[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Kato.]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Summoning Technique: (Fusion) Yuukai
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 (-10 each turn of fusion)
Damage: 60
Description: Yuukai is a medium sized bird (around 2-3 feet) with maroon feathers and a deep emerald coloured thoat. Yuukai is a strong swift bird with the capabilities of speaking English when needed.

Yuukai's special ability is to fuse with people, combining her body with her partners. When the fusion occurs the person who Yuukai fuses with gains two large wings on their back capable of sustaining flight for some time; their hands grow longer into sharp talons capable to tearing and maiming easily; their face alters, giving them a more bird-like look to themselves as they gain a strong sharp beak and finally the partners senses are greatly enhanced. Sight, smell and hearing are all magnified to primal levels. During this fusion the partner becomes more wild and animalistic as the birds mind competes with their own.

Due to this fusion taking its tole it usually cannot be sustained for longer than 5 turns as the fusion constantly drains chakra from both parties.

-Can only be used by signers of the Lesser Bird of Paradise contract
-Can only be summoned once a battle
-Fusion only lasts 5 turns
-No S-Ranks for a turn after the fusion
-Can only be taught by Kato.
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-Declined- similar techniques exist.

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(TendouToriWaza: Hishou Heki) Paradise Bird Technique: Flight Burst
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: Whilst in flight the Paradise Bird charges chakra through their wings and they perform a powerful flap, giving them a great boost in speed. This technique can be used by all of the Lesser Birds of Paradise.

-Can only be used by signers of the Lesser Bird of Paradise contract
-Can only be taught by Kato.
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-Declined- Define this "great boost in speed", meaning the amount of speed they would gain.

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(TendouToriWaza: Yokoana Kuchibashi) Paradise Bird Technique: Tunneling Beak
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The Paradise Bird will first perform a strong flap giving it a burst of speed, then it will tuck its wings in and spin rapidly, whilst simultaneously channeling chakra into its beak, giving it extra strength and sharpness. This technique can be used by all of the Lesser Birds of Paradise.

-Can only be used by signers of the Lesser Bird of Paradise contract
-Can only be taught by Kato.
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-Approved-

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[Sonnelion]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Water Style: Water Flash Step (Suiton: Mizu Furasshu Suteppu)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15
Damage: n/a
Description: The user will focus suiton chakra into their feet using said chakra they will be able to concentrate water around their feet from the air within seconds to create disk that will be hardened with chakra to create a solid platform, like with the water dagger jutsu, then as the user crouches and begins to push off of the disk will expand rapidly in the desired direction at 20 mph. The jutsu will allow the creation of four disks before it has to be stated as another jutsu.

Notes/Restrictions
-Can only be used/taught by Sonnelion.
-Requires 1 turn breaks between use.
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-Declined- What Water Dagger Jutsu are you talking about, when referring to custom techniques you are supposed to link them in a quote.

 

[Hell Autarch]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Genjutsu: Doragon Uzumaki) - Illusionary Technique: Dragon Swirl
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs a single hand seal and casts a Genjutsu upon the target. In this Genjutsu the target believes everything around him is spinning
Note: When a person spins around too much, he/she feels as if everything around them is spinning as well. This Genjutsu is created mainly upon that concept
Note: The effects of the Genjutsu are Dizziness, Vomiting, Unable to perform jutsu properly and unable to walk properly for an entire turn
Note: Can be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch
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-Declined- Colored portion won't be accepted, also 1 handseal isn't sufficient for an A-rank genjutsu technique.

(Genjutsu: Seishin Tekina Tatchi) - Illusionary Technique: Spiritual Touch
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts a Genjutsu upon the target by touching them. In this Genjutsu the targets entire body gets strangled by black hair. The hair originally starts spreading from the targets own hair. Slowly the hair covers the targets entire body. Just before the target's face is about to get the covered with the hair, he/she hears the death rattle and feels as if they're being touched by human hands from within the hair. In reality, the target's body is paralyzed
Note: If the target is successfully caught by the hair then he/she would remain paralyzed for 1 turn. After that 1 turn the hair would disappear itself and it would appear as if nothing had happened however the target will still hear the death rattle in their entire next turn
Note: Can be used once per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch
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-Declined- Inducing genjutsu by touch is an ability exclusive to Panda Arts.

(Fantomuinparusu) - Phantom Impulse
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user performs 5 hand seals and then channels chakra into the palm before aiming their palm at their targets and releasing a large beam of energy that is capable of piercing through the targets body leaving a large hole
Note: Can be used once per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch

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-Declined- DNR.

 

[The Alchemist]

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Raiton: Denki Sona (Lightning Release: Electric Sonar)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range:Long
Chakra:30, -15 per turn while active
Damage: N/A
Description: After the user does the snake hand seal and claps their hands together the user then slams their hands down on the ground and sends out an electric pulse into the top soil giving the user the ability to pin-point their opponents whereabouts (there is no way to stop the electrical pulses given off by your body). This is a great counter to visual jutsu such as the Kirigakure no jutsu.
~Note: Last up to five turns
~Note: Can only be performed by those taught by The Alchemist
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

Raitonenki kōzan fīrudo (Lightning Release: Electric Mine Field)
Type: Offense/Defense
Rank: A
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After performing the hand seals snake>rooster>upside down Tiger>Ram>Monkey and slams their hands on the ground releasing a surge of electricity that flairs out under the surrounding top soil, electrifying the surrounding landscape. If the users opponent comes within the jutsus range a large surge of electricity shoots up from the ground electrocuting them on the spot.
~Note: Last for two turns
~Note: Can only be performed by those taught by The Alchemist
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-Declined- OP

Note: For the love of god don't bold the entire submission next time, it's annoying to read through.

