The Rookie Pirates [Revived]

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So yall like pirates huh... will come join ... Its pretty much just like nb but wayyyyy better
Actually, it's not. That site is pretty bad compared to here. I have an account over there, and it is not worth it. But that's me

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Post #90 — Smuggler Island Post #24
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[The two finally stand up and stop their tears. Rick rushes in and joins them.]
Lazel: "listen, not to break a touching moment and all, but we need to get Doyle.”
Archie: "wait, what made you work for Doyle in the first place?"


[Pearson looks down for a moment and takes in a deep breath.]
Pearson: “When I was looking for Master Ryu, I took up bounty hunting. There was this group that I got along with for a while. After sometime, the group and I headed over here to get ourselves a bounty. Doyle was looking for the same guy though. In the end, three of my comrades got killed and I was forced to protect myself by working for him. I guess after all this time, I just got so used to the mafia life that I never bothered to fight him again.
[Lazel shakes his head with slight disappointment]
Lazel: “Well, what’s done is done. Nothing you can do about it except moving on and fixing what you’ve done in the past. So will you help us take him down?”

[Pearson looks surprised for a second and notices the three of them happily accepting him. He then gives a tough looking grin to them.]
Pearson: “Hell yeah! Follow me, he’s o—

[As Pearson is speaking, another swarm of Doyle's men and Marines rush in. The swarm circle around Lazel, Archie, Pearson, and Rick. Archie drops his bow and Pearson takes out his swords. The two go back to back, turn their heads to each other and smile.]
Archie: “Hey captain, go on ahead.”
Pearson: “Doyle’s on the 13th floor on top. That’s where the safe is”
Rick: “We can handle these guys for you.”

All Three of Them: "Go stop Doyle!!!”


[Lazel smiles and and rushes forward. He jumps on a Marines head and uses him as leverage to jump to the second story railing. He grabs onto it and gets on the second floor. Before going to the stairs, he turns for a second and sees Pearson and Archie fighting side-by-side in perfect synchronization. He smiles and runs towards the stairs.]
 

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Actually, it's not. That site is pretty bad compared to here. I have an account over there, and it is not worth it. But that's me[/FONT][/SIZE]
Nahhh guy, here it takes no type of skill to win a battle or even rank up.. shit all you have to do is post or random ass threads and you can get kage level in no time. on here its some must god modding and powerplaying its not even funny.. on opb that shit doesnt happen
 

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Nahhh guy, here it takes no type of skill to win a battle or even rank up.. shit all you have to do is post or random ass threads and you can get kage level in no time. on here its some must god modding and powerplaying its not even funny.. on opb that shit doesnt happen
Well, I don't really care about rank at all. I just like this site better. This site seems much more stable, organized, and filled with a better membership. One Piece Bay feels way to jumbled for me.

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[Lazel continues towards the stairs and races up them. Along the way, several guards are standing by, and Lazel effortlessly knocks them out, one by one. Meanwhile, down on the first floor, Archie, Pearson and Rick are handling things. As they are fighting, they are all casually sharing a conversation. As they speak, they take down another one, practically toying with the swarm of men.]
Rick: “These guys just keep coming. My knuckle braces are wearing down.”
Archie: “You complaining Rick? This is nothing. I can go all night.”
Pearson: “Pfft, you guys are so pathetic. I can go for the next week."


[At the same time, all three of them attack the remaining people. Rick knocks a Marine out by punching him square in the jaw. Archie draws his bow and shoots an arrow that begins to burst in flames and blasts another henchmen. Pearson draws his swords and has both his arms extended to his sides. He dashes at the last henchmen and slices him by bringing his swords together. All three men fall at the same time. Archie and Pearson place there weapons back. Rick looks at them and says something.]
Pearson: “Guys. There’s one more person."

[Archie and Pearson look and notice the Marine captain that held Lazel and Archie previously. Archie continues to put his weapon back and casually walks to the Marine Captain. He gets a few inches away from him and stops]
Marine Captain: “Haha, you guys are in a load of trouble. Get ready to —”

[Without hesitation, Archie gives a solid right hook to the Captain’s face and he falls to the floor.]
Archie: “That was for hurting my captain."

