[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Drāgy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Suiton: Kandai Hakuchō no Serenāde | Water Release: Serenade of the Magnanimous Swan
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra: 40 (+5 chakra cost for the explosion)
Damage: 80 (N/A if it explodes)
Description: The user will perform two handseals and afterwards he is going to expel a large creature from his mouth, in the form of a gigantic swan composed out of sticky water (thrice the size of an average shinobi); the water has very dense, viscous and adhesive quality similar to that of Water Release: Starch Syrup Capture Field. After the landing of the swan, the user will simply smash it against his target (e.g. a human body or a summoning) with great blunt force. The sticky water will stick to the target’s body, enveloping the whole body, leaving no openings. While covered in the sticky water, the covered body/object cannot move at all, because the sticky water is heavy/sticky and therefore the target is trapped in it; hence becomes a target of lighting release techniques. To signify this, not only that the target is trapped but also the affected body/object will drown due to the great amount of sticky water that he/it has been enveloped in. Furthermore, the most charming thing about this particular water release technique is that the user can expel out several swans, up to two, yet smaller (size of a regular shinobi). If the user decides to spit out two swans, each swan will be equal to A rank. The technique itself has also one more final use. The user, after spitting out the swan(s), can anytime cause the actual made out of sticky water swan(s) to explode thus will release a very large quantity, in the form of a sticky swamp, covering the area around the region in which the swan(s) had exploded. The released sticky swamp cannot rip through most obstacles (e.g. humans, solid objects etc) in its path and therefore its use doesn't serves to obliterate the target but to, upon contact, stick the sticky water to the target thus making the movements of the target heavier. To cause the technique to explode the user can snap his finger no matter in what range he is located.
Note: No Water release techniques above S-Rank in the same or next turn
Note: Follows elemental weaknesses and strengths of the water element
Note: Can only be used twice (2) per battle
Note: Cannot be used on consecutive turns
Note: Only Drāgy can teach this

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Suiton/Katon: Nenshō-sei Serenāde | Water/Fire Release: The Combustive Serenade
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short/Medium/Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user will perform two handseals, charging water chakra through dust, sand or other earthen materials located on the ground, erupting exactly four gargantuan swans around the target, in four different locations, North, East, South and West. In essence, each swan will be equal to B rank and composed out of sticky water, having very dense, viscous and adhesive quality similar to that of Water Release: Starch Syrup Capture Field, but likewise the solid substance of earth. After the creation of the swans, the user will magnificently smash them against his target with great force. Alternatively, the user can anytime cause them to explode outwards by charging fire chakra on the swans. Upon explosion, they are going to release a very large quantity of hot, sticky swamp. It will be hot enough to inflict serious skin damage upon contact with the target that will suffer serious injuries, which are classified as second degree burns. In essence, the user can likewise control the movement of the swans with the need for hand gestures.
*No water or fire release techniques above S-Rank in the same turn*
*Requires a break of two turns in between usage*
*Can only be used thrice per battle*
*Only Drāgy can teach this*

☼ Declined ☼

What's the purpose of the earthen materiel and substance? It seems like you're trying to make this tri-elemental without actually saying its three elements.

 

[Never]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Approved Summoning Contract :

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(Kuchiyose : Norowareta chikyū) - Summoning : Cursed Earth
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The user summons barnacles using their tattoo or ordinary summoning method, they will be shot out in the form of a small harmless wave or harmless torrent of water towards an Earth Technique where they will attach to it and using their own chakra corrupt it, directing it at their will towards another direction - this works on Earth Techniques up to A-Rank. When the barnacles have finished with the earth technique they can summon their own small water source as transport over to another Earth technique to repeat the process.

Not all Earth Techniques can be corrupted of course, they Earth has to be solid and nod in the form of mud or anything that can't be traveled through. If they Earth technique is latched to the ground and cannot be manipulated to move the Barnacles can prevent the Earth from growing any further if it hasn't fully developed (Like preventing a Cage to fully form or spikes from impaling someone).

These Barnacles are of the Thoracica "Acorn" kind and have a Calcite Shell so they cannot be killed or removed by simple blades, the opponent can't even cut off the section of clothing they are latched onto as they are actually pressed up against their skin through the clothing using chakra. B-Rank or below elemental ninjutsu cannot break through the shells bar lightning, which is only C-Rank and under. Only S-Rank Earth effect these Summons.

- Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin
- Summoning a Water Source as Travel costs a move
- Earth Technique Corruption is passive but they MUST make contact with the Earth and stick to it.
- Must have signed the Barnacle Summoning Contract
- These Barnacles can only be summoned twice
- They stay on the field for four turns
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-Declined- So they can passively destroy and reverse A-rank earth techniques with no move cost, have immunity for A-rank earth, B-rank elemental ninjutsu and are not affect unless by S-rank earth, summoned with a water source, and can be summoned twice, seriously i was going to DNR, but i'll give you one more go to make it reasonable, although i won't tell you what to change.

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(Kuchiyose : Norowareta chikyū) - Summoning : Cursed Earth
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The user makes 2 hand seals and swipes blood across their barnacle tattoo, they build up a large amount of water in their mouth and shoot it out as a harmless torrent of D-Rank water which would have a group of barnacles that would hit an Earth Technique where they will attach to it and using their own chakra corrupt it, directing it at their will towards another direction - this works on Earth Techniques up to A-Rank. When the barnacles have finished with the earth technique they can summon their own small water source as transport over to another Earth technique to repeat the process, though this costs a move and if you want the Barnacles to move otherwise they will extend their their appendages and use them to move across the ground strong enough to hold up their shells and body so they can essentially walk - to speed up their travel they will jump across the ground and will be only a little slower than the average shinobi this way, since they're very small they'd be hard to spot.

Not all Earth Techniques can be corrupted of course, the Earth has to be solid and not in the form of mud or anything that can't be traveled through. If the Earth technique is latched to the ground and can be manipulated to move, the Barnacles can prevent the Earth from growing any further if it hasn't fully developed (Like preventing a Cage to fully form or spikes from impaling someone).

These Barnacles are of the Thoracica "Acorn" kind and have a Calcite Shell so they cannot be killed or removed by simple blades, the opponent can't even cut off the section of clothing they are latched onto as they are actually pressed up against their skin through the clothing using chakra. C-Rank or below elemental ninjutsu cannot break through the shells bar lightning, which is only D-Rank. Earth does not harm the Barnacles because they must latch onto them to use their corruption technique, unless the technique is aimed specifically at them then they can withstand B-Rank Earth Techniques.

- Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin
- Earth Corruption Technique Costs a Move.
- Must have signed the Barnacle Summoning Contract
- These Barnacles can only be summoned twice
- They stay on the field for four turns

✦ Declined, for one, summonings with abilities can generally only be summoned once. Second, this is an A rank summoning that can change direction of earth jutsus A rank and below, being immune to earth jutsu B rank and below by default, and C rank and below elemental jutsu. Wut? I'm already not in favor of the earth ability as it's too powerful and unrestricted. And the water ability is out of place if they are an earth based summoning, it has no value here. Plus, if this is A rank, it's only working on B rank earth and below for me ✦


(Kuchiyose : Bānakuru-wan) - Summoning : Barnacle Bay
Type: Offensive / Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description:
The user can either do the normal summoning method or bite their thumb, wipe it on the summoning tattoo and then slam the ground. These are Acrothoracica type barnacles and they are summoned into the ground where they burrow into it, creating thousands of little slits in the earth all up to the max of Mid-Range all around the user. This summon uses it's tendrils by sticking them out of their burrowed homes and feel any movement above them, sending the information back to the contract signer(s) of where the enemy is on the earth, their tendrils can be damaged but they usually retreat into their burrows if anything damaging starts to spread across the ground (like fire) and when it has dispersed they reappear. These barnacles disallow the opponent from using any jutsu using chakra that come from the ground up to A-Rank in their vicinity because they now have complete control of the earth stopping any chakra from from above the surface. The Barnacles can also attack the opponent, releasing a large amount of Mud in the form of a 7 meter tall pillar from the slits in the ground from underneath the opponent that will blast them into the air with no warning, it causes no significant damage to the opponent and just takes them off guard.

- Mud Blast Costs a Move and is of B-Rank
- Can only be Summoned Once
- Lasts 4 turns on the battlefield.

✦ Declined, so....you want to sense your opponent while at the same time preventing them from using most A rank and below earth jutsu as well as shooting a 7 pillar tall burst of mud "with no warning" directly under the foe? Nah, tone it down some, it's just a stacking of things here ✦

(Fujitsuboātsu : Thoracica no bodi) - Barnacle Arts : Body of the Thoracica
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description:
The Signer of the Barnacle Contract is capable of manipulating the Shell around the Barnacles to an extent as the Thoracica Barnacles themselves can also, so the user would perform bite their thumb and rub the blood over their Tattoo and the shell would then form over the actual Tattoo. The User can then manipulate to form ninja tools or weapons; small tools like Kunai and Shuriken can be made in threes, whereas large tools like swords and spears come in singles - since these shells can only be manipulated to an extent, once the form is taken it cannot be changed. All "Thoracica" Type Barnacles can use this, manipulating their shells so that the essentially grow and they become spiked like many needles are protruding from them. They user doesn't have to shape it into anything and it can remain as a shell plating on their tattoo for protection.

There is also another use which allows the user to form the shell so that it is spiked and can be shot at forward away from where the tattoo is on the body - the spikes are like senbon only slightly thicker and will send a flurry of them outwards but will only be within Short range. The Shell can stand up to all elements up to C-Rank except from lightning which it can only withstand up to D-Rank as it can easily pierce and shatter it.

- Must have signed Barnacle Summon Contract
- Can only be taught by LonelyAssassin

✦ Declined, I'm not allowing this to be used by the user and not summonings ✦

 

[Ciberr]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Bijustu: Seishuku Hnshin | Tailed Beast Skill: Silent Transformation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Tapping into Saiken's power Utakata transforms into his initial transformation. Unlike the usual method though, this is very silent. Instead of roaring and bursting into a column of black chakra, he simply becomes covered in black, followed by red chakra which shapes his 6 tails, face, cloak, etc which happens very quickly. This allows him to be more discrete when approaching or attacking enemies. The outcome of this transformation is the exact same as the normal one, without the chakra explosion. Should any of Bijuu use this, the result will be the transformation into the inital mode without the traditional explosion, roar, or in some cases(like Killer B) "Wheeeeee!"

-Only useable by Bijuu
-This counts as the inital transformation, the inital transformation must be posted for reference but it does not count towards the 3 justu per turn limitation

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 Declined  DNR. Ridiculous. Wrong chakra info.

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Bijustu: Saiken's Rippuku | Tailed Beast Skill: Saiken's Rage
Type: Offensive | Supplementary
Rank: S rank
Range: Self(Short range chakra burst)
Chakra: 40
Damage: 60(Chakra burst)
Description: Utakata and Saiken's relationship are one of which most Jin's envy. They argue in a joking matter but never seriously disagree on anything. In dire times though, Utakata often panics or overly relies on Saiken. When down, Utakata turns to Saiken for some power but when this is activated Saiken completely takes over against Utakata's will for the greater good. When first initiated Saiken has Utakata burst into a greyish black column of chakra while releasing devastating shockwave governing an A rank damage dealing blunt damage to anyone or anything in the area. The result of the unwilling transformation is a smaller version of the complete transformation. The appearance of this transformation can be compared to that of Gaara's when Shikaku took him over unwillingly before completely transforming. Sorta of a buffer phase. Appearance wise Utakata grows about 2 and a half feet in height and is noticeably fatter. He has a black chakra shroud covering him but he is also covered in his typical translucent acid cloak. In a nutshell he appears to be in a fatter initial transformation. Once activated, both the inital transformation and full transformation must be posted for reference only. Once the 3 turns that this phase lasts, Utakata reverts to normal and cannot use more than 40 chakra in one given turns for the next 2 turns.

-Only usable by Utakata
-Is considered the full transformation and initial transformation
-Though it is considered both transformations, Utakata will not die after 3 turns like the regular full transformation indicates.
-Can only be used once per battle, twice per event.

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 Declined  DNR. Preposterous

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Bijustu/Ninpou: Sui Kanryuu | Tailed Beast Skill/Ninja Art: Acid Reflux
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: N/A
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: With the help of Saiken Utakata will focus chakra throughout his body in an attempt to cleanse the body of hostile poisons, gases and fluids. This is a very limited without the knowledge of medical ninjustu. Activation of this justu will cause the user to generate small balls of chakra inside their lungs which can absorb the hostile substance. Then the user will throw up the manifested substance and become slightly woozy as the body expels the hostile substance. The generated balls are only generated in the lungs because should the hostile substance travel into the stomach or digestive track it'll be thrown up anyway. Again this justu is very limited without medical ninjustu but can be used by regular ninja that have a great deal of chakra control.

-Utakata can use this justu 3 Times and it can be activated prior to coming in contact with the hostile substance(Lasts 2 turns)
-Ninja besides Utakata can use it once and must be activated after coming in contact with the hostile substance and must be Kage Rank or higher
-Expelling the hostile substance will make the user dizzy and unable to use high level techniques for the remainder of the turn(S+)
-'Hostile substance' includes gases, fluids, and other harmful substances that enter the users body

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 Declined  DNR. Illogical and mimics the effects of existing techniques. Regarding these techniques, please don't try to submit more modes that are copies of the cannon modes but more oped and exploitable. And most of them don't even make sense. Techniques that use your bijuu skills and abilities is ok but not new "modes" and transformations. No. Also, you forget in all of thse and your previous techniques that your bijuu has abilities which can only be accessed while you're transformed. Always keep that in mind.

