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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Water:Giant Bulding (Suiton:Grand tou)
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-10 each turn)
Damage:0
Description: THe user slams his hands into a huge body of water and a giant object appears out of water. The object can be a fortress, castle, basketball field, a huge wall, a house ect.The object is made of condense water so its parts are increadbly hard.(harder then steel) The object can be maximumly 5000m square(which is 50m wide and 100m in leght)and its hight can be maximum of 25m.
*There must be a large source of water for this to be used
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*The bulding last only 3 turns
*It can only be used 1 time per battle
*the user cant use any water jutsu on the fallowing turn
~Declined~
add abit more restriction to it


Water: Bullet Orb(Suiton:kyuutai Teppoudama)
Rank:S
Range:Short
Type:Supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-5 per each turn)
Damage:0
Discription: THe user creates a 1m diameter orb out of water the orb can shoot small bullets from inside of it and each bullet is as strong as Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet and 5 bullets can be shot per turn.
*It lasts for 5 turns unless taken out by a powerfull jutsu
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
~declined~
make it last three turns
and only be used 2x per battle
Water: Bullet Orb(Suiton:kyuutai Teppoudama)
Rank:S
Range:Short
Type:Supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-5 per each turn)
Damage:0
Discription: THe user creates a 1m diameter orb out of water the orb can shoot small bullets from inside of it and each bullet is as strong as Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet and 5 bullets can be shot per turn.
*It lasts for 3 turns unless taken out by a powerfull jutsu
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
___________
~Approved


Weapon Hells Fury
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost:-20 per turn of that chakra is transmited (-10 per change of chakra type)
Damage:80
Description:A sword that is made completely from the same metal as the chakra blades.The sword is 1.2m in lenght and is 10kg. It can be charged with chakra and depending on the element of the chakra it can have differant abilitys:
Water:the blade can extend into great lenghts turn and take differant shapes
Lightning:the sword shockes anyone that touches it or any one that touches it with a metal object
Wind:the sword can be moved faster by relesing the wind like a jet motor also it can cut through a lot of things and weapons in this form
Fire:the weapon is hot and burns anything it touches
Earth:the weapon gets much much harder and is near unbreakable
*Once per 2 turns can the chakra type be changed
*only burakyilan and people who he gives has this blade
*The user cant use any element attacks of the element the sword is charged with
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___________
~Declined

removed the bold


Water:Wave Secret Art Inner Water Doom
Rank: S
Type:attack
Range:very short must have contact with the enemy
Chakra Cost:40
DAmage:80
Description:the user touches his enemy and then makes the water inside the enemy(70% of everyone is water) come out like spikes piercing the enemys body
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*It can only be used 1 time per battle
*the user cant use any water jutsu on the fallowing 5 turns
*Because the jutsu needs a lot of chakra to move water inside the enemy the user will be tired after using the jutsu
___________
~Declined


Water:Giant Bulding (Suiton:Grand tou)
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Supplemant
Chakra Cost:40(-10 each turn)
Damage:0
Description: THe user slams his hands into a huge body of water and a giant object appears out of water. The object can be a fortress, castle, basketball field, a huge wall, a house ect.The object is made of condense water so its parts are increadbly hard.(harder then steel) The object can be maximumly 5000m square(which is 50m wide and 100m in leght)and its hight can be maximum of 25m.
*There must be a large source of water for this to be used
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*The bulding last only 3 turns
*It can only be used 1 time per battle
*the user cant use any water jutsu on the fallowing 2 turns
*the user is left very tired after the jutsu(like yamato felt after he used his wood house bulding jutsu)
___________
i didn't i approve this b4?
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Name: Daiennetsu Genko - Hell Fist
Rank: A
Range: Close(0-5meters), Medium(5-10meters)
Chakra:40
Damage:80
Description: A Taijutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The user will first focus chakra into their hands, and concentrates it into actual flame around their fists. This is normally a difficult task, but skill in Ninjutsu makes it easier. The fire is used to add burning damage to the user's taijutsu strikes, as well as allowing them harm the opponent through certain kinds of armor.
___________
~pending

