[CC] Take 2
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Remembering all what was said sofar about the power of the Nekura's and the Keigoku, Severus closes his eyes and takes a few deep breaths as he fells around in his consciousness for the Keigoku. Letting himself fill with hatred, fuelled by the Keigoku Severus manipulates the Keigoku in a circular disk right behind him, before is slowly forms into a portal. One being here on earth, just behind him, the other one is on the dark side of the moon. As the portal is created it looks like a pitch black cloud with a hole in its centre, whisps of black smoke seem to appear from the portal, slowly whirling around Severus his feet.
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Dropping down from a portal which opened in the sky, Susano'o landed gracefully and slowly stood up to his full height. His skin tone lightening, but still being quite dark, Susano'o looked over the three students, and then towards the man who was teaching them.
You three seem to have been at this for a while with no progress.
Holding up his palm facing towards the man who had been training them, Susano'o opened five portals to create a black box, blocking him from their vision.
I shall be taking over for now. So, now that you are able to open portals, it is time to draw Keigoku from the portal. So, you will need to focus your chakra to the Mark of the Demon on your body, with a portal open, and focus on your emotion you used to open the portal. Using this combination, send another pulse of energy and emotion to the moon through your Mark of the Demon to draw the Juubi's chakra back to you. As the Keigoku is drawn down towards you, the open portal will give it a point of access to enter this plain. It's... Complicated to explain. Like building a table; the instructions don't make sense, but you don't need them anyway because you simply put this piece here, screw it together, and ta-da! A better table than I can build...
You three seem to have been at this for a while with no progress.
Holding up his palm facing towards the man who had been training them, Susano'o opened five portals to create a black box, blocking him from their vision.
I shall be taking over for now. So, now that you are able to open portals, it is time to draw Keigoku from the portal. So, you will need to focus your chakra to the Mark of the Demon on your body, with a portal open, and focus on your emotion you used to open the portal. Using this combination, send another pulse of energy and emotion to the moon through your Mark of the Demon to draw the Juubi's chakra back to you. As the Keigoku is drawn down towards you, the open portal will give it a point of access to enter this plain. It's... Complicated to explain. Like building a table; the instructions don't make sense, but you don't need them anyway because you simply put this piece here, screw it together, and ta-da! A better table than I can build...
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Dean sees an odd man dropping from a portal, and seal that lazy guy inside a black box.
"Aha, alright. At last, now.."
Dan listens to the man, he gave them instructions on how to start off. Control Keigoku, move it from portals that they could open. Dean started off by focusing onto his anger and his lust for vengeance. The thing that fueled him, the connection that would allow him to open a portal. Now with the portal open, Dean focuses onto his Mark of the Demon on his palm.
"C'mon.. c'mon you son of a...."
Just as Dean was about to cuss, he feels the connection! He sends a pulse of energy and emotion to the moon through his Mark of the Demon. This allows him to manipulate the Keigoku, basically flowing it through the portal on the moon and the portal here, allowing Keigoku to come through it. A difficult process, but not impossible.
"Whoa, awesome."
"Aha, alright. At last, now.."
Dan listens to the man, he gave them instructions on how to start off. Control Keigoku, move it from portals that they could open. Dean started off by focusing onto his anger and his lust for vengeance. The thing that fueled him, the connection that would allow him to open a portal. Now with the portal open, Dean focuses onto his Mark of the Demon on his palm.
"C'mon.. c'mon you son of a...."
Just as Dean was about to cuss, he feels the connection! He sends a pulse of energy and emotion to the moon through his Mark of the Demon. This allows him to manipulate the Keigoku, basically flowing it through the portal on the moon and the portal here, allowing Keigoku to come through it. A difficult process, but not impossible.
"Whoa, awesome."