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[Daemon]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

☼ Suiton: Gen'ei Same - Water Release: Phantom Shark ☼
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short(with Long range reach)
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A (-20 to the user)
Description: The user clasps his hands together and focuses water chakra out of the pours in their body, creating water that shoots out around them. Using shape manipulation, a large shark(8m meters long and 7 meters wide) is created around them with the user as it's epicenter. While forcing the water out of their pours, the user takes damage because of it as their pours are not meant to expel that much water at one time. Using the same principles as Kisame's (Suiton: Daikōdan no Jutsu) – Water Release: Great Shark Missile Technique, this technique allows the user to absorb enemy jutsu requiring 30 chakra points and blow to be performed. Being a water master, Kisame adds (Suiton: Mizu Shishi) - Water Release: Water Beast, and uses its ability to shoot out streams of water. The shark surrounding Kisame is allowed to shoot a burst of water in the shape of a shark tooth to pierce and skewer the target. The blasts of water count as a move per turn and carries damage equivalent to an A rank technique. When in water, due to the design of a shark encasing kisame, Kisame gains double swimming speed. After 4 turns, the jutsu exhausts itself by popping like a bubble releasing the water all over the battlefield and allowing the user to use no water nor taijutsu techniques above A rank for the next 2 turns. However with the shark formed, Kisame can only use Water jutsu, Shark related techniques(Techniques related to the shark summoning), and samehada related techs. The user is capable of using water techniques from within the shark by using the shark as a water source.
Note: Can only be used by Kisame bios
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Lasts 4 turns
Note: Can only be taught by Daemon

☼ Declined DNR☼




(Same: Tisu ) – Shark: Teeth
Rank: B-A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20-30
Damage Points: 40-60
Description: Using his access to the shark contract, Kisame is able to generate the teeth of shark. However, the teeth can only be made short range from him as this jutsu is bound by the rules of summoning techniques. The user generates the teeth by physically summoning them to the field. These teeth are from from short range of the user and can travel up to long range. The technique is multi-rank due to the size differences within the teeth. If created with 20 chakra and 40 damage, the length of the tooth is equivalent to the width of their torso. When made with 30 chakra and 60 damage, the teeth are equivalent to the length of the user's arm. No matter the variant of the technique, the user can shoot as many teeth as he wishes at one time but they must all add up to either B rank or A rank depending on the variant used.
Note: Can only be used by a shark signer.
Note: Can be used 4 times per battle.

☼ Declined ☼

Pick one of the ranks, doesn't need to be both. What do these shark teeth do when summoned? Are they thrown? Do they just fall on someone?

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☼ Kuchiyose: Hydros - Summoning: Hydros ☼
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short ( with Long range reach )
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: N/A ( -20 to the user )
Description: At roughly around the same size of Manda, Hydros is a wide shark, closely related to the ancient shark, Megalodon. Hydros displays countershading, by having a white underside and a grey dorsal area (sometimes in a brown or blue shade) that gives an overall mottled appearance. The coloration makes it difficult for prey to spot the shark because it breaks up the shark's outline when seen from the side. From above, the darker shade blends with the sea and from below it exposes a minimal silhouette against the sunlight. As with all sharks, Achelous sharks have great sense of hearing, able to hear minute sounds and perfect sense of smell, able to determine the direction of a given scent based on the timing of scent detection in each nostril. Sharks are known to have an enhanced denticle but Hydros takes this to a higher level, having a bite force estimated to be around also have enhanced dermal denticle, giving them a sharp and strong teeth armor, capable of biting through A ranked jutsus. Despite having a natural Water affinity, Hydros shares a great resistance against it and other elements, allowing her to take damage of A rank jutsus unaffected, and up to one S rank technique. Her method of hunting is to emerge beneath her opponents, creating a gargantuan vortex of Suiton chakra before swallowing them whole. This vortex is of such power that it is able to crush anything that passes through it, essentially grinding and compressing things until they disappear, an S ranked ability of Hydros. This vortex can also be used against underwater attacks and objects on the surface of the water, crushing them as it pulls them down with a powerful pull. In addition to this Vortex, Hydros is able to "summon" other sharks from within him, his massive size allowing this, similar to Kidomaru's boss summoning. By channeling the required chakra, Hydros is able to expel a massive burst of water (same as the quantity in Great Exploding Water Colliding Wave) while releasing a summoning within this water. This counts as a move per turn of the user and can only be used to summon one grown shark at max or two groups of baby sharks. This shark can swim at the base speed of a Sage Rank shinobi.

Note: Can only be used by a shark signer.
Note: Can only be summoned 1 time a battle
Note: Lasts up to three turns
Note: Can use Water up to and including S-Rank,
Note: S rank vortex ability counts towards the user's jutsu per turn.
Note: After dispersing, the user cannot summon sharks for 2 turns afterwards.

☼ Leaving for someone else ☼

✦ Pending, leaving for someone else ✦

‡ Approved ‡ Edited

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Trained in Déjà Fu, by Emperor:

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Given permission to submit tecniques.

( Déjà Fu: Ni-Ni Paradokkusu ) Déjà Fu: Twin Paradox

Rank: B
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will charge chakra through the body, allowing him/her to acquire speed above the normal running speed, and will then charge in an arch towards the opponent. Midway through, the user will perform an "S" shape, changing directions, dealing an attack on the opponent from the opposite side. This attack will transverse the distance between the user and the opponent in just a few seconds. Utilizing the First Principle of Déjà Fu the user will cast a visual technique where the opponent will have a delayed visual perception. It is synchronized to the point that, when the illusion is beginning to change directions, the user is already dealing the attack, and the genjutsu breaks. It happens in such a way that, to the target, the motion will always appear opposite to the result, as the change in directions will not happen before the genjutsu breaks.

*Requires the user to be a maximum of 10 meters from the opponent*
*Can only be used once every 3 turns*

✦ Approved ✦

( Déjà Fu: Ban'yuu Jikuu ∞ Shijuuzutsuki ) Déjà Fu: The Multiverse Hypothesis ∞ Continuum Head-butt

Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The epitome of the First Principle of Déjà Fu. The user will dart forward, charging chakra throughout his/her body to acquire greater speed, while casting an illusion on the opponent. In the illusion, multiple hypothesis of the outcome of the charge will manifest, appearing as if the opponent creating a massive amount clones. All the clones will converge on the opponent, sliding on their belly like penguins or jumping head first, from all possible directions, with a slight time delay, freeing the user to change directions and deal a massive chakra infused head-butt on the target. The blast of condensed chakra can reach up to long range from the impact, creating a massive crater up to mid-range, and dealing damage to even Boss Summoning-size targets. The blast suffers no elemental strengths or weaknesses, and can thus be neutralized by any technique of the same rank, to no damage by either opponent or user.

*Can only be used twice per battle*
*Requires 3 turn cool down between usages*

✦ Declined, I'm guessing the head butt releases the massive burst of chakra as you don't exactly state this. If the chakra is none elemental, then it is raw chakra, which can be countered by raw chakra of the same rank or Elemental chakra one rank lower. Also, at least one more restriction is needed ✦

(Fuuinjutsu: Panikku Osutoricchi ) Sealing Technique: Panicked Ostrich

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A variation of Generic Sealing Technique, it allows the user to seal him/herself within a chosen storage scroll, which can be done in pre-prepared scrolls with a single handseal or through the same seal used in Generic Sealing Technique. The variation comes from the ability to seal corpses, whereas the user mimics that by using one's own chakra to seal oneself, making it so that there is no sort of resistance or conflict with different chakra systems. The sealing is done very quickly, in a matter of a second, where the user is seemingly sucked into the scroll, head first. Only the user can be sealed within the storage scroll, any active jutsu will be disrupted and vanish.
The user is contained in a black void dimension, allowing only a few minutes before asphyxiation. With a second handseal, the user can unseal him/herself back to the world.
*Can only be 1 turn inside the seal, else the user will asphyxiate*
*The user is able to feel the scroll through chakra, as well as any chakra source in contact with it. I.e. opponent's standing within a meter of the scroll without Chakra Suppression, or with Chakra Supression in physical contact with the Scroll, exception being Muu and Karin
*Only the user can seal or unseal the scroll*
*The scroll, simple paper normally, suffers no defensive bonus, meaning the user is forcefully spat back, with full damage taken, case something destroys the seal, the only connection between the outside world and the black void.*
*Mastering Fuuinjutsu allows the usage of this technique at half the chakra cost*

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 Approved  Though to be honest, this seems useless to me. But hey...whatever floats your boat!

Updating it, and making it a bit more useable:

(Fuuinjutsu: Panikku Osutoricchi ) Sealing Technique: Panicked Ostrich

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: A variation of Generic Sealing Technique, it allows the user to seal him/herself within a chosen storage scroll, which can be done in pre-prepared scrolls with a single handseal or through the same seal used in Generic Sealing Technique. The variation comes from the ability to seal corpses, whereas the user mimics that by using one's own chakra to seal oneself, making it so that there is no sort of resistance or conflict with different chakra systems. The sealing is done very quickly, in a matter of a second, where the user is seemingly sucked into the scroll, head first. Only the user can be sealed within the storage scroll, 1 person, no allies can come in as well.
The user is contained in a black void dimension, allowing only a few minutes before asphyxiation. With a second handseal, the user can unseal him/herself back to the world.
*Can only be 1 turn inside the seal, else the user will asphyxiate*
*The user is able to feel the scroll through chakra, as well as any chakra source in contact with it. I.e. opponent's standing within a meter of the scroll without Chakra Suppression, or with Chakra Supression in physical contact with the Scroll, exception being Muu and Karin
*Only the user can seal or unseal the scroll*
*The scroll, simple paper normally, suffers no defensive bonus, meaning the user is forcefully spat back, with full damage taken, case something destroys the seal, the only connection between the outside world and the black void.*
*Mastering Fuuinjutsu allows the usage of this technique at half the chakra cost*

✦ Approved, weird custom. It was better when you could seal people with you for a good undisturbed time, but hey, if you like it! ✦

 

[BusinessManTeno]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Shakuton: Uwadzutsumi kontan tenpi) Scorch Style: Resonating Soul Of The Sun
Type: Supplamentary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Self
Chakra: 50 (-10 Each turn active)
Damage: N/a (-15 to user)
Description: This is a special scorch jutsu exclusive to the best of the best of scorch users. The user will gather large amounts of scorch chakra around their whole body for a periodic of time. Once done they will release the built up scorch chakra from around their whole body causing scorch to literally resonate from inside their body outwards. This will make the whole users body covered in scorch. This jutsu serves 2 Main purposes. 1. Any water jutsu that comes within short range of the user will quickly evaporate due to the intense heat that resonates from the users body thus making all water jutsus useless against the user (Still following the elemental weakness and strength of course) 2. To compliment their style in taijutsu. If the user comes in contact with the opponent, every hit that lands on the opponent they will suffer 2nd degree burns on wherever they was hit thus causing pain to a mid degree whenever they move the body part that was inflicted, also drains the water out the body part that was hit, . This jutsu was classified as forbidden when they realized the drawbacks was more severe then they thought. The reason this jutsu is classfied as forbidden is due to the intense scorch chakra resonating through the body, though the user is coated in scorch chakra it does not fully protect them from the scorch that resonates, thus slowly evaporate the water from the opponents body each turn its active, causing slight fatigue each turn it is active.

Note: Can only use once
Note: Stays Active a max of 3 turns (Can turn off at will)
Note: The user can only use Wind, Fire, Scorch, Taijutsu, Kenjutsu, and Genjutsu While active. Nothing else
Note: Due to slight fatigue, the user cant use Jutsus above S rank the first time active, 2nd time active the user cant use any jutsu above A rank, 3rd time active the user cant use any jutsu above B rank In the same turn.
Note: Can only use 1 other jutsu in the same turn as this jutsu

Declined
At the highlighted: What do you mean by it being activated three times when you can only use it once?
Secondly, causing all water jutsu to evaporate when near you seems somewhat illogical. What if you were tossed in a deep sea? What would happen then?

(Shakuton: Uwadzutsumi kontan tenpi) Scorch Style: Resonating Soul Of The Sun
Type: Supplamentary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Self
Chakra: 50 (-20 Each turn active)
Damage: N/a (-20 to user) (+10 Taijutsu)
Description: This is a special scorch jutsu exclusive to the best of the best of scorch users. The user will gather large amounts of scorch chakra around their whole body for a periodic of time. Once done they will release the built up scorch chakra from around their whole body causing scorch to layer around their skin literally resonate from the surface their body outwards. This will make the whole users body covered in scorch. This jutsu serves 2 Main purposes. 1. Any water jutsu that comes within short range of the user will quickly evaporate due to the intense heat that resonates from the users body thus making all water jutsus useless against the user (Still following the elemental weakness and strength of course) This jutsu does not protect from Large bodies of water (Ocean, Sea, Lake) Due to too much water around the user, if he was to plummet into the ocean while this technique is active the water sould superheat, turning into scalding water overpowering the scorch around the user body now burning the user with scalding water. The user has roughly about 5 seconds (2 move slots) to be under water until the water overpower his scorch2. To compliment their style in taijutsu. If the user comes in contact with the opponent, every hit that lands on the opponent they will suffer 2nd degree burns on wherever they was hit thus causing pain to a mid degree whenever they move the body part that was inflicted, also drains the water out the body part that was hit , . This jutsu was classified as forbidden when they realized the drawbacks was more severe then they thought. The reason this jutsu is classfied as forbidden is due to the intense scorch chakra resonating On the surface of the body, though the user is coated in scorch chakra it does not fully protect them from the scorch that resonates, thus slowly evaporate the water from the opponents body each turn its active, causing slight fatigue each turn it is active.

