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[Alyx]

(Raiton: Fukuro no Giragira) Lightning Style: Owl's Glare
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user quickly gathers lightning chakra on the eyes, making them glow, iluminating the path. If eye contact is made with the opponent, a beam of lightning is shot to pierce the opponent's eyes. The beam is virtually untrackable, due to an optical illusion: Since the beam travels straight forward, all the opponent see are the glowing eyes. Only experienced doujutsu users or chakra sensors (Sage rank), will be able to notice the slight increase of chakra/glow as the beam is being shot, and as such are able to respond correctly.. In the case the opponent notices, it is easily blockable, for if it it's anything other then soft tissue (I.e. Eyes) the max it can do is leave 2 small wounds.
*Can only be used thrice, lasts 3 turns, where the user can shoot 2 pairs of beams throughout*

(Raiton: Harinezumi no Mayowasu ) Lightning Release: Deceiving Porcupine
Rank: A
Range: Physical Touch
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user is able to expell lightning chakra from up to 3 adjacent Chakra Points, and insert it on the opponent's Nervous System. This technique works best if the user releases the lightning from the finger's chakra points, and the chakra power has the ability to paralize the opponent's muscles completly. If expelled from any other chakra point, the user can only paralize the arm or leg touched. (This doesn't apply to Gentle Fist users).
*Lasts 1 turn*
*Can only be used twice*

(Katon/Raiton: Mure Sai no Shuuren) Fire/Lightning Style: The Drill of the Rhinoceros Crash
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Point: 80
Description: The user will preform 3 handseals, and quickly spit a continuous stream of fire, which will start to spin with a great speed forming a huge drill. This rotation can be either around the user or near the user, the tip of the drill being pointed towards anywhere the user wishes it to point. As the user starts spitting the fire, the user will preform a different handseal, which will then start enveloping the fire drill with lightning chakra. As both elements start to friction on each other, the drill starts spinning substantially faster and will increase the temperature largely, all adding to the piercing power of the technique. At the user's wish, the bright drill can be shot at great speed towards the desired location, going on a straight line until the user decides to make it explode, blasting outwards multiple similar drills, significantly smaller in side.
*The large drill can shoot to Long Range, the small drills will be shot in a short range radius*
*Both phases can be done at the same time by two shinobis*
*Can only be used once every 4 turns, for a maximum of 2 times, given the chakra strain*
*Can't use Lightning or Fire Techniques above S rank in the next 2 turns*

No questions here for me

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Ah no, I worked my ass off to create those. Analyze them better!

 

[Alyx]

The things I do for love…anyways, Owl’s Glare you knead chakra into your eyes to start glowing. If you make eye contact, and shoot beams of lightning as a result. They are hard to discern due to an optical illusion it creates when looking at someone. All they would see is the glowing eyes, but someone with Dojutsu or chakra sensory would be capable of detecting the beams approaching them.

Porcupine is basically a physical contact technique that when touching someone you release a discharge of electricity. Once you, if its human target it shocks them and prevents them from moving the affected area. However, if used from the finger tips, it can cause fully body paralysis to the subject. Very quick and deceptive if you’re in a hand to hand situation since with non chakra tai you can use this in the same TF.

Last but not least, Drill allows you to create a drill shaped construct after spewing the stream out composed of flames. Once you do this; the drill can be coated with an additional infusion of Lightning Release chakra. They will both spin together causing friction to occur. Once done the drill is released swiftly, as it cruises down releasing smaller sized drills until the user desires. Once they do, the drill will explode when the user wills it. Pretty cool technique !

 

[Lili-Chwan]

This was mostly for the praise than the analysis ahah, very good, they're yours now

 

[Alyx]

(Fuinjutsu: Sora no Sonetto) Sealing Technique: Skyward Sonnet

Spoiler

Rank: S - Rank
Type: Supplementary, Offensive, Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 80
Description: Skyward Sonnet is a unique technique which utilizes Fuinjutsu in conjunction with Kyujutsu. After the formation of three hand seals, the user will immediately make contact with an arrow on their person. Once they do, they will knock the arrow to the bow, releasing the bow into the direction of the opponent. The arrow in question is wrapped in fuinjutsu script after the inital hand seals are made, causing it to gain a spotted coloration of sorts, but the true nature comes in once the seal is triggered. The script located on the arrow would immediately trigger upon physical contact with foreign chakra as it releases a sort of cone like formation of around the arrow. This cone like barrier is two meters wide and high; but also covered in the same script. Once in it comes into contact with the opposing technique, it would become trapped within the barrier in question. The script however would keep the technique anchored onto the barrier (though only for for the same turn of use). The barrier, due to have the original foreign technique anchored to it would also adapt the characteristics of the technique’s nature i.e if a fire technique becomes anchored to it, the barrier would become a giant flaming arrow in turn etc though will rapidly spin as it drills into the opponent's body. This technique can only be used twice per battle, leaving the user unable to utilize Fuinjutsu of above A Rank for three turns. This also requires Adv. Fuinjutsu training in order to utilize it, with it affecting techniques of 70 chakra or lower.

