[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Perception]

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(Genjutsu - Shōshitsu) Illusionary Arts - Disappearance
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs one hand seal placing their target in a genjutsu. It will then appear to the target as if the user disappears into the ground via the hiding like a mole jutsu. Then new clouds will appear in the sky that are 0.001 m in length at 1 sec intervals. Even though the clouds are clearly part of the illusion and more appear every second, they are almost impossible to detect by eyesight due to their short length. The target will see nothing but the battlefield and the newly forming clouds minus the user until the illusion is broken.

Note: Can only be used two times a battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Perception.
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-Declined- Needs a duration limit, also you say that it's impossible to detect the clouds by eyesight, then in another sentence you say the opponent will see nothing but the battlefield and the newly formed clouds, make up your mind lol.

(Genjutsu - Shōshitsu) Illusionary Arts - Disappearance
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs one hand seal placing their target in a genjutsu. It will then appear to the target as if the user disappears into the ground via the hiding like a mole jutsu. Then new clouds will appear in the sky that are 0.001 m in length at 1 sec intervals. Even though the clouds are clearly part of the illusion and more appear every second, they are almost impossible to detect by eyesight due to their short length. The illusion will show the battle field minus the user and the newly forming clouds until the genjutsu is broken or one full turn has passed.

Note: Illusion lasts for one full turn.
Note: Can only be used two times a battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Perception.
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-Declined- So What the opponent will see is you going into the earth via hiding like a mole technique, then what exactly is the use of the clouds if the opponent can't see them, it's like they are not even there. so this brings a new dimension here, i need to know some stuff first, like does this also hide techniques you use? the sound of the techniques? or only hide you from the vision of your opponent

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(Ketsu~āru Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Barron, Majesutikku) - Quetzal Summoning Technique: Barron, the Majestic
Rank: S-Rank
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will smear their hand with a small amount of their own blood and perform the Boar → Dog → Bird → Monkey → Ram hand seals. After slamming their hands together Barron the Resplendent Quetzal is summoned in a puff of smoke. Barron is the leader of all Quetzals and the oldest among them. Barron stands at 16 in tall and has light blue eyes, a small yellow beak, and three 2 ft long tail feathers extruding from his backside. He wears a coat of bright green and blue feathers and his chest is blood red. The attire is completed with a small crown of gold feathers adorning his head. Barron's birth is placed sometime during the first human settlement of the Land of Fire. With the passing of time he has experienced the extinction and rise of several generations. In his old age he has become battle hardened and wise through war. He is a proud and majestic being both in appearance and action. Barron like all Quetzals has thin feathers that are easily torn. As such like the rest of the Quetzals he has developed a thick plumage to protect himself. The plumage is thick enough to protect from impact forces and can be shed apart to protect against cutting/burning/shocking effects. This allows Barron to withstand the equivalent of 1 B-Rank elemental or other ninjutsu. By inhaling and gathering a massive amount of wind chakra Barron can expel a large S-Rank wind blast in the shape of a Quetzal from its mouth. The wind Quetzal is 10 m in length and wing span, and travels at the speed of the jutsu Wind Style: Pressure Damage. Due to its size and quick speed this wind Quetzal can't be controlled. Barron is also capable of producing an A-Rank wind Quetzal that is half the size of the S-Rank form. While not as powerful or as fast as the S-Rank form a great deal of control can be exerted over the A-Rank Quetzal, and it can be directed and redirected to fly to specific locations. Barron can use his long tail feathers as a sight medium to induce Genjutsu. The tail feathers are long with respect to the rest of Barron's body and are nearly impossible to avoid seeing when looking at Barron. Becoming well versed in Genjutsu through battle experience and as the leader of the Quetzal, Barron can use all normal genjutsu. In addition using the same sight based medium Barron can cast a unique doubled layer genjutsu on a target. In this genjutsu a target is placed under an A and S Rank genjutsu. The genjutsu are cast at the same time, but the S Rank illusion acts on the target first followed by the A Rank illusion. In the S rank illusion 4 ancient warriors from the first settlement of the land of fire will appear instantaneously around the target. 1 warrior will appear on the left and right of the target out of thin air and grab the target's arms. At the same time the other 2 warriors will simultaneously appear from the ground below the target and grab the target's legs. This makes it so the target will see themselves as being immobilized and will not be able to move in reality. After the warriors grab the target the A rank illusion will begin and a Quetzal will come flying from the sky and hover in front of the target's heart. The Quetzal will then proceed to dig into the target's chest with it's beak and claws and rip out the target's heart. The Quetzal will grab the target's heart with its claws and land on the ground. Then the Quetzal will proceed to eat the target's heart in front of him. This illusion causes mental damage to the target equivalent to an A-Rank jutsu.
Note: Wind and genjutsu abilities count as a move towards the user's turn.
Note: Wind jutsu has a two turn cool down and can be used twice per battle.
Note: Normal genjutsu has a two turn cool down and can be used twice per battle.
Note: The doubled layer genjutsu can only be used once a battle. After it is used Barron's tail feathers fall out and he can no longer use genjutsu for the rest of the battle.
Note: Barron can stay on the field for 4 turns.
Note: Can only be summoned once.
Note: Must have signed Quetzal contract.
Note: Can only be taught by Perception.
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-Declined- Remove the genjutsu, it's too much, also the blast it can use is too big, and while i have a technique that lets a crow release a wind/lightning blast in the shape of a crow making this technique a rip off, i'll allow it to you, but what do you mean that it's 10 meters? width or hieght, or both? if both then it's too big, also can he use wind techniques other than those? also notice the bold and fix it.

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(Tsumasaki no kanban) - Toe Signs
Rank: NA
Type: Supplementary
Range: NA
Chakra cost: NA
Damage points: N/A
Description: Ninja perform jutsu that often require the manipulation of chakra. This process sometimes involves the use of hand seals. Hand seals are used to further focus a person's chakra. The basic premise of a hand seal is that a person's hands come together to form a closed structure. Through years of research however ninja have found ways to focus chakra using their toes. They have accomplished this by rigorously training their toes to move completely independent of each other. By moving their toes up and down or weaving them together ninja can emulate the formation of hand seals with their toes. This process is different in that it doesn't form a closed structure (i.e. the feet don't come together to form a seal). Since a closed structure focuses chakra more than a non-closed structure, toe signs take a longer time to focus chakra than hand seals. To achieve the same effect of a hand seal manipulation of toes on both feet are required, and one toe sign can be formed at the rate of two hand seals. Toe signs can be used in conjunction with hand seals and this process is explained below.

Suppose a jutsu requires the hand seals: Snake → Ram → Horse → Hare → Ram → Horse → Hare

By using toe signs in conjunction and simultaneously with hand seals this can be performed as follows,

Hand Seals: Snake → Ram → Hare → Ram → Hare
Toe Signs:----------------Toe Sign---------Toe Sign

So the toe sign was used to perform the 3rd hand seal (Horse) and 6th hand seal (Horse). This is done between the formation of the 2nd-4th hand seal (Ram → Hare) and 5th-7th hand seal (Ram → Hare). By doing this the jutsu is performed at a speed of 5 hand seals instead of 7. Toe signs are not visible by the opponent if the user is wearing shoes and toe signs can't be performed when wearing sandals. 1 hand seal jutsu can be performed using a single toe sign. The toe sign in this case will still be at the speed of 2 hand seals. Toe signs can't be performed while walking or running, but they can be performed while in the air.

Note: Toe signs must be listed as a specialty on a person's bio in order to be used. When toe signs are listed as a specialty a person can still have a 1 hand seal specialty, but may not have a faster hand seal specialty.
Note: A individual move separate from a jutsu is not required to perform toe signs as is the case with hand seals.
Note: Can only be taught by Perception.
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-Declined- DNR.

 

[Cursed Prince]

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Raiton: Wakusei Hakaihō | Lightning Style: Planetary Destruction Cannon
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This is a lightning technique created by Black★Star. The user will begin to charge lightning throughout their arm and then slam their hand into an opponent. As soon as contact is made the user will release the vast amount of lightning chakra from their elbow, acting as a sort of propeller. This triples the damage of the initial palm strike. The raw power of the hit is increased ten-fold and has enough power to break bones, send an opponent flying and crushing internal organs. It is even strong enough to actually pierce the opponents body, causing great damage. The lightning infused in the hit also transfers into an opponent body, which tears through the insides of the opponent
~Can only thrice
~Can only be used by Cursed Prince
~No lightning in the same turn

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-Declined- Is this a Taijutsu or a lightning technique, because from the looks of the description it's a Taijutsu powered by lightning chakra, a Lightning technique is a technique that releases bolts, streams of electricity and such, so fix it, and de-power it also.

Raiton/Doton: Bekutorupurēto | Lightning/Earth Style: Vector Plate
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A (80 if used to propel an object towards an opponent)
Description: Vector Plate is a technique that requires the use of both Doton and Raiton chakras. The user will first create what appears to be a Vector Arrow anywhere within range with the use of doton chakra after forming one handseal. The arrow is just large enough to fit 2 people. The arrow will be pointed in the direction wherever the user will want to send his opponent or an object. After forming one more handseal the user will charge lightning chakra through the ground and into the Vector Arrow. The user will then manipulate the Vector Plate with a vast amount of lightning chakra causing the Vector Plate to suddenly move towards the desired direction at unimaginable speeds. The speed of the Vector Plate moving is enough to propel any object that was on top of it in the desired direction up to mid-range away albeit at lower speeds than the Vector Plate. This can be used to send the opponent towards or away from the user, or any other object that touches the Vector Plate. If there is a solid object on top of it and it is sent towards the opponent it can cause a large amount of damage. This Vector Plate is not viable to be used on the user as when a person is sent in a direction of the Vector Plate they are moving to fast to properly control themselves.
~Can only be used twice
~Can only be taught by Cursed Prince
~No Lightning or doton in the same turn
~No lightning or doton A rank or above in the next turn
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-Declined- DNR

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Yamārashi Waza: Piasu Keimō | Porcupine Arts: Piercing Enlightenment
Type: Supplementary/Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80[Each Quill Growth]
Description: Piercing Enlightenment is a mode of sorts, known only to signers of the porcupine contracts and is taught by the elder porcupine Bong-Seon. By circulating chakra throughout their bodies, including their skeletal system, they are allowed to produce from their bodies thick, razor sharp quills. Since it is grown directly from their bones it causes a great deal of pain, as if their skeletal system is outgrowing them. This pain is the price for an exceptionally powerful and ancient technique. The razor-sharp quills can be extended from any part of the body in numerous amounts. the user can fully coat his body in these quills as a closer-range deterrent, a powerful attack, or a shield. Though they can only extend up to short-range they can be shot from the body to reach a mid-range distance. Since this is a mode it lasts for a set amount of turns, in this case being 4. Every time any number of quills are grown from the body it counts as one of the 3 moves per turn and has the damage equivalent to that of an S-rank.
~Can only be used Twice per battle
~Lasts for only 4 turns
~Each Growth of Quills cost as one of the 3 moves per turn
~Once the Mode is over, the quills break and fall off the opponents body, causing a considerable amount of pain that would dizzy them for a moment
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-Declined- No i'm not letting someone use the abilities of their summon through their own body >_>

 

[Venom]

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(Katon: Franpage Shotto) - Fire Style: Flamage Shot
Type: Offensive/Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user spins quickly (While channeling their fire chakra in their leg) and uses air friction to set his/her leg on fire, adding extreme heat to the impact of their kicks to anyone in close range if hit. The user then leaps 2-5 meters into the air and stomps down several times downwards releasing several fireballs towards the desired location with speed and accuracy. The user can also swing their leg vertically/horizontally to release a wave of flame (Similar to "(Kumo-Ryū Kaengiri) - Cloud Style: Flame Slash" technique, but instead of channeling the fire chakra to the blade, this is done in one of the user's leg) that has as much blunt force as a earth jutsu.

