The Legendary Sage of Konoha 6
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Wow! That was an action packed vast chapter. I loved every minute of Sasuke’s involvement throughout the chapter. It was really great and I am thankful that you thus far kept Sasuke living. You had me thinking there that Naruto did indeed kill Sasuke but he instead sent to spear his life (nice save by Shika ;p) thus Naruto’s never undying faith that Sasuke would find salvation and it apparently seems so ^.^ Naruto surely has powered up and I loved how well you depicted Sasuke’s Kagutsuchi! As it seemingly has solidification qualities ^.^ I think your depiction of the past is pretty damn good and very similar to Kishi 
Man-that Raikage is annoying and unforgiving as ever, Kirabi with his disturbing rapping and no Sai -_- (maybe next chapter or so ^.^). I loved that Sasuke finally turned on Madara and supposedly killed him though I think he did not die and I wonder what Zetsu/Kabuto will do next.
Another amazing chapter and I can’t wait for the next one! It is winding down to the finale but it becomes more and more enjoyable to read!
Man-that Raikage is annoying and unforgiving as ever, Kirabi with his disturbing rapping and no Sai -_- (maybe next chapter or so ^.^). I loved that Sasuke finally turned on Madara and supposedly killed him though I think he did not die and I wonder what Zetsu/Kabuto will do next. Another amazing chapter and I can’t wait for the next one! It is winding down to the finale but it becomes more and more enjoyable to read!
Thanks, will do
Hehe, yes I guess i didvery nice chapter! you use a lot of chakra on this chapter nisan i hope you sleep very well too
Took almost 3 hours just to color and edit itxd Yeah i did Hehe, thanksAWESOME you rock
Finally someone that writes my name rightxdBest chapter ever. Michael, good work(though you may upset Sasuke's fans
Maybe, maybe not
Well I`m not sure if i will reveal the rest of the fight in the original series, but I might in one of the 3 chaptered chronicles
Just the question I wanted somebody to ask me
Well... Either he.. Actually, I can`t say for certain what happens after he passed out
Oh thanksOMG so god damn epic!
Then you like other peoples will probably like what i got in store when they finally arrives(or maybe not) at the Kage meetingxd At least you got humor
Glad to hearArigatou my friend
Well to be honest I was looking forward to see what you thought of it whereas it had Sasuke`s first real apperanceWow! That was an action packed vast chapter. I loved every minute of Sasuke’s involvement throughout the chapter. It was really great and I am thankful that you thus far kept Sasuke living. You had me thinking there that Naruto did indeed kill Sasuke but he instead sent to spear his life (nice save by Shika ;p) thus Naruto’s never undying faith that Sasuke would find salvation and it apparently seems so ^.^ Naruto surely has powered up and I loved how well you depicted Sasuke’s Kagutsuchi! As it seemingly has solidification qualities ^.^ I think your depiction of the past is pretty damn good and very similar to Kishi
Another amazing chapter and I can’t wait for the next one! It is winding down to the finale but it becomes more and more enjoyable to read!
I must admit that my original plan was to let the chapter end with Madara saying: "I need to talk to my master first" and then cut the flashback, but i added Sasuke, the Raikage and Onoki`s appearence too as i found it more fittingBecause if not then It would be too hard to put togeter when the story advances
The only thing that would have made this really hard, was if i started a year ago, seeming as they`ve already progressed alot the last year in the manga, and it`s still hard to only go by the techniques that they know and then add new ones. Like I included Naruto`s multi gigant ball rasengan which he used against the kyubi recently in the manga.
So I would have to say that the hardest thing is to come up with completely new jutsus which i will have a really hard time with in the next chapterxd
The only question left now is. What did they do to Sasuke?! What had Shikamaru to say? Did the Raikage spare him?
You will have to wait awhile to find out(if everxd)
Well yeah I didn`t originally planned for many chapters. H*ck I only planned for three and then quit the FF buisness, but it isn`t as easy as it seemedxd
So why only 12 you ask? Mainly because i got 6 additional to the 12 in form of two chronicles and also I want to focus on my new project next year. Even so, you shouldn`t be too suprise if i extend it to 15 instead of 12
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Only time will tell, but first, chapter 7And to everyone.. Did you notice that I finally revealed the 6th Hokage(Other than the main tittle told you that it was about him)? So no more "Hokage:" from now on
One of my secret codes from the very begining. "The Hokage" and Naruto in the past always had the same color, - Orange
So basicly if you went deep into it, you could already guessed it in the first chapter part one(before I revealed Jiraiya to be his son). That would have given you my cudos for sure
At least it`s out now, and I won`t have to double check to see wheter i wrote "Hokage" or "Naruto" from now on
xd(I actually screwed up on the third chapter, but Gamahiro saved me).
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I bet seeing as how I high I hold Sasuke’s character lol Wow-I have to say that choice of words for Madara is very interesting. I can definitely understand/relate as I had to deal with very similar problems. Though I loved the jutsu part in my Fanfiction in fact I would have to say that it was my favorite aspect out of my ff. You did well and you know if you take the time you could think up some nice new jutsu I’m sure of itWell to be honest I was looking forward to see what you thought of it whereas it had Sasuke`s first real apperance
Because if not then It would be too hard to put togeter when the story advances
The only thing that would have made this really hard, was if i started a year ago, seeming as they`ve already progressed alot the last year in the manga, and it`s still hard to only go by the techniques that they know and then add new ones. Like I included Naruto`s multi gigant ball rasengan which he used against the kyubi recently in the manga.
So I would have to say that the hardest thing is to come up with completely new jutsus which i will have a really hard time with in the next chapterxd
The only question left now is. What did they do to Sasuke?! What had Shikamaru to say? Did the Raikage spare him?
You will have to wait awhile to find out(if everxd)
Yes those are the killer questions lol What has happened to my character and that is true-I will unfortunately have to wait -_- lolYeah i somehow always wondered why you didn`t make a FF about him
I bet seeing as how I high I hold Sasuke’s character lol Wow-I have to say that choice of words for Madara is very interesting. I can definitely understand/relate as I had to deal with very similar problems. Though I loved the jutsu part in my Fanfiction in fact I would have to say that it was my favorite aspect out of my ff. You did well and you know if you take the time you could think up some nice new jutsu I’m sure of it
We`ll see as it`s in the next chapter that the 6 members strikes with a lot of different "new" jutsus and I have no idea whichxd
Well i can reveal that you will find out what happened to him later in my FF, but just how, why, and at what time you might not find out
Hehe
Btw, didn`t know you read my FF?
sorry for taking long for the replie.....no i dind't sorry...still new around here XD but give me a link i would like to see it