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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • Find and battle a strong demon and brutally torture cultists. - (Custom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 18/9/2020 & 18/9/2020
Relevant mission links: Link
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Mission Passed as A-Rank. This element probably should have been broken into two; torturing the bandits and fighting the demon. That being said, though you did face a challenging opponent, the encounter didn't last very long. It wasn't much of a fight.
 
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • Investigate the power of a supernatural storm and save a community from it and a group of bandits - (Custom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 21/9/2020 & 21/9/2020
Relevant mission links: Link
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Mission Passed as A-Rank. Your custom element is just two elements jammed into one, one part of the element itself was not RP'd at the level of an S-Rank, and the other barely so.
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • (Save Random Civlians, and Recruit them for your own landmarks population) - Custom Clan Mission
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 09/19/2020-09/21/2020
Relevant mission links:
https://animebase.me/threads/ruins-of-chungsu-001.755817/page-6#post-22047655

Additional Information:
Idk.. I searched for some artifacts.. took a book with some nice knowledge

Mission Passed
 
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • Extinguish a corrupted branch of militia - (Custom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 25/9/2020 & 25/9/2020
Relevant mission links: Link
Additional Information:

Mission Passed as A-Rank
 
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Mission Rank: B
Story elements chosen:

    • Confront problems/issues concerning one’s clan (C – Rank, Custom)
    • Indulge in self-reflection of one’s behavior (D –Rank, Custom)
    • Deny one’s claim to leadership/royalty (C – Rank, Custom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: Sept/11/2020 - Sept/17/2020
Relevant mission links:
1. https://animebase.me/threads/tsuchi-heihō-103.756116/post-22046850
2. https://animebase.me/threads/tsuchi-heihō-103.756116/post-22047494
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Mission Passed as C-Rank. Your second element wasn't addressed properly, even for a D-Rank, and your rank average puts this as C-Rank anyway.
 
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • Investigate a contaminated Landmark [Custom]
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 05/10/2020 & 05/10/2020
Relevant mission links: Link
Additional Information:

Mission Passed as A-Rank. And just so you know, the Amino-Geis isn't a physical or tangible thing. It's just a name given to the Sea of Life's ability to transform and alter living things it touches.
 
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • Destroy an enemy base [Custom]
  • Fight a mutated monster [Custom]
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 06/10/2020 & 06/10/2020
Relevant mission links: Link
Additional Information:

Mission Failed: There was little struggle in the undertaking of the first element, the detail of the second was lacking and was quite frankly a steamroll there as well. I'm gonna start being more strict with my mission checks from now on, particularly in regards to S-Ranks, because I think the risk/struggle is being underestimated too much to just edit the rank down and call it a day, particularly when S-Rank missions are getting posted with such frequency and not meeting the actual standard of an S-Rank.
 
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • In the darkest hour, overcome
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 07/10/2020 & 07/10/2020
Relevant mission links: Link
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Mission Failed: The storytelling in this mission is a bit all over the place, and the detail is lacking. The basis of the internal conflict has been established, but the conflict hasn't been given much time to unfold, and the implications of the conflict and its result aren't really defined. On a side note, I'm not sure what gives you the idea that you can heal total physical destruction within a matter of hours, but it certainly isn't Shikotsumyaku. Under the Health System, it takes an entire day to recover from injuries which totally destroy certain parts of the body, and your bio in your own mission was described as having been literally eviscerated.
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Make all the necessary plans and arrangements for your Clan
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 08/10/2020 & 08/10/2020
Relevant mission links: Link
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Mission Failed: Half the content of the mission isn't actually related to the element, and all you did was make sentient elemental familiars.
 
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • Establish control over a hostile area
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 08/11/2020 & 08/11/2020
Relevant mission links: Link
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Mission Failed: I'm not sure where to begin with this one. From the misuse of techniques, to the lacking detail and struggle, there's just a lot. You've essentially destroyed the landmark and the lives of everyone in it, caused a literal disaster.
 
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Mission Rank: S
Story elements chosen:
  • Infiltrate an enemy territory and wipe it out
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 08/14/2020 & 08/14/2020
Relevant mission links: Link
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Mission Failed: The level of difficulty here wasn't appropriate for an S-Rank.
 
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Players involved: Ańbu Juniør
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
  • Procure the cure for your clan (1) [Custom Clan Mission]
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/21/20 - 10/21/20
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: After curing himself and testing his strength against Kulullu, the Beast of Sealing, Kōtetsu returns to Aridakumo in order to source enough of the cure for the members of his clan.

Mission Passed
 
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Mission Rank: B Rank
Story elements chosen:

  • Engage in a meeting with one’s Kage or Village Official (B, Custom)
  • Discuss recent events one has experienced (C, Cutstom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/22/2020 - 10/23/2020

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Additional information: All Responses was done to Shady Doctor while he was Kage and still retaining his official status.

Mission Passed: Not sure why Shady wasn't listed as a participant for this mission when he was the integral figure to both your elements.
 
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Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
  • Deliver the cure to your clan (1) [Custom Clan Mission]
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/22/20 - 10/22/20
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Kōtetsu returns to his clan with the cure in tow.

Mission Passed
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Make all the necessary plans and arrangements for your Clan (4)
  • Rally your clan behind a single goal (4) [Custom Clan Mission]
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/22/20 - 10/22/20
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Additional information: With the forest healthy and once again full of life, Kōtetsu prepares his clan to face the looming threat.

Mission Passed: The detail on your first element wasn't totally lacking, but it would be nice if there was more. There was a lot of overlap between your two elements, which made this a pass, but don't be afraid to diverge a bit. Expand more on the arming of your clansmen, and interacting with them personally, for example.
 
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Players involved: Ańbu Juniør
Mission Rank: D
Story elements chosen:
  • Answer the call (1)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/25/20 - 10/25/20
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Alerted by the tremors originating from the east, Kōtetsu leaves his clan to see to their preparations for the upcoming territory expansion as he goes to investigate the source of the disturbance.

Mission Passed
 
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Mission Rank: D Rank
Story elements chosen:

  • Test out a new weapon (D, Custom)
  • Handle minor preparations (D, Custom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/25/2020 - 10/25/2020
Relevant mission links:

1. https://animebase.me/threads/edo-113.756126/post-22051500

Additional Information: N/A


Mission Passed
 
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Mission Rank: A
Story elements chosen:
  • Deal with a problem in a tactical manner, instead of through direct confrontation (4)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/25/20 - 10/25/20
Relevant mission links: Here
Additional information: Arriving in Siren's Lair, and by extension, the continent of Tobusekai for the first time, Kōtetsu and his ninken encounter the army of the undead as they lay waste to the land and its inhabitants.

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Mission Failed: This needed a little bit more struggle in order to be a pass. There was only one moment in the mission where your characters were actually at risk.
 
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Mission Rank: B Rank
Story elements chosen:
  • Rid the city of some of the undead (B, Custom)
  • Rescue civilians in need of help (B, Custom)
Date of beginning & date of conclusion: 10/26/20 - 10/26/20
Relevant mission links: https://animebase.me/threads/last-bastion-209.768200/post-22051666
Additional information: 10% Increase

Mission Failed: This wasn't a very long mission, and as a result there isn't really much detail spared for either element. Just a little bit more and this could have been a pass.
 
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