get gorro to check it

Name: Haiotoshi - Ash Pit
Rank: A
Range: Close(0-5meters)
Chakra: 40
Damage 80 ( if made contact)
Description: Haiotoshi is a Ninjutsu technique that utilizes the fire element, and allows the user to emmit a large mass of ash from their mouths in order to mask their escape or temporarily leave the opponent bewildered allowing them to strike without having to deal with a rebuttle. Upon first using this technique the user will perform the need hand-sealing formations and channel chakra throughout their bodies allowing it all to focus upon the core of their body where all of their chakra seems to manifest itself from. When done successfully a mass of flamable ash will emmit from the user mouth capable of actually temporarily blinding the opponent if contact is made with the eyes upon emitting. The ash will surround the area. This technique can also be combined with the fire ball technique above, allowing the user to perform a deadly combination capable of defeating the opponent if it is successful.
___________
~Declined

=/ already exist, its in the jutsu list
 
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Name: Raiton: Raikou Sen (Lightning Element: Lightning Beam)
Rank: A
Range: Short to Medium
Chakra: 40
Damage:80
Description:The user charges his fist with electricity. Then he point it towards the enemy, and a thick arc of lightning will be shot in that direction. It burns everything in its path , causing 1st degree burns, and making the enemy dizzy.
___________
~already exist, i think


Name: Tsuchi Shuriken no Jutsu :: [Earth Shuriken Technique]
Rank: A
Range: Mid [0-10m]
Chakra: 40
Damage:80
Description: Tsuchi Shuriken no Jutsu :: [Earth Shuriken Technique] is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After forming the needed hand seals, releasing the Earth based chakra within their bodies. Then, they will force this chakra into the ground below them, and allow for the free manipulation of the earth before him. In the next moment, projectiles of pure hardened Earth will launch from the ground towards the target at a speed equal to that of the the throwing power of the shinobi utilizing this technique. The rock is as hard as the average stone, and with enough force can be broken. However, not only to the projectiles have cutting and piercing properties, they hold bludgeoning properties as well.
___________
~Declined

fix the chakra and damge


Name: Daichi Yaiba (Earthen Blade)
Rank: A
Range: Medium~Far
Chakra:40
Damage:80 (if the jutsu connects with opponent)
Description:It is an earth element ninjutsu that creates an earthen pillar in the form of a blade at the feet of the enemy, that crashes into his ribcage and throws him off his feet. Despite being an earthen 'blade' the impact is blunt, meant more to throw the opponent off his feet and allow some of the distance in between him and his opponent to be traveled with impunity.This jutsu can also be used to destroy incoming projectiles
___________
~Approved
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Doton: Hisan Doton (Earth Style: Flying Earth)
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Descripton: The user Stomps the floor and sends a massive amount of earth chakra into the earth. This then erupts a huge amount of earth spikes to come flying out at the opponent, this jutsu can be used for aerial attacks. (Can be dodged with Sharingan 2nd/3rd tome)

Note: Usable 3 time per battle.

___________
~Pending

get goro to look at it


Senpō: Gama Guufu Doki (Sage Arts: Tornado’s Wrath)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: 80 (+15 from the boiling oil)
Description: After forming the needed handseals the user fires off a huge burst of fire that turns into a massive tornado. He/she also releases a large amount of oil with combines with the tornado making it a fearsome combo. This jutsu will evaporate any water source that comes into contact with it.

Note: Useable once per battle.
Note: Must be in Sage Mode
___________
~Approved
 
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(Tsuin Hitosashi Yubi) Double Index Finger
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: +20 to each hit(-5 to the user)
Description: In this taijutsu, the user will gather an enormus amount of chakra onto the index fingers on both hands, this will give the both index fingers enormus strength, then index fingers combined with quick and powerful movements can easily break and pierce through and leave sizable holes in skin, regular bones, and some of the hardest material out there(cannot pierce through Custom Elements and Dead Bone Pulse). The user will only have the index finger extended and when it pierces through the impact will easily allow the rest of the arm to follow through. This is based on the Preying Mantis fighting style.
~It is a fighting method and can be turned on and off, though the user will take damage~
*Pending*
___________
~i am not sure =/
Also reminding about the post above

