Alien Invaders: The Byakugan Aliens FC

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

Lol random thought, but when Crystal Returned I imagined this...







321sid: *a snake slithering on her shoulder* heheheh... I'll simply tell them I spoke to a Moderator. They will never suspect that I I'm now the head of this clan. Edo Tensei!

Twin Steps: *just regaining conciousness* huh...what's...arrrrrrrgh!

*the paper finally settles with Crystal Chakra replacing Twin Steps*

Crystal Chakra: K, so... I'm back

Everyone: :x3:

321sid: *In her head* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH


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That pic tho O_O Is that Kabuto?

Welcome back xd

And really nice gifs

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

Lol random thought, but when Crystal Returned I imagined this...







321sid: *a snake slithering on her shoulder* heheheh... I'll simply tell them I spoke to a Moderator. They will never suspect that I I'm now the head of this clan. Edo Tensei!

Twin Steps: *just regaining conciousness* huh...what's...arrrrrrrgh!

*the paper finally settles with Crystal Chakra replacing Twin Steps*

Crystal Chakra: K, so... I'm back

Everyone: :x3:

321sid: *In her head* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH


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.. You're a smart one .. I should fear you :|
 

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

Welcome Back CrystalChakra, it's a good thing you're back on course my Friend or else our clan would've been prohibited to enter by these Mods depending on your actions...

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

Hinata soloes naruto, low diff ;)
Naturally, that KCM isn't going to be able to detect any malice in that pure heart of hers and BAM Lion Fist to the face/heart.

Besides... No way Naruto will be able to fight once he's whipped :hint:


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.. You're a smart one .. I should fear you :|
....yeah smart.....definitely....





Haha more like awkwardly creative.
 

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

Naturally, that KCM isn't going to be able to detect any malice in that pure heart of hers and BAM Lion Fist to the face/heart.

Besides... No way Naruto will be able to fight once he's whipped :hint:




....yeah smart.....definitely....





Haha more like awkwardly creative.

I know haha! he won't touch hinata PFFFTTT ;)
 

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

I know haha! he won't touch hinata PFFFTTT ;)
INCORRECT!!! He will... because Hinata will let him :blush:

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Besides... Naruto can't directly get to Hinata even if he could hit her....why? Because Hiashi that's why.

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

Um.... this is a bit far fetched theory I have, but here goes.

As of now Kishimoto has shown the Gentle Step: Twin Lion Fists being activated twice but not actually used against an opponent. This situation is very similar to when Sasuke was about to use Kirin against Team 7 before Orochimaru stopped him, or another example would be when Itachi uses Amaterasu to escape from Jiriaya.

Basically, foreshadowing abilities.

So I think it's safe to say that Hinata will use her Lion Fists some time soon.

However, the question is, on who?

As stupid as it sounds, I say Juubito.

If she used it on Madara [who is busy with Hashirama anyways] it would have no affect as he is an Edo Tensei Summon, and I'm sure Gentle Fist doesn't work on them.
If she used it on a Juubi clone, [imo] it would be anti climactic, not only because she already fought one using her 64 palms jutsu, but also because Lion Fists seems to be a really strong jutsu.

So, how exactly would this happen? Well, I'm not saying Hinata would fight Juubito one-on-one, but rather, she'd be the final step in a group attack, essentially something akin to the SasuNaru combo [with assistance from Minato & Tobirama].

Now comes the issue of how the attack would even affect Juubito if only Senjutsu works on him. Well, I'm thinking perhaps Naruto can give her Senjutsu.... Now, keep in mind that, in order to keep from turning into a frog, one must properly control their Nature Chakra, this would mean that, in order to prevent Hinata from turning into a frog, Naruto would constantly have to stay in contact with her in order for him to keep the Sage Chakra balanced.

In other words, he'd give her Sage chakra by holding her hand and continue holding her hand in order to properly control the transferred sage chakra. It would also make sense in that Hinata has expressed the desire to fight side by side with Naruto and that has yet to happen. So we'll basically get a NaruHina combo with Naruto holding her hand in order to give and control her Sage Chakra.

Hope this makes sense.....:sweat:
 
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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

IT'S ABOUT TIME SOMEONE STARTED THINKING WHAT I WAS THINKING!

Yes... I believe Soshiken will be vital agsindt Obito.



Like you said... Useless on Edo tensei, unless it eats chakra AMD it ends up being able to est Susanoo or cancel Edo tensei with a hit to the talisman...unlikely. ineffective against Bijuu Clones because they virtually have no organs... And theoretically a different chakra system. Thirdly gentle fist is unique on combat.


My guess would be two theories.

1. eye advancement allows Hinata to see/manipulate natural energy. Unable to notice this Obito take a hit cause he's cocky.

2. Managing to take advantage of the people attacking Obito, Hinata moves into a position where Obito cannot react, and because Jyuuken operates on the premise of INJECTING chakra as opposed to most ninjutsu that attacks hit an opponent... It may work.

Remember chapter 78/79 when Kakashi mentioned even the strongest guys can't defend their organs :hintStrugg:


Which ever way she is supposed to do this, I think a similar scenario may play out.

1. If she gets an eye upgrade I think she'll advance her Lion Fists or hijack someone's jutsu to create an unusually large jutsu or a Air Wall Palm using Soshiken. Not thinking of a simple ninjutsu, Obito will ignore it; however at the last second the Juubi will sense a bit of natural energy, and throw his hand to block. Due to the force it will start to blow him back and after the dust clears we see no Obito. Naruto would start to wonder if it's over, but a heavily panting Hinata slowly tries to take a stsnce, but sure enough rising Mokuton style before her is Obito missing his left hand. Telling Hinata her efforts were useless he goes Piccolo and reforms his left hand and proceeds to hold Hinata by the neck and lift her up. Shifting his staff into a sword he stabs her in the gut. While fighting the pain, Hinata says Obito's strength is his heart. Angered, Obito draws Hinata closer saying he has no heart.

Struggling, Hinata places her right hand on his chest and then says, "You've done all of this following your heart... You've challenged the world for your dream...just like Naruto-Kun....I may be wrong, but I think you have a strong heart." After this the meek smile disappears, and in a more serious tone she says, "However... Even if I am wrong, your heart is still your weakness!" After that she uses a point blank Jyuuken temporarily dispersing his Black chakra orbs. Staggering back Hinata manages to land on her feet and Obito only takes a step back. Holding her new wound Hinata raises one hand to fight (similar to Neji vs Hinata).

Pissed off, Obito shouts her efforts were pointless, and reveals his chakra still functions. Activating his sword he goes to strike when Simultaneously Naruto moves her away Bridal style, and Obito receives a foot in his face from the Green Beast of Konoha's Dynamic Entry. We finally see Hinata's efforts: Obito has a bit of blood on his face meaning Lee's normally useless attack has hurt him.

Recalling their fight just before Neji and Naruto fought, Hinata weakly jokes about having weird eyes before passing out. Naruto, starting to panic is calmed with the arrival of Sakura and Shizune. Tsunade's first disciple oversees Hinata and Sakura steps into the fight with attacks that now hurt Obito.



Pretty cool yes?! :hint:
 

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

IT'S ABOUT TIME SOMEONE STARTED THINKING WHAT I WAS THINKING!

Yes... I believe Soshiken will be vital agsindt Obito.



Like you said... Useless on Edo tensei, unless it eats chakra AMD it ends up being able to est Susanoo or cancel Edo tensei with a hit to the talisman...unlikely. ineffective against Bijuu Clones because they virtually have no organs... And theoretically a different chakra system. Thirdly gentle fist is unique on combat.


My guess would be two theories.

1. eye advancement allows Hinata to see/manipulate natural energy. Unable to notice this Obito take a hit cause he's cocky.

2. Managing to take advantage of the people attacking Obito, Hinata moves into a position where Obito cannot react, and because Jyuuken operates on the premise of INJECTING chakra as opposed to most ninjutsu that attacks hit an opponent... It may work.

Remember chapter 78/79 when Kakashi mentioned even the strongest guys can't defend their organs :hintStrugg:


Which ever way she is supposed to do this, I think a similar scenario may play out.

1. If she gets an eye upgrade I think she'll advance her Lion Fists or hijack someone's jutsu to create an unusually large jutsu or a Air Wall Palm using Soshiken. Not thinking of a simple ninjutsu, Obito will ignore it; however at the last second the Juubi will sense a bit of natural energy, and throw his hand to block. Due to the force it will start to blow him back and after the dust clears we see no Obito. Naruto would start to wonder if it's over, but a heavily panting Hinata slowly tries to take a stsnce, but sure enough rising Mokuton style before her is Obito missing his left hand. Telling Hinata her efforts were useless he goes Piccolo and reforms his left hand and proceeds to hold Hinata by the neck and lift her up. Shifting his staff into a sword he stabs her in the gut. While fighting the pain, Hinata says Obito's strength is his heart. Angered, Obito draws Hinata closer saying he has no heart.