Note:
-Flame can remain on leg for a period of 3 of the user's turn at max. After, his base speed will be cut in half and won't be able to use his legs for any other chakra base technique for 5 turns.
-The user can release the flame on his/her leg at will (Don't have to leave it there for the full 3 turns)
-Can only be used 5 times
-Can only be taught by -Venom-
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-Declined- Choose an ability, it's either the fireballs or the wave, not both in a single technique.

 

[Kung Fro]

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(Fuuton: Osuushi no yubi) - Wind Style: Bull's Finger
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user coats his body in wind chakra while extending only the index and pointer finger (resembling a bull's horns). The user then weaves in and out and slams his fingers covered in fuuton chakra into the target.
-Only used twice per battle
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-Declined- What will the fingers do to the opponent exactly? slice through them? push them back with blunt force?

(Doton: Hogo-sha) - Earth Style: 4 Guardians
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user slams his hands onto the ground and holds them there until four 4meter tall Golems are created from the Earth. They are created 2m from the user; one in front, to the left and right, and behind the user. They all face outwards and can only use basic attacks but they can act freely or as a group. Each golem is equivalent to B-rank earth, following the elemental weaknesses and strengths.
-Only used once
-No other Earth Style used in this turn
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-Declined- It's just a rip off of the Stone Golem Technique in which you make 4 golems instead of one.

(Katon/Doton: Hotto tamaishi kikku) - Earth/Fire Style: Hot Boulder Kick
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user stomps his foot on the ground, causing a large boulder about 3x the size of a human to pop out of the ground. The user then kicks the boulder and ignites it with Fire Style, sending a blazing boulder to the target.
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-Approved-

 

[Uzumaki Naruta]

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(Doton/Raiton: Raikou Nami) - Earth/Lightning Style: Lightning Wave
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After doing the Horse -> Snake -> Ox hand seals, the user creates up to 16 small coil pillars on the ground around the target and then the user gathers chakra in his hands, molds it into lightning and then the user releases it to the nearest coil pillar. The pillar catches the lightning and then releases it to another one. The lightning will then travel from one pillar to another according to the user´s desire until it reaches the target, causing severe damage to it.
Note: Shurikens, kunais and other metallic objects can also be used as conductors
Note: It can catch B-rank and below lightning techniques
Note: It can catch up to 3 techniques
Note: Can only be used twice per battle
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-Declined- Why would a pillar of earth conduct lightning? it's the reason earth is weak to lightning is that it doesn't conduct it, making this technique void, once you release the lightning to a pillar, it will only destroy it.

(Oujou Hane) - Death's Plume
Rank: S
Type: Weapon
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: (+20 to Kenjutsu)
Description: Uzumaki Naruta, a resident of Sunagakure, held a deep love for her homeland and yearned to be one with the Wind Country so on her eighteenth birthday she began to work on something to help her accomplish her goal of being one with the Wind. It was Death's Plume an ingenious device that incorporated both a large folding fan and a large buster sword being 1.5 meters in length easily dwarfing her in size and weight. The large sword made of strips of sharpened steel, razor thin wire and thick durable canvas had a special feature with the click of a button found on the hilt it could pop open into a giant folding fan.
It took her many months of training to tune her body to adjust to the large sword but overtime she gained the ability to swing it with such skill and ease that she could cleave entire groups of shinobi with little more then a flick of the wrist. Due to it's sheer size, shape and weight when in sword form the user's damage when using Kenjutsu attacks increases exponentially along with the jutsu's killing power. While in this state the sword can be imbued with Wind Chakra to increase it's killing potential even further gaining an additional +10 to Kenjutsu attacks.
When opened into a fan Naruta can swing it to create Wind Jutsu, this can be done without hand seals much like a regular giant folding fan. It can also be used to fly by standing on the fan itself and manipulating the wind currents, causing wind to lift the fan upwards. It moves about as fast as a normal shinobi can sprint and counts as a jutsu to the user's three jutsu per turn. The fan has one final ability, it can extend the range of Wind Jutsu that are used through it, allowing Short Range jutsu to reach out to Mid Range and allowing Mid Range jutsu reach out to Long Range. This only works for jutsu used through the fan and the user must perform the Seal of Confrontation to accomplish this.
Notes:
-Can be summoned for combat by performing the Ram Handseal if not present
-Imbuing the sword with Wind Chakra counts as a jutsu, so does using it to fly.
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-Declined- Let's break it down, first infusing a sword with chakra is a no, done countless times and not allowed anymore, also why would it boost kenjutsu by +20? simply weight applied to the hit? okay, then in techniques like the Samurai Sabre and Slicing Crimson Wave, it wouldn't make sense if it boosted their power, also that wind lifting ability is a rip off from one of Ushiro's wind techniques, also no alteration of handseals allowed anymore, that means no to performing wind techniques with no handseals, a Fan doesn't generate all wind techniques, only a specific kind exclusive to their usage.

 

[Houdinii]

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(Genjutsu: Muyou)-Illusionary Arts: Futility
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
The user will focus their chakra within their own brain and place themselves under an illusion. In the illusion everything will have appeared to slow down drastically to a crawl, relative to the user. This illusion simply heightens the users perceptions, making their brain work much faster to process the information it receives from the senses. It does not physically speed up the user or slow down the opponent. It only allows the user appear to think and react much faster then they can normally, due to them having much more time to think then normally possible.

Note:
~This slowing effect only lasts for the turn it is used.
~Due to this technique everything around the user will be almost stationary, letting them react to very fast attacks.
~Can only be used 3 times per battle and after its use no genjutsu for two turns
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
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-Declined- Lol no, self genjutsu is not allowed, not to mention one that makes you a Sharingan user.

(Raiton: Keshi Ittou)- Lightning Release: Rave Party
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
The user of this technique will focus huge amounts of raiton chakra into a single hand, compressing all the chakra greatly into a ball of electricity around their hand. This action causes intense pain to the user due to the strain on the chakra system of their arm from the large amounts of chakra and the compression. The user must then touch the ground with that hand, this causes a cluster of 20 'rods' of electricity to burst from the ground wherever they see fit up to mid range. After a short arming time the rods will then send out small electrical pulses into the area short range of themselves, these pulses are sensitive to movement. When movement is detected the rods detonate in an electrical explosion, affecting the area short range of them. When one rod detonates the others react to it and explode as well, trigger a chain reaction of small electrical explosions.

Note:
~The building and compression of the chakra causes intense pain but no lasting damage
~The rods after bursting from the ground have a short arming time of about 1 second, in which they are completely harmless
~The rods cannot be summoned directly under the opponent
~When used the user cannot use lightning techniques above A rank in the same turn or the next
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

 

[Vegeta]

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(Sukauto) - Scouter
Type: Weapon
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The scouter is a device that can pick up chakra signatures of the enemy, telling the user the enemies location, as well as status about their current strength ( a clone will give off a different reading on the scouter of halved power, making it obvious the opponent has split their strength between themselves and the clone, this division of strength will be larger depending on the # of clones made). By performing the Seal of Confrontation while touching the scouter, one can channel their chakra into the scouter activating it's ability to track a hidden opponent.

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-Restrictions-
Last 1 full turn
1 turn cool down between uses
cannot be used by a sensor bio
Will not work against Mu's (Meisaigakure no Jutsu) - Hiding with Camouflage Technique
Can only be taught by ~Vegeta~
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-Declined- We say no to guns as it's part of technology, but this is a whole new brand >_>

 

[BazzBee]

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(Genjutsu: Sakasa sekai) Illusionary Technique: Inverted world technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will look into the opponents eyes and will cast a genjutsu upon him, and will invert the opponents senses and making him/her see everything opposite, even their movements are opposite, f.e you're standing on the opponents left side but the opponent will see you standing on his right.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Bazz
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.
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(Raiton: Yubino Shougeki) Lightning Release: Finger shock technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user gathers Lightning chakra in their dominant hand, they then use their two fingers and release the lightning towards the opponent which once reaches the opponent, will spread out covering a one meter distance and electrify everyone excluding the caster within it.
Note: Can only be used twice per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Bazz

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-Declined- Similar Techniques exist.
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(Katon: Asshukusare Ta Bakuhatsu) Fire Release: Compressed Explosion technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user gather a great amount of Fire chakra and will then compress the chakra into two tiny fireballs which the user will shoot towards the opponent from the opponents 10 and 2 o'clock, the compressed fireballs will clash together just before reaching the opponent and result in a huge explosion which will most likely burn the opponent.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Bazz.
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist .___.

 

[Strawberry]

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(Raiton: Hebi kouzetsu) Lightning Release: Snakes Tongue
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will gather raiton chakra within their mouth and manipulate it into a blade which can extend up to 2 meters in length, The whole procedure is as fast as opening your mouth. Once extended can by used in Close Quarter Combat situations. The blade is capable of cutting like a normal sword and can cause very slight neural imbalance to those struck, making taijutsu harder for a limited amount of time (after next Turn).

Note: Only lasts upto 2 turns
Note: Max 2 time use, requiring 2 turn cool down.
Note: Cannot use another lightning jutsu as long this is in use
Note: Can only be taught by Strawberry
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-Declined- Similar to how Orochimaru releases the Kusanagi blade out of his mouth, basically a rip off.


(Fuuton: Genwaku Kaze) Blinding Wind
Type: Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user user generates a small amount of wind chakra in their lungs and releases it out of their mouth while exhaling like normal, or can be released while talking. The wind chakra is manipulated into a very tiny sharp particles of wind, that can be delivered with a high amount of precision. A single particle by itself wont due any damage but in total all the particles in total are capable of cutting the opponent. Being very small, and masked by the way it is released, it is very hard to detect. If it lands in an opponents eyes, it can lead to blindness, if inhaled by an opponent or forced into their mouth can damage respiratory system, reducing stamina and therefore jujitsu capability. However, an opponent moving in a path not straight towards the user is almost not affected in any way due to the likely hood of many particles not reaching the opponent.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Can only be taught by Strawberry
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-Declined- DNR.

