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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

Thank you ^_^
You're welcome =D

HAHAHAHA

Naruto: Hey... here to go out for Ramen. Is Hinata ready!?

Hiashi: I see you did not read my rules. Rule Number...

*Hiashi 1-Shotted*

Naruto: Like I was saying is... oh... Are you Ok?!

Hinata: AH! Naruto-Kun what happened?

Naruto: Oh...I think I knocked out your dad. Sorry.

Hinata: *Smile* Its Ok.

*walks up to Naruto... PIMP SLAP*

Hinata: Don't try and kill my dad... now let's go get some Ramen :whip:

Naruto: *Whipped* Yes dear

Hiashi: Have her back early... :beat:

Naruto: That's not my call anymore :shy:


Yeah.....probably not...

Those dialogues XD what if everything you just said there becomes canon ? :| Great Chapter 5 XD So he's a Hyuga?
 

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You're welcome =D




Those dialogues XD what if everything you just said there becomes canon ? :| Great Chapter 5 XD So he's a Hyuga?
Hahaha then Hinata chose the right brand of cereal that morning ;) cause it came with a dose of 200% courage and 300% aggression.

Well, that would explain how he sees through his hoodie cloak thing
Well the cloak thing is basically like the ponchos the 8 Man Team used except it's a little larger, is closed in the front (where the Konoha ones are opened up), and has arm sleeves to compensate.

Just to clarify the cloak part




Off this topic, but that Hyuga Development... The alliance could really use it right now XD!


Has anyone else looked at the scans for next week's chapter?! If not then I'll stop there.
 

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

Well, that would explain how he sees through his hoodie cloak thing
And evasion of Neji's attacks....


We need a backstory...

Hahaha then Hinata chose the right brand of cereal that morning ;) cause it came with a dose of 200% courage and 300% aggression.

Well the cloak thing is basically like the ponchos the 8 Man Team used except it's a little larger, is closed in the front (where the Konoha ones are opened up), and has arm sleeves to compensate.

Just to clarify the cloak part




Off this topic, but that Hyuga Development... The alliance could really use it right now XD!


Has anyone else looked at the scans for next week's chapter?! If not then I'll stop there.

thanks for the clarification =D


XD and you literally left us with a cliffy again O_O fights were really detailed, awesome =D !


I have seen, yeah... =D
 
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Off this topic, but that Hyuga Development... The alliance could really use it right now XD!


Has anyone else looked at the scans for next week's chapter?! If not then I'll stop there.
Somehow, I don't think that's the case. The development will probably happen once Hinata actually decides to do something.

I've seen them.
 

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Yeah...my thoughts exactly.

After seeing Obito go Game Shark and pick up five or so Venasaurs to use Giga Solar Beam.... The alliance is slowly being more and more pushed into the dead weight zone. They need to form a strategy or find some way of being useful.

I mean I can respect the fight narrowing down to only a few final fighters, but it should only be when the members of the alliance are rendered unconscious as opposed to sideline watching :p

It should be the alliance taking out his vast researves and thus leaving Obito with a chakra level to match his final opponents. Just my thought.



Anyways, I was thinking since apparently story wise the next day is apparently Naruto's birthday, that's probably when he'll get all of Kurama's chakra.

Uzumaki Fuinjutsu is old.. so maybe his seal does have some form of annual sense to it. Also, Minato's gift reference kinda makes sense now. Also it would fit as Akatsuki is the whole Red Moon/Red Dawn thing. Ironic a breaking dawn of new hope...all that cheesy writing galore.



Symbolically Naruto is almost kind of getting the real birthday he should've had with people loving him instead of hating him :p.


I know he's getting Hinata for his birthday >:3
 

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Considering that with this next sunrise it's his birthday... I'm really thinking he pulls off the win. I can't see this battle taking another full day.

Probably starts with getting Kurama's chakra... Ending with either a victory as the sun rises, or during midday.
 