 

[Sonnelion]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Water/Lightning Release: Devil's Summon (Raiton/Suiton: Akuma Wo Shoukan Shi Masu )
Type: Attack
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user will perform the dragon and daog handseal then hold one hand in the other using the wrist of said hand focusing chakra of both natures in that hand creating a barrier of water with sharp claws as well as a lightning aura around it electrifying the water then the user will charge towards the opponent and hit them in the stomach or chest digging their claws into the opponent electrifying them then the user will extend their arm causing the claws to extend as well as the water portion making the opponent be shocked as they are taken into mid-range and slammed intoo the ground.
Notes/Restrictions
-Can only be taught by Sonnelion
-Can only be used 4 times per battle and require at least 1 turn breaks between use
-Preparing the technique takes 2 seconds after performing the handseals

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X-Declined-X Its C rank..

I bolded the parts I changed and change the rank to what it needs to be or at least tell me what the rank needs to be so I can get this approved.

Water/Lightning Release: Devil's Summon (Raiton/Suiton: Akuma Wo Shoukan Shi Masu )
Type: Attack
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user will perform the dragon and daog handseal then hold one hand in the other using the wrist of said hand focusing chakra of both natures in that hand creating a barrier of water with sharp claws as well as a lightning aura around it electrifying the water then the user will charge towards the opponent and hit them in the stomach or chest digging their claws into the opponent electrifying them then the user will extend their arm causing the claws to extend as well as the water portion making the opponent be shocked as they are taken into mid-range and slammed intoo the ground.
Notes/Restrictions
-Can only be taught by Sonnelion
-Can only be used 4 times per battle and require at least 1 turn breaks between use
-Preparing the technique takes 2 seconds after performing the handseals

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-Declined- Focusing 2 chakra natures simultaneously requires Yin/Yang.

 

[OG Smoove]

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Arutā: Sheru dangan fōmu - Alter: Shell Bullet Form
Type: Weapon
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 on activation (each fin is 10)
Damage: 10 (20 if I use a fin)
Description: An old family relic that has been passed down from generation to generation to the first male child of that generation which is said in prophecy that he the one to wield the Alter. The relic is a glove that is to be worn on the right hand of the wielder. To activate, the user must channel the necessary amount of chakra (60) to the glove. The glove then turns into the Alter and transforms the user right arm into a weapon. It first level is called "Shell Bullet". It covers the arm with protective metal armor, which is mostly golden in color but with orange and gray sections also, the user's right hand is divided into orange and red plating, with metallic claws for fingernails and creates three red curved fins of metal jutting out from his right shoulder blade that stores the chakra that was used to activate this weapon. The fins break apart & release the chakra that burst outwards to propel the user forward at great speed, increasing the power of his strikes, which I label them as Bullets.

Bullets: Each Bullet are the same and do the same thing. The order of which a fin is use starts from the bottom one to the top one. Once you use a fin, it be destroyed and the chakra will be channeled into the Alter which you can use to launch yourself at great speed towards your opponent. Your body wont be able to keep up with the Alter, so you will be above the ground by about five inches. Once your fist comes in contact with your target, you release the chakra the that was in the Alter towards your target. The result will be a powerful punch that will send your target back flying a few meters and crushing his/her rib cage and sternum.

Restrictions:
-Can only be used once per turn and three times in a battle.
-Its a tunnel vision attack which mean you can't change direction while you're doing the move.
-If you miss on your first attempt, the chakra that was in the Alter will be gone by then.

Notes:
-If your target is at long range(10+ meters) it takes four seconds for you to reach your target.
-Mid range, it takes two seconds.
-Close range, it takes one second.
-Because of the speed which you go at, you are able break through any B-Rank and below Earth jutsu(such as walls and domes etc.); and resist any B-Rank and below Fire jutsu. But as a result, you'll be slowed down by half speed.

Visual Aid of how the move and weapon looks like.

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Arutā: Kyūkyoku no Sheruburettofōmu - Alter: Ultimate Shell Bullet Form
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Long(for the SBB)
Chakra: 40 for the SBB (-10 for each turn he is using the propeller)
Damage: 80 for the SBB
Description: This is the second stage of the Alter. To reach to this stage the user must use up all three of his Bullets and then wait five turns for the Alter to automatically transform to its second stage. I
t now takes the appearance of a predominantly orange plating that now extends across half of the limb's length before segmenting in half. Four orange fins extend around the right-hand side of the user's face (towards his right eye), and a large golden propeller located where the three red fins used to be. This propeller grants the user flight by using chakra.
On his fist is a small aperture which can absorb the energy that Fire and Lightning exerts which is needed for his Shell Bullet Burst to work.

Energy Absorption: This ability does not absorb the whole jutsu but only absorb the energy it exerts. It only absorb the energy of Fire and Lightning techniques. This ability is relevant because the Shell Bullet Burst ability needs the energy of one of the two elements in order to be completed.

Propeller: This allows you to have the ability of flight. It last for the whole turn and can only be used three times in a battle.

Shell Bullet Burst(SBB): This move is just like the Shell Bullet but stronger because of energy from the Fire/Lightning jutsu. The user channels all of his collected energy and chakra into his orb, causing a blinding golden light to emit from his right hand, before throwing a punch at a target. The resulting strike releases all of the energy in one blast, extending well beyond the user's melee range (effective to at least dozens of meters) and retaining the golden luminence in the shape of a fist which is about half the size of Gai's Daytime Tiger. The blast of the punch is great enough to break every bone in the targets body and moderately burn his/her flesh.

