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Custom Jutsu Submission 
Rank:S
Range:Short
Type:Supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-5 per each turn)
Damage:0
Discription: THe user creates a 1m diameter orb out of water the orb can shoot small bullets from inside of it and each bullet is as strong as Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet and 5 bullets can be shot per turn.
*It lasts for 3 turns unless taken out by a powerfull jutsu
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
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~Approved
Weapon Hells Fury
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost:-20 per turn of that chakra is transmited (-10 per change of chakra type)
Damage:80
Description:A sword that is made completely from the same metal as the chakra blades.The sword is 1.2m in lenght and is 10kg. It can be charged with chakra and depending on the element of the chakra it can have differant abilitys:
Water:the blade can extend into great lenghts turn and take differant shapes
Lightning:the sword shockes anyone that touches it or any one that touches it with a metal object
Wind:the sword can be moved faster by relesing the wind like a jet motor also it can cut through a lot of things and weapons in this form
Fire:the weapon is hot and burns anything it touches
Earth:the weapon gets much much harder and is near unbreakable
*Once per 2 turns can the chakra type be changed
*only burakyilan and people who he gives has this blade
*The user cant use any element attacks of the element the sword is charged with
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~Declined
removed the bold
Water:Wave Secret Art Inner Water Doom
Rank: S
Type:attack
Range:very short must have contact with the enemy
Chakra Cost:40
DAmage:80
Description:the user touches his enemy and then makes the water inside the enemy(70% of everyone is water) come out like spikes piercing the enemys body
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*It can only be used 1 time per battle
*the user cant use any water jutsu on the fallowing 5 turns
*Because the jutsu needs a lot of chakra to move water inside the enemy the user will be tired after using the jutsu
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~Declined
Water:Giant Bulding (Suiton:Grand tou)
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Supplemant
Chakra Cost:40(-10 each turn)
Damage:0
Description: THe user slams his hands into a huge body of water and a giant object appears out of water. The object can be a fortress, castle, basketball field, a huge wall, a house ect.The object is made of condense water so its parts are increadbly hard.(harder then steel) The object can be maximumly 5000m square(which is 50m wide and 100m in leght)and its hight can be maximum of 25m.
*There must be a large source of water for this to be used
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*The bulding last only 3 turns
*It can only be used 1 time per battle
*the user cant use any water jutsu on the fallowing 2 turns
*the user is left very tired after the jutsu(like yamato felt after he used his wood house bulding jutsu)
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i didn't i approve this b4?


Water: Bullet Orb(Suiton:kyuutai Teppoudama)Water:Giant Bulding (Suiton:Grand tou)
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-10 each turn)
Damage:0
Description: THe user slams his hands into a huge body of water and a giant object appears out of water. The object can be a fortress, castle, basketball field, a huge wall, a house ect.The object is made of condense water so its parts are increadbly hard.(harder then steel) The object can be maximumly 5000m square(which is 50m wide and 100m in leght)and its hight can be maximum of 25m.
*There must be a large source of water for this to be used
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*The bulding last only 3 turns
*It can only be used 1 time per battle
*the user cant use any water jutsu on the fallowing turn
~Declined~
add abit more restriction to it
Water: Bullet Orb(Suiton:kyuutai Teppoudama)
Rank:S
Range:Short
Type:Supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-5 per each turn)
Damage:0
Discription: THe user creates a 1m diameter orb out of water the orb can shoot small bullets from inside of it and each bullet is as strong as Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet and 5 bullets can be shot per turn.
*It lasts for 5 turns unless taken out by a powerfull jutsu
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
~declined~
make it last three turns
and only be used 2x per battle
Rank:S
Range:Short
Type:Supplemantry
Chakra Cost:40(-5 per each turn)
Damage:0
Discription: THe user creates a 1m diameter orb out of water the orb can shoot small bullets from inside of it and each bullet is as strong as Suiton: Teppoudama) - Water Style: Water Bullet and 5 bullets can be shot per turn.
*It lasts for 3 turns unless taken out by a powerfull jutsu
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*Can only be used 3 times per battle
___________
~Approved
Weapon Hells Fury
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Weapon
Chakra Cost:-20 per turn of that chakra is transmited (-10 per change of chakra type)
Damage:80
Description:A sword that is made completely from the same metal as the chakra blades.The sword is 1.2m in lenght and is 10kg. It can be charged with chakra and depending on the element of the chakra it can have differant abilitys:
Water:the blade can extend into great lenghts turn and take differant shapes
Lightning:the sword shockes anyone that touches it or any one that touches it with a metal object
Wind:the sword can be moved faster by relesing the wind like a jet motor also it can cut through a lot of things and weapons in this form
Fire:the weapon is hot and burns anything it touches
Earth:the weapon gets much much harder and is near unbreakable
*Once per 2 turns can the chakra type be changed
*only burakyilan and people who he gives has this blade
*The user cant use any element attacks of the element the sword is charged with
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~Declined
removed the bold
Water:Wave Secret Art Inner Water Doom
Rank: S
Type:attack
Range:very short must have contact with the enemy
Chakra Cost:40
DAmage:80
Description:the user touches his enemy and then makes the water inside the enemy(70% of everyone is water) come out like spikes piercing the enemys body
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*It can only be used 1 time per battle
*the user cant use any water jutsu on the fallowing 5 turns
*Because the jutsu needs a lot of chakra to move water inside the enemy the user will be tired after using the jutsu
___________
~Declined
Water:Giant Bulding (Suiton:Grand tou)
Rank:S
Range:Short-mid
Type: Supplemant
Chakra Cost:40(-10 each turn)
Damage:0
Description: THe user slams his hands into a huge body of water and a giant object appears out of water. The object can be a fortress, castle, basketball field, a huge wall, a house ect.The object is made of condense water so its parts are increadbly hard.(harder then steel) The object can be maximumly 5000m square(which is 50m wide and 100m in leght)and its hight can be maximum of 25m.
*There must be a large source of water for this to be used
*The jutsu can only be used by burakyilan and people who learned from him
*The bulding last only 3 turns
*It can only be used 1 time per battle
*the user cant use any water jutsu on the fallowing 2 turns
*the user is left very tired after the jutsu(like yamato felt after he used his wood house bulding jutsu)
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i didn't i approve this b4?
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