 

[Gèckö]

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Changes:
-I removed all words referring to passive abilities
-Re worded grammatical errors
-Changed chakra usage
-Removed the thought ability

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(Buki: Tentei Papirusu)- Weapon: God's Papyrus
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 for activation, counts as a move{Every round active (-10) | Round= 1 turn from opponent and myself}
Damage: N/A
Description: God's papyrus is a weapon supposedly said to be a gift from god himself to men with extraordinary chakra control. In other words it is a gift to the gifted. As shown in the picture at the top it is simply a bandage. To an extent that is true, god's papyrus is an extremely long bandage that wraps around the user's body. But the trick to this weapon is it is a living object. Similar to how kisame's sword acts on it's own will and interacts with the user. God's papyrus is able to do the same. But nothing in life is free, in order for the bandages to move about freely, the user has to give up a portion of his chakra. Willingly or unwillingly, if god's papyrus is attached to the user, it will take chakra from the user's body. As stated earlier God's papyrus is a living object and it can move about at it's own will. Through intense training it can grow accustomed to the user and act as an extension of his own body parts. God's papyrus is approximately 15 meters long. 5 of it's meters wrap around the user's body and the other 10 can be used for what ever purposes. Being a gift from god, god's papyrus is not made of any normal material. Being made of the a strong fiber and the user's chakra god's papyrus is indestructible. The bandages have 4 main outlets on the user's body. His left and right feet and his left and right hands. Due to this, these body parts are left bare and open for attacks or other purposes. On each end of these bandages as well as the outlet body parts is a small mark which conjoins the bandages with the user. There chakra systems and thoughts. But they are still two different beings, capable of acting on there own will. A minor drawback to these bandages is if the user runs out of chakra the bandages "die" so to speak. (Just resting) But all coins have a flip side, when the bandages die whatever was stored inside the bandages goes back into the user's body. The last and probably most basic ability of God's papyrus is it's indestructible bond with the user. As long as the bandages have chakra stored inside them, they are indestructible and can't be ripped through basic attacks. (Taijutsu and Weapons) The bandages are conjoined to the user both through chakra and body meaning the user's body is able to resist weaponry based attacks in areas covered by bandages.
Abilities:
-Backwards Compatible, so anything that is stored within the bandages can be reverted back to the user.
-God's papyrus is indestructible
-God's Papyrus is a living being (Is able to move on it's own)
-The user and the bandages are fully attached to each other. (Similar to a leach or a tick stuck to your skin, extremely hard to remove)
-Can hold up to b rank chakra
-Does not conduct the user's attacks

The below ability happens as the user's chakra is absorbed:

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(Buki Waza: Chakra Yunizon)- Weapon Technique: Chakra Unison
Type: Supplementary/Passive
Rank: C Rank
Range: Self
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: The bandages while connected to the user absorb and store the user's chakra inside itself for future use and the ability to move about freely.
Note: Does not work without a chakra source

Restrictions:
-Can only be used twice per match
-Can only be in affect 4 turns consecutively. (2 from the user 2 from the opponent)
-When those 4 turns are done the bandages need 2 turns to rest/recharge before being able to be used again. (After those 4 turns they come back automatically
-After the two times per match the bandages are just baggage not being able to be used again all chakra returns to the user
-Activation of bandages counts as a move
-Special Case: If genjutsu chakra is stored inside the bandages the bandages are unaffected by the genjutsu but when it's time for the chakra to be reverted back to the body the user will experience the genjutsu then.
Other: The symbol that is on the bandages and outlet body parts, 団. A basic kanji which stands for unity it has no relation to fuuinjutsu what so ever. Can only be used/taught by Gecko.
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-Declined- First of all, it's declined because of that last C-rank technique, with that your submission is 4 techniques in total and your techniques all should be automatically declined, it's a technique that should be submitted after the weapon is approved, the problem with the weapon is that i don't get what you are going to do with that chakra stored in it, like can it get you out of genjutsu? can it detect being inside a genjutsu? can you store techniques inside of it and release them at your opponent?.

Thank you for unbanning me^^

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-I removed all words referring to passive abilities
-Re worded grammatical errors
-Changed chakra usage
-Removed the thought ability
-Removed the move dante told me to
-Stated what happens with the stored chakra

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(Buki: Tentei Papirusu)- Weapon: God's Papyrus
Type: Supplementary/Attack
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40 for activation, counts as a move{Every round active (-10) | Round= 1 turn from opponent and myself}
Damage: N/A
Description: God's papyrus is a weapon supposedly said to be a gift from god himself to men with extraordinary chakra control. In other words it is a gift to the gifted. As shown in the picture at the top it is simply a bandage. To an extent that is true, god's papyrus is an extremely long bandage that wraps around the user's body. But the trick to this weapon is it is a living object. Similar to how kisame's sword acts on it's own will and interacts with the user. God's papyrus is able to do the same. But nothing in life is free, in order for the bandages to move about freely, the user has to give up a portion of his chakra. Willingly or unwillingly, if god's papyrus is attached to the user, it will take chakra from the user's body. As stated earlier God's papyrus is a living object and it can move about at it's own will. Through intense training it can grow accustomed to the user and act as an extension of his own body parts. God's papyrus is approximately 15 meters long. 5 of it's meters wrap around the user's body and the other 10 can be used for what ever purposes. Being a gift from god, god's papyrus is not made of any normal material. Being made of the a strong fiber and the user's chakra god's papyrus is indestructible. The bandages have 4 main outlets on the user's body. His left and right feet and his left and right hands. Due to this, these body parts are left bare and open for attacks or other purposes. On each end of these bandages as well as the outlet body parts is a small mark which conjoins the bandages with the user. There chakra systems and thoughts. But they are still two different beings, capable of acting on there own will. A minor drawback to these bandages is if the user runs out of chakra the bandages "die" so to speak. (Just resting) But all coins have a flip side, when the bandages die whatever was stored inside the bandages goes back into the user's body. The last and probably most basic ability of God's papyrus is it's indestructible bond with the user. As long as the bandages have chakra stored inside them, they are indestructible and can't be ripped through basic attacks. (Taijutsu and Weapons) The bandages are conjoined to the user both through chakra and body meaning the user's body is able to resist weaponry based attacks in areas covered by bandages.
Abilities:
-Backwards Compatible, so anything that is stored within the bandages can be reverted back to the user.
-God's papyrus is indestructible
-God's Papyrus is a living being (Is able to move on it's own)
-The user and the bandages are fully attached to each other. (Similar to a leach or a tick stuck to your skin, extremely hard to remove)
-Can hold up to 80 Chakra points (not all at once)
-Does not conduct the user's attacks

When the bandages are connected to the user's body, the bandages absorb 40 chakra points from the user's body initially to activate. From the point on, the bandages absorb 10 chakra points every round to stay active. When the bandages are active they can release the user from up to b rank genjutsu once per turn. The bandages don't detect genjutsu, but rather pick up the excess chakra entering the user's body. And over feed for that round. When the 2 rounds or 4 turns are up/the bandages can't feed any more, all chakra stored inside the bandages is returned to the user's body. So the genjutsu isn't really disappearing, it's just being held until the bandages can't feed any more.

Examples:

-The first round, the bandages absorb 30 chakra points. (10 to move and what not, 20 for bringer of darkness.)
-The next round, the bandages absorb 10 chakra points. (10 to move and what not)
The genjutsu chakra would be released back to the user's body. But so would the 10 from each round. So that would equal 20 chakra appoints. Equal to the genjutsu, thus the genjutsu wouldn't have any effect. Effectively releasing the user of the genjutsu.

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-The first round, the bandages absorb 10 points that's all
-The second round i.e the last round, the bandages absorb 30 chakra points. (Genjutsu)
The bandages "die" because they need to recharge. (Read restrictions) The genjutsu is released back to the user, and he would have to experience the genjutsu. And in turn have to release himself with the bandages.

Restrictions:
-Can only be used twice per match
-Can only be in affect 4 turns consecutively/2 rounds. (2 from the user 2 from the opponent)
-When those 4 turns are done the bandages need 2 turns to rest/recharge before being able to be used again. (After those 2 turns they come back automatically
-After the two times per match the bandages are just baggage not being able to be used again all chakra returns to the user
-Activation of bandages counts as a move
-Special Case: If genjutsu chakra is stored inside the bandages the bandages are unaffected by the genjutsu but when it's time for the chakra to be reverted back to the body the user will experience the genjutsu then.
Other: The symbol that is on the bandages and outlet body parts, 団. A basic kanji which stands for unity it has no relation to fuuinjutsu what so ever. Can only be used/taught by Gecko.

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Summoning Animal: Giant Otters
Scroll Owner: Gecko (Me)
Other Users who have signed contract: Hawaiianmike
Summoning Boss if existing: Coming Soon
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:

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(Kawauso Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Spike)- Otter Summoning Technique: Spike

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Type: Summon
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:25
Damage Points:40
Description:The user smears blood on his Otter Tattoo and then they slam their hand on the ground which summons Spike the otter. Raikou is 4ft tall and is 10ft long and is very strong. He is also a little faster than the other otters. His tail is the source of his strength and can knock a grown man out cold when it is swung. He doesn't have any elemental affinity but he posses the ability to harden his fur so they become as hard as steel because of that he hardens every hair individuately he looks like he has countless short spikes on his body. He can also fire some of his fur twice per battle like short senbons. Due to his ability to harden his fur he is immune to C rank and below regular ninjutsu when he has hardened his fur.
~Only signers of the Otter contract may use him
~His shooting of hairs counts for the users 3 jutsu per turn.
~Spike stays on the field for 4 turns before returning to the secret palace in the seas of Amegakure
~He can fire some of his fur twice per battle
~Can only be used once a match

(Kawauso Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Ryūjin )- Otter Summoning Technique: Ryūjin

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Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user smears blood on his Otter tattoo and then they slam their hand on the ground which summons Ryūjin the water otter. Ryūjin is 4ft tall and is 10ft long. Although most otters can move with great speed on land and water Ryūjin tends to be quicker in water. Having a Natural affinity to water he is able to do Suiton jutsu up to B rank without hand seals. When summoned Ryūjin will stay around until he is no longer able to continue, he will also allow his summoner to ride on his back if they are on water.
Restrictions:
~Only signers of the Otter contract may use him
~Every technique used by Ryūjin counts to the user 3 moves a turn
~Ryūjin stays on the field for 5 turns before returning to the secret palace in the seas of Amegakure
~Can only be used once a match.
~Can Use up to B rank suiton jutsu the user knows.

(Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Raikou Oni)- Otter Summoning Technique: Oni

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Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user smears blood on his Otter Tattoo and then they slam their hand on the ground which summons Raikou the otter. Raikou is 4ft tall and is 10ft long and is very strong. But do to his length and strength his speed is not that good. His tail is the source of his strength and can knock a grown man out cold when it is swung. He has an affinity to the lightning element and can preform Lightning C-rank and below if the user creates the hand seals needed.
Once every two turns Raikou can Fire a lightning bolt from his tail that is equivalent to a B-rank Lightning attack.
~Only signers of the Otter contract may use him
~Every technique used by Raikou counts to the user 3 moves a turn
~Raikou stays on the field for 4 turns before returning to the secret palace in the seas of Amegakure
~Can only be used twice a match

(Kawauso Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Ōkuninushi) Otter Summoning Technique: Ōkuninushi (Great Land Master)

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Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user smears blood on his Otter Tattoo and then they slam their hand on the ground which summons Ōkuninushi the otter. Ōkuninushi is 4ft tall and is 10ft long and is very strong. But due to his length and strength his speed is not that good. His body is the source of his durability and can defend against up to B-Rank Suiton (Water) jutsu. He has an affinity to the earth element and can preform Earth A-rank jutsu and below if the user creates the hand seals needed.
~Can only be summoned and used by Koto or with his permission; must be an otter contract signer to use
~Every technique used by Ōkuninushi counts to the user 3 moves a turn
~Ōkuninushi stays on the field for 4 turns before returning to the secret palace in the mountains.
~Can only be used twice a match

(Kawauso Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Shikatsu) Otter Summoning Technique: Shikatsu

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Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user smears blood on his Otter Tattoo and then they slam their hand on the ground which summons Shikatsu the otter. Shikatsu is 4ft tall and is 10ft long and is very strong. But due to his length and strength his speed is not that good. He has an affinity to the Fire element and can preform Fire S-rank jutsu and below without hand seals. Also he has developed resistance to C rank and bellow fire techniques.
~Note: Can only be used by the otter contract signers.
~Note: Can be summoned once per battle.
~Note: Shikatsu stays on the field for 4 turns before returning to the seas of Amegakure.
~Note: Every technique used by Shikatsu counts to the users 3 moves per turn.
~Note: Can use up to S rank fire techniques that the summoner knows.

(Kawauso Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Kazuma) Otter Summoning Technique:Kazuma

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Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user smears blood on his Otter Tattoo and then they slam their hand on the ground which summons Kazuma the otter. Kazuma is 4ft tall and is 10ft long and is very strong. But due to his length and strength his speed is not that good. He has an affinity to the Wind element and can preform Wind S-rank jutsu and below without hand seals. Also he has developed resistance to C rank and bellow Wind techniques.
~Note: Can only be used by the otter contract signers.
~Note: Can be summoned once per battle.
~Note: Shikatsu stays on the field for 4 turns before returning to the seas of Amegakure.
~Note: Every technique used by Kazuma counts to the users 3 moves per turn.
~Note: Can use up to S rank Wind techniques that the summoner knows.

Description and Background:

Real Life context
Otters have long, slim bodies and relatively short limbs, with webbed paws. Most have sharp claws on their feet and all except the sea otter have long, muscular tails. The 13 species range in adult size from 0.6 to 1.8 metres (2 to 6 ft) in length and 1 to 45 kilograms (2.2 to 100 lb) in weight. The Oriental small-clawed otter is the smallest otter species and the giant otter and sea otter are the largest. They have very soft, insulated underfur, which is protected by an outer layer of long guard hairs. This traps a layer of air which keeps them dry and warm under water.

Several otter species live in cold waters and have high metabolic rates to help keep them warm. European otters must eat 15% of their body weight each day, and sea otters 20 to 25%, depending on the temperature. In water as warm as 10 °C (50 °F), an otter needs to catch 100 grams (3.5 ounces) of fish per hour to survive. Most species hunt for three to five hours each day and nursing mothers up to eight hours each day.

For most otters, fish is the staple of their diet. This is often supplemented by frogs, crayfish and crabs. Some otters are expert at opening shellfish, and others will feed on available small mammals or birds. Prey-dependence leaves otters very vulnerable to prey depletion.

Otters are active hunters, chasing prey in the water or searching the beds of rivers, lakes or the seas. Most species live beside water, but river otters usually enter it only to hunt or travel, otherwise spending much of their time on land to avoid their fur becoming waterlogged. Sea otters are considerably more aquatic and live in the ocean for most of their lives.

Otters are playful animals and appear to engage in various behaviors for sheer enjoyment, such as making waterslides and then sliding on them into the water. Different species vary in their social structure, with some being largely solitary, while others live in groups – in a few species these groups may be fairly large.

Naruto Context
In narutoverse, most summoning animals are fairly large if not giant. This summoning contract is that of the giant otters. Giant otters have strong, wide bodies with short limbs. Most otters range in size from 4 ft in girth | 10 ft in length to 5 ft in girth | 11 ft in length. Sizes vary from otter to otter depending on where the predominantly spend their time. Otters raised in the water, are normally larger then otters that roam the land. Giant Otters can weigh any where from 500-800 lbs. Due to their massive size one would thing that otters are slow, not necessarily. On land otters move fairly slow, their slug like bodies are made for water not land. When summoned on land, it's primarily for long range battling not close up.

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(Sono Yuuen Kawauso Kuchiyose No Jutsu: Sono Otokooya)- Greats Otter Summoning Technique: The Father
Type: Summoning
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Otokooya is the original otter, he is roughly about the same age as the giant toad from Mt Myo. But it doesn't show, Otokooya is an large otter, weighing in at 520 lbs. He is 4 ft in girth and 11 ft long. Do to his enormous size Otokooya can only be summoned in large bodies of water. Otokooya was raised in the waters Amegakure. When he was a child there was an oil spill and that is the reason he is the only black otter. The oil had a significant impact on his body's capability. The oil caused his furs to grow more compactly together. Causing his furs to be extremely dense, allowing him to resist up to C Rank ninjutsu. In Amegakure folklore it was said that the reason for it always raining was because of the abundance of the otters in their waters. So whenever Otokooya is summoned black clouds are formed above the user and it begins to rain. Otokooya's chakra is linked directly to the clouds so he can feel disturbances in the air and react appropriately. Otokooya being able to only move freely in the water he has grown adapt to the element of water. Due to this Otokooya can freely use all water jutsus the water knows that don't require hand seals. Otokooya being the grand otter and father of all otters is the only otter that can speak.
Notes:
-Can only be summoned in large bodies of water
-All jutsu used by Otokooya count towards the user's 3 moves per town
-Can resist only c rank ninjutsu. Anything above sends the otter back to Ame
-Otokooya's back when below water can be stood upon without revealing his presence.
-Can only be summoned by those I teach
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-All Declined- For being banned.

 

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(Kumo-Ryū Nenshou Raishuu)- Cloud Style Burning Attack
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user dashes towards the user at great speed with their sword in hand. Once they reach their target, the user takes their sword and slash their target multiple ways up to the user 7 times. These much stronger slices will chop up the target up to 7 pieces. Following up the user takes his other hand and focuses a ton of destructive raiton chakra into his hand and releases it at the pieces destroying the remains of their target (Like Lightning Release: Depth Charge).
Note:Number of slices depend on the user, maximum is 7.
Note: This technique can only be used 4 times.
Note: Can only taught by Better
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-Declined- Remove the colored.

(Kumo-Ryū Nenshou Raishuu)- Cloud Style Burning Attack
Type: Offensive
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user focus chakra onto their feet and dashes towards the user with their sword in hand. Once they reach their target, the user takes their sword and slash their target multiple ways up to the user 7 times. These much stronger slices will chop up the target up to 7 pieces. Following up the user takes his other hand and focuses a ton of destructive raiton chakra into his hand and releases it at the pieces destroying the remains of their target (Like Lightning Release: Depth Charge).
Note:Number of slices depend on the user, maximum is 7.
Note: This technique can only be used 4 times.
Note: Can only taught by Better
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-Approved- You can change the wording all you want, it won't lead to that amount of "speed" you are looking for, if i ever see it being used that way i'll decline it.

(Fuuinjutsu: Kekkei Genkei Houin) - Sealing arts: Kekkei Genkei Sealing Method
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user takes out a scroll, and writes the name of the elements that make up the KG they wish to seal in it. For example if a Lava attack is coming towards the user, they can write Fire and Earth on the scroll. They then make 2 handseals, and a vapour comes out of the scroll, envelops the technique they wish to seal and seals it back into the scroll.
Note: This technique can only seal one technique up to S-rank every time used.
Note: Cannot absorb a Kekkei Tota.
Note: This technique may be used only three times
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-Declined- Nah, that's making it go too far ;_;

(Fuuinjutsu: Sakashima ooi Fūin) - Sealing Arts: Reverse Shroud Seal
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This technique is used when the user makes contact (with either their hands or feet) with it's target using any chakra enhancing ability or cloak. When done so a seal is placed on the target, any chakra ability that envelops the target is automatically sucked into the seal and stopped. From then on as long as the seal is on the target, they can not use techniques that benefit them by enveloping them in chakra. Techniques such as the Raikage armor, S rank earth armor, techniques like this that envelop the target benefiting them will be restricted when this seal is in place.
Note: Cannot be used on Bijuu related cloaks or transformations like the jinchuuriki suppression technique.
Note: Seal last 4 turns after being applied or if the user realizes it and removes it.
Note: Cannot effect Natural energy
Note: Can only be taught by Better
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-Declined- For the bijuu cloak you have the Chakra Suppression Seal Technique, but it's a no to other chakra related enhancements.

 

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~Resubmitting,I changed my name.

(Doton:Tsuchi Zassou)-Earth Release:Tumbleweed
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Mid-Long(never short)
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will send his chakra behind him and channel it into seven small rocks.The rocks will then start rolling forward,towards the user and whilst doing so the chakra inside them will be sticking the top layer of the ground to the rock balls,leaving a trail behind and thus adding new layers of earth to them,creating large rock balls.By the time they arrive to the opponent the rock balls will have a 2.5meters in diameter.While the rocks are moving the user can barely control them,that is why he can't manipulate them fast enough to hit an opponent in short range without harming himself.If the user wishes to hit an opponent in mid in front of him,he will need to start rolling the rocks from long range behind him,while if he wants to hit an opponent in long range in front of him,he will heed to start moving the rocks from mid range behind him.If he starts moving the rocks from long range behind himself and the opponent manages to escape into long range in front of the user,the rocks will grow to massive for the chakra inside them to hold them together and will fall apart before getting to the opponent.
~Note:Can be used only twice per battle.
~Note:No above A rank techniques the same turn this one is used.
~Note:No earth techniques the same turn this one is used.
~Note:No above A rank earth techniques the next turn.
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~Declined~ still iffy about this, but one thing that i caught right now, if you are rolling the rocks from behind you, wouldn't they hit you when they grow in size? i think you should change it, making the rocks start rolling from in front of you, and edit the necessary changes accordingly in the description.



