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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

OK listen up guys. I'm all for gathering inspiration from other anime for jutsu and what not. But lets not go over board, as well keep in mind that most animes rules about their attacks, don't agree with the rules of the naruto world.

Thanks for listening(reading) Goro K.​
 

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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Thanks for approval goro, here is one new custom,

(Doton: Yurasu Twist) - Earth Style: Rock Twist
Type: Supplementry
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
description: The user releases earth chakra into the ground, and creating a huge twist of rock coming out of the ground. The user then jumps on top of it and it will create a earth shield over the user, and will be protected from lightning jutsus b-rank and below and the user can twist it by moving earth chakra, making the huge twist rock move and can also break apart, at any moment and if the user wants can just go into the ground at the end of this attack.
Note: Can only be used once per battle
Note: Must be taught by ~Sin~

*Declined*This sounds like a series of attacks instead of one...
 
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(Mushidama)-Insect Sphere
Type:Attack
Rank:C
RangeShort-Long
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40(absorbs 10-40 chakra if successful)
Description:By using the destruction bugs, members of the Aburame clan surround their opponent with thousands of bugs, making a globe of bugs around the opponent before to completely trap them. Once trapped, the bugs would normally drain the chakra and swallow their victim. If the victim was to escape from the globe, the bugs should be able to follow them instantly. The bugs covering the victims body also prevents movement which prevents them from using any jutsu to escape. Can be disrupted with sufficient heat

*Declined*

Insect Cocoon (Mushi Miyu)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
This unique jutsu is a secret technique that allows the user to increase the speed of insects' development. As the user's body is already a hive of sorts for the insects, the user will encase himself in an actual cocoon to further aid the insects. This is an extremely useful move for Aburame clan members, since their attacks mainly focus on the usage of bugs. However, using this in the midst of a battle can be potentially dangerous as it leaves the user static and vulnerable.(Can Be Used By Bug Clones)
(Usable Only By Bug Users)
*Idk what this jutsu does? Like speed up development for what?*



(Mushi Kame no Jutsu)Bug Jar Technique
Type: Defensive/Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage:15
This jutsu uses the Destruction bugs bugs living in the user's body as a shield by having them fly in a dome shape at high speed. The dome is strong enough to destroy incoming attacks, but can be disrupted with sufficient explosive force.
(Only useable by Aburame Clan members)

*Declined*Should be a higher rank.
 
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(Taijutsu: Suraisu Kaze) Fighting style: Slicing Winds

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 + 20 for the user (5 each turn)
Description: The user forces chakra from his arms and legs and uses it to control the air around it, making the air move around the users arms and legs at high speeds in multiple directions. As a result the kicks, punches etc. have increased accuracy and are a lot deadlier. A limb that makes direct contact with these 'slicing winds' is severed instantly. However the users fist/leg doesn't need to make direct contact to hurt the opponent. As the air rushes around the limbs of the user, the air can still slice the opponent if the user just misses the opponent, though then the damage is a lot smaller (cuts an slashes around the opponents limb that was attacked).
The entire proces of forcing chakra out of the body and making slicing winds around the limbs happens almost instantly.

*Lasts for 4 turns*
*The slicing winds make minor cuts in the users arms and legs*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Declined*This is a ninjutsu. Edit and Resubmit.
(Fuuton: Suraisu Kaze Taijutsu)Wind style: Slicing Winds Taijtusu

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 + 20 for the user (5 each turn)
Description: The user forces fuuton-based chakra from his arms and legs and uses it to control the air around it, making the air move around the users arms and legs at high speeds in multiple directions. As a result the kicks, punches etc. have increased accuracy and are a lot deadlier. A limb that makes direct contact with these 'slicing winds' is severed instantly. However the users fist/leg doesn't need to make direct contact to hurt the opponent. As the air rushes around the limbs of the user, the air can still slice the opponent if the user just misses the opponent, though then the damage is a lot smaller (cuts an slashes around the opponents limb that was attacked).
The entire proces of forcing chakra out of the body and making slicing winds around the limbs happens almost instantly.

*Lasts for 4 turns*
*The slicing winds make minor cuts in the users arms and legs*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Pending*Grimm or Rei. should check as well.