Visual Aid:

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Restrictions/Notes:

-SBB can only be used once per battle.
-The propeller can only be used three times per battle and last for the whole turn.
-In order to absorb the energy of the Fire or Lightning justu, the user must be within five meters of the jutsu path or activation.
-After using the SBB the Alter returns to its glove form and you must wait 10 turns to activate it again at it's first stage.
-The user is unable to use ninjutsu and elemental ninjutsu for five turns and will be passed out for one turn.
-It takes a total of 2 seconds from long for the fist to reach the target.
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-Both Declined- You can only have one CW, the other one needs to be a technique based on your weapon, not two CW techniques ~_~"

 

[Tsuki]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Katon: Benihime, Juzutsunagi) - Fire Release: Crimson Princess, Beaded Mesh
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: This technique launches condensed fire chakra in the form of a tangible blood-red colored net, generated from the blade length, and simply throws it over the intended target with a simple slashing motion from the blade. The net further binds and restricts an opponent’s movements by constricting to its form. This net appears elongated and somewhat narrow. After throwing the net, the user stabs the net with the tip of their blade, creating orbs of fire along the outside length of the net, which explode like linked land-mines in a domino formation, leading toward the target bound under the net. When the orbs come into direct contact with the intended target, they create a tremendously large and devastating explosion.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Has to wait one turn in order to use this technique again
Note: No fire technique of A rank and above in the same turn
Note: Can only be taught by -Tsuki

How the technique looks like:

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[Xylon]

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[Scorps]

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Thread Opened​

You know the drill. Its opened for a new cycle of 3 techniques per user for one week counting from today.

As the one responsible for the Custom System, I must apologize to all members for the delays we've been experiencing in this thread and others. The recent staff changes but also the begining of the summer brought us new challenges and issues that delayed the checkings. In the summer, the older staff members generally get more busy in RL which translates in periods of less activity which in return delays some tasks. Hopefully it will also return to normal in the near future so please be patient and try to understand when a delay happens that is not because we are lazy, its because we simply can't get to every single thing at the same time.

Also, I checked the thread but in the case I missed something, if anyone has or knows of a pending or unchecked submission, please pm me the link and I'll check it asap. Sometimes in the mix of things, one post may slip through our radar and remain unchecked.

Also, I must remind members to read the rules, read the thread and get familiar with what is approvable and is not, etc. Also, read the opening post. Tons of techniques still are submitted without abiding to the template for examplea nd that is auto decline. And its ridiculous to have a submission declined because of incorrect chakra or damage info. Be smart and make sure your submission abides the templates.

On a Personal Note, don't bash or insult mods that check the cjs. We, like you, can still make techniques that aren't approvable while we may think, when we submit them, that they are. This doesn't mean we don't have the ability to check yours with justify, reasoning, logic and objectivity. This said, insults or taunting/provocative VMS or PMS towards us with such remarks will earn a ban from this thread for unspecified lenghts of time as well as infractions/warnings. Its a Zero Tolerance policy when it comes to such behavior. Perhaps if all those who are direspectful and insulting are banned from this thread, the thread can function that much faster. Be appreciative of our work please. We do it for you! ​

 

[Nathan]

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[Ninjutsu: Hanshanou | Ninja Arts: Albedo]
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 [- 50 to the user]
Description:
This is a technique where the user will first perform a string of five handseals, then conjures a sphere of raw chakra [a huge amount of raw chakra] which releases a concentrated beam of energy possessing highly explosive penetrative power, rapidly expanding the further it travels. When launched the sphere rapidly expands in the form of a beam capable of decimating all matter caught within its broad trajectory path, and can travel for quite some distance depending on the quantity of chakra focused in the technique's primitive utilization. Its overall damage output can be reduced through the conjuration of an extremely-formidable barrier. The light emitted by the beam is equivalent in terms of brightness to a flash bomb, making it extremely useful in blinding those outside of its trajectory path.

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Notes:
- Can only be used once per-match.
- The user is left drained and completely run down.
- Only B-rank techniques and below for two turns after the use of this.
- No normal ninjutsu techniques in the same turn as this.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

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(Genjutsu: Osoroshii Seppuku) Illusionary Arts: Dreadful Evisceration
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
Illusionary Arts: Dreadful Evisceration is a terrifying technique that strikes fear into the hearts of all who witness it. It was originally developed for the purposes of judicial execution, but was soon adapted by ninja for use in battle. After the hand seals Ram → Dog, the opponent will be placed in a genjutsu. The opponent will believe that the user is taking control of their muscles, and forces them to draw a kunai or other sharp object. The victim is then compelled to disembowel himself with the object because of the said muscle manipulation. Since vital organs are stabbed in the process the opponent will believe that he is dying but in reality is in shock and unable to move.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice per-match.
- Have to wait two turns before it can be used again.
- No Genjutsu next turn.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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-Declined- The colored portion is not possible with normal genjutsu, only Sharingan genjutsu can do that.

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(Genjutsu: Issen Burookun Gomakashi) Illusionary Arts: One Thousand Broken Mirrors
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description:
After perform the hand seals Horse → Dragon → Ox, the target(s) is/are placed under the illusion that they are surrounded by a giant, 360-degree mirror, which reflects themselves and their surroundings. The mirror will then slowly break into pieces, then break into even smaller pieces, and continue subdividing until there are countless shards surrounding the target, all of which reflect the target and his surroundings. This greatly confuses and disorients the target. Once the shards have finished dividing, they will fly at the victim and stab him, causing great mental shock.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice per-match.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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-Declined- remove the mental shock part, and if there's a mental damage then include the damage info in the template.

(Genjutsu: Issen Burookun Gomakashi) Illusionary Arts: One Thousand Broken Mirrors
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description:
After perform the hand seals Horse → Dragon → Ox, the target(s) is/are placed under the illusion that they are surrounded by a giant, 360-degree mirror, which reflects themselves and their surroundings. The mirror will then slowly break into pieces, then break into even smaller pieces, and continue subdividing until there are countless shards surrounding the target, all of which reflect the target and his surroundings. Once the shards have finished dividing, they will fly at the victim and stab him, leaving the target with minor mental damage.
Notes:
- Can only be used twice per-match.
- Can only be taught by Nathan.
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-Approved- Edited.

 

[Kettei]

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(Doragon no Eskrima) The Dragon's Eskrima
Type: Weapon
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The Dragon's Eskrima is a long black staff. In the very middle of it, it has a line that goes all the way around it. This is the divider for the two tonfas. The divider is transparent and is surging with raiton chakra. This keeps the tonfas together to create the staff. To separate the two tonfas the user must pull them apart with force. Once pulled apart, the tip of the tonfas are transparent with raiton chakra surging through them as well. This is where the electricity will flow out of the tonfas and onto the opponent. This can only be done in short range. The staff and tonfas are great conductors for electricity. The staff acts as a lightning rod that can absorb C rank and below raiton attacks. While the tonfas are used for attacking the opponent with C Rank electricity.