( Fuuinjutsu: Furui no Manmosu ) Sealing Technique: The Tusk of the Lost Mammoth

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( +20 per turn )
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Mammoth is an ancient sealing technique that combines Elemental Ninjutsu with Fuuinjutsu. The user creates a ball of chakra the size of a pea, with the kanji for "Sheer Pressure" inscribed in it's surface. The user is then able of shooting the pea-sized inscription towards any active enemy elemental ninjutsu, which will cause an inscription to encase it wholy and immediately compress it back into a pea-sized black ball of dense elemental chakra. The compressed ball will now show a sealing insignia of with the kanju for "Tusk" which will absorb the user's chakra and allow for the manipulation of the Shape of the walls of the Tusk that compressed the element, which can passively turn into any generic weapon and be safely controlled either remotely or physically by the user, which can then be used to perform Bukijutsu and any fitting Weapon CFS, passively acquiring an elemental edge of the sealed element of +20 damage and rank boost to their technique, as the Tusk assumes the shape of the necessary weapon required to perform it. The user is capable of performing one freestyle action with the weapon itself, be it a slash, or a parry, with the power and rank of the original technique, per turn, counting towards the jutsu slot per turn. This attack will always follow the main release of the elemental nature, and entails generic and simple contact-based attacks like slices, parries, cuts, strikes, etc. Otherwise, the user can also passively expend the elemental chakra inside the Tusk and create simple constructs that detach from the Tusk ball, like blasts, jets, crescents etc, which will expend the chakra that was previously sealed. So if an S ranked technique was used, the user can detach up to 1 S rank construct, 2 A ranks, 4 B ranks, 8 C ranks or 16 D ranks. This can only be used up to Mid-range. Only one contact-based attack or dettach-based attack can be used per turn. Using dettach-based attacks lower the potential rank of any other attack used with with the Tusk.

Note: This technique can only be used 2 times per battle, while only lasting a maximum of 3 turns, whereupon the Tusk will collapse upon itself harmlessly. It requires the user to wait 2 turns before reusing the technique.
Note: Since the user is sealing the enemy technique with Fuuinjutsu, and then manipulating the inscription walls that compressed the enemy element, this is not considered full manipulation of the element, but merely hijacking it. The user is incapable of sealing a liquid water jutsu and turn it into oil-based water jutsu, even if Water Ninjutsu can be used like that. Thus, even when sealing elements that the user does not own, like CE or AE, the user is never manipulating the original element or technique, merely the fuuinjutsu itself.

Alright, you have any questions for me? For me, it's basically crafting a pea sized ball of chakra. It has a unique script on it that expands when against opposing techniques, absorbs it and "gains" the element. You can reshape it into a weapon for Bukijutsu or other weapons and use it as though it was the real deal. You can also release other projectiles from the weapon with the element you absorb with it. You however cannot manipulate the element outside of this with your chakra directly, with the script basically doing all the work lol.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

(Fuinjutsu: Sora no Sonetto) Sealing Technique: Skyward Sonnet

Spoiler

Rank: S - Rank
Type: Supplementary, Offensive, Defensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 80
Description: Skyward Sonnet is a unique technique which utilizes Fuinjutsu in conjunction with Kyujutsu. After the formation of three hand seals, the user will immediately make contact with an arrow on their person. Once they do, they will knock the arrow to the bow, releasing the bow into the direction of the opponent. The arrow in question is wrapped in fuinjutsu script after the inital hand seals are made, causing it to gain a spotted coloration of sorts, but the true nature comes in once the seal is triggered. The script located on the arrow would immediately trigger upon physical contact with foreign chakra as it releases a sort of cone like formation of around the arrow. This cone like barrier is two meters wide and high; but also covered in the same script. Once in it comes into contact with the opposing technique, it would become trapped within the barrier in question. The script however would keep the technique anchored onto the barrier (though only for for the same turn of use). The barrier, due to have the original foreign technique anchored to it would also adapt the characteristics of the technique’s nature i.e if a fire technique becomes anchored to it, the barrier would become a giant flaming arrow in turn etc though will rapidly spin as it drills into the opponent's body. This technique can only be used twice per battle, leaving the user unable to utilize Fuinjutsu of above A Rank for three turns. This also requires Adv. Fuinjutsu training in order to utilize it, with it affecting techniques of 70 chakra or lower.