___________
~Approved

O_O
 
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Genjutsu: Mind Annihilation (Omoi Senmentsu)

Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 50
Damage Points: 90 (for both the user and the opponent)
Description: Breaks the connection between the Jinchuuriki and his Bijuu, the Sage and his Natural Chakra, the Master and his Summons, everything the opponent is connected. For several turns, the opponent will only be able to rely on his own chakra system, and won't be able to be infused with any other, shielded by the user's chakra. The user will also overload someone's nervous system, giving the feeling of a massive disabling headache. This jutsu affects imeadiatly any clone created by the opponent and, as said earlier, cannot be released by additional sources of chakra. Due to the pain on the opponents head, there's no higher pain, so the only way for a person to release this jutsu is by physically or mentally hurt the user.
But during this genjutsu, the user will be tottaly neutrilized, unable to move, speak, hear, smell or touch anything. He will only be able to maintain 1 single clone, but only if the clone was created on the previous turn. This clone will only be on 1 turn, and will only have 2 jutsus. After that, any other type of chakra manipulation will be out of reach, and the clone will poof, leaving both the user and the opponent neutrilized for 2 more turns.
Overall, the jutsu lasts 3 turns. After them, the user will lose the same ammount of health as the opponent lost (90 damage points) and will be unable to move for the rest of the turn.
Can only be used once per battle and affects only 2 persons.
If the genjutsu is released before the 3 turns, the user will still be nutrilized for the rest of the jutsu and will still lose health at the end of it. After the release, the opponent won't be able to move for the turn.

Note: This jutsu isn't suitable for one-on-one battles, so if you don't have any partner, then this jutsu is pretty much useless.
*Declined*Seems similar to Ino's KG.
This as nothing to do with Ino. It just breaks the conection. I don't possess my opponent. The part where I get knocked out is just to restrict the jutsu.
It seriously as nothing to do with Ino.
 

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Earth Style: Grand Vibration ♦ [Doton: Doudou no Yure]
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15 (+5 each turn active)
Damage Points: -
Description: By constantly sending chakra waves into the ground, the user is able to sense any vibration going on underground, or on the ground, making him able to sense his enemies' movements at any time.He can also sense multiple vibrations at at a time.
- May be used only by Reido Kira.
*Declined*Jutsu Exist.

Water Style: Sticky Glue Liquid ♦ [Suiton: Nechinechi Guru-Rikiddo]
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: -
Description: The user slams Kouryuu into the water, and the sword liquifies, becomig a very sticky liquid, that can cover up a relatively medium-sized lake.The sticky liquid is able to trap an opponents feet, sucking them deep into the glue-like water.
- Lasts 2 turns.
- Can be used only if the user is in possesion of Kouryuu.
*Approved*

Fire Style: Fire Scales ♦ [Katon: Houka no Hakari]
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: - (60 if enemy is hit)
Description: The user infuses Fire Chakra into Kouryuu, igniting it's scales.If an enemy is hit by Kouryuu's scales during this technique, besides severe cuts, he will get 3rd degree burnings.
- Effects last 3 turns.
- Can be used only if the user is in possesion of Kouryuu.
*Approved*

Wind Style: Dissipation ♦ [Fuuton: Hotou]
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Large Scale [1-100 m]
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: By swinging Kouryuu, the user sends hot or cold chakra waves into the sky, depending on the weather, and the weather goes hay-wire, there are a total of four tornadoes that form and travel along the whole terrain around the user and the enemy.There are also thunderstorms, that form on a scale of 1 to 100 meters.Once the weather gets back to normal, this technique cannot be used again.
- The user cannot use any jutsu during this.
- Effects last 3 turns.
- Jutsu is reversible [meaning the user can stop it whenever he wants to].
- May be used once per battle.
- May be used only by Reido Kira.
*Declined*

Water Style: Hydra Mode ♦ [Suiton: Hydra Mo-Do]
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 55 (+10 chakra to every attack)
Damage Points: - [+20 Damage to all water attacks, 0 damage from any Water Technique, -10 damage to all elemental jutsus, except Water] (-50 Damage to the user)
Description: By fusing his chakra with the water, the user becomes one with the water, increasing the power of all of his jutsus and all of the water jutsus used against him are useless.
○ The user can become one with water, he can turn into water when he is standing on water, and he can come out of other water sources.
○ The user is water, so water cannot harm him, any water technique used against him is useless.
○ The user is water, so Lightning does affect him.
○ The user is water, so other elements the user uses are weak while in Hydra Mode.
○ When the user becomes flesh again, his cells become cold and sometimes they die, causing him to freeze intensively, making his muscles give in, or even causing some of his limbs to not be able to move.
Restrictions:
- Effects of this mode last 4 turns.
- After this jutsu the user isn't able to use Water Techniques for the rest of the battle.
- The user is a lightning conductor during this mode, so lightning affects him.
- All of the jutsus that aren't Water, have reduced damage during this mode.
- Can be teached and used only by Reido Kira.
*I believe their is a similar mode like this, but i'll leave to Grim or Rei like you requested this time.

