(Katon: Unari no Funkazan)- Fire Release: Bellow of Vesuvius
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description: The user will begin this technique by channelling fire chakra through their arms and into their hands. Due to the amount of chakra that travels through their arm, the user experiences an incredibly painful level of damage to the limb which causes a degree of numbness. The user then proceeds to clap their hands together and from them a huge amount of superheated, non-flammable ash will spew forth.The ash will first quickly envelop the user before it billows upwards to form into a large cloud that will grow to span the entire battlefield.
Due to the ash's density and heat it will not allow any threat to effect or pass through it(following elemental adv/disadv). After being released the ash would accumulate and grow into a cloud above the user over the course of the first turn. In the second turn the ash would begin to fall (S rank in strength) within short range only as it starts to spread over the battlefield. In turn 3 it would spread to include medium range and finally in turn 4 it would encompass long range as well.The ash would stick to any enemy targets or techniques and incinerate them from the exposure and temperature.
Once the ash has been created the caster can use shape manipulation to form a bolt of ash that erupts onto a targeted area once per turn(S-rank and reaches up to long range).The ash thunderbolt is capable of decimating the area which it strikes, causing a large amount of damage. The user will employ chakra control to insulate himself from the effects of the ash.
Note:
~Can only be used twice
~The cloud lasts for 4 turns
~No other katon techniques while this technique is in play ~Due to the numbness and damage to their arm, the user cannot form hand seals for two turns
~The bolt of ash counts as one of the moves in that turn ~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
Declined - Forbidden rank that lasts 4 turns is a no? Also you say it covers the user when it forms. Why wouldn't the forbidden ranked ash just kill you then and there? It would just look like what happened in pompei, cover burn and kill you.
~Reduced the turn limit and addressed the issue with the user being exposed to the ash
(Katon: Unari no Funkazan)- Fire Release: Bellow of Vesuvius
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-15 to user)
Description: The user will begin this technique by channelling fire chakra through their arms and into their hands. Due to the amount of chakra that travels through their arm, the user experiences an incredibly painful level of damage to the limb which causes a degree of numbness. The user then proceeds to clap their hands together and from them a huge amount of superheated, non-flammable ash will spew forth.The ash will first quickly envelop the user before it billows upwards to form into a large cloud that will grow to span the entire battlefield.
Due to the ash's density and heat it will not allow any threat to effect or pass through it(following elemental adv/disadv). After being released the ash would accumulate and form into a cloud above the user, as it does so the ash would begin to fall from the cloud (S rank in strength) within short range only as it starts to spread over the battlefield. In turn 2 it would spread to include medium range and finally in turn 3 it would encompass long range as well. The ash would stick to any enemy targets or techniques and incinerate them from the exposure and temperature.
Once the ash has been created the caster can use shape manipulation to form a bolt of ash that erupts onto a targeted area once per turn (S-rank and reaches up to long range).The ash thunderbolt is capable of decimating the area which it strikes, causing a large amount of damage. The user will employ chakra control to form a layer of chakra around himself during this technique, to insulate themselves from the effects of the ash.
Note:
~Can only be used twice
~The cloud lasts for 3 turns
~No other katon techniques while this technique is in play
~Due to the numbness and damage to their arm, the user cannot form hand seals for two turns
~The bolt of ash counts as one of the moves in that turn
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
Declined - i'm not gonna allow this to last, it's like costant raining S rank fire. Hell no. Spew out the ash into a ball in the air, clap and have it blast out in all directions. And user has to defend himself in that case. Or severely reduce the rank of this.
~New Submission
(Suiton: Hari no Gomu)-Water Release: Bungee Gum
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20 (+10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user will focus their chakra into the water particles surrounding them up to mid range, altering the water and forming it into a thin haze while giving it sticky qualities. This haze is unique in that it can quite rapidly be condensed into sticky water wherever the user needs, its high viscosity allows it to stick to any surface. The user is able to do this in at least two points at once, forming a ‘string’ of sticky water between objects.
The other useful property of this water is that due to its nature the user is able to manipulate it freely, making it contract or stretch as they see fit for a range of uses, bringing the objects together at a rapid pace for instance. The mist passively absorbs chakra from the user to allow it to maintain its volume and allow it to form again in the area if it was dispersed momentarily. If this technique comes into contact with its user they are able to focus their chakra onto their skin which will cause the water to fall off quickly and harmlessly.
Note:
~Can only be used 2 times
~If dispersed it takes 1 turn to reform
~Lasts for 4 turns
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
Declined - been done before and so many people trying to do it just since i became a mod.
Suiton: Primal umi juugan)- Water style: Primal sea bullets
Type: Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Short-long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user will make a single handsign while focusing their water chakra into several spheres made of water each the size of a baseball. The user will condense their spheres into The size of a bullet, The user will then send the water to surround the enemy on all sides With a snap of the users fingers each one will release a stream of highly pressurized water at the enemy from all sides. This jutsu can also be used directly from infront of the user as a frontal attack rather then a surrounding one.
Note: In total there's 10 water spheres/bullets, that will surround the enemy, two on the left, two on the right, two above two infront of and two behind.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: No Water jutsu Above S rank in the same turn
Declined - Needs restricting a bit more. You're attacking with water from all sides with S rank power, make it A rank and below the next turn.
Hyouton: Hiebie chi Bokushingu no tame ni)-Ice Release Cold Blooded Boxing
ype: Attack Rank: A Range:Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user will focus all their ice chakra into their hands, making them extremely cold. This will cause the users hands to take on a blue appearance, as well as freeze skin and water inside the enemy on contact. The user will engage the enemy in close combat with this jutsu active and attempt to strike them, or even just brush them, the freezing cold chakra being emitted from the users hands will cause the skin of the enemy to freeze, giving them frost bite and freezing any water inside the enemies body that was hit, even sweat. This freeze will cause immense pain and will make the hit area numb hard to move and control and Won't be able to control the affected area (including moving chakra to the area) for 3 turns. The user will not have the same effects even if he accidentally touches himself as he has control over the chakra, and due to his training with the jutsu has become immune to its effects.
Note: Lasts three turns
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Does not prevent the use of water jutsu from the enemy after they are hit.
Note: While active the user can only use wind,water,ice, Ninjutsu, taijutsu and genjutsu aswell as Ce's that consist of atleast one of the three elements the user can still use.
Declined - Not having this stopping use of chakra from the area. Apart from that it's all good.
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Hyouton: Koori Bakudan)- Ice Relase: Ice Bomb
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-20 to the user from the blast)
Description: The user will make 5 hand seals while building up a large amount of ice chakra. He then condenses it into a white sphere between his palms made of compressed pure ice chakra the size of a small egg. He then releases his control on the sphere, releasing that huge amount of chakra in a form of an ice shockwave that freezes all non-organic matter up to mid range, leaving only a frozen small crater with the user in the middle.
Note: Can't use any more ice jutsu Above B rank for 2 turns and water or wind above A-Rank for 2 turns note: user can't perform taijutsu during the next turn
Note: Usable once per match
Note: can only be taught by -Haku Yuki-
Alright I made it so its pretty much the original without that stupid can't stand for 15 seconds thing
Suiton: Primal umi juugan)- Water style: Primal sea bullets
Type: Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Short-long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user will make a single handsign while focusing their water chakra into several spheres made of water each the size of a baseball. The user will condense their spheres into The size of a bullet, The user will then send the water to surround the enemy on all sides With a snap of the users fingers each one will release a stream of highly pressurized water at the enemy from all sides. This jutsu can also be used directly from infront of the user as a frontal attack rather then a surrounding one.
Note: In total there's 10 water spheres/bullets, that will surround the enemy, two on the left, two on the right, two above two infront of and two behind.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: No Water jutsu Above A rank in the same turn, or the following turn
Declined - Just needs a bit of work, if you make 10 spheres each one would be D rank at best, so would each stream shot forwards from them. Just incoporate that into the jutsu please. Will save time in argueing when people go to counter this.
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Toukan no Wa | Frost Ring
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description:
The ring of the frost giant king of the north. Its made of a special metal that can channel Water, Wind and Ice chakra. Wielding the ring gives the user greater power for his Water, Wind and Ice jutsu and gives him the unique ability to materialize a weapon made of either one of these elements in the hand the ring is. For example, the user can materialize a hammer, a sword, a whip, a glove, a bow, etc. User must choose which weapon is materialized, and only one weapon may be used per turn.
Abilities: +10 damage to Wind and Water +15 damage to Ice The elemental weapons that can be created are equal to S-Rank elemental jutsu
Restrictions:
Creating the weapons counts as a turn
Weapons maintain themselves until destroyed or released
While wielding an elemental weapon, user can't make hand seals Weapons can be thrown but another one cannot be made while another one is still active. Meaning if one is thrown but doesn't break the user can't make a new one unless that one breaks or is released. Can't channel fire chakra while using elemental weapons Note:Non Yuki clan members can use, but they will only be able to use its wind and water abilities. Aswell as have a plus 15 boost instead of plus 10 to either wind or water, which one must be stated before the match the other one remains 10
only -Haku Yuki- can use
Declined - you already have a weapon that boosts unlike most, i wont allow you to increase the power of the boost.
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(Hyouton/Suiton: Koori Suisei)- Ice/Water Release: Ice Comets
Type: Offensive
Rank:S
Range:Short-long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user will preform the rat Handsign while focusing his Water chakra into the air, using shape manipulation to form this water into a sphere of water that will split off into five spheres about the size of a car. The user will then preform the tiger seal freezing the water in the center of all five, while leaving a layer of water around the spheres untouched. The sudden change in weight will cause the water and ice spheres to fall to the ground at a fast rate crushing whatever they land on and leaving creators where ever they fall. The ice will still be intact even after the fall unless it is broken by an enemy jutsu.
Note: No ice or water jutsu above A rank in the same turn or the following.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kaiyō Bumon) - Summoning Technique: Marine Division
Type: Summoning
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon three locusts each 5 meters tall. They all specialize in the water element, individually capable of using B rank and below water jutsu that do not require handseals. Working together they are at their strongest. In collaboration, these locusts can produce a large volume of water around them in the form of a giant humanoid creature controlled by the locusts that remain connected to it or else they will lose control. (A rank) It can attack using its arms and legs which can extend to reach distant targets. (Mid range normally/Long extended) The locusts can use this creature to perform water jutsu A rank and below, forming any needed handseals using its hands.
-All techniques used count toward the user's three moves per turn including creating the water human
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Other locusts of the same kind exist
-Must have signed the Locusts contract
‡ Approved ‡
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(Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Sabre) - Summoning Technique: Sabre
Type: Summoning
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: After drawing blood and performing the needed handseals, the user summons a 3 meter tall Shoebill wearing goggles, two kunai launchers on its sides and crescent shaped blades attached to the ends of its wings and beak. He is one of a group of Shoebills called the Sabres who excel at aerial battle. His affinity is wind, allowing him to perform wind jutsu B rank and below. Sabre's most notable feature is his flying skill which makes it able to fly faster than a ninja can sprint but not by much. By emitting wind from his wings as he flies, Sabre can propel himself and greatly boost his flying speed for a short time, though still traceable by normal eyesight. (1 turn) Sabre's signature methods of attack are using the three blades he wields to slash opponents or his kunai launchers that are activated by channeling wind chakra into them. This makes them shoot a barrage of wind infused kunai at high speed, almost like bullets. (B rank/Long range)
-Can be summoned three times per battle
-All wind based moves count as one of the user's three moves per turn
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Must have signed the Shoebill contract
‡ Declined ‡ A lot wrong here. You need to clarify his speed better, at most I'll allow him to fly as fast as a Sage Ranked shinobi. How does a bird use swords? and that "almost like bullets" thing needs to go. At most they can travel as fast as shot arrows.
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(Gekkō) - Moonbeam
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (20 for projection ability/ 30 for vision ability/ +10 each turn active for each)
Damage: N/A
Description: Moonbeam is a peculiar metal staff designed by a master illusionist. The pole is entirely white and 5 ft long. At the top is a 2 ft wide sphere with a perfectly smooth, mirrored surface and at the base is a triangular spike. The wielder can take anything reflected on the mirror's surface and create an illusionary projection within 30 meters of it. This is done by channeling chakra into Moonbeam's sphere which is emitted to form the projections. The projections are identical to their originals due to being reflections but the scale, quantity, and positions are up to the user. They can range from tiny objects to entire landscapes which are either projected in 3D or 2D like a screen. However, obstructing Moonbeam from the original objects will erase part or all of the projection until the obstruction is gone. The projections cannot physically interact with anything, passing through objects and appearing hollow on the inside. Another separate ability of Moonbeam allows the wielder to link his vision to the mirror and see everything reflected by it. Once either of these abilities are activated, they will be passively maintained while taking chakra from the wielder.
-Both abilities count as a move when activated
-Projections last for three turns / Vision ability five turns
-Can be used while on the user, not necessarily in his hand.
-Indestructible, but can only block attacks within reason
-Can only be used by Ushiro and those he allows
‡ Pending ‡ Need a second opinion on this.
Declined - creating an illusion of any landscape or item through this weapon goes against so many jutsu that exist.
Removed the ability in question. Added some characterization.
(Kuchiyose: Sōdaina Inago wa Jishin) – Summoning: Grand Locust Jishin
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Kokyū, a giant locust 100 meters in height also known as the “Plague of the Land”. This title stems from an extreme passion for both exploration and destruction. It is said that whenever he appears in an unfamiliar place the entire landscape is left unrecognizable after his tirade subsides. Kokyū has pale white eyes and a steel-hard body that is dark grey in color and carries a large pickaxe capable of inflicting A rank physical damage. He is a master of the Earth element and as such can perform S rank and below Earth jutsu that do not require handseals. Due to his great size and tough body, he is immune to ninjutsu B rank and below, and earth jutsu A rank and below.
-Can only be summoned once
-Lasts for 5 turns
-All techniques used by him count as one of the summoner's moves
-Must have signed the locusts contract
Declined - 5 turns is too long. No other summons at the same time, no summons for two turns. Mention it's just for effect the bit you added, not that the whole place is destroyed when he's summoned
(Shuradō: Sensō no Kaminoikari) – Asura Path: War God's Wrath
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (+45 to techniques involving the arms)
Description: The user produces 100 arms from his body which combine into a single pair of arms, increase their size and armor to hulking, armored proportions. These arms possess the focused strength of a 100 arms and can vent jets of chakra from them like the Chakra Propulsion Boots technique for increased maneuverability and striking power. The monstrous strength gained by this technique rivals Tsunade's at her best. The arms can withstand one S rank attack before being destroyed.
-Usable twice per battle
-Lasts for 4 turns
-Must wait 2 turns before using again
-Can only be used through Asura Path or with it active.
-Can only be used by Ushiro
Declined - how can it be short range when it's 100 arms? 4 turns is to long
(Gekkō) - Moonbeam
Type: Weapon
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (-10 each turn for both abilities)
Damage: N/A
Description: Moonbeam is a peculiar metal staff designed by a master blacksmith. The pole is entirely white and 5 ft long. At the top is a sphere 1.5 ft wide with a perfectly smooth, mirrored surface and at the base is a triangular spike. Moonbeam has two abilities. The first allows the user to merge other inanimate objects with the sphere and have it manipulate them. For example, the user may combine the sphere with a kunai and make the protruding blade slash enemies or shoot it out from the sphere. When not manipulating the objects they remain merged with the sphere, becoming part of it. Moonbeam's second ability allows its wielder to link his vision to the mirror and see everything reflected by it. Once either ability is activated, it will be passively maintained while taking chakra from the wielder.