(Taijutsu: Nitari Yori Ea) Lighter than Air
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: The user
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: None
Description: The user will gather a large amount of chakra into their legs and this will allow them to push their feet off of the ground and float in the air for extended period of times though the user will eventually come down they can kick the air itself(pressure of the leg going down will cause the user to rise up, the air is not kicked literally) to rise back up. While on the ground the user has incredible speed and can move swiftly due to putting more pressure in the steps the user takes.
~Once per battle and lasts for 3 turns~
___________
~jutsu already exist


(Taijutsu: Tajū Zanzōken) Multiple Image Remaining Behind Skill
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: The user
Chakra cost: None
Damage: None(-10 to the user)
Decription: As the user moves, the user speed is increased so much that it reaches a point where they leave images of their past location as they move. Theoretically this jutsu is possible in the real world due to the fact that when someone quickly moves their arms in then out, it leaves an image of the person arms last location. This jutsu is used mainly for counter atttacks where the user in close range is easily able to move to a different location while leaving the opponent to believe the user was hit. This jutsu doesnt harm the opponent in anyway but just allows the user to move faster and more elusive, the user is able to move between any image they leave.
~Can be used 2 times per battle and last 2 turns each~
___________
~Declined
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(fuuton:chakra hito)wind style chakra man.
rank:C
type:supplementary/defensive
range:short-long
chakra cost:20
danmage:N/A
description:The user focuses wind chakra to make a man out of spiraling wind (its a bit like the clone basics exept it cannot attack in any way)and this way it can disturb jutsus like ''chakra sensing rain''. it can also be used to defend against up to D ranked jutsus and C ranked jutsus of the lightning element because thats its natural strength.
note:
*can only be teached by ebil*
*need to be at least chuunin with wind element*
can be used max 3 times a battle with a maximum of 2 chakra mans*
___________
~Declined

this jutsu can disrupt jutsus like chakra senseing rain
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Murasaki Gigei:Karagenkotsu) - Violet Arts: Fist Color
Type:Supplementary
Rank:B
Range:Self
Chakra Cost:35
Description: Violet chakra flows from the palm's of the user. The jutsu makes the user moves faster and more stealthy. Only after this jutsu is formed, the user can make hand seals for othe Violet Art jutsus.
*Note:It can be only used once per battle.*
*Note:If used again, the jutsu ends.*
*Note:Can only be used by the owner of the Violet Art's, which is Yugito Nadare.*

(Hyouton:Un-da-hi-to) - Ice Style: Underheat
Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Mid-Long
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description:the user underheats the surrounding to the point of freezing near livings.If the enemy stays still for more time(hiding), he freezes.The jutsu cancles out all fire jutsus up to B-Rank.the area can reach -60 Degrees Celsius.
*Note: Can only be used by Yugito Nadare bio's.*
*Note:Can only be used 1 times per battle.*
*Note:It does 20 damage to the user.*

(Futon: Kaze Seppaku Hirate) - Wind Style: Wind Pressure Palm
Type:Attack/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage:60
Description: The user slowly puts his palm on the wanted object and then gathers all his wind chakra in his palm.He then releases it all at once and there is som much pressure mad under his palm that he a make a hole in almost everything.(earth, iron, stone.....)
Some things are exeptions(rubber, steel)
The user can so create a hole where to hide, or crush down a door, or wall.It can also be used on a human being.
*Note:Can only be used 3 times per battle.*
*Note:It does 5 damage to the user palm, each time used.*
___________
~All Pending

get goro to look at it



*all declined*
last two jutsu exist and first doesnt make sense.
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Kuchiyose: Shuzoku Saiken (Summoning: Family Bond)
Rank: B
Range: N/A
Chakra: 20
Damage: 0
Description: The user places thier hand on a specially inscribed scroll. This Scroll then trades places with another bio one of thier bios.
(Only usable once per battle)

Declined Your kidding right?
 