( Fuuinjutsu: Furui no Manmosu ) Sealing Technique: The Tusk of the Lost Mammoth

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( +20 per turn )
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Mammoth is an ancient sealing technique that combines Elemental Ninjutsu with Fuuinjutsu. The user creates a ball of chakra the size of a pea, with the kanji for "Sheer Pressure" inscribed in it's surface. The user is then able of shooting the pea-sized inscription towards any active enemy elemental ninjutsu, which will cause an inscription to encase it wholy and immediately compress it back into a pea-sized black ball of dense elemental chakra. The compressed ball will now show a sealing insignia of with the kanju for "Tusk" which will absorb the user's chakra and allow for the manipulation of the Shape of the walls of the Tusk that compressed the element, which can passively turn into any generic weapon and be safely controlled either remotely or physically by the user, which can then be used to perform Bukijutsu and any fitting Weapon CFS, passively acquiring an elemental edge of the sealed element of +20 damage and rank boost to their technique, as the Tusk assumes the shape of the necessary weapon required to perform it. The user is capable of performing one freestyle action with the weapon itself, be it a slash, or a parry, with the power and rank of the original technique, per turn, counting towards the jutsu slot per turn. This attack will always follow the main release of the elemental nature, and entails generic and simple contact-based attacks like slices, parries, cuts, strikes, etc. Otherwise, the user can also passively expend the elemental chakra inside the Tusk and create simple constructs that detach from the Tusk ball, like blasts, jets, crescents etc, which will expend the chakra that was previously sealed. So if an S ranked technique was used, the user can detach up to 1 S rank construct, 2 A ranks, 4 B ranks, 8 C ranks or 16 D ranks. This can only be used up to Mid-range. Only one contact-based attack or dettach-based attack can be used per turn. Using dettach-based attacks lower the potential rank of any other attack used with with the Tusk.

Note: This technique can only be used 2 times per battle, while only lasting a maximum of 3 turns, whereupon the Tusk will collapse upon itself harmlessly. It requires the user to wait 2 turns before reusing the technique.
Note: Since the user is sealing the enemy technique with Fuuinjutsu, and then manipulating the inscription walls that compressed the enemy element, this is not considered full manipulation of the element, but merely hijacking it. The user is incapable of sealing a liquid water jutsu and turn it into oil-based water jutsu, even if Water Ninjutsu can be used like that. Thus, even when sealing elements that the user does not own, like CE or AE, the user is never manipulating the original element or technique, merely the fuuinjutsu itself.

Alright, you have any questions for me? For me, it's basically crafting a pea sized ball of chakra. It has a unique script on it that expands when against opposing techniques, absorbs it and "gains" the element. You can reshape it into a weapon for Bukijutsu or other weapons and use it as though it was the real deal. You can also release other projectiles from the weapon with the element you absorb with it. You however cannot manipulate the element outside of this with your chakra directly, with the script basically doing all the work lol.

All the questions I had I already asked them for quite a while in discord xD. For now I'm sans questions

 

[Alyx]

( Fuuinjutsu: Shishienjin Shinshoku Mushi ) Sealing Technique: The Vitriolage of the Corrosive Beetle

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: D-S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10-40
Damage Points: N/A ( - Equivalent Damage )
Description: Similar to Four Violet Flames Battle Encampment, the user will produce a square barrier of purple flames which will corrode the damage from opposing techniques, which can be manipulated and moved around within range. The defensive barrier will shave the damage of any technique that clashes with it until it expires, as the purple flames corrode and consume the power within it, without damaging any living entity, unlike it's simbling technique. Depending on the chakra spent producing the barrier, it will be able to deal with a single technique of equivalent tier, shaving the damage until nullification, consuming it whole, or any number of lower tiered techniques. For example, a D rank usage ( 10 chakra ) will shave 20 damage, negating the damage equivalent to a generic D rank technique that clashes with it and expires, or any E rank technique that clashes with it until time expiration. People interacting with the flames won't feel any damage effect, but will have their techniques rejected. Inner Modes or Active skills like Eight Inner Gates, Sage Mode, Doujutsu, Chakra Sensory, etc, are not affected by this technique. This barrier entails a defense against techniques that pass through it, not against skills applied to a user that passes through the barrier. This is not the case with techniques like Elemental Taijutsu or the Raikage Armour, where they use their chakra to coat around their bodies.