-Both abilities count as a move when activated
-Can be used while on the user, not necessarily in his hand.
-Indestructible, but can only block attacks within reason
-Can only be used by Ushiro and those he allows
Declined - is there a limit to what can be fused with the spear? What happens to lightning infused weapons and such, can they only be shot out the mirror at the top and no to the linked vision
(Kuchiyose: Sōdaina Inago wa Jishin) – Summoning: Grand Locust Jishin
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user wipes blood on his summoning tattoo to summon Kokyū, a giant locust 100 meters in height also known as the “Plague of the Land”. This title stems from an extreme passion for both exploration and destruction. It is said that whenever he appears in an unfamiliar place the entire landscape is left unrecognizable after his tirade subsides, though this is merely a rumor. Kokyū has pale white eyes and a steel-hard body that is dark grey in color and carries a large pickaxe capable of inflicting A rank physical damage. He is a master of the Earth element and as such can perform S rank and below Earth jutsu that do not require handseals. Due to his great size and tough body, he is immune to ninjutsu B rank and below, and earth jutsu A rank and below.
-Can only be summoned once
-Lasts for 4 turns
-No other summons at the same time
-No summons for two turns
-All techniques used by him count as one of the summoner's moves
-Must have signed the locusts contract
- When his axe is used for A rank damage it counts as move per turn
Approved - added the blue
(Shuradō: Sensō no Kaminoikari) – Asura Path: War God's Wrath
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 (-15 each turn to sustain)
Damage: N/A (80 per attack)
Description: The user produces 100 arms from his body which combine into a single pair of arms, increasing their size and armor to hulking, armored proportions; each arm being five times the user's size. These arms possess the focused strength of a 100 arms and can vent jets of chakra from them like the Chakra Propulsion Boots technique for increased maneuverability and striking power. The monstrous strength gained by this technique rivals Tsunade's at her best. Each arm can withstand one S rank attack before being destroyed. Every attack has S rank power and does not count toward the 3 move per turn limit.
-Usable twice per battle
-Lasts for 3 turns
-Must wait 2 turns before using again
-Can only be used through Asura Path or with it active.
-Can only be used by Ushiro
Declined - so in total the power is S rank, so that means each arm would be A rank. As such both arms attacking at the same time would make S rank in power. It should take A rank to destroy one arm and S rank to destroy both. One arm attacking would then cause A rank damage, and if you don't want it to count as a move per turn reduce the useage to once or reduce it to two turns. Apart from that it's good.
Resubmitting... I haven't even seen Boruto the movie mostly due to my poor time management.
- Changed it from mode to usage after each fuuton jutsu. Fuuton: Tōri o kurūzu)- Wind Release : Cruise down the street
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A (+10 to wind jutsu )
Description: A stealth technique used to catch a foe off balance in battle, before using a Fuuton jutsu, the user performs a single handseal pumping more fuuton chakra into the technique, this chakra allows the user to dissipate the wind technique upon creation into a calm, yet fast non violent breeze that'll travel on a straight or curved path towards the target however this change is temporary, upon traveling a distance of the user's choosing 7 meters maximum, 8 meters if user has wind as specialty , the wind will form back into the original jutsu. The wind jutsu gains a +10 damage due to the increase in input chakra.
~ Can only be used on projectile wind jutsu i.e wind jutsus that travel from the user to the opponent
~ Can not be used on Forbidden rank wind jutsu
~ Can only be taught by Lytes .
~ Can be used five times per battle
Declined - I want to approve it it's a goo idea. But remove the boosting part, reduce it to 3 times per battle, instead of 8 meters put mid range as 5m -20m is mid range. And give one example with a cannon jutsu, such as the wind blade jutsu. State that they can see the light breeze too
-Edits in bold Iris
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Iris is a cloak said to be forged from darkness itself , it's black in colour and it fits itself to the height and desires such as color, shape, size and accessories e.g hood of the user which if used correctly allows the user to camouflage with his surroundings although ninjas of higher rank, can easily spot the user, the camouflage only masks the user's appearance, it doesn't mask chakra, sound, scent etc, when viewed up close, the cloak seems to be made of several tormented souls each trying to break free from the cloak, the true substance used to create the cloak is unknown but it is known the cloak can passively block basic ninja tools without sustaining so much as a scratch. Iris has only one special ability and that is the ability to create chakra human figures out of itself, it is rumored that it's simply the cloak releasing a soul and forcing it to do the user's bidding, these figures are black as night (Like an human with no face nor hair then covered completely in black paint), these figures also bend and move the same way the human body does i.e the joints and movements and they vary in height and body proportion(still within humanly possibilities), plus they pack quite a punch possessing with each attack counting as A rank similarly to how an earth golem's freeform attack depends on its rank e.g A rank golem freeform = A rank damage . Each chakra human figure counts as A rank Wind and costs the user 30 chakra per usage , also, each figure must be short range from Iris at all times or it'll simply vanish and if the user chooses, he might decide not to create the figure fully i.e creating upper body etc the it still counts as A rank
~ Only one chakra figure can be created at a time and it costs user 30 chakra plus it counts as a move and each figure stays for a turn before running outta chakra and vanishing.
~ Can only be taught by Lytes.
~ The figures are black due to the fact that they are creations of the cloak and hereby share the original color of the ckoak, besides ummm...I got nothing.
~ The cloak can withstand freeform Taijutsu and weapons such as kunais, even explosive tags, it can also withstand up to B rank jutsus, any more would damage the cloak, after accumulating a total damage worth of S rank(e.g A rank + A rank), the cloak is destroyed, however, after 5 turns the user can input 60 chakra into the cloak to repair its damages
Declined - regenerating the cloak is a no. For example hit it with S rank fire and there is no cloak left to repair. Now for the wind, really <_< say they pick up dust from the ground that gives them dark appearence like a black something something lol figure something out xd
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~ Edits in bold Fuuton: Tōri o kurūzu)- Wind Release : Cruise down the street
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: A stealth technique used to catch a foe off balance in battle, before using a Fuuton jutsu, the user performs a single handseal pumping more fuuton chakra into the technique, this chakra allows the user to dissipate the wind technique upon creation into a calm, yet fast non violent breeze that'll travel on a straight or curved path towards the target however this change is temporary, upon traveling a distance of the user's choice in between 5m - 20m, the wind will form back into the original jutsu e.g the user performs an handseal before perform the A rank Wind blade jutsu, upon moving the hands to start the jutsu, rather than a Blade of wind materializing from the user's hand, a calm breeze would start from the user and move towards the opponent after which the breeze would materialize the blade of wind at least one meter from the opponent
~ The breeze can be seen by naked eyes
~ Can only be used on projectile wind jutsu i.e wind jutsus that travel from the user to the opponent
~ Can not be used on Forbidden rank wind jutsu
~ Can only be taught by Lytes .
~ Can be used three times per battle.
-Edits in bold Iris
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Iris is a cloak said to be forged from darkness itself , it's black in colour and it fits itself to the height and desires such as color, shape, size and accessories e.g hood of the user which if used correctly allows the user to camouflage with his surroundings although ninjas of higher rank, can easily spot the user, the camouflage only masks the user's appearance, it doesn't mask chakra, sound, scent etc, when viewed up close, the cloak seems to be made of several tormented souls each trying to break free from the cloak, the true substance used to create the cloak is unknown but it is known the cloak can passively block basic ninja tools without sustaining so much as a scratch. Iris has only one special ability and that is the ability to create chakra human figures out of itself, it is rumored that it's simply the cloak releasing a soul and forcing it to do the user's bidding, these figures are black as night (Like an human with no face nor hair then covered completely in black paint), these figures also bend and move the same way the human body does i.e the joints and movements and they vary in height and body proportion(still within humanly possibilities), plus they pack quite a punch possessing with each attack counting as A rank similarly to how an earth golem's freeform attack depends on its rank e.g A rank golem freeform = A rank damage . Each chakra human figure counts as A rank Wind and costs the user 30 chakra per usage , also, each figure must be short range from Iris at all times or it'll simply vanish and if the user chooses, he might decide not to create the figure fully i.e creating upper body etc the it still counts as A rank
~ Only one chakra figure can be created at a time and it costs user 30 chakra plus it counts as a move and each figure stays for a turn before running outta chakra and vanishing.
~ Can only be taught by Lytes.
~ The Cloak's is so evil and dark that everything that comes from it is affected by its color, In real terms, the cloak literally darkens any chakra that passes through it changing its color to black, furthermore, In the NV, it has been shown that elemental chakra can exist in various colour. If this explanation doesn't work, then, The wind chakra in the figures is so concentrated that the conc blue chakra appears to black
~ The cloak can withstand freeform Taijutsu and weapons such as kunais, even explosive tags, it can also withstand up to B rank jutsus, any more would damage the cloak.
Resubmitting... I haven't even seen Boruto the movie mostly due to my poor time management.
- Changed it from mode to usage after each fuuton jutsu. Fuuton: Tōri o kurūzu)- Wind Release : Cruise down the street
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A (+10 to wind jutsu )
Description: A stealth technique used to catch a foe off balance in battle, before using a Fuuton jutsu, the user performs a single handseal pumping more fuuton chakra into the technique, this chakra allows the user to dissipate the wind technique upon creation into a calm, yet fast non violent breeze that'll travel on a straight or curved path towards the target however this change is temporary, upon traveling a distance of the user's choosing 7 meters maximum, 8 meters if user has wind as specialty , the wind will form back into the original jutsu. The wind jutsu gains a +10 damage due to the increase in input chakra.
~ Can only be used on projectile wind jutsu i.e wind jutsus that travel from the user to the opponent
~ Can not be used on Forbidden rank wind jutsu
~ Can only be taught by Lytes .
~ Can be used five times per battle
Declined - I want to approve it it's a goo idea. But remove the boosting part, reduce it to 3 times per battle, instead of 8 meters put mid range as 5m -20m is mid range. And give one example with a cannon jutsu, such as the wind blade jutsu. State that they can see the light breeze too
-Edits in bold Iris
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Iris is a cloak said to be forged from darkness itself , it's black in colour and it fits itself to the height and desires such as color, shape, size and accessories e.g hood of the user which if used correctly allows the user to camouflage with his surroundings although ninjas of higher rank, can easily spot the user, the camouflage only masks the user's appearance, it doesn't mask chakra, sound, scent etc, when viewed up close, the cloak seems to be made of several tormented souls each trying to break free from the cloak, the true substance used to create the cloak is unknown but it is known the cloak can passively block basic ninja tools without sustaining so much as a scratch. Iris has only one special ability and that is the ability to create chakra human figures out of itself, it is rumored that it's simply the cloak releasing a soul and forcing it to do the user's bidding, these figures are black as night (Like an human with no face nor hair then covered completely in black paint), these figures also bend and move the same way the human body does i.e the joints and movements and they vary in height and body proportion(still within humanly possibilities), plus they pack quite a punch possessing with each attack counting as A rank similarly to how an earth golem's freeform attack depends on its rank e.g A rank golem freeform = A rank damage . Each chakra human figure counts as A rank Wind and costs the user 30 chakra per usage , also, each figure must be short range from Iris at all times or it'll simply vanish and if the user chooses, he might decide not to create the figure fully i.e creating upper body etc the it still counts as A rank
~ Only one chakra figure can be created at a time and it costs user 30 chakra plus it counts as a move and each figure stays for a turn before running outta chakra and vanishing.
~ Can only be taught by Lytes.
~ The figures are black due to the fact that they are creations of the cloak and hereby share the original color of the ckoak, besides ummm...I got nothing.
~ The cloak can withstand freeform Taijutsu and weapons such as kunais, even explosive tags, it can also withstand up to B rank jutsus, any more would damage the cloak, after accumulating a total damage worth of S rank(e.g A rank + A rank), the cloak is destroyed, however, after 5 turns the user can input 60 chakra into the cloak to repair its damages
Declined - regenerating the cloak is a no. For example hit it with S rank fire and there is no cloak left to repair. Now for the wind, really <_< say they pick up dust from the ground that gives them dark appearence like a black something something lol figure something out xd
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~ Edits in bold Fuuton: Tōri o kurūzu)- Wind Release : Cruise down the street
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: A stealth technique used to catch a foe off balance in battle, before using a Fuuton jutsu, the user performs a single handseal pumping more fuuton chakra into the technique, this chakra allows the user to dissipate the wind technique upon creation into a calm, yet fast non violent breeze that'll travel on a straight or curved path towards the target however this change is temporary, upon traveling a distance of the user's choice in between 5m - 20m, the wind will form back into the original jutsu e.g the user performs an handseal before perform the A rank Wind blade jutsu, upon moving the hands to start the jutsu, rather than a Blade of wind materializing from the user's hand, a calm breeze would start from the user and move towards the opponent after which the breeze would materialize the blade of wind at least one meter from the opponent
~ The breeze can be seen by naked eyes
~ Can only be used on projectile wind jutsu i.e wind jutsus that travel from the user to the opponent
~ Can not be used on Forbidden rank wind jutsu
~ Can only be taught by Lytes .
~ Can be used three times per battle.
Approved - Nice, we got there in the end xd
-Edits in bold Iris
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Iris is a cloak said to be forged from darkness itself , it's black in colour and it fits itself to the height and desires such as color, shape, size and accessories e.g hood of the user which if used correctly allows the user to camouflage with his surroundings although ninjas of higher rank, can easily spot the user, the camouflage only masks the user's appearance, it doesn't mask chakra, sound, scent etc, when viewed up close, the cloak seems to be made of several tormented souls each trying to break free from the cloak, the true substance used to create the cloak is unknown but it is known the cloak can passively block basic ninja tools without sustaining so much as a scratch. Iris has only one special ability and that is the ability to create chakra human figures out of itself, it is rumored that it's simply the cloak releasing a soul and forcing it to do the user's bidding, these figures are black as night (Like an human with no face nor hair then covered completely in black paint), these figures also bend and move the same way the human body does i.e the joints and movements and they vary in height and body proportion(still within humanly possibilities), plus they pack quite a punch possessing with each attack counting as A rank similarly to how an earth golem's freeform attack depends on its rank e.g A rank golem freeform = A rank damage . Each chakra human figure counts as A rank Wind and costs the user 30 chakra per usage , also, each figure must be short range from Iris at all times or it'll simply vanish and if the user chooses, he might decide not to create the figure fully i.e creating upper body etc the it still counts as A rank
~ Only one chakra figure can be created at a time and it costs user 30 chakra plus it counts as a move and each figure stays for a turn before running outta chakra and vanishing.
~ Can only be taught by Lytes.
~ The Cloak's is so evil and dark that everything that comes from it is affected by its color, In real terms, the cloak literally darkens any chakra that passes through it changing its color to black, furthermore, In the NV, it has been shown that elemental chakra can exist in various colour. If this explanation doesn't work, then, The wind chakra in the figures is so concentrated that the conc blue chakra appears to black
~ The cloak can withstand freeform Taijutsu and weapons such as kunais, even explosive tags, it can also withstand up to B rank jutsus, any more would damage the cloak.