Note: Can only use once
Note: Stays Active a max of 3 turns (Cant turn off at will)
Note: Once this technique is finished, the user will suffer 2nd degree burns around their whole body making the body tender to the touch. Making all attacks landed on the user double damage
Note: The user cant use any elemental chakra nature except Wind , Fire, and Scorch

✦ Declined, while a good concept, parts of the description are off. You should rewrite the evaporating water part more clearly. One sentence is says all water, next sentence it doesn't say large bodies of water. Secondly, if it causes only 2nd degree burns to your body, then how is that hot enough to evaporate entire sources of water anyway? If you jumped into a large body of water, like an ocean, then it wouldn't be enough to superheat the water as you are only a small source of heat, and in order to superheat a source that large, you'd have to be of dangerously hot temperatures, proving more harmful to yourself as well. Also, as I end up having to say a lot in your submissions, remove the part about seconds, it's difficult to account for in battles. And the colored part makes little sense. You mention the user is coated in chakra to protect them but then talk about what happens to the opponent. Plus, if you do mean the user like I think, it does very little in regards to the user, an F rank that evaporates water and causes burning effects to each taijutsu attack would need more than just "slight fatigue" each turn. Also, if you cant turn this off a will, then it should last 3 turns completely, not a max of 3. ✦

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(Ameton/Katon:Naraku tsuba) Rain/Fire Style: Hades Spit
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 (-10 per turn)
Damage: N/a (20 Each Turn ) (+10 Rain Jutsus)
Description: This is a very interesting but dangerous type of jutsu. Incorporating fire and rain together. The user will do 3 handdseals channeling fire into the rain clouds super-heating the rain drops The user makes sure that he doesnt channel fire chakra into the clouds above him in a 3meter diameter. Making it that if he moves outside the 3 meter mark he too will face the affects of this jutsu. Each rain drops is hot as boiling water, making each time the rain touches the opponent it feels like a a harsh sting. This jutsu specality is that it causes distractions to the opponent while constantly being hit with scalding rain drops. The special thing about this jutsu is that over a period of time it does more damage. If this jutsu isnt stopped before the 3rd turn. The opponent will suffer 3rd degree burns causing severe damage. Each turn the rain hits the opponent the damage from the rain multiplies. Meaning 20 first turn. 40 2nd turn and 80 3rd turn.

Note: Can use twice
Note: 3 turn cool down period
Note: Last 3 turns
Note: Cant use any rain jutsu above S rank with this technique.
Note: All Rain jutsus are superheated into scaled water increasing the damage

✦ Declined, this should be A rank instead of S for one. And doubled damage is a no. It should increase by the same factor each turn, not a multiplier. It'd be 20, 40, 60. And no rain above A rank, this is too exploitable like that. ✦

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(Sakashima Yaiba: Itsutsu ishi hasu) Reverse Blade Style: 5 Petrified Lotus
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: This technique dwells in the earth style added weight technique but to a smaller scale that combines to a higher scale. The user will grab the hilt of the sword with 1 or both hand with the tip facing outward while channeling mass amounts of chakra into their reverse blade sword. The user will then swiftly strike both arms then both legs very forcefully dealing minimum damage (Bruising). With each strike earth chakra is channeled to said body part causing that body part to Quad its weight size making that body part petrified (immobilize). The user will then channel more chakra into the tip of the blunt blade after the 4th strike is dealt and deal a massive blow towards the mid section of the opponent causing major damage to his ribs and kidneys also now having his whole body immobilized except his head. Due to the opponents weight being increased the heavy force of the 5th strike would not force nor launch the opponent back but keep them in the same place. All of this happens very quickly.

Note: Can only use twice
Note: 3 turn cool down period
Note: No RBS Arts in the next turn
Note: Their body stays immobile for one whole turn

✦ Declined:

The inner of this style is simple yet complex. This style is made to harness and utilize the side of the blade that nobody normally uses while at the same time infusing,and coating the sword with earth/earth chakra. In some cases this style is used as a way to toy with the opponent allowing the user to break down the opponents style in kenjutsu/taijutsu without killing them. This style is made for spars, if you dont wish to cut/slice the opponent, you will use this style that is meant to do blunt damage instead of cutting damage With a regular sword one would not have to put much strength into cutting down an opponent creating a cut/slice. But with this style the user needs to put fourth a considerable more amount of their strength and considerable amount of earth/ earth chakra to boost the attack not holding back. This style is normally utilize by 2 things. 1 is the Evade, Strike, Evade, Strike method. With this you find the opponents opening and strike at the moment you find it. 2 Being to break the guard strong defense, regular swords, weapons. Etc. (Example, If a regular sword was to clash with this sword coated in earth, this sword style would break through the opponents sword due to the increase in strength of the reverse blade sword).

This is what your CFS does. Nowhere does it state that one is able to petrify an opponent via earth chakra. Your style is based on using the broad side of a sword to cause more blunt damage on contact as opposed to cutting one, using earth chakra to make it. You can't petrify someone with your CFS, stop trying to do so, I think this is the third or fourth CFS jutsu of yours where you tried this. ✦

 

[Alyx]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

( Tsumibukai Genjutsu: Nanatsuno Daizai)Sinful Illusionary Arts: Seven Deadly Sins
Type:Offensive | Supplementary | Defensive
Rank:S-Rank
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage: 80
Description:
A powerful , yet very simple Genjutsu of the Royal Sinner. This genjutsu was made based on the original 7 deadly sins. These 2 sins were known as Greed, Lust, Pride, Envy, Anger, Gluttony and Sloth. The main trigger of each illusion is casted through a set of 6 handseals each. Each one has their own specific effect on the body of the target. Each was made as punishment that is related towards each of the 7 sins and used in the elder days to punish sinners.

Gluttony, the sin of over consumption of food , drink or wealthy items, with no remorse for the needy. After the user starts the Genjutsu, if chosen, the target will br placed under a Genjutsu. The targets sense of taste, sight and smell are affected. They will find themselves strapped to a chair in a dark room were a man with a deformed face stands before them, unleashing a wicked and evil laugh, as he reaches for a spoon and begins to force feed the target, rotting wasted food. The food has a foul scent that when caught to the nose, causes it to burn on the nose from the high concentration of mold. The taste of the foods is sour and bitter. As the deformed man continues to feed the target, the user can manipulate the illusion to make the target even suffer more like having the man hold the rotten food even much longer to nose of the target. In reality the target remains untouched however due to the pain being caused from the force feeding of the target and burning the nose, causes mental stress on the target. This happens to the point that the target is filled up and suffers enough

Envy is the emotion created by the resentment of a person who desires to have something the other doesn’t. After the hand seals are made the target is placed into a Genjutsu. The targets sense of sight sound and touch are affected. The user will place them in a world where everything is void. People walking around them with no faces, buildings shattered and the sky dark red. As thye are trapped, they will hear a voice calling their name, and before a moment’s notice, a person will grab them behind. The person will them proceed to whisper into the ear of the target saying “I finally found you…I have lived in eny of you for so long…now it’s time I made you suffer!”. The man then proceeds to turn into black sludge that starts to envelop the target and starts trying to take control of the targets body. In reality the target is unable to move and is however not harmed mentally but due to the confines created in the illusion causes him to remain still in reality.

Anger or Wrath is the emotion of that of being threaten. After the handseals are made, the target is placed into a Genjutsu were the target will see an imaginary person, running at them. The person is a young male or female who was in the was suspected to be in the life of the target, seeing as the most humble person but rather, the illusion causes them to be at rage, constantly beating and attacking and screaming at the target. Though the weakest of the other sins, this one cause nothing but trauma to the brain of the target, having been forced to see somehow may have been important to them, turned into a beast of nature. This one targets the user’s sense of sight and sound but causes mental stress on the target. In reality however is untouched and still aware of the surroundings.

Sloth or as some call it, laziness is one of the most punished of the sins. The user after placing them into the Genjutsu targets the user’s sense of sight sound and sight. The user then casts the illusion causing feathers to dance around the target. Then a lullaby then comes into play, these combined cause a sleepy effect on the target and was they are about to slumber, they hear a loud sound. This is the voice of a raspy old man , with a mask over his gloomy yellow eyes, with a whip in his hand, bailing at the top of his voice. The man the proceeds to whip the target, as the slave master did to those who portrait sloth and beat the target. The lashes from the whip create sensation on each hit, stinging the target and causing mental stress on the target. In reality the body of the target becomes stiffened as they try to fight of the blows from the man.

Pride said to be the one that consumes the heart of many men. This illusion targets the sense of sight. The user will find him surrounded by many who are clapping and cheering him or her on stage. The scene is set when the target finds himself out of now were being attacked by the many adoring fans, who was once cheering and chanting his name, so screaming and attacking him. This shows that the hearts of many can change even if you are a hero. The targets sense of sight and sound is effected however it doesn’t really effect the mind only using this as a distraction while they allow there ego and pride get the best of them as they react to the crowd(based on how the target reacts).

Greed and Lust, the mothers of the 7 sins are merged into one. The user will place the target into an illusion, targeting the sense of all the basic 5 senses. The target will find them self on a throne, were the target is the king of the illusion world they are placed in. The user will all the money and women or men as they desire to the target, causing the illusionary people to touch and speak to the target in ways of trying to lust the target, touching him in sensitive areas to stimulate the targets need of sexual desire and the money or power of having their own kingdom to rule, overwhelming the target with thoughts every second try to corrupt his mind. In reality the target suffers no damage however there 5 senses are cut making it hard for them to snap back into reality and due to the constant thoughts and distractions make it even easier on the user to trap the target.

Can only be used twice per battle
Each one remains active for 2 turns unless broken
No other illusions can be layered into any of these.
Only one specific illusion can be active at a time
No genjutsu above B Rank for the next 2 turns
Cannot be used consecutively.
Damage applies only to those that mention pain and mental stress

( Tsumibukai Genjutsu: Kettou Gyoushi no Vangureesu)Sinful Illusionary Arts: Duel Stare of Van Grace
Type: Supplementary | Defensive
Rank:B-Rank
Range:Short
Chakra:20
Damage: N/A
Description:
A very simple yet complex duel Genjutsu that is casted through simply performing 3 hand seals by the user. It was built to mainly to combat close range fighters who are usually vulnerable when wide open in close quarter combat. The user will invoke a Genjustu were vines begin to grow from the ground and grab the target while they are moving or reaming still. A demonic flower then erupts from the ground and begins to gaze into the eye of the target using hypnosis to control the target, the proceeding to eat them. This can easily stop people who are 1 rank weaker than the user by immobilizing them, however the real purpose of is to cast another Genjutsu in which the user implants false memories into the brain of the target and making them “relive” the event. The memory of begin attacked and molested by a heterochromia(duel eye colored person) man or woman fooling the brain into thinking they have a complex towards these type of people and when looking into the eyes of caster, they will think they have heterochromia as well, making them afraid of the user. In reality, the first Genjutsu is simply a cover for the secondary Genjutsu to lay into motion, the target is also unable to move do to being frozen a solid in motion in the Genjutsu from the fake fear.

-Can be used 3 times per battle
-No other genjutsu can be used in the same turn

✦ Declined, not allowing 6 genjutsus in one, DNR and the second is just a Sharingan genjutsu disguised as something else ✦

 

[Gèckö]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Inomama no Jutsu)- Fire Style: Heat Lion at Will Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The fire counterpart for (Suiton: Ukojizai no Jutsu) - Water Style: Rain Tiger at Will Technique. Which takes a different approach to gaining enhanced shinobi perception. The user first performs a shorter condensed sequence of hand seals. (Snake → Ram → Horse) Then the user will clap his hands together releasing the gathered fire chakra of the user into the atmosphere. That fire chakra expands into the natural heat of the battlefield and forms a large red cloud which stretches across the battlefield. The cloud has the sole ability to detect different chakras other then the user. By releasing a constant surge of heat made of the user's chakra. Anything not made of the user's chakra the user will be made aware of. Being of higher rank the Heat lion at will technique possess the strength from natural heat to evaporate the rain produced from the rain tiger at will technique.
Note: Can only be used once per battle and last entire battle as heat can't be extinguished.
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

✦ Declined, has been attempted before and I recently declined another submission similar to this ✦

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(Buki: Hikari)- Weapon: Light
Type: Weapon
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: (-10 per round to keep flammable gas seeping from Hikari)
Damage: N/A
Description: Hikari is not just one weapon but essentially a set of two, one tonfa for each hand. A tonfa is essentially a bracket shaped gauntlet with handles to grip. A tonfa is extremely useful in battle as they can be used as an extension of the user's arm or used to brace/block in combat. Hikari was created by Gecko who desired a new weapon, one that suited him more. So he forged two tonfas out of an indestructible yet light weight material. Hikari is essentially clear in color but has a black band near the handles for style. There is one small hole within the handle of each tonfa. Through this hole Hikari's special ability is brought forth. By channeling fire chakra constantly into Hikari it becomes super heated, but along with this super heat which burns the opponent upon contact, a super heated flammable and translucent gas seeps from that hole. This gas is infused with the user's chakra so it can be manipulated away from Gecko to avoid doing damage to himself. This gas is highly flammable and through each strike with Hikari the built up heat within the tonfas and the friction gathered through each strike causes the tonfas to ignite. Burning visibly, the flames are different as the burn the color of the user's soul. (Cosmetic depending on which bio) Hikari's main use in close quarters include holding the tonfas parallel to the arm to block and strike, rotating the tonfas to extend them outward and even throwing the tonfas as projectiles if needed.
Note: The tonfas due to their versatile shape can use all weapon dependent ninjutsu at the cost of chakra.
Note: Can only be used by Gecko and the people I teach

✦ Declined, flames arent changing colors at all and tonfas cant be used to take the place of all weapon based jutsu. Some ninjutsu that require swords will clearly not be able to work with this ✦

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(Katon/Goken: Koreha)- Fire Style Strong Fist: This is....
Type: Attack
Rank: B Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user dashes at the opponent with all his speed while engulfing his fist and a blue fire. The blue fire is the culmination of intense heat and gathered friction from the full speed sprint. With the fire engulfed fist the user ducks down and delivers a quick yet blunt jab to the mid section of the opponent sending him flying back a few meters. The fire exits from the user's hand and travels behind the opponent. The user still moving forward performs one hand seal and vanishes into thin air, before he 'vanishes' he says the phrase "This is.....". (filling it in with whatever choice words fit the scenario) While in reality merged with the flame from earlier. Now in mid air the flame now engulfs the leg of the user who spins and kicks the opponent down into the ground. The lingering flame burns his body as he lay there in the ground.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

✦ Declined, has been done before. The only difference here is the color of the attack, and that words are spoken ✦

 

[Akasha]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Makuro kasō) - Fire Release: Macropyre
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: User of the technique will release katon chakra in radius of up to 7 meters around opponent heating up the ground to the points of melting (depending on the terrain that is in question) whilst emitting heat waves with a redish hue to them. Just touching the heated ground would make damage to the opponent. The heat waves would give a mirages so to say, similar to the wavy lines that could be seen whilst looking at longer distances in deserts. The katon chakra around opponent would be capable of staying there up to two turns before dispersing and thus loosing its effects. Interesting to the technique is that in the case of either opponent or user using technique based upon wind, the heatwave would burst into flames because of oxygen feeding fire.