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Puppet: Ventus / Flamma / Terra / Aqua / Fulgur

Rank: D
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: 20
Description: The user closes his hands and opens them again, forming an elemental chakra ball from the size of a basket ball. This ball has all the characteristics of the element and after it's creation, it stands on it's own, without adding more chakra. The puppet is created with 2 chakra threads, wich the user will use to manipulate it. The first thread is used to move the puppet around and the second thread is to change the shape of the ball.
The ball can be stretched, flatten, squared, etc, as longs as the mass stays the same.
The user can summon and control 5 puppets in row, with the same element or not.
Fusions, of any kind, will upgrade the rank and power of the jutsu to the rank above. All five will fused be equal to an S rank.
The puppets can stay the whole battle, but the fusions can only be mantainned 1 turn, due to the unstability.
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Genjutsu: Mind Annihilation (Omoi Senmentsu)

Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (for both the user and the opponent)
Description: Breaks the connection between the Jinchuuriki and his Bijuu, the Sage and his Natural Chakra, the Master and his Summons, everything the opponent is connected. For several turns, the opponent will only be able to rely on his own chakra system, and won't be able to be infused with any other, shielded by the user's chakra. The user will also overload someone's nervous system, giving the feeling of a massive disabling headache. This jutsu affects imeadiatly any clone created by the opponent and, as said earlier, cannot be released by additional sources of chakra. Due to the pain on the opponents head, there's no higher pain, so the only way for a person to release this jutsu is by physically or mentally hurt the user.
But during this genjutsu, the user will be tottaly neutrilized, unable to move, speak, hear, smell or touch anything. He will only be able to maintain 1 single clone, but only if the clone was created on the previous turn. This clone will only be on 1 turn, and will only have 2 jutsus. After that, any other type of chakra manipulation will be out of reach, and the clone will poof, leaving both the user and the opponent neutrilized for 2 more turns.
Overall, the jutsu lasts 3 turns. After them, the user will lose the same ammount of health as the opponent lost (90 damage points) and will be unable to move for the rest of the turn.
Can only be used once per battle and affects only 2 persons.
If the genjutsu is released before the 3 turns, the user will still be nutrilized for the rest of the jutsu and will still lose health at the end of it. After the release, the opponent won't be able to move for the turn.

Note: This jutsu isn't suitable for one-on-one battles, so if you don't have any partner, then this jutsu is pretty much useless


No conections with Ino KG

___________
~Declined

kinjutsu/funnijutsu
 
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Trying to make rikudou's jutsus that he used on the juubi

(kinjutsu: juubi betsuri)- juubi seperation
Type:
Rank:Forbidden
Range: mid
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:
Description: Rikudou will does a complex sets of handseals. while he is doin the hands seals, a beam of light will surround rikudo and another sets light beams will shoot out from body, realising the bijju. the juubi will come out of rikudou's body, unconscious and powerless
*only rikudou and use it
*can be done only once


*approved*


(kinjutsu: juubi/bijju torishimaru)- juubi/bijju control
Type:
Rank:Forbidden
Range: mid
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:
Description: Rikudou will does a sets of handseals and his body will begin to glow. he will the fire out this beam of light that will stun the bijju or juubi still (most affective on weaker bijju but wit will wear off faster for strong demons like the juubi)
the rikudou will stare into the bijju/ juubi and control it wit his sharingan Rinnegan eyes
*only rikudou and use it

bottom right frame

*approved*

__________________________________

got bored xD

Rikudou mode
Type:sup
Rank:Forbidden
Range: mid
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: 50+ for every jutsu
Description: Rikudou's body will begin to glow, creating a white chakra flame like mist (like even naruto power ups). Rikudou will gain uncampareable power


*declined*
jebus grimm...