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Re: Strongest of the Hidden Leaf: The Hyuga Clan FC

Considering that with this next sunrise it's his birthday... I'm really thinking he pulls off the win. I can't see this battle taking another full day.

Probably starts with getting Kurama's chakra... Ending with either a victory as the sun rises, or during midday.
During sunrise would be better imo, it would be like a "New beginning" sorta thing. Plus, if Hinata's there with him, it would add to the symbolisme.
 

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During sunrise would be better imo, it would be like a "New beginning" sorta thing. Plus, if Hinata's there with him, it would add to the symbolisme.
That's exactly what I've been thinking (at lest the sunrise parts). To further add symbolism, while Akatsuki can translate to Red Moon, it can also be used to represent Day Break.
 

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That's exactly what I've been thinking (at lest the sunrise parts). To further add symbolism, while Akatsuki can translate to Red Moon, it can also be used to represent Day Break.
It's possible for Naruto to win the fight by the next day, but I have this weird feeling that the Moon Eye plan will happen, at least for a short while, but it won't be ''The Perfect Genjutsu" since it lacks the 8 & 9 tails [Which are the LARGEST chunks of the Juubi's chakra] which will allow some people to either break free or completely resist it. [I read somewhere that RTN was supposedly meant to foreshadow future events in the manga]

But hey, that's just a theory
 

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It's possible for Naruto to win the fight by the next day, but I have this weird feeling that the Moon Eye plan will happen, at least for a short while, but it won't be ''The Perfect Genjutsu" since it lacks the 8 & 9 tails [Which are the LARGEST chunks of the Juubi's chakra] which will allow some people to either break free or completely resist it. [I read somewhere that RTN was supposedly meant to foreshadow future events in the manga]

But hey, that's just a theory
I wouldn't be surprised, and even then technically that could start during this night. The moon was low when we saw the Juubi rise. Most likely at Midnight the Tsukiyomi would start, but my guess are a few people would be able to see past it eventually.

1. Naruto: Kurama

2. Bee: Gyuki

3. Sasuke: Sharingan

4. Sakura: Genjutsu prowess

After that probably people like Orochimaru, the Edo Hokage (if they are left), and possibly some Hyuga Clan members IDK?!
 

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I wouldn't be surprised, and even then technically that could start during this night. The moon was low when we saw the Juubi rise. Most likely at Midnight the Tsukiyomi would start, but my guess are a few people would be able to see past it eventually.

1. Naruto: Kurama

2. Bee: Gyuki

3. Sasuke: Sharingan

4. Sakura: Genjutsu prowess

After that probably people like Orochimaru, the Edo Hokage (if they are left), and possibly some Hyuga Clan members IDK?!
It's possible for who you said to be able to withstand it , but if that does happen, it'll seem kinda unreal [though It's still possible]. I dunno, I think we'll most likely have Naruto only escape and fight 1-on-1 with Obito. Maybe......can't really say :sweat:
 

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It's possible for who you said to be able to withstand it , but if that does happen, it'll seem kinda unreal [though It's still possible]. I dunno, I think we'll most likely have Naruto only escape and fight 1-on-1 with Obito. Maybe......can't really say :sweat:
I know exactly what you mean. Theoretically there should be people who can break/detect it. But story wise I'd only see Naruto and Sasuke (maybe just Naruto) Breaking it.
 

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I remember reading someplace about how it would [theoretically] be possible for one to have a Byakugan. It was really interesting ^_^
 

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LOL She'd probably march through the Hyuga Grounds and start Pimp Slapping people XD


Hiashi Hyuga's Rules to Dating Hinata: Found by Sagara

Rule One: If you come up to gates of the Hyuuga estate and announce your presence you’d better be delivering an important message from the Hokage, because you’re sure not picking anything up.

* Rule Two: You do not touch my daughter in front of me. You may glance at her, so long as you do not peer at anything below her neck. If you cannot keep your eyes or hands off of my daughter's body, I will remove them.

