Storyboard Mission Submission

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Players involved: JojocIaw, LoK
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen: Defeat a tailed beast
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Aug 24th, Aug 27th
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/shukaku-the-one-tail-vs-madara-uchiha-and-harley.777406/#post-22045036
Additional information:
N/A


Mission Failed: The difficulty of the mission itself was not befitting of an S-Rank, and LoK's bio did practically all of the work.

Edit: Came back to this just to clear up the rationale used for the initial check. First though, there was no mission declared in the first post of the thread you linked, nor in the quoted post, so irrespective of all other things, this entire event isn't even technically eligible for submission. Now, I found on both my first read and a reread, there isn't much of a fight to check here. Your bio made all of one move, which accounts for less than 20% of the entire "mission", and when taking into consideration that one of the participants is an NPC character you're fighting, it goes up to 33%. You shaved half of Shukaku's HP on your own, so I'll give you that. But past your first and only move, which initiates the mission, your character plays no role in the mission at all. So even still, your partner takes you through most of it. While the stakes were high, the aspect of difficulty is not present here, because your character didn't actually experience most of the fight itself.
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Take responsibility for the actions of your Clan and/or its members
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12/18/2020
Relevant mission links: x
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed: A nitpick, but something I wanted to mention because it stuck out to me. Your bio using the Reincarnation Thrust to protect himself kind of runs contradictory to the theme of 'taking responsibility'. Why is he happy to take injury from the captain but not the footsoldiers? In the end, the mission element was fulfilled, but this was fairly noticeable for me.
 
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Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Defend against or attack another group
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12/21/2020
Relevant mission links: x
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed
 
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • -Choose between what is right and what is easy
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 24/12/20
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/jamihoro-031.755848/post-22056694
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Mission Passed: I would've liked a bit detail on the internal back and forth, the result of the moral calculus comes fairly quickly when the self-interest side of things is brought up. Just personal preference though.
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Defeat a large group of Undead
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12/24/20 - 12/24/20
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed: Lowered to B-Rank
 
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Destroy the undead fortifications
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12/27/20 - 12/27/20
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: N/A

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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Find the origins of the undead
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 12/28/20 - 12/30/20
Relevant mission links: Post 1 & Post 2
Additional information: N/A

Mission Passed
 
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Mission Rank: S-Rank.
Story elements chosen:

Protect the Refugees of Mistheaven. (Custom (5)​

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 30/ 12/ 2020.
Relevant mission links: Here.
Additional information: N/A.

Mission Passed
 
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Players involved: Teno
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: Custom: "Discover your hidden ability and defeat an opponent with it"
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/01/2021 - 01/03/2021
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: Shit... I dunno, Throw something nice in there for me.. maybe a bounty on my head or some artifacts

Mission Passed: Lowered to B-Rank. When you're using techniques, post them in your mission.

Players involved: Teno
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: Custom: "Tap Into The One Tailed Beast Powers"
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/03/2021
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: Same shit as above

Resubmit this in another post. Fix the link as well, both these missions took me to one of Skorm's missions from 2018.
 
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Players involved: Hazure
Mission Rank: C-Rank
Story elements chosen:
  • Help a local trader by transporting his wares
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 4/1/2021
  • Started: 4/1/2021
  • Finished: 4/1/2021
Relevant mission links: >>>Mission Link<<<
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Mission Passed
 
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Mission Rank: C-Rank
Story elements chosen:
  • Defend yourself from wild beast
Date of beginning & date of conclusion:
  • Started: 5/1/2021
  • Finished: 5/1/2021
Relevant mission links: >>>Mission Link<<<
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Mission Passed: Lowered to D-Rank. You encountered only one enemy, and it only accounted for half the content of the mission.
 
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Mission Rank: S-Rank.
Story elements chosen:

Rebuilding Last Bastion. (Custom (5)​

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 06/ 01/ 2021.
Relevant mission links: Here.
Additional information: N/A.

Mission Passed
 
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Players Involved: @Red-Robin
Mission Rank: B-rank
Story Elements Chosen:
  • Arrive and explore a city new to you (Custom; 2)
  • Make a business contract with someone (Custom; 2)
  • Choose between what is right and what is easy (3)
  • Organize and conduct a large ceremony for a funeral (Custom; 3)
Date of Beginning & Date of Conclusion: 1/6/2021 - 1/6/2021
Relevant Mission Links: "A new journey, after life."
Additional Information: N/A

Mission Passed
 
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Mission Rank: B
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Explore a landmark (3)* (D-Rank default, edited up to B-Rank)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 7/1/2021
Relevant mission links: [x]
Additional information: N/A

Approved
 
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Players involved: Teno
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: Custom: "Discover your hidden ability and defeat an opponent with it"
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/01/2021 - 01/03/2021
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: Shit... I dunno, Throw something nice in there for me.. maybe a bounty on my head or some artifacts

Mission Passed: Lowered to B-Rank. When you're using techniques, post them in your mission.

Players involved: Teno
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen: Custom: "Tap Into The One Tailed Beast Powers"
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 01/03/2021
Relevant mission links:
Additional information: Same shit as above

Resubmit this in another post. Fix the link as well, both these missions took me to one of Skorm's missions from 2018.

Mission Passed: Use the proper template when you resubmit.
 
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