. When chakra is applied to the blade it shines a bright purple. Kenjutsu techniques are therefore amplified when being used with this blade, increasing their damage and effectiveness.
~Adds 15 damage to Kenjutsu and Samurai techniques.
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~Approved~

Samurai Sword Arts: Heavenly Cleave
(Samurai Kenjutsu: Tentoukire)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will leap in the air with their sword in both hands held above their head and focus chakra into the blade. They will then bring the blade straight down using the force of gravity to increase the damage. When the blade hits the ground a blade of chakra will fire off the sword leaving a track in the earth as it extends up to mid range.
~Can be used three times per battle.

~Declined, do not resubmit~ technique already exists

Samurai Sword Arts: Divine Intervention
(Samurai Kenjutsu: Tenrai Kanshou)
Type: Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: None
Description: The user will charge their sword with a large amount of chakra and that swipe it upwards in front of them. As it moves it will leave a wave of chakra in front of the user that becomes a shield that can protect them from attacks of the same rank or below.
~Can be used twice per battle.
~Can only be use by Samurai.

~Declined, do not resubmit~ technique already exists

Samurai Sword Arts: Infinite Malice
(Samurai Kenjutsu: Mugen Warugi)
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The samurai will hold a sword in two hands and rear back while holding the sword parallel to the ground. They channel chakra into the blade and then thrust it forward at incredible speeds that creates a pocket of air pressure around the blade as it cuts through the air. This air pressure bursts forward in the shape and size of the original sword at high speeds that can only be tracked by a doujutsu and is capable of piercing A-ranked earth and techniques of equal durability.
~Can only be used once per battle.
~Can only be used by Samurai.

~Declined, do not resubmit~ you're not Gin from Bleach

Scary Yamato · Apr 1, 2011

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(Shintou Shuuha) - Concussive Wave
Type: Supplementary
Rank:A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The User gathers a large amount of chakra in their hands and quickly claps them together. The clap releases a condensed wave of chakra in all directions. Once the wave reaches the opponents ears (the wave moves very quickly) it will sound like a loud blast followed by a high pitched ringing in the ears which deafens the opponent for 3 turns. This will also result in a noticeable, but not completely impairing, loss of balance in the opponent. The user will concentrate chakra into their ears to provide protection to themselves during the use of this jutsu.

Restrictions:
-Can only be used 2 times per battle.
-User cannot hear at the moment the wave is released due to chakra ear protection.

~Approved~

Wood Style: Wooden Hands (Mokuton: Mokusei Teashi)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short – Long
Chakra: 25
Damage: N/A
Description: The user extends multiple wooden pillars from their arms which have hands the the end of them which can hold weapons, bind the opponent, or apply a seal. These hands can travel through the ground and pop up underneath the opponent.

~Approved~

Mokuton: Nokogiri Obutsu (Wood style: Saw dust)
Rank: A
Range: Short – Mid
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user spits a cloud of chakra infused saw dust that envelops the area up to mid ranged. The the chakra infused saw dust reports movement made within the area back to the user. The dust will remain in the air for 2 turns or 1 minute (whichever comes first), and will then settle on the ground.
Restrictions: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

~Approved, nice idea~
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Feel Free to apply edits if needed, Zen. ^_^ I trust your judgment.

Geezus · Apr 1, 2011

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Suiton| Shinsui - [Water Release| Flood]
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses water chakra underground and has it burst forth in waves away from his epicenter, blocking techniques with ease and continuing on in a attempt to harm the opponent.

~Declined, requires restrictions~

Raiton| Okami Kunrin Shindou - [Lightning Release| Overlord Reign Impact]
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: While in mid-air the user throws 3 bolts of lightning into the ground at the enemy that stay dormant, then by focusing his chakra on his hand, the user comes down with a mighty fist, punching the ground causing the lightning to burst forth through the ground destroying everything in the vicinity.

~Declined, same applies for this technique requires some restrictions~

Fuuinjutsu| Ranbou Itami Han - [Sealing Technique| Violent Pain Seal]
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user carries 5 different seal tags, each complementing either Fire/Wind/Earth/Water/Lightning. Upon throwing this seal tag near the enemy, it activates creating a Glyph underneath the enemy which glows for a 3seconds before activating but the seal retains it's elemental weakness depending on the seal.

