(Kōton: Atlas) – Steel release: Atlas
Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will slam their hand down on the ground, or their sword, staff, hammer, ect, releasing their chakra all around. This chakra ripples through the earth to mid range around the user like a pebble hitting the water. It creates a 1cm layer of steel 3cm under the earths skin. Creating an almost membrane of steel under the earths skin, unknown the normal ninja, thought doujutsu, sensors ect would know it's their. The name comes from the titan, Atlas whose punishment in mythology was to forever hold up the world. This layer of steel is to have a holding in the ground for the user, which would remain in place as a platform, even if the opponent tried to lower the earth, or drop the ground, giving the user a steady standing. Though if a stronger jutsu was used, it would render the steel useless. Now this steel layer has two additional uses.
First of all the user will have his chakra flowing through the steel like a pressure sensing on the steel, feeling what causes pressure on it at different locations. For example, an opponent running across it. With this the user can do one of two things. The first is to cause the steel to shoot up on the spot of pressure, protruding a sword like spike 1ft above the ground at the point of pressure in reaction. So if it was a foot, i would impale the foot. The second is instead of spike the user can have the steel take a volcano like effect, errupting outwards and upwards, creating an upwards pushing force. This force would push up on the point of pressure, so if it was a foot stood on it would would release a mini burst under the foot lifting the target into the air. This wouldn't damage them, it would just throw them of and distract them, a explosion type effect of pushing, without a damaging explosion.
Note: Useable twice and lasts until destroyed
Note: Each effect can be used once per turn and only one can be used at a time, counting as a move per turn and consuming 20 chakra points
Note: Must wait two turns before using again
‡ Declined ‡ This is a nice technique but you need to tone this down. For one, this needs a turn limit. Two, you need to split this into two different uses i.e. the lethal/harmful one and the non-harmful one and specify which one is used in the turn you create this. Something like this would disrupt the opponent's ability to use earth from the ground. I can't have it "last until destroyed".
(Kōton: Atlas) – Steel release: Atlas
Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will slam their hand down on the ground, or their sword, staff, hammer, ect, releasing their chakra all around. This chakra ripples through the earth to mid range around the user like a pebble hitting the water. It creates a 1cm layer of steel 3cm under the earths skin. Creating an almost membrane of steel under the earths skin, unknown the normal ninja, thought doujutsu, sensors ect would know it's their. The name comes from the titan, Atlas whose punishment in mythology was to forever hold up the world. This layer of steel is to have a holding in the ground for the user, which would remain in place as a platform, even if the opponent tried to lower the earth, or drop the ground, giving the user a steady standing. Though if a stronger jutsu was used, it would render the steel useless. Now this steel layer has two additional uses.
First of all the user will have his chakra flowing through the steel like a pressure sensing on the steel, feeling what causes pressure on it at different locations. For example, an opponent running across it. With this the user can do one of two things. The first is to cause the steel to shoot up on the spot of pressure, protruding a sword like spike 1ft above the ground at the point of pressure in reaction. So if it was a foot, i would impale the foot.
The second is instead of spike the user can have the steel take a volcano like effect, errupting outwards and upwards, creating an upwards pushing force. This force would push up on the point of pressure, so if it was a foot stood on it would would release a mini burst under the foot lifting the target into the air. This wouldn't damage them, it would just throw them of and distract them, a explosion type effect of pushing, without a damaging explosion.
The user must state which effect will be lying within the layer when he makes the jutsu, it can only be the use of spikes, or the upwards thrust. This lasts for that use of the jutsu only and they can switch which variation they use. While this layer is in place it can be hard for an opponent to use earth in the ground, but due to it's thin layer, it will only stop B rank and below earth from that area, dpending on how the jutsu works. A ranks would push through this steel, or like a swamp would cause the steel to sink if the same size.
Note: Useable three times lasting 4 turns. Two turns between uses.
Note: Each effect can be used once per turn and only one can be used at a time, counting as a move per turn and consuming 20 chakra points
‡ Approved ‡
New jutsu:
(Koton/Fuuton: Arcane se) Steel/Wind Release: Arcane Torrent
Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This technique is one of two parts, it doesn't control both elements at the same time, it's two step jutsu, much like when Darui uses lightning after releasing water to create a combination. The user will hold out their hand to a location using the basic principles of steel release to create hundreds of little shards of steel on the surface of that area (short range diameter). Though this would just look like glitter, the steel is like the shrapnel released when in reality you cut through steel, hence you wearing protective clothing. The use will then swing their hand up using basic wind release to cause and updraft of wind focussed under those shards causing them to rise up in a gust of wind, much like when wind is used with dust, cuasing and upwards pushing force with all the cutting power of the steel shards. This upward thrust of wind can be straight up or at an angle to push them short range in a desired direction. Using basic powers of the two creates unique combination almost like a burst of steel/wind through hand gestures. There isn't really a time lapse between the two parts of the jutsu, it happens in the timeframe of a single technique.
Note: Useable thrice per battle
Note: Counts as two of the user's three moves per turn
Note: One turn between uses
‡ Approved ‡ Made some edits. Elemental combinations of this nature must count as two of the user's moves per turn.
(Koton: Arcane ekusupuro-jon) Steel: Arcane explosion
Rank: A
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will release a surge of chakra through his body releasing it outwards releasing a blast of steel chakra all around his body to short range in the form of 1000's of tiny steel razor blades with next to no gaps around each one, shooting out at the speed of an shot arrow, they then hold their place in the dome shape for one turn and drop to the ground around the user, which can they be used as a source of steel for future use.
Note: Useable 4 times
Note: Two turns between uses
‡ Approved ‡ Removed about half of the description since it was filler.
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