[Raiton] with Excalibur

[Jᴀʏ]

1. This technique really depends on the context, if the opponent were stuck and the user of the technique was far enough away it could prove to be a strong technique. However it could prove to be disadvantageous if the user were near the opponent and attempted this, not only could the opponent dodge but the technique could hit the user.


2. The first benefit of this technique would be the fact that it could hit multiple opponents, or multiple projectiles. Since it's a relatively simple technique, as long as there isn't and water near the user during the attack and the user doesn't attack water he should be fine.


3. This technique would have to be my favorite, the user can control multiple swords to keep the opponent busy, this technique allows the user to attack from all directions and at his own discretion, and the attack can last for multiple turns. However the user is unable to use other techniques and must keep focus, plus chakra is deducted each turn.

OOC: Sorry for the late reply lot of things happen, family stuff, finals, but the main reason I couldn't reply was because I hadn't had internet access for the longest.

 

[Excālibur1]

(Raiton: Iwa Nadare) - Lightning Style: Stone Avalanche

Don't see how it can affect you. You can word it in such a way that the hill starting right before you would crumble rather than from your feet unless you are a total whacko and decided to suicide.

(Raiton: Shuurai Rappa no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Horn Technique

It's perfectly fine to attack water as long as you are not in it. This helps in electrifying the water so whoever steps in it will be somewhat paralyzed. I say somewhat as this technique is only C-Rank so it won't be that much effective.

( Raiton: Denki Railanshō ) - Lightning Release: Electric Discharge Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will manipulate their lightning chakra in their dominant hand generating electrical bolts of lightning around their forearm. The user will then slam their palm onto the ground causing the electrical energy to become discharged sending out bolts of lightning into the ground and around them up to 5 meters.

 

[Jᴀʏ]

1. Great technique, biggest advantage would have to be the fact that you can use it as an attack and defense. It keeps the opponent at a distance, and can only be used at short distance. However I'm pretty sure this could backfire. Other than that and the range issue it doesn't really have many disadvantages.

 

[Excālibur1]

What do you exactly mean by backfire? How do you think it might backfire?

 

[Jᴀʏ]

What do you exactly mean by backfire? How do you think it might backfire?

While the attack is being performed, or just as it's being launched the opponent could launch a water attack. To electrocute the user with his own lightning.

 

[Vegeta]

OK, taking over the training. So, here's how my training works. I post, you break down. Seems easy right? I want you to explain each jutsu to me in a manner that lets me know you truly understand the way it works. Doesn't have to be the same for each one, could just be some pro's or cons, or things you really like about it or combo's you can imagine. Use your nugget, and feel free to ask questions if you dont really understand it. I will read each reply, and if I feel you missed anything I will add to what you posted, and if I feel you grasp the jutsu, we will move forwards. Alright, lets see how you do..

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(Raiton: Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Release Wall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra while doing the Ox hand seal and then releases it in front of him whilst holding their hands out. By doing this, the user generates a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver massive shocks to anything that comes in contact with it.

(Raiton: Reijingu Sandā) - Lightning Style: Raging Thunder
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user creates a half shaped dome of lightning that can be pushed forward in a similar way to a "wave of lightning" attack. It has both paralyzing and shocking properties as well as physical momentum.

(Raiton: Sandā Sāburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around his fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. The user can then punch a target, unleashing the lightning in the form of a localized electrical explosion.

 

[Jᴀʏ]

1. The first technique works by performing the Ox Seal and generating Raiton Chakra to create a wall of electricty. It can be used as offense and defense. I wouldn't use this against a wind projectile but most definetly earth projectiles. It can also be used as an attack when opponents try to use close quarters combat. I want to improve my taijutsu but at the moment I'm definetly not a master so I would stick to long range and use that technique when a higher ranked opponent comes in for a physical attack. Or simple to defend against a higher ranked earth technique.

2. The user creates a half dome of light ing that barrles into the opponent, the jutsu can paralyse and shock the opponent so it's incredibly useful in combination attacks to immobilise the target. However the technique has a short range so its not possible to use it in every situation.


3. I have no idea why this is called Saber since it looks more like a punch. The user simply gathers raiton chakra around his fist creating a sphere of pure raiton chakra. I imagine it would look like Barts Bari Punch from One Piece except shrouded in lightning. In addition to that upon contact the user can release the energy in an electrical explosion which would most likely result in knockback. This also seems like a technique I would use in a combination attack, maybe to launch my opponent into a trap.