Juubi mode
Type:sup
Rank:Forbidden
Range: mid
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:
Description: Rikudou rikudou will turn into the juubi and will be able to use all the bijju abilities but wit alot more power than a normal bijju
*lasts for 2 turns and if the opponent lives, he wins the fight

*declined*

____________________

Gedou Mazou
Type:sup
Rank:Forbidden
Range: mid
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points: death
discription: Nagato/pein/ rikudou can summon this large statue which can directly connect to his body. Once connected, it can extend a spectral dragon which can remove the souls of anyone it passes through. This statue may be the same or related to the bound King of Hell statue Akatsuki uses.

*approved*


King of Hell Statue
Rank:Forbidden
Range: mid
Chakra Cost:50
description:The Akatsuki organization uses the King of Hell statue to hold the bijuu it withdraws from captured Jinchuuriki. Pain/nagato/rikudou can summon this statue wherever the group currently meets. Each time a bijuu is sealed within the statue, one of its nine eyes opens.

*declined*
jutsu exist.


 
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Genjutsu: Suigin Tegotae (Effect of Mercury)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The illusion will activate whenever the opponent sees any bit of mercury. Once the illusion is activated, the opponent would to begin to feel the poisonous effect of Mercury. The mercury entering the body would cause irreverisble nervous system and brain damage causing the opponent to be paralyzed, blindness, numbness, and memory loss (this causes the opponent to forget how to perform simple task such as handsigns, jutsu, etc.)
Note: Can only be used three times

*Declined*

Sacchi Sakuin (Sensory Index)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user would be begin to focus a chakra barrier around him and then extends the barrier covering a large area (at least 500 meters in diameter). The barrier is made out of chakra which means it cannot be destroyed but can be exited or entered without harm to the both the user and opponent. Upon the activation of the barrier, the user is capable of tracking the "indexed" chakra. Which means that if the opponent(s) attempts to suppress or hide their chakra, the user will still be capable of locating him/her/them for as long as the jutsu is activated.
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Last three turns

*declined* Similar jutsu exist and Oped a bit.

Raiton: Raikou Doragon Dageki (Lightning Style: Lightning Dragon Strike)

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user would begin to release a surge of lightning from his body which in the blink of an eye will take the form of a massive and extremely long dragon made of pure and bright surging electricity coiling around and above him. The dragon will then rush towards the opponent with extreme speed and no matter how far the dragon have traveled its tail would extend to stay connected to the user. The dragon delivers a lethal dose of electricity making for a swift but painful death if taking the full brunt of it. A short range avoidance would not be suggested due to the fact that the dragon's electrical energy can expand on the users command and would still cause a powerful and devasting shock.
Note: Can only be used three times
Note: Weak against wind of equivalent strength


*declined* Remove the highlighted and resubmit.
 
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Weapon Hells Fury
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost:-20 per turn of that chakra is transmited (-10 per change of chakra type)
Damage:80
Description:A sword that is made completely from the same metal as the chakra blades.The sword is 1.2m in lenght and is 10kg. It can be charged with chakra and depending on the element of the chakra it can have differant abilitys:
Water:the blade can extend into great lenghts turn and take differant shapes
Lightning:the sword shockes anyone that touches it or any one that touches it with a metal object
Wind:the sword can be moved faster by relesing the wind like a jet motor also it can cut through a lot of things and weapons in this form
Fire:the weapon is hot and burns anything it touches
Earth:the weapon gets much much harder and is near unbreakable
*Once per 2 turns can the chakra type be changed
*only burakyilan and people who he gives has this blade
*The user cant use any element attacks of the element the sword is charged with
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~Declined