Note: Lasts for two turn or until an explosion occurs
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha

(Tsubamesuu~ōmu) - Swallow Swarm
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (on impact) +20 if explosive tags detonate
Description: Utilizing her Paper ninjutsu skills, Konan will manipulate paper sheets to form few swallows. These swallows are made of both paper sheets and explosive tags and by performance of a single hand seal, the explosive tags can be detonated. Immediately upon their forming, they will hover towards the opponent with great speed, attacking from different angles. Although explosive tags can be detonated upon performance of a hand seal, they also explodes once a swallow hits the target. Because of how sharp their body is, they can easily penetrate through the body of opponent.

Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha
Note: Can only be used by Konan bios

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✦ Both Approved ✦

( Kami no monsutā ) - Mauris Monstrum
Type: Offensive / Supplementary / Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 ( +20 with usage of explosive tags )
Description: Mauris Monstrum, one of the strongest creation of Konan herself. Size of it can reach the size of Golem which is made upon performance of Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique although it can be smaller depending on how she wants for it to be used. Mauris can either be formed with usage of pre existing paper sheets or using paper sheets from Konan's body. If Konan is using paper sheets from her body, Mauris has to be in short range from her whereas if she is using pre existing paper source as to form it, she can make it anywhere on the battlefield where there is the source. Once monster has been formed, it will try and hunt down the opponent. Now interesting to it is that although its main task would be to hunt the opponent, Konan will be capable of changing its direction with hand gastures. One more thing that is pretty specific when it comes to this monster is that it is actually capable of multipling. This being said, if one attack was sent at it, it can just multply into two and in that way escape an attack. Keeping in mind that per each multiplication, power of a singular monster will decrease. Konan is also capable of reforming Mauris after multiplication for a cost of a move. Konan is capable of mixing explosive tags with paper sheets and make them explode upon performance of a single seal. Monster is capable of reaching Long range but where it will be formed will depend on the user. Using paper from the monster, Konan is capable of sending different kind of small projectiles at opponent, like kunais, shurikens. Paper sheets from the monster can also be used as a source for performance of other techniques although the power of the monster would decrease depending on the rank of the paper technique used.

Note: Can be used twice per battle
Note: Can not use paper ninjutsu of S rank during the turn in which the monster has been made as well as next turn.
Note: For the technique to be re-used there has to be at least one turn cooldown.
Note: Konan will be capable of only using paper ninjutsu in the turn in which it has been formed.
Note: Can only be used by Konan
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha
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-Declined- I won't accept the multiplication to avoid techniques part, also you threw the kunais forming from the paper of the monster in there which led to another problem, what would the rank of those kunais be? the technique is strong enough as it is. You need a massive amount of paper sheets to form a monster of this size, so i won't accept forming it from pre-existing paper sheets in the field, only from Konan's own body.

( Kami no monsutā ) - Mauris Monstrum
Type: Offensive / Supplementary / Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 ( +20 with usage of explosive tags )
Description: Mauris Monstrum, one of the strongest creation of Konan herself. Size of it can reach the size of Golem which is made upon performance of Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique although it can be smaller depending on how she wants for it to be used. Mauris can either be formed with usage of pre existing paper sheets or using paper sheets from Konan's body. If Konan is using paper sheets from her body, Mauris has to be in short range from her whereas if she is using pre existing paper source as to form it, she can make it up to mid range from her body should a sourse be within that distance. Because of the size of the Mauris, if Konan would to use paper sheets from the source, source itself has to be huge. Covering quite a big of an area of the battlefield. Sources of paper made by usage of

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, (Shikigami no Mai) - Dance of the Shikigami and similar will give Konan ability to form Mauris.Once monster has been formed, it will try and hunt down the opponent. Now interesting to it is that although its main task would be to hunt the opponent, Konan will be capable of changing its direction with hand gastures. Konan is also capable of reforming Mauris after multiplication for a cost of a move, only able to be done once. Konan is capable of mixing explosive tags with paper sheets and make them explode upon performance of a single seal. Monster is capable of reaching Long range but where it will be formed will depend on the user. Using paper from the monster, Konan is capable of sending different kind of small projectiles at opponent, like kunais, shurikens which will either be of D or C rank depending on their size and number. If up to 4 projectiles are sent, they'd be of D rank, whereas if up to 8 are sent, they'd be of C rank.. Paper sheets from the monster can also be used as a source for performance of other techniques although the power of the monster would decrease depending on the rank of the paper technique used.

Note: Can be used twice per battle
Note: Lasts 3 turns
Note: Can not use paper ninjutsu of S rank during the turn in which the monster has been made as well as next turn.
Note: For the technique to be re-used there has to be at least two turn cooldown.
Note: Konan will be capable of only using paper ninjutsu in the turn in which it has been formed.
Note: Can only be used by Konan
Note: Can only be Taught by Akasha

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[Shady Doctor]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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Fuuton: Sukai no kindan | Wind Style: The Sky's Forbidden Angel
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (-20)
Description:
The user draws blood from himself, seemingly as a sacrifice to the sky gods. After drawing blood and smearing it on his hand the user performs the Bird - Snake - Dragon hand seals and then creates a clone made of raw Fuuton chakra. The clone takes on the image of a white ghostly adult female angel that has a shining translucent body which sprouts bright white wings before ascending into the sky. The angel gets so far into the sky at such high speeds that it is out of sight within a moments notice, though the huge amount of chakra can still be sensed by sensors and seen by doujutsu. After staying in the sky collecting natural air from the sky (1full turn) the angel would dive down, heading straight at the opponent. The Angel's right hand would be extended downwards with its palm pointed down and open. As the angel comes down it grows from its original woman size in the matter of moments. The angel gradually grows 5 times in size, holding so much heavy, dense wind chakra that when it crashes down on a spot it covers a 15m area of impact, bluntly crushing anything in its path including the user if he's in the way. The impact on the area is very similar to when sakura hits the ground with her super strength, leveling the terrain around it.

• Only taught by Shady
• Usable once
• No wind rank jutsu above B-rank for 3 turns due to chakra strain

☼ Declined ☼

I'm not seeing why this is a F-rank technique. Seems almost like a wind version of Kirin with the 1 turn set up. I'd bring it down to S-rank.

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Fuuton: Sukai no kindan | Wind Style: Love in the Sky
Rank: S-rank
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user draws blood from himself, seemingly as a sacrifice to the sky gods. After drawing blood and smearing it on his hand the user performs the Bird - Snake - Dragon hand seals and then creates a clone made of raw Fuuton chakra. The clone takes on the image of a white ghostly adult female angel that has a shining translucent body which sprouts bright white wings before ascending into the sky. The angel gets so far into the sky at such high speeds that it is out of sight within a moments notice, though the huge amount of chakra can still be sensed by sensors and seen by doujutsu. After flying to the sky and collecting more wind around it the angel would dive down, heading straight at the opponent. The Angel's right hand would be extended downwards with its palm pointed down and open. As the angel comes down it grows from its original woman size in the matter of moments. The angel gradually grows 5 times in size, holding so much heavy, dense wind chakra that when it crashes down on a spot it covers a 15m area of impact, bluntly crushing anything in its path including the user if he's in the way. The impact on the area is very similar to when sakura hits the ground with her super strength, leveling the terrain around it.

• Only taught by Shady
• Usable twice
• No wind rank jutsu above A-rank in the same turn it's created or the next turn

✦ Approved ✦

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( Fuuton: Koisuru tenshi no soyokaze ) - Wind Release: Breeze of the beloved Cherub
Rank: A-Rank
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user starts by simply weaving together 3 hand seals (Monkey - Dragon - Rat) and molding his Fuuton chakra in the air around himself. With that done the user uses his Fuuton chakra to create a 2 1/2 foot tall, translucent cherub floating a meter or so above his head. The child-like cherub wears no clothing other than what covers its bottoms, and bares wings far past the size of the being itself. The cherub's wings span 10 feet from wing to wing and let off a light, cooling breeze with every flap of the wings. Upon creation, the cherub simply disappears in thin air; literally becoming nothing but thin air which scatters into the terrain as a breeze exactly like from the flapping of the wings. Now only being able to be tracked by doujutsu users or sensors, the cherub stealthily arrives near a designated target, whether it be the opponent himself or something else such as a summoning, stone golem etc etc. As another light breeze slides across the body of the opponent, the cherub rematerializes once again. The cherub now floating a meter above the target, just like when it was first created, has the wind it is made of explode. The cherub explodes in an outwards omnidirectional explosion; swiftly delivering a blunt blow of spinning wind that mangles the target and anything in a 5m radius. If the target is small enough I.e. a small summon, human etc. The cherub can wrap its large wings around the target before exploding. The powerful spinning wind itself is able to break through even solid structures within reasoning.

• Usable 3x per battle
• No wind techniques over A-rank next turn
• Only taught by Shady doctor

☼ Approved ☼

Removed the bit about materializing closer. Having something materialize right on top of someone is a no-no in my book.

( Fuuton: Koisen tenshi Nùn) - Wind Release: Gathering of the wicked Cherub
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Attack
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
This is the sister technique of ( Fuuton: Koisuru tenshi no soyokaze ) - Wind Release: Breeze of the beloved Cherub. The user starts by simply weaving together 5 hand seals (Monkey - Dragon - Rat - Dog - Tiger) and molding massive amounts of Fuuton chakra in the air around himself. With that done the user uses his Fuuton chakra to create multiple Cherubs (4), each being 2 1/2 feet tall like the original technique ll, and translucent, floating a meter or so above the users head in a square formation. The child-like cherubs wear no clothing other than what covers their bottoms, and bares wings far past the size of the beings themselves. The cherub's wings span 10 feet from wing to wing and let off a light, cooling breeze with every flap of the wings. Upon creation, the cherubs simply disappears in thin air, literally becoming nothing but thin air which scatters into the terrain as a breeze exactly like from the flapping of the wings, but unlike the original technique, these winds from the breeze picks up debri and dust from all around, acting like (Fūton: Kiryū Ranbu) - Wind Release: Air Current Wild Dance. Now only being able to be tracked by doujutsu users or sensors, the gang of cherubs stealthily arrives near a designated target, whether it be the opponent himself or something else such as a summoning, stone golem etc etc. As another light breeze slides across the body of the opponent, the cherubs rematerializes once again. The cherubs now floating a meter above the target, just like when they were first created, has the wind they are made of explode. The cherubs explodes in an outwards omnidirectional explosion; swiftly delivering a blunt blow of spinning wind that mangles the target and anything in a 5m radius. If the target is small enough I.e. a small summon, human etc. The cherub can wrap its large wings around the target before exploding. The powerful spinning wind itself is able to break through even solid structures within reasoning. Each cherub can materialize in different locations in order to attack multiple targets, each holding B-rank strength when exploding. To gain the full damage of the technique, the cherubs materialize near each other, holding hands as they appear; exploding in unison and creating a much larger 9x9m explosion that will devastate the area.

• Usable 2x per battle with 2 turn cool down
• No wind techniques can be used next turn and no A rank or higher wind jutsu the same turn
• Only taught by Shady doctor

✦ Approved, edited bits ✦

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( Fuuton: Rōringu· sutōn ) | Wind Style: Rolling Stone
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
Rōringu· sutōn is a wind release technique crafted for quick usage with high amounts of destructive potential. The user would begin by gathering wind chakra in the soles of his feet and in his throat at the same time. With the chakra built up for use, the user releases it with haste. While stomping on the floor, roaring forwards, and releasing the built chakra, two things happen. The wind chakra released from the soles of the feet is used to go in the ground and erupt; breaking the ground up to 10m in front of the user into chunks as if a massive earthquake ripped chunks out the earth (similar to when sakura hits the ground). As the wind released from the feet rips up the ground and sends chunks of rock upwards, the user also releases the chakra from his throat when roaring. The chakra released from the mouth is similar to pressure damage, though it holds a bit more destructive power and speed. The wind rages forward, ensnaring the chunks of rock and pushing them forward with great force; successfully creating a massive blast of wind and jagged rock. Due to the momentum the wind gives the rocks, when the technique collides with fire techniques the fire simply ignites the rocks, turning them to molten rocks flying at the opponent still. From the ground breaking so quickly upon the user stomping, it throws anyone within 8m off balance.