Rule Three: I am aware that it is considered practical for boys of your age to remove their shirts when they have been training for hours on end. Presumably, this is to ensure that you do not overheat while you are training outdoors. Please don’t take this as an insult but you and all of your friends are complete idiots. We do have air conditioned dojos and indoor training halls for a reason. Still, I want to be fair and open minded about this issue, so I propose this compromise: You may remove your shirts and tops whenever and wherever you want, and I will not object. However, in order to ensure that your pants do not, accidentally, come off during any time spent with my daughter, I will take my senbon and fasten your trousers securely in place to your waist.

Rule Four: I'm sure you've been told that in today's world, *** with the wrong kunoichi can kill you. Let me elaborate, when it comes to ***, my daughter is that kunoichi, and I will kill you.

Rule Five: It is usually understood that in order for us to get to know each other, we should talk about recent missions, politics, and other issues of the day. Please do not do this. The only information I require from you is an indication of when you expect to have my daughter safely back at my house, and the only word I need from you on this subject is "early."

* Rule Six: I have no doubt you are a popular fellow, with many opportunities to date other girls. This is fine with me as long as it is okay with my daughter. Otherwise, once you have gone out with my little girl, you will continue to date no one but her until she is finished with you. If you make her cry, I will make you cry.

Rule Seven: As you stand in my front hallway, waiting for my daughter to appear, and more than an hour goes by, do not sigh and fidget. If you want to be on time for the movie, you should not be dating. My daughter is putting on her makeup, a process that can take longer than sculpting the Hokage Monument. Instead of just standing there, why don't you do something useful, like sweeping my floors?

Rule Eight: The following places are not appropriate for a date with my daughter: Places where there are beds, sofas, or anything softer than a wooden stool. Places where there are no parents, ninja patrols, or nuns within eyesight. Places where there is darkness. Places where there is dancing, holding hands, or happiness. Places where the ambient temperature is warm enough to induce my daughter to wear shorts, tank tops, midriff T-shirts, or anything other than overalls, a sweater, and a goose down parka - zipped up to her throat. Movies with a strong romantic or sexual theme are to be avoided; movies which feature chainsaws are okay. Chunin exam tournaments are okay. Morino Ibiki’s interrogation chambers are better. (Speaking of which, Ibiki owes me a favor. Would you like me to make an appointment for you? It’s no trouble.)

Rule Nine: Do not lie to me. I am a master of the Byakugan – that makes me a living lie detector. I can see every involuntary twitch, every breath, and each bead of sweat on your face. If I ask you where you are going and with whom, you have one chance to tell me the truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth. I have an army of elite Byakugan users at my beck and call. Do not trifle with me.

Rule Ten: Be afraid. Be very afraid. It takes very little for me to mistake the sound of your steps coming up to my front gate for an enemy Cloud ninja sent here to steal the secrets of the Byakugan. You remember what happened to the last Cloud ninja who crossed me, don’t you? Incidentally, I will be cleaning and polishing the family katana as I wait for you to bring my daughter home. As soon as you set one foot on my property you should submit yourself to a full body search by my guards, remove all hidden weapons from your person, and keep both hands in plain sight. Announce in a clear voice that you have brought my daughter home safely and early, then leave - there is no need for you to come inside. You may not see me, but rest assured. I see you.



My Condensed Version:

Hiashi Hyuga's Rules to Dating Hinata:

Rule 1: Do not





Also, Why not throw Chapter 5 out there :hint:!