- The user can channel electricity into the tonfas only. The electricity is B Rank.

- Only the staff can absorb raiton attacks. C Rank and below only raiton attacks.
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-Declined- No elemental absorption powers without Fuinjutsu, you channel Lightning, not electricity, and make the colored count as a move, you are free to add another special ability within reason.


(Katon Release: Fenikkusudoroppu) Fire Release: Phoenix Drop
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user bends down on one knee and then charges his katon chakra on both of his hands. Once that is complete the user jumps into the air and his hands catch on fire. The user then begins to fall to the earth, quickly picking up speed. Once he has made contact with the ground an explosion occurs with the user as the epicenter. The explosion of fire reaches mid range of the user.
- Can only be used twice per battle.

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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

(Raiton Release: Zeusu no monsūn) Lightning Release: Zeus's Monsoon
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user begins to knead his raiton chakra into a bow and arrow by using chakra manipulation. The user then jumps high into the air and launches hundreds of small arrows that are made of lightning chakra at his opponent.
- Can only be used twice per battle.
- Cannot use lightning Jutsu for the rest of the round.

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-Declined- Chakra infusable arrows are a feat exclusive to Mathias's Sniper Arts CFS.

 

[Yveltal]

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(Raiton:Sasu Yōna Ame) - Lightning Releaseiercing Rain
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals and generates a large ring of lightning that spins around them, causing a bluish flame like aura to appear. The user will then manipulate the shape of the lightning ring into 20 arrows. After that, the user will then stretch their left arm 75 degrees with their right hand pulling back as if were a bow into the sky in the direction of the target. Once that has been done, the user will then begin strumming their left arm, causing the ring of lightning to release the 20 lightning arrows towards the opponent. On impact the arrows will cause small electric explosions.
Note:
-can only taught by Kage Phoenix
-can only be used 2x
-cannot perform another raiton technique on the next turn

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X-Pending-X Leaving for someone else. I cannot view the video
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~Declined~ The technique seems fine, only thing i don't get is where the arrows are going to be released? are they directly towards the opponent? falling from above him? coming at a diagonal angle?

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(Raiton:Sasu Yōna Ame) - Lightning Releaseiercing Rain
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals and generates a large ring of lightning that spins around them, causing a bluish flame like aura to appear. The user will then manipulate the shape of the lightning ring into 20 arrows. After that, the user will then stretch their left arm 75 degrees with their right hand pulling back as if were a bow into the sky in the direction of the target. Once that has been done, the user will then begin strumming their left arm, causing the ring of lightning to release the 20 lightning arrows tupwards towards the opponent. The arrows will then rain down onto the opponent,causing small electric explosions.
Note:
-can only taught by Kage Phoenix
-can only be used 2x
-cannot perform another raiton technique on the next turn

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-Declined- You are supposed to bold the changes when resubmitting.

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(Raiton:Sasu Yōna Ame) - Lightning Releaseiercing Rain
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals and generates a large ring of lightning that spins around them, causing a bluish flame like aura to appear. The user will then manipulate the shape of the lightning ring into 20 arrows. After that, the user will then stretch their left arm 75 degrees with their right hand pulling back as if were a bow into the sky in the direction of the target. Once that has been done, the user will then begin strumming their left arm, causing the ring of lightning to release the 20 lightning arrows upwards towards the opponent. The arrows will then rain down onto the opponent,causing small electric explosions.
Note:
-can only taught by Kage Phoenix
-can only be used 2x
-cannot perform another raiton technique on the next turn

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X-Approved-X

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(Katon:Fenikkusu Hasu no Hana) - Fire Releasehoenix Lotus Flower
Type: Offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After performing the Dragon → Bird → Tiger hand seals, the user will mold their fire chakra and release it into the ground by slamming their hands down; causing a lotus flower made out of flames, to encase the opponent. The opponent will sustain 2nd degree burns from the intense flames. Once the oppoenent has been trapped, the user will perform the Rat hand seal and then slams their hands onto the ground, releasing their fire chakra, causing the lotus flower to burst open (bloom) releasing a phoenix that launches the opponent into the sky and then explodes.
Note:
-can only be taught by Kage Phoenix
-can only be used 2x
-cannot perform fire techniques on the next turn

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(Raiton:Bararāku Saika) - Lightning Release:Lightning Sword
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90
Description:The user performs 5 hand seals and channels their chakra into the sky, creating dark clouds. The user then raises their sword into the sky and draws lightning down into the sword. Once the lightning has been summoned and stored in the sword, it is releases an enormous lightning blast able to fill the sky with light.
Note:
-Can only be taught by Kage Phoenix
-Can only be used 1x
-Cannot perform A and above lightning techniques for 2 turns

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X-Declined-X Forbidden ranked techniques require recoil damage. The technique is vague, it doesn't explain you use this sword for your offensive means, aside from the simplicity makes this a nuke and nothing else.

 

[Yashiro]

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(Raiton: Sono Keisei) - Lightning Release: The Siren

Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs 3 handseals and then claps their hands together twice, and with the seperation of his hands after the second clap, he forms a sphere of lightning between his hands, then as the sphere of lightning is floating before him, the user expands it in size while also forming it into the shape of a woman with a wide mouth, the woman then screams out load, releasing a series of lightning bolts threw her mouth.

Note - Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
- Can only be used once per battle
- The siren stays active for 3 turns but only screams on command of the user.
- No lightning techniques can be used for the entire time that the Siren is active on the battlefield

X-Declined-X And the rank of these lightning techniques she shoots? Since she could do it many times within 3 turns, thats exploitable.