• Usable 2x
• No wind techniques over A-rank same turn or next
• only teachable by Shady

✦ Declined, this is a mix of existing customs ✦

 

[Howard]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

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(Kyuchirose: Toriyama) - Summoning: Toriyama
Type: Summoning
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A (+40 for offensive attack using copies)
Description: Toriyama is an extremely small kite small enough to fit into the palm of a person's hand. To summon him the user need only perform the seal of confrontation and draw some form of blood from his body. He can do very little offensively inside of battle but is great for recon and surveillance both due to his small size and his one and only ability. Most times he is just summoned for comedic relief or to reference an inside joke. He can be on the field indefinitely and has only one useful ability. He can create chakra based copies of himself that look like masses of blue chakra in his shape nearly a perfect silhouette of his small bird like form. They appear as what seem to be spirit animals/birds resembling Toriyama in every way only somewhat translucent/semi transparent being somewhat bluish.
These copies can be controlled by him and like shadow clones are connected to him in the same way when he disperses one or it is forcefully dispersed Toriyama gains all of the knowledge it has accumulated as well as the ability to create a new copy of himself. These copies can do very little outside of ramming into an opponent and causing a mild chakra explosion that can cause mild damage such as small lacerations, cuts, bruises and mild friction burns. Toriyama can only have three copies in play at any time however they can be anywhere as long as Toriyama himself is safe. If his concentration is broken he's dispersed or forced to move from his spot the copies disperse. While active Toriyama can share his vision, hearing and sense of touch with the copies seeing, hearing and feeling what they see, hear and feel but this takes immense concentration and while doing so Toriyama cannot relay the information or speak until he breaks this concentration thus losing the ability to see, hear and feel what the copies do for a short period of time. Toriyama can create and maintain a mental link to the summoner and can speak however doing so breaks his concentration nullifying the ability to see, hear and feel the copies during the time that he is speaking both mentally and physically to someone. This doesn't negate the ability to create and maintain the copies though and is a passive ability that doesn't count towards jutsu usage. Another ability the copies have is that it can take refuge inside the summoner's body or an allies body much to the same extent as chakra because that's what it is a mass of chakra.
This works a lot like what Minato did with Naruto the chakra lays dormant inside the summoner or ally until it is activated when this is done the chakra either releases returning to Toriyama thus alerting him to all of the information it has gather or creates a disturbance to the summoner's or allies chakra. This disturbance is enough to break low ranking genjutsu B rank and below. The chakra is activated either by Toriyama, the summoner/ally or a genjutsu that is set in place. Toriyama can do it mentally, the summoner or ally can do it by performing the seal of confrontation and a genjutsu put in place will activate it automatically without a trigger from Toriyama or the summoner/ally.
Notes:
-The summoner cannot have clones of any kind in play while Toriyama's chakra copies are active
-Can create and maintain three copies and can use the ability twice however creating the copies counts as a jutsu
-Can use the ability to see, hear and feel what the copies do three times per battle but must wait two turns between each use. This ability can last for two full turns allowing Toriyama to gather a vast amount of information in that time.

✦ Declined, too powerful and unreasonable. Summonings cannot last indefinitely, 4 turns is the max. Copies/clones made by Toriyama will count as a move per turn and he isn't going to be able to enter the user's body and release them from genjutsu. ✦

 

[Drackos]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Eien no Yunion) – The Eternal Union
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The Eternal Union is a special ring designed for the marriage of two lords dating back from before the time of the Sage of the Six Paths. The ring’s body is composed of platinum. At the top of the ring is a sapphire gemstone locked in place by four platinum ring guards. Holding those in place as the ring circles around are two serpents, one on each side. Their eyes are small diamonds surrounded by gold. The ring itself is indestructible being composed from the purest and strongest platinum in the known world. It is unknown who made the ring and when exactly. After hundreds of years of war the Yuki clan managed to obtain the ring and hold it in the clan. It became a tradition that when a new clan leader was named among the Yuki clan that the ring would pass to them. The ring itself holds power over water and represents the eternal bond between man and water. Overtime the special powers of the ring were revealed to the Yuki clan. However, upon the civil war in Kirigakure the ring was lost to the world. Eventually Drackos managed to recover the ring on the outskirts of Amegakure. How it ended up there is a mystery that shall never be solved. If the ring is stolen it will not be compatible with the chakra signature of the thief rendering the ring useless.
Moisture Absorption: The Eternal Union has the power to absorb moisture in the air over a short period of time. The user activates the Eternal Union’s moisture absorption ability by simply channeling their chakra into it. Over a period of two turns the Eternal Union will passively absorb moisture around the user. Once the two turns have passed the Eternal Union can infuse the moisture it absorbed into a jutsu of the user’s choosing causing it to gain +20 damage. During the time the Eternal Union is absorbing moisture the user may not activate any of the ring’s other abilities. Additionally, because of the surge of chakra, the user may not use a suiton above A-Rank for one turn after the user has released the moisture infused suiton technique.
Touch of Control: The Eternal Union’s second ability grants the user the power control over the state of their water techniques. The user will simply activate this technique by channeling suiton chakra into the ring and then immediately after using one of their own water techniques in conjunction with the ring. The ring then, according to the user’s will, will allow them to manipulate the state that their water technique is. This allows the user to change a water technique from being regular water to the state of oil, syrup, or mist.
Water Senbons: The most basic use of the Eternal Union which allows the user to create numerous senbons when they wave their hand and activate the technique. This creates up to 10 senbons. They are incredibly sharp and can easily pierce through flesh and stone. If the senbons do pierce the flesh they will release their form and send the chakra infused water into the opponent’s body causing them to undergo a brief genjutsu where they see and hear the user releasing more water senbons.
Tidal Wave: The user activates the deadliest ability of the Eternal Union by clapping their hands together and channeling chakra into the ring. Within seconds a massive tidal wave will form directly in front of the user. The tidal wave has devastating brute force strength and can break through many defenses and crush many obstacles. The technique is a forbidden ranked technique. The greatest drawback to the Tidal Wave is that after its usage the Eternal Union will no longer be able to be used for the remainder of the fight.
Note: Each ability of the Eternal Union is S-Rank and requires 40 chakra to be used. Each counts as a move of the user’s three jutsu per turn. The exception of this is the Tidal Wave ability which counts as a forbidden ranked technique and requires 50 chakra which will fully exhaust the ring.
Note: Each ability of the Eternal Union can be used twice. However the user is only able to use the Eternal Union three times. The exception to this is Tidal Wave which will fully exhaust the ring regardless and can only be used once.
Note: The moisture absorption ability does not enhance the abilities of the Eternal Union.
Note: The turn where the moisture absorption ability does not count as one of the two turns the ring needs to absorb moisture. The ring needs two full turns to allow for absorbtion. On the third turn the user can utilize this moisture. The user can also wait until a later point to use the moisture.
Note: The ring is indestructible and can only be used by Drackos and those he teaches.
Note: If the ring is stolen it will not be compatible with the chakra signature of the thief and be rendered useless.

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(Senkō Kibaku Fuda) – Flash Bomb Exploding Tag
Rank: N/A
Type: Offensive
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A special explosive tag developed by Drackos during his time in Otogakure for tactical warfare and breaching doors in tactical missions. This is nearly identical to the standard issued paper bomb with minute differences. The kanji for "explode" is replaced by "burst". Adjacent to that is the kanji for "flash". The paper bomb itself is .25 inches longer. Upon detonation the tag will also release a flash of flight exactly like a regular flash bomb which will blind the victim and user if their eyes are not shielded from the blast. The damage dealt by this paper tag is equivalent to three regular paper bombs. The user detonates this tag by channeling their chakra into it as they would a normal paper tag. These tags can be used as a replacement for jutsu that require regular paper bombs.
Note: Biographies that use this must state that they carry this special paper tag on their person.

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(Ajisashi Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kuroi Uingu Ren) – Ajisashi Summoning Technique: Black Wing Ren
Rank: S
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Ren is one of the five elders of the Ajisashi. She, like her companions, holds the same values that the Ajisashi as a population do. However she twists them. Her personality is darker and slightly more twisted than the other Ajisashi. She will still retain absolute loyalty to her summoner and companions. However, when in combat she becomes sadistic and silently vicious. Ren’s appearance, matching her personality, is almost entirely black. Her body and wings are black while her talons and beak are a dark grey. Her eyes are a dark blue with a small red center. Her wing span is a mere 5.5 meters which is small compared to most Ajisashi elders. She is only capable of carrying one person in flight. Among the five elders Ren is repudiated to be the darkest and is frequently avoided by other Ajisashi out of fear, despite their understanding that she is still loyal to her people and summoners. Ren is fully capable of speech and is very sharp and intelligent. She is noted to be unnaturally proficient with Genjutsu among the Ajisashi allowing her to use genjutsu that require no hand seals up to B-Rank. Her most fearsome ability however is her usage of a trait common to all Ajisashi – parasites. Ren is capable of releasing spheres of parasite infested water from her mouth, similar to Water Release: Gunshot (as if it was released by a human). The parasites are capable of placing the target in a painful S-Rank genjutsu while damaging their body significantly. The water released from her mouth is infested with parasites found in her stomach and digestive track, a trait common to Ajisashi. The force of the water is not strong enough to break bones but it can knock someone off their feet. The technique itself can release up to five spheres of water. Each sphere released will be smaller in size however in total it will create a sphere of water about the size of Water Release: Gunshot. When the sphere makes contact with its target the microscopic parasites will eat through the skin causing irritation. Depending on where the parasite makes contact the genjutsu will take more time to take effect as the parasites need to release their chakra into the blood stream and have it reach the brain. Once the genjutsu activates it will take five (5) turns for the parasites to eat all tissue in the localized area where the infested sphere of water struck. This tissue can include the muscle, fibers, ligaments, brain tissue, etc. The parasites are capable of killing the target depending on the impact location. During this time the victim will be suffering from the effects of the genjutsu. While the parasites eat away at the localized area the genjutsu will cause the victim to experience a full body pain as if the parasites had infested their entire body. It will also cause the user to see hallucinations in their agony which has a large range of gruesome images.
Note: Can be summoned once.
Note: The genjutsu ability requires 40 chakra (S-Rank technique).
Note: Ren’s genjutsu ability can be used once and can release up to five spheres of water.
Note: The water, while not capable of breaking bones or killing on impact, can easily knock a target off their feet.
Note: Ren can remain on the field for four turns.
Note: If the water makes contact in an area from below the waist the genjutsu will require 2 additional turns before it can take effect.
Note: If the water makes contact in an area from waist and above the genjutsu will require 1 additional turn before it can take effect.
Note: The genjutsu will span over five turns over which the parasites will eat away at the localized area causing a range of affects that can include death.

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✦ All Declined, the first is toooooo OPed, DNR in any form, the second can be done with just using flash and explosive tags, no need to waste a jutsu slot and the third is too much and unreasonable. You say it uses genjutsu up to B rank but how? Every genjutsu needs a trigger. And the parasite stuff makes little sense and is essentially you trying to use two types of animals at once. Plus the "genjutsu" you describe at the end isn't even a genjutsu and is severely OPed at that. ✦

 

[Negative Knight]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Ninjutsu: Ooi no Kumori) – Ninja Art: Shroud of Shadows
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A (+10 chakra cost to techniques used)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is the daughter technique to the Hiding in Camouflage technique. The user will activate an ability which allows them to control how light is reflected around their own techniques for the next three turns. The visibility of a technique can be removed entirely or the technique can be granted a certain degree of transparency. Making techniques invisible will force the opponent to counter them through the use of their other senses (e.g. feeling the heat resonating from fire-based techniques or the vibrations produced by the surfacing of earth techniques). Using this technique to make a technique fairly transparent will not have many immediate effects. The technique will become harder to notice with the naked eye but such is still possible. The intended effect of making techniques transparent/translucent are two-fold. The user will benefit as he/she will be capable of seeing through their own techniques, meaning jutsus which sever the line of sight will no longer be risky to use e.g. erecting a defensive wall of earth. On the other hand, the opponent may believe the technique is an illusionary one as it appears to lack the vividness of an actual technique. They may mistake it for a low-level or poorly executed genjutsu. Activating this ability is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever. The reason this technique's activation is instant is because stand alone it does not do anything and its effects are only initiated when the user utilizes another jutsu. This technique can only be used on techniques which can normally be perceived through the use of at least one other sense (excluding touch unless the technique is non-offensive and does not deal any damage). The usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills.

Note: Lasts three turns
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight

Pending, I wouldn't allow this personally, but leaving for someone else

☼ Declined DNR ☼

Too easily exploitable, and also kind of goes into Light CE territory.

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Removed everything about transparency and remained true to the technique this jutsu is based on (invisibility).

(Ninjutsu: Ooi no Kumori) – Ninja Art: Shroud of Shadows
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A (+10 chakra cost to techniques used)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is the daughter technique to the Hiding in Camouflage technique. The user will activate an ability which allows them to control how light is reflected around their own techniques for the next three turns. This is done to remove the visibility of a technique entirely. Making techniques invisible will force the opponent to counter them through the use of their other senses (e.g. feeling the heat resonating from fire-based techniques or the vibrations produced by the surfacing of earth techniques). The user will benefit as he/she will be capable of seeing through their own techniques, meaning jutsus which sever the line of sight will no longer be risky to use e.g. erecting a defensive wall of earth. Activating this ability is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever. The reason this technique's activation is instant is because stand alone it does not do anything and its effects are only initiated when the user utilizes another jutsu. This technique can only be used on techniques which can normally be perceived through the use of at least one other sense (excluding touch unless the technique is non-offensive and does not deal any damage). This means under normal circumstances the opponent should still be capable of perceiving the technique without incurring any sort of damage. The usefulness of this ability can be entirely negated by those with special vision or sensory skills.

Note: Lasts three turns
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight

✦ Pending, leaving for Typhon ✦

☼ Declined ☼

I'm still having a very difficult time believing this can ever be approvable. There are way too many techniques out there both canon and custom to think there aren't at least a few that will be completely OP if made invisible. On top of that what you think can be normally perceived through the use of another sense might not be the same as the person you're fighting, or a mod checking, which can only lead to arguments. I'll give you one more shot at it, but I'm skeptical of this having any hope.

(Jiongu: Akumu no Yabun) – Earth Grudge Fear: Nightmares of Nyx
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50 (-20 chakra per turn)
Damage Points: N/A (-40 damage after use)
Description: Kakuzu will channel his chakra throughout the dark threads within his body, to continuously rearrange the position's of his masks, and the spots in which they reside. This causes a massive disturbance in the user's chakra system, making this technique capable of even dispelling Genjutsu techniques of the highest caliber. Any illusionary techniques the user was once under the effect of will systemically be broken, the moment the user activates this jutsu, regardless of the rank of the genjutsu technique. This happens due to the body undergoing a process of sporadic alterations, making their chakra system too unstable to sustain the effects of any foreign chakra residing in the body. As long as this jutsu is active, any genjutsus cast on the user will be instantly broken and any continuous genjutsus acting will rendered useless until this jutsu is manually deactivated. To an outside observer, the user's upper body will appear to shift and contort in a random manner, but otherwise this technique has no visible effects. However, this technique is a very double-edged sword as they user cannot perform any Genjutsus whilst this technique is active. Nor can they create any clones or release any masks while this is active. Despite having no definite usage limit (until the user runs out of chakra), the user's arsenal is limited considerably until this technique's deactivation.