Sorry if you notice any spelling errors, find something that feels like an inconsistency, or are confused....Kinda have 5 mi

Chapter 5: Sunset

Naruto was hardly impressed with the man before him. While it was almost impossible to say for sure, Naruto could only guess that the ragged person sitting before him was in his twenties. The figure’s face was covered with a wide spread circular white Kasa as opposed the traditionally more pointed conical straw hats. The hat was also appeared to be his only clean possession. A ragged, dirty, and tattered cloak covered whatever the man wore underneath, and was large enough to sprawl around him on the floor. He sat with his head seemingly down, and his legs crossed. From under the cloak it was apparent that his forearms were resting calmly on his knees. Attached to a khaki sash, a rag covered staff rested on the individual’s back. It held a circular top with three rings appearing on either side of the staff’s rod section. This individual could only be described as one dressed as that of a wanderer. Unable to contain his surprise, Naruto blurted out with disappointment, “Huuuh…this bum is our target?” As he finished, the sitting man’s head raised slightly before returning to its original downward position.


“ I did not notice your presence. I must have appeared rude...Sorry.”


“EH!!” Naruto, Sakura, and Kiba cried.


“This guy is supposed to be our dangerous target?” Kiba called out in annoyance, “He didn’t even know we were here. How am I supposed to take this seriously?!”


“That’s yet to be determined,” Kakashi interviened with a serious look on his face. Keeping his Sharingan concentrated on the man, Kakashi continued. “Would you happen to be Tsukasa Shirokishi?” His question was met with silence. Wanting nothing more than to end this mission, Naruto roared.


“HEY RAGS-BASTARD! I’D LIKE TO GET THIS OVER WITH! IF YOU’RE THIS TSUKASA GUY THAN JUST SAY SO! THEN GIVE UP OR LET ME KICK YOUR ASS!” Hearing Naruto’s desire to end the mission and knowing it was because of her, Hinata’s head sunk down.


“Naruto calm down…” Kakashi said as he placed his left hand on Naruto’s shoulder before he could offer more words to calm his student, the man then spoke up.


“My name is Tsukasa yes…” the man said flatly. Upon finishing his response, the group tensed up. It was finally confirmed that this was in fact their target: Tsukasa Shirokishi.


“Well that is fortunate!” smiled Sai. Looking to Naruto and Kiba, he continued. “You two would have looked like *******s had this man not been Tsukasa Shirokishi. Of course, I mean that in a figurative sense as you are more than an *******. Perhaps my earlier thought was wrong about you Naruto… maybe you haven’t grown a pair of balls, but instead have half a ball.” Before Naruto or Kiba could respond to Sai’s latest insult, Kakashi stepped in.


“Sai that’s enough… we need to stay focused. If this guy is our target, than he’s no pushover. When Naruto ran out of the Hokage’s office, I managed to have enough time to look him up in the Bingo Book on the walk to the gate.”



“In the Bingo Book,” Sakura said, “That means he’s in the top tier of the S-Ranked Criminals…” His eyes narrowing , Kakashi continued.


“That’s only the tip of the Iceberg. According to the Bingo Book, he’s been associated with Akatsuki though it would seem he is not an official member. From what I read he assisted in the capture of the Five Tail’s Jinjuriki: Han of Iwagakure. According to rumor, Han had both extreme physical power and speed. The two traits cumulated into one of the best taijutsu styles to exist outside of the Gentle Fist, and the 8 Gates.” As soon as Kakashi had mentioned the heinous organization everyone went wide eyed except Hinata who was still swimming in thoughts of guilt. Naruto’s earlier desire to bring a quick end to his mission was instantly replaced with searing anger. The wind picked up for a few seconds as Tsukasa continued to sit.


“Why do you want to kick my ass?” Tsukasa asked, maintaining a flat, seemingly emotionless voice. “Between yourself and the one that lies inside you there are better options available.”


“DON’T SCREW WITH US!” Naruto shouted.


“Naruto calm down.” Kakashi said with a raised voice. “If you do not keep calm this will only make things worse.”


“Kakashi-Sensei…” Sakura started.


“Yeah… He knows about Naruto,” Kakashi responded. “Which means that we cannot allow him to leave.”