Note: Up to B rank, it requires 1 turn cooldown after expiration, and last up to 3 turns. A Rank and above can only last up to 2 turns and require 2 turn cooldown. A rank can only be used 4 times, S rank can only be used 2 times.
Note: A barrier will be overpowered without debuffing damage if hit with a technique 2 ranks higher, or with a difference of 20 chakra when interacting with techniques S rank and above. It is neutralized if it weakens/consumes a technique of equal tier, and is restricted to a maximum of 3 techniques of lower tier.
Note: This technique can thus be boosted externally once, with a chakra/damage debuff boost or a chakra tier boost. Damage boost won't have effect in this technique

i understand it to a degree, but can you give me a better run down on it’s mechanics please.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

( Fuuinjutsu: Shishienjin Shinshoku Mushi ) Sealing Technique: The Vitriolage of the Corrosive Beetle

Spoiler

Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: D-S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 10-40
Damage Points: N/A ( - Equivalent Damage )
Description: Similar to Four Violet Flames Battle Encampment, the user will produce a square barrier of purple flames which will corrode the damage from opposing techniques, which can be manipulated and moved around within range. The defensive barrier will shave the damage of any technique that clashes with it until it expires, as the purple flames corrode and consume the power within it, without damaging any living entity, unlike it's simbling technique. Depending on the chakra spent producing the barrier, it will be able to deal with a single technique of equivalent tier, shaving the damage until nullification, consuming it whole, or any number of lower tiered techniques. For example, a D rank usage ( 10 chakra ) will shave 20 damage, negating the damage equivalent to a generic D rank technique that clashes with it and expires, or any E rank technique that clashes with it until time expiration. People interacting with the flames won't feel any damage effect, but will have their techniques rejected. Inner Modes or Active skills like Eight Inner Gates, Sage Mode, Doujutsu, Chakra Sensory, etc, are not affected by this technique. This barrier entails a defense against techniques that pass through it, not against skills applied to a user that passes through the barrier. This is not the case with techniques like Elemental Taijutsu or the Raikage Armour, where they use their chakra to coat around their bodies.

Note: Up to B rank, it requires 1 turn cooldown after expiration, and last up to 3 turns. A Rank and above can only last up to 2 turns and require 2 turn cooldown. A rank can only be used 4 times, S rank can only be used 2 times.
Note: A barrier will be overpowered without debuffing damage if hit with a technique 2 ranks higher, or with a difference of 20 chakra when interacting with techniques S rank and above. It is neutralized if it weakens/consumes a technique of equal tier, and is restricted to a maximum of 3 techniques of lower tier.
Note: This technique can thus be boosted externally once, with a chakra/damage debuff boost or a chakra tier boost. Damage boost won't have effect in this technique

i understand it to a degree, but can you give me a better run down on it’s mechanics please.

That's a cool thing for you to do, actually. I'll correct you if you're wrong and give my input

 

[Alyx]

That's a cool thing for you to do, actually. I'll correct you if you're wrong and give my input

Right so from what I understand of it that this barrier doesn’t absolutely absorb chakra like other barriers but rather it shaves dmg from interactions with other techniques. So an A rank use of this technique would shave of -60 dmg from a technique, but I assume if like you use it vs an S Rank it continues as 20?

It also mentions that a neutral interaction completely ends the barrier but it will interact with more lower rank techniques etc.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Right so from what I understand of it that this barrier doesn’t absolutely absorb chakra like other barriers but rather it shaves dmg from interactions with other techniques. So an A rank use of this technique would shave of -60 dmg from a technique, but I assume if like you use it vs an S Rank it continues as 20?

It also mentions that a neutral interaction completely ends the barrier but it will interact with more lower rank techniques etc.

That is correct, depending on the chakra you spend with this technique, you are capable of shaving the appropriate amount of damage from opposing techniques. It works on opposing techniques that are lower tiered chakra any number of times, whereas it will be able to shave a portion of the offensive technique once at the same and up to 20 chakra higher than the barrier.

Meaning that A rank barrier ( 30 chakra ) is capable of shaving 60 damage from opposing techniques:

• vs < 30 chakra ( Not including 30 ) - Shaves 60 damage and keeps in place. If a B rank offensive technique has had it's damage boosted from 40 to 60 ( but not it's chakra ) it is consumed entirely and the barrier is kept. If that same B rank has been boosted to 80, then it passes the barrier and continues as a 20 damage technique, but the barrier is kept in place.