(Futon:Hensa Hei)-Wind Releaseeflection Wall
Type:Supplementary/Defense
Rank:C
Range:Mid
Chakra:15
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will channel his chakra into the desired are of a 1 meter diameter maximum.Using his chakra,he will make a small wind current in that area that constanly flows in a C like shape,from the bottom to the top and vice versa.As a projectile gets caught in the wind current it will be sent backwards in the direction the current is pointing at with a small speed boost like if it was infused with wind charka.For example if the opponent throws a shuriken at the user,and he creates this current in front of himself,the shuriken will be sent backwards at the opponent.
~Can be used three times per battle.
~Can create up to 3 currents at a time.
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~Declined~ the bold doesn't make sense.

I've edited it as instructed,creating next to me.Removed the whole second part of it because it's not needed if I don't make them behind me.

(Doton:Tsuchi Zassou)-Earth Release:Tumbleweed
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Mid-Long(never short)
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description:The user will send his chakra in front and to the sides of him in short range and channel it into up to seven small rocks.The rocks will then start rolling forward,towards the target and whilst doing so the chakra inside them will be sticking the top layer of the ground to the rock balls,leaving a trail behind and thus adding new layers of earth to them,creating large rock balls.By the time they arrive to the opponent the rock balls will have a 2.5 meters in diameter.While the rocks are moving the user has some control over them and can steer them towards a moving target.If they miss the opponent,they can't be turned back,and will eventually grow to massive in size for the chakra in them to maintain,so they will fall apart.Users who specialise in Earth Release are able to,by performing a single hand seal,make the rock balls explode at any point of their journey.
~Note:Can be used only twice per battle.
~Note:No above A rank techniques the same turn this one is used.
~Note:No earth techniques the same turn this one is used.
~Note:No above A rank earth techniques the next turn.
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-Declined- Manipulation of the rocks and explosion are a no.

(Futon:Hensa Hei)-Wind Releaseeflection Wall
Type:Supplementary/Defense
Rank:C
Range:Mid
Chakra:15
Damage:N/A
Description:The user will channel his chakra into the air in a desired area of a 1 meter diameter,maximum.Using his chakra,he will make a small wind current in that area that constantly flows in a "C" like shape,from the bottom to the top and vice versa.As a projectile gets caught in the wind current it will be sent backwards in the direction the current is pointing at with a small speed boost like if it was infused with wind charka.For example if the opponent throws a shuriken at the user,and he creates this current in front of himself,the shuriken will be sent backwards at the opponent.
~Can be used three times per battle.
~Can create up to 3 currents at a time.
~It can deflect up to D rank,small scale earth and water attacks as well.
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-Declined- If it's made short range of you then okay, but not when it's made Mid range around the opponent.

~Replacing this old CW if the new one is approved.
(Kuro Henshintan)-Black Shapeshifter
Type:Weapon
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:N/A(30 for every shape change)
Damage:N/A
Description:The Black Shapeshifter is a weapon made of rare metals that can be found only on high mountains.The weapon can change into two diferent forms.It's primary form is a form of a long black katana.The second form is a form of a long black scythe with a red edge that has a long thick wire conected to it that is held on the back of a shinobi.

~Note:The weapons form can be changed only twice per battle.
Primary form:

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(Zenkon Suzu)-Charity Bell
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short/Mid(Can be thrown)
Chakra:N/A(-10 per turn-optional)
Damage:Depends
Description:The Charity is an ancient weapon that has been made out of a very rare metal found only on a small island near the Land of Water.During one of the great shinobi world wars,it has been used by one of the generals of Kirigakure.When he fell,his men took the weapon back to Kirigakure.It was then lost and forgotten among the shelf's filled with all artifacts.After many years it had been discovered by a young shinobi of Kirigakure who was very talented and soon found a way to use the bell.The bell looks just like an ordinary ball made out of metal with a few carved holes on it.It is about the size of a football ball.However,the bell has an ability to absorb and then release chakra.It can,at a time absorb up to 100 chakra(100 as in the units we use for the techniques),without releasing some of the previously collected chakra.For example it can absorb chakra from 1 S rank and 2 A rank techniques at a time.As a technique passes over and through the bell,it can absorb the chakra from it and thus stop the technique.The bell can also,in the same way release some,or all of the chakra stored in it into a technique thus increasing it's strength.It can only release as much chakra into a technique as it was used to create that technique.In other words it can strengthen a technique only by one rank.For example if an A rank fire blast (40 chakra) is passing over the bell and the user wants to make it more powerful,the bell can add a maximum of 40 chakra to it,making it S rank.The bell can also release chakra into nothing particular,just the air.It can release up to 40 chakra at a time like that,creating a,depending of the amount of chakra released,E-S rank blast of pure chakra that is omnidirectional and can travel only to short range.While releasing the chakra in this way the bell resonates like big bells and from that it got it's name.The bell when it doesn't have chakra in it is just a regular ball of light weight metal.It can be thrown,kicked carried in hand,attached to a ninja wire...If the user wishes to be able to retrieve the bell from any place back to his hand and prevent the opponent from taking the bell he must maintain 10 chakra of his own in the bell at all time.If the user has infused the bell with his own chakra it will fly back to the user when ever he wishes and will repel the opponent if he tries to take it.
~Note:Can be used only by me and those who I allow.
~Note:The bell can't contain more than 100 chakra in itself at a time.If the bell has for example 70 chakra stored in itself and a 40 chakra techniques comes at it,it will only absorb 30 chakra,weakening it.
~Note:Releasing the chakra into a technique by the bell counts as a move in the user's 3 moves per turn.
~Note:Absorbing the chakra from a technique by the bell counts as a move the user's 3 moves per turn.
~Note:Creating a pure chakra wave by the bell counts as a move in the user's 3 moves per turn.
~Note:The bell has no effect of Forbidden rank techniques.
~Note:The bell can either release or absorb(both count as same)chakra 10 times maximum during a battle,not counting the insertion of the 10 chakra from the user.
~Note:It can't be broken.
~Note:It can't absorb or release chakra into earth techniques other than those that use a liquid form like mud.

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-Declined- I won't allow a weapon to use an ability similar to fuuinjutsu, meaning no absorption related abilities.

 

[Yashiro]

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(Genjutsu: Teireshiasu no noroi) - Illusion Technique: Tiresias' Curse

Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs 2 hand seals and casts an illusion upon his opponent, the opponent would begin to see the greek goddess Athena descend from the sky above with nothing but a cloth around her body to cover herself, Athena would then drop the cloth and reveal her assets, but before the opponent is able to gaze upon her beauty a bright light would emit from her entire body, this light would rob the user of his sight, and even if he attempts to close his eyes or avert them, the light still shines regardless, causing the opponent to believe that he has a type of irritation in his eyes.

Notes - Can only be used twice per battle
- No Genjutsu in the same and following turn
- Only works on male biographies
- Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
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-Declined- This type of techniques won't be approved.

(Genjutsu: Sairen no ko) - Illusion technique: Call of the Sirens

Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs a single hand seal and casts an illusion upon his opponent, the opponent once caught in the genjutsu would start hearing slight humming, that would slowly start ascending but in a calm manner, making the opponent feel relaxed and calm, after several seconds the calm eventually turn into a drowsy feeling until the opponent eventually falls asleep from the calming melody.

Notes- Can be used 3 times per battle
- The opponent falls asleep after being caught in the illusion and not releasing it properly
- Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
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-Declined- What would cause the humming? the air? naturally these type of genjutsus are made using an instrument, like Tayuya's flute, it's related to sound genjutsu.

(Fuuton: Onibasu no sakebi) - Wind Release: The cry of Euryale

Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Type: Supplementary
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user gathers a considerable amount of his wind chakra while inhaling and performing a single hand seal, he then releases the wind chakra by exhaling it through his mouth and releases a loud screech of wind, screaming at the top of his lungs, the screech quickly travels through the entire battlefield and deafens any and everyone within range.

Notes - Can be used 3 times per battle
- Deafness lasts for 2 turns
- The user is unaffected by this technique
- Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

 

[ZK]

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(Hagane Hie no Ikkō) – Chilling Steel of the Militant Buddhist
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique is a general execution of the hard style, martial art exercise known as the ‘Iron Shirt’. It is not so much a technique as it is the product of other exercises and years of training. The execution of Hagane Hie no Ikkō simply requires the user to find his central equilibrium using Zhang Zhuang and then aligning his breath, movement and chakra circulation. These actions, combined with the user’s general physique and resistance to damage, can lessen the damage taken by any physical attack by up 40 damage points if the user has solid footing on the ground, or 30 if the user is airborne.
-Can only be used by a Taijutsu Master.
-Can only be taught by Zero Kelvin.
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-Declined- This would make you immune to B-rank techniques, so it's a no, 20 damage points is the extent of what i'm going to allow with this.

 

[Summer]

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(Shoton: R-keiretsu ) - Crystal: R-system
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user begins by forming four handsigns and building up there crystal chakra and proceeds to form a tower called the R-system this tower takes ten seconds to form meaning it should be used as an opening jutsu. The ability of this tower is that it has a special crystal core in the middle of the tower which radiates crystal energy by harnessing light in the battlefield. This causes the tower to give a power bonus to all the current and or newly used crystal jutsu's which are used. This tower can not be rebuilt or self repairing in any way but it is a denser crystal from being able to harness light energy. It will take a direct blow with the proportion of a Odama rasengan to bring this tower down to rubble. the core of the crystal can ony harness sunlight and not moonlight so it only has effect during the day. the core of the crystal will also glow after one turn has ended symbolizing that the tower has gathered enough light and is at the stage of strenthening crystals.

Restrictions: can only be used once during battle, can only stay active for three turns.
:requires a S rank jutsu blow to do damage to this tower.
: no other crystal jutsu's may be used in the same turn.
: the actual size is about as tall as and thick as manda the snake.
: the tower can in no way be used to deal damage
: 5% strength boost to all crystal.
Note: can only be used by guren.
: can only be taught by roju

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-Declined- Like the idea, but 5% strength is nothing, you need to make it as "+5" damage points for example, with the top limit of +10, you say it can't be destroyed unless with an S-rank technique, but how about the weaknesses of Crystal Release? i think taking 10 seconds to form is too long, so reduce that if you want, and if it doesn't cost any damage, why is there a "80" damage points?

(Shoton: R-keiretsu ) - Crystal: R-system
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: (plus 10 with offensive techniques)
Description:
The user begins by forming four handsigns and building up there crystal chakra and proceeds to form a tower called the R-system this tower takes 3 seconds to form meaning it would be a great opening move to setup the battlefield. The ability of this tower is that it has a special crystal core in the middle of the tower which radiates crystal energy by harnessing light in the battlefield. This causes the tower to give a power bonus of 10% to all the current and or newly used crystal jutsu's which are used. This tower can not be rebuilt or self repairing in any way but it is a denser crystal from being able to harness light energy. It will take a direct blow with the proportion of a Odama rasengan to bring this tower down to rubble. the core of the crystal can ony harness sunlight and not moonlight so it only has effect during the day. the core of the crystal will also glow after one turn has ended symbolizing that the tower has gathered enough light and is at the stage of strenthening crystals. regular weaknesses apply to the strength and weaknesses of this crystal jutsu. this structure stays on the field for the duration of the battle unless destroyed, and is a self sustaining booster because of utilizing a light source.