“With time comes knowledge… secrets cannot hide forever,” Tsukasa suddenly said. While his head remained down, his head turned to seemingly be observing the individuals of the group before him. “Hmm?” Tsukasa slightly raised his head once again… his kasa still covering his face. Taking on a more gentle tone as opposed to his earlier apathetic one, Tsukasa continued. “If you always look to the Earth, how can you step towards the Sun?” Hinata’s eyes grew wide and her heart began to race. Deviating his eyes only slightly, Kakashi looked back at the Hyuga Hieress. Seeing her head down, Kakashi then redoubled his focus on Tsukasa.


“If he intends to target her first… things could get complicated,” Kakashi thought to himself.


“Tsch…I said don’t screw with us!” Naruto said in anger, “We don’t need any pointless words of wisdom! Besides you’re the only one who’s looking down! Kakashi let’s just…” Before he could finish Neji cried out.


“HINATA-SAMA!” Hinata flew by using chakra to enhance her speed. Taking a single counter clockwise spin, Hinata threw her right leg forward as her right palm flew at Shirokishi’s head. Before her Jyuuken strike could land, the target pressed his heels against the tiled floor, and in a quick, fluid motion moved into a backflip… landing on his hands only to push in order to propel himself further back. Pressing forward, Hinata quickly covered the gap. Instead of spinning, Hinata began thrusting jabs in an attempt to strike Tsukasa’s Tenketsu. Moving his body left and right while back peddling, Shirokishi evaded her strikes. Pushing with both feet, the Shirokishi once again pressed backwards and started sliding on his heels. Stepping forward at her now off balance opponent, Hinata stepped forward and threw her palm to strike her adversary. Just as she began to step forward, Tsukasa fell on his back allowing the Jyuuken palm to fly overhead. Tucking in his arms back towards his shoulders and pulling his feet towards his chest, Shirokishi used his backwards momentum to go begin spinning on the upper part of his back and kneck. After gaining enough torque, Tsukasa threw his hands onto the tile, and simultaneously thrusted his arms and legs to explode away from his core. Having overexerted her balance, Hinata could not react as Tsukasa’s legs flew up catching the bottom side of her chin, and proceeded to send her flying back towards the rest of the Konoha Platoon that sprang into action.


Landing on his feet from his upward kick, Tsukasa was presently stationed halfway between the edge of the ring and the center of the Temple. Flying towards him, Kakashi moved to keep the S-Rank Criminal from capitalizing on his recent hit on Hinata. With a Raikiri in each hand, Kakashi began to unleash a flurry of jabs to prevent Tsukasa from reaching a wider range of land. Despite his sharingan and considerable skill in Taijutsu, his opponent was evading every strike Kakashi made. “He’s good,” Kakashi thought to himself, “If I can just keep him on defense the others can get in formation.” Just as the thought finished flowing through his head, four Narutos began to move in from both the right and left. Forming a Rasengan each side pushed in with Kakashi’s Raikiri thrust. Just before the impacts could land, Tsukasa rolled back. With the staff on his back catching into the tiling, it slightly bent as Tsukasa rolled back up onto it before he balanced himself on top of it using his hands. With the S-Rank criminal balanced on his staff, Naruto and Kakashi’s attacks struck the staff. Instead of being destroyed, the ragged staff pulsed, and with it Kakashi and Naruto were flung backwards with surprising force. The force of the blowback had managed to knock Kakashi back to the top of the staircase where Sai, in the midst of drawing, was holding to prevent Tsukasa from fleeing down the staircase. His shadow clones dispersing, Naruto, revealed to have approached to Tsukasa’s left, went sliding over the edge of the encirclement: just nearly colliding with the Dragon Statue that sat on the edge of the temple’s circular design. Pulling a last ditch effort, Naruto created a series of Twenty clones to create a make shift ladder as he grabbed onto the last clone’s ankles.


