The Rookie Pirates [Revived]

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Post #74 — Smuggler Island Post #8
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[When the two walk inside, they notice another desk in front of them and a leather chair behind the desk. In front are two seats. The two remain standing and give concerned looks. After awhile, the man who paid the Marine Captain walks in.]
Mystery Man: “Gentlemen! Please, please sit down, relax. Take it easy. You guys seemed to have it bad. Especially you, Mr. Bullet, am I right?”

[The Mystery Man walks by them to his desk and sits down. He then takes a cigar and begins lighting it. Laze and Archie remain standing]
Mystery Man: “My goodness. Please pardon my rudeness. I’ll have the boys take those nasty things off your wrists.”

[The man snaps his fingers and the subordinates from before come and unlock the handcuffs. Despite this, the pirates stay standing up]
Lazel: “Sorry for being rude, but even if you did help us, I need some answers. Who are you and why did you help us?”

[The man smiles and responds]
Mystery Man: “Of course. My name is Robert Doyle. You’ll refer to me as Mr. Doyle. Simply put, I’ve seen what you can do, and I think I can you a pair of people like you two in my “company”. Did I mention the salary?”

[Lazel simply retorts]
Lazel: “First off, no amount of money will buy my freedom. Second, I’d rather not work for someone. So thanks for the offer, but we’re going to turn it down. Now if you’ll excuse us, Bobby."
 
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Kaguya unbinds the girls and carries her to her boat as the whole ship gets on fire. She quickly moves away from the large ship to save herself and the girl, and waits for her to gain her consciousness back
 

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Post #75 — Smuggler Island Post #9
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[Doyle gets extremely angered from Lazel. He snaps his fingers and 5 body guards come inside the office.]
Doyle: "Have it your way kid. Boys! Our guests world like to leave. Why don't you escort them out."

[One bodyguard opens the door to Doyle's office, back to the previous room. Lazel and Archie walk out the door, staring down the bodyguards as they pass. They enter the previous room and see the money-handling man again. He gives a worried look and then turns his head to his desk again. Right in front of the stairs are another 5 bodyguards blocking the way. The two pirates stand in the center of the room. They turn around and the previous 5 bodyguards enter the room and close the door to Doyle's office. As the door closes, Lazel catches a glimpse of Doyle giving a sadistic smile.]
Archie: "Hey Captain, let me handle this."
Lazel: "Don't worry about me. This little wound isn't going to stop me."
 

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The girl introduces herself as Eva. She was a newbie pirate who was captured by some unknown group. Her speciality was that she was one of the best cooks in the whole east blue, which is why everyone wanted her.
Kaguya asks her to join her crew and she accepts
 

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Post #76 — Smuggler Island Post #10
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[The bodyguards jump to the center, attempting to dogpile the pirates. The pirates go back-to-back, each facing 5 bodyguards. While the bodyguards are still in the air mid-jump, Lazel throws 5 consecutive punches at them, moving so fast they were unable to react. They are sent flying back to the wall. Archie prepares himself. Just before they can land on him, Archie spin hook kicks the bodyguard on the far right, forcing him into the other bodyguards next to him and sending all flying. They fly to the money handler's desk. The handler is barely able to dive out of the way from the incoming barrage of men.]
Lazel: "Well that was easy. Didn't even bre— AH!"

[Lazel grabs his wound and kneels. Archie goes to him and helps him up. Just as they plan to head out, Archie's bow, quiver full of arrows, and pistol are thrown into the room from the stairs. A man begins walking down the stairs. Only his footsteps are heard as he begins speaking.]
Mystery Man: "I recognize those weapons anywhere. Didn't even know you could fight without these. I never imagined I would see you again."

[Archie's eyes open wide in shock. He grabs his weapons and tells Lazel they need to leave. Lazel tries to question why, but Archie doesn't pay attention at all. He takes a detonation arrow and shoots it at the wall, causing an explosion. The man walking down the stairs is almost down and his legs can be seen. He also is shown to have two swords. Archie takes Lazel to the opening in the wall created by the explosion and stops. He turns around right before leaving and sees the face of the man. Lazel turns and is shocked to see a man who looks exactly like Archie.]
 
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Post #77 — Smuggler Island Post #11
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[Lazel, still holding onto Archie, stands motionless. His mouth is gaping open from his shock. The man was an exact replica of Archie. The only distinguishable thing about them was Archie used projectile-based weapons, while this man had swords. Hazel turns his head to Archie, just to compare looks. There is no mistake at the sight. Archie gives a concerned look.]
Archie: {No. This can’t be happening. Of all people. Of all places. But, this can also a good thing. I need to think this over.}
“Lazel, we need to leave”


[Lazel looks at Archie and understands his concern. He doesn’t bother asking questions now.]
Lazel: “I got it. Let’s go."