Raiton| Mystic Seal - The seal spreads out underneath the opponent spreading to just under mid-range and glows for three seconds before bolts of lightning then come from the ground and pin the opponent down. from the outer edges of the glyph then burst raiton energy lifting the opponent into the air which then condense into balls of light which then shoot out interconnecting beams of Raiton, further damaging the opponent.

Doton| Ruinous Seal - the seal spreads out and glows for 3 seconds just under mid-range creating a glyph, which after the seals create a nigh inescapable barrier. Which, then masses of earth get uplifted and thrown violently around at the opponent.

Fuuton| Fleeting Seal - the seal spreads out and glows for 3 seconds just under mid-range creating a glyph, which afterwards creates a vacuum of slicing wind, cutting the opponent numerous times.

Suiton| Diffusional Seal -the seal spreads out and glows for 3 seconds just under mid-range creating a glyph, afterwards large water balls exit from the edges of the glyph and crash into the opponent sending them into the air, which then a torrent of rapidly spinning water traps the opponent in a bubble of water and slams them back down into the ground dealing the finishing blow.

Katon| Raging Seal - the seal spreads out and glows for 3 seconds just under mid-range creating a glyph, afterwards the glyph creates a mass of small explosions damaging and distracting the opponent as pillars of fire come up from the outer edges of the glyph rising them into the air and then the whole glyph explodes causing damage.

-[The user loses the ability to use the respective seals element for two turns afterwards.]
-[Only one seal may be used at any given time. ]
-[Each seal is only usable once]

~Declined, do not resubmit~

Juinjutsu| Bakushin - [Cursed Seal Technique| Blast Heart]
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (-30 to user)
Description: In Cursed Mark level two, the user focuses a mass of Chakra into his chest and by manipulating the flesh in his chest, that chakra burst forth about 10 tendrils attacking everything within range, with a great rapidness that only 3tomoe Sharingan can hope to avoid, but in return the technique causes a large strain on the user's heart, briefly stunning him for about 5seconds.
(Usable Once)

~Declined op, make some further restrictions for me to consider it being approved~

Juinjutsu| Kenran Hayoku - [Cursed Seal Technique| Brilliant Cataclysm]
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: While in Cursed Mark level 2, the user condense chakra into a spear in his hand, throwing it in the air. When it comes back down a turn later it hits the ground, then chakra fills a large circular area, bursting forth through the ground as raw chakra, damaging opponent and/or the user depending on who is in range of the technique.
(Usable Once)

~Declined, Again needs some restrictions~

ZK · Apr 1, 2011

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Name: Fuuinjutsu: Kokoro no genso en (Sealing Technique: Elemental Circles of the Heart)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This seal is used to create a perfect balance in a ninja’s body and mind, allowing him/her to access powers that usually aren’t available to the user. The seal is made up of 5 tattoo-like rings around the users heart, the rings are set in a pattern resembling the Rinnegan, the five rings are constantly absorbing chakra from the users body to ensure that they’re always ready to be activated. The five rings represent five states of the seal, the inner ring being the weakest and the outer being the strongest. When a ring is activated it begins to glow weakly.

First Ring | Ring of Water
When activating the first ring, the user loses his ability to manipulate water chakra for the rest of the battle; instead all the water chakra will be used to temporary improve his body. The water chakra will be send to the blood veins to increase the blood flow with a large amount, it’ll also be used to keep the user body temperature at normal even when he’s in extreme situations.
This will result in:
The user avoids almost all regular fatigue and exhaustion.
Boost of speed similar to Lee without weights.
Boost of strength similar to Sakura’s strength.
Increased perception and quicker analyzing skills.
Will cause a severe headache when the effect wears off.

Second Ring | Ring of Lightning
When activating the second ring, the user loses his ability to manipulate lightning chakra for the rest of the battle; instead all the lightning chakra will be used to temporary improve his body. The lightning chakra will help impulses and signals reach the brain faster, and will release small impulses into the muscles to make them work faster. The chakra will also numb the users nerves to a certain degree.
This will result in:
High resistance to pain.
Boost of speed similar to the 2nd gate.
Boost of strength similar to Tsunade at her best.
Increased reaction time.
The user will feel a sting of pain when this ring is activated and when it ends. The user will only be able to use A-ranked Ninjutsu and below when this ring is activated.

