[Suiton Training] - Koto & Tokun

[PandaMan.]

Fml I can't beat kotos detail.

*as the whip splashes once more, I close my eyes and concentrate. First I gather my suiton chakra; enough to create a long rope sort of thing. I then start with the rat handsign. Everything goes by slowly in my mind. Then i creation a fist with my right hand and lay my left hand over it (dog). Then I create the ox handsign. As this occurs all very quickly in rl, my suiton chakra converts to water. I then concentrate more. Imagining lassos whips ropes belts dashes and anything long, I manipulate the water that i created and turn it in the shape of a whip. The whip is create but i make it a bit denser so it won't splash like the previous times. The strong sturdy whip is flung towards the clone in an attempt to destroy it.*

 

[-Naruto-]

Fml I can't beat kotos detail.

*as the whip splashes once more, I close my eyes and concentrate. First I gather my suiton chakra; enough to create a long rope sort of thing. I then start with the rat handsign. Everything goes by slowly in my mind. Then i creation a fist with my right hand and lay my left hand over it (dog). Then I create the ox handsign. As this occurs all very quickly in rl, my suiton chakra converts to water. I then concentrate more. Imagining lassos whips ropes belts dashes and anything long, I manipulate the water that i created and turn it in the shape of a whip. The whip is create but i make it a bit denser so it won't splash like the previous times. The strong sturdy whip is flung towards the clone in an attempt to destroy it.*

*My clone poofs away*

O_O

That was amazing

Anyway, on to the next jutsu

Spoiler

(Suiton: Mizuame Nababara) - Water Style: Syrup Capture Field
Rank: C
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user projects a stream of sticky, syrupy liquid which can be spit onto a surface to form an adhesive trap or onto a person to inhibit their mobility.

For this Jutsu you are going to is preform the handsigns that I am about to show you and then gather up a large amount of suiton chakra in your mouths. Then you are going to spew out the suiton chakra, making sure that you change the chakra so that it comes out as a sugary syrup substance. This should be enough to stop my clones from killing you, make sure to get it right xd

*I create 2 clones that charge at the both of you with Chidori in their hands.*

 

[PandaMan.]

Hand signs. We need the handsigns!!! D:

 

[-Naruto-]

Hand signs. We need the handsigns!!! D:

Geezus I forgot!!!

*Shows you the handsigns*

 

[PandaMan.]

*I gather a large quantity of suiton chakra in my mouth and then form the hand signs learned. As I finish the handsigns I instantly convert the suiton chakra into a syrup like material. The material is extremely sticky when coming out of my mouth. I spew the substance out of my mouth, and onto the clone with the deadly ration attack.*

Advantages: slow down, trap, or capture opponent. Stop an attack. Short or long

Disadvantages: if dodged I am left exposed, can be countered with a wall of some sort, or used against me with a strong wind maybe?

Am I still alive?

 

[-Naruto-]

*I gather a large quantity of suiton chakra in my mouth and then form the hand signs learned. As I finish the handsigns I instantly convert the suiton chakra into a syrup like material. The material is extremely sticky when coming out of my mouth. I spew the substance out of my mouth, and onto the clone with the deadly ration attack.*

Advantages: slow down, trap, or capture opponent. Stop an attack. Short or long

Disadvantages: if dodged I am left exposed, can be countered with a wall of some sort, or used against me with a strong wind maybe?

Am I still alive?

Your alive

Nice job xd

Again we wait lol

 

[PandaMan.]

Yes. Praise the So6P..

Feel pretty good

 

[JojocIaw]

For this Jutsu you are going to is preform the handsigns that I am about to show you and then gather up a large amount of suiton chakra in your mouths. Then you are going to spew out the suiton chakra, making sure that you change the chakra so that it comes out as a sugary syrup substance. This should be enough to stop my clones from killing you, make sure to get it right

*I create 2 clones that charge at the both of you with Chidori in their hands.*



I close my eyes and begin to focus on my chakra.