removed the bold


Water:Giant Bulding (Suiton:Grand tou)
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Supplemant
Chakra Cost:40(-10 each turn)
Damage:0
Description: THe user slams his hands into a huge body of water and a giant object appears out of water. The object can be a fortress, castle, basketball field, a huge wall, a house ect.The object is made of condense water so its parts are increadbly hard.(harder then steel) The object can be maximumly 5000m square(which is 50m wide and 100m in leght)and its hight can be maximum of 25m.
*There must be a large source of water for this to be used
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*The bulding last only 3 turns
*It can only be used 1 time per battle
*the user cant use any water jutsu on the fallowing 2 turns
*the user is left very tired after the jutsu(like yamato felt after he used his wood house bulding jutsu)
___________
i didn't i approve this b4?
Weapon Hells Fury
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost:-20 per turn of that chakra is transmited (-10 per change of chakra type)
Damage:80
Description:A sword that is made completely from the same metal as the chakra blades.The sword is 1.2m in lenght and is 10kg. It can be charged with chakra and depending on the element of the chakra it can have differant abilitys:
Water:the blade can extend into great lenghts turn and take differant shapes
Lightning:the sword shockes anyone that touches it or any one that touches it with a metal object
Wind:the sword can be moved faster by relesing the wind like a jet motor also it can cut through a lot of things and weapons in this form
Fire:the weapon is hot
Earth:the weapon gets much much harder and is near unbreakable
*Once per 2 turns can the chakra type be changed
*only burakyilan and people who he gives has this blade
*The user cant use any element attacks of the element the sword is charged with
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also for the 2nd u didnt approve it u said "declined add a bit more restrictions to it"
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Custom Weapon: Kusari Sword
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A chainsaw-like big broadsword, with "teeth". When the user infuses with fire chakra the sword starts to work, the "teeth" spin around, and produces alot of heat, enough heat to melt the opponents weapon away, unless its a S-rank weapon. Is the weapon is an S-rank, Kusari swords teeth will slows hack through that weapon.
The fire chakra works as fuel for the Kusari sword, and uses 5 chakra each round that goes.
*Can only be used by Namikaze Naruto*
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Katon: Shinkou Ryuu Kaen) – Fire Release: Rising Dragon Flame

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After making a few hand seals the user releases a large amount of chakra into the earth by stomping on the ground and then causes a rush of dormant fire from deep within the earth to rise up below the enemy and envelop him in an erupting flame in the shape of a large dragon head.
*Declined*Limits.

Note: Can only be used 2 times
Note: Only members of the Sharinganmasters hideout can use this jutsu

made two times per battle and added in description need use hand seals
(Katon: Shinkou Ryuu Kaen) – Fire Release: Rising Dragon Flame

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After making a few hand seals the user releases a large amount of chakra into the earth by stomping on the ground and then causes a rush of dormant fire from deep within the earth to rise up below the enemy and envelop him in an erupting flame in the shape of a large dragon head.


Note: Can only be used 2 times
Note: User cant use fire style the following turn.
Note: Only members of the Sharinganmasters hideout can use this jutsu

added further limit

*Approved*
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Ration Katana (Lightning Blade)
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: N/A (+60 lightning wave)
Description This sword posse’s very powerful lightning abilities. The sword itself can cut through the hardest materials but when channelled with lighting its cutting power increases to the max allowing it to release powerful slicing lightning waves that will cut through anything.

Note: Anything that comes into contact with it will be shocked.

*declined* Oped. Remove highlighted. It can cut through hard materials, but the hardest eh nah. and cutting through anything def. no.

(Fuuton: Fuuton Tama)-Wind Style Wind Sphere
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points 80
description: The user creates a very condense spining wind sphere above the opponent. The wind sphere is created so high up that it can’t be seen or heard by the opponent, when the user wishes he can control it to come smashing down upon the opponent hitting them so hard that they are unable to move due to the force. When the sphere hits the floor the shire power of it will cause a creator.

Note: Takes one turn to form, can only be used once per battle.

This is pending for grimm/Rei.

Yuen Soshi (Affinity Element)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage: +10 to the user's affinity element
Description: This Ninjutsu effects the users affinity element. Whatever element that the user has an affinity for will have its damage increased. It only works for the one element.