 

[Vegeta]

The last one is great to use in combination with taijutsu to add that extra kick from the electrical explosion. Can't go wrong with elemental tai attacks. Very good, keep it up like that and you should be fine. Moving on..

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(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, he releases his lightning chakra into the ground, using it to forcefully shape the earth into 4 big pillars (proportionate to the target area) around the target. Once they rise, they unleash a barrage of lightning bolts, currents and shocks to whatever is inside, paralyzing, shocking and damaging the target from all around.

(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40 (+20 to Water Technique)
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat hand seals, the user generates a large amount of lightning from their hands, which can then be either released in an unfocused manner or passed through conductive materials to improve the electrical power of the technique, namely in conjunction with Water Techniques. In fact, certain users have showed that its possible to, if the user has the ability to mold both Water and Lightning chakras at the same time (for example, Darui who has Storm Release), unleash this particular technique at the same time as they exhale/spit some water technique (which needs to consist of a stream of water), combining both in a seemingly consecutive move. Other ninjas will need to use a clone or an ally for the same effect.

 

[Jᴀʏ]

1. The first technique is a technique in which the opponent launches an electrical discharge into the air, in order to mold a lightning bolt that will strike down the opponent. It can't be delayed to use as a trap, but it's incredibly fast. So I imagine it wojld be hard to dodge. I would create a diversion then use this technique to slow my opponents down.

2. After a string of hand seals the user will slam the ground and send raiton throughout the ground to force the earth to shape four pillars. These pillars surrond the target and once their formed they release eletrical discharges and lightning to the opponent. Shocking and paralysing him. I would use this after sticky earth as the second technique in a pretty powerful combination.


3. After a string of handseals the user will release a powerful unfocused stream of lightning towards the opponent. This can also be used through conductive elements like water to increase the damage done to the target. Considering normal ninjas need to use clones I doubt I would use this technique with its water addition considering the strain it has on chakra. However I would use it alone at close range to ensure it landing.

 

[Vegeta]

Yeah never liked that you need a clone for it. If I have a clone he's doing something that causes more than +20 damage that's for sure. Ok, moving on..

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(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Rod
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air, charging lightning. He will then unleash the lightning energy at the enemy target in the form of a lightning bolt.

(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra between his/her palms forming what appears to be a lightning "rope". The user can then whip that lightning around as if its a true whip, hitting his target.

 

[Jᴀʏ]

1. The opponent clasps his hands to gather eletricty and then disperses this electricty through the ground. When the current approches the target. It can split into multiple tendrils attack mutiple targets. It's neat that it can attack mutiple users. But its kinda obvious what the users trying to do. Simply jumping in the air can help the opponet evade.

2. The user raises they're hands in the air gathering raiton chakra, they then release the chakra into the air unleashing lightning bolt at the enemy. Simple attacking but it telegraphs the fact that its an aerial atttack.


3. The user generates lightning based chakra between his/her palms forming a lightnig rope. It can be used like a whip attackinng the opponent. Its a mid ranged attack I wonder if it has paralyzing effects. Also why is it listed as a defensive move I mean it may be able to whip away projectiles but I don't know. Other than that its a pretty neat jutsu and simple to understand.

 

[Vegeta]

In this situation they would need a jutsu to jump in the air, as you can't free form dodge a technique. The last I'd say it's usage is primarily offensive and it would probably shock them on contact due to it's nature, but as for defensive it could be used to for example swat away and break up small earthen projectiles of A ranking and below. Moving on..

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(Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting and rampages towards his target.

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself but made from lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

 

[Jᴀʏ]

1. The user charges one of his hands with lightning and then releases it creating a dog of lightning the lightning stays attach to the users arm like a leash. It seems unique. But it looks like it only extends to mid range.

2. I like this technique the hser spits lightning from his mouth that can branch off into multiple directions not only is it capable of hitting multiple opponents but it extends to long range and the user can use it while his other limbs are occupied.


3. Super strong clone technique, however it says the clone can use ninjutsu and taijutsu as well as other techniques but then says only lightning technqiues about to B rank? I think it must mean it can use other techniques unrestricted but can only use B rank and below lightning techs. The clone is created from lightning and can return to its original form after disappearing..