(Raiton: Dendou Nezumi) - Lightning Release: Electrical Rats

Rank: S
Range: Short - Long
Type: Offensive
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs 3 handseals while charging lightning chakra into both of their hands and arms, he then proceeds by slamming his hands to the ground and releases the chakra, by doing this he creates a large amount of electrical rats that borough threw the ground for a short while before shooting up, as they shoot up they immediately make their way towards the target, the rats would then simultaneously pounce on the opponent and electrocute them.

Note - Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
- Can be used twice per battle
- Once the rats emerge from the ground, they immediately target the opponent, meaning, not a single rat can be manipulated into running a different direction
- The user won't be able to mold lightning chakra higher than A-Rank for the turn of use as well as the following

(Doton: Rifuto ofu) - Earth Release: Lift off

Rank: C
Range: Short - Mid
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user focuses earth chakra beneath either foot of the target and with a simple hand gesture, he would cause a small section of earth to lift about a meter high from the ground, lifting the target by one foot only, causing the target to lose his balance and fall over, most probably face first into the ground.

Note - Can only be taught by -Yashiro-
- Section of earth would appear as a pole of earth, the size of the targets foot or perhaps a bit larger than the targets foot, if need be.

X-Both Declined-X Existing Techniques, A fire version of the rat technique exists and there a numerous variations of your Earth Lift.

 

[-Cerberus-]

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Resubmitting.

Illusionary Arts: Gasu | Genjutsu: Gas Gas
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing two hand seals the user will place his target into a illusion where they believe to smell the gas methane all around him. The smelling of methane will prevent them from using fire jutsu's or jutsu's that create any sparks, unless they would want to explode.

Note:

Usable three times per battle.
Lasts two turns once activated.
Must be taught by -Cerberus-.

‡ Declined ‡ you cant determine how an opponent will react to your illusion, only what they will experience

Illusionary Arts: Gasu | Genjutsu: Gas Gas
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: After performing two hand seals the user will place his target into a illusion where they believe to smell the gas methane all around him.

Note:

Usable three times per battle.
Lasts two turns once activated.
Must be taught by -Cerberus-.

X-Approved-X

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(Suiton: Sono Heika Kara Inai ) Water Style: The arms from within
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15 ( + 10 for each turn)
Damage Point: N/A
Description: 30
Note: The users begins by gathering their water chakra in their upper body. Once collected using their unique hozuki ability, the user creates two arms created from water on each side of their waist. The water arms are slower than the users original arm due to the high levels of water. The water arms can perform handseals, but slower than human arms.

- Can only be used 3 times per battle.
- The arms last for three turns
- Can only be used by Hozuki bio's
- Can only be taught by -Cerberus-



(Suiton: Gosunkugi Gyaruson ) Water Style: Spike Boy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Point: 30
Description:
Note: The users begins by gathering their water chakra throughout their body. Once collected the user releases the chakra in a quick burst. The user uses shape manipulation to shape the released water into thin 'senbons' that cover the users whole body and can pierce anybody in close combat.


- Can only be used 4 times per battle.
- Can only be used by Hozuki bio's
- Can only be taught by -Cerberus-

X-Both Declined-X They are C rank... given the abilities, atleast elevate them to B. And make sure to give a proper reason why, arms of water that are being controlled by chakra itself lets you manipulate your chakra for other techniques.

(Suiton: Sono Heika Kara Inai ) Water Style: The arms from within
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 ( + 10 for each turn)
Damage Point: N/A
Description: 30
Note: The users begins by gathering their water chakra in their upper body. Once collected using their unique hozuki ability, the user manipulates the water to sprout out from their waist. The user uses shape manipulation to shape the arms into exact replicas of the users arms and hands. The water arms are slower than the users original arm due to the high levels of water, but are more powerful in terms of strength due to the high amount of water and chakra stored in them.

- Can only be used 3 times per battle.
- The arms last for three turns
- Can only be used by Hozuki bio's
- Can only be taught by -Cerberus-

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(Suiton: Gosunkugi Gyaruson ) Water Style: Spike Boy
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Point: 40
Description:
Note: The users begins by gathering their water chakra throughout their body. Once collected the user releases the chakra in a quick burst. The user uses shape manipulation to shape the released water into thin 'senbons' that cover the users whole body and can pierce anybody in close combat. The senbon are the same size as regular senbons making them easily visible by human eyes.


- Can only be used 4 times per battle.
- Can only be used by Hozuki bio's
- Can only be taught by -Cerberus-

X-Approved-X

 

[Saikyokami]

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(Genjutsu : Chimei Tekina Kama) - Illusionary Arts: The Fatal Scythe
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40 (mental stress)
Description: The user will trap the opponent within an illusion where the user appear to have transformed into 20ft tall reaper, donning a black cloak. The reaper then will take his scythe and drive it into the opponent's chest, leaving them to believe to had been injured and hanging from the scythe of a reaper. The resulting stress on his mind causing damage.

Restrictions:

- Only teachable by Saikyo

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(Raiton: chakra rimitta bando) - Lightning style: Chakra limiter bands
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40 (-20) per turn
Damage points: 80
Description:
The user utilizing Ration chakra the user makes a cicrle like band of raiton holding them in both hands ,then slip's the bands them around the enemy's wrists (noticed or unnoticed does not matter) as soon as the bands are around the enemy's wrist's the bands numb the tenketsu on the wrists. This stops the user from being able to manipulate chakra from there hands ie making handsign's or elemental attacks from the user's hands like wind or lightning attacks for an example. These bands once slipped onto an enemy's wrists cannot be removed as they tighten in place as soon as the enemy utilizes any chakra. The enemy however can still manipulate chakra from there feet, eye's mouth and so on. The bands restrict the enemy from using jutsu requiring handseal's or hand type jutsu's. the bands will last for two turns or once the enemy's chakra has been spent up completely or the enemy is dead. The bands also take away 20 chakra cost from the owner per turn.

Restrictions:
- Can only be used once per battle..
- Opponent cannot make handseals for one whole turn.
- User must be within short range to put the bands on the opponent.
- Opponent cannot use chakra through their hands for one whole turn.
- Can only be taught by myself or Juha (he holds a spot along with co-created this).

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[Igneel]

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(Genjutsu: Ito Ijouhassei) - Illusionary Arts: Threaded Infestation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs a sequence of four handseals to trap their opponent(s) in a genjutsu. The illusion consists of a mass of threads emerging from inside of the opponent's body, with the threads spreading their reach throughout their body much like a radical infestation. The threads erupt from opponent's mouth, eyes, ears and nose before enveloping them in a large tightly weaved cocoon of dark threads which completely prevents their mobility. The dark threads seem to be almost symbiotic in nature, clinging to the opponent and digging their tips deeper into their body the more they resist the technique. As the threads continue their infestation of the body, they puncture through the opponent's body numerous times, as well as tightening their grip by the second so to prevent the opponent's mobility.The abundant dark threads wrap around the opponent,encasing him completely.It's almost as if the opponent has been mummified by dark threads.The dark threads clog up all the openings in the opponent's body robbing some of the senses.In reality, the opponent is robbed of their sense of smell and sight,as well as undergoing full body paralysis due to the nature of the technique.Due to the ears being covered by the threads,the opponents hearing suffers heavily not allowing him to hear sounds clearly or distinctly.As the technique progresses the opponent begins gasping for air, as the threads tighten their hold over the opponent's throat. Due to being such an advanced illusionary technique,this genjutsu can be cast on multiple opponents.Being a high leveled genjutsu,the risk of using it is severe too,as the user is unable to use any genjutsu techniques for the next 2 turns.The user is also unable to use any form of taijutsu for the next 2 turns.The appearance of the threads produced by this technique is entirely dependent on the user's preference. They can range from resembling Kidomaru's silk to metallic wires, from Kakuzu's dark threads to Jiraiya's hair.

-Can only be used Twice per battle
-No other genjutsu in the same turn
-Cannot use genjutsu in the next 2 turns
-Cannot use taijutsu for next 2 turns
-Can only be Taught by Igneel
-No Genjutsu for two turns

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 Declined  Still unreleasable... If you can't move and its S-Rank and leaves you without sight, smell while producing pain, how can you expect someone to counter it? I cannot approve nor will I approve one hit knock out genjutsus. Next time its DNR.

(Genjutsu: Ito Ijouhassei) - Illusionary Arts: Threaded Infestation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs a sequence of four handseals to trap their opponent(s) in a genjutsu. The illusion consists of a mass of threads emerging from inside of the opponent's body, with the threads spreading their reach throughout their body much like a radical infestation. The threads erupt from opponent's mouth, eyes and ears before enveloping them in a large tightly weaved cocoon of dark threads which completely prevents their mobility. The dark threads seem to be almost symbiotic in nature, clinging to the opponent and digging their tips deeper into their body the more they resist the technique. As the threads continue their infestation of the body, they puncture through the opponent's body numerous times, as well as tightening their grip by the second so to prevent the opponent's mobility.The abundant dark threads wrap around the opponent,encasing him completely.It's almost as if the opponent has been mummified by dark threads.The dark threads clog up all the openings in the opponent's body robbing some of the senses.In reality, the opponent is robbed of their sense of sight,as well as undergoing full body paralysis due to the nature of the technique.Due to the ears being covered by the threads,the opponents hearing suffers heavily not allowing him to hear sounds clearly or distinctly.As the technique progresses the opponent begins gasping for air, as the threads tighten their hold over the opponent's throat. Due to being such an advanced illusionary technique,this genjutsu can be cast on multiple opponents.Being a high leveled genjutsu,the risk of using it is severe too,as the user is unable to use any genjutsu techniques for the next 2 turns.The user is also unable to use any form of taijutsu for the next 2 turns.The appearance of the threads produced by this technique is entirely dependent on the user's preference. They can range from resembling Kidomaru's silk to metallic wires, from Kakuzu's dark threads to Jiraiya's hair.

-Can only be used Twice per battle
-No other genjutsu in the same turn
-No genjutsu for the next 2 turns
-No Taijutsu for the next 2 turns
-Can only be Taught by Igneel

X-Pending-X Leaving for Scorps, PM him.

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 Declined  Again...this is too oped. Igneel, when something is oped, it doesn't matter much what restrictions you set yourself up to. Its still oped. The effect, the technique, is oped. Its oped because it has no way out... Ok? Its a one hit knockout with several exploitable aspects which can go in a multitude of interpretations. Now, make this A-Rank, reduce restrictions and resubmit.

 

[Summer]

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(Kessho:shinderera surippa) - Crystal: Cinderella's slipper's
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40(+5 for taijutsu kicks)
Description:
The user begins by making a handsign and forms glass slipper's on her feet which she can fling off of her feet kicking them off at the enemy. The slipper's make it hard to run in so use the toes to run. The user may also use these slipper's for taijutsu cutting an enemy with the heels while kicking them

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Restrictions: can only be used twice during battle, can only stay active for three turns while using for taijutsu.
Note: can only be used by guren.
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-Declined- Crystal is not glass, and glass is an approved CE

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(Kessho:shinderera surippa) - Crystal: Cinderella's slipper's
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B rank
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40(+5 for taijutsu kicks)
Description:
The user begins by making a handsign and forms crystal slipper's on her feet which she can fling off of her feet kicking them off at the enemy. The slipper's have a sharp pointed end and will pierce through skin from the force of being kicked at an enemy. Also a hidden ability is that the user can channel crystal chakra into the heels to extend or retract the size of the heel. The heel can extend to 1.5 feet and retract so it is flat for running. The user may also use these slipper's for taijutsu cutting an enemy while kicking them.

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Restrictions: can only be used twice during battle, can only stay active for three turns while using for taijutsu.
Note: can only be used by guren.


Bolded changes mainly glass to crystal. Tweaked the description a little bit to make running easier.