*I am asking that this jutsu to be exclusively checked by Rei or Hells, since they are in charge of modes, and I believe it's not OP since I added alot of restrictions to it. =_=
 
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Game Ibukuro (Toad Stomach)
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A (If the opponent is caught in this the match is over)
Description: The user touches the ground and then summons everything that is in a close range to the insides of a toads stomach. If the opponent has been caught in this it is unavoidable once teleported.

Note: Useable twice per battle.
*Declined*

Nami Hijutsu: Nami Pulse (Wave Secret Arts: Wave Pulse)
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After performing the needed handseals the user places there palm on the ground, realasing a large amount of water chakra into the earth. A Sudden shake occurs and multiple tentacle like vines made of water appear all around the opponent. They will then attack the opponent and constrict. These tentacles can be as long as the user wants having them stretch to incredibly lengths.


Note: Useable Twice per battle.
Note: Only members from Namigakure can use this jutsu
*Approved*

(Fuuton: Fuuton Tama)-Wind Style Wind Sphere
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points 80
description: The user creates a very condense spining wind sphere above the opponent. The wind sphere is created so high up that it can?t be seen or heard by the opponent, when the user wishes he can control it to come smashing down upon the opponent hitting them so hard that they are unable to move due to the force. When the sphere hits the floor the shire power of it will cause a creator.

Note: Takes one turn to form, can only be used once per battle.

*Pending*Hmmm, idk..Have Grimm or Rei check on this.
Ok.
 

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(Fuuton: kamikaze tesaki)-Wind Style: Divine Wind Fingers
Type:Attack
Rank:A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: a taijustu based attack where the user channels wind chakra into his hands, which causes an effect similar to rasenshuriken, only not as powerful. Once the chakra is in their hands, it can be used for a physical attack that will severely cut their opponent wherever they are touched.
*Declined*Your fingers would be cut to pieces from storing so much wind chakra..O_O!

(Doton: tsuchi tesaki) - Earth Style: Earth Fingers
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points 60
description: a taijutsu based attack where the user channels earth chakra into his hands. this allows the user to either create rock like gloves that cause additional damage to the opponent. it can also be used as a one time defense. when in defensive mode, the earth fingers allow the user to deflect all type of physical attacks (swords, all kunai, shuriken etc etc) if the fingers have been used defensivly, they can not be used for three turns.
+10 physical attack if landed​
*Declined*Remove the highlighted. Bit oped for A rank.
forget about the wind fingers jutsu, but i don't think you quite understood what i was talking about when i said it deflected all physical attacks so i'll elaborate more.

(Doton: tsuchi tesaki) - Earth Style: Earth Fingers
Type: Attack/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points 60
description: a taijutsu based attack where the user channels earth chakra into his hands. this allows the user to either create rock like gloves that cause additional damage to the opponent. it can also be used as a one time defense. when in defensive mode, the earth fingers allow the user to deflect all weapon types (not including the seven swordsmen swords) of physical attacks (swords, all kunai, shuriken etc etc)
if the fingers have been used defensivly, they can not be used for three turns.
+10 physical attack if landed​

I understand what you mean, but by saying any you make the jutsu description too general, which some could interpret wrong.

Example all taijutsu is physical attacks. etc.. Had to have you specify.

Anywho. *Approved*
 
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[Kuchiyose No Jutsu:Mokurei, Kumo] Summoning Technique:Mokurei, The Spider
Rank: S
Type: Summoning
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: Mokurei Is a Large Spider that can make transparent Webs that Trap the opponents, the webs are large enough to trap mutipule opponents and is impossible to break with brute strength or cut with a bladed object, Mokurei can also shoot webs from his mouth too attack opponents
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle
Note: Must be taught by Kaze Kuchiki
*Declined*Spider Contract Exist. Kidoumaru is owner.
 
