Players involved: Imperfect.
Mission Rank: S-Rank.
Story elements chosen:
Survive a near-death situation. (5)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 02/ 07/ 2020 - 05/ 07/ 2020.
Relevant mission links: Here &
Here.
Additional information: First post is the set up, and start of the mission, second post is the actual near-death situation, and survival.
Mission Passed. With a lot of caveats. Alright, we need to talk about a few things. You have way too much set up involved with this mission, meaning your entire opening post could have been done outside of the mission as it doesn't directly play into your element. This means, one-third of your mission is set up, and it's a long mission so one-third is roughly three-thousand words. That's one mission in and of itself, so I had to read through a mission's worth of filler. I don't mind long missions for the most part I can enjoy them, especially if they on topic, but this wasn't and wasn't for a while. Now, you can do one of two things to fix this, you can either 1. Exclude the setup, and leave it as outside roleplay building up to and into the mission or 2. You can include additional elements to flesh out your story and give you more freedom to expand. Either option is valid and will work.
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I read this once, usually, I read them twice. If I were to try and do that to double-check my decision, well that'd be an hour of my day and right now my ADHD is kicking my ass up and down this thread. That's not too bad if it was all of the mission checking I wanted to do today, it was not. I do, however, directly see the effort and time you put into writing up your second half, which was what mattered in this check. The fight is good, the character development is good, the fact that I could watch like the first episode of Tokyo Ghoul on my second monitor in the time it took me to read this was good, because well it let me see the fight animated, ya'know? Anyway, jokes aside, please, try and limit this just a bit, I suggest breaking it up, this was 4 missions worth of content my guy, you could have been paid for 4 missions. You're short-selling yourself, and you're giving me a lot to read in one sitting.