Struggling, Hinata places her right hand on his chest and then says, "You've done all of this following your heart... You've challenged the world for your dream...just like Naruto-Kun....I may be wrong, but I think you have a strong heart." After this the meek smile disappears, and in a more serious tone she says, "However... Even if I am wrong, your heart is still your weakness!" After that she uses a point blank Jyuuken temporarily dispersing his Black chakra orbs. Staggering back Hinata manages to land on her feet and Obito only takes a step back. Holding her new wound Hinata raises one hand to fight (similar to Neji vs Hinata).

Pissed off, Obito shouts her efforts were pointless, and reveals his chakra still functions. Activating his sword he goes to strike when Simultaneously Naruto moves her away Bridal style, and Obito receives a foot in his face from the Green Beast of Konoha's Dynamic Entry. We finally see Hinata's efforts: Obito has a bit of blood on his face meaning Lee's normally useless attack has hurt him.

Recalling their fight just before Neji and Naruto fought, Hinata weakly jokes about having weird eyes before passing out. Naruto, starting to panic is calmed with the arrival of Sakura and Shizune. Tsunade's first disciple oversees Hinata and Sakura steps into the fight with attacks that now hurt Obito.



Pretty cool yes?! :hint:p
It's cool aright, but some of it seems..... fanfic-ish
 

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

It's cool aright, but some of it seems..... fanfic-ish
Indeed it does :dead:!

More likely her attack would be a part of a chain of attacks leading up to Naruto doing something epic.




Annd to randomly say...I'd still like to see a Rasengan-Soshiken combo :p
 

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

INCORRECT!!! He will... because Hinata will let him :blush:

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Besides... Naruto can't directly get to Hinata even if he could hit her....why? Because Hiashi that's why.

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Oh hell no, hold up, let me call kushina :cool:
 

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

Oh hell no, hold up, let me call kushina :cool:
LOL She'd probably march through the Hyuga Grounds and start Pimp Slapping people XD


Hiashi Hyuga's Rules to Dating Hinata: Found by Sagara

Rule One: If you come up to gates of the Hyuuga estate and announce your presence you’d better be delivering an important message from the Hokage, because you’re sure not picking anything up.

* Rule Two: You do not touch my daughter in front of me. You may glance at her, so long as you do not peer at anything below her neck. If you cannot keep your eyes or hands off of my daughter's body, I will remove them.

Rule Three: I am aware that it is considered practical for boys of your age to remove their shirts when they have been training for hours on end. Presumably, this is to ensure that you do not overheat while you are training outdoors. Please don’t take this as an insult but you and all of your friends are complete idiots. We do have air conditioned dojos and indoor training halls for a reason. Still, I want to be fair and open minded about this issue, so I propose this compromise: You may remove your shirts and tops whenever and wherever you want, and I will not object. However, in order to ensure that your pants do not, accidentally, come off during any time spent with my daughter, I will take my senbon and fasten your trousers securely in place to your waist.

Rule Four: I'm sure you've been told that in today's world, *** with the wrong kunoichi can kill you. Let me elaborate, when it comes to ***, my daughter is that kunoichi, and I will kill you.

Rule Five: It is usually understood that in order for us to get to know each other, we should talk about recent missions, politics, and other issues of the day. Please do not do this. The only information I require from you is an indication of when you expect to have my daughter safely back at my house, and the only word I need from you on this subject is "early."

* Rule Six: I have no doubt you are a popular fellow, with many opportunities to date other girls. This is fine with me as long as it is okay with my daughter. Otherwise, once you have gone out with my little girl, you will continue to date no one but her until she is finished with you. If you make her cry, I will make you cry.

Rule Seven: As you stand in my front hallway, waiting for my daughter to appear, and more than an hour goes by, do not sigh and fidget. If you want to be on time for the movie, you should not be dating. My daughter is putting on her makeup, a process that can take longer than sculpting the Hokage Monument. Instead of just standing there, why don't you do something useful, like sweeping my floors?

Rule Eight: The following places are not appropriate for a date with my daughter: Places where there are beds, sofas, or anything softer than a wooden stool. Places where there are no parents, ninja patrols, or nuns within eyesight. Places where there is darkness. Places where there is dancing, holding hands, or happiness. Places where the ambient temperature is warm enough to induce my daughter to wear shorts, tank tops, midriff T-shirts, or anything other than overalls, a sweater, and a goose down parka - zipped up to her throat. Movies with a strong romantic or sexual theme are to be avoided; movies which feature chainsaws are okay. Chunin exam tournaments are okay. Morino Ibiki’s interrogation chambers are better. (Speaking of which, Ibiki owes me a favor. Would you like me to make an appointment for you? It’s no trouble.)

Rule Nine: Do not lie to me. I am a master of the Byakugan – that makes me a living lie detector. I can see every involuntary twitch, every breath, and each bead of sweat on your face. If I ask you where you are going and with whom, you have one chance to tell me the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth. I have an army of elite Byakugan users at my beck and call. Do not trifle with me.

Rule Ten: Be afraid. Be very afraid. It takes very little for me to mistake the sound of your steps coming up to my front gate for an enemy Cloud ninja sent here to steal the secrets of the Byakugan. You remember what happened to the last Cloud ninja who crossed me, don’t you? Incidentally, I will be cleaning and polishing the family katana as I wait for you to bring my daughter home. As soon as you set one foot on my property you should submit yourself to a full body search by my guards, remove all hidden weapons from your person, and keep both hands in plain sight. Announce in a clear voice that you have brought my daughter home safely and early, then leave - there is no need for you to come inside. You may not see me, but rest assured. I see you.



My Condensed Version:

Hiashi Hyuga's Rules to Dating Hinata:

Rule 1: Do not





Also, Why not throw Chapter 5 out there :hint:!



Sorry if you notice any spelling errors, find something that feels like an inconsistency, or are confused....Kinda have 5 mi

Chapter 5: Sunset

Naruto was hardly impressed with the man before him. While it was almost impossible to say for sure, Naruto could only guess that the ragged person sitting before him was in his twenties. The figure’s face was covered with a wide spread circular white Kasa as opposed the traditionally more pointed conical straw hats. The hat was also appeared to be his only clean possession. A ragged, dirty, and tattered cloak covered whatever the man wore underneath, and was large enough to sprawl around him on the floor. He sat with his head seemingly down, and his legs crossed. From under the cloak it was apparent that his forearms were resting calmly on his knees. Attached to a khaki sash, a rag covered staff rested on the individual’s back. It held a circular top with three rings appearing on either side of the staff’s rod section. This individual could only be described as one dressed as that of a wanderer. Unable to contain his surprise, Naruto blurted out with disappointment, “Huuuh…this bum is our target?” As he finished, the sitting man’s head raised slightly before returning to its original downward position.


“ I did not notice your presence. I must have appeared rude...Sorry.”


“EH!!” Naruto, Sakura, and Kiba cried.


“This guy is supposed to be our dangerous target?” Kiba called out in annoyance, “He didn’t even know we were here. How am I supposed to take this seriously?!”


“That’s yet to be determined,” Kakashi interviened with a serious look on his face. Keeping his Sharingan concentrated on the man, Kakashi continued. “Would you happen to be Tsukasa Shirokishi?” His question was met with silence. Wanting nothing more than to end this mission, Naruto roared.


“HEY RAGS-BASTARD! I’D LIKE TO GET THIS OVER WITH! IF YOU’RE THIS TSUKASA GUY THAN JUST SAY SO! THEN GIVE UP OR LET ME KICK YOUR ASS!” Hearing Naruto’s desire to end the mission and knowing it was because of her, Hinata’s head sunk down.


“Naruto calm down…” Kakashi said as he placed his left hand on Naruto’s shoulder before he could offer more words to calm his student, the man then spoke up.


“My name is Tsukasa yes…” the man said flatly. Upon finishing his response, the group tensed up. It was finally confirmed that this was in fact their target: Tsukasa Shirokishi.


“Well that is fortunate!” smiled Sai. Looking to Naruto and Kiba, he continued. “You two would have looked like *******s had this man not been Tsukasa Shirokishi. Of course, I mean that in a figurative sense as you are more than an *******. Perhaps my earlier thought was wrong about you Naruto… maybe you haven’t grown a pair of balls, but instead have half a ball.” Before Naruto or Kiba could respond to Sai’s latest insult, Kakashi stepped in.