Toshiro closes his eyes, once again and focuses on his emotions. His need for power and revenge. What made him do the things he's done in his life, and what made him similar to the beast known as the Juubi. He made a connection with the Juubi rather quickly, as he's done it before in the past. Opening that portal, Toshiro channels chakra on the mark engraved on his palm. He uses the mark of the demon to send waves of his emotion to the moon, harnessing the keigoku on the moon and allowing him to control keigoku freely through the portal
Concentrating as he had before, Severus taps into his powers to open another portal. Once the portal is created he concentrates his chakra into the Mark of the Demon on his right hand and sends a pulse of chakra trough it, so strong it's almost visible with the naked eye. His hatred is almost tangabile in the air as Severus pulls the Juubi's chakra towards him trough the portal, surrounding him by at as he reaches out to it to familiarize himself with it. Surprised that it feels familiar.
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Watching all of the new members of the clan call fourth Keigoku from the moon, Susano'o stared onward indifferently. Any other person would have smiled, thinking about the strength being added to the clan in the training of these members. Susano'o was simply annoyed that he was here, in the city he had left long ago, rather than exploring the world.
Well, that took you all long enough. Time to see if you can actually utilize our Keigoku effectively. I want everyone to close the portal they have and make a new one. Then, shoot a fireball through the portal. As the fireball passes through the portal, I want you to release a small sphere of Keigoku through at the same time. The sphere will be hidden within the fireball, and that's the basis of the technique.
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Dean listens to the odd man. It didn't sound too difficult, so he took his stance and looked forward. He closed the portal before him with some ease. It wasn't as difficult to close it than to open it. He then had to open yet another portal, and it seemed everyone else was waiting for him to finish. He once again concentrated that feeling within himself, and aimed to open a portal before him. This time it was a bit easier. Pinpointing the right feeling to open the portal became clear.
As the dark portal before him opened, Dean let out a smirk, and looked around. No one was surprised.
"Bunch of sorry sacks >.>"
He then manipulated his Fire based chakra, and blasted forward a small fireball. Easily done, the fireball traveled towards the portal, and then Dean has to release a small sphere of Keigoku into the Fireball. Dean had to do so quickly, before the fireball would go too far. By focusing on the Mark of the Demon on his hand, Dean could manipulate Keigoku into the Fireball. The Keigoku hiding within the fireball, what exactly was this technique?
As the dark portal before him opened, Dean let out a smirk, and looked around. No one was surprised.
"Bunch of sorry sacks >.>"
He then manipulated his Fire based chakra, and blasted forward a small fireball. Easily done, the fireball traveled towards the portal, and then Dean has to release a small sphere of Keigoku into the Fireball. Dean had to do so quickly, before the fireball would go too far. By focusing on the Mark of the Demon on his hand, Dean could manipulate Keigoku into the Fireball. The Keigoku hiding within the fireball, what exactly was this technique?
Toshiro closes the portal quickly and focuses yet again. He focuses on his hatred and the things he had in common with the ten tails. Communicating with it, he opens a portal directly in front of him. Because he's opened a portal several times, it was relitavely easier and faster to open this time around. Toshiro looked to the side, noticing that Dean has successfully performed what was asked of him. Concentrating on his own portal, toshiro manipulates his fire chakra and spits it out from his mouth, in the form of the fireball. The fireball was fairly small, but it would travel within the portal created. Once it passes the portal, Toshiro would manipulate the portal to have it bring keigoku. Once that is done, he manipulates the keigoku to combine with the fireball by focusing chakra on his mark on the hand. He does this quick enough to make sure the fireball gets its share of keigoku before it gets too far.
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Alright, so I'm taking back over for a bit and am going to have to drop the RP aspect of training, sorry.
( Nekura Ichizoku Hijutsu: Zokugie ) - Nekura Clan Secret Technique: Unholy Conversion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30 (+10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
Once the Nekura casts this technique, it generates a small portal in front of him. From then onwards, whenever he shoots out a technique from him or from in front of him, a little Keigoku goes from the portal into the technique ( i.e., if he uses a fireball, a sphere of Keigoku, tennis-ball sized hides inside the fireball, and attacks the opponent as well when the fire hits him, or even if the fire is blocked, it needs to be blocked as well ). However, it does not work when techniques are being cast that come from other directions ( such as spikes from under the opponent, or wind from the sky ) as the portal is not near them.