[Around the same time, Lazel has reached the top floor and located the vault room. He opens the two doors and walks in. Doyle is on the other side of the room and standing still, staring at the vault, not facing Lazel.]
Doyle: “So, you made it all this way? That’s too bad. I don’t usually kill with my own hands. But for you… Oh you’re a special exception"

[Doyle turns around and Lazel swallows his breath for a second after seeing the front side of Doyle. Smiling at Lazel, is Doyle, who looks like a Great White Shark]
 
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Finally after several matches, the tournament closes down to four of the strongest members. Kai, Gohan, Ray and Kira. The two ladies watch closely as they decide on whom to take as a partner.
 

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Post #92 — Smuggler Island Post #26
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[Doyle gives Lazel A sadistic smile, showcasing his impressively sharp shark teeth. Doyle removes his jacket and drops it on the floor. On his, now even larger, neck is the tubing of water. Lazel realizes the purpose of it now. The water tubing wrapped around his neck provides his gills with the water to breathe. Lazel disregards this and begin speaking, confident he has analyze the situation and how to handle it.]
Lazel: “Geez Bobby, I didn't know you're as much a freak on the outside as you are in the inside."

[Doyle gives us Mark, amused by Lazel's claim]
Doyle: “I told you boy. You will address me as Mr. Doyle. Associates and enemies alike will address me as such."
Lazel: "Sorry, I didn't catch that. I was busy thinking of having some fish for dinner."


[Doyle gets slightly frustrated and begins to raise his voice]
Doyle: “I'm getting tired of this boy"
Lazel: "good, I've been bored out of my mind with your little goonies."


[Lazel gets in a prepared fighting stance while Doyle stays still. Lazel makes his move and runs towards Doyle. He jumps high and aims his fist right for Doyle's face. Right before moving, Doyle smiles. He grabs Lazel's fist with one hand and stops him in an instant. As he is grabbing his fist, Doyle uses his other hand to punch Lazel right in the gut, knocking the wind out of him. As Lazel gasps for air, still caught in Doyle's grasp, Doyle opens his jaw wide and clamps his teeth right on the Lazel's right arm.]
Lazel: “AHHHH!!!"
 

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Ophelia looks at the new completely surprise by his action
"well that's a first"
Haha, correct me if I'm wrong, but was this meant to be posted in Mirajane's Bar?




Post #93 — Smuggler Island Post #27
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[Lazel screams in pain as dole continues biting down on his arm with his monstrous set of teeth. Lazel tries not to struggle, and attempts to remain in control, though the pain is taking a toll on him. He takes his fist and lams it right into Doyle's nose. Doyle lets go immediately, and Lazel takes this opportunity to quickly get away from him. He stands a good distance away from Doyle and grabs his own bleeding arm. He bites his teeth and holds in the pain.]
Lazel: {Gah! This hurts! He bit down on the bone! Alright, I'm starting to get used to the pain, but damn. My arm's broken now. Well, as a shark, his nose is my only clear target. Gotta aim there.}

[Doyle gets up and turns to Lazel. His eyes are closed and his hand is covering his mouth and nose. Lazel prepares himself again. Suddenly, Doyle's eyes shoot open, bloodshot, and he smiles in a terrifyingly maniacal manner.]
Doyle: “BLOOD!!!"
Lazel: "Shit!"
{He's bloodthirsty. The exposure to my blood is making him go insane. Definitely need to tread carefully}


[Surprsingly, Doyle makes the first move and races towards Lazel. He throws a punch right at him. Lazel dodges and jumps on a nearby table, but Doyle persists and continues thrashing. As Doyle continues, Lazel attempts to get a few hits in. He almost manages to get a punch in, but brazes the side of Doyle's neck. Lazel then yells in pain and notices his fist is bleeding.]
Lazel: "Ahh! What the hell?!"
Doyle: "HAHAHA! You stupid little brat! Shark skin is a lot rougher than you think! NOW COME HERE!"


[Doyle then continues to attack, with Lazel losing his ground. In the chase, Doyle breaks the wall and Lazel uses that to escape and recuperate. He enters a room that appears to still be under construction, filled with beams and machines. The room is dimly lit by the light coming from the previous room. Lazel gets on a high beam and tries to analyze the situation.]

[Meanwhile, Archie, Pearson, and Rick are discussing about plans]
Archie: “We should probably head to Lazel now."
Rick: "Agreed. Let's go"


[The three nod in agreement and Pearson guides them to Doyle's location.]
 
