The Legendary Sage of Konoha 3

[Christyan]

Nice on bro , keep it up

 

[Michael92]

Those two look like Hidan and Kakuzu

Yeah somewhat As i explained earlier, Keiji is sort of a mix between Sasori(unrevealed version) and Kakuzu, while Kazuki is sort of a mix between Hidan and Deidara(Or so i personally think)

Nice on bro , keep it up

Are you trying to get extra reps or something? You`ve already posted a similar comment on the first pagexd:

Great job m8 , keep it going

But thank you anyway

EDIT: After thinking about it twice, i thought i should give you some anyway for posting in my thread, but then i got the message that i had to spread some around first before giving it to you again:-/

 

[Felixman]

Hey your really good....your definately the naruto to kishi's jirayai....so where can we go to read the next couple chpaters im already hooked

 

[Michael92]

Hey your really good....your definately the naruto to kishi's jirayai....so where can we go to read the next couple chpaters im already hooked

Hey thanks man First post on NarutoBase and on my FF, appriciate it a lot And welcome to NB btw

Well, just read the update below



UPDATE:

Chapter 4 will be released as soon as i wake up tomorrow And chapter 5 at Friday, and chapter 6 at Thirsday the week after and chapter 7 at the Monday after that, and every Monday from then on(most likely)

So before all that, be sure to check NB tomorrow

 

[Felixman]

HAHAHA thanks for the update dude....and yeah i created my profile just to read the fan-fic...your was the first i read and the best so im glad i took the time to do this

Ps. Your chapters will definately help ease the pain of no naruto for another week lol

 

[Michael92]

HAHAHA thanks for the update dude....and yeah i created my profile just to read the fan-fic...your was the first i read and the best so im glad i took the time to do this

Ps. Your chapters will definately help ease the pain of no naruto for another week lol

Well it was more like an update to everyonexd But I figured i would make it strech beyond just chapter 4

Hehe, so how did you know about the FF section before you became member?

I`m honored to be the first FF you read I don`t know what to say


Hahaxd Maybe it will my friend, maybe it will

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Big post againO.O Thanks appriciate that you take your time to analize
Okey let`s see...

Yeah i was thinking that the new members would somehow remind the reader of older members, like Madara is trying to rebuild it the same way as it originally was. But keep in mind that I`m trying not to copy them so i would say that Keiji is a mix between Sasori(un-revealed form) and Kakuzu, and Kazuki a mix between Deidara and Hidan perhaps. But i haven`t really thought on that matter too much.

Btw who is Jasdero/David? OP? Bleach? Kenshin Himura? Death note?

Hehe, you`ll have to wait and see i guess
Yeah i was a little unsure about him learning it, but as you might have got from reading the chapter. He hasn`t mastered that or Sage training yet so he got a long way to go.

So you`re a fan of Sai as well? I didn`t know that. Many has been positive of me including Shino, but didn`t know anyone would comment on Sai as well

Take a look at my reply to your post in chapter 2 to read more about the whole Sasuke thingxd

Hehexd

Well-the new Akatsuki members do seem like fusion of the ones you mentioned but I do indeed think they remind me more of Jasdero/David and no silly they are not from any of those manga but rather D.Gray-man. I do suppose you never heard of this manga? If you haven’t you must check it out because I think you will have a blast reading it Konohamaru does have a long way to go but he is Asuma’s nephew as well as Sandaime’s grandchild so he will do phenomenally ^.^ Yes-Sai I would say is my second favorite character! Heck yes I am pleased that you decided to include him ​

 

[Michael92]

Well-the new Akatsuki members do seem like fusion of the ones you mentioned but I do indeed think they remind me more of Jasdero/David and no silly they are not from any of those manga but rather D.Gray-man. I do suppose you never heard of this manga? If you haven’t you must check it out because I think you will have a blast reading it Konohamaru does have a long way to go but he is Asuma’s nephew as well as Sandaime’s grandchild so he will do phenomenally ^.^ Yes-Sai I would say is my second favorite character! Heck yes I am pleased that you decided to include him ​

Hehe, maybe i will check it out some time in the future

As for Konohamaru and Sai(and Shino for that matter), they all rock, and couldn`t be "out"-cludedxd

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Hehe, maybe i will check it out some time in the future

As for Konohamaru and Sai(and Shino for that matter), they all rock, and couldn`t be "out"-cludedxd

I hope so I think you may like it

Cool-I am pleased to hear that seeing as I have observed much hate for Sai -_-​

 

[Michael92]

I hope so I think you may like it

Cool-I am pleased to hear that seeing as I have observed much hate for Sai -_-​

Hehe

Well there`s a lot of haters out there i guessxd

Anyway,

UPDATE: Chapter 4 is out:

Chapter 4:

You must be registered for see links

 

[UR NOT EVEN MLG]

This fanfic of yours is incredibly good keep it up. xd

 

[Michael92]

This fanfic of yours is incredibly good keep it up. xd

Oh, thanks Didn`t knew you read my FF?

 

[TitusmenTrinite]

AMAZING...when's chapter 4? I need to follow this!

 

[Michael92]

AMAZING...when's chapter 4? I need to follow this!

Haha, it`s out already Just follow the link
Chapter 5 soon too.

 

[madarauzumaki]

who is the hokage im so confused

 

[Michael92]

who is the hokage im so confused

You're not really suppose to revive old threads, but oh well

Just read on and you will find out

it is realy good respect^^

Thanks

 

[Kazuma]

it is realy good respect^^

 

[desbes99]

so who is the hokage is it naruto i know it's probably a dumb question but i dont get it

 

[Michael92]

it is realy good respect^^

Thanks

so who is the hokage is it naruto i know it's probably a dumb question but i dont get it

Just read on, it's not suppose to be revealed until chapter 5 or 6, if you didn't read the comment spoilers

 

[erosenninthethird]

I wish ur FF was an animation cause i'd love to see this in action. Like mcdonalds, I"m Lov'n it!!!