[The two rush outside and head towards there ship. Running through the city, large crowds filled spaces everywhere. They headed towards the buildings and jumped to the rooftops for a clearer path. They did all this, never looking back until they could see a glimpse of the ship in the distance. The two look back and notice nobody behind them. They stop for a moment]
Lazel: “Strange? Are they leaving us alone? Something’s up. I know there’s nobody near, but what’s going on? No, we have other issues to deal with. Archie. Talk.”

[Archie looks and gives a deep breath]
Archie: "That man you saw... His name is Pearson and he’s my twin brother.”
 

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Post #78 — Smuggler Island Post #12
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[Lazel gives a steady look at Archie.]
Lazel: “I understand that you must have gone through something serious. You two that is. Let’s get back to the ship and you can tell me more later."

[Lazel and Archie head towards the ship. Once they get there, they instantly notice major damages to the ship. There are chunks of wood broken and torn up. They get up to the top of the ship and see even more damage. The flooring is completely wrecked and the mast is nearly chopped down. Lazel looks around and gives an angry look]
Lazel: {It was them! Doyle must’ve known about the ship! That’s why he didn’t send anyone after us. He’s tempting us to go back. There’s no time for that now though}
“Archie. Time to talk."


[Archie nods and sits down on the tattered flooring of the ship. Lazel follows suit and sits down in front of Archie crossing his arms and patiently waiting. After a minute, Archie begins]
Archie: “Well, I guess I’ll start at the beginning.”
 

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Post #79 — Smuggler Island Post #13
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[Archie and Pearson are shown as kids fighting each other with just their fists inside of a Dojo. They both manage to punch each other in the face and get knocked down. They get back up and cross their arms, exactly mirroring each other. The sliding doors of the Dojo then split open and enters a man. Both kids then smile and bow to him.]
Archie: "Master Ryu! Are you finally going to let us pick our weapons? We turned 10 years old today, and you said!"
Pearson: "Yeah! And we’re getting tired of just using our fists!"
Master Ryu: “Calm down boys. Before you decide though, remember that you must always practice without your weapons every now and then. That being said, you will also learn how to use your weapons as if they were extensions of your body.”


[The two boys nod eagerly and follow their sensei. They then come to a room with two altars. On the left altar is a bow depicted on a painting. On the right altar is a sword depicted on a painting. Archie goes directly to the bow, and Pearson goes directly to the sword. Master Ryu smiles.]

[Moving forward a couple of years, the boys are now 17. Archie has gained tremendous skill in the bow and arrow, and has expanded his arsenal. In addition to the bow and arrow, he now uses a pistol, and a few pocket weapons. He dreams of becoming the greatest marksmen in the world. Pearson has also increased in skill with his sword. He also gained an additional sword, now possessing two katana. He dreams of becoming the greatest swordsman in the world. Together, the two dreamed to become the strongest tag-team. Then things changed for the worst, when their beloved Master and father figure left without another word.]
 
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"We're about thirty minutes away from town where I see how much this sword is really worth and if it isn't up to my awesome expectations I'll throw it in the ocean with you watching,haha!" Prussia snickers sadistically before continuing"And once the sword is disposed of I think I just might make you my slave for the rest of your natural life,howzat!"
Akira just stays silent and leans his back against the wall, he doesn't bother to reply.
 

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Post #80 — Smuggler Island Post #14
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[Pearson and Archie argued over what to do. For a week they argued whether or not to stay or go out and search for him. It came to it that the two split up. Archie stayed, and Pearson went out looking. From then on, Pearson and Archie have never seen each other. After a year, Archie finally noticed something when going through the altars again. He noticed the two weapon depictions were in the opposite direction. When looking around the room, he found a note from their Master. ]
Master’s Note: “Archie and Pearson. I have nothing left to teach you. Both of you are beyond my skill. All that I can teach is my wisdom. And for that reason, I am leaving. I don’t care if you have found this note or not. I know that the two of you are ready for the next step. Go out and reach your dreams. When the time is right, we will see each other again."
Archie: “Master Ryu"


[A tear goes down Archie’s face. Archie regrets passing off the offer by Pearson and sets a new goal. They would both see their master again. Years passed and Archie made his move. Though he never found his brother. He never stopped though, until one day. He saw his brother. They didn't cross paths, but something inside Archie prevented him from getting back with his brother. He regretted that moment in his life, and moved on with his goal, forgetting his brother in the process.]

END OF FLASHBACK
Archie: “And that’s that. I guess I was just scared to see my brother again. He must be furious with me. I don’t know what to do.”