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Insect Cocoon (Mushi Miyu)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
This unique jutsu is a secret technique that allows the user to increase the speed of insects' development. As the user's body is already a hive of sorts for the insects, the user will encase himself in an actual cocoon to further aid the insects. This is an extremely useful move for Aburame clan members, since their attacks mainly focus on the usage of bugs. However, using this in the midst of a battle can be potentially dangerous as it leaves the user static and vulnerable.(Can Be Used By Bug Clones)
(Usable Only By Bug Users)
*Idk what this jutsu does? Like speed up development for what?*


___________
~Declined

u cannot use this jutsu in battle =/ it takes time to breed bugs


to increase the number of bugs
 
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Name:Suiton: Genbu Kyanon (Water King Cannon)
Rank: S
Range:Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 40
Damage:+20 to water Jutsu
Description: After Sword to Gun Conversion the User Imbues water Chakra granted by the Spirt King Genbu into the witch gun. This then grants the user the ability to create powerful water jutsu only usable during this mode. As a Result. THe users Fire Jutsu will Be Greatly Reduced.
(last 3 turns)
(no more sword to gun jutsu for 2turns afterwards)
(-20 to any fire jutsu used by the user)
___________
~Approved


Name: Genbu Tsumetai Hando (Water Style: Water Spirits Hands)
Rank: S
Range: Short
Type: Attaack
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80 (if used for direct attacks) (-10 to user per turn)
Description: By imbuing wind and water chakra into the Genbu Cannon. The user fires of a max of 2 hands made of Ice. these hands are then able to do only water jutsu or attack the opponent directly with ice shards or themselves.
(Can be melted with a fire jutsu)
(last 2turns)
___________
~Declined


Srry Goro had a Brain Fart there. It has been Fixed.
 
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Lightning Style:Electrifying Surge
Rank: C
Range: Long-Mid
Type: Attaack
Chakra: 40
Damage:65
Description:The user focuses lightning chakra to the ground or, if the user used a water type jutsu, the lightning spreads to the ground and electrifies anything that it touches(covering up more than a 15 mile radius).Once it has reached the opponent it starts to cling to them and starts going up and starts to suffocate them nad by adding more chakra the user can electrocute them even more.
*Can only be used/taught by Sharingan09
___________
~Declined

ovpered to be a C rank. and similar to the chidori storm
 
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Secret Snow Arts: Imperial Blizzard Of Dragons ♦ [Kyuusho Yuki Gigei:Inperiaru Buriza-do no Doragon]
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user Sends out a blizzard of snow at the opponent shaped like multiple dragons.
Note: This Justu can only be used by Minato1
Note: the user cannot use ice justu in the next turn.
Note can only be used twice per battle
___________
~Approved
 
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Summoning: LightSaber
Rank: S
Type:Attack
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user Summons a Green Lightsaber that can be used for Sword to sword combat.
Note: This Justu can only be used by Minato1
Note: this summoning lats for 3 turns.
Note: can only be used Once per battle
___________
~Declined
 
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summoning: kamikaze swords (subeta jisatsu)
rank: FORBIDDEN
type: attack/defense
range: short long
chakra: 50
damage: depends on the opponents attack (100 to the user)
description: the user will summon 2 sword one in each hand in his left hand the user holds a sword that absorb's the jutsu of the opponent once this happens the sword will send out spikes from its hilt that stops the user from disarming the jutsu and the pierce him all the way up his arms so he cant use jutsu that require complex hand sings for the rest of the battle then a chakra chain will appear between the swords this is the jutsu that was absorbed after 1 turn of this the chakra chain will disappear and the sword in the users right hand will start to shine bright blue and shake (10 damage done to the users already injured arm) then erupting out of the sword will be the opponents jutsu but twice as powerful and moving at great speed so only thunder god technique can dodge it and it must have been set up before and can only be blocked by forbidden rank jutsu and up (or jutsu like appolows grief that are pretty much unstoppable) hand however there is a catch tp the jutsu the user (not clones) cant use any jutsu while the swords are in play and if the swords are destroyed the jutsu will explode in the users face killing him
NOTES
once per battle
only 2 clones can be on the field while the swords are
the user cant use any jutsu while the swords are in play
the user must keep his arms completely still otherwise the swords will explode killing the user
the user cant use summonings for the rest of the battle
the turn after the user cant use S rank jutsu and up
only S rank jutsu and up can destroy the swords
clones cant be used for the rest of the battle
after three turns of the sword being out of play the users arms will be so hurt he wont be able to continue fighting
___________
~Declined
 
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(Kyousei suna shuriken) Great sand shuriken
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: 80
Description: the user releases a large amount of wind chakra in his hand and combines it with sand to mold a large shuriken which he throws at the opponent. The shuriken"s sand eats away at the opponents skin, just like a sand blaster, causing unbearable pain.
*Note: must be able to control sand.
*Note: can only be used 3x per battle
*Note: can only be taught by Tokugawa Yoshimune.
___________
~Approved



(Kyousei suna mori saishuu dansu)Great sand lances last dance

Rank: S-rank
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Attack points: 80
Description: the user summons several lances made out of sand that are hardened at extreme pressure out of the strongest minerals in the earth, just like shukaku’s shield, and uses them to impale the opponent. The lances come out of wherever the sand is whether it be on the ground or the sky and can be controlled just like the sand.
*Note: can only be used by a sand user.
*Note: can only be used 3x per battle.
*Note: can only be used by Tokugawa Yoshimune.
___________
~Declined
 
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Earth Style: Grand Vibration ♦ [Doton: Doudou no Yure]
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15 (+5 each turn active)
Damage Points: -
Description: By constantly sending chakra waves into the ground, the user is able to sense any vibration going on underground, or on the ground, making him able to sense his enemies' movements at any time.He can also sense multiple vibrations at at a time.
- May be used only by Reido Kira.
*Declined*Jutsu Exist.

Water Style: Sticky Glue Liquid ♦ [Suiton: Nechinechi Guru-Rikiddo]
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short- Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: -
Description: The user slams Kouryuu into the water, and the sword liquifies, becomig a very sticky liquid, that can cover up a relatively medium-sized lake.The sticky liquid is able to trap an opponents feet, sucking them deep into the glue-like water.
- Lasts 2 turns.
- Can be used only if the user is in possesion of Kouryuu.
*Approved*

Fire Style: Fire Scales ♦ [Katon: Houka no Hakari]
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: - (60 if enemy is hit)
Description: The user infuses Fire Chakra into Kouryuu, igniting it's scales.If an enemy is hit by Kouryuu's scales during this technique, besides severe cuts, he will get 3rd degree burnings.
- Effects last 3 turns.
- Can be used only if the user is in possesion of Kouryuu.
*Approved*

Wind Style: Dissipation ♦ [Fuuton: Hotou]
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Large Scale [1-100 m]
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: By swinging Kouryuu, the user sends hot or cold chakra waves into the sky, depending on the weather, and the weather goes hay-wire, there are a total of four tornadoes that form and travel along the whole terrain around the user and the enemy.There are also thunderstorms, that form on a scale of 1 to 100 meters.Once the weather gets back to normal, this technique cannot be used again.
- The user cannot use any jutsu during this.
- Effects last 3 turns.
- Jutsu is reversible [meaning the user can stop it whenever he wants to].
- May be used once per battle.
- May be used only by Reido Kira.
*Declined*

Water Style: Hydra Mode ♦ [Suiton: Hydra Mo-Do]
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Supplementary
Range: -
Chakra Cost: 55 (+10 chakra to every attack)
Damage Points: - [+20 Damage to all water attacks, 0 damage from any Water Technique, -10 damage to all elemental jutsus, except Water] (-50 Damage to the user)
Description: By fusing his chakra with the water, the user becomes one with the water, increasing the power of all of his jutsus and all of the water jutsus used against him are useless.
○ The user can become one with water, he can turn into water when he is standing on water, and he can come out of other water sources.
○ The user is water, so water cannot harm him, any water technique used against him is useless.
○ The user is water, so Lightning does affect him.
○ The user is water, so other elements the user uses are weak while in Hydra Mode.
○ When the user becomes flesh again, his cells become cold and sometimes they die, causing him to freeze intensively, making his muscles give in, or even causing some of his limbs to not be able to move.
Restrictions:
- Effects of this mode last 4 turns.
- After this jutsu the user isn't able to use Water Techniques for the rest of the battle.
- The user is a lightning conductor during this mode, so lightning affects him.
- All of the jutsus that aren't Water, have reduced damage during this mode.
- Can be teached and used only by Reido Kira.
*I believe their is a similar mode like this, but i'll leave to Grim or Rei like you requested this time.