As of today the new cycle starts and with it you can post again in this thread.
For this cycle you can make one post containing up to three jutsu in total
Once i check your post you may not edit, and once you've posted you can't post again until i start a new cycle
Now, a few little tips to help you all get your cj approved:
1. Check your restrictions, compare them to other stuff i've approved of the same rank, for example, S rank usable twice.
2. Limit the uses of jutsu
3. Give summons a turn limit
4. Explain what summons are immune to
5. No speed increases or power boosts
6. no passive stuff, all attacks count as a move per turn and must have a rank
(Kyokotsu-Burēdo) - The Death at the Bottom of the Well-Blade
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/A (Forbidden-S rank)
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A (-20 from Opponent's Chakra drawn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
This blade was the most treasured item of Rai Uchiha, but years to pass, the sword ended back into a Uchiha home. Soon Ikiru's father presented the sword to him, but with simple understanding of where it came from and nothing more. To Ikiru, young and with eagerness to learn more, it led him to the deep library of knowledge in Land of Keys. He then learned more of his past and how the blade came into being. Ikiru understanding that the Katana's true name for which it wasn't the 'Uchiha Sword of Creatures and Encryption' like he was told, but rather 'The Death at the Bottom of the Well'. For now the blade was much more now redefined, he understood its meaning and how to use it beyond his previous knowledge.
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Abilities of the blade:
╳ When the user draws the blade from it's scabbard, the user needs to place the tip of the blade toward the ground to summon (aka Phase 1) enormous ounces of water from the underground's natural aquifers, until returned into the scabbard the end result will be Crater Lake (Passive). Then after phase 1, the user can choose to either make puddles, many mini-versions of lakes or leakages from nearby rocks (Passive). If water is already present (aka Phase 2) before phase 1, the user can (passively) manipulate (either through mental command or directing it by using this katana) the presented water to link both parties of the shinobi(s). If its after the Phase 1, they can gain this ability but, they'll have to spend 1 of their battle Jutsu slots/moves. If phase 2 was successfully initiated, the user can also stream their chakra (+20 chakra max/B-rank limit) through the water into whomever is connected to their water-stream.
Notice: The water sources that are summoned would be fairly large in size (water ounces summoned would be able to fill up a standard sized pool). Phase 1, takes 2 of the user's turns for the underground's natural aquifers water to appear on the field and after 6 of the user's turns, the area will surrounded by water appearing as a crater lake, concluding the completion of the ability (Phase 1).
╳ The most potent form of abilities for this sword is that, whenever the user of the sword's blade makes contact with the opponent or an subject that is connected/touching to the opponent or if a water source, the user can draw -20 chakra from the subject with every contacted strike. This is a process known as "Kyokotsu-no jutsu".
Notice: The user can only Draw up to S-rank chakra (Max) per turn from the "Kyokotsu-no jutsu" ability. Notice: Once maximum chakra is drawn, the user can't use same ability until after 1 turn. Notice: Cannot use this ability if they used any-other abilities of Kyokotsu in the same turn, except the passive abilities.
Notice: This ability is active for 3 turns(aka Lock), whether used or not. Once Phase 1 is complete, then the user can fully use this ability without an active turn restriction limit(Lock).
Declined - pick a single rank for this and i wont approve forbidden ranked weapons Updating Approved CW:
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(Ration: Chāpu wa doragonzukōnā o waki)-Lightning Style: Chirp springing the Dragons corner Type: Offensive Rank: A Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user can create up to four blue lightning dragons creatures which emanate at a different vibration then regular Lightning jutsu. This different vibration of lightning chakra will have a spring coil likeness to it. These dragons are each 3 feet in length and 2 feet in diameter thickness (when 4 have been released, but as one, x4 each width & length). The spring like coil and hoping state of this lightning jutsu, gives the miniature dragons ability to outwit objects in the way as they head forward only. They behave much like pawns on a chess board, moving only forward and never backwards toward their enemy when released from the hands of the user. These Dragons once released, they will lock on and track the target till they shock them, unless the target(s) manage to get passed them. While these dragons are coiled they'll appear as a ball of ration in their user's hands, in that state of a sphere that covers the user's hand as if boxing gloves. Given that they don't kill on contact but, will rather shock the enemy also paralyze them. The user can install the jutsu's launched dragons with kunai(s) and similar entities.
Notice:These dragons can chase up to 4 people, as they'd split up the targets upon themselves.
Notice: Once shocked paralyzation lasts 1 turn if successful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty. Notice: This jutsu will only avoid preexisting obstacles in the way as they move onwards. The user can command or let the jutsu decide the course of path only before launching.
Declined - State that with each dragon you make it reduces the power 1 = A rank, 2 = B rank, 3-4 = C rank, not only that, but are you sure you want this jutsu. If they were about to hit me i'd just use an earth pillar to shoot me up over them, as they can only go forwards they would then be useless, just a penny for a thought and all that.
(Kyokotsu-Burēdo) - The Death at the Bottom of the Well-Blade
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/A (S rank)
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A (-20 from Opponent's Chakra drawn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
This blade was the most treasured item of Rai Uchiha, but years to pass, the sword ended back into a Uchiha home. Soon Ikiru's father presented the sword to him, but with simple understanding of where it came from and nothing more. To Ikiru, young and with eagerness to learn more, it led him to the deep library of knowledge in Land of Keys. He then learned more of his past and how the blade came into being. Ikiru understanding that the Katana's true name for which it wasn't the 'Uchiha Sword of Creatures and Encryption' like he was told, but rather 'The Death at the Bottom of the Well'. For now the blade was much more now redefined, he understood its meaning and how to use it beyond his previous knowledge.
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Abilities of the blade:
╳ When the user draws the blade from it's scabbard, the user needs to place the tip of the blade toward the ground to summon (aka Phase 1) enormous ounces of water from the underground's natural aquifers, until returned into the scabbard the end result will be Crater Lake (Passive). Then after phase 1, the user can choose to either make puddles, many mini-versions of lakes or leakages from nearby rocks (Passive). If water is already present (aka Phase 2) before phase 1, the user can (passively) manipulate (either through mental command or directing it by using this katana) the presented water to link both parties of the shinobi(s). If its after the Phase 1, they can gain this ability but, they'll have to spend 1 of their battle Jutsu slots/moves. If phase 2 was successfully initiated, the user can also stream their chakra (+20 chakra max/B-rank limit) through the water into whomever is connected to their water-stream.
Notice: The water sources that are summoned would be fairly large in size (water ounces summoned would be able to fill up a standard sized pool). Phase 1, takes 2 of the user's turns for the underground's natural aquifers water to appear on the field and after 6 of the user's turns, the area will surrounded by water appearing as a crater lake, concluding the completion of the ability (Phase 1).
╳ The most potent form of abilities for this sword is that, whenever the user of the sword's blade makes contact with the opponent or an subject that is connected/touching to the opponent or if a water source, the user can draw -20 chakra from the subject with every contacted strike. This is a process known as "Kyokotsu-no jutsu".
Notice: The user can only Draw up to S-rank chakra (Max) per turn from the "Kyokotsu-no jutsu" ability. Notice: Once maximum chakra is drawn, the user can't use same ability until after 1 turn. Notice: Cannot use this ability if they used any-other abilities of Kyokotsu in the same turn, except the passive abilities.
Notice: This ability is active for 3 turns(aka Lock), whether used or not. Once Phase 1 is complete, then the user can fully use this ability without an active turn restriction limit(Lock).
Declined - did you read my post which is one above yours? No passive effects
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(Ration: Doragoni Chāpu)- Lightning Style: Dragoning Chirp Type: Offensive/ Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short-Mid Chakra: 30 (+10 per turn to sustain) Damage: 60 Description:The user starts by channeling his Ration chakra in one or both of his arm(s). Using shape manipulation, they can release the lightning chakra in the form of a claw that they can manipulate to stretch out on their arm to only equal 15 inches before full-release. While in this state, the initial standard form will appear as a clawed form of ration in their user's arms, in that state of a hardened crest that covers the user's arms. Whenever the user releases the Lightning Dragons, the ration chakra appearing as crests cracks as it vibrates at a high frequency, it creates a short loud strained-bird roar chirp-like sound. S/he can create up to 4, blue-lightning dragon creatures, which emanate at a different vibration then a regular Lightning jutsu. This different vibration of lightning chakra will have a spring coil likeness to it. These dragons are each 3 feet in length and 2 feet in diameter thickness (when 4 have been released, but as one, x4 each width & length). These dragons can chase up to 4 shinobi(s), as they'd split up the target(s) upon themselves. The spring like coil and hoping state of this lightning jutsu, gives the miniature-like dragons ability to outwit objects in the way as they head forward only. They behave much like pawns on a chess board, moving only forward and never backwards toward their enemy when released from the hands of the user. These Dragons once released, they will lock on and track the target, till they shock them, unless the target(s) manages to get passed them. With each dragon made reduces the power of the whole jutsu and ultimately ends it, 1 = A-rank, 3 = B-rank, 4 = C-rank, the user can also choose to release 1 = C-rank up to 4 in-total allowing them to sustain the jutsu, till the initial releases are equal to 4. Choosing to do so, they'll not be able to launch above C-rank types. Given that they don't kill on contact but, will rather shock the enemy also paralyze them. The user also can install the jutsu's launched dragons with kunai(s), shuriken(s) and similar weapon size-like entities launching them in unison.
Note: User can only sustain the jutsu, in the standard form for up to 3 turns.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle. Note: Once shocked paralyzation lasts 1 turn if successful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty.Note: This jutsu will only avoid preexisting obstacles in the way as they move onward. The user can command or let the jutsu decide the course of path only before launching (mentally). Note: User must be a Lightning Specialist to utilize this jutsu.
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(Ration: Kirin no Uchiha: iryūjonfurasshu) – Lightning Release: Uchiha Illusion: Flash of Kirin
Rank: F
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: N/a
After using a Katon Jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will perform the following handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Tiger while as they use Ration with their hand lifted toward the sky or so as, then they will surge enormous Ration chakra from their body through their body to take control of the lightning above. After at which they can then release a massive amount of lighting chakra, which they use to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all-over the heavens (designated area) in less than a blink of an eye at any moment. The momentous light would blind any enemy that sees it but, its main ability isn't only that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, only a Uchiha user could use it as a cover to put the enemies into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the opponent(s) from noticing the genjutsu placed. Keep in mind that this jutsu is powerful enough to bring visible light that will temporarily disorient an enemy's senses (Fyi, Lightning Flash is many times brighter than Sunlight).This jutsu will be able to pass through Doton jutsu up to B-rank, so they'll see it's flash, as a light that would shine through a paper-thin wall or a wall made of glass. Without causing any permanent injury by the flash produced momentarily. It will still activate all photoreceptor cells in the eyes, making vision impossible for approximately 1 turn for all opponents within the area, until their eye's restore itself to its normal, un-stimulated state. An afterimage will also be visible for a considerable time, impairing the victim's ability to aim with precision for 1 turn, after their vision restoration.
Note: Requires 3t Sharingan for Genjutsu casting.
Note: Can only be used once per Battle.
Note: Can only be used by Lightning Specialists.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to S-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Jutsu and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed.
declined - not only is this a copy in a sense of a cannon jutsu, it doesn't need to be F ranked, not only that the flash going through B rank earth doesn't even make sense? If they are in B rank dome of earth that is 4m thick, how can light shine through it. DNR
(Kuchiyose: Dentula)Summoning: Galvantula Type: Summoning Rank: S Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description:
Galvantula's body consists of a head and abdomen. Its head is yellow on top and light purple on the bottom. It has two large, blue, forward-facing eyes with black pupils, and four, smaller, simple eyes sitting in a 2x2 pattern on its forehead. It has two long pedipalps connected from the underside of its head, which are blue and hairless on their lower half and covered in thick yellow fur on the upper half. Galvantula's body is covered in yellow and light purple fur on top with blue fur under its abdomen. Four tufts of hair sprout from under its abdomen and grow upward. Two large tufts sprout from the left and right of the rear, while two smaller ones sprout from each side. The fur on its back is light purple and with three thick, yellow stripes running up from its rear. Galvantulas natural affinity is lighting and so it is able to use lighting techs up to A rank. Along with with this galvantula has a special ability. Using its spider silk galvantula can can send the silk though out the earth, up to mid range from her. She then electrifies the spider silk. This stops either person from using any earth techs B rank and below. This ability is B rank in power. During this time she has to actively concentrate on the silk and can't perform any other jutsu.
-Stays on the field for four turns
-Electric web can only be used once.
-Electrifying the ground counts as a move.
Declined - just work on the effect a bit more. Does your summon spit out the web or spread from it's ass, does it jsut appear? just a bit of detail to give an idea
Merging the CWJ and the weapon together, removed two of the abilities, to make it smaller.
(Ekusukaribaa: Yakusokusareta Shōri no Ken) - Excalibur: Sword of Promised Victory Type: Weapon Rank: S-rank Range: Short Chakra: 40 Damage: N/A Description: Excalibur is a typical Western sword with a length of ninety centimeters and a width of twelve centimeters, and it has Fairy Letters inscribed on it to show that it is not the work of mankind.
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Excalibur's primary strength, as shown in the hands of Artoria, is its ability to store large amounts of chakra channelled into by its wielder. Utilizing this chakra, the user can lessen the chakra he uses from her own reserves in battle, allowing her to continue fighting for longer periods of time. Particularly, she stores fire natured chakra in Excalibur, and then channels wind chakra into it during a fight, combining these elements for a special form of chakra flow he calls the Wind of the Fire Sword (Hiken no Kaze).
Avalon: Subete Tōki Risōkyō | Avalon: The Everdistant Utopia - Avalon is the hallowed scabbard of Excalibur, the embodiment of the utopia Artoria seeks. It is a luxurious piece of equipment made of gold and decorated with blue enamel that seems more like a treasure to show dignity and nobility like a crown or staff than a weapon, it is a scabbard. The scabbard is quite special in the sense that it doesn't quite act as what a normal scabbard would, this one actually resides within Artoria's body and can be materialised with the use of her chakra. The holder of the scabbard is granted minor healing, allowing for only minor injuries such a minor burns, and surface wounds. Anything more severe then that it cannot heal. This small healing ability is done by residing within Artoria's and connecting with her chakra, leeching off her chakra in a manner of speaking and creating a small healing. Another ability this scabbard holds is a type of ultimate defence of sorts. The scabbard dissipates into countless tiny particles in the air and engulfs the user to become a "portable fortress" that shuts out all interference. This is done by placing Excalibur within the scabbard which releases chakra into the scabbard which causes the scabbard to create a type of barrier made out of chakra and the scabbard itself that protects the user from attacks from all angles, this in turn causes the user to lose access to Excalibur for the turn the defence is active. The barrier protects the user from A-rank and below techniques. The scabbard on its own is nothing more then a useless artifact, as the scabbard only reacts to either Excalibur or Artoria herself, if someone else tried to use it, it wouldn't react to them, it only reacts to Artoria's chakra. This technique is equal to that of a S-rank technique
- The minor healing ability can only be used four times per-match, and counts as a move.