Having been kicked back, Hinata had landed fairly close to the center of the Tenshuno Temple. Sakura had arrived by Hinata’s, who was partially dazed, side along with Kiba and Shino. “Alright let’s go Akamaru! We’ll crush him with Gatsuga!” Before Kiba could move forward, Shino caught his hand. “Kiba, you need to operate as support with Sakura. That’s because the two of you cause too much destruction with your attacks. The one best suited for moving now is GUH!!” Before Shino had even begun to speak Tsukasa had been taking action. Ending his balance on the Staff, he quickly threw his legs forward giving his body a spinning momentum, and thus returning him to an upright position. Catching his right foot in the circle of the staff’s top he bent into a crouch before exploding off of his right foot. The chakra enhanced burst of energy threw him forward while simultaneously unhinging the staff from the tiled floor. Throwing his right leg forward, Tsukasa extended his range using the staff still caught in his right foot. With this the S-Rank Criminal impacted Shino in the chest, and sent the Aburame flying backwards.


Landing with Kiba on his left and Sakura approaching from his right, Tsukasa used the momentum and positioning of the staff to allow it to fall back into the dirt caked sash on his back. Quick to react, Kiba had enhanced himself with his more feral side, and he swiped his claw-like hand towards his opponent only to miss as Tsukasa spun to his right, and lowered himself into a sweep kick to take away the Inuzuka’s balance.


“There’s nowhere for you to move now! SHANAROOO!” Having moved in, Sakura drew her hand back to throw a punch. As Tsukasa began to evade, he stumbled. Looking back to his left leg he saw Kiba had latched onto his leg, and Akamaru had clamped his teeth onto his ragged cloak preventing him from moving. Further holding him down were a pair of black snakes that wrapped around Kiba’s hands as the Ink helped tighten the Inuzuka’s grip. Back at the staircase Sai looked on with a smile.


“The tiling offers an advantage for my Art,” Sai began. “Using the holes I was able to move them unnoticed. All I had to do was wait for the dumb one to mess up and then I could stop you movements.”


“Alright this is it,” thought Sakura as she threw her fist forwards. A small smirk appeared across her face as the S-Rank Criminal put his hand up to block and stepped forward with his free right hand. “Wrong choice!” she thought.


As her hand impacted against the open palm of her adversary, the force of her punch created a surging gust of wind that ended up sending Akamaru flying backwards along with Kiba: his hand now covered in ink from the destroyed Ink Snakes. “Huh…” Sakura could only stare in disbelief as her opponent had caught her fist in his open palm without so much as a scratch or sign of injury. “What’s going on?!” Sakura thought, “Even if he could catch the punch his arm should be shattered and destroyed!” Before she could further contemplate what had happened, Tsukasa slid thehis right hand from Sakura’s fist to her wrist. Pulling her towards him he surged his right hand forward to her waist and allowed his left hand to take the former position of holding her wrist. Crouching down Tsukasa used Sakura’s forward momentum to his advantage as he pulled down with his left hand while pushing up with his right hand resulting in him flipping Sakura over him. “Gah!” Sakura breathed out as she landed on her back some feet in the direction of Kiba and Akamaru: the air forced out of her.


As soon as Sakura had gone airborne, Tsukasa moved a few paces forward; however, he almost immediately stopped as Neji blocked his path having already taken up the standard Jyuuken posture. “I will give you a chance to forfeit now,” addressed Neji. “While your Taijutsu is commendable, it is now futile to attempt to continue this fight any longer. You have taken too long and have allowed my eye to see everything. The way you move, the way you dodge. My attacks will be swifter than Hinata-Sama’s. Additionally, my skill in Taijutsu is superior to Hatake Kakashi’s. His glancing blows will only be closer from me, and with my Jyuuken they will be lethal strikes. I’ll say this once more, but I would recommend you to forfeit before it is too late.” Having overcome her daze, Hinata had gotten back up on her feet, and stood off to the enemy’s right as she similarly entered the Hyuga stance.