Since the amount of Keigoku used is small per technique, it only gives the opponent a headache and makes him lose concentration for a few seconds if it hits, however the effects stack- i.e, if the first time he loses conentration for two seconds, the next time his already weak mind loses focus for four, then six, and so on.
No Forbidden-rank Nekura techniques may be used while this is active.
The basis of what you just learned. I want you to read it and fully explain everything about it. That includes how do you think it works, drawbacks/strengths, methods of usage, questions you have, etc.
( Nekura Ichizoku Hijutsu: Zokugie ) - Nekura Clan Secret Technique: Unholy Conversion
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Self
Chakra: 30 (+10 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description:
Once the Nekura casts this technique, it generates a small portal in front of him. From then onwards, whenever he shoots out a technique from him or from in front of him, a little Keigoku goes from the portal into the technique ( i.e., if he uses a fireball, a sphere of Keigoku, tennis-ball sized hides inside the fireball, and attacks the opponent as well when the fire hits him, or even if the fire is blocked, it needs to be blocked as well ). However, it does not work when techniques are being cast that come from other directions ( such as spikes from under the opponent, or wind from the sky ) as the portal is not near them.
Since the amount of Keigoku used is small per technique, it only gives the opponent a headache and makes him lose concentration for a few seconds if it hits, however the effects stack- i.e, if the first time he loses conentration for two seconds, the next time his already weak mind loses focus for four, then six, and so on.
No Forbidden-rank Nekura techniques may be used while this is active.
The basis of what you just learned. I want you to read it and fully explain everything about it. That includes how do you think it works, drawbacks/strengths, methods of usage, questions you have, etc.
Yaay, a reply xD.
Anyways, from what I can see, it creates a portal in front of you. (Small, I assume it is the size of your... thoracic cavity area?) So, any technique you launch from your body, that passes through the portal, will be manipulated to gather traces of keigoku within them, probably unseen from the target, unless the technique the keigoku is in is transparent, like ice. It only works on the techniques that actually pass through the small portal, but it attacks with the technique, so, for example, if the fireball continues towards the target (along with the keigoku), and its blocked by the small shield, i assume the keigoku will go through the shield, depending on your rank in the clan. This releases small amounts of keigoku through each technique, therefore, each trace of keigoku that manages to make contact with the target will only affect them minimally. Each hit from keigoku will stack, until the effects become a threat. At first, he/she will lose concentration for two seconds, then four, then six, then eight, basically 2 minute intervals. It's a handy technique because there's no time limit in terms of usage, and that as long as you keep throwing out attacks from the portal, it will eventually stack up to the point where the target loses concentration long enough to provide a decent opening. It powers up techniques greatly, and the keigoku is hidden within the techniques. Drawbacks include the fact that it can only power up techniques that can fit through the portal itself, and it's pretty chakra consuming.
Now, for the many questions I have. :|
1) Does the portal follow you around? Or does it stay stationary, like if you move around throughout the battle, does it follow you?
2) Is it strictly elemental techniques, or is ninjutsu allowed? Like, throw a kunai and multiply it to a thousand, all of which would carry some keigoku (as long as they fit within the portal)
3) Say you use this technique: (Doton: Fukusuu no Dorosandan) - Earth Release: Multiple Mudshot Technique. Does the keigoku cover all of the mudshots coming from that technique? >_>
4) Does the keigoku travel with the technique, or does it use the momentum from the technique sent out to travel? Like, someone launches a fist of earth with keigoku, someone uses some technique to deflect it, does the keigoku stay within the fist or does it continue onwards, without the fist? o-o
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Well, it's quite easy. By focusing on the Mark of the Demon, one creates a portal before you. This portal, stays active before you and when you perform an attack (preferably a projectile type of technique), a small part of Keigoku would "hide" within it and travels towards the opponent. Even when the projectile attack is blocked, the keigoku would continue forward. A handy technique, and even more so if you are higher in rank in the clan as the Keigoku would be able to pass through quite a few obstacles. The keigoku damage also stacks, which is a bonus too. Since the range is self, one basically creates the portal very close to yourself.