- The ultimate defence can only be used thrice per-match, and can only defend up to S-rank techniques.
- The ultimate defence only stays active for the turn it is used on.
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Hiken no Kaze | Wind of the Fire Sword utilizes Excalibur ability to store chakra over long periods of time, and then combines this stored chakra with chakra. The user flows into the blade during the heat of battle. The user accumulates chakra of the fire nature inside of Excalibur, until the sword possesses a great enough reserve of that chakra, which is necessary for the technique to be used without exhausting the chakra supply. When the user flows her wind chakra into the blade, it works together with the stored chakra; first, flames erupt around it, and then the wind comes forth, taming the flames and condensing them against the blade like another layer of metal, just that this one displays a darkened version of Excalibur, with a spiral like pattern laid on the while blade. This has multiple effects: for one, the wind strengthens the fire, resulting in a super-heated blade which can easily meld rock and cauterize the wounds inflicted with it; it also dramatically increases the cutting potential of Excalibur, being able to slice though earthen based substances with ease, and metal based weapons, that hold no special abilities such as kunai, swords, and so forth. Due to this form, it always increases the damage output of any wind, or fire ninjutsu used by the user by +20, the only set back with this damage boost is that the techniques need to be released via the blade, the boost isn't counted if the techniques are released though any other means.This ability is equal to that of a S-rank technique. Wind of the Fire Sword transformation lasts a max of four turns. After that the sword reverts back to it's standard form, and will not be able to channel any more fire or wind chakra chakra into it for the rest of the match. Also the user will be unable to use any fire or wind techniques for one turn after the revert.
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Hiken no Kaze: Mōka Tsujikaze | Wind of the Fire Sword: Roaring Flame Whirlwind - It uses the fire chakra stored inside Excalibur to release a trail of flames around the blade, which then enhances with wind chakra for attacks. In its most basic form, the user just slashes in the direction of the desired target, resulting in the creation of intense flame waves that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. The user can also completely surround an area with the flames, forming something small like simple walls to trap enemies, or even a massive twister which draws opponents in with its winds to burn them to death; the user can also utilizes this ability defensively, engulfing the immediate area around themselves in such fire.
- This ability is equal to that of an A-rank technique.
- Wind of the Fire Sword: Roaring Flame Whirlwind ability may only be used twice per-match and is only usable while in the wind of the fire sword form.
- Has a long ranged reach.
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Notes:
- The storing of the fire chakra ability does not counts as a move. But if the users intends to do this, they must post this technique as a reference.
- Can only be used by a Artoria (Saber) bio.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
Pending - Need to confer with scorps weather the healing ability is allowed and it's limitations even with med training.
Declined Too much overal and too broad aspects that can't be overlooked. Med techniques have a thread of their own. Considering this heals you, it has med "shades". Still, its unapprovable either way.
-Removed healing ability.
-Removed/updated Wind of the Fire Sword: Roaring Flame Whirlwind ability.
(Ekusukaribaa: Yakusokusareta Shōri no Ken) - Excalibur: Sword of Promised Victory
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Excalibur is a typical Western sword with a length of ninety centimeters and a width of twelve centimeters, and it has Fairy Letters inscribed on it to show that it is not the work of mankind.
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Excalibur's primary strength, as shown in the hands of Artoria, is its ability to store large amounts of chakra channelled into by its wielder. Utilizing this chakra, the user can lessen the chakra he uses from her own reserves in battle, allowing her to continue fighting for longer periods of time. Particularly, she stores fire natured chakra in Excalibur, and then channels wind chakra into it during a fight, combining these elements for a special form of chakra flow he calls the Wind of the Fire Sword (Hiken no Kaze).
Avalon: Subete Tōki Risōkyō | Avalon: The Everdistant Utopia - Avalon is the hallowed scabbard of Excalibur, the embodiment of the utopia Artoria seeks. It is a luxurious piece of equipment made of gold and decorated with blue enamel that seems more like a treasure to show dignity and nobility like a crown or staff than a weapon, it is a scabbard. The scabbard is quite special in the sense that it doesn't quite act as what a normal scabbard would, this one actually resides within Artoria's body and can be materialised with the use of her chakra. The main ability this scabbard holds is a type of ultimate defence of sorts. The scabbard dissipates into countless tiny particles in the air and engulfs the user to become a "portable fortress" that shuts out all interference. This is done by placing Excalibur within the scabbard which releases chakra into the scabbard which causes the scabbard to create a type of barrier made out of chakra and the scabbard itself that protects the user from attacks from all angles, this in turn causes the user to lose access to Excalibur for the turn the defence is active. The barrier protects the user from A-rank and below techniques. The scabbard on its own is nothing more then a useless artifact, as the scabbard only reacts to either Excalibur or Artoria herself, if someone else tried to use it, it wouldn't react to them, it only reacts to Artoria's chakra. This technique is equal to that of a S-rank technique.
- The ultimate defence can only be used twice per-match, and can only defend up to S-rank techniques.
- The ultimate defence only stays active for the turn it is used on.
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Hiken no Kaze | Wind of the Fire Sword utilizes Excalibur ability to store chakra over long periods of time, and then combines this stored chakra with chakra. The user flows into the blade during the heat of battle. The user accumulates chakra of the fire nature inside of Excalibur, until the sword possesses a great enough reserve of that chakra, which is necessary for the technique to be used without exhausting the chakra supply. When the user flows her wind chakra into the blade, it works together with the stored chakra; first, flames erupt around it, and then the wind comes forth, taming the flames and condensing them against the blade like another layer of metal, just that this one displays a darkened version of Excalibur, with a spiral like pattern laid on the blade. This has multiple effects: for one, the wind strengthens the fire, resulting in a super-heated blade which can easily meld rock and cauterize the wounds inflicted with it; it also dramatically increases the cutting potential of Excalibur, being able to slice though earthen based substances with ease, and metal based weapons, that hold no special abilities such as kunai, swords, and so forth. Due to this form, it always increases the damage output of any wind, or fire ninjutsu used by the user by +20, the only set back with this damage boost is that the techniques need to be released via the blade, the boost isn't counted if the techniques are released though any other means.This ability is equal to that of a S-rank technique. Wind of the Fire Sword transformation lasts a max of four turns. After that the sword reverts back to it's standard form, and will not be able to channel any more fire or wind chakra chakra into it for the rest of the match. Also the user will be unable to use any fire or wind techniques for one turn after the revert.
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Hiken no Kaze: Ten o Bunkatsu Sutoraiku | Wind of the Fire Sword: Strike That Splits the Heavens - It uses the fire chakra stored inside Excalibur to release a trail of flames around the blade, which then enhances with wind chakra for attacks. In its most basic form, the user just slashes in the direction of the desired target, resulting in the creation of intense flame waves that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. The user can also completely surround an area with the flames, forming something small like simple walls to trap enemies, or even a massive twister which draws opponents in with its winds to burn them to death; the user can also utilizes this ability defensively, engulfing the immediate area around themselves in such fire.
- This ability is equal to that of an A-rank technique.
- Wind of the Fire Sword: Roaring Flame Whirlwind ability may only be used thrice per-match and is only usable while in the wind of the fire sword form.
- Has a long ranged reach.
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Notes:
- The storing of the fire chakra ability does not counts as a move. But if the users intends to do this, they must post this technique as a reference.
- Can only be used by a Artoria (Saber) bio.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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Declined - So first of all the scabard breaking down fo that defnese just wouldn't work in that way, not enough material to cover your entire body based off that size, but the reason i'm saying no is S rank defense with no drawbacks? Boosting fire and wind by +20 is a no, i stated this in my post starting this cycle. It's effects just aren't balanced, no chakra cost per jutsu? It needs work, toning down and don't make it so long >_< lol
(Kenjutsu to Taijutsu: Baito Doragon) - Sword & Body Arts: Bite of the Dragon Type: Offensive, Defensive Rank: A-rank Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 (-5 to finger) Description: Bite of the Dragon is both a defensive and offensive type technique that falls under both sword, and body arts. To pull off this move the user must have a good amount of strength, chakra, and precision as this technique is rather a quite complex move. Observing the target the user will match the exact breathing pattern of the foe and channel chakra to one of their dominant hand's fingers. Then as the foe strikes the user is able to catch and absorb the impact of the strike with the mid section of their finger. The user will then bring down the top half of their finger onto the target's weapon, causing the absorbed strike to semi-instantly be redirected as slashing damage back at the foe. Depending on how powerful the foe's strike was, this technique can possibly kill the foe. Notes:
- Can only be used three times per-match.
- Can only redirect sword damage up to A-rank (60 DMG)
- Cool down period of one turn before usage again.
- Non-elemental, and elemental attacks work, as long as they are from a bladed weapon, and of that of an A-rank and below.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
Declined - Needs a bit of work, limitations of how you can redirect.
(Kenjutsu to Taijutsu: Baito Doragon) - Sword & Body Arts: Bite of the Dragon Type: Offensive, Defensive Rank: A-rank Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 (-10 per finger used) Description: Bite of the Dragon is both a defensive and offensive type technique that falls under both sword, and body arts. To pull off this move the user must have a good amount of strength, chakra, and precision as this technique is rather a quite complex move. Observing the target the user will match the exact breathing pattern of the foe and channel chakra to one of their dominant hand's fingers. Then as the foe strikes the user is able to catch and absorb the impact of the strike with the mid section of their finger (the users hand is largely reinforced with chakra to be able to catch the damage, with minimal amount of damage). The user will then bring down the top half of their finger onto the target's weapon, causing the absorbed strike to semi-instantly be redirected as slashing damage back at the foe, the way that the user can redirect said blow is created by applying friction to the sides of the finger and the blade/hand. This technique can be used with all fingers on one hand at the same time thus drastically boosting the power that is redirected at the foe. It can also use this technique to block powerful taijutsu strikes. Notes:
- Can only be used four times per-match.
- Cool down period of one turn before usage again.
- Can only redirect sword/hand damage up to A-rank (60 DMG)
- Non-elemental, and elemental attacks work, as long as they are either from a bladed weapon, or from a fist of that of an A-rank and below.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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Declined - nice jutsu but use is a bit much, and i feel stopping the blade is fine even samurai stuff, but not elements.
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(Ototon: Kodai Sorufējusukēru) - Sound Release: Ancient Solfeggio Scale Type: Supplementary Rank: A-Rank Range: Self - Short (Direct Contact) Chakra: 30 Damage: N/A Description: This technique is derived from "
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", which basically is: "Solfeggio frequencies make up the ancient 6-tone scale thought to have been used in sacred music, including the beautiful and well known Gregorian Chants. The chants and their special tones were believed to impart spiritual blessings when sung in harmony. Each Solfeggio tone is comprised of a frequency required to balance your energy and keep your body, mind and spirit in perfect harmony." To start the use of this technique, the user gathers up a large amount of sound chakra that can either be released, or used in two options. The user then either starts to vibrate the chakra, either within their own body, or the body of their intended target Using their chakra, the user is able to manipulate and alternate between specific frequencies the chakra vibrates at, resulting in various beneficial effects on the receiving party. The available frequencies, and the effects generated by them, are as follows;
174 Hz - "Do" (Pain Relief) - The lowest of the Solfeggio Scale, this frequency uses the slow and calming vibrations to act as a sort of anaesthetic, relieving the affected of pain and trauma. While under the effects of "Do", the user/ target is more tolerant of any form of pain, lending them a brief respite from the burden of physical damage. The target is unaware of their body's own pain for 2 turns. 285 Hz - "Io" (Healing (Increased Efficiency) - The "Io" frequency is perhaps one of the most beneficial forms on the Solfeggio Scale, as its soothing waves help to repair or "return" the body to its natural state. In other words "Io" helps the repair of damage done to it's target, allowing them to be healed faster and more effectively by Medical Shinobi. Any Medical Jutsu performed on a target under the effects of the "Io" frequency cost 50% less Chakra, which last for a max of 3 turns and expire when a Medical Jutsu is performed on the user. 396 Hz - "Ut" (Killing Intent Resistance) - "Ut" is a rather unique frequency, as it grants its target a feeling of liberation from negative feelings, such as guilt, fear or anger. Through this liberation the user is granted a high level of mental clarity, the likes of which may seem alien to them. Thanks to the relief of the burden of negative emotions, a beneficiary of the "Ut" frequency will be less susceptible to techniques that prey on such emotions. This makes the user one level more resistant to the "Killing Intent" Jutsu for 2 turns. 417 Hz - "Re" (Added Buff Over Time) - One of the more "neutral" tones from the Solfeggio Scale, "Re" produces additional energy to the user upon receiving medical treatment. When a target of "Re" recovers Health from the effects of Medical Ninjutsu, the vibrations contribute to their recovery, granting the user an additional 100 chakra on top of the base Medical Ninjutsu. This chakra is recovered at 25 chakra per turn, over the course of 4 turns. 741hz - "Sol" (Slowed Poisoning) - It cleans the cell (“Solve polluti“) from the toxins. Frequent use of 741 Hz leads to a healthier, simpler life, and also to changes in diet towards foods which are not poisoned by various kinds of toxins. Tone ‘Sol’ cleans the cell from different kinds of electromagnetic radiations. Another application of this sound frequency is solving problems of any nature. This frequency of the Solfeggio scale will also lead you into the power of self-expression, which results in a pure and stable life. If the user is poisoned the poison is slower acting then it would usual be, lasts for two turns. 852hz - "La" (Genjutsu Resistance) - Tone ‘La’ is linked to your ability to see through the illusions of your life, such as hidden agendas of people, places and things. This frequency can be used as means for opening a person up for communication with the all-embracing Spirit. It raises awareness and lets you return to spiritual order. Regarding cellular processes, 852 Hz enables the cell to transform itself into a system of higher level. This creates a situation for the user to become more aware of genjutsu being used on them, and with that allows the user to see though low level genjutsu much easier (B-rank and below), lasts for two turns. Notes:
- Only one effect can be used per-usage.
- Each effect can only be used once per-match/twice per-NW event.
- Cooldown of two turns before re-use.
- Not a medical ninjutsu technique, this is rather a technique that enhances the use of medical ninjutsu though the use of specific frequencies.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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Declined - i feel this clashes with Roku's Melody arts.
(Fuuinjutsu: Goshiki no Shōheki) - Sealing Arts: Five-Colored Barriers Type: Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short-Long (depends on the range of the barrier) Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: The user will perform the Dragon handseal during the creation of a barrier technique, allowing them to induce a layer of Elemental Chakra to the barrier directly proportional to the rank of this jutsu. The user can choose one of the five Nature Elements at a time, with each Nature Element granting an additional property, either offensive or defensive, to the barrier depending on the Nature Element. Fire Releases increases the barrier's offensive capabilities through increasing its heat and allowing it to burn those who make contact with it. Earth Release increases the barrier's defensive capabilities through reinforcing it, due to the Earth's sturdy nature. Water Release increases the barrier's defensive capabilities by inducing malleability to it due to water's freeflowing nature; as an attack or object of inferior rank strikes the barrier, its shape and form distorts as though made of rubber, before snapping back into place and reversing the trajectory of the attack. Lightning Release grants the barrier electrical properties, allowing it to shock and paralyze those that come in contact with the barrier. Wind Release grants the only supplementary usage of the technique, allowing the user to move the barrier across the terrain after its initial creation due to Wind's nature to easily transverse
Note: Can only be taught by Joker
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Technique lasts as long as the barrier it is induced into lasts
Declined - place this on an S rank barrier and from the wording of it, you add an S rank layer to it. So if you had a barrier up, and someone went to destroy it with S rank wind, your barrier now S rank. You then use this jutsu, choose fire and add an addition S rank fire porperty to it for someone to break through. From the wording that's the impression i get. Make it only useable on A ranks and below and it give +1 rank to that barrier with the element methods you described above. No fuuin for two turns after too as this is quite the powerful technique. And while this is active it takes up one of your moves per turn.