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So I thought I would finish at least 1 island. Also, you guys should seriously check out my ! Don't forget to read the also! It's absolutely incredible and I'm sure it'll be a hit! (Just need a few people to get it started =D)




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[Pearson leads the other two to Doyle. Along the way, the all notice the henchmen of Dyle passed out]
Pearson: "Hey Archie, your captain's name is Lazel right? He must've taken out as much guys as we did."
Archie: "Haha, kinda a weird time to be impressed, but yeah. He's definitely something."


[The three of them give a chuckle and continue running towards Doyle and Lazel.]

[Meanwhile, Lazel notices that Doyle has walked in. Doyle walks by and looks around.]
Lazel: {That's weird. He was completely insane a second ago. Did he calm down? It doesn't matter. I'm taking this guy down!}

[Lazel grabs his necklace momentarily and takes in a breath. He lets go and jumps down from the beam and heads drectly towards Doyle, who is completely unaware as his back is turned.]
Lazel: {I got him! I gotta put a lot of—}

[Doyle turns around unexplainably and makes a right hook, punching Lazel to the side. Lazel is in utter shock and struggles to speak.]
Lazel: “How... Ugh.. How did y... Ahh!... What... the hell... happened?!"
Doyle: "Did you know Sharks have an innate sixth sense? It's quite astounding actually. They can feel the electromagnetic field around them. Consider it like an extra sense that gives them a 360 degree sense of vision and touch. It's very useful. Especially for catching prey."


[Lazel struggles to get up and hold his ground. Doyle then walks slowly to Lazel, smiling violently with his mouth wide open to show his ferocious teeth.]
 
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Haha, correct me if I'm wrong, but was this meant to be posted in Mirajane's Bar?




Post #93 — Smuggler Island Post #27
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[Lazel screams in pain as dole continues biting down on his arm with his monstrous set of teeth. Lazel tries not to struggle, and attempts to remain in control, though the pain is taking a toll on him. He takes his fist and lams it right into Doyle's nose. Doyle lets go immediately, and Lazel takes this opportunity to quickly get away from him. He stands a good distance away from Doyle and grabs his own bleeding arm. He bites his teeth and holds in the pain.]
Lazel: {Gah! This hurts! He bit down on the bone! Alright, I'm starting to get used to the pain, but damn. My arm's broken now. Well, as a shark, his nose is my only clear target. Gotta aim there.}

[Doyle gets up and turns to Lazel. His eyes are closed and his hand is covering his mouth and nose. Lazel prepares himself again. Suddenly, Doyle's eyes shoot open, bloodshot, and he smiles in a terrifyingly maniacal manner.]
Doyle: “BLOOD!!!"
Lazel: "Shit!"
{He's bloodthirsty. The exposure to my blood is making him go insane. Definitely need to tread carefully}


[Surprsingly, Doyle makes the first move and races towards Lazel. He throws a punch right at him. Lazel dodges and jumps on a nearby table, but Doyle persists and continues thrashing. As Doyle continues, Lazel attempts to get a few hits in. He almost manages to get a punch in, but brazes the side of Doyle's neck. Lazel then yells in pain and notices his fist is bleeding.]
Lazel: "Ahh! What the hell?!"
Doyle: "HAHAHA! You stupid little brat! Shark skin is a lot rougher than you think! NOW COME HERE!"


[Doyle then continues to attack, with Lazel losing his ground. In the chase, Doyle breaks the wall and Lazel uses that to escape and recuperate. He enters a room that appears to still be under construction, filled with beams and machines. The room is dimly lit by the light coming from the previous room. Lazel gets on a high beam and tries to analyze the situation.]

[Meanwhile, Archie, Pearson, and Rick are discussing about plans]
Archie: “We should probably head to Lazel now."
Rick: "Agreed. Let's go"


[The three nod in agreement and Pearson guides them to Doyle's location.]
XD I believe so it's over a month old
 

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Post #95 — Smuggler Island Post #29
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[Pearson, Archie, and Rick are all racing towards Lazel as fast as they possibly can. Meanwhile, Lazel is trying to get up, but is struggling to get up as he holds onto his ribs with one hand and is unable to get up because his other hand is broken from before. Doyle then continues to walk towards Lazel, breathing heavily and staring sadistically at Lazel.]
Doyle: "You know boy, you really got on my nerves. That was your mistake. I'm gonna enjoy tearing you to shreds"

[Just then, he begins to rush and open his jaws wide to bite directly at Lazel]
Doyle: "NOW DIE!!!"

SFX!!!

