The Legendary Sage of Konoha 3

[gamahiro]

O.O I thought i changed that?! Must have forgotten to press save file when writing it as a word document. Damn it i did change that! Damn you Word!xd:whoa:WTH:T_T::crazy:

Oh well, i was going to reveal it in chapter 5 anyway, so let`s just pretend i didn`t forget.

Change your comment into a spoilertag please and only let peoples who really want to know know it, besides the other ones who noticed while reading

I`ve edited it btw, so i could say that you were lieing

But I`m not going to bother deleting this post, so I`ll let the peoples know if they want to

See? That's what you get for using Microsoft products. muhahaha :devil:
I spoilered it for you.

 

[gamahiro]

Gamahiro the proofreading toad

 

[Sennin Jinchuuriki]

O.O I thought i changed that?! Must have forgotten to press save file when writing it as a word document. Damn it i did change that! Damn you Word!xd:whoa:WTH:T_T::crazy:

Oh well, i was going to reveal it in chapter 5 anyway, so let`s just pretend i didn`t forget.

Change your comment into a spoilertag please and only let peoples who really want to know know it, besides the other ones who noticed while reading

I`ve edited it btw, so i could say that you were lieing

But I`m not going to bother deleting this post, so I`ll let the peoples know if they want to

LOLZ and I also got it who is the Hokage

 

[Michael92]

AWESOME dude keep it up but I got a suggestion for you. I know Konohamaru wants to be like Naruto and somehow he learned the Rasengan seeing it only once but Konohamaru learning Rasenshuriken and learning Sage Mode it looks too much of a copy thing you get what I am saying right. Except this everything is awesome keep informing me when to read the next one I will definitely read it.

He`s in sage training. He hasn`t mastered it yet, thus he can`t throw the Rasen Shuriken. And about that. The thing is, I want the Fuuton: Rasen Shuriken to be passed on, because that tech is only going to be 1/5 of the Hokage`s jutsu in the future.

If you really want to know what I`m talking about, then read:

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In the future you will see a way superior Rasen Shuriken than the Fuuton: Rasen Shuriken. It will combind and/or exist of different elements.

That`s all I`m going to reveal for now. Don`t hate me if you read the spoilertag and regretted:-/

LOLZ and I also got it who is the Hokage

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Hehe, peoples have been saying that it was him since the beggining, so i guess it would glip sooner or laterxd

 

[zapp42823]

nice chapter brother, this reading exercise will improved my power of imagination...

 

[gamahiro]

I just cut the spoiler out all together.

 

[Michael92]

See? That's what you get for using Microsoft products. muhahaha :devil:
I spoilered it for you.

I saw that mistake when i was proof-reading, but i might have just changed it in the preview at NB and not on the word filexd Making it not corrected Oh well. Did you see my Vm btw?

Gamahiro the proofreading toad

Yes indeed Hope not too many noticed itxd

nice chapter brother, this reading exercise will improved my power of imagination...

So you`re starting your own one soon? Nice, notice me if you do

I just cut the spoiler out all together.

Nooo!! That`s no fun All the ones who already read it before you probably noticed as wellxd At least i quoted it so peoples can see it anyway, and i edited my quote to your spoiler as well:zonder:

Not your fault or anything if you feel that. The blame is on me for missing that errorxd

 

[gamahiro]

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[Michael92]

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Ehhhhhh....?xd Okeyxd Anyway, i kinda felt bad when forcing you to edit, so you just deleted the whole thing.
I feel bad because of thatU_U Maybe I`ll give you an early preview as an appology?O.O

 

[-Tauburn-]

ok michael i actually read it this time i was half asleep last time i read it lol

it was still a great chapter but to some it up im going to repeat myself love it lol

 

[gamahiro]

Ehhhhhh....?xd Okeyxd Anyway, i kinda felt bad when forcing you to edit, so you just deleted the whole thing.
I feel bad because of thatU_U Maybe I`ll give you an early preview as an appology?O.O

Don't feel bad. It's no big deal

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

This was an action packed chapter and was overall great! ^.^ I loved how everyone handled the two enemies. Oh about the two new Akatsuki members, I like their names and them in general as they remind me of a fusion between Hidan/Kakuzu and Jasdero/David. Love the Steel release as well as when they took their leave which was epic!!! I cannot wait to see what Kazuki’s release and or techniques will be. Wow! Konohamaru using Rasenshuriken is amazing but was to be expected seeing as he already learned Rasengan.