(Kōton: Hoshikuzu no ame) - Steel Release: Stardust rain Type: Offensive Rank:S-Rank Range: Short-long Range Chakra: 40 Chakra Damage: 80 Damage Description: The user will release steel chakra into the sky above and after performing the bird handseal, the released steel chakra will be condensed into a huge cloud of small spiked steel balls which will rain down on the whole battle field for four turns. The stardust will rain randomly on the terrain which means it can harm enemies, allies and the user unless protected by suitable defense. The momentum gained by falling allows the stardust to penetrate through solid structures equivalent to C-ranked steel jutsu (w/s applied). On each area of five meters radius (short range) three dozens of spiked balls will fall per turn.
note: can only be used once per battle.
note: only Beifong can teach this jutsu
made it four turns and changed it to S rank.. I think the jutsu is better as S-ranked as it's extremely powerful one
Declined - After thinking about it, i don't want this to be a lasting jutsu. Make it so it rains down for one turn, it can stay as S rank, covers up to Mid range if you want and name how many balls their are, more the balls the weaker they are
(Kōton: Hoshikuzu no ame) - Steel Release: Stardust rain Type: Offensive Rank:S-Rank Range: Short-long Range Chakra: 40 Chakra Damage: 80 Damage Description: The user will release steel chakra into the sky above and after performing the bird handseal, the released steel chakra will be condensed into a huge cloud of small spiked steel balls which will rain down on the whole battle field for one turn. The stardust will rain randomly on the terrain which means it can harm enemies, allies and the user unless protected by suitable defense. The momentum gained by falling allows the stardust to penetrate through solid structures equivalent to B-ranked steel jutsu (w/s applied). On each area of five meters radius (short range) 10 spiked balls will fall per usage.
note: can only be used once per battle.
note: only Beifong can teach this jutsu
Made it last for one turn, lowered the amount falling on mentioned area to 10 b-ranked balls
Approved - you could make a cj that is like steel palets that fall, each is E rank like hail hitting, can be used as a steel source ect, just an idea to throw out there xd
(Fuuinjutsu - Shiketsu no Rikudo) Sealing technique - Six paths of Hemostasis Type: Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short Chakra Cost: 30 Damage points: N/A Description: A unique sealing jutsu designed with the sole intent of sealing the natural flow of chakra through a persons body temporarily. The technique is applied to any weapon the user happens to be wielding at the time. Covering the weapon in visible sealing script that differs from traditional sealing scripts in color. Being a dark crimson almost black still but more red. This script can also be applied to the opponent via direct touch, cutting out the middleman so to speak. When applied this technique directly targets the chakra flow of the opponent. Causing it to move much slower throughout the body in a similar way to hemostasis in medical fields. Hence the name of the technique. By causing the opponents chakra to move throughout the body slower it can create clots of sorts around the tenketsu. Not only does this cause the afflicted person to take longer to mold chakra it can also prevent them from using certain powerful jutsu over time as the chakra flows slower over time. Provided the seal remains. Overall the affects of this jutsu effectively doubles all the handseals required for techniques. A technique that requires one handseal would now require two. Two handseals, four would be required. Additionally the afflicted will find themselves requiring a singular handseal for techniques that usually require none. This is applicable the moment the seal is applied.
In terms of limiting the usage of powerful ninjutsu. The moment this seal is applied the afflicted loses access to techniques of a forbidden ranked nature. The afflicted then lose access to S ranks on their next turn, then each one of the afflicted subsequent turns they lose access of an additional rank this effect stops at rank C. The afflicted would always be able to access C ranks and below. The clotting of the Tenketsu causes chakra to leak from the afflicted body, causing them to lose 20 chakra each one of their turns by default before using any jutsu. In a similar way to how the Hyuuga expel chakra forcefully the clotting causes this without the afflicted intending it, thusly the chakra is wasted.
~Notes~
- This seal lasts for eight turns, at which stage the afflicted regains usage of up to A ranks however the clots of chakra prevent access to enough chakra for higher ranks.
-This seal can be removed prematurely by one skilled in fuuinjutsu, while it's rank is powerful it's design is simple. Being removable with the basic sealing release technique taught canonically.
- Can be used 2X per battle
- Must be taught by ReXii
✦ Declined, while Im not exactly sure if something similar to this has been done with Fuuinjutsu ( sealing the target's ability to use high ranking chakra over a set amount of turns ), I can confirm that I dont remember seeing a fuuinjutsu that altered chakra control to the point that it requires doubled seals, so that part is valid. Lasting 8 turns is way too much for an A rank though, something I cant approve. Also, you mention the seal can be removed prematurely, but dont state how. If this is applied by hand or weapon and the sealing script itself appears, then the seal would be on the body, and not like a paper seal, making removing it difficult. ✦
(Taijutsu - Sekai no omo-sa) Taijutsu - Weight of the world Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Short Chakra Cost: 40 Damage points: 80 Description: A unique taijutsu striking combination used in quick succession. From a grounded position the user will spread his legs slightly lowering his center of gravity in almost a very loose horse stance. From here they will deliver a single straight punch to the opponents upper rib cage immediately swinging there other arm as the first strikes, repeating this process to land a total of eight punches in a split second. While not that damaging the attacks serve to soften up the opponents rib cage creating a slight separation in the middle of them. This is where the final strike comes in to play. The user thrusts his hand forwards between the ribs targeting the sternum directly the hand is thrust using the fingertips with deceptive power. Should the attack strike the sternum it is aimed to flatten the sternal angle to achieve a similar effect to damaging the throat, the opponents blood circulation and breathing will suffer. Causing him to lose -10 speed levels. While the attack is typically non fatal it's unlikely many could fight in this condition and should they over exert themselves with excessive movements they would certainly run out of oxygen and collapse.
~Notes~
-Should this attack land successfully the afflicted may not move more than 5 meters per turn by moving directly with their own body.
-This attack also prevents the opponent from using any body flicker or variants of such.
-The initial eight hits have a stunning effect, should all eight hits land cleanly the ninth is almost completely unavoidable.
- Can be used 1X per battle
- Must be taught by ReXii
✦ Declined, the colored is too much, stating that it all happens within a split second makes this near uncounterable by it's wording. The part about losing 10 speed levels should be removed as well, no references to the speed chart are allowed. I'd suggest a more RP friendly decrease of, say, 30%, and this needs a set time limit on how long it lasts, like 3 or 4 turns. I cant allow the limiting of a foe for the rest of the fight with this. The 3rd note should be edited as well, no references to unavoidable jutsu. ✦
(Hiraishin - Rasen Senkō Chō Rinbukō Sanshiki) Flying Thunder God - Spiralling Flash Super Round Dance Howl Style Three Type: Offensive/Supplementary Rank: S Range: Short - Mid Chakra Cost: 40 Damage points: 80 Description: This technique was devised by Minato Namikaze and employs the use of his Flying Thunder God Technique. Minato throws six Flying Thunder God Kunai all around the enemy, and teleports to them. It is a technique developed to create an opening for an attack.The technique can also be used with the help of a shadow clone, though this is not a compulsory component of the technique's execution. Minato can teleport to each of these six kunai once during this technique and in any order he chooses. But may only teleport to each one, once. This allows him to catch his opponent off guard quickly and efficiently. Once an opening presents itself Minato will dash forwards using his unique body flicker and attack by slamming a twin rasengan in to the opponent. ~Notes~
- The kunai must be scattered all around the opponent, each one can only be a maximum of five meters away from him and together they all form a circle.
-If used with shadow clones active Minato can choose to have them teleport between kunai's alongside him to further confuse the enemy, each shadow clone who makes it to the initial charge phase also may attack with the twin rasengan's multiplying it's damage, but also it's move slot cost. So that two clones plus Minato using this at the same time would cost all three of the users moves in his turn.
- Can be used 1X per battle
- Must be taught by ReXii
‡ All Pending ‡ Leaving for Madara
✦ Declined, the only issue I had with this is the use of shadow clones and how they can be used between kunai's. It becomes too exploitable that way. I'm fine with this being used by just the user or by a clone, but not altogether. I actually like this one lol ✦
( Taijutsu: Koushoku Senkou Sora Sumasshu ) - Taijutsu: Yellow Flash Sky Shatter Type: Offensive/Defensive Rank: A-Rank Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: Minato Namikaze using his incredible speed and reflexes, is able to intercept a taijutsu attack aimed for the upper body, he pushes his body weight using both hands on the attacking limb, launching himself skywards whilst pushing his opponent down. Similar to the intersection method however both hands are above the limb so it does not behave as a pincer, more of a lever.
Once airborne he twists his body rolling over and performing a descending sky kick similar to the type used by Hashirama Senju and Tsunade Senju, lacking a large degree of the force, the speed factor more than makes up for the lack of power. However it can not cause large scale destruction, in terms of damage it behaves in a similar fashion to the kick used by Rock Lee against Gaara in part one, causing a mild aftershock effect. Notes:
*Can only be used by Minato Namikaze biographies.*
*May only be used four times*
*Only usable by ReXii*
Declined - i can do this with basic taijjutsu (thrusting palm and a kick) also why would it need to be minato? Any fast bio could do this such as an uchiha O_<
(Taijutsu - Sekai no omo-sa) Taijutsu - Weight of the world Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Short Chakra Cost: 40 Damage points: 80 Description: A unique taijutsu striking combination used in quick succession. From a grounded position the user will spread his legs slightly lowering his center of gravity in almost a very loose horse stance. From here they will deliver a single straight punch to the opponents upper rib cage and almost immediately they would be swinging their other arm as the first strikes, repeating this process to land a total of eight punches with incredible speed. While not that damaging the attacks serve to soften up the opponents rib cage creating a slight separation in the middle of them. This is where the final strike comes in to play. The user thrusts his hand forwards between the ribs targeting the sternum directly the hand is thrust using the fingertips with deceptive power. Should the attack strike the sternum it is aimed to flatten the sternal angle to achieve a similar effect to damaging the throat, the opponents blood circulation and breathing will suffer. Causing him to lose 40% of their speed. While the attack is typically non fatal it's unlikely many could fight in this condition and should they over exert themselves with excessive movements they would certainly run out of oxygen and collapse.
~Notes~
-Should this attack land successfully the afflicted may not move more than 5 meters per turn by moving directly with their own body.
-This attack also prevents the opponent from using any body flicker or variants of such.
-The initial eight hits have a stunning effect, should all eight hits land cleanly the ninth is almost completely unavoidable.
-Should the final strike land the speed debuff remains active for four turns.
- Can be used 1X per battle
- Must be taught by ReXii
Declined - incredicble speed? Give a time like 2-3 second, 40% is too much. remove second part of the 3rd note. reduce to 3 turns
(Hiraishin - Rasen Senkō Chō Rinbukō Sanshiki) Flying Thunder God - Spiralling Flash Super Round Dance Howl Style Three Type: Offensive/Supplementary Rank: S Range: Short - Mid Chakra Cost: 40 Damage points: 80 Description: This technique was devised by Minato Namikaze and employs the use of his Flying Thunder God Technique. Minato throws six Flying Thunder God Kunai all around the enemy, and teleports to them. It is a technique developed to create an opening for an attack.The technique can also be used with the help of a shadow clone, though this is not a compulsory component of the technique's execution. Minato can teleport to each of these six kunai once during this technique and in any order he chooses. But may only teleport to each one, once. This allows him to catch his opponent off guard quickly and efficiently. Once an opening presents itself Minato will dash forwards using his unique body flicker and attack by slamming a twin rasengan in to the opponent. ~Notes~
- The kunai must be scattered all around the opponent, each one can only be a maximum of five meters away from him and together they all form a circle.
-If used with shadow clones active Minato can choose to have them teleport between kunai's alongside him to further confuse the enemy, each shadow clone who makes it to the initial charge phase also may attack with the twin rasengan's multiplying it's damage, but also it's move slot cost. So that two clones plus Minato using this at the same time would cost all three of the users moves in his turn. -However the clones can only directly follow Minato when he teleports, meaning they must appear at the same kunai he is teleporting to.
- Can be used 1X per battle
- Must be taught by ReXii
Declined - change it from used with a clone to clones can use i but only one user. So like only minato himself or only the clone can teleport around for this effect
Name: (Rudoga) Ludger
Rank:S
Type: Human Puppet
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Ludger is a fairly tall human puppet of Sasori’s collection. Being one of Sasori’s newest editions of Human puppets, Ludger was equipped with several mechanisms and modifications to make it unique from any other puppet. Ludger was most famed for his special kekkei genkai, known as steel release. Along with the usage of the steel kekkei genkai, Ludger also possessed the ability to use all 5 basic natures. Ludger’s entire body is covered with steel plates which offer extra defense and, supplementary usages for his steel release technique. Due to the toughness of the steel plates he was covered in the puppet was capable of surviving taijutsu based attacks A-Rank and below. Another modification of this puppet is that it has large wings made of metal plates.These wings would be capable of offering offensive support or defensive support from behind. Each wing both had the property of an A-Rank technique. Weapon wise, the puppet has holes in its palm just like Sasori which can be used to fire out chakra waves, due to it being a human puppet, and capable of forming chakra. Along with it being able to fire out chakra waves it was also capable of launching itself forward in a linear/upward pattern with the added holes which were placed on its feet, allowing for it to travel long distances by blasting chakra through the holes in its feet. Inside of the puppet would be thin metal wires of varying lengths and diameter. Additionally, the human puppet is capable of firing out steel bullets and plates from in front of its body. Also there would be a hole in the middle of puppet’s chest allowing for Sasori to quickly switch into the puppet’s body. Its right hand would also be capable of launching off like a grappling hook allowing for it to drag around for long distance, along with that it could pull the puppet in the desired location. Lastly, another ability of the puppet was the heat generator within the puppet which allowed for the puppet to be heated to extreme temperatures. Ludger uses that form in order to power up his attacks, but it also has its drawbacks.
Notes:
-Can only be used by Sasori
-Can use all basic puppetry attacks.
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Declined - From now i want each of your human puppets to have a maximum of two on the field per turn as a note. Note only that but tone down what ive done in blue and say can only use jutsu of S rank and below. The winds can't be used to fly, stuff like chakra jets make a separate jutsu ect...