[Lazel, watching the whole thing sees an arrow go directly through Doyle's cheek. Immediately after, Pearson appears and swings his swords at Doyle, shocking Doyle. Doyle jumps back and yanks the arrow of out his mouth. His face now appears with a tear in his cheek and bleeding out, giving an even further gruesome appearance.]
Lazel: "Am I glad to see you guys."

[Pearson smiles without turning back, still facing Doyle. Archie rushes to Lazel and picks him up. Rick assists him.]
Lazel: “Thank you guys, but all I need is one hand and one minute. That's all I need."

[Archie and Rick look at each other and nod. Pearson, shocked at what he just heard and by the appearance of the injured Lazel looks to his brother questionably. Archie simply nods to Pearson, and Pearson steps back and puts down his swords. Lazel then moves forward and stares down at Doyle.]

Lazel: "Doyle. It's over. "

[Doyle begins to laugh maniacally. As he is laughing though, Lazel is already racing towards him. He follows suit and races towards Lazel with his mouth wide open. Lazel prepares a punch and goes straight for Doyle, and Doyle opens his mouth wide to bite Lazel.]
 

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Post #96 — Smuggler Island Post #30
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[Pearson, Archie, and Rick watch in anticipation as Lazel and Doyle rush towards each other. The two get closer and closer until they are mere inches away. Lazel throws his fist just as Doyle mouth opens wide.]

SFX!!! CLAMP!!!

[Pearson, Archie, Rick, and even Doyle give an extreme look of shock. Lazel bites down on his teeth to prevent himself from screaming from the pain. He then looks straight into Doyle's eyes and smiles.]
Lazel: "Heh, it's over now. I've got you now"

[Doyle's eyes widen in panic. He looks down and sees Lazel's arm completely inside of Doyle's mouth. He tries to open his mouth, but his teeth clamped so hard onto Lazel's arm, that his mouth is stuck there. Inside of his throat, Lazel takes down Doyle, damaging the inside of his mouth. At the same time, Lazel also punches and kicks wildly at Doyle on the outside, and Doyle tries to fight back, but struggles due to the immense pain being caused in the inside. From a distance, the three watch as Lazel turns the tables and is easily taking over the fight.]
Archie: "Holy..."
Pearson: "Damn..."
Rick: "Unbelievable..."


[Just as Lazel is about to finish Doyle off, Doyle manages to open his mouth open again. Lazel then uses it as an opportunity to release his arm. He then kicks Doyle hard in the gut, and has him hover off the floor a little, which gives Lazel an easy target. As Doyle stays in the air, Lazel jumps up and does a spinning roundhouse kick on Doyle, sending him flying to the wall, taking him out. The three of them cheer and Lazel lands on the floor, trying to play it cool and hold in the pain, but sits down. The three immediately go to help him out.]
Lazel: "Well, I told you I only needed a minute. He's just a big fish out of water after all."

[The three shake their head from the joke and help Lazel up. They all walk out and take Lazel to the nearest hospital. Lazel then thinks to himself]
Lazel: {Now this. This right here is an adventure}

[Lazel gives a smile and then goes to sleep as the others carry him away.]

 
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Actually, it's not. That site is pretty bad compared to here. I have an account over there, and it is not worth it. But that's me

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[The two finally stand up and stop their tears. Rick rushes in and joins them.]
Lazel: "listen, not to break a touching moment and all, but we need to get Doyle.”
Archie: "wait, what made you work for Doyle in the first place?"


[Pearson looks down for a moment and takes in a deep breath.]
Pearson: “When I was looking for Master Ryu, I took up bounty hunting. There was this group that I got along with for a while. After sometime, the group and I headed over here to get ourselves a bounty. Doyle was looking for the same guy though. In the end, three of my comrades got killed and I was forced to protect myself by working for him. I guess after all this time, I just got so used to the mafia life that I never bothered to fight him again.
[Lazel shakes his head with slight disappointment]
Lazel: “Well, what’s done is done. Nothing you can do about it except moving on and fixing what you’ve done in the past. So will you help us take him down?”

[Pearson looks surprised for a second and notices the three of them happily accepting him. He then gives a tough looking grin to them.]
Pearson: “Hell yeah! Follow me, he’s o—

[As Pearson is speaking, another swarm of Doyle's men and Marines rush in. The swarm circle around Lazel, Archie, Pearson, and Rick. Archie drops his bow and Pearson takes out his swords. The two go back to back, turn their heads to each other and smile.]
Archie: “Hey captain, go on ahead.”
Pearson: “Doyle’s on the 13th floor on top. That’s where the safe is”
Rick: “We can handle these guys for you.”