“Sai that’s enough… we need to stay focused. If this guy is our target, than he’s no pushover. When Naruto ran out of the Hokage’s office, I managed to have enough time to look him up in the Bingo Book on the walk to the gate.”



“In the Bingo Book,” Sakura said, “That means he’s in the top tier of the S-Ranked Criminals…” His eyes narrowing , Kakashi continued.


“That’s only the tip of the Iceberg. According to the Bingo Book, he’s been associated with Akatsuki though it would seem he is not an official member. From what I read he assisted in the capture of the Five Tail’s Jinjuriki: Han of Iwagakure. According to rumor, Han had both extreme physical power and speed. The two traits cumulated into one of the best taijutsu styles to exist outside of the Gentle Fist, and the 8 Gates.” As soon as Kakashi had mentioned the heinous organization everyone went wide eyed except Hinata who was still swimming in thoughts of guilt. Naruto’s earlier desire to bring a quick end to his mission was instantly replaced with searing anger. The wind picked up for a few seconds as Tsukasa continued to sit.


“Why do you want to kick my ass?” Tsukasa asked, maintaining a flat, seemingly emotionless voice. “Between yourself and the one that lies inside you there are better options available.”


“DON’T SCREW WITH US!” Naruto shouted.


“Naruto calm down.” Kakashi said with a raised voice. “If you do not keep calm this will only make things worse.”


“Kakashi-Sensei…” Sakura started.


“Yeah… He knows about Naruto,” Kakashi responded. “Which means that we cannot allow him to leave.”


“With time comes knowledge… secrets cannot hide forever,” Tsukasa suddenly said. While his head remained down, his head turned to seemingly be observing the individuals of the group before him. “Hmm?” Tsukasa slightly raised his head once again… his kasa still covering his face. Taking on a more gentle tone as opposed to his earlier apathetic one, Tsukasa continued. “If you always look to the Earth, how can you step towards the Sun?” Hinata’s eyes grew wide and her heart began to race. Deviating his eyes only slightly, Kakashi looked back at the Hyuga Hieress. Seeing her head down, Kakashi then redoubled his focus on Tsukasa.


“If he intends to target her first… things could get complicated,” Kakashi thought to himself.


“Tsch…I said don’t screw with us!” Naruto said in anger, “We don’t need any pointless words of wisdom! Besides you’re the only one who’s looking down! Kakashi let’s just…” Before he could finish Neji cried out.


“HINATA-SAMA!” Hinata flew by using chakra to enhance her speed. Taking a single counter clockwise spin, Hinata threw her right leg forward as her right palm flew at Shirokishi’s head. Before her Jyuuken strike could land, the target pressed his heels against the tiled floor, and in a quick, fluid motion moved into a backflip… landing on his hands only to push in order to propel himself further back. Pressing forward, Hinata quickly covered the gap. Instead of spinning, Hinata began thrusting jabs in an attempt to strike Tsukasa’s Tenketsu. Moving his body left and right while back peddling, Shirokishi evaded her strikes. Pushing with both feet, the Shirokishi once again pressed backwards and started sliding on his heels. Stepping forward at her now off balance opponent, Hinata stepped forward and threw her palm to strike her adversary. Just as she began to step forward, Tsukasa fell on his back allowing the Jyuuken palm to fly overhead. Tucking in his arms back towards his shoulders and pulling his feet towards his chest, Shirokishi used his backwards momentum to go begin spinning on the upper part of his back and kneck. After gaining enough torque, Tsukasa threw his hands onto the tile, and simultaneously thrusted his arms and legs to explode away from his core. Having overexerted her balance, Hinata could not react as Tsukasa’s legs flew up catching the bottom side of her chin, and proceeded to send her flying back towards the rest of the Konoha Platoon that sprang into action.


Landing on his feet from his upward kick, Tsukasa was presently stationed halfway between the edge of the ring and the center of the Temple. Flying towards him, Kakashi moved to keep the S-Rank Criminal from capitalizing on his recent hit on Hinata. With a Raikiri in each hand, Kakashi began to unleash a flurry of jabs to prevent Tsukasa from reaching a wider range of land. Despite his sharingan and considerable skill in Taijutsu, his opponent was evading every strike Kakashi made. “He’s good,” Kakashi thought to himself, “If I can just keep him on defense the others can get in formation.” Just as the thought finished flowing through his head, four Narutos began to move in from both the right and left. Forming a Rasengan each side pushed in with Kakashi’s Raikiri thrust. Just before the impacts could land, Tsukasa rolled back. With the staff on his back catching into the tiling, it slightly bent as Tsukasa rolled back up onto it before he balanced himself on top of it using his hands. With the S-Rank criminal balanced on his staff, Naruto and Kakashi’s attacks struck the staff. Instead of being destroyed, the ragged staff pulsed, and with it Kakashi and Naruto were flung backwards with surprising force. The force of the blowback had managed to knock Kakashi back to the top of the staircase where Sai, in the midst of drawing, was holding to prevent Tsukasa from fleeing down the staircase. His shadow clones dispersing, Naruto, revealed to have approached to Tsukasa’s left, went sliding over the edge of the encirclement: just nearly colliding with the Dragon Statue that sat on the edge of the temple’s circular design. Pulling a last ditch effort, Naruto created a series of Twenty clones to create a make shift ladder as he grabbed onto the last clone’s ankles.


Having been kicked back, Hinata had landed fairly close to the center of the Tenshuno Temple. Sakura had arrived by Hinata’s, who was partially dazed, side along with Kiba and Shino. “Alright let’s go Akamaru! We’ll crush him with Gatsuga!” Before Kiba could move forward, Shino caught his hand. “Kiba, you need to operate as support with Sakura. That’s because the two of you cause too much destruction with your attacks. The one best suited for moving now is GUH!!” Before Shino had even begun to speak Tsukasa had been taking action. Ending his balance on the Staff, he quickly threw his legs forward giving his body a spinning momentum, and thus returning him to an upright position. Catching his right foot in the circle of the staff’s top he bent into a crouch before exploding off of his right foot. The chakra enhanced burst of energy threw him forward while simultaneously unhinging the staff from the tiled floor. Throwing his right leg forward, Tsukasa extended his range using the staff still caught in his right foot. With this the S-Rank Criminal impacted Shino in the chest, and sent the Aburame flying backwards.


Landing with Kiba on his left and Sakura approaching from his right, Tsukasa used the momentum and positioning of the staff to allow it to fall back into the dirt caked sash on his back. Quick to react, Kiba had enhanced himself with his more feral side, and he swiped his claw-like hand towards his opponent only to miss as Tsukasa spun to his right, and lowered himself into a sweep kick to take away the Inuzuka’s balance.


“There’s nowhere for you to move now! SHANAROOO!” Having moved in, Sakura drew her hand back to throw a punch. As Tsukasa began to evade, he stumbled. Looking back to his left leg he saw Kiba had latched onto his leg, and Akamaru had clamped his teeth onto his ragged cloak preventing him from moving. Further holding him down were a pair of black snakes that wrapped around Kiba’s hands as the Ink helped tighten the Inuzuka’s grip. Back at the staircase Sai looked on with a smile.


“The tiling offers an advantage for my Art,” Sai began. “Using the holes I was able to move them unnoticed. All I had to do was wait for the dumb one to mess up and then I could stop you movements.”


“Alright this is it,” thought Sakura as she threw her fist forwards. A small smirk appeared across her face as the S-Rank Criminal put his hand up to block and stepped forward with his free right hand. “Wrong choice!” she thought.


As her hand impacted against the open palm of her adversary, the force of her punch created a surging gust of wind that ended up sending Akamaru flying backwards along with Kiba: his hand now covered in ink from the destroyed Ink Snakes. “Huh…” Sakura could only stare in disbelief as her opponent had caught her fist in his open palm without so much as a scratch or sign of injury. “What’s going on?!” Sakura thought, “Even if he could catch the punch his arm should be shattered and destroyed!” Before she could further contemplate what had happened, Tsukasa slid thehis right hand from Sakura’s fist to her wrist. Pulling her towards him he surged his right hand forward to her waist and allowed his left hand to take the former position of holding her wrist. Crouching down Tsukasa used Sakura’s forward momentum to his advantage as he pulled down with his left hand while pushing up with his right hand resulting in him flipping Sakura over him. “Gah!” Sakura breathed out as she landed on her back some feet in the direction of Kiba and Akamaru: the air forced out of her.