Restrictions: can only be used once during battle, can only stay active for three turns.
:requires a S rank jutsu blow to do damage to this tower.
: no other crystal jutsu's may be used in the same turn.
: the actual size is about as tall as and thick as manda the snake.
: the tower can in no way be used to deal damage
: 10% strength boost to all crystal.
Note: can only be used by guren.
: can only be taught by roju

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-Declined- Let me explain in another manner, the 10% boost will confuse both you and your opponent, just put it as +10 and get it over with, also remote the note bolded, and also add it can't be used to guard from attacks.

Bakudō # 73. Tozanshō (倒山晶, Inverse Mountain Crystal)

Type: Supplementary
Rank: S rank
Range: mid range
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: guren upon in mid air forms one handsign and proceeds to form a giant upside down pyramid. the pyramid falling down from natural gravity and weight will crush a radius up to mid range and will sink down into the ground from being a sharp pointed object. this jutsu is very fast to drop as the shear size is immense so the pyramid will drop faster then the dropping lid technique.

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restrictions: can only be used twice during battle.
: no S rank techniques in the same turn.
: can only be used from above the enemy (mid air)
: can only be used by guren
:can only be taught by roju
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-Declined- remove the bold, give the pyramid a rough size and mention how far it's made from the opponent.

(Futon Bakudō # 8. Seki (斥,Wind Repulse)
Type: Defensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
The user upon having been attacked by projectile weapons or taijutsu can utilize his or her's wind chakra in a shield like manner. This shield only works from the backsides of the hands and only grows to be about the size of a bowling ball. This defense is capable of stopping any projectile thrown or shot against it. Among taijutsu blocking this jutsu can block up to B rank taijutsu only. the recoil from the enemy touching this will do damage back to the enemy.

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Restrictions:
~note: can only be used four times during battle
~note: no more denfensive wind jutsu's in the same turn
~note: must have wind mastered
~note: can only be taught by roju
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-Declined- We already have a cannon wind technique for that.

 

[Howard]

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(Senninka: Tsuyoi Uyoku of Icarus) - Sage Transformation: The Mighty Wings of Icarus
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid (C rank gusts)
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 40 (when used to attack)
Description: Jugo uses his Sage Transformation ability to form two fleshy bat-like wings on his back. These wings can sustain flight and can be sustained for an entire battle as long as he remains conscious. They can be used to create gusts of wind comparable to C rank fuuton and can be used pull off jutsu such as ( Futon: Tatsumaki Heki ) - Wind Release: Tordado Wall that can be created through the use of wings. The wings also allow use of Fuuton Jutsu that are formed through bursts or gusts of wind without the use of hand seals. Wind jutsu that require fans can also be created through the use of the wings and the wings can be used to attack the opponent directly using sharp hook like growths from their tips
Note:
-Can only be used thrice
-Can only be used by a Jugo bio

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 Declined  Chakra cost per turn? must have a time limit. Remove the whole wind gusts thing. Clarify the speed and the maneuverability he has while using these wings.

(Senninka: Tsuyoi Uyoku of Icarus) - Sage Transformation: The Mighty Wings of Icarus
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid (When used to attack)
Chakra Cost: (-20 per turn) (-5 to extend the hook like growths)
Damage Points: 40 (when used to attack)
Description: Jugo uses his Sage Transformation ability to form two fleshy bat-like wings on his back. These wings can sustain flight and can be sustained for an entire battle as long as he remains conscious. They can be used to pull off jutsu such as ( Futon: Tatsumaki Heki ) - Wind Release: Tordado Wall that can be created through the use of wings. The wings also allow use of Fuuton Jutsu that are formed through bursts or gusts of wind this is doable without the use of hand seals. Jutsu that require precise control like (Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku) – Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere and (Fūton: Shinkū Renpa) – Wind Release: Serial Waves are exceptions and not able to be formed through this manner. Wind jutsu that require fans can also be created through the use of the wings and the wings can be used to attack the opponent directly using sharp hook like growths from their tips, these hooks can be used to create wind jutsu that need the use of a blade or a sword and are claw-like in nature and can be extended at will (-5 chakra to extend them.) Like most of Jugo's jutsu these can be sustained as long as he has enough chakra to do so.
Note:
-Speed while flying is 1.5x base speed
-Can only be used thrice
-Can only be used by a Jugo bio
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-Declined- You stretched the abilities too much, remove the whole reference to wind, i can go as far as flight because it's shown with Curse Marks, but no wind techniques are going to be made from those, also remove the extension, and speed is equivalent to first gate = too much, you have to a max of the running speed of a Kage rank ninja. Next time if you don't do what Scorps said to change, then i'm going to DNR the technique with no question.

 

[-Jiraiya-]

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Resubmitting the second one(Summoning). Changes made are in bold.

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Resubmitting the first one. Re-did explanation part. Changes made are in bold.
Wood Release: Living forest (Mokuton: Genzon hayashi)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs a Snake hand seal and creates a dense forest of trees. Each tree in the forest bears a single face of the user made of wood on its main trunk and the position of the face on each tree is randomly situated, meaning that they are not at the same level as that of the adjacent tree so that they can effectively cover each others blind spots effectively.

The trees in the forest are closely linked with the user's visual senses. The user can scan through the forest by touching a near by tree of the forest and closing his one eye or both eyes. On doing this, the user activates the wooden faces which he created early. The wooden faces are not activated randomly all over the forest at once rather the user selectively activates them orderly.

As the user touches the nearby tree, he activates the wooden faces on the trees which are on the same or almost same line with the tree which he touches initially. This activates the faces on those set of trees which are roughly in the same line. This provides the user with a unified panoramic view of the inside of the forest in front of those activated wooden faces.

As the user initiated this in the first set of trees, he can rapidly use the same mechanism to activate the faces in a split second on to the next line of trees and so on and thus can scan through the inside of the forest rapidly in the same manner like as if the user is seeing through the forest with his naked eyes with only a slight fraction of second delay while traversing between each set of trees.
Notes:

• Can be used 3 times per battle.
• The user can also use this jutsu in an already created or an existing natural forest by performing the Snake hand seal and creating the wooden faces.
• The user can only activate the trees starting from his nearest line of trees and proceed towards the long range.
• Cannot be used on trees created by other wood element users.
• Can be used Can only be taught by me(-Jiraiya-).

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-Leaving for Scorps-

Crocodile summoning technique: Demon brothers of Ryūgū-jō swamp (Kurokodairu kuchiyose no jutsu: Ryūgū-jō numa no akki doubou)
Type: Summoning animal
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user draws some blood and performs the Boar -> Dog -> Bird -> Monkey -> Ram hand seals to summon the twin brother Crocodiles from the great swamp of Ryūgū-jō located in the village of the Crocodiles. The brothers are born as Siamese twins from a single egg with a single body and two separate heads. Even though they share a single body, they have separate chakra system of their own.
The one who shares the right side of body is Suijin, who is an excellent water element user. The one on the left side is Sarutahiko, who is proficient in using earth element and he is the one who has control over the limbs. Their body is 20 meters long from head to tail covered by dark grey armor like skin.
Abilities:

• Suijin, who is an excellent water element user can use water jutsus up to S rank without any hand seals.
• Sarutahiko, who is proficient in using earth element can use earth jutsus up to S rank without any hand seals.
• Their skin has very tough scales which is very thick and rugged with several sharp projections over it from their head to tail with only non spike area between their heads on where the summoner can stand. Thus their skin acts a formidable armor over their body. Because of this, simple projectiles like kunai, senbon, shuriken.
• Because of their tough, hard, armor like skin, they do not take damage from B rank and below earth and fire jutsus.
• Their skin has several sensory pits, visible as small, black speckles on the skin. These pigmented nodules encase bundles of nerve fibers. They respond to the slightest disturbance in surface water, detecting vibrations and small pressure changes as small as a single drop. This makes it possible for crocodiles to detect prey, danger and intruders, even in total darkness (Natural ability).
• Like all Crocodiles, they have very good night vision. They have vertical-slit shaped pupils, using which they can exclude excess light, which helps them to protect their eyes during extreme bright daylight (Natural ability).
• Their Crocodilian sense of smell is also very well developed, aiding them to detect the opponents or other animals that are either on land or in water (Natural ability). Their sense of smell is far greater than average human and below the level of an Inuzuka.
  [*]They have the strongest bite force of than any animal (Natural ability).
• They can use the claws in their front legs and their tail to attack.
• They are excellent swimmers (Natural ability).
• The brothers can communicate among each other within their minds, without speaking.
• They both can speak.
• The natural abilities can be found here:
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Notes:

• Can only be summoned once per battle and last for 4 turns.
• Summoning the brothers counts as two jutsus.
• Must have signed the Crocodile contract to summon them and must taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
• No other Crocodiles can be summon while the brothers are in field.
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-Declined- Each needs a separate technique, i won't allow a single summoning technique to have 2 summons capable of using 2 natures, if you wanna do it, then they won't be capable of using their techniques simultaneously with one another, when one does a technique, the other can't, and your gonna have to lower the elemental capabilities, i think you need to continue the purple part? blue part needs removal.

Wood Release: The fragrance of demise (Mokuton: Sono houkou iten)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40 (-5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: By utilizing the ability to make the trees to flower, the user focuses his wood chakra while performing the snake hand seal and creates a forest of flowering trees. As created, the user makes the flowers to release a sweet fragrance mixed with innumerable number of pollens which has the user's chakra over the entire field. The chakra mixed pollens can be used by the user as a base to induce genjutsu in the opponents.
The sweet fragrant, chakra infused pollen grains when inhaled by the opponents induces a genjutsu up to A rank of user's choice in them, without a need for any hand seals.
Further, as the user will also be inhaling his own chakra admixed fragrant pollens, he will not be affected by any genjutsu up to A rank since his own chakra will be inhaled by him which will enter his body passively each time as he breathes in and out thus snapping him out of genjutsu produced by external chakra.
Notes:

• Can be used 2 times per battle.
• The trees release fragrance for 5 turns unless they are destroyed before that.
• Can affect multiple opponents except user since it contains his own chakra.
• Can induce up to A rank genjutsu of the user's choice.
• The user is immune to A rank genjutsu as long as the user is inhaling the fragrance.
• The user can also make an existing tree created by him to flower and release the sweet fragrance by performing a Snake hand seal.
• Can only be taught by me(-Jiraiya-).

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-Declined- That "sweet fragrance" is an ability of Perfume Release CE, and casting a genjutsu up to A-rank of your choosing? ya, that's not gonna happen mate.

Crocodile summoning technique: Demon brothers of Ryūgū-jō swamp (Kurokodairu kuchiyose no jutsu: Ryūgū-jō numa no akki doubou)
Type: Summoning animal
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user draws some blood and performs the Boar -> Dog -> Bird -> Monkey -> Ram hand seals to summon the twin brother Crocodiles from the great swamp of Ryūgū-jō located in the village of the Crocodiles. The brothers are born as Siamese twins from a single egg with a single body and two separate heads. Even though they share a single body, they have separate chakra system of their own.
The one who shares the right side of body is Suijin, who is an excellent water element user. The one on the left side is Sarutahiko, who is proficient in using earth element and he is the one who has control over the limbs. Their body is 20 meters long from head to tail covered by dark grey armor like skin.
Abilities:

• Suijin, who is an excellent water element user can use water jutsus up to A rank without any hand seals.
• Sarutahiko, who is proficient in using earth element can use earth jutsus up to A rank without any hand seals.
• Their skin has very tough scales which is very thick and rugged with several sharp projections over it from their head to tail with only non spike area between their heads on where the summoner can stand. Thus their skin acts a formidable armor over their body and prevents damage from simple projectiles like kunai, senbon, shuriken.
• Because of their tough, hard, armor like skin, they do not take damage from B rank and below earth and fire jutsus.
• Their skin has several sensory pits, visible as small, black speckles on the skin. These pigmented nodules encase bundles of nerve fibers. They respond to the slightest disturbance in surface water, detecting vibrations and small pressure changes as small as a single drop. This makes it possible for crocodiles to detect prey, danger and intruders, even in total darkness (Natural ability, this is passive ability since they're naturally present on their skin through which Crocodiles detect their prey).
• Like all Crocodiles, they have very good night vision. They have vertical-slit shaped pupils, using which they can exclude excess light, which helps them to protect their eyes during extreme bright daylight (Natural ability, passive since pupils normally constrict during excessive light involuntarily).
• Their Crocodilian sense of smell is also very well developed, aiding them to detect the opponents or other animals that are either on land or in water (Natural ability, passive since it is a natural way of detecting the prey by Crocodiles during their normal, involuntary respiration). Their sense of smell is far greater than average human and below the level of an Inuzuka.
• They can use the claws in their front legs and their tail to attack.
• They are excellent swimmers (Natural ability).
• The brothers can communicate among each other within their minds, without speaking.
• They both can speak.
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Notes:

• Can only be summoned once per battle and last for 4 turns.
• Summoning the brothers counts as two jutsus.
• The brothers cannot use their techniques simultaneously with one another at the same time, meaning when one does a technique, the other can't perform his own jutsu.
• Each jutsu used by the brothers count as user's move.
• Must have signed the Crocodile contract to summon them and must taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
• No other Crocodiles can be summon while the brothers are in field.
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-Declined- Let me put it another way, either they use up to B-rank each, or they only use a single affinity, also remove the defense to Fire and Earth of B-rank and all that. You mention the natural abilities a lot, if it's mentioned in the submission of your contract, then no need to mention it here, all the summons have the basic abilities mentioned in the contract's description.

Illusionary technique: Multiple dislocation (Genjutsu: Maruchipuru dakkyuu)
Type: Supplementary / Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60 (Due to stress)
Description: The user performs two hand seals and puts the opponent under an illusion in which the opponent feels a sudden tight grasping sensation around his both shoulder joints, elbow joints, wrist joints, knee joints and ankle joints as if they're very tightly held by two hands which begins to pull away the joints. This makes the opponent to become motionless in real world.
The user then quickly snaps his fingers making the opponent to feel that his above mentioned joints becomes dislocated, all at once, with a distinct knocking/breaking/crunching sound, due to the intense pull of the joints. As the joints are dislocated, the opponent perceives a severe excruciating pain. The damage is due to the mental stress due to intense pain.
Alternatively the user can also create several ropes, chains or a bendable material to erupt from the ground which will bind the opponent at the above said joints which begins to pull the joints and as the user snaps his fingers will tighten more and dislocate the joints all at once producing the same effect.
Notes:
- Can only be used 3 times per battle.
- If the illusion is successful, the opponent will be motionless only for that single turn when the genjutsu is used and in the next turn the opponent's movements will be clumsy and he will not be able to perform fast/sudden movements like jumping, running.
- Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
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-Declined- The Alternatively part is what supposed to be the core of the technique, since he needs to feel something holding the limbs to actually believe it, it doesn't magically happen with no outside factors.

Wood release: Allergy (Mokuton: Arerugi)
Type: Supplementary / Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20 (-5 per turn active)
Damage: 40
Description: By utilizing the ability to make the trees to flower, the user focuses his wood chakra while performing the snake hand seal and creates a forest of flowering trees. As created, the flowers release a type of pollen which is infused with the user's chakra into the air. This chakra infused pollen has severe allergy inducing potential to the living things(humans and animals) other than its creator(as they are made of user's own chakra).
The pollen itself possess an inherent irritant property which when comes in contact with the skin or mucus membrane (like mouth, nose, eyes) of the opponents will produce allergic reaction and will cause severe itching, redness of the skin, watering from nose & eyes and later form itchy blisters over the skin(in the next turn if the pollens are not countered by then).
Further, if the opponents inhale the pollens, they also develop continuous sneezing due to the irritation of nose and may not be able to concentrate and execute jutsus via their mouth properly.
Notes:
- Can be used 3 times per battle.
- Capable of affecting multiple opponents within range. The user is immune to the pollens as the pollen is made of the user's own chakra.
- Once created, the flowers release pollens for a total of 2 turns unless they're destroyed before that. After that the flowers wither down ceasing the effect.
- The effects of the pollen last as long as they're in direct contact with the opponent's body.
- Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
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-Declined- How big is the forest created? also reduce the duration of the flowers on the field to 1 turn, and when exactly do the symptoms affect the opponent? right after being exposed to it?

 

[McRazor]

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Ototon: Gyaku Nagare | Sound Release: Reverse Flow
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: This is a very unique and powerful technique because it requires the user to maintain a continuous stream of sound waves in order for the technique to work properly. The core of the technique works by striking an already created water technique with a powerful but low frequency sound wave. In particular, the sound wave can be either 23 or 24 hz, which is barely what the human ears can hear. The 23 hz frequency forces the water to act as if its flow is reversed which tricks the opponent into believing that the users technique has backfired at him and giving the opponent false sense of security, while in reality the technique is following the laws of physics and rampaging towards the opponent. In the case of the 24 hz frequency, the technique seems as if it completely stopped with the purpose of confusing the opponent. The technique is not an illusion but its main purpose is to act as one and to effectively confuse the opponent into believing he is placed in one. The user can alter both his or his opponents techniques but it's risky to alter opponents techniques because of the possibility to get hit before being able to counter. This technique can be executed fairly easy thus able to be used in conjunction with a previous water jutsu but with the requirement of one handseal.
Note: Can affect water techniques up to and including A rank
Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Only McRazor can teach this

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 Declined  Questions: One) how do you produce this sound? Do you hum? Do you whissle? Do you sing? You say you need to produce continous sound waves, ok. But you fail to say how you do this. Two) I don't understand if this affects your water technique or your enemies perception of it. Is this an illusion or is this something that affects water itself? Because if it affects water itself, its not making any sense for me. I never saw this as possible. If you have proof that sound can do this, please link it in resubmission.​

Shīhōsu Mōdo | Seahorse Mode
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Self
Chakra: 40
Description: In order to enter the seahorse mode, the user is required to release a surge of chakra from his body after which he gets enveloped in a chakra shroud that very much resembles the incomplete forms of the tailed beasts. The chakra shroud appears to look like Kingdra, the boss summon. While within the shroud, the user becomes a pseudo seahorse and gets the ability to use all techniques of the seahorse arts as well as all physical traits of the seahorses. The shroud appears in a blue shade that constantly flows and flaunts around the user and since it's a surge released form the whole body, it has the capability to alter the users chakra flow which gives it the ability to release genjutsu up to A rank. One of the unique abilities that the user gets from the mode is using water techniques without a water source, using the chakra shroud as a medium. However, using techniques this way shortens the duration of the mode and the user still has to perform the necessary handseals. The mode itself lasts for only 6 turns and with every use as a source for other water techniques it gets shortened for 2 full turns. Due to this ability, the user doesn't get any elemental boosts like similar and generic modes. The users breathing while within the shroud isn't hindered in any way because it's composed of raw chakra, thus why it doesn't need a water source to be maintained, despite the seahorses needing it. Because of the size of the shroud and its tail being submerged within the ground, the user can extend it and use it to grab and bind the opponent from underneath but only within short range from the user. The grab counts as one move per turn and it can be used only twice per battle with a one turn cooldown.
Note: Must sign the Seahorse Summoning Contract
Note: Can only be activated once
Note: Mode lasts for 6 turns

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 Declined  Problems: any way you look at this it becomes only a mimicry of a bijuu chakra shroud. Also, the genjutsu immunity, the water without water source and the 6 turns make it too much. And there is one note that makes it almost a DNR: you cannot say that eveloping yourself in this chakra will make you have the physical characteristics of seahorses. Thats something we see in sage mode users (both toad and snake). It goes beyond what a normal chakra infusion of your body could do. Also, having chakra around you doesn't mean you can use water without a water source. I think it would be more logical if you released a mist from your mouth which envelops you, shaping itself into a searhorse "aura" which you can then use for the aforementioned abilities like grabbing the enemy or using it as a medium for water techniques. It would also give it a sense of balance by creating a weakness to lightning techniques for example.​

