training with my sensei (Nemesis)

[~Nemesis~]

first i train me to control my chakra to better use it and so i can make more clones without putting all my chakra off. then i train me all the time making clones and after a long time a could make a perfect copy of myself, but i wasn´t happy at all because i wanted more clones of myself. Thats why i trained more and i begon making more and more clones.

I don't understand what you have said here dude. you "train yourself" why don't you just say, "I apply my chakra here" or "Concentrating on my chakra"

 

[orcito]

because i have some ficulties with english

 

[~Nemesis~]

because i have some ficulties with english

Oh sorry.

*Suddenly, water starts to materialize fro the air and fills up your air with a large mass of water*

(Suiton: Suikōtoppa) – Water Release: Water Shark Breakthrough
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: short
Chakra cost 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a water shark to jump into the air and bolt towards the opponent, striking them.
Note: Requires a water source.

Method: you touch the water, and whilst touching the water you imagine of a shark, then you release your chakra into the water materialize a large body of a shark that will fly through the air.

 

[orcito]

*I concentrate and gather my chakra in my hand. When I have gathered enough chakra, I touch the water and I imagine the picture of a shark in my head. As this happens, I release my gathered chakre in the water and I use it to create a shark of water that flies in the air.*

 

[~Nemesis~]

Good Good, Whats the next jutsu?

 

[orcito]

(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water Style: Water Fang Bullet