While his face was still mostly covered by his white Kasa, Neji’s eyes narrowed as a smile spread across his opponent’s face before returning its seemingly regular blank demeanor. “You have keen eyes,” said Tsukasa suddenly. Finishing his unexpected praise, Tsukasa crouched down into a defensive stance. Without wasting a moment, Neji sprang forward. Unleashing the full potential of the Jyuken style, Neji quickly began to press Tsukasa back. Unlike the first encounter Neji did not allow Tsukasa the comfort of distance, and as such the S-Rank Criminal began to throw up his arms to block the incoming jabs. After remaining still for a few moments, Hinata began to move forward after the duo.


“What is wrong with me…” Neji said to himself. Despite his frustration, the Hyuga kept calm, and simply increased his already bluring jabs and thrusts as he brought his enemy closer to the edge of the Temple’s circular structure. Continuing to fall back, Tsukasa continued to block Neji’s strikes with his hands and forearms. “Impossible,” thought Neji, “I keep missing his Tenketsu. Why is this? To make matters worse, I’m missing by mere millimeters!” Picking up her speed, Hinata began to close in behind Neji. Using her body’s natural flexibility, Hinata began an initial forward handspring. Twisting her hands, she rotated her body to follow up with two more consecutive back handsprings to gain more momentum, and then used the moment to spring herself into a arcing backflip. Shooting over the pair of engaged combatants, Hinata landed a few meters behind Tsukasa Shirokishi. Having landed in a crouched position, Hinata leapt forward into a series of clockwise spins as her hands began to glow in what appeared to be flaming chakra. Just as the chakra had begun to mold in her hands, Tsukasa slightly turned his head back to view the opponent behind him.


“THERE!” cried Neji to himself. With a quick burst of speed at his opponents distraction, Neji plunged his right hand forward and struck Tsukasa’s left shoulder; however, his eyes quickly widened in disbelief as he quickly noticed chakra from his opponent firing out of the very same point. Neji’s Jyuuken strike instantly being countered. “It cannot be…” Neji thought to himself. His eyes then began to notice more and more of Tsukasa’s Tenketsu beam bright blue. Before the S-Rank criminal muttered the words in monotone, the Hyuga Prodigy had a rare emotion settle in his stomach: fear.


Tsukasa Shirokishi quickly flew into a rapid counter clockwise spin. “Hakkeshou Kaiten.” Errupting into a sphere of whirling chakra, Neji and Hinata were blown back. Having come from a lower stance and a direct contact, Neji was thrown to the ground and slid back towards the center of the shrine. However, instead of thinking of the skid marks burning into his back, Neji cried out once more, “HINATA-SAMA!”


Having started a clockwise spin, Hinata’s momentum had been completely halted, and the off balance had staggered her step. As the whirling sphere of chakra made a sudden and rapid increase, a staggered Hinata was lifted up into the air and seen reeling backwards. Flying with surprising force Hinata’s head slammed into the top of the Dragon statue rendering her unconscious as she began to spiral off the edge of the cliff.


Having finally managed to climb up his ladder of clones, Naruto peered over the edge of the Shrine in time to see a huge whirling sphere of blue chakra as it suddenly expanded and retracted in a rapid fashion. Hearing Neji cry out, Naruto had barely any time to look up before seeing Hinata crash into the Dragon statue just to his right. Seeing Hinata begin to spin and fall his eyes widened. Images of her smacking his face flew into his mind and he heard her words, “HOW DARE YOU LAY A HAND ON ME KYUBI!” Almost immediately after, Naruto recalled the day he faced Neji in the Chunin Exams, and after that the smile she had just this morning when Team Kurenai had arrived in Tsunade’s office. “SHIT! HINATA!” Naruto yelled out as he pressed his legs off of the side. Firing down at a diagonal angle, he quickly caught her. Wrapping his right arm around her waist, he formed his trademark hand seal. “KAGEBUNSHIN NO JUTSU!” Once more Twenty clones appeared. Instantly grabbing onto the bottom clone’s ankle, Naruto threw his arm forward as his clones reached for the edge of the cliff.