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Shīhōsu Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kingdra | Seahorse Summoning Technique: Kingdra
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Kingdra is the boss summon of the seahorse contract for apparent reasons. Other than the majestic and distinguishing looks, it is the only one with two completely unique abilities. Kingdra is the biggest of the seahorses, their protector and so called ruler of the seven seas. Kingdra is a large seahorse with a tightly curled tail. It is covered in blue scales except for its yellow, compact belly scales. There are thin spines with a single branch atop its head and thin, white fins under its cheeks. Its thin snout is powerful, allowing streams of water jets with devastating power to be fired. Its long and elongated snout is also capable of producing loud and painful clicks which are usually used for communication and genjutsu induction. Two-pronged fins extend slightly past its cheeks. On its back is a white fin supported by thin, blue spines similar to the ones on its head. The small fin on the back is capable of flapping at great speed but doesn't add to its battle prowess. It's mostly used for quick maneuvers and for hovering in a specific position within the water source. Being the largest seahorse with the height of 5 meters, it also has the biggest breeding pouch capable of carrying two instead of a single person, unlike the rest of the seahorses. During battle, Kingdra uses its snout to create a powerful S-Rank illusion where the water source that Kingdra is in, starts boiling and vaporizing while at the same time condensing and forming around the opponent and around his bare flesh and clothing. However, unlike the water around Kingdra, the newly forming water is very dense and has much more pressure, restricting the opponents movements and making him feel like he is on the bottom of an ocean, with the pressure of 10km of water above him pressuring his body. Once the water completely vaporizes, Kingdra reverts back to the depths of its ocean. Being a mere but powerful illusion, in reality the opponent is feeling the same effects but Kingdra is still safe within its water source. Depending on the situation and the flow of the battle, Kingdra can also use its snout to expel a highly pressurized stream of water from its water source. The rank of the stream is forbidden because it's a technique that prematurely ends Kingdra's stay on the field. The pressure and chakra manipulation are so great that the stream reaches long range within a second, however, once the water source is used for this attack, Kingdra has to revert back to the depth of its ocean because of the lack of a habitable water source. The duration of the stream depends on the size of the water source. For example, with a 5m[SUP]3[/SUP] of water, the highly pressurized stream can be maintained for 2 seconds before completely being used. Kingdra can also redirect it with its snout while expelling it, if the need arises. Some myths that are proving Kingdra's size and strength say that the yawn of the sleeping Kingdra is powerful enough to create undercurrents capable of destroying small ships. It's also said that once Kingdra decides to emerge from the depths of the ocean, with its brute strength, it can create large whirlpools and sea-born tornadoes on the surface. Because of its immense power, Kingdra often hibernates deep in uninhabited areas of the sea to rest and build up its energy. When a storm arrives, Kingdra is said to awaken and wander about in search of prey.
Note: Both abilities can only be used once and they can't be used in the same turn
Note: Must have signed the Seahorse contract and have its tattoo
Note: Kingdra's abilities count towards the users 3 moves per turn
Note: The genjutsu is S-rank and the water stream is F-rank
Note: Kingdra can stay on the field for 4 turns
Note: Can only be summoned once

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-Declined- OP, and can't allow a summoning to use a Forbidden ranked technique, and that genjutsu is similar to a genjutsu made by serpent before, where the opponent finds himself deep into the ocean and surrounded by water pressure massive enough to prevent him from moving.

Shīhōsu Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Kingdra | Seahorse Summoning Technique: Kingdra
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: Kingdra is the boss summon of the seahorse contract for apparent reasons. Other than the majestic and distinguishing looks, it is the only one with two completely unique abilities. Kingdra is the biggest of the seahorses, their protector and so called ruler of the seven seas. Kingdra is a large seahorse with a tightly curled tail. It is covered in blue scales except for its yellow, compact belly scales. There are thin spines with a single branch atop its head and thin, white fins under its cheeks. Its thin snout is powerful, allowing streams of water jets with devastating power to be fired. Its long and elongated snout is also capable of producing loud and painful clicks which are usually used for communication and genjutsu induction. Two-pronged fins extend slightly past its cheeks. On its back is a white fin supported by thin, blue spines similar to the ones on its head. The small fin on the back is capable of flapping at great speed but doesn't add to its battle prowess. It's mostly used for quick maneuvers and for hovering in a specific position within the water source. Being the largest seahorse with the height of 5 meters, it also has the biggest breeding pouch capable of carrying two instead of a single person, unlike the rest of the seahorses. During battle, Kingdra uses its snout and the clicking noise to create powerful illusions that are able to affect multiple individuals up to long range. This is possible because the clicking noise is very loud and can be heard up to great distances. Being a genjutsu master of the highest caliber within the seahorses, Kingdra can use regular genjutsu as well as all the genjutsu within the seahorse arts, however, after every genjutsu use there is a turn cooldown. Depending on the situation and the flow of the battle, Kingdra can also use its snout to expel a highly pressurized stream of water from its water source. The rank of the stream is S because it's a technique that precisely pictures Kingdra's size and power. The pressure and chakra manipulation are so great that the stream reaches long range within two seconds, however, once the water source is used for this attack, Kingdra has to wait two full turns before being able to use it again. The duration of the stream depends on the size of the water source. For example, with a 5m[SUP]3[/SUP] of water, the highly pressurized stream can be maintained for 2 seconds. Kingdra can also redirect it with its snout while expelling it, if the need arises. Some myths that are proving Kingdra's size and strength say that the yawn of the sleeping Kingdra is powerful enough to create undercurrents capable of destroying small ships. It's also said that once Kingdra decides to emerge from the depths of the ocean, with its brute strength, it can create large whirlpools and sea-born tornadoes on the surface. Because of its immense power, Kingdra often hibernates deep in uninhabited areas of the sea to rest and build up its energy. When a storm arrives, Kingdra is said to awaken and wander about in search of prey.
Note: Must have signed the Seahorse contract and have its tattoo
Note: The water and genjutsu abilities count towards the users 3 moves per turn
Note: Water ability can only be used twice with a 2 turns cooldown
Note: Genjutsu ability can only be used twice with a 1 turn cooldown
Note: Kingdra can stay on the field for 4 turns
Note: Can only be summoned once

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 Declined  The genjutsu part needs clarification. If he can use normal genjutsu how can he do the handseals? Do you mean he substitutes the need for handseals with the sound? If so that ability right there is unreasonble and needs to go. Genjutsu exists in a few ways: Handseal based one (normal one where you use the handseals to shape your chakra and mold it in order to produce the illusion), Sensory Link one (where you use a medium that your enemies senses will perceive and as such will influecence his senses directly, like sound, light, smell, touch, etc) or mental influencial ones/pure yin release ones (like the doujutsu ones, where one uses the power of ones spiritual energy to overcome your enemies senses and overal mind). If I allow you to have a summon that can essentially transform any normal genjutsu into sound genjutsu, that becomes ridiculously oped. And without hands, he cannot do the handseals for normal genjutsu. As for the water ability, remove the 2 second thing. I never approve such notes. Its a fast S-Rank Water jet. No need for the whole water source thign and what not. Thats you trying to restrict something which is unreasonable. If it can reach 30 meters for example in 2 seconds, that means it takes less than a second to make it 5 meters, which is the border of mid range. Nope. Question: how does he move around without water? Can you summon him without water?​

 

[Magic..]

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Suiton: Houkou no Mami Wata - (Water Release: Roar of Mami Wata)
Rank: Forbidden
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90(-30 to User)
Description: The user after 3 Handseals and while on a large water source, slams their hands on the water. He is able to make a square/circular portion of the water the opponent is standing on to lower like an elevator at great speed up to 100m below then as soon as it is halted, the wall of the water as dense and pressured due to the depth, cascades on the the lowered portion causing a great force of water to crush on the victim. The volume and extent of water is able to completely drown and hurt a very large summon.
The user is left fatigued after this thus can't use S-rank and above water next turn
NOTE
-Useable only once
-Requires a very large water source
-User recieves 30 damage
-No S-rank and above suiton in the turn and next
-Only Magic.. can teach this
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-Declined- Simiar techniques exist, and not nearly enough recoil damage from using a forbidden ranked technique.

Genjutsu: Onsei no Amadioha - Illusion Style: Voice of Amadioha
Rank: A
Type: Attack/Sup
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra. 30
Damage: N/A
Description: An Illusion where the opponent feels his entire lungs are filled with smoke, his trachea, mouth, ear and nose is filled with smoke causing him to suffocate, unable to breathe in air and choke after a turn in the illusion. In real life, he is unable to move and mimics the choking motion as it is in the illusion.
-last for 2 turns
-Useable 3 times per match
-Magic.. can teach this
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-Declined- For the love of god, why would the opponent be unable to move from not being able to breathe? also the bold can't happen in normal genjutsu, you can't force the opponent to move in a way of your choosing, nor can you predict how he is going to react.

Katon: Higakure no Jutsu - Fire Style: Hiding in Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Sup
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user kneads his chakra all over his body and able to blend through fire and move through it. However for a fire technique, the user is only able to blend through B-ranks and below.
-Magic.. can teach this.
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-Declined- DNR

 

[Ndlovu]

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Katon - Kō Okutanka no Jutsu | Fire Release - The High Octane Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range:Short -Long
Chakra: 40 (+5)
Damage: 80 (+ 10 if used in conjunction with a wind technique.)
Description: The user will mold a large amount of chakra in their chest then open their mouth in a screaming fashion releasing a large stream of densely molded fire senbons. Each shard is twice the thickness of a senbon but equal in length. The senbons are densely molded so they have the ability to penetrate solid objects within reason. If the user puts extra chakra into his molding and forms a handseal upon release the senbons will explode on contact. Due to the vicious intensity of releasing the fire senbons the user can only use this jutsu a limited amount of times and using it in succession causes recoil damage.

Note: This jutsu can only be used three times
Note: The user will take - 20 damage if this jutsu is used twice in the same turn, -10 if used in the turn after.
Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Ndlovu

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 Declined  Underestricted for an S-Rank. Remove the damage boost and damage taken from it. That would make it a forbidden rank. The +5 chakra cost i don't get. The combination with wind is something that doesn't need to be on the technique.​

Hiru - Rīchitēru | Leech Style - Leech Tail
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will form a single handseal creating a long sturdy leech tail that will erupt out of the users appendage or tail bone area, the leech tail is similar to the zero-tails yet it is a little more slender and pitch black. The tail is short range but can extend up until mid range and can retract and detach on command, though it can reach a decent length only one tail can be formed at a time. Coming into physical contact with the leech tail will stick or wrap itself and drain the opponents chakra through its surface making them feel weak and faint for one turn. Though the tail is physically strong a turn after siphoning the opponents chakra the tail will fall off and poof away. The chakra doesn't go to the user but to the tail itself which is why from bloating the tail will fall off.

Note: This jutsu can only be used by those who have signed the leech contract
Note: This jutsu can only last for four turns
Note: The user can't use above S-Rank leech techniques for two turns after this jutsu has been performed.
Note: This jutsu can only be taught by Ndlovu

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 Declined  DNR​

Genjutsu - Jūryoku no Zange | Illusionary Art - Gravitational Penitence
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:The user will form two handseals placing the opponent in a genjutsu. Once placed in the genjutsu the opponent will rapidly feel as if there is a shift in the gravity underneath him and five meters around him while feeling a small pin inserting pain around his head. The gravitational sensation and downward force will put great pressure on the opponent, he will see everything in that specified radius naturally have the same effect on it. A high pitched ringing will then start being heard in the opponents ears, at this point the apparent gravitational force will magnify and the opponents orifices will begin to bleed rapidly giving the opponent an incredible amount of mental trauma. The sensation then progresses causing the opponent to hear, see and feel all their bones are breaking from the sheer force of the gravitational pull.

Note: This genjutsu can only be used thrice
Note: The user cannot use S-rank and above genjutsu next turn
Note: The user must have mastered genjutsu in order to use this
Note: This can only be taught by Ndlovu

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 Declined  Badly explained, too high rank and it almost is similar to existing genjutsu.​