• vs > 30 up to < 60 chakra ( Including 30, not including 60 ) - Shaves 60 damage and is neutralized. If an A rank offensive technique has had it's damage boosted to 80, it continues as a 20 damage technique and the barrier is consumed in the process.

• vs > 60 chakra ( Including 60 ) - It does not work, does not shave any damage. An A rank technique that has been boosted to 60 chakra will overpower the barrier, break it and have no reduction in it's damage.

Up to B rank / 20 chakra, you follow the normal rank and damage system ( E-C Rank ). From B and upwards, the chakra input of the technique allows you to double that amount in damage shaved, so everytime you boost the chakra of the technique, you add to the shaving. Similarily, techniques that grant a damage debuff will also add to the technique.

 

[Alyx]

That is correct, depending on the chakra you spend with this technique, you are capable of shaving the appropriate amount of damage from opposing techniques. It works on opposing techniques that are lower tiered chakra any number of times, whereas it will be able to shave a portion of the offensive technique once at the same and up to 20 chakra higher than the barrier.

Meaning that A rank barrier ( 30 chakra ) is capable of shaving 60 damage from opposing techniques:

• vs < 30 chakra ( Not including 30 ) - Shaves 60 damage and keeps in place. If a B rank offensive technique has had it's damage boosted from 40 to 60 ( but not it's chakra ) it is consumed entirely and the barrier is kept. If that same B rank has been boosted to 80, then it passes the barrier and continues as a 20 damage technique, but the barrier is kept in place.

• vs > 30 up to < 60 chakra ( Including 30, not including 60 ) - Shaves 60 damage and is neutralized. If an A rank offensive technique has had it's damage boosted to 80, it continues as a 20 damage technique and the barrier is consumed in the process.

• vs > 60 chakra ( Including 60 ) - It does not work, does not shave any damage. An A rank technique that has been boosted to 60 chakra will overpower the barrier, break it and have no reduction in it's damage.

Up to B rank / 20 chakra, you follow the normal rank and damage system ( E-C Rank ). From B and upwards, the chakra input of the technique allows you to double that amount in damage shaved, so everytime you boost the chakra of the technique, you add to the shaving. Similarily, techniques that grant a damage debuff will also add to the technique.

Great, that’s good news. As agreed this will be 1500 kumi

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Sounds good

 

[Alyx]

(Doton: Kame no Nigasu) Earth Release: The Escape of the Turtle
Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user is able to quickly call forth a burst of Earth chakra from his body, almost immediately vanish inside a large turtle shell. The shell is made of thick earth and crystals, deeply compressed, which makes it an almost perfect defence against blunt or sharp attacks (The table of elemental weaknesses still maintains). With one handseal, the user can make the shell dismantle, and shoot outwards chunks of rock.
*Due to the chakra strain, the user won't be able to perform summoning jutsus in the next turn, nor use Earth jutsus higher than A rank, and in the next turn won't be able to use higher than S rank*
*The shell happens as fast or faster than Gaara's dome*

Here we go again, for 1.5K and no questions here

 

[Lili-Chwan]

One of my first clutch moves xD you got it

 

[Alyx]

( Suiton: Hiryō ) Water Release: Carabao Fertilizer
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: N/A ( +10 to infused Technique )
Damage: N/A ( +20 to Infused Technique )
Description: Carabao Fertilizer is an infusion of water chakra directly within the genesis of another technique. It has the ability to produce the necessary amount of water to initiate the materialization of another that would otherwise require a water source, or simply boost it's body and strength by +20 damage, and can be used in the same time-frame as a summoning technique to call forth an aquatic animal that can stay in battle with a small ball of water similar to Water Prison ( the low rank of the technique allows only for summons smaller than 2 adult humans ). Finally, the infusion of water can be used on Biological Advanced elements composed of Water and Earth, like Wood, in order to nourish and strengthen their body, to produce the same boost ( It works on Elements that would typically benefit from the infusion of Water, akin to Wood, like Mushroom, Plant, Algae, while excluding other Biological elements like Proteins, Bacteria, etc ).

Note: Requires a 1 turn cooldown. Can only be used 5 times. Can't boost techniques higher than S rank.


As agreed, paying 1500 for this. No real questions here on my end.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Pretty simple support technique to boost your arsenal. Consider it bought