All Three of Them: "Go stop Doyle!!!”


[Lazel smiles and and rushes forward. He jumps on a Marines head and uses him as leverage to jump to the second story railing. He grabs onto it and gets on the second floor. Before going to the stairs, he turns for a second and sees Pearson and Archie fighting side-by-side in perfect synchronization. He smiles and runs towards the stairs.]
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Its not nice to talk bad about other sites, please keep that in mind also you have been reported also for advertising by simply using the other sites name
Sorry, my bad. I was just stating my opinion. I'll be sure to remember this


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[Lazel opens his eyes and notices that he is in a hospital room. He sees his arm in a cast and several stiches on his torso. He looks around the room and sees Archie looking out a window. Archie turns around and smiles.]
Archie: "Boy captain, it's not like you to nap so long."

[Lazel smiles and gives a little laugh. He then asks.]
Lazel: "So where's Pearson and Rick? Where's Doyle?"
Archie: "A new set of Marines from another sector showed up. Pearson and Rick are talking with them to tell them about all the events that occurred because of Doyle. He's now in custody."


[Lazel looks up and gives a sigh of relief. He takes his free hand and grabs his necklace. He then looks back at Archie.]
Lazel: "Good, now let's get outa here. Time to move on with our adventure."
Archie: "I had a feeling you'd say that. Too bad for you, we got some problems. One, you're in no condition to get moving. Two, the ship is a tank and we gotta make some repairs. Three, the Log Pose isn't even set yet. Turns out it takes 4 weeks to set anyways, which is enough time to get better and prepare for the trip."
Lazel: "Pfft, fine, whatever. Now help me out of here"


[The two then go on with a set of back and forth, with Archie trying to keep him in bed and Lazel trying to get out. After about a week and a half, Lazel is feeling much better and gets out of the hospital. He, along with Archie, Pearson, and Rick, help out in fixing their boat and getting ready for their leave. On the day they are about to head out, the four of them stand together.]
Lazel: "It's been a pretty great time guys."
Rick: "Are you kidding? You saved this place! Doyle's gone because of you! I am in your debt"
Pearson: "Hmph. Just to let you know, Archie can get pretty scared sometimes. So keep an eye on him"
Archie: "As if! Oh whatever, hey give me and the captain a second guys"


[Pearson and Rick nod and step aside. Lazel and Archie turn and Archie whispers a few words to Lazel.]
Lazel: "Thank you. I thought you'd never ask. I was waiting for you to say something."

[Lazel turns to the two and yells]
Lazel: "Pearson! Rick! Welcome Aboard!"

[The two of them smile and nod. Pearson and Archie high five and Rick high-fives Lazel. The four of them laugh and get on the ship. They soon set sail and make their way to the next island.]
 

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[Lazel and his crew go around the open sea. He and Rick both watch a sparring match between Archie and Pearson.]
Rick: "It's pretty impressive. They use such different styles of fighting, but they're evenly matched. Though, it's weird. As a marksman, you think Archie would be more dangerous from a distance, but he's holding his own. And Pearson, the way he throws his swords and uses those air slashes, makes him just as formidable from a distance."
Lazel: "Of course they are. My two Co-1st Mates have to be impressive if they are on this ship.


[All of a sudden, both Archie and Pearson stop fighting. They both turn and stare at Lazel.]
Archie & Pearson: "WHAT DO YOU MEAN CO?!?!"

[Lazel gives a nervous smile and says.]
Lazel: "C'mon guys, I'm captain here."

[They all begin to argue for awhile. After time, the crew get together and discuss.]
Archie: "Hey Lazel. I saw this in your cabin by the way when we were fixing the ship. Are these the roles you want to have covered by your final crew."
Lazel: "Oh yeah. It's a good thing too you found that. I almost forgot. Anyways, all of you guys fill up a role on this ship. Archie, you're the gunner. Pearson, you're the swordsman. Rick, you're the merchant. You were good with money right Rick?"
Rick: "I mean, Doyle kept me alive for a good reason I guess."


[They all laugh and then Archie speaks again.]
Archie: "But boy do you have a ways to go to fill up your list. I guess we'll find them on our way. Speaking of which, where are we headed?"

[Lazel looks down on the Log Pose]
Lazel: "I don't know, but I'm itching to find out!"
 
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