[Lazel gets up. He makes a fist and punches Archie. Archie is shocked from this and questions why this happened. Lazel looks back at him and tells him this.]
Lazel: “Sorry. But I know what we’re doing next. I’m going to kick that Doyle’s ass. And you. You’re gonna see your brother again, and finish things.”
 
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Post #81 — Smuggler Island Post #15
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[Archie gets up in a fit and tries to say something, but stops before speaking. He then calms down.]
Archie: “You’re right. I’m gonna fix this. I won’t leave my brother again."

[Lazel holds up a fist and waits for Archie. Archie smiles and bumps his fist with Lazel’s. The two then nod. Lazel goes to his quarters and grabs some bandages and wraps up his gun wound. He grabs a new shirt and sets off. Archie goes to his room and grabs extra arrows. He reloads his pistol with more ammo and places in its holster. The two then meet up at the bottom of the ship.]
Lazel: “Plan is simple. I take care of Doyle, you go to your brother. Anybody else is fair game.”
Archie: “Got it"


[The two race towards the city again. They get to a building rooftop near the one they were previously being held by Doyle. They stop and stare.]
Lazel: “Alright, they’re in that building. I can see some of them are fixing the hole in the wall you made”
Archie: “Haha. Yeah, it would be a shame if all their hard work goes to waste.”


[The two share a look and immediately have the same brilliant idea.]
Lazel: “On three, got it? 1… 2… 3!!!”

[The pirates then jump from the rooftop towards Doyle’s building.]
 

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Post #82 — Smuggler Island Post #16
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[Lazel and Archie are both flying downwards from the building. Then, before they hit the top of Doyle’s building, Archie shoots and arrow at the rooftop. The arrow, with a flat surface bottom, sticks on the rooftop. Lazel then prepares a fist and aims himself directly at the arrow. The second he is in sight, he punches the flat part of the arrow, pushing the arrow further down and shattering the rooftop from the built up pressure in that single spot. The roof collapses and the two pirates land on some falling rubble. They then hop from rubble to rubble until they land on the floor. As the roof is falling, the lackeys for Doyle are in shock. Lazel and Archie land on the ground and stare them in the eyes.]
Archie: “Sorry ‘bout that. I guess that’s another hole you guys have to fix, haha.”
Lazel: “You fellas wanna make this easy and just run. I’d rather not waste time on some shrimp.”


[The men each grab a pistol and start shooting like there’s no tomorrow. Lazel blocks every shot with his armbands, protecting Archie behind him. Archie prepares his special arrow. He shoots it at the men and it suddenly bursts in an explosion. Archie used gunpowder at the tip of the arrow followed by a steady flame that caused the explosion. All the men lay on the ground, completely down for the count.]
Lazel: “Well that was easy. There’s one more right there though”

[Archie turns his head and notices who Lazel is talking about. The money-handling man from before is there, standing with a steady face.]
Lazel: “Listen, I don’t really wanna hu—”
Money-Handler: “My name is Richard! I want to help you take down Doyle!”


[The two pirates give a surprised look from what they just heard.]
 

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Post #83 — Smuggler Island Post #17
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[Lazel and Archie still stand with a shocked expression.]
Lazel: “What are you talking about?”

[Richard tightens his fists and starts developing an angry expression.]
Richard: “That man... He's the problem with everything in this town. He is a monster. That man corrupted this city. He's the one who began the underground market here and the start of Mafia Groups. He's the central figurehead of all things in the blackmarket. And all that wealth he accumulated over the years from terrible cruel methods gave him total control of everything in the city, including the Marines. That's how I was brought here. I needed a loan and I couldn't pay back in time, so to save my life, I had to work for him. And you’re not going to find him here. He’s out heading to a late party which hosts some of the wealthiest people living here. It’s another underground operation to get more money. It won’t be easy getting in though. Even if you do, there are Marines everywhere there. You may as well consider the Marines working for Doyle too, so don’t expect to have them also aim at him.”

[Lazel looks back at him and smiles.]
Lazel: “Than I guess we’re going to give a grand entrance at that party. Archie, you think you can handle some Marines in addition to your brother?”
Archie: “Marines? Yeah, that’ll be a cinch."
Richard: “Wait. There’s one more thing”


[The two pirates look back at Richard and wait.]
Richard: “As an underground dealer, he has an alias. His alias is “The Shark”. There’s a reason for that. He has Devil Fruit Powers. He ate a Zoan-Type Fruit that lets him take on the abilities of a shark. The Saka Saka no Mi - Model: Hohojurozame. (Fish Fish Fruit - Model: Great White Shark)”
 
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