As soon as Sakura had gone airborne, Tsukasa moved a few paces forward; however, he almost immediately stopped as Neji blocked his path having already taken up the standard Jyuuken posture. “I will give you a chance to forfeit now,” addressed Neji. “While your Taijutsu is commendable, it is now futile to attempt to continue this fight any longer. You have taken too long and have allowed my eye to see everything. The way you move, the way you dodge. My attacks will be swifter than Hinata-Sama’s. Additionally, my skill in Taijutsu is superior to Hatake Kakashi’s. His glancing blows will only be closer from me, and with my Jyuuken they will be lethal strikes. I’ll say this once more, but I would recommend you to forfeit before it is too late.” Having overcome her daze, Hinata had gotten back up on her feet, and stood off to the enemy’s right as she similarly entered the Hyuga stance.


While his face was still mostly covered by his white Kasa, Neji’s eyes narrowed as a smile spread across his opponent’s face before returning its seemingly regular blank demeanor. “You have keen eyes,” said Tsukasa suddenly. Finishing his unexpected praise, Tsukasa crouched down into a defensive stance. Without wasting a moment, Neji sprang forward. Unleashing the full potential of the Jyuken style, Neji quickly began to press Tsukasa back. Unlike the first encounter Neji did not allow Tsukasa the comfort of distance, and as such the S-Rank Criminal began to throw up his arms to block the incoming jabs. After remaining still for a few moments, Hinata began to move forward after the duo.


“What is wrong with me…” Neji said to himself. Despite his frustration, the Hyuga kept calm, and simply increased his already bluring jabs and thrusts as he brought his enemy closer to the edge of the Temple’s circular structure. Continuing to fall back, Tsukasa continued to block Neji’s strikes with his hands and forearms. “Impossible,” thought Neji, “I keep missing his Tenketsu. Why is this? To make matters worse, I’m missing by mere millimeters!” Picking up her speed, Hinata began to close in behind Neji. Using her body’s natural flexibility, Hinata began an initial forward handspring. Twisting her hands, she rotated her body to follow up with two more consecutive back handsprings to gain more momentum, and then used the moment to spring herself into a arcing backflip. Shooting over the pair of engaged combatants, Hinata landed a few meters behind Tsukasa Shirokishi. Having landed in a crouched position, Hinata leapt forward into a series of clockwise spins as her hands began to glow in what appeared to be flaming chakra. Just as the chakra had begun to mold in her hands, Tsukasa slightly turned his head back to view the opponent behind him.


“THERE!” cried Neji to himself. With a quick burst of speed at his opponents distraction, Neji plunged his right hand forward and struck Tsukasa’s left shoulder; however, his eyes quickly widened in disbelief as he quickly noticed chakra from his opponent firing out of the very same point. Neji’s Jyuuken strike instantly being countered. “It cannot be…” Neji thought to himself. His eyes then began to notice more and more of Tsukasa’s Tenketsu beam bright blue. Before the S-Rank criminal muttered the words in monotone, the Hyuga Prodigy had a rare emotion settle in his stomach: fear.


Tsukasa Shirokishi quickly flew into a rapid counter clockwise spin. “Hakkeshou Kaiten.” Errupting into a sphere of whirling chakra, Neji and Hinata were blown back. Having come from a lower stance and a direct contact, Neji was thrown to the ground and slid back towards the center of the shrine. However, instead of thinking of the skid marks burning into his back, Neji cried out once more, “HINATA-SAMA!”


Having started a clockwise spin, Hinata’s momentum had been completely halted, and the off balance had staggered her step. As the whirling sphere of chakra made a sudden and rapid increase, a staggered Hinata was lifted up into the air and seen reeling backwards. Flying with surprising force Hinata’s head slammed into the top of the Dragon statue rendering her unconscious as she began to spiral off the edge of the cliff.


Having finally managed to climb up his ladder of clones, Naruto peered over the edge of the Shrine in time to see a huge whirling sphere of blue chakra as it suddenly expanded and retracted in a rapid fashion. Hearing Neji cry out, Naruto had barely any time to look up before seeing Hinata crash into the Dragon statue just to his right. Seeing Hinata begin to spin and fall his eyes widened. Images of her smacking his face flew into his mind and he heard her words, “HOW DARE YOU LAY A HAND ON ME KYUBI!” Almost immediately after, Naruto recalled the day he faced Neji in the Chunin Exams, and after that the smile she had just this morning when Team Kurenai had arrived in Tsunade’s office. “SHIT! HINATA!” Naruto yelled out as he pressed his legs off of the side. Firing down at a diagonal angle, he quickly caught her. Wrapping his right arm around her waist, he formed his trademark hand seal. “KAGEBUNSHIN NO JUTSU!” Once more Twenty clones appeared. Instantly grabbing onto the bottom clone’s ankle, Naruto threw his arm forward as his clones reached for the edge of the cliff.


Back at the top of the cliff, Tsukasa stood facing Neji, and Kakashi. Sakura and Kiba were racing forward. “Not close enough…” Tsukasa said. Sakura could only watch as the lead clone’s hand curled forward in vain as it missed the edge of the Tenshuno Temple’s cliff. As the clones dispersed Naruto cried out as he and Hinata plunged down before vanishing in the waterfall’s mist.


Sakura cried out, “NARUTOOOO!”


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LOL She'd probably march through the Hyuga Grounds and start Pimp Slapping people XD


Hiashi Hyuga's Rules to Dating Hinata: Found by Sagara

Rule One: If you come up to gates of the Hyuuga estate and announce your presence you’d better be delivering an important message from the Hokage, because you’re sure not picking anything up.

* Rule Two: You do not touch my daughter in front of me. You may glance at her, so long as you do not peer at anything below her neck. If you cannot keep your eyes or hands off of my daughter's body, I will remove them.

Rule Three: I am aware that it is considered practical for boys of your age to remove their shirts when they have been training for hours on end. Presumably, this is to ensure that you do not overheat while you are training outdoors. Please don’t take this as an insult but you and all of your friends are complete idiots. We do have air conditioned dojos and indoor training halls for a reason. Still, I want to be fair and open minded about this issue, so I propose this compromise: You may remove your shirts and tops whenever and wherever you want, and I will not object. However, in order to ensure that your pants do not, accidentally, come off during any time spent with my daughter, I will take my senbon and fasten your trousers securely in place to your waist.

Rule Four: I'm sure you've been told that in today's world, *** with the wrong kunoichi can kill you. Let me elaborate, when it comes to ***, my daughter is that kunoichi, and I will kill you.

Rule Five: It is usually understood that in order for us to get to know each other, we should talk about recent missions, politics, and other issues of the day. Please do not do this. The only information I require from you is an indication of when you expect to have my daughter safely back at my house, and the only word I need from you on this subject is "early."

* Rule Six: I have no doubt you are a popular fellow, with many opportunities to date other girls. This is fine with me as long as it is okay with my daughter. Otherwise, once you have gone out with my little girl, you will continue to date no one but her until she is finished with you. If you make her cry, I will make you cry.

Rule Seven: As you stand in my front hallway, waiting for my daughter to appear, and more than an hour goes by, do not sigh and fidget. If you want to be on time for the movie, you should not be dating. My daughter is putting on her makeup, a process that can take longer than sculpting the Hokage Monument. Instead of just standing there, why don't you do something useful, like sweeping my floors?

Rule Eight: The following places are not appropriate for a date with my daughter: Places where there are beds, sofas, or anything softer than a wooden stool. Places where there are no parents, ninja patrols, or nuns within eyesight. Places where there is darkness. Places where there is dancing, holding hands, or happiness. Places where the ambient temperature is warm enough to induce my daughter to wear shorts, tank tops, midriff T-shirts, or anything other than overalls, a sweater, and a goose down parka - zipped up to her throat. Movies with a strong romantic or sexual theme are to be avoided; movies which feature chainsaws are okay. Chunin exam tournaments are okay. Morino Ibiki’s interrogation chambers are better. (Speaking of which, Ibiki owes me a favor. Would you like me to make an appointment for you? It’s no trouble.)

Rule Nine: Do not lie to me. I am a master of the Byakugan – that makes me a living lie detector. I can see every involuntary twitch, every breath, and each bead of sweat on your face. If I ask you where you are going and with whom, you have one chance to tell me the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth. I have an army of elite Byakugan users at my beck and call. Do not trifle with me.

Rule Ten: Be afraid. Be very afraid. It takes very little for me to mistake the sound of your steps coming up to my front gate for an enemy Cloud ninja sent here to steal the secrets of the Byakugan. You remember what happened to the last Cloud ninja who crossed me, don’t you? Incidentally, I will be cleaning and polishing the family katana as I wait for you to bring my daughter home. As soon as you set one foot on my property you should submit yourself to a full body search by my guards, remove all hidden weapons from your person, and keep both hands in plain sight. Announce in a clear voice that you have brought my daughter home safely and early, then leave - there is no need for you to come inside. You may not see me, but rest assured. I see you.



