[CJ] Some CJ with Lili-sama
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( Suiton/Raiton: Ito no Unagi ) Water/Lightning Style: Eel's Silk
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/a
Description: The user focuses chakra on the tip of his finger and produces a thin thread of water, nearly invisible to the naked eye, before shooting it in any direction, at the speed of an arrow. The thread itself has the flexibility of water, and can curve and bend at wish. Once it reaches a target, it is able to pierce through clothes and skin, connecting the user's finger to the target, at which point the user releases a powerful current of lightning, which is able to paralyze the opponent completely frozen, for 2 turns. Depending on the area struck, the opponent can even loose consciousness (head) or have difficulty breathing (chest). After contact is made, through what seems like a vaccine sting, the lightning reaches up Mid-Range ( 15m ) in half a second.
Likewise, the user is able to create a net made of water strings, covering an area of 2 meters radius, anywhere short range from the user. Using the same principle as above, the user can send a current though the strings in order to shock the opponent and paralyze him for 1 turn.
*The jutsu ends once the lightning is released
*The chakra natures are divided unevenly, with the lightning part being considered as B rank, and the water part being considered as C rank
*The laid down threads last 2 turns, in case the lightning is not triggered
*No other jutsu can be done while the thread is active
*Cannot use Lightning jutsus above S rank for 2 turns
*Cannot be used again for 4 turns after it is used
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/a
Description: The user focuses chakra on the tip of his finger and produces a thin thread of water, nearly invisible to the naked eye, before shooting it in any direction, at the speed of an arrow. The thread itself has the flexibility of water, and can curve and bend at wish. Once it reaches a target, it is able to pierce through clothes and skin, connecting the user's finger to the target, at which point the user releases a powerful current of lightning, which is able to paralyze the opponent completely frozen, for 2 turns. Depending on the area struck, the opponent can even loose consciousness (head) or have difficulty breathing (chest). After contact is made, through what seems like a vaccine sting, the lightning reaches up Mid-Range ( 15m ) in half a second.
Likewise, the user is able to create a net made of water strings, covering an area of 2 meters radius, anywhere short range from the user. Using the same principle as above, the user can send a current though the strings in order to shock the opponent and paralyze him for 1 turn.
*The jutsu ends once the lightning is released
*The chakra natures are divided unevenly, with the lightning part being considered as B rank, and the water part being considered as C rank
*The laid down threads last 2 turns, in case the lightning is not triggered
*No other jutsu can be done while the thread is active
*Cannot use Lightning jutsus above S rank for 2 turns
*Cannot be used again for 4 turns after it is used
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Double elemental technique which takes up two moves rather than the usual three in battle. Basically you point your finger at a target and a silk-like stream of water is shot. The stream is extremely quick as stated in the description "as quick as an arrow". The water itself is tangible and the point of the stream is able to pierce through things like clothes and skin, etc. From there, the stream is connected to two things: the user/user's finger and the user's target. And without further ado, the user emits the lightning for the water to conduct and as it comes into contact with the target, it is able to shock them and depending on the area can cause according problems which are all stated in the jutsu. Chest-shot could cause trouble breathing, limbs and such would be paralyzed upon contact (2 turns) or the target can even lose consciousness if hit in the head. The initial water stream is short to long range but the added lightning is only short to mid but can reach it's target in half a second. So it's obviously rather quick.
As a simple bonus: "Likewise, the user is able to create a net made of water strings, covering an area of 2 meters radius, anywhere short range from the user. Using the same principle as above, the user can send a current though the strings in order to shock the opponent and paralyze him for 1 turn." This is pretty self-explanatory.
The water has a separate rank of C and the lightning, rank B. It's a streamed technique so no other jutsu is usable whilst the string of water is active. *Cannot use Lightning jutsus above S rank for 2 turns and *Cannot be used again for 4 turns after it is used - are pretty apparent.
Hopefully I did that right. I don't think I've ever had to do that yet with a CJ but there it is.
