SilentCrow helps me learn Lightning...

~Rerrando~

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*i focus my chakra into my left hand, i then release the chakra in the air and manipulate it into the form of a dog. i then use the lighning whip to guide the dog toward your clone*

(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra in his/her palms that they can whip around in order to attack their opponent.
 

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O-O
Uhhh. Don't really know how to reply to this besides
Facepalms*

For what reason did you think I meant for you to do that??

Now Do it overU_U

I need more description. This is the last warning.:mad:
 

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well you did say to keep it attached to a cord or something like that so i figured that work out as well:ghehe:

*as i focus my chakra into my hand i then manipulate it to form a dog. i send the dog forward to attack your clone while keeping attached with an leash made of an electric current that is constantly fed with chakra*
 

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You try to form the dog and the lightning explodes

I told you I needed detail.U_U Now keep it under control. Use your chakra to form the dog, don't just expect it to form.

Try Again!
 

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*i focus my chakra into my left hand, i then release the chakra in the air and manipulate it into the form of a dog. i send the dog forward to attack your clone while keeping attached with an leash made of an electric current that is constantly fed with chakra*

"yet again, like a true sensei"
 

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Thank you. But you're still in trouble. I'm going to make an example of you.

As you start to send the lightning hound outwards the lightning spreads out and loses shape

Okay it seems you have almost run out of lightning chakra.

Go over and take a break.U_U
 

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*goes sit by a tree and takes nap, after a few hours i get up and stretch*

"Okay now that im rested how bout you do the ujtsu that way i can see what im supposed to."xd
 

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Okay I'll do this once and once only.

I build up a large amount of Raiton chakra. I then concentrate and focus my chakra to my hand. I use the chakra to create a hound like form of lightning that I control. I keep sending chakra from my hand and into the hound to maintain it's shape. I then send the lightning hound at my clone and remain focused and keep the jutsu under control.

My lightning hound hits my clone and make his dissipate.


That is what I mean by descriptive.O_O

Now do it again. And do not copy what i have written.

You will be punished if I doU_U
 

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*I build up my chakra then i focus it in my hand. i then mold my chakra making it take the form of a dog made of lightning. i keep sending chakra from my hand and into the hound to maintain it's shape as i send it forward to attack your clone.*

"How was that?"
 

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My clone is hit and poofs away

Much Better

Good You've Learned:

(Raiton: Rai Ryouken) - Lightning Release: Lightning Hound
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting.


Now I want you to copy these handsigns and memorize them

Shows Handsign
 

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Okay good. Now I want you to focus a large amount of lightning chakra into your mouth. Once you've done that I want you to use the chakra to create a spear of lightning that shoots out from your mouth. Aim it at that tree over there. It should split the tree if done correctly.

Got it?
 

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O_O that sounds a little broad, is there something that i should do specifically like actually manipulate the chakra into a spear and shoot it or just shoot it out of my mouth and it takes on the form of a spear?O_O
 

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Yes, sorry I was in a rush when that was written.

I want you to build up a large amount of lightning chakra. I then want you to use your chakra to form a spear-shaped rod of lightning in your mouth. I need you to focus hard and manipulate it into the shape of the spear, then release it from your mouth.

Better?
 

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*i build up a huge amount of chakra in my mouth, i then begin to manipulate the chakra and mold it into a spear in my mouth. i then concentrate on keeping my chakra in the form of a spear as i send it flying at the tree*
 

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Spear hits the tree and splits it in half

Okay good.

Now I want you to do the same thing but after you've released it concentrate and split it into two separate spears.

Try it on my two clones*poof*
 

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*i begin to focus and concentrate a large amount of my chakra to my mouth, i then manipulate the chakra and form two spears in my mouth. I then begin to concentrate intensely on holding the jutsu together as i begin fire the spears*
 

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Epiphany O.....my bad:ghehe:

*i begin to focus and concentrate a large amount of my chakra to my mouth, i then manipulate the chakra and form a spear in my mouth. I then begin to concentrate intensely on holding the jutsu together as i begin fire the spear then manipulate it again dividing it in two smaller spears*
 

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The spears hit my clones and they dissipate

Seems like you have a good understanding of that jutsu.

Good You've Learned:

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.


We're going to have to skip the next jutsu because you don't know Shadow Clone. So on to the next one

Now I want you to copy these handsigns and memorize them

Shows Handsign
 
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