My Condensed Version:

Hiashi Hyuga's Rules to Dating Hinata:

Rule 1: Do not





Also, Why not throw Chapter 5 out there :hint:!



Sorry if you notice any spelling errors, find something that feels like an inconsistency, or are confused....Kinda have 5 mi

Chapter 5: Sunset

Naruto was hardly impressed with the man before him. While it was almost impossible to say for sure, Naruto could only guess that the ragged person sitting before him was in his twenties. The figure’s face was covered with a wide spread circular white Kasa as opposed the traditionally more pointed conical straw hats. The hat was also appeared to be his only clean possession. A ragged, dirty, and tattered cloak covered whatever the man wore underneath, and was large enough to sprawl around him on the floor. He sat with his head seemingly down, and his legs crossed. From under the cloak it was apparent that his forearms were resting calmly on his knees. Attached to a khaki sash, a rag covered staff rested on the individual’s back. It held a circular top with three rings appearing on either side of the staff’s rod section. This individual could only be described as one dressed as that of a wanderer. Unable to contain his surprise, Naruto blurted out with disappointment, “Huuuh…this bum is our target?” As he finished, the sitting man’s head raised slightly before returning to its original downward position.


“ I did not notice your presence. I must have appeared rude...Sorry.”


“EH!!” Naruto, Sakura, and Kiba cried.


“This guy is supposed to be our dangerous target?” Kiba called out in annoyance, “He didn’t even know we were here. How am I supposed to take this seriously?!”


“That’s yet to be determined,” Kakashi interviened with a serious look on his face. Keeping his Sharingan concentrated on the man, Kakashi continued. “Would you happen to be Tsukasa Shirokishi?” His question was met with silence. Wanting nothing more than to end this mission, Naruto roared.


“HEY RAGS-BASTARD! I’D LIKE TO GET THIS OVER WITH! IF YOU’RE THIS TSUKASA GUY THAN JUST SAY SO! THEN GIVE UP OR LET ME KICK YOUR ASS!” Hearing Naruto’s desire to end the mission and knowing it was because of her, Hinata’s head sunk down.


“Naruto calm down…” Kakashi said as he placed his left hand on Naruto’s shoulder before he could offer more words to calm his student, the man then spoke up.


“My name is Tsukasa yes…” the man said flatly. Upon finishing his response, the group tensed up. It was finally confirmed that this was in fact their target: Tsukasa Shirokishi.


“Well that is fortunate!” smiled Sai. Looking to Naruto and Kiba, he continued. “You two would have looked like *******s had this man not been Tsukasa Shirokishi. Of course, I mean that in a figurative sense as you are more than an *******. Perhaps my earlier thought was wrong about you Naruto… maybe you haven’t grown a pair of balls, but instead have half a ball.” Before Naruto or Kiba could respond to Sai’s latest insult, Kakashi stepped in.


“Sai that’s enough… we need to stay focused. If this guy is our target, than he’s no pushover. When Naruto ran out of the Hokage’s office, I managed to have enough time to look him up in the Bingo Book on the walk to the gate.”



“In the Bingo Book,” Sakura said, “That means he’s in the top tier of the S-Ranked Criminals…” His eyes narrowing , Kakashi continued.


“That’s only the tip of the Iceberg. According to the Bingo Book, he’s been associated with Akatsuki though it would seem he is not an official member. From what I read he assisted in the capture of the Five Tail’s Jinjuriki: Han of Iwagakure. According to rumor, Han had both extreme physical power and speed. The two traits cumulated into one of the best taijutsu styles to exist outside of the Gentle Fist, and the 8 Gates.” As soon as Kakashi had mentioned the heinous organization everyone went wide eyed except Hinata who was still swimming in thoughts of guilt. Naruto’s earlier desire to bring a quick end to his mission was instantly replaced with searing anger. The wind picked up for a few seconds as Tsukasa continued to sit.


“Why do you want to kick my ass?” Tsukasa asked, maintaining a flat, seemingly emotionless voice. “Between yourself and the one that lies inside you there are better options available.”


“DON’T SCREW WITH US!” Naruto shouted.


“Naruto calm down.” Kakashi said with a raised voice. “If you do not keep calm this will only make things worse.”


“Kakashi-Sensei…” Sakura started.


“Yeah… He knows about Naruto,” Kakashi responded. “Which means that we cannot allow him to leave.”


“With time comes knowledge… secrets cannot hide forever,” Tsukasa suddenly said. While his head remained down, his head turned to seemingly be observing the individuals of the group before him. “Hmm?” Tsukasa slightly raised his head once again… his kasa still covering his face. Taking on a more gentle tone as opposed to his earlier apathetic one, Tsukasa continued. “If you always look to the Earth, how can you step towards the Sun?” Hinata’s eyes grew wide and her heart began to race. Deviating his eyes only slightly, Kakashi looked back at the Hyuga Hieress. Seeing her head down, Kakashi then redoubled his focus on Tsukasa.


“If he intends to target her first… things could get complicated,” Kakashi thought to himself.


“Tsch…I said don’t screw with us!” Naruto said in anger, “We don’t need any pointless words of wisdom! Besides you’re the only one who’s looking down! Kakashi let’s just…” Before he could finish Neji cried out.


“HINATA-SAMA!” Hinata flew by using chakra to enhance her speed. Taking a single counter clockwise spin, Hinata threw her right leg forward as her right palm flew at Shirokishi’s head. Before her Jyuuken strike could land, the target pressed his heels against the tiled floor, and in a quick, fluid motion moved into a backflip… landing on his hands only to push in order to propel himself further back. Pressing forward, Hinata quickly covered the gap. Instead of spinning, Hinata began thrusting jabs in an attempt to strike Tsukasa’s Tenketsu. Moving his body left and right while back peddling, Shirokishi evaded her strikes. Pushing with both feet, the Shirokishi once again pressed backwards and started sliding on his heels. Stepping forward at her now off balance opponent, Hinata stepped forward and threw her palm to strike her adversary. Just as she began to step forward, Tsukasa fell on his back allowing the Jyuuken palm to fly overhead. Tucking in his arms back towards his shoulders and pulling his feet towards his chest, Shirokishi used his backwards momentum to go begin spinning on the upper part of his back and kneck. After gaining enough torque, Tsukasa threw his hands onto the tile, and simultaneously thrusted his arms and legs to explode away from his core. Having overexerted her balance, Hinata could not react as Tsukasa’s legs flew up catching the bottom side of her chin, and proceeded to send her flying back towards the rest of the Konoha Platoon that sprang into action.


Landing on his feet from his upward kick, Tsukasa was presently stationed halfway between the edge of the ring and the center of the Temple. Flying towards him, Kakashi moved to keep the S-Rank Criminal from capitalizing on his recent hit on Hinata. With a Raikiri in each hand, Kakashi began to unleash a flurry of jabs to prevent Tsukasa from reaching a wider range of land. Despite his sharingan and considerable skill in Taijutsu, his opponent was evading every strike Kakashi made. “He’s good,” Kakashi thought to himself, “If I can just keep him on defense the others can get in formation.” Just as the thought finished flowing through his head, four Narutos began to move in from both the right and left. Forming a Rasengan each side pushed in with Kakashi’s Raikiri thrust. Just before the impacts could land, Tsukasa rolled back. With the staff on his back catching into the tiling, it slightly bent as Tsukasa rolled back up onto it before he balanced himself on top of it using his hands. With the S-Rank criminal balanced on his staff, Naruto and Kakashi’s attacks struck the staff. Instead of being destroyed, the ragged staff pulsed, and with it Kakashi and Naruto were flung backwards with surprising force. The force of the blowback had managed to knock Kakashi back to the top of the staircase where Sai, in the midst of drawing, was holding to prevent Tsukasa from fleeing down the staircase. His shadow clones dispersing, Naruto, revealed to have approached to Tsukasa’s left, went sliding over the edge of the encirclement: just nearly colliding with the Dragon Statue that sat on the edge of the temple’s circular design. Pulling a last ditch effort, Naruto created a series of Twenty clones to create a make shift ladder as he grabbed onto the last clone’s ankles.