I begin manipulating my chakra into water.

I feel the water in my mouth forming.

I begin to think in the syrupy texture and how it will form once it exits my mouth.

As I feel the syrupy substance leave my mouth I try to focus on the composition of maple syrup. Light but sticky.

I begin to manipulate it before it reaches the ground and try to focus my aim.

???

Did I do it right sensei?

Advantages? Good for slowing enemies. Can be combined with lightning for a shocking effect.

Disadvantages? It must be done from Mid-long range otherwise you risk being open to attack. Can be attacked form the back or enemy can fly over it. Weak against Doton.

 

[-Naruto-]

For this Jutsu you are going to is preform the handsigns that I am about to show you and then gather up a large amount of suiton chakra in your mouths. Then you are going to spew out the suiton chakra, making sure that you change the chakra so that it comes out as a sugary syrup substance. This should be enough to stop my clones from killing you, make sure to get it right

*I create 2 clones that charge at the both of you with Chidori in their hands.*



I close my eyes and begin to focus on my chakra.

I begin manipulating my chakra into water.

I feel the water in my mouth forming.

I begin to think in the syrupy texture and how it will form once it exits my mouth.

As I feel the syrupy substance leave my mouth I try to focus on the composition of maple syrup. Light but sticky.

I begin to manipulate it before it reaches the ground and try to focus my aim.

???

Did I do it right sensei?

Advantages? Good for slowing enemies. Can be combined with lightning for a shocking effect.

Disadvantages? It must be done from Mid-long range otherwise you risk being open to attack. Can be attacked form the back or enemy can fly over it. Weak against Doton.

Nice job Koto

I don't know how this jutsu would be particularly weak against doton. Once again weakness to elements has to be plausible, so if you were to make saw a pillar or spike, it would not absorb the syrup but more like become a wall in front of it. Using a mudball however is a different story.

(Mizu Bunshin) - Water Style: Water Clone

Spoiler

Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Supplementary
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a clone of themselves made of water. These water clones have 1/10th of the users chakra. These clones are also limited in that they can only travel short range from the user without losing control. When a water clone take enough damage they revert back to normal water.
Note: Can only perform up to C rank Water techniques.

Now what I want you guys to do is, well, create a clone of yourselves using water.

*Passes you both mirrors*

This jutsu is pretty much self explanatory but i would like you guys to use as many details as possible and be about as descriptive as you possibly can.

 

[JojocIaw]

I begin by closing my eyes and concentrating.

I begin to draw form my inner chakra and focusing on a mirror image of myself.

It doesn't require that much chakra because I am not using Kage Bunshin. I just need enough chakra to make it/them appear.

Begins converting chakra into water at the base of my feet.

The water begins to form into small mice that begin to stack on top of each other.

They begin to form into a clear bunshin but I can see through it.

*pop*

-____-

Let me try again

*concentrates*

I begin to concentrate on the property of water turning from a liquid to a solid. It needs to have form.

*Looks at mirror and begins to concentrate on a clear, definite mirror image of self*

I must make it more solid and life-like.

*thinks: Slow and Steady. Slow and Steady.*

*clears mind and imagines a water clone*

Small water mice begin to form on the ground from my chakra. They begin to gather together forming......


Advantages? It can help confuse the enemy and perform several duties the user may not want to do himself.

Water Clones be used for other dirty work like cleaning toilets and making sammiches. :3

Disadvantages? They have limited range as they cannot be far away from the caster. Unlike Kage Bunshin they cannot perform the same level of techniques as the user. They are limited to water jutsu.