Note: Lasts until deactivated
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Does not work on MS level Genjutsu

☼ Declined ☼

Unlimited immunity to (almost) all genjutsu is too much.

(Jiongu: Akumu no Yabun) – Earth Grudge Fear: Nightmares of Nyx
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 50 (-20 chakra per turn)
Damage Points: N/A (-40 damage after use)
Description: Kakuzu will channel his chakra throughout the dark threads within his body, to continuously rearrange the position's of his masks, and the spots in which they reside. This causes a massive disturbance in the user's chakra system, making this technique capable of even dispelling Genjutsu techniques of the highest caliber. Any illusionary techniques the user was once under the effect of will systemically be broken, the moment the user activates this jutsu, regardless of the rank of the genjutsu technique. This happens due to the body undergoing a process of sporadic alterations, making their chakra system too unstable to sustain the effects of any foreign chakra residing in the body. As long as this jutsu is active, any genjutsus cast on the user will be instantly broken and any continuous genjutsus acting will rendered useless until this jutsu is manually deactivated. To an outside observer, the user's upper body will appear to shift and contort in a random manner, but otherwise this technique has no visible effects. However, this technique is a very double-edged sword as they user cannot perform any Genjutsus whilst this technique is active. Nor can they create any clones or release any masks while this is active.

Note: Lasts for four turns
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Does not work on MS level Genjutsu

✦ Declined, not being able to perform genjutsu is hardly a valid drawback for this Forbidden ranked jutsu. Your chakra system is constantly changing sporadically, why would that have any effect on placing another person in a genjutsu? Since the chakra system is constantly in flux, a restriction that would make sense is one that causes damage/prevents you from using something due to this fluctuation. No S or F ranks makes while this is active makes more sense than no gens, it just seems like a way to prevent being caught by one. ✦

(Fuuton: Manako no Shippuu) – Wind Release: Eye of the Gale
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A (+20 damage to anything which moves through the portal)
Description: The user will perform the Rat Handseal before focusing their fuuton chakra into the air at any location on the battlefield to generate a small, flat disc-shaped portal of wind, either near their location or the opponent's. A unique ability possessed by the portal of wind is any solid/liquid objects, constructs or techniques passing through it will have their cutting capabilities greatly amplified, as the disc of wind provides them with a green coating of sharp wind chakra much like the one produced in Wind Release: Vacuum Blade. The process in which this happens is similar to Danzo's technique (Vacuum Blade), where the blowing of fuuton chakra onto the weapon is substituted by the projectile(s) passing through the portal of wind. The layer of wind will amplify a construct's cutting properties to the extent, a thrown rock will become as destructive as a bullet, making this technique a very formidable weapon despite its non-offensive nature. This technique will only amplify the cutting capabilities of solid or liquid constructs e.g. rocks, kunai, bullets of water and etc, whilst only blocking/weakening any Lightning-based elements which attempt to pass through it. One disadvantage to the technique is, the opponent can also benefit from this technique if their thrown projectiles or techniques manage to pass through the portal, making this jutsu a very double-edged sword. The portal itself can have a maximum diameter of five meters and for any solid/liquid constructs to benefit from the cutting enhancement, they must be projectiles capable of fitting through it completely. Since this technique serves to imbue objects and techniques with a coating of wind chakra, they will become dual elemental techniques e.g. Wind/Earth or Wind/Water.

Note: Lasts for two turns
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
Note: Can only be used four times per battle
Note: Cool down time of two turns in between uses
Note: Does not enhance speed of projectiles/techniques
Note: Only amplifies cutting capabilities of solid or liquid constructs
Note: Does not affect Fire or Wind-based techniques
Note: Portal of wind can be created a maximum of ten meters away from the user

X-Pending-X For scorps

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 Approved  Interesting. I trust you won't abuse it.

(Fuuton: Yajuu no Sora) – Wind Release: Scourge of the Sky
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A (+20 damage to anything which moves through the portal)
Description: This technique is the brother technique to 'Wind Release: Eye of the Gale'. The user will focus their fuuton chakra into the air at any location on the battlefield to generate a small, flat disc-shaped portal of wind, either near their location or the opponent's. A unique ability possessed by the portal of wind is any solid-like/liquid objects, constructs or techniques passing through it will have their raw speed greatly amplified, as the disc of wind both propels them forward with an incredible level of force and provides the construct with a streamlined coating of air. The process in which this happens is similar to Danzo's technique (Vacuum Blade), where the blowing of fuuton chakra onto the weapon is substituted by the projectile(s) passing through the portal of wind. The layer of wind will amplify a construct's speed to the extent, normal speed projectiles will become barely trackable blurs to Non-doijutsu users while faster techniques (already barely trackable to the human eye) will become too fast to be seen at all. Despite this technique's non-offensive nature, the speed boost provides the projectile(s) with an add level of force/momentum, meaning this technique will also boost the damage done by the said technique. A thrown rock will become as forceful as a bullet after traversing through the 'portal', making this technique a very formidable weapon to wield. This technique will only amplify the speed (and by extension the impact of force) of solid, solid-like and liquid constructs e.g. rocks, fireballs, bullets of water and etc, whilst only blocking/weakening any Lightning-based elements which attempt to pass through it. One disadvantage to the technique is, the opponent can also benefit from this technique if their thrown projectiles or techniques manage to pass through the portal, making this jutsu a very double-edged sword. The portal itself can have a maximum diameter of five meters and for any solid/liquid constructs to benefit from the speed enhancement, they must be projectiles capable of fitting through it completely. Since this technique serves to imbue objects and techniques with a coating of wind chakra, they will become dual elemental techniques (unless the imbued technique is also of the Wind nature) e.g. Wind/Earth, Wind/Water or Wind/Fire.

Note: Lasts for two turns
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
Note: Can only be used four times per battle
Note: Cool down time of two turns in between uses

✦ Declined, colored is too vague to allow and doesn't make much sense either. If something is sent through a tunnel that has, say, a massive powered windmill at the end that generates 50 mph speeds, then things going through it would be sped up to 50 mph at the max. You need a clearly defined max speed. Actually, just a speed that anything going through this will possess because that wording will lead to later issue over what moves how fast. Also, if fire passes through the wind, then it wouldn't be a wind + fire combo, but rather an empowered fire jutsu. ✦

 

[Rayder]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Seputon Riben-Sei) - Water Release: Septon's Convenience
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A (+10 chakra to Water Release techniques)
Damage:N/A
Description: The user will activate an ability which allows them to extract water from the battlefield (for the use of techniques) when its not readily available for the next three turns. Through expending some extra chakra, the user can extract the water residing in mud, swamp, oil and similar liquids. Once the water content of the targeted semi-solid/liquid has been depleted, it will lose its watery consistency. Swamp and mud sources will harden into rock once they're devoid of water content and other liquids will simply leave a residue of miscellaneous by-products. Size is taken into regard so large-scale water jutsus cannot be made from a small puddle.Activating this ability is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever. The reason this technique's activation is instant is because stand alone it does not do anything and its effects are only initiated when the user utilizes a Water Release technique.

Note: Lasts three turns
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Danzo

✦ Declined, this is just extraction of earth, water based items into water, something I remember seeing before, though i cant recall if it was approved or not. Plus, I wouldn't allow this with earth based jutsu anyway, it's just a method of getting around using water jutsu with no water source. ✦

Suiton: Kuroku natta Doshaburi|Water Release: Blackened Downpour
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will send their suiton chakra into the air, creating a pale blue portal above their opponent. The portal is almost transparent and is made 10 meters above the opponent and is 10 meters wide. The portal begins releasing droplets of oil down onto the area below it and these hundreds of droplets would soak the opponent and leave the terrain around them soaked in oil. The droplets cover a 10 meter radius around the opponent. Similar to the cannon Black Clouds technique however the main difference between this technique and that technique is that this one soaks a large part of the environment consistently for a turn while the Black Clouds technique just pours a momentary drizzle onto the opponent. The technique would leave the opponent covered in oil thus any fire techniques which are released from their body would only burn themselves and the large pools of oil under and around them would mean any fire techniques the user uses wouldn't even have to reach the opponent, only needing to reach the oil, to attack them. The oil is infused with the users chakra so cannot be manipulated by the opponent. The portal remains open for just a turn and once that turn is done the portal closes but the area remains filled with oil and the opponent remains drenched in it too. The best way to counter this jutsu is by destroying the portal itself as merely pushing the oil away from you would only provide a momentary relief, as the downpour is constant for the whole turn and would simply fill up the area again in that time.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: No water techniques above S-rank while its active
Note: Can only be taught by Danzo

✦ Declined, too similar to existing canons and customs. And no to this portal stuff as well..I've seen enough of them and I'm not approving any more portal based jutsu. ✦

Ranton: Kuraudo Detonat| Storm Release: Cloud Detonation
Type; Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user forms two hand seals and focuses his chakra on a cloud that was created by a storm jutsu and then causes the cloud to suddenly detonate. It isn't any normal explosion however and instead the detonation makes the cloud give off unfocused electricity up to short range of the cloud, which is able to paralyze anything it comes in contact with and also leaves a small pool of water where the cloud was. The pool of water isn't chakra infused but can be used as a water source. This is because of the mixed water and lightning chakra behind storm release. This can be used on multiple clouds if those clouds are all one jutsu. If the clouds are separate jutsus then the user would have to use this technique more than once if they wish to explode them all.

Note: Must have Storm mastered
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Can not use Storm above S-Rank for a turn after detonation
Note: All storm ranks except Forbidden can be detonated.
Note: Cannot be used on the laser variant of storm

Declined
If the cloud detonates unfocused lightning up to short range, why is the range of this jutsu short to long then? Also, make it one cloud only since they can vary in size and I don't want any issues to come up with usage.

Ranton: Kuraudo Detonat| Storm Release: Cloud Detonation
Type; Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user forms two hand seals and focuses his chakra on a cloud that was created by a storm jutsu and then causes the cloud to suddenly detonate. It isn't any normal explosion however and instead the detonation makes the cloud give off unfocused electricity up to short range of the cloud, which is able to paralyze anything it comes in contact with and also leaves a pool of water where the cloud was. The pool of water isn't chakra infused but can be used as a water source and is of decent length but not too deep. This is because of the mixed water and lightning chakra behind storm release. It can only be used on one cloud only each time, and the technique must be performed again to work on another cloud.

Note: Must have Storm mastered.
Note: Can only be used three times with a one turn break in between usages.
Note: Can not use Storm above S-Rank for a turn after detonation.
Note: All storm ranks except Forbidden can be detonated.
Note: Cannot be used on the laser variant of storm.

✦ Approved ✦

 

[Kirikoe]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Tentai-fū no manto) - Celestial Wind Cloak
Rank: S
Type: Defensive, Supplementary, Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (-10 each round to sustain)
Damage: N/A (+20 to taijutsu)
Desciption: The user wraps himself in an aura of wind making himself much lighter and agile causing the users speed to increase very similar to the point of rock lee without weights due to the aura of the wind it allows the user to glide as he moves, whiles coated in the wind cloak the user himself becomes as sharp as a blade with the potential to cut through something as tough as even stone however this also means allies cannot touch you while this technique is activated due to the sharp aura. While coated in the wind cloak the user becomes immune to lightning techniques of S-Rank and below due to the wind around the body, this is because the wind around the body acts as an insulator so lightning won't flow through it, protecting the user. This technique can be cancelled at any time by the user.

- Technique lasts 3 turns
- Can only be used three times
- 2 turns cooldown between usage
- negates the use of other elemental styles whiles the technique is active
- Can only be taught by Kirikoe

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(Supairaru-fū parusu) - Spiral Wind Pulse
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The user gathers a lot of wind chakra into the palm of their hands and begin to rotate it so that it spirals and condenses the spiraling wind into a flattened shape, The spiral is flat in the palm of your hand, it is possible to also focus the technique into your elbows, once the wind has been gathered a simple light touch/strike to anything will make the object or enemy violently be forced away by an outward pulse like wave which does not affect the user in any way, the technique is strong enough to completely uproot and force away a large tree or boulder and even knock away large summons although a much less distance, when used the pulse will resonate throughout their body and damage them internally to the point they are incapacitated if hit in the right area.

-Can be used 4 times per battle
-Can only be taught by Kirikoe

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(Fuuton - Geirufōsudoragon) Wind style - Gale Force Dragon
Type:Offensive/defensive
Rank:S
Range:Short - Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: The user inhales a large amount of air and gathers it within their lungs during which they make a series of 4 handseals before finally breathing out a steady stream of wind which as it passes the user's lips takes the form of a chinese styled dragon made of thousands of sharp blades. Its jaw being the size of an average human, the dragon can be maneuvered according to the user's will whiles they are still exhaling and can make it move as if it was a real dragon, once the user stop exhaling they lose all control of the dragon however the dragon remains and would proceed to charge in the direction it was last facing when the user disconnects from it, the dragon can reach long range before disconnecting from the user unwillingly and becomes unmanipulatable.

As the dragon charges towards the opponent at high speeds, once it gets in range, it opens its wide jaws without slowing down and bites down on the opponent with large sharp teeth which stabs the opponent like a sharp blade would and continues to charge through the opponent damaging them with the thousands of sharp blades its body is created of as it passes through them tearing them apart the blades of the dragon are so fine and thin that it would also cause the inside of the body to be torn apart.