Having been kicked back, Hinata had landed fairly close to the center of the Tenshuno Temple. Sakura had arrived by Hinata’s, who was partially dazed, side along with Kiba and Shino. “Alright let’s go Akamaru! We’ll crush him with Gatsuga!” Before Kiba could move forward, Shino caught his hand. “Kiba, you need to operate as support with Sakura. That’s because the two of you cause too much destruction with your attacks. The one best suited for moving now is GUH!!” Before Shino had even begun to speak Tsukasa had been taking action. Ending his balance on the Staff, he quickly threw his legs forward giving his body a spinning momentum, and thus returning him to an upright position. Catching his right foot in the circle of the staff’s top he bent into a crouch before exploding off of his right foot. The chakra enhanced burst of energy threw him forward while simultaneously unhinging the staff from the tiled floor. Throwing his right leg forward, Tsukasa extended his range using the staff still caught in his right foot. With this the S-Rank Criminal impacted Shino in the chest, and sent the Aburame flying backwards.


Landing with Kiba on his left and Sakura approaching from his right, Tsukasa used the momentum and positioning of the staff to allow it to fall back into the dirt caked sash on his back. Quick to react, Kiba had enhanced himself with his more feral side, and he swiped his claw-like hand towards his opponent only to miss as Tsukasa spun to his right, and lowered himself into a sweep kick to take away the Inuzuka’s balance.


“There’s nowhere for you to move now! SHANAROOO!” Having moved in, Sakura drew her hand back to throw a punch. As Tsukasa began to evade, he stumbled. Looking back to his left leg he saw Kiba had latched onto his leg, and Akamaru had clamped his teeth onto his ragged cloak preventing him from moving. Further holding him down were a pair of black snakes that wrapped around Kiba’s hands as the Ink helped tighten the Inuzuka’s grip. Back at the staircase Sai looked on with a smile.


“The tiling offers an advantage for my Art,” Sai began. “Using the holes I was able to move them unnoticed. All I had to do was wait for the dumb one to mess up and then I could stop you movements.”


“Alright this is it,” thought Sakura as she threw her fist forwards. A small smirk appeared across her face as the S-Rank Criminal put his hand up to block and stepped forward with his free right hand. “Wrong choice!” she thought.


As her hand impacted against the open palm of her adversary, the force of her punch created a surging gust of wind that ended up sending Akamaru flying backwards along with Kiba: his hand now covered in ink from the destroyed Ink Snakes. “Huh…” Sakura could only stare in disbelief as her opponent had caught her fist in his open palm without so much as a scratch or sign of injury. “What’s going on?!” Sakura thought, “Even if he could catch the punch his arm should be shattered and destroyed!” Before she could further contemplate what had happened, Tsukasa slid thehis right hand from Sakura’s fist to her wrist. Pulling her towards him he surged his right hand forward to her waist and allowed his left hand to take the former position of holding her wrist. Crouching down Tsukasa used Sakura’s forward momentum to his advantage as he pulled down with his left hand while pushing up with his right hand resulting in him flipping Sakura over him. “Gah!” Sakura breathed out as she landed on her back some feet in the direction of Kiba and Akamaru: the air forced out of her.


As soon as Sakura had gone airborne, Tsukasa moved a few paces forward; however, he almost immediately stopped as Neji blocked his path having already taken up the standard Jyuuken posture. “I will give you a chance to forfeit now,” addressed Neji. “While your Taijutsu is commendable, it is now futile to attempt to continue this fight any longer. You have taken too long and have allowed my eye to see everything. The way you move, the way you dodge. My attacks will be swifter than Hinata-Sama’s. Additionally, my skill in Taijutsu is superior to Hatake Kakashi’s. His glancing blows will only be closer from me, and with my Jyuuken they will be lethal strikes. I’ll say this once more, but I would recommend you to forfeit before it is too late.” Having overcome her daze, Hinata had gotten back up on her feet, and stood off to the enemy’s right as she similarly entered the Hyuga stance.


While his face was still mostly covered by his white Kasa, Neji’s eyes narrowed as a smile spread across his opponent’s face before returning its seemingly regular blank demeanor. “You have keen eyes,” said Tsukasa suddenly. Finishing his unexpected praise, Tsukasa crouched down into a defensive stance. Without wasting a moment, Neji sprang forward. Unleashing the full potential of the Jyuken style, Neji quickly began to press Tsukasa back. Unlike the first encounter Neji did not allow Tsukasa the comfort of distance, and as such the S-Rank Criminal began to throw up his arms to block the incoming jabs. After remaining still for a few moments, Hinata began to move forward after the duo.


“What is wrong with me…” Neji said to himself. Despite his frustration, the Hyuga kept calm, and simply increased his already bluring jabs and thrusts as he brought his enemy closer to the edge of the Temple’s circular structure. Continuing to fall back, Tsukasa continued to block Neji’s strikes with his hands and forearms. “Impossible,” thought Neji, “I keep missing his Tenketsu. Why is this? To make matters worse, I’m missing by mere millimeters!” Picking up her speed, Hinata began to close in behind Neji. Using her body’s natural flexibility, Hinata began an initial forward handspring. Twisting her hands, she rotated her body to follow up with two more consecutive back handsprings to gain more momentum, and then used the moment to spring herself into a arcing backflip. Shooting over the pair of engaged combatants, Hinata landed a few meters behind Tsukasa Shirokishi. Having landed in a crouched position, Hinata leapt forward into a series of clockwise spins as her hands began to glow in what appeared to be flaming chakra. Just as the chakra had begun to mold in her hands, Tsukasa slightly turned his head back to view the opponent behind him.


“THERE!” cried Neji to himself. With a quick burst of speed at his opponents distraction, Neji plunged his right hand forward and struck Tsukasa’s left shoulder; however, his eyes quickly widened in disbelief as he quickly noticed chakra from his opponent firing out of the very same point. Neji’s Jyuuken strike instantly being countered. “It cannot be…” Neji thought to himself. His eyes then began to notice more and more of Tsukasa’s Tenketsu beam bright blue. Before the S-Rank criminal muttered the words in monotone, the Hyuga Prodigy had a rare emotion settle in his stomach: fear.


Tsukasa Shirokishi quickly flew into a rapid counter clockwise spin. “Hakkeshou Kaiten.” Errupting into a sphere of whirling chakra, Neji and Hinata were blown back. Having come from a lower stance and a direct contact, Neji was thrown to the ground and slid back towards the center of the shrine. However, instead of thinking of the skid marks burning into his back, Neji cried out once more, “HINATA-SAMA!”


Having started a clockwise spin, Hinata’s momentum had been completely halted, and the off balance had staggered her step. As the whirling sphere of chakra made a sudden and rapid increase, a staggered Hinata was lifted up into the air and seen reeling backwards. Flying with surprising force Hinata’s head slammed into the top of the Dragon statue rendering her unconscious as she began to spiral off the edge of the cliff.


Having finally managed to climb up his ladder of clones, Naruto peered over the edge of the Shrine in time to see a huge whirling sphere of blue chakra as it suddenly expanded and retracted in a rapid fashion. Hearing Neji cry out, Naruto had barely any time to look up before seeing Hinata crash into the Dragon statue just to his right. Seeing Hinata begin to spin and fall his eyes widened. Images of her smacking his face flew into his mind and he heard her words, “HOW DARE YOU LAY A HAND ON ME KYUBI!” Almost immediately after, Naruto recalled the day he faced Neji in the Chunin Exams, and after that the smile she had just this morning when Team Kurenai had arrived in Tsunade’s office. “SHIT! HINATA!” Naruto yelled out as he pressed his legs off of the side. Firing down at a diagonal angle, he quickly caught her. Wrapping his right arm around her waist, he formed his trademark hand seal. “KAGEBUNSHIN NO JUTSU!” Once more Twenty clones appeared. Instantly grabbing onto the bottom clone’s ankle, Naruto threw his arm forward as his clones reached for the edge of the cliff.


Back at the top of the cliff, Tsukasa stood facing Neji, and Kakashi. Sakura and Kiba were racing forward. “Not close enough…” Tsukasa said. Sakura could only watch as the lead clone’s hand curled forward in vain as it missed the edge of the Tenshuno Temple’s cliff. As the clones dispersed Naruto cried out as he and Hinata plunged down before vanishing in the waterfall’s mist.


Sakura cried out, “NARUTOOOO!”


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Naruto doesn't have time for that and he better not mess with naruto. I don't want to see another Hyuga to die :3
 

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Naruto doesn't have time for that and he better not mess with naruto. I don't want to see another Hyuga to die :3
HAHAHAHA

Naruto: Hey... here to go out for Ramen. Is Hinata ready!?

Hiashi: I see you did not read my rules. Rule Number...

*Hiashi 1-Shotted*

Naruto: Like I was saying is... oh... Are you Ok?!

Hinata: AH! Naruto-Kun what happened?

