The clock

[Byron123]

To be lost in a moment of silence,
to find a cause to feel remorse
so I can feel, something.

Questions of my shadow
always keep me chained.
Turning a blind eye would work
temporarily.

But I am temporary as well.
So are the questions.

“Tic-toc, tic-toc”
Can you hear it?

That’s your problem.

 

[Scorpianluvr]

Nice, I like the last line

 

[Ryóma]

Reminds us how time is just flying out of our grasps.

 

[fiend]

Excellent poem dude.<3 Beautiful, Second and Third stanza are just sublime.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

nice

 

[Waindo]

I can't hear it.
Splendid poem bro!

 

[Byron123]

Nice, I like the last line

Glad you did

Reminds us how time is just flying out of our grasps.

Indeed...

nice

Yeah!

Excellent poem dude.<3 Beautiful, Second and Third stanza are just sublime.

Glad you liked it man!

I can't hear it.
Splendid poem bro!

Hahaha thanks bro!

 

[Nyanmaru]

I like the last few lines:

"Turning a blind eye would work
temporarily.

But I am temporary as well."

Thumbs up!

 

[Byron123]

I like the last few lines:

"Turning a blind eye would work
temporarily.

But I am temporary as well."

Thumbs up!

Glad you did! =D