X-Approved-X I guess
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Raiton bola's( Raiton bola's )
Rank: A Rank
Type: supplementary
Range: Short- Mid range
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description:
The user forms one handsign forming a single ball in there hand hanging on two lightning lines are two other lightning balls. while swinging the arm being used like a left or right hook and utilizing raiton ball can release the bolas from the motion of swinging the arm and the bolas spins out from the user towards the enemy. Normally these are directed towards an enemy's leg's or body, when directed at the body the user is trying to bind the user's arms to the body. This is done because the bola wraps around the enemy's body and arms tying them up. When directed at the legs it normally makes the enemy fall down or trip while running or walking. The lightning will also slightly paralyse or numb the enemy's leg's or arms which is targeted.

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Now an actual bola is normally two rocks one tied on either end of a rope or vine and is thrown at an enemy used for tripping the enemy or binding them. So this method is using three balls of lightning attached to a thin line's of lightning which swings around while released and wraps around an enemy. The line's of lightning are enough to let the lightning balls wrap around the enemy two full rotations

Restrictions: can only be used three times per battle.
: Cannot be used more than once in the same turn.
: can only be taught by juha.

X-Declined-X One, how do you form the balls? Two, how is not possible to achieve the same effect using a normal bola infused with lightning release?
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(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Meerkat suterusu kuran ) summoning technique: Meerkat stealth clan
Rank: A Rank
Type: supplementary
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: NA
Description: After swiping blood across the summoning tattoo the user summons a clan of meerkats about 8 regular sized meerkats. It is a known fact that meerkats are all immune to poisons and venoms from other animals this comes in very handy in the nw where poisons can kill if not treated. being very skilled masters at taijutsu shown being able to use speeds up to the first gate of opening for quick attacks and stealthy missions and covert operations. The clan can use a binding method of tackle which swarms an enemy and holds him in place by forcing there chakra onto the enemy binding them, and have there own distinctive way of fightng with the claws on there fingers. Meerkats also have very keen group calls to signify danger and or weather change meaning they use code words for specific things. These nicely adapted meerkats are also able to move through the ground faster then shinobi moving under ground with hiding like a mole technique at any range as well being naturally an earth based animal.

Restrictions: can only be summoned once during battle.
: a clan of meerkats of 8 will be able to hold the enemy for 5 seconds or even just by keeping the enemy distracted.
:meerkats must be touching the enemy to bind them with chakra.
Note: hiding like a mole is much faster for these summons because of the size fact making it twice as fast to move through the ground.
Note: must have signed the meerkat contract.

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X-Declined-X Several problems, i cannot allow any gate speed refrences. The abilities didnt seem to match either, did you perhaps took a references from Kakashi's hounds? If so im sure the technique can be redefined to have the same intended results without being so vague.

 

[ZandaT]

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(Katon: Kasō) Fire Style: Cremation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user performs 3 hand seals while kneading their fire chakra into their mouth which then turns into a superheated heated ash. The user then exhales the hot ash in between their raised hands, which is positioned in front of their chest, rapidly condensing the hot ash into a basketball sized sphere which they then fire at the opponent. The heated ash sphere on contact, or by the user clapping their hands, explodes into a 3m wide vortex that can reach up to mid.range in the sky. The heated ash can easily burn through the human skin resulting in 2nd degree burns throughout the opponents body.
NOTES
►Can be used 3x per battle
►No fire jutsu in the next turn
►Raining ash lasts for 2 turns
►This move cannot be used while previous ash is raining
►Can only be taught by Zanda

X-Approved-X Removed the last few lines: its not enough ash to make it rain, you'd need a volcano for that. Trying to evaporate clouds wont work either, it would also cause them to rain acidic water that irritates the skin/causes slight burns a few turns later.

(Genjutsu: Burakkuhōru) Illusionary Arts: Black Hole
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid.
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60 (Mental Stress)
Description: After a sequence of three hand seals the user will cast a genjutsu on the opponent, manipulating their sense of touch and sight, making them feel and see their bodies react to the force of gravity gradually increasing directly underneath them. In the opponents first turn as the genjutsu is casted, they will feel the sudden increase in gravity and see themselves fall to their knees, in reality they will stand being unable to move their lower legs as their mind is tricked into thinking that gravity is too strong and has it pinned to the ground. In the opponent's next turn gravity will further increase as they see themselves brought and pinned down in a dog stance preventing them from using their upper body while in reality they stand only being able to move their head. In all the opponent has a total of two moves, since in our rp time is counted in moves, to break this genjutsu or else in the third move the force of the gravity will be so tremendous that they will see themselves brought down flat on the ground, no longer able to move as the tremendous force of gravity crushes their body, while in reality they stand tall and motionless as they take mental damage. This jutsu can only be casted on stationary opponents, and can also be casted onto multiple opponents once they all stand within short range of the user.
NOTES
► Can be used 3x per battle
►Can only be taught by Zanda

X-Declined-X Existing technique

 

[Shady Doctor]

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(Katon: Neppa no ha ) -Fire style: Heat wave blades
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost:40
Damage Points:80
Description:
The user begins by weaving in a quick series of 3 hand seals ending with the tiger seal. This acts as a medium for him/her to send chakra into the air above the battle field and manipulate the heat waves produced from the sun itself. The heat waves would be molded into crescent shaped blades of heat that are intangible like wind techniques. The blades would then be freely manipulated from above to crash from several directions and cut the opponent up, all the blades can converge together to create one large, intangible blade of heat to cut a large area.

~ Only teachable by shady doctor
~ only usable twice
~ no A-rank or above fire jutsu in the same turn or the turn after
~ Can only be used in sunny weather

X-Declined-X

(Katon: Zanka no Tachi, Higashi: Kyokujitsujin ) - Fire style: Longsword of the Remnant Flame, East: Rising Sun Edge
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: S-rank
Range:Short-Long (dries up air and evaporates water up to long range)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user first weaves in 3 hand seals ending with the dragon seal, followed by unsheathing a sword and flowing Katon chakra into it as It's being unsheathed, thus activating the technique. Upon activation, extremely high amounts of heat is focused throughout the blade and It incorporates the full power of the Sun's flames into the blade. Legend has it that The flames within the blade burn anything it cuts out of existence, thus implying the the sword gains lethal cutting abilities (S-rank). Zanka no Tachi has the side-effect of depleting the moisture in an entire area (at least 20 meter radius) causing the air and the water to dry up. Over a significant period of time, even small lakes can be completely evaporated by the heat. While the technique is activated, water jutsu that are B-rank and below will be evaporated upon use, within seconds.

~ Can only be used by Shady doctor
~ Only usable once per battle and lasts 4 turns.
~ Can only use Wind, Earth, lightning and Fire techniques while this is active
~ After deactivating, the user can't use Katon jutsu for 3 turns
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-Declined- Problem is, the sword's blade will melt when being exposed to this much heat, you need an indestructible sword to do that, and indestructible swords are only exclusive to CWs.

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(Katon: Zanka no Tachi, Higashi: Kyokujitsujin ) - Fire style: Longsword of the Remnant Flame, East: Rising Sun Edge
Type: Attack/defense
Rank: S-rank
Range:Short-Long (dries up air and evaporates water up to long range)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description:
The user first weaves in 3 hand seals ending with the dragon seal, followed by unsheathing a sword and flowing Katon chakra around it in order to create a heated coat of chakra on the blade as It's being unsheathed, thus activating the technique. Upon activation, extremely high amounts of heat is focused throughout the blade's chakra coat and It incorporates the full power of the Sun's flames on the outside of the coat while the inside of the coat is at normal temperatures, thus leaving the blade unharmed. Legend has it that The flames that the blade's coat possesses can burn anything it cuts out of existence, thus implying the the sword gains lethal cutting abilities (S-rank). Zanka no Tachi has the side-effect of depleting the moisture in an entire area (at least 20 meter radius) causing the air and the water to dry up. Over a significant period of time, even small lakes can be completely evaporated by the heat. While the technique is activated, water jutsu that are B-rank and below will be evaporated upon use, within seconds.

~ Can only be used by Shady doctor
~ Only usable once per battle and lasts 4 turns.
~ Can only use Wind, Earth and Fire techniques while this is active
~ After deactivating, the user can't use Katon jutsu for 3 turns

X-Declined-X

(Genjutsu: Tōtsū taisei ) - Illusion Arts: Pain Tolerance
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description:
The user does the dragon hand seal as a medium to insert chakra into the opponent's nervous system and take control of their senses. The illusion focuses directly on the sense of touches sensitivity. Once the illusion is casted, the user can manipulate the opponent's sense of touch to tolerate pain to a higher or lower degree. For example, if the user casts the illusion as a layer for another illusion and decides to make the opponent have a high tolerance for pain and the opponent tries to use pain as a way of breaking free, it wouldn't hurt him and he'd still be stuck. On the other hand, one could make the pain tolerance low also. Making a small cut from a kunai feel like getting a limb torn off.

~ Only teachable by shady doctor
~ only usable 2x
~ lasts 3 turns
~ Can be used on self

X-Declined-X .

 

[Houdinii]

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(Genjutsu: Yue Tsukegami)-Illusionary Arts: Let Slip
Type: Offensive
Rank: B rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will focus their chakra into their opponent and into their brain, taking over their chakra system and thus placing them in a genjutsu. This genjutsu causes the affected to suddenly forget about the existence of hand signs entirely, to the extent of making them slip up if halfway through a hand sign and cause them to weave it incorrectly. The affected will not be able to weave hand signs for 4 turns if they do not release this genjutsu.

Note:
~Can only be used 3 times
~The affect lasts for a max of four turns
~Cannot use another Genjutsu in this or the next turn
~Can only be taught by xHoudinii

X-Declined-X Thats not an illusion, thats memory manipulation.


Blade of Famine | Toushin Kyoukou
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: 0 (+5 per turn to wield the dagger)
Damage: N/A
Description:
The blade of famine was found buried hilt deep in what appeared to be a tree made of stone by a young shinobi. This dagger is made of a strange metal and appeared unbreakable, it is roughly 11 inches long with a 4 inch hilt and a 7 inch blade. The back of the blade is serrated and built onto the hilt is a loop made so ninja wire can be tied to it, the blade being just big enough to use techniques usually used by swords. The blade appeared normal but when it is held it siphons of a small constant stream of chakra.

Perplexed by this the shinobi set out to research the blade and to see if he could find out its origins. After much searching in old dusty tomes he came across a legend of the blade of famine, a blade that consumed what it pierced and turned it to stone. The legend went on to say that the blade was forged by a unique material that was created when a meteorite struck the earth and upon impact, the intense amount of heat and pressure petrified the minerals underneath, thus giving the blade its properties.

Abilities:
~The only ability of this blade is that when it cuts or stabs a person other than its user, it will petrify the area around the wound. Below the ability is described and defined:
[-When the blade cuts a person a small area around the wound becomes petrified. The amount petrified is directly proportional to the size of the wound, the bigger the wound the more that is petrified. When cut the petrification occurs internally as well although it is shallow.
-When a person is stabbed with the blade, the petrification occurs deeper internally then when cut. When an internal organ is pierced, due to the organs usually small size almost all of it would be petrified.
-When a person is cut/stabbed by the blade the pertrification affects the veins and muscles etc in the area but it does not seal them, meaning they would continue to bleed even though the area is essestianly rock. Due to this fact the wound cannot be healed using normal means since the area is rock and cannot be brought together.]
~The blade is unbreakable

Resctrictions:
~When the user is holding the dagger it needs a constant flow of chakra and so it requires +5 chakra per turn to wield
~Due to the size of the hilt, the user cannot performs hand seals while holding the blade
~Can only be used by xHoudinii unless given permission, if one tries to use the blade without permission the blade will steal all of their chakra almost instantly

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