Naruto: Oh...I think I knocked out your dad. Sorry.

Hinata: *Smile* Its Ok.

*walks up to Naruto... PIMP SLAP*

Hinata: Don't try and kill my dad... now let's go get some Ramen :whip:

Naruto: *Whipped* Yes dear

Hiashi: Have her back early... :beat:

Naruto: That's not my call anymore :shy:


Yeah.....probably not...
 

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Sorry if you notice any spelling errors, find something that feels like an inconsistency, or are confused....Kinda have 5 mi

Chapter 5: Sunset

Naruto was hardly impressed with the man before him. While it was almost impossible to say for sure, Naruto could only guess that the ragged person sitting before him was in his twenties. The figure’s face was covered with a wide spread circular white Kasa as opposed the traditionally more pointed conical straw hats. The hat was also appeared to be his only clean possession. A ragged, dirty, and tattered cloak covered whatever the man wore underneath, and was large enough to sprawl around him on the floor. He sat with his head seemingly down, and his legs crossed. From under the cloak it was apparent that his forearms were resting calmly on his knees. Attached to a khaki sash, a rag covered staff rested on the individual’s back. It held a circular top with three rings appearing on either side of the staff’s rod section. This individual could only be described as one dressed as that of a wanderer. Unable to contain his surprise, Naruto blurted out with disappointment, “Huuuh…this bum is our target?” As he finished, the sitting man’s head raised slightly before returning to its original downward position.


“ I did not notice your presence. I must have appeared rude...Sorry.”


“EH!!” Naruto, Sakura, and Kiba cried.


“This guy is supposed to be our dangerous target?” Kiba called out in annoyance, “He didn’t even know we were here. How am I supposed to take this seriously?!”


“That’s yet to be determined,” Kakashi interviened with a serious look on his face. Keeping his Sharingan concentrated on the man, Kakashi continued. “Would you happen to be Tsukasa Shirokishi?” His question was met with silence. Wanting nothing more than to end this mission, Naruto roared.


“HEY RAGS-BASTARD! I’D LIKE TO GET THIS OVER WITH! IF YOU’RE THIS TSUKASA GUY THAN JUST SAY SO! THEN GIVE UP OR LET ME KICK YOUR ASS!” Hearing Naruto’s desire to end the mission and knowing it was because of her, Hinata’s head sunk down.


“Naruto calm down…” Kakashi said as he placed his left hand on Naruto’s shoulder before he could offer more words to calm his student, the man then spoke up.


“My name is Tsukasa yes…” the man said flatly. Upon finishing his response, the group tensed up. It was finally confirmed that this was in fact their target: Tsukasa Shirokishi.


“Well that is fortunate!” smiled Sai. Looking to Naruto and Kiba, he continued. “You two would have looked like *******s had this man not been Tsukasa Shirokishi. Of course, I mean that in a figurative sense as you are more than an *******. Perhaps my earlier thought was wrong about you Naruto… maybe you haven’t grown a pair of balls, but instead have half a ball.” Before Naruto or Kiba could respond to Sai’s latest insult, Kakashi stepped in.


“Sai that’s enough… we need to stay focused. If this guy is our target, than he’s no pushover. When Naruto ran out of the Hokage’s office, I managed to have enough time to look him up in the Bingo Book on the walk to the gate.”



“In the Bingo Book,” Sakura said, “That means he’s in the top tier of the S-Ranked Criminals…” His eyes narrowing , Kakashi continued.


“That’s only the tip of the Iceberg. According to the Bingo Book, he’s been associated with Akatsuki though it would seem he is not an official member. From what I read he assisted in the capture of the Five Tail’s Jinjuriki: Han of Iwagakure. According to rumor, Han had both extreme physical power and speed. The two traits cumulated into one of the best taijutsu styles to exist outside of the Gentle Fist, and the 8 Gates.” As soon as Kakashi had mentioned the heinous organization everyone went wide eyed except Hinata who was still swimming in thoughts of guilt. Naruto’s earlier desire to bring a quick end to his mission was instantly replaced with searing anger. The wind picked up for a few seconds as Tsukasa continued to sit.


“Why do you want to kick my ass?” Tsukasa asked, maintaining a flat, seemingly emotionless voice. “Between yourself and the one that lies inside you there are better options available.”


“DON’T SCREW WITH US!” Naruto shouted.


“Naruto calm down.” Kakashi said with a raised voice. “If you do not keep calm this will only make things worse.”


“Kakashi-Sensei…” Sakura started.


“Yeah… He knows about Naruto,” Kakashi responded. “Which means that we cannot allow him to leave.”


“With time comes knowledge… secrets cannot hide forever,” Tsukasa suddenly said. While his head remained down, his head turned to seemingly be observing the individuals of the group before him. “Hmm?” Tsukasa slightly raised his head once again… his kasa still covering his face. Taking on a more gentle tone as opposed to his earlier apathetic one, Tsukasa continued. “If you always look to the Earth, how can you step towards the Sun?” Hinata’s eyes grew wide and her heart began to race. Deviating his eyes only slightly, Kakashi looked back at the Hyuga Hieress. Seeing her head down, Kakashi then redoubled his focus on Tsukasa.


“If he intends to target her first… things could get complicated,” Kakashi thought to himself.


“Tsch…I said don’t screw with us!” Naruto said in anger, “We don’t need any pointless words of wisdom! Besides you’re the only one who’s looking down! Kakashi let’s just…” Before he could finish Neji cried out.


“HINATA-SAMA!” Hinata flew by using chakra to enhance her speed. Taking a single counter clockwise spin, Hinata threw her right leg forward as her right palm flew at Shirokishi’s head. Before her Jyuuken strike could land, the target pressed his heels against the tiled floor, and in a quick, fluid motion moved into a backflip… landing on his hands only to push in order to propel himself further back. Pressing forward, Hinata quickly covered the gap. Instead of spinning, Hinata began thrusting jabs in an attempt to strike Tsukasa’s Tenketsu. Moving his body left and right while back peddling, Shirokishi evaded her strikes. Pushing with both feet, the Shirokishi once again pressed backwards and started sliding on his heels. Stepping forward at her now off balance opponent, Hinata stepped forward and threw her palm to strike her adversary. Just as she began to step forward, Tsukasa fell on his back allowing the Jyuuken palm to fly overhead. Tucking in his arms back towards his shoulders and pulling his feet towards his chest, Shirokishi used his backwards momentum to go begin spinning on the upper part of his back and kneck. After gaining enough torque, Tsukasa threw his hands onto the tile, and simultaneously thrusted his arms and legs to explode away from his core. Having overexerted her balance, Hinata could not react as Tsukasa’s legs flew up catching the bottom side of her chin, and proceeded to send her flying back towards the rest of the Konoha Platoon that sprang into action.


Landing on his feet from his upward kick, Tsukasa was presently stationed halfway between the edge of the ring and the center of the Temple. Flying towards him, Kakashi moved to keep the S-Rank Criminal from capitalizing on his recent hit on Hinata. With a Raikiri in each hand, Kakashi began to unleash a flurry of jabs to prevent Tsukasa from reaching a wider range of land. Despite his sharingan and considerable skill in Taijutsu, his opponent was evading every strike Kakashi made. “He’s good,” Kakashi thought to himself, “If I can just keep him on defense the others can get in formation.” Just as the thought finished flowing through his head, four Narutos began to move in from both the right and left. Forming a Rasengan each side pushed in with Kakashi’s Raikiri thrust. Just before the impacts could land, Tsukasa rolled back. With the staff on his back catching into the tiling, it slightly bent as Tsukasa rolled back up onto it before he balanced himself on top of it using his hands. With the S-Rank criminal balanced on his staff, Naruto and Kakashi’s attacks struck the staff. Instead of being destroyed, the ragged staff pulsed, and with it Kakashi and Naruto were flung backwards with surprising force. The force of the blowback had managed to knock Kakashi back to the top of the staircase where Sai, in the midst of drawing, was holding to prevent Tsukasa from fleeing down the staircase. His shadow clones dispersing, Naruto, revealed to have approached to Tsukasa’s left, went sliding over the edge of the encirclement: just nearly colliding with the Dragon Statue that sat on the edge of the temple’s circular design. Pulling a last ditch effort, Naruto created a series of Twenty clones to create a make shift ladder as he grabbed onto the last clone’s ankles.


