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Solf stands with his book bag on and his sack full of other materials.
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*I turn around when I hear you talk*
Dang it, you and these weird ways of coming out. No wonder why you are the queen of weird and beauty. Anyways, hello madam.
*I reach my right hand over and touches your right hand. I bend down on one knee which is my right and kisses your hand. I raise back up looking at your eyes.*
Dang it, you and these weird ways of coming out. No wonder why you are the queen of weird and beauty. Anyways, hello madam.
*I reach my right hand over and touches your right hand. I bend down on one knee which is my right and kisses your hand. I raise back up looking at your eyes.*
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I wouldn't touch that, it's rotten...
*shows a coat of decay and mushroom chakra on my hand*
Anywho!!! *hand turns back to normal*
We're here, to do the most amazing and wonderful of travels! The journey to Shotou, the Archipelago. It is a beautiful bunch of small isles surrounded by an intricate formation of coral. The reef stretches far and wide, awe-inspiring to behold, but a deadly danger to navigate. Even simply walking through the water or the rocks with your chakra will reveal tricky, for the corals are breathing with life, and will throw off the the chakra, making you slip to your death. To navigate there, we will have to travel the northern sea of Kirigakure, through the toughest of currents and thickest of mist. But if you want to meet the Archipelago, you will need to do that. But now, lets begin.
I preform two handseals, and stretch my hands across the ground in front of you, as very sea-bitten and old bamboo scroll opens in front of me, encrusted with coral and moss. The sun sets behind me, casting the orange twilight on the scroll, filled with dark marks of dry blood, so much darker than they should be. The silence brings forth the indistinguishable murmur of unearthly voices, in a men forgotten language.
Bite your finger and touch the scroll. Your name shall be written, if the Boxes so decide. Or you shall die an horrible death, at your own accord.
*shows a coat of decay and mushroom chakra on my hand*
Anywho!!! *hand turns back to normal*
We're here, to do the most amazing and wonderful of travels! The journey to Shotou, the Archipelago. It is a beautiful bunch of small isles surrounded by an intricate formation of coral. The reef stretches far and wide, awe-inspiring to behold, but a deadly danger to navigate. Even simply walking through the water or the rocks with your chakra will reveal tricky, for the corals are breathing with life, and will throw off the the chakra, making you slip to your death. To navigate there, we will have to travel the northern sea of Kirigakure, through the toughest of currents and thickest of mist. But if you want to meet the Archipelago, you will need to do that. But now, lets begin.
I preform two handseals, and stretch my hands across the ground in front of you, as very sea-bitten and old bamboo scroll opens in front of me, encrusted with coral and moss. The sun sets behind me, casting the orange twilight on the scroll, filled with dark marks of dry blood, so much darker than they should be. The silence brings forth the indistinguishable murmur of unearthly voices, in a men forgotten language.
Bite your finger and touch the scroll. Your name shall be written, if the Boxes so decide. Or you shall die an horrible death, at your own accord.
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I jump back from your hand and looks at it weird
Eww
I stand there listening to Lili-Chaw and starts gathering energy. When she say bite my hand, I bite my right thumb. I mark all of my fingers with blood. I place my fingers on the scroll.
Eww
I stand there listening to Lili-Chaw and starts gathering energy. When she say bite my hand, I bite my right thumb. I mark all of my fingers with blood. I place my fingers on the scroll.
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The voices halt altogether, as the blood touches the scroll. As the bamboo darkens, tainted in crimson, it starts to rot and turn black, soaking the blood through.
And now, the judgment.
In absolute silence, as the sun finishes setting. Once we plunge into darkness, a mere greenish light in the horizon, an indescribable black word rises, written in blood on the surface of the scroll. You look upon it, and are unable to read, yet it feels too familiar, too true, too you. It has written your very essence. And you're now bound by blood with the Cubozoa contract.
You passed. Welcome to the family
Now, this gives you the ability to summon any Box in the Archipelago, and also allows you to be summoned by them. But before, you must prove your worth, and travel there in person, to further tighten your bond.
Are you up for the challenge?
And now, the judgment.
In absolute silence, as the sun finishes setting. Once we plunge into darkness, a mere greenish light in the horizon, an indescribable black word rises, written in blood on the surface of the scroll. You look upon it, and are unable to read, yet it feels too familiar, too true, too you. It has written your very essence. And you're now bound by blood with the Cubozoa contract.
You passed. Welcome to the family
Now, this gives you the ability to summon any Box in the Archipelago, and also allows you to be summoned by them. But before, you must prove your worth, and travel there in person, to further tighten your bond.
Are you up for the challenge?
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I look at the scroll and the presence seems familiar but I can't figure out how I know it
(thinking)What is this presence? Is it a another Kiyoshi presence, no it is more familiar then that. What is it. I see it is me. It is my presence that I can feel from this scroll.
Family you say? Hmm I haven't heard that since I joined Roku and the Kiyoshi clan. If this is a family then that means we grow together and save each other no matter what, right? Either way, I am glad to be part of the family.
