Players involved: The pervy Sage
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
-Explore an abandoned site
-Put the Clan’s interests first
-Run a thorough background investigation on someone
Some elements of D rank in there:
-Explore a landmark
-Do a good deed
One B rank:
- Explore the history of something
Figured i'd just go with C rank
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 11/07/2018
Relevant mission links:
Additional information:
Just a basic story using an NPC to bring my bio into the WSE, waking him up, introducing him to the new world and beginning the adventure while throwing in history of the clan and of the old landmark that was the land of tea.
Okay, so first of all your submission format needs some work. Just put the associated number after all the storyboard elements you pick like everyone else.
As for your mission I was a bit skeptical of having an NPC pretty much doing 2/3 of the mission before your biography even wakes up. On the other hand; that's your background history and I can't fault you for fitting it into the new world. Btw; we do have a calendar and the year is 811.
Normally, people pick too few storyboard elements, but I think you went a little overboard. You actually have to dedicate some time to each, like putting the Clan's interests first and running a background investigation on someone. I just didn't feel like the featured.
However, this is a C-rank and you did touch on all your SE's and explored most of them very well. I think this satisfies the criteria for a C-rank, so Mission Passed.
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
-Explore an abandoned site
-Put the Clan’s interests first
-Run a thorough background investigation on someone
Some elements of D rank in there:
-Explore a landmark
-Do a good deed
One B rank:
- Explore the history of something
Figured i'd just go with C rank
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 11/07/2018
Relevant mission links:
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Additional information:
Just a basic story using an NPC to bring my bio into the WSE, waking him up, introducing him to the new world and beginning the adventure while throwing in history of the clan and of the old landmark that was the land of tea.
Okay, so first of all your submission format needs some work. Just put the associated number after all the storyboard elements you pick like everyone else.
As for your mission I was a bit skeptical of having an NPC pretty much doing 2/3 of the mission before your biography even wakes up. On the other hand; that's your background history and I can't fault you for fitting it into the new world. Btw; we do have a calendar and the year is 811.
Normally, people pick too few storyboard elements, but I think you went a little overboard. You actually have to dedicate some time to each, like putting the Clan's interests first and running a background investigation on someone. I just didn't feel like the featured.
However, this is a C-rank and you did touch on all your SE's and explored most of them very well. I think this satisfies the criteria for a C-rank, so Mission Passed.
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