Having been kicked back, Hinata had landed fairly close to the center of the Tenshuno Temple. Sakura had arrived by Hinata’s, who was partially dazed, side along with Kiba and Shino. “Alright let’s go Akamaru! We’ll crush him with Gatsuga!” Before Kiba could move forward, Shino caught his hand. “Kiba, you need to operate as support with Sakura. That’s because the two of you cause too much destruction with your attacks. The one best suited for moving now is GUH!!” Before Shino had even begun to speak Tsukasa had been taking action. Ending his balance on the Staff, he quickly threw his legs forward giving his body a spinning momentum, and thus returning him to an upright position. Catching his right foot in the circle of the staff’s top he bent into a crouch before exploding off of his right foot. The chakra enhanced burst of energy threw him forward while simultaneously unhinging the staff from the tiled floor. Throwing his right leg forward, Tsukasa extended his range using the staff still caught in his right foot. With this the S-Rank Criminal impacted Shino in the chest, and sent the Aburame flying backwards.


Landing with Kiba on his left and Sakura approaching from his right, Tsukasa used the momentum and positioning of the staff to allow it to fall back into the dirt caked sash on his back. Quick to react, Kiba had enhanced himself with his more feral side, and he swiped his claw-like hand towards his opponent only to miss as Tsukasa spun to his right, and lowered himself into a sweep kick to take away the Inuzuka’s balance.


“There’s nowhere for you to move now! SHANAROOO!” Having moved in, Sakura drew her hand back to throw a punch. As Tsukasa began to evade, he stumbled. Looking back to his left leg he saw Kiba had latched onto his leg, and Akamaru had clamped his teeth onto his ragged cloak preventing him from moving. Further holding him down were a pair of black snakes that wrapped around Kiba’s hands as the Ink helped tighten the Inuzuka’s grip. Back at the staircase Sai looked on with a smile.


“The tiling offers an advantage for my Art,” Sai began. “Using the holes I was able to move them unnoticed. All I had to do was wait for the dumb one to mess up and then I could stop you movements.”


“Alright this is it,” thought Sakura as she threw her fist forwards. A small smirk appeared across her face as the S-Rank Criminal put his hand up to block and stepped forward with his free right hand. “Wrong choice!” she thought.


As her hand impacted against the open palm of her adversary, the force of her punch created a surging gust of wind that ended up sending Akamaru flying backwards along with Kiba: his hand now covered in ink from the destroyed Ink Snakes. “Huh…” Sakura could only stare in disbelief as her opponent had caught her fist in his open palm without so much as a scratch or sign of injury. “What’s going on?!” Sakura thought, “Even if he could catch the punch his arm should be shattered and destroyed!” Before she could further contemplate what had happened, Tsukasa slid thehis right hand from Sakura’s fist to her wrist. Pulling her towards him he surged his right hand forward to her waist and allowed his left hand to take the former position of holding her wrist. Crouching down Tsukasa used Sakura’s forward momentum to his advantage as he pulled down with his left hand while pushing up with his right hand resulting in him flipping Sakura over him. “Gah!” Sakura breathed out as she landed on her back some feet in the direction of Kiba and Akamaru: the air forced out of her.


As soon as Sakura had gone airborne, Tsukasa moved a few paces forward; however, he almost immediately stopped as Neji blocked his path having already taken up the standard Jyuuken posture. “I will give you a chance to forfeit now,” addressed Neji. “While your Taijutsu is commendable, it is now futile to attempt to continue this fight any longer. You have taken too long and have allowed my eye to see everything. The way you move, the way you dodge. My attacks will be swifter than Hinata-Sama’s. Additionally, my skill in Taijutsu is superior to Hatake Kakashi’s. His glancing blows will only be closer from me, and with my Jyuuken they will be lethal strikes. I’ll say this once more, but I would recommend you to forfeit before it is too late.” Having overcome her daze, Hinata had gotten back up on her feet, and stood off to the enemy’s right as she similarly entered the Hyuga stance.


While his face was still mostly covered by his white Kasa, Neji’s eyes narrowed as a smile spread across his opponent’s face before returning its seemingly regular blank demeanor. “You have keen eyes,” said Tsukasa suddenly. Finishing his unexpected praise, Tsukasa crouched down into a defensive stance. Without wasting a moment, Neji sprang forward. Unleashing the full potential of the Jyuken style, Neji quickly began to press Tsukasa back. Unlike the first encounter Neji did not allow Tsukasa the comfort of distance, and as such the S-Rank Criminal began to throw up his arms to block the incoming jabs. After remaining still for a few moments, Hinata began to move forward after the duo.


“What is wrong with me…” Neji said to himself. Despite his frustration, the Hyuga kept calm, and simply increased his already bluring jabs and thrusts as he brought his enemy closer to the edge of the Temple’s circular structure. Continuing to fall back, Tsukasa continued to block Neji’s strikes with his hands and forearms. “Impossible,” thought Neji, “I keep missing his Tenketsu. Why is this? To make matters worse, I’m missing by mere millimeters!” Picking up her speed, Hinata began to close in behind Neji. Using her body’s natural flexibility, Hinata began an initial forward handspring. Twisting her hands, she rotated her body to follow up with two more consecutive back handsprings to gain more momentum, and then used the moment to spring herself into a arcing backflip. Shooting over the pair of engaged combatants, Hinata landed a few meters behind Tsukasa Shirokishi. Having landed in a crouched position, Hinata leapt forward into a series of clockwise spins as her hands began to glow in what appeared to be flaming chakra. Just as the chakra had begun to mold in her hands, Tsukasa slightly turned his head back to view the opponent behind him.


“THERE!” cried Neji to himself. With a quick burst of speed at his opponents distraction, Neji plunged his right hand forward and struck Tsukasa’s left shoulder; however, his eyes quickly widened in disbelief as he quickly noticed chakra from his opponent firing out of the very same point. Neji’s Jyuuken strike instantly being countered. “It cannot be…” Neji thought to himself. His eyes then began to notice more and more of Tsukasa’s Tenketsu beam bright blue. Before the S-Rank criminal muttered the words in monotone, the Hyuga Prodigy had a rare emotion settle in his stomach: fear.


Tsukasa Shirokishi quickly flew into a rapid counter clockwise spin. “Hakkeshou Kaiten.” Errupting into a sphere of whirling chakra, Neji and Hinata were blown back. Having come from a lower stance and a direct contact, Neji was thrown to the ground and slid back towards the center of the shrine. However, instead of thinking of the skid marks burning into his back, Neji cried out once more, “HINATA-SAMA!”


Having started a clockwise spin, Hinata’s momentum had been completely halted, and the off balance had staggered her step. As the whirling sphere of chakra made a sudden and rapid increase, a staggered Hinata was lifted up into the air and seen reeling backwards. Flying with surprising force Hinata’s head slammed into the top of the Dragon statue rendering her unconscious as she began to spiral off the edge of the cliff.


Having finally managed to climb up his ladder of clones, Naruto peered over the edge of the Shrine in time to see a huge whirling sphere of blue chakra as it suddenly expanded and retracted in a rapid fashion. Hearing Neji cry out, Naruto had barely any time to look up before seeing Hinata crash into the Dragon statue just to his right. Seeing Hinata begin to spin and fall his eyes widened. Images of her smacking his face flew into his mind and he heard her words, “HOW DARE YOU LAY A HAND ON ME KYUBI!” Almost immediately after, Naruto recalled the day he faced Neji in the Chunin Exams, and after that the smile she had just this morning when Team Kurenai had arrived in Tsunade’s office. “SHIT! HINATA!” Naruto yelled out as he pressed his legs off of the side. Firing down at a diagonal angle, he quickly caught her. Wrapping his right arm around her waist, he formed his trademark hand seal. “KAGEBUNSHIN NO JUTSU!” Once more Twenty clones appeared. Instantly grabbing onto the bottom clone’s ankle, Naruto threw his arm forward as his clones reached for the edge of the cliff.


Back at the top of the cliff, Tsukasa stood facing Neji, and Kakashi. Sakura and Kiba were racing forward. “Not close enough…” Tsukasa said. Sakura could only watch as the lead clone’s hand curled forward in vain as it missed the edge of the Tenshuno Temple’s cliff. As the clones dispersed Naruto cried out as he and Hinata plunged down before vanishing in the waterfall’s mist.


Sakura cried out, “NARUTOOOO!”


End Chapter
So Tsukasa is a Hyuga? o_O
 

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

Me too ^_^ Wonder how it'd work though?
Well the way I way I see it, the rasengan is like a ball in the lion's mouth....but attack wise hard to say.

It could be that it acts like just a combination of the attacks happening to hit at the same time (both internal and external damage in one place), Due to rasengan's rotation it ends up sending the lion fist to more places (like giving it rotation to move around the chakra network ), or maybe with an aripalm variant it will hold the rasengan together for a ranged rasengan.


Pretty much impossible to know T.T
 
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