*I am asking that this jutsu to be exclusively checked by Rei or Hells, since they are in charge of modes, and I believe it's not OP since I added alot of restrictions to it. =_=
Replacing the declined submisssions with:

Water Style: Octopus Barrier Tentacles ♦ [Suiton: Tako Sekisho Shokushu]

Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: -
Description: The user creates eight water tentacles, that connect at his waist.The tentacles are about 3 meters long [each] and they can protect the user from an incoming Water Style attack of B rank and under.The user can also use the water tentacles to whip the enemy. [no hand seals required]
Restrictions:
- May be used twice per battle.
- After it protects the user it disperses.
- If the user uses them as whips, the effects of the jutsu last 2 turns.
- May be used and teached only by Reido Kira.

Lightning Style: Humoungous Thousand Birds ♦ [Raiton: Dekai Chidori]
Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Medium
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user releases a huge beam of lightning from Kouryuu, that can level a small forest.The lightning takes on the characteristics of
Chidori, and it can be infused in metals and such.The high speeds of this jutsu makes it hard for enemies without Sharingan, or at least a good timing and reaction, to dodge it.
Restrictions:
- May be used twice per battle.
- May be used and teached only by Reido Kira.

@Goro: Izuna made a similar mode a long time ago, but he retired, and he is no longer the Water Sage, also his mode was alot more OP, and had a different name.
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

(Katon: Shinkou Ryuu Kaen) ? Fire Release: Rising Dragon Flame

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user releases a large amount of chakra into the earth by stomping on the ground and then causes a rush of dormant fire from deep within the earth to rise up below the enemy and envelop him in an erupting flame in the shape of a large dragon head.
*Declined*Limits.

Note: Can only be used 3 times
Note: Only members of the Sharinganmasters hideout can use this jutsu
(Katon: Shinkou Ryuu Kaen) ? Fire Release: Rising Dragon Flame

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: After making a few hand seals the user releases a large amount of chakra into the earth by stomping on the ground and then causes a rush of dormant fire from deep within the earth to rise up below the enemy and envelop him in an erupting flame in the shape of a large dragon head.
*Declined*Limits.

Note: Can only be used 2 times
Note: Only members of the Sharinganmasters hideout can use this jutsu

made two times per battle and added in description need use hand seals
 
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Kane Art (Metall Art)
(Ninjutsu:Kane Art Rakka) Ninjutsu : Metal Art Drop
Rank: D
Type : Offensive and Defensive
Chakra Cost : 10 Chakra
Damage Point : 20
Description : This Jutsu takes up time and will leave the user defenseless under the time being , first off the user takes up wires and Shurikens . Then the user bonds them with the wires and being to swing them around him in order to disturb the wind power and begins to use his chakra to lead in the wires to make the deadly in touching .

Notes :
Can only be used 3x a battle
This will leave the user exhausted after the use of it.
Can only be learned and used by Ookami

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(Ninjutsu: Kane Seichuu Doragon) Ninjutsu : Metall Controlled Dragon
Rank: D
Type : Offensive and Defensive
Chakra Cost : 10 Chakra
Damage Point : 20
Description : The User throws all of his Metall weapon in the air then controlls them to bind with each other so they will become large and tall and the user controlls it with his chakra and Attacks the Enemy with it or blocks attacks with it.

Notes:
Can only be used once per battle
User will be easy target after the use of it cuz its restraition on the body.
Can only be Taught and used by OoKami

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(Ninjutsu : Kane Meiun No Seichuu Jutsu ) Ninjutsu : Metall Doom of Controll Techinque
Rank : D
Type : Offensive and Defensive
Chakra Cost : 10
Damage point : 20
Range : Close Combat
Description : All Metall Objects in his surrounds attaches to him and makes him a Metallic Armor , which he will use in both defensive and offensive purposes , He becomes a bit slower but much stronger and available to widstand a fire jutsu from D to C .
Or he can use this Metallic Armor to make a Giant Sword of his left hand and cuts the enemy.

Note : This will leave the user defenseless and exhausted .
Can only be used once.
Can be used and learned by Ookami Buono

So .

*All Declined*Get your post up and become a gennin first.
 
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Re: ♦ Custom Jutsu Submission ♦

Fuuton: Kazana (Wind Style: Wind Tunnel)
Type: attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focuses his chakra to create a tunnel of wind that will damage all that are hit by it or are within it. This jutsu creates a tunnel of 5m wide and 3m high, and only goes one way.
Note: can only be taught by Ingwer Hatake
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