( I plan on making a separate jutsu for the puppet abilities like you said which is why I didn't go into detail/and removed some stuff)
Name: (Rudoga) Ludger
Rank:S
Type: Human Puppet
Range:Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Ludger is a fairly tall human puppet of Sasori’s collection. Being one of Sasori’s newest editions of Human puppets, Ludger was equipped with several mechanisms and modifications to make it unique from any other puppet. Ludger was most famed for his special kekkei genkai, known as steel release. Along with the usage of the steel kekkei genkai, Ludger also possessed the ability to use all 5 basic natures. Ludger’s entire body is covered with steel plates which offer extra defense and, supplementary usages for his steel release technique. Another modification of this puppet is that it has large wings made of metal plates.These wings would be capable of offering offensive support or defensive support from behind. Each wing both had the property of an B-Rank technique. Weapon wise, the puppet has holes in its palm just like Sasori which can be used to fire out chakra waves, due to it being a human puppet, and capable of forming chakra. Along with it being able to fire out chakra waves it was also capable of launching itself forward in a linear/upward pattern with the added holes which were placed on its feet, allowing for it to travel long distances by blasting chakra through the holes in its feet. Also there would be a hole in the middle of puppet’s chest allowing for Sasori to quickly switch into the puppet’s body. Its right hand would also be capable of launching off like a grappling hook allowing for it to drag around for long distance, along with that it could pull the puppet in the desired location. Lastly, another ability of the puppet was the heat generator (separate jutsu)within the puppet which allowed for the puppet to be heated to extreme temperatures. Ludger uses that form in order to power up his attacks, but it also has its drawbacks.
Notes:
-Can only be used by Sasori
-Can use all basic puppetry attacks. -Can only use attacks up to S-rank - Can only be two human puppets on field at a time.
-Grappling hook counts as a move.
-Wings cant be used to fly.
- Chakra waves and Chakra jets is a separate jutsu and are B ranks
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*Removed immunity to taijutsu ability* *Removed steel bullets ability* *Removed metal wires attack*
Name of Puppet: (Ani) Annie
Rank: S
Type: Human Puppet
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a human puppet Sasori acquired when on his hunt for special kekkei genkai. It may have taken a long time to finally find a worthy specimen for his collection, but he had finally done it. Annie is capable of using all five basic elements as well as using the special kekkei genkai known as Storm release. Annie has had a lot of modifications done to her body in order to transform her into a more powerful form than when she was once alive. The first major modification of the puppet is that she no longer stands on two legs, but instead has a pair of arms spreading out of her abdomen which allow for her to place her body on the ground on all Six. When in this state it is similar to how the salamander puppet stands. Her four arms are all capable of being protracted into long distances. On the puppet’s front arms are tags which are used to release puppet arms which the user will launch at the target. The puppet’s front arms are also capable of launching off like a grappling hook and attach itself to whatever it grabs hold of. There are holes placed on the puppet’s hand enabling it the ability to emit streams of storm release. Its mouth is capable of opening to generate chakra from within its mouth to unleash a blast of chakra. Annie is also capable burying herself underground up to long range. One ability of this puppet is that it is capable of utilizing its storm release ability to cover its body inside of a thick dark thundercloud with electricity running through it, which serves two purposes which are to attack the enemy or provide cover. In the middle of the puppet’s chest is a hole for Sasori heart compartment where he can change into the puppet quickly.
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Notes: Can only be used by Sasori
Notes: Grappling hook count as a move
Notes: Can use all basic puppetry techniques.
*Removed Poisonous gas technique* (Removed some of the puppet's abilities because I intend on making a separate jutsu for them like the above one. Just listed what the puppets are capable of doing.)
Declined - first see my note on the above jutsu. CHakra blasts make separate jutsu, and shooting out puppet arsm counts as jutsu and is C rank or something
Name of Puppet: (Ani) Annie
Rank: S
Type: Human Puppet
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a human puppet Sasori acquired when on his hunt for special kekkei genkai. It may have taken a long time to finally find a worthy specimen for his collection, but he had finally done it. Annie is capable of using all five basic elements as well as using the special kekkei genkai known as Storm release. Annie has had a lot of modifications done to her body in order to transform her into a more powerful form than when she was once alive. The first major modification of the puppet is that she no longer stands on two legs, but instead has a pair of arms spreading out of her abdomen which allow for her to place her body on the ground on all Six. When in this state it is similar to how the salamander puppet stands. Her four arms are all capable of being protracted into long distances. On the puppet’s front arms are tags which are used to release puppet arms which the user will launch at the target And are equal to a C-rank technique. The puppet’s front arms are also capable of launching off like a grappling hook and attach itself to whatever it grabs hold of. There are holes placed on the puppet’s hand enabling it the ability to emit streams of storm release. Its mouth is capable of opening to generate chakra from within its mouth to unleash a blast of chakra.Annie is also capable burying herself underground up to long range. One ability of this puppet is that it is capable of utilizing its storm release ability to cover its body inside of a thick dark thundercloud with electricity running through it, which serves two purposes which are to attack the enemy or provide cover. In the middle of the puppet’s chest is a hole for Sasori heart compartment where he can change into the puppet quickly.
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Notes: Grappling hook count as a move
Notes: Can use all basic puppetry techniques. Notes: Can only be two human puppets on field at a time.
Notes: Can only use attacks up to S-rank.
Notes: Chakra blast is a separate jutsu.
Note: Emitting streams of storm release is separate jutsu.
Note: Storm cloud is separate jutsu
Note: Puppet tags counts as a jutsu *Removed Poisonous gas technique*
(Removed some of the puppet's abilities because I intend on making a separate jutsu for them like the above one. Just listed what the puppets are capable of doing.)
Declined - rank and chakra cost for abilities like storm cloud?
Name: (Chakura-ito kenshutsu) Chakra Thread Detection
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15 (-5 for each turn active)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will first place their hands just inches above the ground, and begin to generate chakra threads in their fingertips. Once they have gathered enough chakra in their fingertips they will then release several chakra threads throughout the area. The user will act as the epicenter of the jutsu, and the chakra threads will continuously branch off of each other. The chakra threads are nearly invisible to the naked eye, but when reflected against a light source it could be seen as a glimmer of blue light. With the chakra threads spread throughout the area it’s like a large circular spider web spread throughout the ground all which come from the user at the center. The main ability of the chakra threads is to track enemies, for example once the enemy has crossed one of threads the user will be notified of their location.
-Lasts 3 turns
-Can be used every two turns.
- Can only be taught by Sasori
Declined - although it's a nice method of senseing it's been done before without being a puppet user.
resubmitting, because it needed to be stronger, since she is so badass. and added some restrictions.
(Senpo: Dantō) – Sage Art: Warhead
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A powerful technique revolving around gathering an immense amount of natural energy around your body, which is used to generate a forward propulsion as well as blunt force, so to create the feel of being hit by a mountain, when the user dashes at intense speed at their enemy with natural energy emanating as a yellow glowing form around him. When the user reaches the target he literally dashes in to them with his entire body, tanking them so to speak, with such enormous force that they would be blown back with intense speed. The natural energy flowing around the user is used as a form of blunt force, but can also be used during the offensive to defend the user from elemental techniques, due to the large amount of natural energy and force behind the technique.
Note:
- Must be in Sage Mode to use
- Can only be performed trice per battle
- Reduces Sage Mode by one turn per use
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Declined - you changed the rank but no the chakra cost. You also need to make the ability where she goes super nuke at the end xd
Resubmitting if you feel its unfinished or something just say so, dont want a sage mode cj thats not good enough for the Pervy Sage xd
(Senpo: Dantō) – Sage Art: Warhead
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A powerful technique revolving around gathering an immense amount of natural energy around your body, which is used to generate a forward propulsion as well as blunt force, so to create the feel of being hit by a mountain, when the user dashes at intense speed at their enemy with natural energy emanating as a yellow glowing form around him. When the user reaches the target he literally dashes in to them with his entire body, tanking them so to speak, with such enormous force that they would be blown back with intense speed. The natural energy flowing around the user is used as a form of blunt force, but can also be used during the offensive to defend the user from elemental techniques, due to the large amount of natural energy and force behind the technique. When the user hits the target the natural energy will converge and cause an outwards explosion from the users body, harming anyone within its vicinity, which spans into mid-range from the user.
Note:
- Must be in Sage Mode to use
- Can only be performed twice per battle
- Reduces Sage Mode by one turn per use
Approved - changed it to twice
New submission pls read it through xd
(Senpo: Agamotto, Hoggoth & Osthur) Sage Art: Agamotto, Hoggoth & Osthur Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Short - Long Chakra cost: 40 Damage points: 80 Description: A powerful technique which requires the user to be in the possession of three amulets from Mount Myoboku. These green amulets which the user will be carrying around with them at all times are used to perform a summoning technique. This technique allows the user to summon three former masters of Sage Art to his side in the form of the fighting style which these three masters utilized themselves, meaning if said master was a master of the Kung Fu Tiger Stance, he would be summoned to resemble that of a tiger. In this case the three masters that can be summoned through this style are Agamotto, Hoggoth and Osthur. These three masters can be summoned separately or together with the green amulet. When the three masters are summoned, their body is a form of earthen material with a powerful green hue and aura emanating from their bodies as their bodies is rich on natural energy. It is important to understand that these three masters are not animals but they are so to say sentient beings that are depicted as the animals said below.
The first master that one can summon is Agamotto, he is a former user of the sage arts and a master of a style known as the Porcupine. He was known to utilize archery combined with martial arts. As such when he is summoned he is summoned in the form of a porcupine half the size of a normal human. He is completely green, almost resembling the jade color, while having many quills on his back which he can pull off and shoot with his bow at his target. He is also a very powerful martial artist and a master of natural energy, which is shown when he is summoned already in a state where his body flows with natural energy. This means he is incredible agile as well as fast and has heightened reflexes, due to him being in the heightened state with natural energy, due to his body being enhanced by natural energy. He is capable of using Taijutsu up to A-rank as well as Sage Art techniques which are hand to hand combat based, such as the Frog Kata. His arrows that he shoots with the bow, are also enhanced with natural energy as they are the quills on his back, meaning they are inheritantly stronger than the average kunai, shuriken etc. piercing through the air with grace and power. Master Agamotto has a unique technique known as the Storm of Green Shards. This is where he uses his extreme reflexes and speed to enhance his quills with natural energy and using it to blast them off his back at extreme speed and with such piercing force that it will with its enhanced power and intense speed slice and shoot through trees, rocks, earth and even some metals. When the technique is used, it is seen that it is faster and more lethal than Jiraiya’s Hair Needle technique enhanced with natural energy which he used against Pein at point blank range. The quills on his back will be replaced by new ones which grow out when he shoots them off his back. When he is summoned he is a form of sentient being which does not require the user to control him, rather he acts on his own accord and with the natural energy flowing through his body, he has the inherited sensory ability allowed by the natural energy.
Hoggoth & Osthur, also known as the badger twins. Two masters who grew up together, fighting side by side and mastering natural energy. Both being masters of sage art, taijutsu and weaponry, they are agile and physically strong compared to Agamotto. When summoned they resemble two identical badgers, wearing sashes, but just the same as Agamotto, when summoned their bodies are the same green as his, and they are slightly smaller than Agamotto. These so called badger twins are masters of natural energy which allows them to move at high speeds as well as their physical strength allowing them to wield their staffs in close combat. They are masters of taijutsu being able to perform A-rank and below techniques as well as Sage Art techniques that revolve around weapon or hand to hand based combat. They can also perform weapon based techniques of any kind, up to A-rank. The badger twins’ staffs are also enhanced with natural energy and made of the same green color, which makes them stronger than the average weapon, allowing them to smash through the weapons they collide with, and on occasion it has been seen that they have been able to smash through trees and rocks. The badgers possess a unique technique known as the Crushing Double Gong Technique, which is a synchronized double jump high into the air, and striking down on their target with their enhanced staffs together, delivering an extremely powerful blow which would be equal to that of a large house being dropped down upon a person, crushing them into the ground leaving the it cracked beneath the staffs and the target. As with Agamotto, the badger twins also have the inherited sensory ability allowed by the natural energy, as well as also being sentient beings acting on their own accord in battle. Note:
- This technique can only be performed once per battle.
- These three masters can be summoned all at once or the user can choose only to summon one of them.
- The Storm of Green Shards Technique is equal to that of an A-rank Sage Art technique, which Agamotto can perform trice per battle
- The Crushing Double Gong Technique performed by the Badger Twins are equal to that of an S-rank Taijutsu technique enhanced with natural energy, which they can perform twice per battle
- When one or all three of these masters are summoned, they remain on the field for 5 turns before the natural energy disperses from their bodies and they disappear.
- Their bodies are physically stronger than the normal human body due to them being made of some sort of rock like material with the green color emanating from their body, all three of them being able to withstand B-rank and below techniques
- The user must gather chakra for one full turn before being able to summon them, meaning just like Ma and Pa, and this technique requires a massive amount of chakra for the user to be able to summon them.
Declined - i did intent to read it all, but going into discription it just seems like sage mode rock clones with a glow, i was execting elf stones bro! But yet just from the abilities of the first first guy alone it's declined xd
(Senpo: Seishitsu Chōeki) Sage Art: Natures Imprisonment Type: Offensive Rank: A Range: Short - Mid Chakra cost: 30 Damage points: 60 Description: The user will cause natural energy to seep up from the ground all around the enemy eventually performing the Ram hand seal causing the natural energy to converge creating a dome all around the enemy which is a complete ball which also goes underground. After its creation the user will use yet another hand seal to cause the dome to compress into the size of a heart, causing anything inside the dome to be squashed into that same size. This dome can be created anywhere within mid-range also in mid-air or underground. Note:
- Can only be performed trice per battle
- Must be in Sage Mode to be able to use it
- Cuts Sage Mode by one turn
Declined - this is a nicer worded version of jakes sage crushing
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Ragnarok, also known as the Demon sword was confiscated by Priest when he fought kishin. It was perhaps not an easy feat, capturing the child of the Demon God and through years of training of the body and mind, Priest is able to wield the sword as if it were his own blood.
Raknarok has two forms which he uses in battle or outside battle and he is able to transform between forms at will and passively.
Sword Form
This forms lets Ragnarok take the form of a large black Scandinavian broadsword with a grey hilt, a white stripe down the middle and spikes around the guard. He would manifest a mouth on the blade just above the guard to speak or when he wants to perform SCREAM RESONANCE(Would be submitted as a separate jutsu).
Ragnarok passively curses himself in chakra while in this form thus able to cut through B-rank and below Jutsu. However, 4x per battle, the user can imbue more chakra to allow him to cut through upto S-rank jutsu.
Once per battle, Ragnarok is able to perform a feat which would afterwords make him revert to a weaker form for 3 turns. He is able to cut through a technique above S-rank. Though this would make him shrink to that of a longsword (or rapier) but retains many of its old features except it unable to cut through jutsus above B-rank for 3 turns.
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I hate the wording passively, and curses? That's not a thing in the rp, it's making something up, i know it's for an rp sense but leave the rp for the battle arena not cjs. Cutting through an S rank restrictions? And no to cutting through a forbidden rank. Humanoid Form
Ragnarok retreats into a symbiote, enveloping Priest like a costume. Though instead of acting as a custume, it moves around and converges at the back of Priest where he now morphs into a humanoid starting from the waist upwards. Him being a symbiote causes a special attachment to the host and the attachment intricately creates a symbiotic bond through which links His and Priest's mind though he is not sentient, he has a pseudo mind which is split from Priest, just like the rinnegan which is a single vision connected to other entity. This mind is where Priest pours his malice thus the rude and tyranical behavour of Ragnarok. Ragnarok has no free will of his own and he is partially controlled by Priest, The psuedo mind allows Ragnarok to do some minor freewill stuff like talk, laugh or move around Priest body, but when he is attacking or defending, he is totally controlled by Priest.Ragnarok is loud-mouthed, rude and confident. He believes he and his host are capable of overcoming any opponent, regardless of how good or bad they actually are at fighting. He is also very violent and easily angered.