Hearing the word Journey takes me back to the Kiyoshi training me and Roku and two of my Kiyoshi brothers did. I smile and say
A journey, now that sounds fun. I am up for the challenge.
My energy around boost up showing its true color, a dark grey with yellow flicking through it like lightning.
(thinking)What is this presence? Is it a another Kiyoshi presence, no it is more familiar then that. What is it. I see it is me. It is my presence that I can feel from this scroll.
Family you say? Hmm I haven't heard that since I joined Roku and the Kiyoshi clan. If this is a family then that means we grow together and save each other no matter what, right? Either way, I am glad to be part of the family.
Hearing the word Journey takes me back to the Kiyoshi training me and Roku and two of my Kiyoshi brothers did. I smile and say
A journey, now that sounds fun. I am up for the challenge.
My energy around boost up showing its true color, a dark grey with yellow flicking through it like lightning.
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Oh, a Kiyoshi, you say, well, do give my regards to Roku. As for our journey, it must start, as it always does, with a guide. I figure you already know the standard summoning technique? Approach the shore and bring forth your chakra. Find the right amount of chakra, and summon an average sized Box from Shotou into the water.
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I will do that madam. Of course I do know the summoning jutsu ^^
With a bright smile, I walk over to the shore. The waves hitting against my shins making chills go up my spine. I take a deep breath and slowly let it out. I whip my left palm with blood and makes five hand seals. With the hand seals, I slam my hand onto the water and it phases through. Then some kanji spread out around me palm out to my body. A loud sound of a cannon is heard and a white puffy smoke appears from under my hand and surrounds my hand to my arm.
With a bright smile, I walk over to the shore. The waves hitting against my shins making chills go up my spine. I take a deep breath and slowly let it out. I whip my left palm with blood and makes five hand seals. With the hand seals, I slam my hand onto the water and it phases through. Then some kanji spread out around me palm out to my body. A loud sound of a cannon is heard and a white puffy smoke appears from under my hand and surrounds my hand to my arm.
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As the cloud clears off, the water remains clear as ever. I approach the shore and carefully place my hand underwater, my brittle white skin glittering from the wonderful cold. As I remove my hand from the water, a translucent organism rests on my palm, a small larvae, half the size of my hand.
Well, that was anticlimactic, a failed summon... Nonetheless, it will allow me to demonstrate a especial property of the Cubozoa contract. Within a turn, larvae summons will grow into a polyp, which will have some nematocysts in their tentacles.
As I say it, the larvae shifts in my hand, and grows into a large tentacled polyp, the half the size of an arm.
Within a turn, the polyp will turn into fully grown medusa. These transformations can be halted as long as you want, 1 turn between them are just the minimum time you have to wait. Before this turns into a medusa, I want you to feel it's tentacles, and describe to me what happens.
Well, that was anticlimactic, a failed summon... Nonetheless, it will allow me to demonstrate a especial property of the Cubozoa contract. Within a turn, larvae summons will grow into a polyp, which will have some nematocysts in their tentacles.
As I say it, the larvae shifts in my hand, and grows into a large tentacled polyp, the half the size of an arm.
Within a turn, the polyp will turn into fully grown medusa. These transformations can be halted as long as you want, 1 turn between them are just the minimum time you have to wait. Before this turns into a medusa, I want you to feel it's tentacles, and describe to me what happens.
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I look amazed at the larva and it's growth in just a short amount of time.
So they grow that fast? They are mutants lol. I might change into one of those if I touch it.
I reach out my right hand towards the polyp. I touch it and it attaches to my fingers. When it attaches it sends a charge of its venom through my hand. When my hand starts to numb up, I pull it back quick and still can't feel my hand. I look at you and polyp and shake my head.
That hurt Lil. It sting and paralysis my hand.
So they grow that fast? They are mutants lol. I might change into one of those if I touch it.
I reach out my right hand towards the polyp. I touch it and it attaches to my fingers. When it attaches it sends a charge of its venom through my hand. When my hand starts to numb up, I pull it back quick and still can't feel my hand. I look at you and polyp and shake my head.
That hurt Lil. It sting and paralysis my hand.
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That's not really the effects of the venom. Do better. You can read any Wikipedia article, as well as my description on the contract submission. (though there are some variations xD)
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I should I paid attention in science class instead of playing with those girls in the back of the class and txting.
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Okay they have hemolytic and neuro toxic enzymes which cause the following if I am not correct:
* Severe localized pain, often associated with vigorous attempts by the patient to remove the tentacles (this may make the envenomation worse by causing the discharge of further nematocysts)
*Wide (0.5 -1cm) erythematous lines where the tentacles have been in contact with the skin. These may cover a large area, an indication of severe envenomation.
*Confusion, agitation, unconsciousness, collapse with respiratory failure and/or cardiac arrest
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Okay they have hemolytic and neuro toxic enzymes which cause the following if I am not correct:
* Severe localized pain, often associated with vigorous attempts by the patient to remove the tentacles (this may make the envenomation worse by causing the discharge of further nematocysts)
*Wide (0.5 -1cm) erythematous lines where the tentacles have been in contact with the skin. These may cover a large area, an indication of severe envenomation.
