Storyboard Mission Submission

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World Mission Title: The Counterattack
Roleplayers Involved: @Serpent @BusinessManTeno @Ańbu Juniør @Skorm
Missions Completed:

World Mission Failed; 3/4 of the mission were passed, excluding Teno's B-Rank mission. Below Anbu Junior was rewarded with a unique Artifact. The others were passed with proper Kumi issued, including the 10% bonus.

A Tattered Note
Type: Artifact
Rank: D
Range: N/A
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: A small piece of ancient paper; on it is inscribed a single note in the shape of an X.
 
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Ańbu Juniør

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Players involved: Ańbu Juniør
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
  • Prepare to face potential threats (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/27/20 - 10/27/20
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Noticing the arrival of more and more human in the Last bastion, Kōtetsu prepares himself for possible disastrous encounters with them.

Mission Failed: I feel that activating a bunch of passive/supplementary abilities doesn't constitute a mission. Storyboard elements which involve 'preparation' generally entail setting up traps in a landmark, arming NPCs, etc. Activating techniques that just empower yourself, even for a D-Rank, is far too simple.
 
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Players Involved: @Red-Robin
Mission Rank: A-Rank
Story Elements Chosen:
  • Defeat a large group of Undead (Custom; A-rank)
  • Save and protect survivors fleeing Last Bastion (Custom; A-rank)
  • Secure critical defenses of Last Bastion (Custom; B-rank)
  • Prevent a "criminal" from getting away during the commotion (Custom; C-rank)
Date of Beginning & Date of Conclusion: 10/26/2020 - 10/26/2020
Relevant Mission Links: "Critical! A Bastion in Need!"
Additional Information: +10% Kumi bonus for the "Arc 17: Conqueror’s End Bonuses"

Mission Passed
 
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Solf J Kimblee

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Players involved: Solf J Kimblee
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Defend Yourself Against the Zombies(Custom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/27/20
Relevant mission links: X
Additional information: 10% Bonus for this Arc

Mission Passed
 
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Mirai

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Players involved: Mirai
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:

  1. Fend off against a small group of undead (C, Custom)
  2. Make an uncanny ally (C, Custom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/28/20
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/last-bastion-209.768200/post-22051858
Additional information: 10% Bonus for this Arc


Mission Passed
 
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Solf J Kimblee

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Players involved: Solf J Kimblee
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Destroy a large group of the Undead/Zombies(Custom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/30/20
Relevant mission links: X
Additional information: 10% Bonus for this Arc

Mission Passed as B-Rank. Though the objective was fulfilled, the difficulty expected of an A-Rank wasn't adequately reflected in the mission itself.
 
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Skorm

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Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Defeat an army of Undead
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 11/02/2020 & 11/02/2020
Relevant mission links: Link
Additional Information: +10% increase due to Arc bonus

Mission Passed as B-Rank
 
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Players involved: Strix
Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • - Fight an enemy much stronger than yourself
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 3/11/20
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/veskals-exchange-237.768231/post-22052336
Additional information:
10% bonus

Mission Passed as A-Rank: The level of difficulty wasn't quite there, though it was getting close. There needed to be more struggle. Since this is an S-Rank element, the highest tier of difficulty, you should be on the backfoot virtually the entire time. Once you began using Yang, the danger presented by the enemy seemed to decrease considerably. The tactical use of techniques to circumvent its highly durable body was good, and is essentially what would be required to win a fight like this. Your bio just needed to be in more danger, situations where it had to, or couldn't avoid, taking a hit.
 
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World Mission Title: World Mission #4: Battle at the Pit
Roleplayers Involved: @Red-Robin , @Mirai , @Vayne , @Skorm , @Venom
Missions Completed:
  • (1/2) S-rank mission completed: Red-Robin Mission Passed
  • (1/3) A-rank mission completed: Mirai Mission Passed as B-Rank
  • (2/2) S-rank mission completed: Vayne Mission Passed as A-Rank
  • (2/3) A-rank mission completed: Skorm Mission Passed as B-Rank
  • (3/3) A-rank mission completed: Venom Mission Passed
World Mission Failed: Mirai, Vayne and Skorm's missions were passed at a lower rank than was required for the World Mission.
 
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Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Defend against or attack another group
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 11/15/2020 & 11/15/2020
Relevant mission links: Link
Additional Information: +10% increase due to Arc bonus

Mission Passed
 
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Skorm

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Players involved: Skorm
Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:
  • Scout potential threats
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 11/16/2020 & 11/16/2020
Relevant mission links: Link

Mission Passed
 
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Malherusement

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Players involved: Malherusement
Mission Rank: C
Story elements chosen:
Explore an area (Custom D Rank)
- Set up camp (Custom D Rank)
- Defend against an undead (Custom C Rank)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 11/17/2020-11/18/2020
Relevant mission links: Abigail Jones- Part One, Chapter One: The Encounter

Additional information: (Sorry this is gonna be a long one) For this being my first roleplay oriented post ever here, I must say I thoroughly enjoyed the experience. There were definitely some frustrating times (Like when I accidentally deleted half of the original post, but in the end, I think it pushed me to make a more intriguing and creative fist chapter so thanks fate who's laughing now) and some really heavy parts just typing this where it felt as if I was speaking through the character. I gotta give everyone before me props for showing me how to format (or at least guide me on how to try and format, it's an evolving art for me right now), especially Red Robin who helped guide me on where to look for examples on how to make a coherent post. Thank you everyone for the warm welcome, the long sentence game, the congratulations on my first bio, and the outreach with help and guidance. It is greatly appreciated, and onto the next post!

Mal.


Mission Passed: Welcome to the RP, and well done. The level of writing is good. A couple of things I'll say, just as things you should keep in mind. The level of detail, particularly for the Explore an Area (D-Rank) element, warrants a higher rank, because what you wrote is far beyond what's required for a typical D-Rank, and is closer to a B-Rank in my view. This isn't necessarily a criticism of the content of your mission, but be mindful of writing about things unrelated to the elements of your mission. While you're allowed to, it might not count towards the fulfilment of your mission's elements. Good job though, definitely a good start to your time in the NW.
 
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Mirai

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Players involved: Mirai
Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
Eradicate the undead located in the rivers (A – Rank)
Destroy/sabotage the undead’s fortification ( A – Rank)

Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 11/18/20
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/dead-rivers-223.768217/post-22053290
Additional information: 10% Bonus for this Arc and due to no one else submitting for world mission simply submitting it as a solo
 
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