 

[-Naruto-]

*Nothing happens*

O_O

Let me show you what I mean by detail xd

*After your clone turns into a pile of water I quickly start to manipulate my suiton chakra and infuse it with the water pile that you left. I then start sending more chakra towards the water to provide easier control over the water. As I am re making the clone I notice that making it is very easy to make and that the clone is actually starting to reform itself. After figuring that out I lift the Water from the pile that it is in, making the clone look like me as it rises up. Naturally, I start on the legs first, making sure that I manipulate them so that they look exactly as my legs do, shape wise and are wearing a makeshift water version of the clothes I am. Then I begin to work on the body, shaping it to look like my body does and then making the clone look like it is wearing the same clothes that I am wearing , paying specific attention to the pattern of the clothing and the way it flows off my body. Then I extend arms from the body of the clone and make the clothes so that they perfectly match my clothes. Then I make the hands of the clone, making the width and length exact. Finally I move on to the head of the clone, paying specific detail to the shape of my face and then moving on to the eyes, the nose, the mouth and the ear. After that I look at my clone and admire how good it looks, while adding the final details and color to make it look just like me.*

Wow I made this in just 2 minutes o_o

 

[JojocIaw]

Sorry Naruto-sensei.


I close my eyes and begin to form a water puddle at my feet making sure that the balance is equal so that I dont end up with a half-assed looking clone I focus on the foundation which is the feet making sure that they fit my form and arent weak because these are the legs and they should be sturdy enough to hold the clone up I go form the feet to the legs then to the torso this is the center of the clone where the majority of the chakra that I am giving the clone will be stored his techniques will be limited to c-rank suiton but he isnt going to be used for much attack but rather as a distraction to the opponent it wont work on doujutsu users though since they can see chakra and a trained eye can see that the thru the deception since they dont really have the effects that a real person does like kicking up dust or moving grass anyways after the torso I begin to work on the arms since this will be the primary areas that wil be used to mold chakra and form jutsu they need to be the right size and not end up being too long or they can be a problem and be a hindrance and then i begin to work on the neck making sure it is sturdy enough to be able to hold the head which houses the brains i need to make sure the brain isnt too big otherwise it will cause an imbalance on the entire body making it tip over and just be a travesty to watch smh i then begin to focus on the clothes and life-like appearance so that it looks like me because you never know when you will need it and to be able to form it quickly and correctly at a moments notice is crucial

 

[-Naruto-]

Sorry Naruto-sensei.


I close my eyes and begin to form a water puddle at my feet making sure that the balance is equal so that I dont end up with a half-assed looking clone I focus on the foundation which is the feet making sure that they fit my form and arent weak because these are the legs and they should be sturdy enough to hold the clone up I go form the feet to the legs then to the torso this is the center of the clone where the majority of the chakra that I am giving the clone will be stored his techniques will be limited to c-rank suiton but he isnt going to be used for much attack but rather as a distraction to the opponent it wont work on doujutsu users though since they can see chakra and a trained eye can see that the thru the deception since they dont really have the effects that a real person does like kicking up dust or moving grass anyways after the torso I begin to work on the arms since this will be the primary areas that wil be used to mold chakra and form jutsu they need to be the right size and not end up being too long or they can be a problem and be a hindrance and then i begin to work on the neck making sure it is sturdy enough to be able to hold the head which houses the brains i need to make sure the brain isnt too big otherwise it will cause an imbalance on the entire body making it tip over and just be a travesty to watch smh i then begin to focus on the clothes and life-like appearance so that it looks like me because you never know when you will need it and to be able to form it quickly and correctly at a moments notice is crucial

Amazing =DD

And no reason to be sorry xd

 

[PandaMan.]

*I close my eyes and imagine myself in another persons perspective. I then slowly combine my Suiton chakra with the surrounding water and begin to make an exact replica of myself. I concentrate major part of my chakra in the clone to make it perfect and strong. I begin in an unorthodox manner by creating the head first. As the mold of my face appears in the water i manipulate the water, making it grow. I continue throughout the whole upper body, torso, and legs. After that I begin to be more specific on the clones characteristics. Changing the clothing unto insignificant birth marks. As the clone is done I fuse a bit more of my Suiton chakra and compress it so that it can become sturdy and durable.*

Alright took me a couple hours but I did it!

