Yeah somewhatThose two look like Hidan and Kakuzu![]()
Are you trying to get extra reps or something?Nice on bro , keep it up
But thank you anywayGreat job m8 , keep it going![]()
Hey thanks manHey your really good....your definately the naruto to kishi's jirayai....so where can we go to read the next couple chpaters im already hooked
Well it was more like an update to everyonexd But I figured i would make it strech beyond just chapter 4HAHAHA thanks for the update dude....and yeah i created my profile just to read the fan-fic...your was the first i read and the best so im glad i took the time to do this
Ps. Your chapters will definately help ease the pain of no naruto for another week lol
Well-the new Akatsuki members do seem like fusion of the ones you mentioned but I do indeed think they remind me more of Jasdero/David and no silly they are not from any of those manga but rather D.Gray-man. I do suppose you never heard of this manga? If you haven’t you must check it out because I think you will have a blast reading itBig post againO.O Thanks appriciate that you take your time to analize
Okey let`s see...
Yeah i was thinking that the new members would somehow remind the reader of older members, like Madara is trying to rebuild it the same way as it originally was. But keep in mind that I`m trying not to copy them so i would say that Keiji is a mix between Sasori(un-revealed form) and Kakuzu, and Kazuki a mix between Deidara and Hidan perhaps. But i haven`t really thought on that matter too much.
Btw who is Jasdero/David? OP? Bleach? Kenshin Himura? Death note?
Hehe, you`ll have to wait and see i guess
Yeah i was a little unsure about him learning it, but as you might have got from reading the chapter. He hasn`t mastered that or Sage training yet so he got a long way to go.
So you`re a fan of Sai as well? I didn`t know that. Many has been positive of me including Shino, but didn`t know anyone would comment on Sai as well
Take a look at my reply to your post in chapter 2 to read more about the whole Sasuke thingxd
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Hehe, maybe i will check it out some time in the future
Well-the new Akatsuki members do seem like fusion of the ones you mentioned but I do indeed think they remind me more of Jasdero/David and no silly they are not from any of those manga but rather D.Gray-man. I do suppose you never heard of this manga? If you haven’t you must check it out because I think you will have a blast reading itKonohamaru does have a long way to go but he is Asuma’s nephew as well as Sandaime’s grandchild so he will do phenomenally ^.^ Yes-Sai I would say is my second favorite character! Heck yes I am pleased that you decided to include him
I hope so I think you may like itHehe, maybe i will check it out some time in the future
As for Konohamaru and Sai(and Shino for that matter), they all rock, and couldn`t be "out"-cludedxd
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I hope so I think you may like it
Cool-I am pleased to hear that seeing as I have observed much hate for Sai -_-
Oh, thanksThis fanfic of yours is incredibly good keep it up. xd
Haha, it`s out alreadyAMAZING...when's chapter 4? I need to follow this!![]()
You're not really suppose to revive old threads, but oh wellwho is the hokage im so confused
Thanksit is realy good respect^^
Thanksit is realy good respect^^
Just read on, it's not suppose to be revealed until chapter 5 or 6, if you didn't read the comment spoilersso who is the hokage is it naruto i know it's probably a dumb question but i dont get it