In this form, Ragnarok has a very muscular body, large gloved hands, and spikes on several parts of his body, but no legs. His face consists of a large egg shape, with no visible mouth(though he talks and mouth appears whenever he wants it to) and a giant white X on his face where his nose should be, with large ping-pong ball-like eyes with Xs for pupils.
Ragnarock is strong, though still having the weight of a normal sword thus does not inhibit the user's speed.
As a symbiote, Ragnarok is able to move around the Host's body and reform into a humanoid on any part, or perhaps extend his skin around the Host to protect him. Ragnarok is strong and with the aim of aiding the user in close quarter combats, actively can punch through or stop with his fist(s), B-rank and below Attacks within reasoning. His skin is able to withstand B-rank and below attacks. However, 4x per battle, the user may imbue more chakra so that the skin is able to withstand up to S-rank.
Once per battle, Ragnarok is able to perform a feat which would then transform him to a weaker form for 3 turns. He is able tank a technique above S-rank. Though this would then make him shrink to that of a chibi version of his humanoid form but retains many of his old features except it unable to tank jutsus above B-rank for 3 turns.
I've been enlightened that this symbiot form exists as an approved CW, i'll find out who and edit this later but you need permission for that the blue, how can a none sentient weapon be loud mouthed?
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NOTE: Attacking and Defending with Ragnarok counts as a move.
NOTE: Any chakra spent on attacking and defending is leeched from the user and the chakra is deducted accordingly to the rank of the attack or defense in question.
NOTE: Attack and defense are on par with elemental techniques due to Ragnarok himself being a symbiote genetically engineered from advanced matter.
NOTE: Ragnarok's defense would be within reason, and although, he may defend himself fully, if the attack is a wide one that spread or flows like wide fire, the user can receive damage from the spills/overflow as Ragnarok may not fully protect the user.
NOTE: Ragnarok is indestructible, though he can receive damage which would turn him to a shrinked form for 3 turns as he recuperates. If he receives another damage while he's in the shrinked form, he'll be unusable totally for 3 turns, the time which he rejuvenates into the shrinked form and then another 3 turns to form back into the full form. NOTE: Ragnarok, is not sentient thus requires the wielder's control to attack and defend.
NOTE: Can only be weild by Priest or anyone he teaches, Any other who tries to weild him would be impaled by several 5m long spikes that can pierce through any amour.
Declined - just some of the reasons i highlighted above
Bakuhatsu Ryōhō - Explosion Therapy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: D-S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10-40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user makes use of a nearby explosion or explosive impact to his advantage. The user would use his chakra to instantly tame a destrutive explosion by wraping his chakra around while using the chakra to create a veil of elastic but translucent coat around it thus instead of the blunt force the explosion gives out, it causes a harmless bouncy effect. The user having trained himself with the bouncy effect make him the only person to be able to use the technique and still maintain his balance.Having used this technique, The explosion would now become something similar to a baloon, rubber net or trampoline and instead of damaging the intended target, it propels him to any direction the user wishes at double his running speed. The amount of chakra expended depends on the magnitude of the explosion. For freeform explosion caused by explosive tags, the user only needs to expends a D-rank chakra to tame them. While their are other greater explosion which includes elemental explosions, the user then expend chakra according to their magnitude and rank.
NOTE: A-rank and above usage can only be used 3x per battle
NOTE: A-rank and above usages requires a turn wait.
NOTE: No Ninjutsu above S-rank in the same turn.
Type: Weapon
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Ragnarok, also known as the Demon sword was confiscated by Priest when he fought kishin. It was perhaps not an easy feat, capturing the child of the Demon God and through years of training of the body and mind, Priest is able to wield the sword as if it were his own blood.
Raknarok has two forms which he uses in battle or outside battle and he is able to transform between forms at will and passively.
Sword Form
This forms lets Ragnarok take the form of a large black Scandinavian broadsword with a grey hilt, a white stripe down the middle and spikes around the guard. He would manifest a mouth on the blade just above the guard to speak or when he wants to perform SCREAM RESONANCE(Would be submitted as a separate jutsu).
Ragnarok would leech the user's chakra while in this form thus able to cut through B-rank and below Jutsu. However, 3x per battle, the user can imbue more chakra to allow him to cut through upto S-rank jutsu. Receiving damage would make him shrink to that of a longsword (or rapier) but retains many of its old features except it unable to cut through jutsus above B-rank for 3 turns.
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Humanoid Form
Ragnarok retreats into a symbiote, enveloping Priest like a costume. Though instead of acting as a custume, it moves around and converges at the back of Priest where he now morphs into a humanoid starting from the waist upwards. Him being a symbiote causes a special attachment to the host and the attachment intricately creates a symbiotic bond through which links His and Priest's mind though he is not sentient, he has a pseudo mind which is split from Priest, just like the rinnegan which is a single vision connected to other entity. This mind is where Priest pours his malice thus the rude and tyranical behavour of Ragnarok. Ragnarok has no free will of his own and he is partially controlled by Priest, The psuedo mind allows Ragnarok to do some minor freewill stuff like talk, laugh or move around Priest body, but when he is attacking or defending, he is totally controlled by Priest.
In this form, Ragnarok has a very muscular body, large gloved hands, and spikes on several parts of his body, but no legs. His face consists of a large egg shape, with no visible mouth(though he talks and mouth appears whenever he wants it to) and a giant white X on his face where his nose should be, with large ping-pong ball-like eyes with Xs for pupils.
Ragnarock is strong, though still having the weight of a normal sword thus does not inhibit the user's speed.
As a symbiote, Ragnarok is able to move around the Host's body and reform into a humanoid on any part, or perhaps extend his skin around the Host to protect him. Ragnarok is strong and with the aim of aiding the user in close quarter combats, actively can punch through or stop with his fist(s), B-rank and below Attacks within reasoning. His skin is able to withstand B-rank and below attacks. However, 3x per battle, the user may imbue more chakra so that the skin is able to withstand up to S-rank.
Once per battle, Ragnarok is able to perform a feat which would then transform him to a weaker form for 3 turns. He is able tank a technique above S-rank. Though this would then make him shrink to that of a chibi version of his humanoid form but retains many of his old features except it unable to tank jutsus above B-rank for 3 turns.
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NOTE: Attacking and Defending with Ragnarok counts as a move.
NOTE: Any chakra spent on attacking and defending is leeched from the user and the chakra is deducted accordingly to the rank of the attack or defense in question.
NOTE: Attack and defense are on par with elemental techniques due to Ragnarok himself being a symbiote genetically engineered from advanced matter.
NOTE: Ragnarok's defense would be within reason, and although, he may defend himself fully, if the attack is a wide one that spread or flows like wide fire, the user can receive damage from the spills/overflow as Ragnarok may not fully protect the user.
NOTE: Ragnarok is indestructible, though he can receive damage which would turn him to a shrinked form for 3 turns as he recuperates. If he receives another damage while he's in the shrinked form, he'll be unusable totally for 3 turns, the time which he rejuvenates into the shrinked form and then another 3 turns to form back into the full form.
NOTE: Ragnarok, is not sentient thus requires the wielder's control to attack and defend.
NOTE: Can only be weild by Priest or anyone he teaches, Any other who tries to weild him would be impaled by several 5m long spikes that can pierce through any amour.
Declined The first aspect of thw weapon exists already in countless fforms and ways. Its just a sword that zaps an unknown quantity of chakra and shrinks in sizen when it takes an undefined amount of damage and can cut for whatever reason other techniques. Done too many times before to be approved. The last part is overly complex and confusing and it doesn't actually explain what it is or does. You need to revamp this to be approvable. Completely.
Bakuhatsu Ryōhō - Explosion Therapy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40(20 for freeform explosives)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user makes use of a nearby explosion or explosive impact to his advantage. The user would use his chakra to instantly tame a destrutive explosion by wraping his chakra around while using the chakra to create a veil of elastic but translucent coat around it thus instead of the blunt force the explosion gives out, it causes a harmless bouncy effect. The user having trained himself with the bouncy effect make him the only person to be able to use the technique and still maintain his balance. Having used this technique, The explosion would now become something similar to a baloon, rubber net or trampoline and instead of damaging the intended target, it propels him to any direction the user wishes at double his running speed. The amount of chakra expended depends on the magnitude of the explosion. For freeform explosion caused by explosive tags, the user only needs to spend half the chakra to tame them. While there are other greater explosion which includes elemental explosions, the user then expend chakra according to their magnitude and rank.
NOTE: Usable 3x per battle
NOTE: Usable once every two turns.
NOTE: No Ninjutsu above S-rank in the same turn.
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oton: Shaolin Saka - Earth Release: Shaolin Soccer
Type: Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Point: 80
Description: The user after the tiger handseal and a stomp of his foot on the ground, channels his doton chakra into the ground short range of him making up to 3 big boulders (x2 size of a normal soccerball) rise from the ground shaped into soccer balls. The user while hardening his legs also using doton chakra, momentarily leaps into air and with swift continuous spinning movement, kicks each balls separately towards the opponent with extreme power at different angles(overall kicking takes 1sec and can be directed in any direction the user is facing). The rock balls proceeds towards the opponent at fast speed. However it can still be seen and tracked by normal eyes. its procession carries a force that rub itself against air resistance therefore making it to be coated in fire due to air friction as soon as they are kicked. due to the additional fire coating which requires no katon chakra, Ball can break through S-rank earth and A-rank if splitted into 2, can break B-rank earth if 3 balls were made. The user can use this alternatively. Instead of making three balls emerge from the ground, He can use his legs to kick back the opponent's earth or solid jutsu taking earth's strenght and weakness into consideration. Though he does not need to stomp his foot, however he would still make the tiger handseal, coat his leg in earth chakra and kick back the opponent's earth or solid jutsu of S-rank and below. Kicking it back also cause the solid object to rub against air pressure and be coated in fire giving a burning aftermath.
++Note++
-No Doton above S-rank in the same turn
-Usable only 3x per battle
-Added Fire doesn't grant advantage against Wind Release or any element that Fire is strong against.
-Requires one turn rest in between usage
Declined - You're adding another ability to this jutsu changing the way it works making it more efficient and increasing it's useage? Also, doesn't size come into it? S rank earth golem goes to punch you, just gonna kick that back? Work on that please.
Doton: Shaolin Saka - Earth Release: Shaolin Soccer
Type: Offense
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Point: 80
Description: The user after the tiger handseal and a stomp of his foot on the ground, channels his doton chakra into the ground short range of him making up to 3 big boulders (x2 size of a normal soccerball) rise from the ground shaped into soccer balls. The user while hardening his legs also using doton chakra, momentarily leaps into air and with swift continuous spinning movement, kicks each balls separately towards the opponent with extreme power at different angles(overall kicking takes 1sec and can be directed in any direction the user is facing). The rock balls proceeds towards the opponent at fast speed. However it can still be seen and tracked by normal eyes. its procession carries a force that rub itself against air resistance therefore making it to be coated in fire due to air friction as soon as they are kicked. due to the additional fire coating which requires no katon chakra, Ball can break through S-rank earth and A-rank if splitted into 2, can break B-rank earth if 3 balls were made.
The user can use this alternatively. Instead of making three balls emerge from the ground, He can use his legs to kick back the opponent's earth or solid jutsu taking earth's strenght and weakness into consideration. Though he does not need to stomp his foot, however he would still make the tiger handseal, coat his leg in earth chakra and kick back the opponent's earth or solid jutsu of S-rank and below. Kicking it back also cause the solid object to rub against air pressure and be coated in fire giving a burning aftermath. For earth jutus as large as Great Earth Golem, The user won't be able to kick it back due to its weight instead, the kick only destroy it.
++Note++
-No Doton above S-rank in the same turn
-Usable only 3x per battle
-Usable once every two turns
-Added Fire doesn't grant advantage against Wind Release or any element that Fire is strong against.
-Requires one turn rest in between usage
✦ All Pending, I'll have to clear my schedule before declining these properly. ✦
Declined DNR. Similar to other Earth (and other elements) techniques.
(Genjutsu: Fukkatsu) Illusion Technique: Revival Type: Offensive/Supplementary Rank: S Range: Short - Mid Chakra Cost: 40 Damage points: N/A Description:A very deceptive yet highly advanced illusion. The user is unable to cast this until three turns has passed, to which once done will make four hand seals inducing the illusion. “Revival” is a genjutsu that works on the concept of the Butterfly effect which in simple terms is when small or large changes can impact the way something works. The target will “wake up” to their positioning exactly three turns before the activation of the technique but while in this dream like state, all the moves and jutsu are replayed as normal but some changes will appear. These changes can range from the sequence of hand seals , to temperatures in area all the way down to even dialogue being said previously. Once in effect the target will be motionless in reality but not immobilized but due to the sheer similarities of the fake events seen is hard to decipher if they are underneath the illusions effect. When changing the details, the user can only change up to two things per usage in order to avoid giving away the illusion. Things such as thoughts or anything the user have no knowledge of cant be replicated but due to the effects of the illusion the target is fooled into those are also part of the dream. To further make the illusion harder things such as heat, wetness etc are also recreated to further mask the genjutsu.
*Technique lasts 2 turns unless deciphered and broken by the target*
*No C-rank and above genjutsu for two turns*
*Can only be used once per battle*
Declined - it's too much like izanagi
(Sukārettogen : Benihime Juzutsunagi) Scarlet Illusion: Crimson Princess Beaded Mesh Type: Offensive Rank: A Range: Short - Mid Chakra Cost: 30 Damage points: 60 Description: The user will make a single hand seal causing an illusion , to which after the hand seal is made the user seemingly sustains the seal(though this is not the case and is only an illusion) to cause red-purple ash to raise from underneath the target(s), and latching onto the skin causing immense burns into the skin. The ash net will lock the target down and once ready the illusion will remain dormant for two turns to which the illusion will then trigger, and cause the surrounding ash to begin to erupt swiftly heading towards the victim and exploding in a huge blaze of fire causing immense mental strain and causing them to fall unconscious for one turn. The technique can also activate when the target channels chakra equal to A-rank or above, prematurely triggering the effects of the explosion The target is unhindered in the two turns and as such can move around freely.
*Can only be twice per battle*
*No Genjutsu over C-rank for two turns*
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Declined - how can it be dormant if the illusion happens when you do the handseal? You create ash that rises up on their skin burning them, don't mention forming a net but say the ahs net will lock them down, but then you say it's dormant for two turns then it tirgger? Or are you trying to say this is a delayed genjutsu? Eitherway this needs work and needs to be made clear.