 

[Vegeta]

I think it means just lightning B rank and below, I wouldn't try any other element with a lightning shadow clone. Moving on..

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(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.

(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.

(Raiton: Shuriken Seigyo no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Shuriken Control Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will take out two large shuriken or Windmill Shuriken and channel their raiton chakra into them. They will then throw them at their target to pin them down and maintain a connection with the shuriken through a electrical cable that delivers a numbing shock to paralyse the target and restrict their movements.
Note: Numbing Effect lasts for one turn.

 

[Jᴀʏ]

1. Basically the user channels raiton chakra into his sword to increase the cutting ability of the users sword. However I probably wouldn't use it since +15 isn't worth a move slot and B rank chakra cost.

2. This technique works by discharging a electrical current into the air that triggers a thunder bolt to strike down on to the opponent. This is a quick attack that extends to long range. I'd use it when I want to attack from all directions.


3. This technique works by charging two large shuriken or a wind mill shuriken with raiton chakra and then throw it. It can pin down the opponent and numb the opponent with electricty from a cable connected to it. However the numbness only last for a turn. Can the user use the cable to change the trajectory of the shuriken?

 

[Vegeta]

Yeah, it's basically for if your already using a Kenjutsu attack, you can slap that on it for a nice boost which depending on the situation could give your attack the edge. As for the shuriken, I guess you could control it free formed somewhat but I would be weary of doing it, as it doesn't specify that in the jutsu. Best to stick to the description in a case like that. Moving on..

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( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.

( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. However the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques while sustaining the technique. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active and use it to ram against them. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.

( Raiton: Kaminari no Shōgeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into the air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.
Note: Lasts only the turn in which its used.

 

[Jᴀʏ]

1. User charges their palm with purplish lightning and discharges it in a physical attack. This can knock the opponent back, towards traps etc. Another addition to my close range arsenal. However it's a bummer it can't be used long range too.

2. The user manipulates their chakra in order to create a barrier of plasma. This barrier can defend against all sorts of attacks ranging from wide range to short condensed attacks. However they have to be 40 DMG or less. Hm, does ramming the opponent with the barrier cause 40 DMG? Or is that just when you discharge the plasma ball?


3. A short to mid range attack where the user releases a lightning orb into the air and then lightning bolts rain down onto the opponent for one turn. I like how there are multiple chances for the technique to hit. Unlike your average thunder bolt attack. However it only lasts for one turn so make sure you make necessary preparations. Isolating the opponent, dazing them etc.

 

[Vegeta]

Both do 40 damage, and the plasma is a great defense against A rank and below Earth techniques. Very good, you seem to have the hang of this. Moving on.

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( Raiton: Fusei Shuriken Chidori Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Rigged Shuriken One Thousand Birds Style
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will utilize a large shuriken and channel a chidori into it. The user will then throw the shuriken charged with chidori towards the opponent resulting in paralysing them on impact. (paralysis lasts for 1 turn)
Note: Must Know Chidori

( Raiton: Denkō Noroshi ) - Lightning Style: Lightning Signal
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: After forming the necessary hand seals, the user points their hands towards a certain direction and triggers an electrical discharge, which then explodes in a specific form. When the hands are raised to the sky, this technique can be use as a signal flare.

( Raiton: Amigumo ) - Lightning Style: Spider Webs
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: After kneading chakra in the body and converting it to lightning, the user places their hand on the ground which creates a surge of electricity which originates from them and spans out around the user creating a web of electricity around them. Anyone caught within this web is electrocuted by the lightning's effect.

 

[Jᴀʏ]

1. Pretty simple technique the user will channel their chidoro into a shuriken which can paralyze the opponent for turn if it makes contact. This allows the user to potentially end the match.

2. Useless technqiue a signal for what? Seems like a waste of chakra tbvh.

3. Neat short to mid range technique that traps and electrocutes opponents trapped in a web of electricty created by the user wish it had a longer range and could be delayed but it is what it is.

 

[Vegeta]

Yeah the last 2 weren't there when I learned raiton. I like the 3rd as well, and the 2nd one would be for rp purposes mostly, like if you needed to signal to nearby villagers or something. In any case, try to be just a bit more descriptive. Moving on.

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( Raiton: Raisogekishin ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Rat Violent Quake
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Ox → Boar → Tiger the user releases a discharge of electricity that shapes itself into several destructive disks of lightning. These are shot at the targets with great speed.

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty