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(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Šamaš kotei) Summoning Technique: Šamaš The Emperor
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons Šamaš The Emperor, one of the oldest bustard. He has a golden colored crest on his head as result of his fire affinity. He is a fairly large summon about as big as the Hawk Sasuke summoned. He is able to use fire techniques up to S-rank as a result of intense training with the user. He is exceptionally fast and can carry one person on his back and with his sharp senses he provides the user all the aid he needs. Šamaš also has the ability to shoot feathers infused with his katon chakra from his fingered wingtips that can pierce through rocks. He has trained himself to use his beak and claws as extra means of attack.
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Lasts for 4 turns max.
Note: Any techniques used by Šamaš counts towards the user's move count.
~Declined~ *sigh* what sharp senses are you talking about? you just got yourself into a whole other issue, keep in mind that the fire chakra infused feathers can't counter other techniques, they are simply projectiles infused with fire chakra, like a kunai, unless you give it a rank, and a usage limit.
(Katon: Jigoku no Uzumaku Honō no Niwa) Fire Release: Hell's Swirling Flame Garden
Type: Supplementary/defensive/offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 40(+10 to keep it active)
Damage points: 80
Description: In this technique the user performs the Tiger hand seal, and then kneads the Chakra inside his body converting it into fire. He then expels from his mouth a massive wall of swirling flame, that covers a wide range as it races along the ground and sets the vast area ablaze. After expelling the intense flame from the user's mouth, the user manipulates this massive flame as it travels forward along the ground, and spreads it in different directions creating multiple circular walls of intense flame spiraling inwards, which are of the size 2m and 1m in diameter and are 2 feet thick that looks similar to a swirl pattern. These circular walls are formed alternate to each other along it's widespread area. This technique can engulf the target(s) in a veritable sea of flames as long as it lasts on the field. If used on a combustible terrain such as a forest or in a confined area, it can greatly increase the possibility of the target's incineration.
*Can be used twice.
*The jutsu lasts for 2 turns.
*No S-rank and above fire jutsus in the same and the following turn.
*The user needs to wait for at least 2 turns before he can use it again.
~Declined~ OP and Similar techniques exist, and not to mention very vague.
~Resubmitting(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Šamaš kotei) Summoning Technique: Šamaš The Emperor
Type: Supplementry
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons Šamaš The Emperor, one of the oldest bustard. He has a golden colored crest on his head as result of his fire affinity. He is a fairly large summon about as big as the Hawk Sasuke summoned. He is able to use fire techniques up to S-rank and 1 S-rank lightning technique as a result of intense training with the user. As he grew up in extremely hot climate and by having a affinity towards fire, he is impervious to fire techniques B-rank and below(see contract). He is exceptionally fast and can carry one person on his back with great maneuverability providing the user with good aerial skills. He has trained himself to use his beak and claws as extra means of attack.
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Lasts for 4 turns max.
Note: Any other techniques used by Šamaš counts towards the user's move count.
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✘ Declined ✘ Only one elemental affinity allowed per summon so remove the lightning, remove being impervious to Fire techniques i won't allow that, you can replace it with another ability if you want but make it reasonable, again all that great maneuverability and good aerial skills are all vague so fix it.
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(Kuchiyose no jutsu: Šamaš kotei) Summoning Technique: Šamaš The Emperor
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user summons Šamaš The Emperor, one of the oldest bustard. He has a golden colored crest on his head as result of his fire affinity. He is a fairly large summon about as big as the Hawk Sasuke summoned. He is able to use fire techniques up to S-rank as a result of intense training with the user. He is exceptionally fast and can carry one person on his back and with his sharp senses he provides the user all the aid he needs. Šamaš also has the ability to shoot feathers infused with his katon chakra from his fingered wingtips that can pierce through rocks. He has trained himself to use his beak and claws as extra means of attack.
Note: Can only be summoned once per battle.
Note: Lasts for 4 turns max.
Note: Any techniques used by Šamaš counts towards the user's move count.
~Declined~ *sigh* what sharp senses are you talking about? you just got yourself into a whole other issue, keep in mind that the fire chakra infused feathers can't counter other techniques, they are simply projectiles infused with fire chakra, like a kunai, unless you give it a rank, and a usage limit.
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.(Katon: Jigoku no Uzumaku Honō no Niwa) Fire Release: Hell's Swirling Flame Garden
Type: Supplementary/defensive/offensive
Rank: S
Range: Short-long
Chakra cost: 40(+10 to keep it active)
Damage points: 80
Description: In this technique the user performs the Tiger hand seal, and then kneads the Chakra inside his body converting it into fire. He then expels from his mouth a massive wall of swirling flame, that covers a wide range as it races along the ground and sets the vast area ablaze. After expelling the intense flame from the user's mouth, the user manipulates this massive flame as it travels forward along the ground, and spreads it in different directions creating multiple circular walls of intense flame spiraling inwards, which are of the size 2m and 1m in diameter and are 2 feet thick that looks similar to a swirl pattern. These circular walls are formed alternate to each other along it's widespread area. This technique can engulf the target(s) in a veritable sea of flames as long as it lasts on the field. If used on a combustible terrain such as a forest or in a confined area, it can greatly increase the possibility of the target's incineration.
*Can be used twice.
*The jutsu lasts for 2 turns.
*No S-rank and above fire jutsus in the same and the following turn.
*The user needs to wait for at least 2 turns before he can use it again.
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~Declined~ OP and Similar techniques exist, and not to mention very vague.
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