Back at the top of the cliff, Tsukasa stood facing Neji, and Kakashi. Sakura and Kiba were racing forward. “Not close enough…” Tsukasa said. Sakura could only watch as the lead clone’s hand curled forward in vain as it missed the edge of the Tenshuno Temple’s cliff. As the clones dispersed Naruto cried out as he and Hinata plunged down before vanishing in the waterfall’s mist.


Sakura cried out, “NARUTOOOO!”


End Chapter
I can't rep you right now and it makes me sad. :T_T: But great chapter! Tsukasa being a Hyuga is gonna make for an interesting plot development. And now Naruto and Hinata are on their own for a bit...time for there to be some explaining on her part (hopefully).

Those rules are funny as heck too! XD

Hahaha then Hinata chose the right brand of cereal that morning ;) cause it came with a dose of 200% courage and 300% aggression.



Well the cloak thing is basically like the ponchos the 8 Man Team used except it's a little larger, is closed in the front (where the Konoha ones are opened up), and has arm sleeves to compensate.

Just to clarify the cloak part




Off this topic, but that Hyuga Development... The alliance could really use it right now XD!


Has anyone else looked at the scans for next week's chapter?! If not then I'll stop there.
It would be nice to see the Hyuga clan doing something more than what they have been. It'd be even nicer if Hinata led them in an attack.

I've seen them! It looks like it's going to be epic!

Considering that with this next sunrise it's his birthday... I'm really thinking he pulls off the win. I can't see this battle taking another full day.

Probably starts with getting Kurama's chakra... Ending with either a victory as the sun rises, or during midday.
During sunrise would be better imo, it would be like a "New beginning" sorta thing. Plus, if Hinata's there with him, it would add to the symbolisme.
Personally, I think the symbolism could go either way. If the war ended just before dawn, then it would be the whole "new beginning" thing as Crystal Chakra pointed out. However, I actually would like the war to end on the sunset of Naruto's birthday. To me that would be symbolic of the closing of an era. But...either way ultimately works out.
 
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I can't rep you right now and it makes me sad. :T_T: But great chapter! Tsukasa being a Hyuga is gonna make for an interesting plot development. And now Naruto and Hinata are on their own for a bit...time for there to be some explaining on her part (hopefully).

Those rules are funny as heck too! XD



It would be nice to see the Hyuga clan doing something more than what they have been. It'd be even nicer if Hinata led them in an attack.

I've seen them! It looks like it's going to be epic!





Personally, I think the symbolism could go either way. If the war ended just before dawn, then it would be the whole "new beginning" thing as Crystal Chakra pointed out. However, I actually would like the war to end on the sunset of Naruto's birthday. To me that would be symbolic of the closing of an era. But...either way ultimately works out.
Lol can't say too much on the first comment part...secrets for me to know and you to read. Hopefully the fight was easy to follow to a degree.

I don't really see Hinata leading the clan, but acting on her own as her style doesn't really match the typical Hyuga style (lion fists and all). Instead I could see Hiashi leading some attack that buys time, but ultimately fails resulting in his death...don't know why, but I just see him dying.

While I like the sunset idea....I just can't see them having the energy to fight an entire day. Nor would both sides manage to go so flawlessly...as pretty much one error is likely game over.
 

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I don't think Hiashi's gonna die, mostly because Hinata's wanted to get acknowledged by him her whole life, so he can't die, at least, that's what I think
 

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I don't think Hiashi's gonna die, mostly because Hinata's wanted to get acknowledged by him her whole life, so he can't die, at least, that's what I think
That's true... I guess in my head I see something mire to him apologizing as he's dying...that kind of death..

But I also see the idea of him living and being wrong. Then when he asks her to stand as Heiress, I could see her declining to be with Naruto if it's necessary. Maybe then Hanabi now the official heiress decides not to place the traditional curse mark on her sister, and thus ending the curse mark thing.
 
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