Drawbacks:
Like I said, projectile type of attacks shoudl be used, or could this work in a stream based attack? Its effects aren't that huge, and are only used to weaken the opponent mentally and their concentration. It can also just be used with techniques you expel from yourself, and not attacks far away. Just one direction too, so it also limits its use.
Strengths:
Even when the attack is blocked, the Keigoku continues so that is a great advantage as I see many people don't exactly understand the way Keigoku works z.z So even if it just hits the opponent once, it could still give you an advantage, even better if it stacks, and you have a higher ranking in the clan
Methods of usage:
Best used when you have constricted or blinded your opponent, and you shoot a projectile based attack through the portal, since the Keigoku is barely visible, the opponent would just try and counter the projectile, and be surprised by the Keigoku. Though most would meta-game, saying the would run a different path blah blah, you know NB. In a tight time-frame, one could easily get this technique to touch the opponent. I would mostly just use it with water, as most would block it with Earth, and it could travel through the Earth or when a Water technique is used, and I use the same one to negate it, but mine will have the Keigoku in it, so that continues towards the opponent.
Questions:
Can it be used with stream type of techniques?
What would happen if an opponent would go through an open portal?
etc:
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I can't train y'all. But I can answer le questions in place of Lok.
The portal stays stationary. That's one of the drawbacks of the jutsu; it stays in the spot you originally created it.
If I'm not mistaken that would work. ^^
Yes, each projectile that goes through the portal gets Keigoku attached to it, whether it's 3 or 100 projectiles.
It would continue onwards, depending on your Keigoku rank and the jutsu the opponent uses to defend. Like if I shot an earth sphere and it gained a Keigoku sphere, and someone blocked the earth with some water; The earth would be blocked but my Keigoku would continue on.
Yup
An opponent can't go through. 0_0
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Now, not all Keigoku jutsus will land and hit the foe. Some of them will miss, and be dodged. Should that happen, the Keigoku will continue moving. That being said, what better way to strike the unsuspecting foe than with a keigoku jutsu that turns that dodged Keigoku into an additional attack.
( Noroidzi Hari no Nami ) - Cursed Blood Needle Wave
Type: Supplemenary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A simple but effective technique, the Nekura makes three handseals turning any existing Keigoku on the battlefield that he wishes ( such as that from any techniques the opponent dodges ) into a wave of sharp needles that then shoot at the opponent. Whatever the rank of the Keigoku technique this is used on, the needles will be of that same rank.*If struck by the needles, the opponent suffers from drawbacks of the Keigoku attack originally used (common effects are as small as small minor headaches to searing headaches, momentary loss of focus and temporary incapacitation for no more than 10 seconds).
Cannot be used on Keigoku attacks of S-rank and higher
Can only be used four times per battle
Give me the advantages and disadvantages of using this. Any questions?
( Noroidzi Hari no Nami ) - Cursed Blood Needle Wave
Type: Supplemenary
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: N/A
Description: A simple but effective technique, the Nekura makes three handseals turning any existing Keigoku on the battlefield that he wishes ( such as that from any techniques the opponent dodges ) into a wave of sharp needles that then shoot at the opponent. Whatever the rank of the Keigoku technique this is used on, the needles will be of that same rank.*If struck by the needles, the opponent suffers from drawbacks of the Keigoku attack originally used (common effects are as small as small minor headaches to searing headaches, momentary loss of focus and temporary incapacitation for no more than 10 seconds).
Cannot be used on Keigoku attacks of S-rank and higher
Can only be used four times per battle
Give me the advantages and disadvantages of using this. Any questions?
Advantages: Allows you to attack sneakily. This allows you to utilize any keigoku in the battlefield and attack, but the effects of it would be the same as the original technique, making it useful because a C-rank technique can do as much as an S-rank keigoku technique, lol.
Disadvantages: Cannot reach long-range and it requires three hand seals which would warn the target that *Something* is coming. Other than that, it's a pretty good technique.
no questions, besides the one on skype o-o lol
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