*something splashes*

Fml :|

*repeats process but this time gives equal amount of time in creation as in durability*


Advantages: clone, 2 is better than one. Help on battle field. Can trick opponent

Disadvantages: water techniques only. Can't get too far from caster. Up to c rank jutsu. 1/10th chakra usage

 

[-Naruto-]

*I close my eyes and imagine myself in another persons perspective. I then slowly combine my Suiton chakra with the surrounding water and begin to make an exact replica of myself. I concentrate major part of my chakra in the clone to make it perfect and strong. I begin in an unorthodox manner by creating the head first. As the mold of my face appears in the water i manipulate the water, making it grow. I continue throughout the whole upper body, torso, and legs. After that I begin to be more specific on the clones characteristics. Changing the clothing unto insignificant birth marks. As the clone is done I fuse a bit more of my Suiton chakra and compress it so that it can become sturdy and durable.*

Alright took me a couple hours but I did it!

*something splashes*

Fml :|

*repeats process but this time gives equal amount of time in creation as in durability*


Advantages: clone, 2 is better than one. Help on battle field. Can trick opponent

Disadvantages: water techniques only. Can't get too far from caster. Up to c rank jutsu. 1/10th chakra usage

*threw a rock at your clone while your eyes were closed*

O_O

Good job Tokun

Next Jutsu:

(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water Style: Water Fang Bullet

Spoiler

Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user gathers water in his/her mouth and then shoots out multiple spherical projectiles.

What you guys are going to do for this is gather up a large amount of suiton chakra in your mouth and then begin preforming the handsigns I am going to each you in a few. Then once you have preformed the handsign you are going to release your suiton chakra from your mouth and while the suiton chakra is coming out you are going to change the properties into water by adding more suiton chakra and shape the water so it comes out as a huge ball. You should be able to shoot out about three balls at a time.

*Shows you the handsigns and Creates two clones*

Good shooting xd

 

[JojocIaw]

*threw a rock at your clone while your eyes were closed*

O_O

Good job Tokun

Next Jutsu:

(Suiton: Suigandan) - Water Style: Water Fang Bullet

Spoiler

Rank: C
Range: Short
Type: Offense
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user gathers water in his/her mouth and then shoots out multiple spherical projectiles.

What you guys are going to do for this is gather up a large amount of suiton chakra in your mouth and then begin preforming the handsigns I am going to each you in a few. Then once you have preformed the handsign you are going to release your suiton chakra from your mouth and while the suiton chakra is coming out you are going to change the properties into water by adding more suiton chakra and shape the water so it comes out as a huge ball. You should be able to shoot out about three balls at a time.

*Shows you the handsigns and Creates two clones*

Good shooting xd

I close my eyes and begin to focus. I need to concentrate chakra in my mouth and begin to manipulate it into a water composition. This won't be a regular amount or form because I will now be shooting at a distance so it needs to be strong enough to travel a long distance if possible. I need to make sure I focus my shots into 3 big bursts but still have enough to keep going. I need to think of a humongous shotgun.

I begin to breath in deeply and exhale slowly. Nice and steady. As soon as I have what I feel is enough chakra I begin to perform the handsigns Naruto-sensei taught me. I want to do well because I want to fulfill my dream of becoming a good shinobi.

Anyways, as I feel the chakra in my mouth about to burst out of my mouth I quickly begin to manipulate it so that it becomes water but in a denser form. I focus more and more chakra into it hoping it will do its job. I think I am ready.

I open my eyes and my mouth shoots......


Advantages? Good for long range and maybe mid-range but useless in short range. Good combination in my mind would be with doton to make mud.

Disadvantages? Useless against bigger Katon jutsu or sturdy earth style barriers. Useless against short range jutsu.

 

[PandaMan.]