Third Ring | Ring of Wind
When activating the third ring, the user loses his ability to manipulate wind chakra for the rest of the battle; instead all the wind chakra will be used to temporary improve his body. The wind chakra will help increase the oxygen level of the blood with a great amount, and to help the user control his breathing, the wind will also increase the users overall “flow” in his body.
This will result in:
Boost of speed similar to the 3rd gate.
Boost of strength similar to the 2nd gate.
Another boost in the users perception and reaction time.
This ring will put a severe strain on the users muscles when activated, the user will experience great pain when the effect of the ring wears off. The user can only use C-ranked Ninjutsu and below when this ring is activated.

Fourth Ring | Ring of Earth
When activating the fourth ring, the user loses his ability to manipulate earth chakra for the rest of the battle; instead all the earth chakra will be used to temporary improve his body. All the earth chakra will be used to further enhance the strength and speed of the user by reinforcing the already existing enhancements.
This will result in:
Boost of speed similar to the 4th gate.
Boost of strength similar to the 3rd gate.
The users muscles and organs will be throughout damaged when this ring is activated, he will experience immense pain when the effect of the rings wear off. The user can only perform D-ranked Ninjutsu and below when this ring is activated.

Fifth Ring | Ring of Fire
When activating the fifth ring, the user loses his ability to manipulate fire chakra for the rest of the battle; instead all the fire chakra will be used to temporary improve his body. Most of the fire chakra will be used to smoothen the users muscles, but some of it will be concentrated into the users brain to forcibly make it release all the adrenaline available in the brain.
This will result in:
Boost of speed similar to the 5th gate.
Boost of strength similar to the 4th gate.
A chakra coat that reduces the damage hostile techniques inflicts on the user by 20 (only if it hits of course)
The user will experience extreme pain when this ring is activated. The user will not be able to perform any techniques (with the exception of Taijutsu)

Restrictions:

• No Genjutsu can be used while any of these rings are active and 2 turns after.
• No Summons can be used the first turn of the 1st 2nd and 3rd ring and none at all when the 4th or 5th is activated.
• It’s possible to jump directly to a ring but the user will still suffer the others disadvantages (example: If you jump directly to the ring of wind you won’t be able to use water lightning or wind.)
• Activating a ring counts as one of the three moves allowed per turn.
• The 1st ring can last for 5 turns. The 2nd and 3rd can last for 4 turns. The 4th and 5th can last for 3 turns.
• Each ring can only be activated once, and it’s not possible to activate a weaker ring than the user is currently in.
• When the 2nd ring ends, the user won’t be able to use Forbidden ranked techniques for the following two turns.
• When the 3rd ring ends, the user won’t be able to use S-ranked and above techniques for the following turn and no forbidden ranked techniques for the following two turns.
• When the 4th ring ends, the user will receive 20 damage because of the energy usage, and won’t be able to use A-ranked and above techniques for the following turn, no S-ranked techniques for the following two turns, and no forbidden ranked techniques for the following three turns.
• When the 5th ring ends, the user will collapse due to energy exhaustion and won’t be able to move for the rest of the battle.
• Nothing can suppress the pain caused by this technique.
• No modes can be activated during and after the effects of the 4th and 5th ring.
• Ninjutsu can only be utilized once per turn when the 4th or 3rd ring is active and only twice when the 2nd or 1st is active.
• Can only be used by ZeroG
• Co-created by The Dark King

~Declined, do not resubmit~

Name: Senpō: (Sage Art: Divine Wind)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs two handseals while gathering great amounts of wind chakra in his stomach and mixing it with his natural energy, when the user feel like it he exhales the wind as a gigantic blast of wind. The wind blast covers a great area and moves at incredible speed, it levels anything in its path, and because of the natural energy added to it the wind blast is able to cut through steel.
Notes:
• Useable once per match.
• Can only be used in Sage Mode.
• Reduces the effect of Sage Mode by a turn.
• Can only be taught by ZeroG and The Dark King.

~Declined, needs full Japanese name~

Name: Kuchiyose: Yougama (Summoning: Volcano Toad)
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the five handseals needed and biting their thumb, the user slams their palm against the ground and summons the Volcano Toad named Yougama. The volcano toad is about ⅔ as big as Gamabunta, (66 meters tall) and is wearing a great belt around its waist; the belt contains several scrolls which each contains a larger amount of lava. Yougama is the most capable lava user on Myobokuzan Mountain, and is able to use all lava techniques up to S-rank, because of his great knowledge of lava he is completely unaffected by C-ranked lava techniques and below.
Note: Can only be summoned once.
Note: Must hold toad contract.
Note: Can only stay on the field for 4 turns.
Note: No other summonings for 2 turns.

~Declined, elaborate further on those scrolls that hold the lava ~

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