As a simple bonus: "Likewise, the user is able to create a net made of water strings, covering an area of 2 meters radius, anywhere short range from the user. Using the same principle as above, the user can send a current though the strings in order to shock the opponent and paralyze him for 1 turn." This is pretty self-explanatory.
The water has a separate rank of C and the lightning, rank B. It's a streamed technique so no other jutsu is usable whilst the string of water is active. *Cannot use Lightning jutsus above S rank for 2 turns and *Cannot be used again for 4 turns after it is used - are pretty apparent.
Hopefully I did that right. I don't think I've ever had to do that yet with a CJ but there it is.
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You got it all right with the exception of the first thing you said. It's only one move. While it can't be used simultaneously with other jutsu, you can use two other jutsu prior to this one, and you won't be over the 3-move per turn limit
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No questions.
(Fuuton: Rashinban Taka no Me) Wind Release: Compass Hawkeye
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user does one handseal, and the air in on of 4 different locations, North, East, South West, will compress and assume the shape of a hawk, soaring in the air about 20 meters from the ground, and Long range from the opponent(s). It will glide around in a circle, always keeping the same distance from their correspondent target. With one seal, the user can make this wind-hawk (One at a time, or as the user wishes) shoot itself at speeds slightly higher than the current sniper bullets, and will assume a similar shape, aiming to pierce the opponent in a specific (or not) place, depending on the accuracy of the user of this technique.
*Can only be used once. The hawk must be dispersed or used before the user (And only the specific user) of this technique can preform any other jutsu. If the user of this technique is knocked unconscious, killed or vanished, the hawk will vanish.
Once targeted (At the beginning of the jutsu) the hawk can't change opponents, and will disperse harmlessly if the said opponent vanishes, looses consciousness or get's killed.
(Fuuton: Rashinban Taka no Me) Wind Release: Compass Hawkeye
Rank: A
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user does one handseal, and the air in on of 4 different locations, North, East, South West, will compress and assume the shape of a hawk, soaring in the air about 20 meters from the ground, and Long range from the opponent(s). It will glide around in a circle, always keeping the same distance from their correspondent target. With one seal, the user can make this wind-hawk (One at a time, or as the user wishes) shoot itself at speeds slightly higher than the current sniper bullets, and will assume a similar shape, aiming to pierce the opponent in a specific (or not) place, depending on the accuracy of the user of this technique.
*Can only be used once. The hawk must be dispersed or used before the user (And only the specific user) of this technique can preform any other jutsu. If the user of this technique is knocked unconscious, killed or vanished, the hawk will vanish.
Once targeted (At the beginning of the jutsu) the hawk can't change opponents, and will disperse harmlessly if the said opponent vanishes, looses consciousness or get's killed.
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Jutsu based off directions found on a compass. North, South, East and West. Upon making one hand seal four spaces of air will compress and take the form of eagles in the four different directions (north, south, east and west). Twenty meters from the ground, these eagles made of air stay long rang from the target itself and continually fly around the target, taking up the same space between eachother as they did when they were first made at the four specific locations. With another hand seal, one to four eagles (you choose) begin their assault on the unlucky sap (opponent/target). Their speed is that of a sniper bullet and as such, they take the form of one and pierce the target in an either specific or non-specific part of their body. All depending on the user.
The added notes are rather obvious. You get to use this technique once. The hawks must be used or dispersed before using another technique (assuming passive abilities and such do not count). If the user dies, passes out or vanishes, the eagles disperse. The eagles may only target one thing. Once that target is dead, passes out or vanishes, the eagles disperse.
The added notes are rather obvious. You get to use this technique once. The hawks must be used or dispersed before using another technique (assuming passive abilities and such do not count). If the user dies, passes out or vanishes, the eagles disperse. The eagles may only target one thing. Once that target is dead, passes out or vanishes, the eagles disperse.
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Alright, a few corrections, they're hawks not eagles and you only create one, though choose where it appears, in one of the four cardinal directions. The jutsu was supposed to be four, but hey... The rest seems about correct. Any questions?
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