Note: Lasts whole match.
Note: Usable Once per battle.
Note: User must state there affinity element (This dose not count as a jutsu).
*Declined*.
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Also reminding about the post above

(Taijutsu: Nitari Yori Ea) Lighter than Air
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: The user
Chakra cost: 40
Damage: None
Description: The user will gather a large amount of chakra into their legs and this will allow them to push their feet off of the ground and float in the air for extended period of times though the user will eventually come down they can kick the air itself(pressure of the leg going down will cause the user to rise up, the air is not kicked literally) to rise back up. While on the ground the user has incredible speed and can move swiftly due to putting more pressure in the steps the user takes.
~Once per battle and lasts for 3 turns~
___________
~jutsu already exist


(Taijutsu: Tajū Zanzōken) Multiple Image Remaining Behind Skill
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: The user
Chakra cost: None
Damage: None(-10 to the user)
Decription: As the user moves, the user speed is increased so much that it reaches a point where they leave images of their past location as they move. Theoretically this jutsu is possible in the real world due to the fact that when someone quickly moves their arms in then out, it leaves an image of the person arms last location. This jutsu is used mainly for counter atttacks where the user in close range is easily able to move to a different location while leaving the opponent to believe the user was hit. This jutsu doesnt harm the opponent in anyway but just allows the user to move faster and more elusive, the user is able to move between any image they leave.
~Can be used 2 times per battle and last 2 turns each~
___________
~Declined

(Taijutsu: Tajū Zanzōken) Multiple Image Remaining Behind Skill
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: The user
Chakra cost: None
Damage: None(-10 to the user)(+20 to each taijutsu)
Decription: As the user moves, the user speed is increased so much that it reaches a point where they leave images of their past location as they move. Theoretically this jutsu is possible in the real world due to the fact that when someone quickly moves their arms in then out, it leaves an image of the person arms last location. This jutsu is used mainly for counter atttacks where the user in close range is easily able to move to a different location while leaving the opponent to believe the user was hit. This jutsu doesnt harm the opponent in anyway but just allows the user to move faster and more elusive, the user is able to move between any image they leave but only one of the images is the real user.
~Can be used 1 time per battle and last 3 turns~
~User cannot use taijutsu of S-Rank or higher after this jutsu is over for 2 turns~
~Can only use 2 jutsus on the turn after this jutsu is over~

The science behind this jutsu Opponent adapts to the user's speed and thus see images left behind due to their brain reacting less, its a simple optical illusion, but I restricted it more =/.

Nope it's not happening. No after images.
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Earth Style: Earth Lord Mode ♦ [Doton: Tsuchi Kimi Mo-Do]
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 55
Damage Points: - (+10 damage to all Earth Style and Taijutsu Techniques) (-20 damage to the user)
Description: The user focuses a great amount of earth chakra into his dermis layer, creating a thin, yet indestructible armor of stone that cannot be penetrated by earth, mud or any sharp objects that are not infused with special abilties, that is undetectable on naked eye, only Byakugan and Sharingan users can see the shield. The user is also able to create different weapons .
○ The user's punches and kicks are greatly increased.
○ The user's unable to defend from High Speed Lightning attacks properly, during this mode.
○ The user's speed is decreased.
○ The user is invulnerable to any Earth Jutsu of B-Rank and below (except Jyuuken and Taijutsu attacks that hurt the chakra flow).
○ All Taijutsu of C-Rank and below are useless against the armor.
○ All user's Earth Style jutsus have +10 damage.
○ After this mode ends, the user is unable to manipulate Earth Style for the next 4 rounds, and his dermis layer loses it's tactile ability and it gets hurt by the earth.
- May be used once pe battle.
- Lasts 4 rounds.
- May be deactivated at user's will.
- May be used only by Reido Kira.

Declined. Kinjutsu.
 
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Re: ? Custom Jutsu Submission ?

(Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Yottsu-Kashiraed Ryuu)Summoning Technique:Four-Headed Axe
Type:Supplementary/Attack
Rank:S
Range:Short(If use with element mid)
Chakra:40
Damage:80(Wind=15(Cuts all around the area hit))
Description:The user pulls out two scrolls and bits their thumbs and puts blood on all their fingers and performs the hand seals. Then place hands on scrolls. The user summons two axes with four heads. The axes can be used with all elements expect earth. The axes can be connected together at the end and made into something like a staff with four axe heads on each side. If any other person touches the axes spikes will come out and stab the person. The axes can be called back when the user puts their hands up.
(Can only be used by Shikamaru Teaguey)

pick a singular element
 
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