*I practice the handsigns in continuous order. once again gather a large amount of suiton chakra in my mouth. I then do the handsign and concentrate the suiton chakra as it comes out I change complete characteristics making it dense and shooting out wards really fast the first one doesn't go as far. I shoot another one and it goes extremely fast but needs to be condensed more. The last on comes out and it goes by quickly and strong*

I can spit bullets!

Advantages: Strong penetration capabilities, quickly used up close. Difficulty countering

Disadvantages: weak to fire, close range, can be blocked by a wall of some sort.

Are there any more?

 

[-Naruto-]

I close my eyes and begin to focus. I need to concentrate chakra in my mouth and begin to manipulate it into a water composition. This won't be a regular amount or form because I will now be shooting at a distance so it needs to be strong enough to travel a long distance if possible. I need to make sure I focus my shots into 3 big bursts but still have enough to keep going. I need to think of a humongous shotgun.

I begin to breath in deeply and exhale slowly. Nice and steady. As soon as I have what I feel is enough chakra I begin to perform the handsigns Naruto-sensei taught me. I want to do well because I want to fulfill my dream of becoming a good shinobi.

Anyways, as I feel the chakra in my mouth about to burst out of my mouth I quickly begin to manipulate it so that it becomes water but in a denser form. I focus more and more chakra into it hoping it will do its job. I think I am ready.

I open my eyes and my mouth shoots......


Advantages? Good for long range and maybe mid-range but useless in short range. Good combination in my mind would be with doton to make mud.

Disadvantages? Useless against bigger Katon jutsu or sturdy earth style barriers. Useless against short range jutsu.

Your pros and cons are completely messed up, you and Tokun did a good job other than that. First of all this jutsu would be GREAT against bigger katon Jutsu, as long as they are B rank at max, another thing wrong is where you said it was useless against short range Jutsu, again this Jutsu would be great for those type of Jutsu. You also said that is was good for long and mid range, however the Jutsu only travels to the end of short range, and last but not least with proper doton training you would not need to combine it with any doton Jutsu, and unless you were using an already semi muddy doton Jutsu, the water would just be absorbed. I hope this also answers your question Tokun, if not then contact me Via VM and I will explain everything to you.

Anyway lets move on to the next Jutsu xd

Suiton: Kirigakure Shiryoku Hakudatsu) - Water Release: Hidden Mist Eye Sight Deprevation

Spoiler

Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15(-3 each turn to keep it active) Damage Points: N/A Description: Using the hidden mist jutsu the user reflects the natural light an a way that it blinds there opponent temporarily as long as the opponent is in the mist.
Note: Must have already used hidden mist jutsu

What you guys are going to do hear is first create a mist (The Hidden Mst Jutsu) and then begin to manipulate the suiton chakra in the mist you have created in order to make a hole that reflects the natural light into my clones eyes, blinding them temporarily for as long as they stay in your mist.

 

[PandaMan.]

* I perform:

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area.

I then focus on the clones location. After I have found were he's at I begin to manipulate suiton chakra in a certain area not to far from my enemy. I quickly but delicately move the mist to create a hole that allows the natural light in. Temporarily blinding my opponent.*

Advantages: temporarily blind an opponent in the mist. Temporary distraction

Disadvantages: cha can't be in motion? Must use hiddent mist technique before hand. Pointless during night time.

 

[-Naruto-]

* I perform:

(Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hidden Mist Jutsu

Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 10
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user creates a thick, dense mist that covers the surrounding area.

I then focus on the clones location. After I have found were he's at I begin to manipulate suiton chakra in a certain area not to far from my enemy. I quickly but delicately move the mist to create a hole that allows the natural light in. Temporarily blinding my opponent.*

Advantages: temporarily blind an opponent in the mist. Temporary distraction

Disadvantages: cha can't be in motion? Must use hiddent mist technique before hand. Pointless during night time.

Next time just write the jutsu in full detail, even if you learned it before

I would answer your question, but I don't get the Cha can't be in motion part, because I don't know what cha is xD