I am pleased to see that another favorite character of mine (Sai) is involved I definitely cannot wait to Sasuke’s appearance whenever that will be lol As always keep it up and it feels like Kishi’s depiction of Naruto (even though the LeexSakura coupling indeed threw me for a loop lol).​

 

[Michael92]

This might be a little longer post than i expected, but oh well...

ok michael i actually read it this time i was half asleep last time i read it lol

it was still a great chapter but to some it up im going to repeat myself love it lol

Hehe, glad you did, maybe you missed something the first time that you noticed this time?
Any thoughts would be accepted

Don't feel bad. It's no big deal

In fact you shouldn`t be blamed for finding the spoiler, in fact you should be rewarded. Thanks to you, I managed to correct my mistake that i thought i did(lolxd), so thank you so much for that. And as i said, i will let it be open for those who really want to know what i originally wrote in my earlier post before it is revealed in chapter 5 or 6

This was an action packed chapter and was overall great! ^.^ I loved how everyone handled the two enemies. Oh about the two new Akatsuki members, I like their names and them in general as they remind me of a fusion between Hidan/Kakuzu and Jasdero/David. Love the Steel release as well as when they took their leave which was epic!!! I cannot wait to see what Kazuki’s release and or techniques will be. Wow! Konohamaru using Rasenshuriken is amazing but was to be expected seeing as he already learned Rasengan.

I am pleased to see that another favorite character of mine (Sai) is involved I definitely cannot wait to Sasuke’s appearance whenever that will be lol As always keep it up and it feels like Kishi’s depiction of Naruto (even though the LeexSakura coupling indeed threw me for a loop lol).​

Big post againO.O Thanks appriciate that you take your time to analize
Okey let`s see...

Yeah i was thinking that the new members would somehow remind the reader of older members, like Madara is trying to rebuild it the same way as it originally was. But keep in mind that I`m trying not to copy them so i would say that Keiji is a mix between Sasori(un-revealed form) and Kakuzu, and Kazuki a mix between Deidara and Hidan perhaps. But i haven`t really thought on that matter too much.

Btw who is Jasdero/David? OP? Bleach? Kenshin Himura? Death note?

Hehe, you`ll have to wait and see i guess
Yeah i was a little unsure about him learning it, but as you might have got from reading the chapter. He hasn`t mastered that or Sage training yet so he got a long way to go.

So you`re a fan of Sai as well? I didn`t know that. Many has been positive of me including Shino, but didn`t know anyone would comment on Sai as well

Take a look at my reply to your post in chapter 2 to read more about the whole Sasuke thingxd

Hehexd

 

[Akаsh]

oved it but its kakuzu xd not kazuku

 

[Michael92]

oved it but its kakuzu xd not kazuku

You thought it was good or?

Ehm... Not sure what you`re talking about, but my Akatsuki members revealed so far is Keiji and Kazuki, it`s not Kakuzu if you thought that?xd

But then again, maybe you were referring to my above post?
Well, it says Kakuzu there too, so not sure where you got Kazuku from? I wrote that when i posted the post but edited right away, but that`s two days ago, so... You read the comment and waited 2 days before replying?

Now I`m confused But thanks for your support anyway

 

[Akаsh]

You thought it was good or?

Ehm... Not sure what you`re talking about, but my Akatsuki members revealed so far is Keiji and Kazuki, it`s not Kakuzu if you thought that?xd

But then again, maybe you were referring to my above post?
Well, it says Kakuzu there too, so not sure where you got Kazuku from? I wrote that when i posted the post but edited right away, but that`s two days ago, so... You read the comment and waited 2 days before replying?

Now I`m confused But thanks for your support anyway

rofl i meant i 'loved' it xd
and its saying Kazuku in the story o-o
but its Kakuzu

 

[Michael92]

rofl i meant i 'loved' it xd
and its saying Kazuku in the story o-o
but its Kakuzu

xd Thought you meant "owned it"

It says "KAZUKI" in the story, that`s the name of one of the Akatsuki members, it`s not Kakuzu, he`s long dead with Hidanxdxdxd How can you think it`s him?! His personallity doesn`t match and above else, his name doesn`t matchxd

The two Akatsuki members Kakuzu and Hidan are looooooooong dead...

Keiji and Kazuki, not Kazuku are two new members. How hard can it be to understandxd

Just check again and you`ll see

 

[Akаsh]

xd Thought you meant "owned it"

It says "KAZUKI" in the story, that`s the name of one of the Akatsuki members, it`s not Kakuzu, he`s long dead with Hidanxdxdxd How can you think it`s him?! His personallity doesn`t match and above else, his name doesn`t matchxd

The two Akatsuki members Kakuzu and Hidan are looooooooong dead...

Keiji and Kazuki, not Kazuku are two new members. How hard can it be to understandxd

Just check again and you`ll see

srry xd

 

[Michael92]

srry xd

No problem If you read my above post commenting about the two members then you would see that Keiji is sorta like a mix between Kakuzu() and Sasori(un-revealed form), while Kazuki() is sorta like a mix between Deidara and Hidan

 

[Akаsh]

No problem If you read my above post commenting about the two members then you would see that Keiji is sorta like a mix between Kakuzu() and Sasori(un-revealed form), while Kazuki() is sorta like a mix between Deidara and Hidan

lol thnx for telling
and i also repped ya