-Can only be used twice
-Cannot use S-rank and above wind release the following turn
-Can only be taught by Kirikoe

✦ Declined, all done before. The first and last are rather detailed, but generic wind jutsu that have been made countless times while the middle is more of less a revised rasengan variant, something not allowed anymore, and that has been beaten into the ground by past submissions that have done this ✦

 

[Robot Boy]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Katon: Reijingu Tsuchi Doraibu) – Fire Release: Raging Earth Drive
Type:Offensive
Rank: S
Range:Long
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: Is a larger variant of the raging drive technique. The user will weave the tiger hand-seal and stomp on the ground, having huge amounts of fire rise along the ground and is shot upward in the form a giant vertical column of fire instead of the three columns with the raging drive technique, which rises around the targets. The column forms around and traps the targets instead of rising underneath them and burning them. The user then manipulate the column and create a giant orb of fire that rises above the targets and then, turns into a giant lance of fire that descends onto the targets, incinerating them. The column when formed is several meters in height and covers a 5 meter radius.
-Useable twice per battle with a 2 turn cooldown period in between usages.
-No S-rank and above fire techniques next turn

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(Te-ru Shikon) - Tail Fang
Type:Defensive
Rank:B
Range:short
Chakra:20
Damage:n/a
Description: The Inuzuka’s ninken will channel chakra into and around its tail, 'enlarging' it , and creating a dense coat as well as a second ‘tail’ to the extent that it can be used as a shield to protect its own body or an ally, blocking physical attacks up to C-rank. When performing it, the ninken twirls its tails around like rotary blades, spinning them furiously and causing air currents to form around it, making it resemble a mini Tsūga.
-Can be used up to four times
-Can only be used by a ninken or in one of the wolf transformations

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(Chimeiteki Keiteki: Ohitsuji Kujiku) –Fatal Horn: Ram Crush
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/a
Damage: 60
Description: Using Fatal horns features and ability, the user will start by assaulting the target delivering three strikes, by bouncing the ball on either of the hammer’s sides before, batting it. Then, he follows up with four strikes using the hammer and ball separately by disconnecting them. After that, the user will finish by slamming fatal horn into the target, and use the hammers extending mechanism to send the target backward.
Notes:
-Can only be used with Fatal Horn.
-Useable up to three times per battle.

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 Declined  This is something you can do in freeform and you're simply making it a technique for not real reason. And I don't see how this is A-Rank in any way.

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(Chimeiteki Keiteki: Ohitsuji Kujiku) –Fatal Horn: Ram Crush
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short(Mid if used with the extending mechanism)
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will take fatal horn, coat the head in fire chakra, and surround its horns with spheres of fire that swirl around it. The user will then thrust fatal horn into the target, slamming the target with significant force. The horns are four meters long and are covered completely.

Notes:
-Can only be used with Fatal Horn.
-Useable up to three times per battle.

✦ All Approved, edited bits of them ✦

 

[Bloo]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Hyouton: Kōri no Metsuaku - Shikyo Hana) Ice Release: Ice Devil Slayers - Death Blossom
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will first perform one hand seal. Then the user will freeze the moisture around the target or targets. The moisture will freeze into the shape of a rose bud. The rose bud is three meters in diameter and five meters tall. The rose bud can be used both for offensive and defensive purposes. The offensive capabilities come from the user performing another hand seal and causing the rose to implode in on itself. This causes the rose to break into many small but sharp pieces. The pieces, due to the explosion, are shot inward toward the target. The defensive capabilities are from the user causing the rose bud to form around them protecting them from attack. If used as defense the user has the option to cause only half of the rose bud to form so it doesn't trap the user. Also if water comes into contact with the rose bud it will freeze instantly.

-Usable twice a battle
-No ice S rank and above rest of the turn and next.
-Only taught by Bloo.

Declined
Hold on, can't say I'm not confused. At first, I saw this as purely defensive and for the user, but some clarifications. For an offensive aspect, you form this around targets, but for a defensive aspect, you form it around yourself. But if you form it around itself, does it mean that it can technically "float" over to the enemy to explode and vice versa?

(Hyouton: Kōri no Metsuaku - Shikyo Hana) Ice Release: Ice Devil Slayers - Death Blossom
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will first perform one hand seal. Then the user will freeze the moisture around the target or targets. The moisture will freeze into the shape of a rose bud. The rose bud is three meters in diameter and five meters tall. The rose bud can be used both for offensive and defensive purposes. The offensive capabilities come from the user performing another optional hand seal and causing the rose to implode in on itself. This causes the rose to break into many small but sharp pieces. The pieces, due to the explosion, are shot inward toward the target. The defensive capabilities are from the user causing the rose bud to form around them protecting them from attack. If used as defense the user has the option to cause only half of the rose bud to form so it doesn't trap the user. Also if water comes into contact with the rose bud it will freeze instantly.

-Usable twice a battle
-No ice S rank and above rest of the turn and next.
-The dome is stationary no matter where its formed.
-Only taught by Bloo.

(Hyouton: Kōri no Metsuaku - Mune no Roze) Ice Release: Ice Devil Slayers - Will of Roses
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will perform one hand seal. After performing the hand seal the user will freeze the moisture in the air around them. The user will shape the moisture into rose buds. Each rose buds are each half a meter wide at the base. The user will create three clusters of rose buds. Each cluster can have up five rose buds. The user can create a maximum of fifteen rose buds. The cluster of rose buds will float around the user. The rose buds can be used for many purposes. The user can use the clusters as a shield to defend from attacks. The user can use the clusters to stand on and allow flight to dodge techs. The user can have the clusters form a triangle and fire a beam of Ice. The ice beam is sub zero in temperature and will freeze on contact.

-Usable twice.
-Lasts three turns.
-No S rank ice while active.
-The beam is A rank in strength and can only be used once as the rose buds disintegrate once the beam is fired.
-Only taught by Bloo.

Declined, no to the beam for one. And no to 15 half a meter size rose buds. At max, that covers 7 meters, the entire short range and half of mid range. Cant use Ice of S rank and above next turn also.

(Hyouton: Kōri no Metsuaku - Mune no Roze) Ice Release: Ice Devil Slayers - Will of Roses
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 60
Description:
The user will perform one hand seal. After performing the hand seal the user will freeze the moisture in the air around them. The user will shape the moisture into rose buds. Each rose buds are each half a meter wide at the base. The user will create three clusters of rose buds. Each cluster can have up five rose buds. The user can create a maximum of fifteen rose buds, these clusters can't move farther than short range away from the user. The cluster of rose buds will float around the user. The rose buds can be used for many purposes. The user can use the clusters as a shield to defend from attacks. The user can use the clusters to stand on and allow flight to dodge techs.

-Usable twice.
-Lasts three turns.
-No S rank ice this turn and next.
-Only taught by Bloo.

✦ Both Declined, you dont have a current Ice bio ✦

 

[Yashiro]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Genjutsu: Spasticity) - Illusion Technique: Spasticity

Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs a set of 4 hand seals and casts the target within an illusion, In said illusion the target would see it starting to rain across the entire battlefield, as the droplets of rain touches the targets body it undergoes a drastic change. The target would experience an altered skeletal muscle performance in his/her muscle tone, like an unusual "tightness", stiffness and/or "pull" of the muscles, making it hard for the target to grasp things like kunai's, swords etc, along with failure to perform hand seals and/or move around correctly. This change in body structure within the illusion would trick the opponents brain into believing that grasping things and performing handseals in reality is just as difficult, resulting in failure to perform hand seals and/or move around correctly.
Note - Can only be used twice per battle.
- Effects of the illusion lasts for a total of 2 turns unless released.
- The user would have to either perform the Rain Tiger At Will Technique after casting this illusion, or utilize other means to cause droplets of water to come into contact with the target's body.
- No genjutsu may be used in the following turn.

Declined, Why is this offensive? Nothing about this is offensive. Also, make it last one turn and I see no reason the restriction related to Rain Tiger needs to be posted.

(Genjutsu: Spasticity) - Illusion Technique: Spasticity

Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs a set of 4 hand seals and casts the target within an illusion, In said illusion the target would see it starting to rain across the entire battlefield, as the droplets of rain touches the targets body it undergoes a drastic change. The target would experience an altered skeletal muscle performance in his/her muscle tone, like an unusual "tightness", stiffness and/or "pull" of the muscles, making it hard for the target to grasp things like kunai's, swords etc, along with failure to perform hand seals and/or move around correctly. This change in body structure within the illusion would trick the opponents brain into believing that grasping things and performing handseals in reality is just as difficult, resulting in failure to perform hand seals and/or proper movement
Note - Can only be used twice per battle.
- Effects of the illusion lasts for an entire turn.
- No genjutsu may be used in the following turn.

✦ Approved ✦
(Lightning Release: Hundred Hands Slap) - Raiton: Hyaku-te no hirateuchi

Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user at first gathers and focuses a large amount of condensed and compressed lightning release chakra to both of his hands and arms, he then performs open palmed slaps toward the target rapidly whilst simultaneously releasing the lightning chakra and causing the outcome of the rapid punching to happen rather faster than usual as well as being more sharp as opposed to being powerful slaps. Each strike appears as lance/spear strikes with the same cutting potential due to the piercing power of the lightning. The lightning also enhances the speed of the strikes allowing a hundred slaps to be performed in under 10 seconds.
Note - Can be used twice per battle.
- No lightning in the same turn or lightning above A Rank in the following turn.

✦ Declined, this clashes with both custom abilities as well as being OPed, 100 strikes in 10 seconds? That roughly equates to 10 hits a second, at speeds one would not be able to counter all of them. With just lightning chakra, this isn't possible outside of enhancing your speed completely, much akin to the Raikage's armors. ✦

Summoning Animal: Synanceia (Stonefish)
Scroll Owner: Yashiro.
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing: N/A
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract: N/A
Description and background:

Synanceia is a genus of fish of the family Synanceiidae, the Stonefishes, whose members are venomous, dangerous, and even fatal to humans. It is one of the most venomous fish currently known in the world. They are found in the coastal regions of Indo-Pacific oceans as well as off the coast of Florida and in the Caribbean.

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Synanceia are primarily marine, though some species are known to live in rivers. Its species have potent neurotoxins secreted from glands at the base of their needle-like dorsal fin spines which stick up when disturbed or threatened. The vernacular name of the species, the stonefish, derives from the stonefish's ability to camouflage itself with a grey and mottled color similar to the color of a stone. Swimmers may not notice them, and may inadvertently step on them, triggering a sting. When the stonefish is disturbed, it may inject an amount of venom proportional to the amount of pressure applied to it.

Since the Stonefish are marine animals they require a water source in order to be summoned or can summon a water source with themselves, if none is on the battlefield. If being summoned in a water source they can be summoned up to mid range from the user, however, if they are summoned with a water source then it can only be done up to short range form the user. Stonefish are experts at camouflage which enables them to change color to match their habitat, however, this ability only pertains to water and earth/muddy environments. They mostly range from a few inches to a couple of meters in size, while the boss summon is ten meters in length. Stonefish have a very unique chakra circulatory system which allows them to produce and manipulate water and earth techniques as well as produce their unique venom from their bodies. They are also considered genjutsu masters and capable of producing powerful and unique illusions. Since they don't have hands they use their unique needle-like dorsal fins to perform hand seals for genjutsu and elemental techniques requiring hand seal performances.

✦ Declined, I actually researched Stonefish in the past. They are indeed venomous, but after being heated, this venom is harmless in real life, something I'd expect translates over for them. And this camouflaging ability isn't going to mean they can passively change the color of their body. Also, no to the part about Earth and Water techniques. Summonings cannot use more than one element, and that implies they have both earth and water. And a definite no to the casting genjutsus through their dorsal fins, that is a clear no ✦

 

[Noni]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

(Suiton: Lentska Ame)- Water Release: Lentesco Rain
Type: Offense
Rank: S
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first start out by gathering a large sum of water chakra and send the chakra up in the atmosphere to create simple rain clouds, if however rain clouds are not already there. When the clouds are created or the chakra is sent towards already made rain clouds, the user will simply create a quick set of rain drops to fall onto the battlefield. The rain sent is a small amount, almost like a quick drizzle. In normal circumstances the opponent can notice the small rain time duration, however masking the technique by using already falling rain will mask the intended rain that has the user's own chakra within it, creating a stealthy combination. The user can also aim where the rain will be sent and it will cover up to a five meter radius. When the rain comes into contact with the opponent, it will almost seem like natural rain, however it contains a special property. The rain droplets, will take on a similar property of Water Release: Grudge Rain Technique, where in the water will begin to slowly drain the chakra of the opponent, however the chakra absorbed will not go to waist, for every turn the water absorbs the chakra, it will take on an adhesive property, slowly sticking onto the opponent and restricting their movement plus the initial chakra absorption, with every turn that follows. The first sign of the sticky water would be discreet, but can be detected due to its distinguishable property, however with every turn that goes by the water's adhesiveness will increase and the weight will continue to crush down onto the opponent. This creates something of a one-two hit combo, making it quite difficult to stop. Now the amount of initial water used, would be just large enough to drench the opponent, from head to toe. So the sticky water would start to restrict the opponent from all over their body. Making movement, every turn, sluggish and difficult. This technique works around both draining the opponent in a physical manner due to the heaviness and stickiness of the water, and chakra wise due to the natural absorbing effect it has. The amount of chakra absorbed will remain consistent, begging with only 20 chakra points, and then with every turn doubling (20->40->80->160 etc.). After the technique is set, the absorption becomes passive and will remain for a certain set of time.

Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Lasts for five turn turns
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: No water above S-Rank after performing
Note: The opponent's speed is decreased one rank each turn due to the restriction of the water

✦ Declined, this is just a merging of Rain of Glue jutsu and Grudge Rain Technique, sticky rain that absorbs chakra. Just perform them. ✦

(Katon: Ryuken Oasish)- Fire Release: The Bloody Oasis
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid (Portal is made)
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A (+20 to techniques used with it)
Description: A supplementary ash technique, the user will release their fire chakra forward and around themselves, while performing the Dragon hand seal, from which pockets of ash from the ground will begin to bubble up and form into a shape similar to a portal. The ash is highly destructive, explosive, and extremely hot. The only purpose this portal of ash serves, is to supplement the user's own attack, by releasing techniques or weaponry through the portal, the ash will leave residue around the body of the techniques or even absorbing them (such as fire like techniques), increasing its destructive property substantially. Such examples could be; increase the power of other fire attacks, passing wind through the portal so the wind carries the ash and if it makes contact with the opponent it will skin them and burn them severely, something else could be to allow metal like weapons to pass through the portal of ash, super heating them and increasing their power as well, that also means non-chakra infused material can pass through the portal, making even the most simplest of rocks into a deadly weapon. Earth can also pass through them, increasing the heat of earth techniques however would make them a little less stable when it comes to movement and durability. Frankly, the portal can be used with many different elements as long as it can co-exist with the Narutoverse logic and the elemental logic used with it. The portal will be quite large and big enough to allow techniques such as Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction. The result for certain techniques can be an increase in heat and explosive power, while also increasing its distance due to the fuel the ash presents (only with fire techniques and CE/KG alike). However, this technique does contain major drawbacks, in simplest terms, since the ash is most presented as unfocused and acts to absorb with its corresponding elements, the opponent can use this to his advantage and increase his techniques power as well. This technique does have a certain mobility, since it erects from the ground, it can be used anywhere as long as it rises from ground area.

Note: Can only be used by Noni
Note: Can last for two turns before disperse on its own
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Requires one turn cool down before re-use
Note: Can not use ash like techniques above S-Rank after it disperses

✦ Declined, not approving any more portal based jutsus, I've seen enough and people seem to think they are the basis for creating jutsus that can be made anywhere. ✦

(Fuuton: Kakure Geiru)- Wind Release: The Hiding Gale
Type: Supplementary/Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30 (+10 for every technique used)
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will gather their wind chakra and release it outward to create a large gust of wind. However, this gust of wind takes on a very similar characteristic to that of Wind Release: Wind Blade. Not only do they appear the same in color and destructive ability (due to its deadly cutting nature), but it retains another similar ability; the wind blade created will be intangible. Now, the main difference is, the user will release the wind gust into certain structures or tool sets, this includes earth-like jutsus(or CE/KG similar) or even metal weapon(s). This happens because of the intangibility of the wind, being able to phase through solid matter objects, however through precise control with chakra, the user will infuse it into the structures making them one. The initial infuse can be done in two ways, either they blow the gust of wind into the initial technique or they create a intangible- almost invisible (because of the similarity of the wind blade)- portal upfront of the user for which they will allow those similar solid structures to pass through and fuse into. Now, with the wind infused in the object(s), this prevents certain opponent from being able to detect the wind which is hidden in the structure, however this does not apply to most dojutsu and sensory. The strong offensive use for this technique is its ability of deception and surprise attack, for even if they destroy the initial technique used for the wind to infuse within, it can still bypass and continue to the opponent, this is because of its intangible nature and how it can never be blocked through physical means. The size of the gust of wind, is rather medium sized in nature (can cover around a five meter radius), but it can be practically infused with any type of size structure such as Earth Release: Great Stone Golem Technique. If the technique makes contact with the opponent, it can surely push the opponent back and deliver serious cuts and bruises because of its sharp nature. The user can also use this wind gust and infuse it into more then one object however it would cause more chakra consumption.

Note: Can only be taught by Noni
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: This technique does not work with lightning, fire, and wind
Note: Requires one turn cool down before re-use

✦ Declined, this is just an attempt to make massive intangible wind that bypasses solids ✦

 

[-Best-]

Re: Custom Jutsu Submission

Doton : Senjutsu Chikei 卐 Earth Style : Tactical Terrain
Type: Supplementary / Offensive.
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A ( 40 depending on the terrain made + 20 if the stuffs are used to attack)
Description:

In this technique, the user will first gather Earth chakra and channel it to the ground to a desired location. Now the user will quickly manipulate this Earth chakra ultimately changing the terrain in which the Earth chakra is present. The Terrain can be altered into four ways.

✎ Pebble trouble: The user will manipulate the Earth chakra to turn the terrain of desired size into a small layer of shiny, polished, less friction pebbles. When the opponent steps on this particular layer of pebbles due to the polished and almost frictionless property of the pebbles present, the opponent will lose his balance and fall down injuring himself. The type of injury made on impact with the pebbles will be just free fall damage (40). The size of the terrain that is converted into a pebble bed is totally up to the imagination of the user provided it does not cover more than 15 meters.

✎ Rocky lives on: The user will manipulate the Earth chakra to turn the terrain of desired size into a small layer of sharp, robust, irregular rocks. When the opponent steps on this particular layer of rocks due to its irregular shape and size the opponent will lose balance and fall down. The type of damage received by the opponent will be piercing damage (40) due to the sharp stones. Size restriction is same as the above.

✎ Quicksand Cache: The user will manipulate the Earth chakra to turn the terrain of desired size into a small layer of minute, porous, loose sand. When the opponent steps on this particular layer due to the loose sand that is present; the movement of the opponent will be drastically reduced since movement in a very loose sand is practically hard. This particular alteration deals no damage even if the opponent falls down. Size restriction is same as the above. Due to the loose sand, Any earth techniques that sucks in the opponent like the Antlion technique or Retsudo Tenshō will quickly suck in the opponent as well as the opponent will find it very difficult to move under those circumstances.

✎ Jelly Belly: The user will manipulate the Earth chakra to turn the terrain of desired size into a small layer of semi solid jelly like flexible terrain. The main advantage of this terrain is the elasticity property of the terrain. Due to the weight of the opponent, when the opponent steps on this particular layer the jelly like flexible layer acts like a rubber and throws the opponent depending on the direction of his momentum. No particular damage is produced by this terrain. Size restriction is same as the above.

In all these terrains, the material that are present in the terrain can be manipulated by the user through simple hand gestures to attack the opponent. Like using the pebbles to deal blunt and brute force damage(20). Using sharp stones to deal piercing damage(20). Sandy and jelly terrain does not possess and damaging property at all.

Restrictions :
- Can be used 4 times per battle with a 2 turn gap between alternative usage.
- Only one terrain can be made at a time.
- Terrain once made last forever.
- Can only be taught by -Best-.

✦ Declined, beside being unreasonable and can be made by canon jutsu (see spoiler), this cant be approved for a few reasons: Jelly Belly isn't within the capabilities of Earth, forming "Jelly" like terrain. This is essentially Rubber Lava or Rubber Release abilities. Quicksand Cache is for all intents and purposes, a Sand jutsu. ✦

Spoiler

(Doton: Uitenpen) - Earth Style: Wheel Of Fortune
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: The user will bite his thumb and perform the Boar → Monkey → Bird → Monkey → Ram hand seals, slamming their hand into a scroll on the ground. This technique is a combination of the Summoning Technique and an Earth Release technique. The user summons a large amount of rock from a giant canyon which, during the process of being summoned through this technique, he shapes into a design he outlined previously in a scroll. This allows the user to change the topography of the map and create any earthen feature he needs from pillars to gorges, canyons, mountains or simply plains. If the user wants to or is defeated, the alteration ends as any summon eventually does. Additionally he can use (Doton: Dimenshon Fuudo Shihai) - Earth Release: Dimension Topography Control at any point to change the design and alter the summoned terrain.
Note: can only be used once per battle

(Doton: Dimenshon Fuudo Shihai) - Earth Release: Dimension Topography Control
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description:This jutsu is used after Earth Style: Wheel of Fortune. The user will do the Boar → Monkey hand seals, slamming his hand on the ground and focusing his earth chakra. As he does this, he can change the design of the original technique. He can do this 3 times per battle.

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Illusionary arts : Presence of the Negative spirit Annabell's Torture | Genjutsu : Fu no seishin no sonzai wa Annabell no gōmon
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Range: N/A
Chakra: -15 per turn
Damage: N/A
Description:

This technique is mainly used to supplement other genjutsu techniques( Specific techniques) of the user.This raw chakra released is considered to be a Genjutsu inducing chakra, that when takes effect on a opponent causes paranormal negative effects which will be explained latter. From the moment since the user starts using this particular technique the user will release a small amount of chakra(15 chakra) from all the chakra points from his body. This chakra released will continue to be raw chakra in nature and start filling out the whole battle field after that turn.This raw chakra released is considered to be a Genjutsu inducing chakra, that when takes effect on a opponent causes paranormal negative effects which will be explained latter. This particular chakra cannot be used for any other purpose other than Supplementing the user's genjutsu. Initially the presence of the chakra that is released will be D rank is strength while after continuous release of the chakra over few turns will increase its strength. The increase in strength is as follows. 1st Turn = D rank. 2nd Turn = Powerful D rank. 3rd Turn = C rank. 4th Turn = Powerful C rank. 5th Turn = B rank. 6th Turn = Powerful B rank. 7th Turn = A rank. 8th Turn = Powerful A rank. 9th Turn = S ranks. After the 9th turn, the chakra's power is not increase by any rank.

✎ Now coming to the real usage of this technique; When the user uses a genjutsu technique on the opponent, This Raw chakra that is present also takes it's effect on the opponent. It will layer itself with that genjutsu that is used on the opponent and create paranormal negative effects along with the original genjutsu effects successfully making the opponent a phasmophobic! ( A person who fears ghost and paranormal stuffs) after some specific turns. The paranormal negative effects ranges from simple hallucination images to illusions that paralyse the opponent depending on the rank of the chakra field.

✎ D rank and Strong D rank: Along with the effects of the original genjutsu, the opponent will be seeing illusionary paranormal images like A headless girl, Vultures preying on a living human etc etc. It's up to the user's imagination.

✎ C rank and strong C rank: Along with the effects of the original genjutsu and the illusionary image, the terrain surrounding the opponent will also be affected like the opponent might feel as if he is in a graveyard, or a human slaughtering mad house etc etc.

✎ B rank and strong B rank: Along with all the previous effects of the genjutsu, the sense of smell will also be affected by the genjutsu. The opponent will feeling there is a pungent non palatable odour emanating from the surroundings. smell of a dead meat or corpse, smell of blood etc. everything comes under the effect of this genjutsu. Although these smells are not powerful to paralyse an opponent, they are capable of producing minute headaches and nausea effect on the opponent.

✎ A rank and strong A rank: Along with all the above effects of the genjutsu, the opponent's sense of hearing will also be affected. the opponent will hear a scary witch like laughter from anywhere around him. The illusionary sound that is produced can be anything that is related to paranormal stuffs like howl of a hungry wolf. etc etc. Sound can compliment and strengthen the effect produced by the non palatable smell.

✎ S rank: Most powerful genjutsu in which along with all the previous effects of the genjutsu, illusionary hands, illusionary faces starts to grow from the body of the opponent and grab him completely paralysing him under the genjutsu. When the opponent is under the effect of this level genjutsu will suffer some damage(60 damage points) due to the severe mental stress.

Restrictions and Notes:
- Layer's only with Genjutsus that produces effects that are similar to paranormal stuffs or dark stuffs or illusions which makes the opponent grow old or burn his body etc etc like the Demonic illusion genjutsus, Bringer of darkness, Flower head death etc etc. Will not affect the opponent if any other type of genjutsu is used.
- The presence of the chaka in the battlefield can be easily sensed by a sensory ninja or a dojutsu user.
- Since the chakra is present throughout the battlefield, techniques like the air current wild dance which covers then entire battlefield can disperse off the chakra but it will regather after one turn encompassing the entire battlefield.
- Can only be used once per battle and thrice per event.
- effects the illusion depends on the rank of the genjutsu used by the user, eg, if the user uses a B rank genjutsu and even though the chakra surrounding the opponent is A rank, the opponent will still feel the effect of the B rank genjutsu when it gets layered.
- After the 11th turn, the chakra in the battlefield disperses off.
- If the opponent get's caught in the genjutsu for more than 4 times, he turns to a Phasmophobic and fears Darkness and paranormal stuffs. Hence, after that all the demonic illusion genjutsu or genjutsu that produces similar stuffs that at in anyway related to paranormal will cause +10 damage to the opponent.
- Every turn it is kept active, it counts as one move from the three move per turn.
- Can only be taught by -Best- .

✦ Declined, Do Not Resubmit in any form ✦

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Earth Style/Water style : Sticky Coconut Frenzy | Doton/Suiton : Sutikkīkokonattsu Kyōran
Type: Supplementary / Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:

After concentrating the Earth chakra the user will perform the Boar -> Ox hand seal and make four coconut tree like structures made up of earth to emerge from the ground very quickly. The position of these coconut trees to emerge depends on the user's imagination. There are multiple coconut shaped earth shells at the top of the tree which are pretty hard at outside. While the Coconut tree structure emerges from the ground, the user will channel a small amount of water chakra into the coconut shaped structure which turns into a small amount of sticky syrup inside them. Now the user can direct the coconuts from the tree to attack the opponent anywhere within long range. In addition to the impact damage produced by the coconuts when attacking the user, the sticky syrup that is present inside the coconut is spilled over the region of impact and make that particular region very sticky and adhesive. Each tree will have a total of 10 coconuts in them and each coconut on impact deals blunt damage, breaks apart into tiny pieces of sharp shrapnel like structures and can turn the area surrounding the impact region up to short range to a small/thin layer of sticky adhesive syrup. The sharpnel like particles that are produced from the coconut's shell after the impact can deal piercing damage if stepped upon it, though the damage produced by it will only be equivalent to a D rank technique. After creating the coconut tree, the user is not forced to send the coconuts to attack the opponent immediately as the trees stay in the battlefield once created for 4 turns after which it will turn into a jagged formation of rocks with sticky layer of water around it that has adhesive properties.

- Can only be used thrice per battle with a one turn gap between alternative usages.
- Tree once created stays in the battle field for 4 turns.
- Can only be taught by -Best-.

✦ Declined, this needs to be simplified and clarified. You say the coconuts release sticky syrup like water upon impact and later say that they affect the region up to short range of the area hit. If you have 10 of these and each one does this, you can essentially affect the entire field over a series of turns? And if the power of this is split between up to 10 coconuts, wouldn't they be weaker and less effective? Because saying that each one individually contains enough water to cover short range which is 5 meters is too much for one alone and if just 3 are used at once, you're essentially saying that it creates long ranged sized water while performing what, C rank damage? That makes little sense ✦