*Confusion, agitation, unconsciousness, collapse with respiratory failure and/or cardiac arrest
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Very well, then apply it in your description, as if you were explaining exactly what would happen to your opponent, had he touched the tentacles of the polyp you touched.
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As my opponent tries to stomp on the polyp with his bare feet. The Polyp's tentacles string upwards towards the foot and connects. Once connected it injects hemolytic and neuro toxic enzymes into the opponent's foot which streams through his body. With this taking place the opponent starts to feel "different". The foreign substance starts taking affect in his/her body. He starts to feel pain starting in his foot which is jumps back from the polyp. He starts hopping around holding his foot. The Polyp is still attach to his foot and continues on releasing this foreign substance into his foot. The pain increases and starts to feel a little confuse. He falls painfully on the ground yelling in pain and then knocks out.
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Few pointers:
1. The nematocysts, once triggered, detach themselves from the tentacles and attach themselves to the skin of the target, continuing to infuse the venom. So, it's not the polyp that continues attached to the feet, it's the "venom triggers"
2. Instead of describing how the opponent reacts, desfrbe the pain and the effects, dropping a hint or another about how one would react. Instead of saying like: "The pain increases and starts to feel a little confuse. He falls painfully on the ground yelling in pain and then knocks out. " Say: The pain would increase and spread, as more and more venom is injected into your circulation. The pain is akin to intense burning, which would make you feel as if your foot is being burnt mercilessly and excruciatingly. He/You should fall painfully on the ground yelling in pain. Unconsciousness would follow within a turn (Make it two) Actually, it's just a polyp's strike to the foot. Had it been a medusa, yes, withing two turns. Closer to the heart/head etc, would make it one or less. Polyp about 2
1. The nematocysts, once triggered, detach themselves from the tentacles and attach themselves to the skin of the target, continuing to infuse the venom. So, it's not the polyp that continues attached to the feet, it's the "venom triggers"
2. Instead of describing how the opponent reacts, desfrbe the pain and the effects, dropping a hint or another about how one would react. Instead of saying like: "The pain increases and starts to feel a little confuse. He falls painfully on the ground yelling in pain and then knocks out. " Say: The pain would increase and spread, as more and more venom is injected into your circulation. The pain is akin to intense burning, which would make you feel as if your foot is being burnt mercilessly and excruciatingly. He/You should fall painfully on the ground yelling in pain. Unconsciousness would follow within a turn (Make it two) Actually, it's just a polyp's strike to the foot. Had it been a medusa, yes, withing two turns. Closer to the heart/head etc, would make it one or less. Polyp about 2
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1. Polyp when they attach their tentacles do they grow back right then or do they have to wait a certain turn when they grow back?
2. Hmm cool, so close to the heart a Polyp is one or two turns. Polyp any other spot is two or three turns?
2. Hmm cool, so close to the heart a Polyp is one or two turns. Polyp any other spot is two or three turns?
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1. Again, nematocysts aren't the same as tentacles. Picture a single tentacle with multiple "dots". These "dots" are like small guns, when they're stimulated by touch, they trigger an harpoon-like cell, which contains large amounts of venom. The cell pierces the opponent's skin and clothes and injects the poison, while detaching itself from the dot, and attaching itself to the pierced skin. the tentacles remain unharmed.
2. More or less, yes. It's not set in stone, but it's a logical outcome.
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If all of those get approved, we close the limit of summons we can have with the contract. The first two are considered our Boss summons. But they are very similar. Do you want me to drop one of them and create another box, more unique or something like that, or do you think having both would be equally good? Seeing as you're a summoner, you should have a saying in this
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1-2: Okay now I understand what you are saying and well the per turn thing is realist so I accept that
The jutsus are nicely restricted and seems to me well thought out. I did have a box in mind that did release a mist as it is summoned but you took it even farther to add in the Genjutsu effects which is your specialty lol. I like them and the last Box jutsu is nice. Knowing me I would have summoned it under the foot of the opponent xd. Now one thing I would like to know is, how do they get summoned underground without being harmed by the earth and not being seeing without the white cloud that summons have and none sensors?
The jutsus are nicely restricted and seems to me well thought out. I did have a box in mind that did release a mist as it is summoned but you took it even farther to add in the Genjutsu effects which is your specialty lol. I like them and the last Box jutsu is nice. Knowing me I would have summoned it under the foot of the opponent xd. Now one thing I would like to know is, how do they get summoned underground without being harmed by the earth and not being seeing without the white cloud that summons have and none sensors?
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See it as if the technique summons them, but also alters the ground to accommodate them, furthermore, their metabolic rate is lowered and they enter an hibernation state which protects them beyond that. The cloud isn't necessary. More discrete summoners can control the amount of smoke created, or even halt it all together (Like Shadow Clones). I've removed the resistance to sensors. They can now sense the Shangos underground or see them if they can see through ground.