(Sutera no Gifuto) Stella's Gift Type: Weapon Rank: S-ranked Range: Short-Mid Range Chakra: N/A (costs and such mentioned per ability) Damage: N/A
Description: Stella’s Gift is a special designed weapon that was forged many ages before the current time in the ninja world. The weapon itself to the untrained eye is a simple leather whip but on second glance, the whip is a highly powerful and dangerous tool that can’t handle alone. Stella for short is a dark red colored whip , having near sentient properties as the whip can respond in conjunction to its master’s chakra similar to Samehada. Though not alive, the weapon is indeed chakra sentient and as such carries several abilities that can be used with its user.
Abilities
Stella’s Gift, also known as The Trickster’s Whip is a well-designed red velvet whip. The whip’s entire length can reach out to mid-range alone with one swing, coupled with its light weight and durable structure allows it to use to great extents. The whip is not indestructible but is highly durable, needing A-rank energy based techniques (Lightning, Fire etc) in order to actually break the whip but also S-ranked to chakra based physical damage attacks(Earth Release, Steel etc). Stella’s Gift also has a unique gimmick in with from the handle and the whip itself can create barbs. These barbs are used as a defensive and offensive means, causing the whip to spurt them passively due to not needing chakra to utilize. The barbs run alongside the edges of whip and can be used to shred through a target. In the case of a stranger trying to grab hold of the whip, it will grow barbs onto the handle in an attempt force the user holder off. The user can infuse elemental chakra into Stella and allow it to shoot said barbs at the enemy. This can be used three times per battle and counts as a move each time, taking 20 chakra and dealing 40 damage reaching up to short range. The user can only infuse Lighting(which would shock the target), Fire(which would burn the target on contact), and Wind(which would increase the cutting power of the barbs).
Advance Summoning is an ability of Stella’s Gift. This ability is similar to Termari’s Summoning: Quick Beheading Dance in which she used her fan as a summoning tool. Stella’s Gift is quite similar by wiping blood into the handle of the whip and then swinging it outwards, the user will touch the ground/water source with the whip in order to summon an animal of the contract. This ability cost a move directly as it replaces the normal summoning method for the user. All the chakra costs and summoning restrictions still apply.
The last ability of Stella’s Gift is the Genjutsu affinity behind the whip. The original creator being fascinated with the arts of illusions wanted to bestow onto the whip properties in which it can help the user. Stella’s Gift has a close relationship with its owner is constantly monitoring its user chakra flow and as such when foreign chakra enters the body of the user, Stella can react this and using a special chakra surge release Genjutsu casted onto the user. This can only be done onto 1 F-rank , 2 S-ranks , 3- A ranks , B –ranks and unlimited times for C and below but each use counts as a move. In the case of an F-rank, Stella is rendered unusable for the rest of the match having needed to recharge.
*Can only be used by Nakiri and others allowed to use*
*When not in use, Stella Gift will simply wrap itself around the users body mainly around the waist to give the appearance of a belt or simply when the user commands it*
*All of the commands induced into Stella are done mentally by the user*
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Declined - the barbs being passive - you need chakra to change the shape of it, so it needs a rank and count as a move, or just say it's always barbed. Summoning i like this part, counts as a move per turn though. And no to this genjutsu part, i've seen too many of these recently, Kamishiro has a necklace that does this as it's only ability, so wont allow it with others.
(Kenjutsu: Senshi no supiritto) - Kenjutsu: Warrior's Spirit Type: Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short Chakra: 30 Damage: 0 Description:
The user focuses their mind in on their swordsmanship and sword, and let their warrior instincts take over. As this happens, a layer of chakra begins to cover the blade of the sword, as well as their body. A bright flash of light goes off which has similar effects to that of a flash bang, yet it is unable to cause any damage/effect the user or their allies. From then on, arms made of chakra holding swords made of chakra (exactly the same properties as a normal sword) can spurt out from anywhere on the user, and can preform kenjutsu techniques that the user knows. The arms appear passively, though the techniques they preform cost a move. The user can sustain up to 6 extra arms and swords at once, and their blades phase through the user.
-Must be taught by Leathercandle
-Can be used twice per battle
-The effects of this technique last 3 turns unless released early
-This technique is self-sustaining, meaning the user can preform other techniques while the arms and swords are in existence
Declined - Jutsu needs work. Reduce how many arms you can make at one time, limit how many you can make overall and work on the description a bit.
Resubmitting: (Kenjutsu: Senshi no supiritto) - Kenjutsu: Warrior's Spirit Type: Supplementary Rank: A Range: Short - Mid Chakra: 30 Damage: 0 Description:
The user focuses their mind on their swordsmanship and sword, letting their warrior instincts take over. The user channels chakra through all of their body, creating a visible layer of it on their skin, before it extends to their sword. A bright flash of light goes off which has similar effects to that of a flash bang once the chakra finishes covering the sword and body, yet it is unable to cause any damage/effect the user or their allies. From then on, arms made of chakra holding swords made of chakra (exactly the same properties as a normal sword) can spurt out from anywhere on the user, and can preform kenjutsu techniques that the user knows. The arms appear passively, though the techniques they preform cost a move. The user can sustain up to 3 extra arms and swords at once. The blades wielded by these arms can phase through the user, leaving them unharmed. These arms can also throw their sword at a target up to mid range away.
-Must be taught by Leathercandle
-Can be used twice per battle -The user may sustain up to 3 arms at once -Over the course of a battle, the user can create a maximum of 6 arms
-The effects of this technique last 3 turns unless released early
-This technique is self-sustaining, meaning the user can preform other techniques while the arms and swords are in existence
Declined - stabbing through yourself and going unharmed doesn't make sense.
(Doton: Sentakki) - Earth Style: Washing Machine Type: Offensive Rank: S Range: Mid - Long Chakra: 40 Damage: 80 Description:
The user weaves four hand seals and then claps their hands together, holding them. Everything in the ground mid range around the target, up to 40 meters below them shoots out at them, starting with things on the surface, then working downwards. The ground below the target begins to shift outwards and downwards, being pulled out to the edge of mid range and then spat back out towards the target in the center, if they still are in the center. This continuous process essentially recycles the dirt, mud, rocks, and whatever is in the ground in a loop. The bone crushing weight of all of the parts of the ground being flung onto them and sucked underground with is enough to make even bunkers cave in. In contrast to the many earth based techniques that are known for their sluggish movement speed, this technique is feared for how fast it can overwhelm a foe, even surprise them.
-Can only be taught by Leathercandle
-Can be used twice per battle
-The user cannot preform any B ranked or above earth techniques besides this on the same turn
-This technique cannot be preformed twice in the same turn
-The user must hold their hands together for this technique to continue its "loop," though they do not have to be touching the ground
Declined - it's a slightly different mud tornado that's been done before
(Ninjutsu: Zone) - Ninjutsu: Zōn Type: Supplementary Rank: F Range: Short Chakra: 50 Damage: 0 Description:
The user channels chakra all throughout their body, heightening their power, speed, and senses. The surging chakra through them slowly exits through their eyes in a stream of visible chakra that follows them wherever they go, the visible strands of chakra being a few feet long before they disperse. Strikes are enhanced through their increased speed while this technique is active, as the user's muscles are one of the main targeted areas of this technique. The user benefits from a damage boost of +15 to all taijutsu and kenjutsu techniques. The user's awareness also increases dramatically, as as long as the user is under the effects of the Zone, they gain the ability to sense chakra within short range of them. The user's speed is also increased while under the effects of this technique. Their speed, if not already faster than this, becomes about the speed of Naruto under the influence of Kurama in the original series (video below for reference). All basic ninjutsu techniques, as well as the user's primary specialty (only if it is one of the 5 basic natures or a kekei genkai) gain a +10 damage bonus to all techniques that do damage already. If their primary specialty is none of those, this applies to their secondary specialty. If it still does not apply, the bonus is ignored for specialties, and only applies to basic ninjutsu.
[video=youtube_share;a70VSIDOp3Y]https://youtu.be/a70VSIDOp3Y[/video]
10:42 - 10:45 shows what I am referring to
The leaking chakra effect of the zone. The color is by default light blue (to match chakra), but if the users chakra is a different color for some reason, it would be that color.
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-Can only be taught by Leathercandle
-Can only be used once per battle
-The effects of the Zone last 4 turns
-The user suffers 40 damage after the technique ends, and cannot preform techniques of basic ninjutsu or their primary specialty (or their secondary if their primary could not gain the bonus, or none at all if neither of their specialties could gain the bonus) for two turns
-Due to there being a set amount of chakra put into this technique that leaks out over time, the user does not need to focus on this to sustain it, and can preform other chakra techniques while this is active
Declined - a mode that boosts which isn't allowed.
( Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kiba) – Summoning Technique: Fangs Type:Summon Rank:A Range:Short Chakra:30 Damage:n/a Description: By drawing blood and either weaving signs or using the bat tattoo, the user will summon one of the bat’s best soldiers. He got his name for sporting large incisors and is capable of communicating using the ultrasonic waves like the rest of the bats. His wings are as hard and sharp as a normal sword and he is twice the size of a sloth. Unlike the other bats, when Fangs is summoned, he brings with him ultrasonic waves that can shatter crystalline structures and incapacitate opponents in front of the user, affecting their minds. It is called Ninja Art: Utrasonic Fangs, lasts up to a full turn, has a mid-range reach, and can only be used once. With his wings he can use them to perform any kenjutsu technique excluding samurai techniques, cloud style kenjutsu, and bio bound techniques. His legs are strong enough to allow him to jump above his opponent and combine this with his kenjutsu when delivering attacks. Fangs also has the ability to transform itself on the user and/or ally into a bat-themed armor to protect them from the damage of either taijutsu attacks or explosive tags including element-based ones. This counts as a B-rank move. The last ability of Fangs is that he can create extra scythe/blade-like wings made of chakra in kenjutsu usage to increase damage.
-Can only use bat related and kenjutsu techniques and his moves will count towards the three jutsu limit
-Lasts for four turns and can only be summoned once
-Creating extra blades counts as an A-rank move.
-Must have signed the bat contract
Declined - the ultrasonic part would require you to have sound release. Being able to communicate is fine but using it for an attack is different. Same as summons that have venom like spider, if they bite they can poison an opponent but they can't control the venom without the user being a med ninja.
(Koton/Genjutsu: Sukurappu) – Steel Release/Illusionary Arts: Scrap Type:Defensive Rank:A Range:Short Chakra:30 Damage:n/a Description: The user will make the ram hand-seal and either raise steel from the ground or release steel from their body. Upon physical contact with the steel, the target is placed in an illusion with the user and steel seemingly vanish, and the victim seeing a “playground” modeled after a scrap yard and factory. It features creatures made of old rusty fragments of steel, streams of oil flowing throughout the area, mountains made up of scrap, and pressurized steam shot through pipes. There appears to be no signs of people other than the victim and it’s quite calm and busy with none of creatures inhabiting the area showing any hostility. This would cause the opponent to lower their guard until the creatures begin to move to them and attack them from every direction. These creatures at first will consist of mobile machine-like recyclers and birds searching for specific scrap, but when attacked, Goblins and Golems will emerge from ground and piles of scrap.
-Lasts for four turns unless the opponent releases themselves.
-Can only be used once.
-Can only be used in Landmarks that are made of metal or in wastelands.
Declined - it's declined for 4 turns is too much but at the same time this would be an elemental gen which i don't think you can submit, i'll confir with my fellow mods
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( U~irumubīsutoburō) – Wyrm Beast Blow Type:Offensive Rank:S Range:Short Chakra:n/a Damage:80 Description: While in the beast humanized transformation, the user is granted a technique known as Wyrm Beast Blow, where they will chase after their targets and deliver a flurry of claws strikes towards them, producing long (2 meter), air-like cuts in rapid succession. The technique ends with the last strike, appearing in the form of an upper claw strike that lifts the target and blasts them away in a large air burst. The resulting attack causes the ground to buckle under and send debris flying upward.
-Can only be used twice per battle.
-No other Taijutsu techniques on the same turn.
-No Taijutsu above S-rank next turn.
Declined - can be done with cannon techniques. When making Inuzuka stuff, get creative with it buddy.
Genjutsu: Hyou no Senbon | Illusionary Arts: Ice Senbon Type: Offensive Rank: B Range: Mid-Long Chakra: 30 Damage: 60 Description: Focusing their chakra into the opponents mind the user will manipulate their sense of sight and feel convincing them that the rain was turning into sharp ice senbon which when hitting anything would shatter .Causing the opponent to feel phantom pain harming them.When in reality the rain remains just that...rain
(Raiton: Hiken: Tsubame-Gaeshi) - Lightning Release: Concealed Sword: Swallow Return
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 50
Damage points: 100 (-20 to user)
Description: Swallow Return is a forbidden sword technique of Konohagakure that requires extreme precision, both in swordsmanship and lightning chakra control. It's a technique to where three concurrent arching blades close on the enemy from all sides to create a prison, allowing no chance for defense or evasion. While the user downplays it as simply successive slashes, it is actually using lightning chakra to the highest potential to overload one's arms and sword to increase speed and cutting ability. It starts with the user raising his sword above his shoulder, channeling lightning chakra to the nerves in the arms and to his sword. Once the user has done that, he performs a flashing slash from his right to his left, followed by two seemingly simultaneous, over-lapping flashes that appear to disregard the concept of time and space, producing a slash attack that arrives from three different directions due to the increased reflexes of one's arms. The user then lifts his sword as it gathers all his lightning chakra towards the blade and delivers another downwards slash resulting in an explosion of chakra, damaging the user and the opponent. Due to the speed of the sword slashes, it is very difficult to keep up with its speed, thus only being able to be tracked by doujutsu users (3t sharingan+, Byakugan, Rinnegan, etc.) or countered by those with increased reflexes (Eight Inner Gates, Sage Mode, etc.). After using this technique, the user's arms are unable to mold chakra A-rank and above for the rest of the match, limiting his use in Ninjutsu (including elemental), Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, and Taijutsu.
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Unable to use any Lightning techniques for 3 turns after use.
Note: User's arms are unable to mold chakra above B-Rank for rest of match. (Nin/Gen/Tai/Ken)
Note: Can only be used by those with a primary lightning specialty
(Raiton: Hiken: Tsubame-Gaeshi) - Lightning Release: Concealed Sword: Swallow Return
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: Swallow Return is a forbidden sword technique that requires extreme precision, first in lightning chakra control and second in swordsmanship. It's a technique to where three concurrent arching blades close on the enemy from all sides to create a prison, allowing no chance for defense or evasion. While the user downplays it as simply successive slashes, it is actually using lightning chakra to the highest potential to overload one's arms and sword to increase speed and cutting ability. It starts with the user raising his sword above his shoulder, channeling lightning chakra to the nerves in the arms and to his sword. Once the user has done that, he performs a flashing slash from his right to his left, followed by two seemingly simultaneous, over-lapping flashes that appears to disregard the concept of time and space, producing a slash attack that arrives from three different directions due to the increased reflexes of one's arms. The user then lifts his sword as it gathers all his lightning chakra towards the blade and delivers another downwards slash resulting in an explosion of chakra, damaging the opponent. Due to the speed of the sword slashes, it is challenging to keep up with requiring the use of sharingan 2t and/or enhanced reflexes.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Unable to use A-Rank or above Kenjutsu for the following turn
Note: User's arms are slightly numbed afterwards
Note: Must have lightning as a specialty
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Declined - @blue, i'm pretty sure if i use A rank wind wall around me i'd be safe
